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M4M from Bow Queue
Keep in mind, these are my suggestions, don't change something I mentioned unless it seems good to you!
[General]
M4M from Bow Queue
Keep in mind, these are my suggestions, don't change something I mentioned unless it seems good to you!
[General]
- I'd recommend changing the overall volume to ~75% since the song was a bit hard to hear over the hitsounds.
- 00:20:874 - Could be changed to D to follow the finish in the background here.
- 01:00:207 - Change to d to better emphasize the higher note at 01:00:874 -
- Extend the spinner at 01:19:874 - to end at 01:24:874 - since the guitar is held out longer than where it currently ends.
- 00:01:522 - and 00:01:865 - Ctrl+G to better emphasize the vocals at 00:01:865 -
- 00:02:208 - and 00:02:551 - Ctrl+G. Same reason as above.
- 00:24:041 - and 00:24:374 - Ctrl+G. This pattern is the opposite of 00:23:207 - and 00:23:541 - (Since it rises through 00:23:207 - and 00:23:541 - then falls during 00:24:041 - and 00:24:374 - )
- 00:26:207 - This could be moved to 00:25:707 - to follow the beginning of the drums, but if you're following the vocals at 00:26:541 - then I would suggest removing 00:26:207 -
- 00:27:541 - and 00:28:207 - Ctrl+G to emphasize the rise in the vocal at 00:27:541 -
- 00:46:541 - Why isn't this section mapped? You mapped it in Kantan, and that difficulty is supposed to be easier than Futsuu.
- 00:47:541 - Change to D. You had it like that in Kantan, and it emphasizes the rise in vocals here too.
- 00:22:041 - Move this to 00:22:207 - . It sounds rather awkward where it currently is, and there's a sound at 00:22:207 - which should be hittable.
- Using the above suggestion, you could change 00:22:207 - to k if you don't want to have ddk twice in a row.
- 00:46:957 - Add a d here to better follow the piano roll in the background here.
- 01:13:541 - Add a k. You're currently missing a piano beat here leaving it unmapped.
- 00:22:041 - Same suggestion as in Muzukashii.
- 00:46:207 - to 00:47:541 - This pattern is a bit hard for an Oni. Please make it a bit less dense here.
- Basically from 00:47:707 - to 01:02:707 - you should try and make these patterns a bit less dense, since density wise, this is quite the jump from Muzukashii to Oni.