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Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Taiko]

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katacheh
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年12月20日 at 1:00:41

Artist: Emilia(CV:Setsunan)
Title: Unfinished START
Source: 前進吧!高捷少女Initiating Station
Tags: EAjRock (Ayre Records) Uniparity Hoskey 艾米莉亞 Reo shinia Stellarism 希萌創意 Shi Kuang Lee NGC224 SAFE HOUSE T Narrator 前進吧!高捷少女《進め!高捷(たかめ)少女!》 Simon moe Short Version LET'S GO! K.R.T. GIRLS stu00608 Fantazy
BPM: 175
Filesize: 1981kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Fan's Oni (3.7 stars, 405 notes)
  2. Futsuu (2.3 stars, 176 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.43 stars, 99 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (2.92 stars, 321 notes)
  5. Oni (4.1 stars, 450 notes)
  6. stu's Oni (3.96 stars, 453 notes)
Download: Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ranked #1


未完成START




Kantan by me
Futsuu by me
Muzukashii by me
Fan's Oni by Fanlazy
stu's Oni by stu00608
Oni by me

Lyrics
  • 朝陽取代了燈火闌珊
    步下列車 抬頭望向湛藍的清澈天空
    就能泛起笑容

    即使迷失在熙攘人群 幸運有你的細心指引
    即使搭錯了方向 我卻看見更多風景

    一加一 笑顏的魔力 勇敢告訴自己 一定可以

    像晴天那般擁抱 所有煩惱不如意
    像雨天那般緊靠 只是安靜地傾聽
    奔忙於喧囂中 我總算遇見這首
    美好旋律 閃耀記憶 有你


Thanks
Modders:
  1. _kumakichi
  2. Fantazyee
  3. Nyan
  4. PoPoii
  5. Prophecy
  6. eeezzzeee
  7. Erika
  8. Smallwu
  9. kiminokokoro
  10. Ayyri
  11. Skylish
  12. xtrem3x
  13. LunaticP
  14. Jonawaga
  15. Kazaze
  16. frukoyurdakul
  17. _yu68
  18. 125601228
  19. Charlotte
  20. 404 AccNotFound
  21. mliencheng
  22. Xay
  23. jacky10186
Bubble/Qualified:
Skylishxfraczynho










_kumakichi
hi

sorry i cannot type chinese in this computer
if there is anything unclear please pm me...

misc
interesting choice of song
metadata - please check whether the artist name is in correct format...i thought only 1 name should be put in artist column, but not very sure
disable countdown and widescreen support
timing - delete the 00:14:130 red line
can move the background pic downward by editing .osu in notepad
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,40

futsuu
01:19:213 - add k (as in muzu)

muzu
00:15:463 (9) - delete. 5-lets should not appear in muzu. too difficult
00:28:713 (67) - k->d. add some variance as your pattern afterwards are all different
00:38:880 (119,120,121) - some BAT (did i spell it right) do not like triplets other than ddd or kkk in muzu. Personally I think it is accptable. maybe delete 00:38:963 (120) -
00:44:213 (144) - d->k. same reason as above
00:45:213 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171) - too long for muzu. delete 00:46:047 (154) - and 00:47:047 (160) -
01:03:547 (252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276) - too long:
01:04:713 (259) - and 01:06:047 (267) - delete
01:04:880 (259,260,261,262,263,264,265) - dkkdkkd -> kddkddk (add some variance)
01:19:213 - add k. complete the pattern?

oni
i like this map very much
00:46:630 (191) - d->k, to make the pattern clearer
01:04:880 (333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340) - D k k D k k D k -> K d d K d d K d (as in muzu)

great map
good luck
Fantazy
嘛~~~~我或許不是改得很好 :P 而且有點多 >:(

kantan
00:05:979 (9) - k k d 感覺比較配030
00:18:874 - 放個k 後面那顆改d
00:23:541 (25) - d->k
00:28:207 (33) - k->d
00:29:541 - d
00:32:207 - d
00:32:874 (38) - d->k
00:37:374 - k
00:40:041 - d
00:40:541 (45) - d
00:42:707 - d
00:43:207 (47) - k
01:01:541 (71) - k
01:02:207 (72) - d

futsuu
00:11:465 (25) - k->d
00:27:874 (33) - 這邊改 k d d .
00:31:207 (42) - d->k
00:37:374 (56) - d->k
00:40:041 (59) - 後2顆k->d
01:02:707 (103) - d->k
01:17:541 (135) - k->d
01:19:874 - 這裡的話..樓上說+k 嘛 ....覺得D大比較好?? :P :P ~~

muzukashi
盡量別跟樓上的衝突~~~
00:00:836 (1) - 開頭改 kkd kdd d k~~
00:09:922 (25) - kd dd k d
00:25:707 (48) - d->k
00:27:874 - 00:30:541 - 00:33:207 - 這三個地方就配人聲吧??
01:03:541 (250) - 這邊 kddkddk比較配
01:04:874 (257) - 這邊則是ddkdddk
01:06:207 (264) - 而這邊kddkddkdd
01:10:374 (284) - dd dk
01:16:207 (302) - d d k 要不要大顆看你~
01:17:374 (305) - 這裡改小
01:18:041 (307) - 這邊d大
01:18:707 (309) - 這邊k大

Oni
00:56:213 (272) - 這邊改成 kdddd K 好像比較好?
00:59:713 (298) - 這邊 d k dkd 就好030
01:00:880 (307) - kkd-d-k-dkd-k-d-kkd-d-k
Topic Starter
katacheh

_kumakichi wrote:

hi

sorry i cannot type chinese in this computer
if there is anything unclear please pm me... it's ok. :) I have Google Translate

misc
interesting choice of song
metadata - please check whether the artist name is in correct format...i thought only 1 name should be put in artist column, but not very sure One is the name of the character , the other is the name of singer.
disable countdown and widescreen support Fixed
timing - delete the 00:14:130 red line Fixed
can move the background pic downward by editing .osu in notepad I see
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,40

futsuu
01:19:213 - add k (as in muzu) Fixed

muzu
00:15:463 (9) - delete. 5-lets should not appear in muzu. too difficult Fixed
00:28:713 (67) - k->d. add some variance as your pattern afterwards are all different I changed 00:28:041 (61) to d
00:38:880 (119,120,121) - some BAT (did i spell it right) do not like triplets other than ddd or kkk in muzu. Personally I think it is accptable. maybe delete 00:38:963 (120) - I deleted
00:44:213 (144) - d->k. same reason as above Fixed
00:45:213 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171) - too long for muzu. delete 00:46:047 (154) - and 00:47:047 (160) - I deleted 00:46:041 (152) 00:47:374 (160) and changed 00:45:874 (151) to k
01:03:547 (252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276) - too long:
01:04:713 (259) - and 01:06:047 (267) - delete Fixed
01:04:880 (259,260,261,262,263,264,265) - dkkdkkd -> kddkddk (add some variance) good!
01:19:213 - add k. complete the pattern? Fixed

oni
i like this map very much thx :)
00:46:630 (191) - d->k, to make the pattern clearer no.. I'm trying to make it harder
01:04:880 (333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340) - D k k D k k D k -> K d d K d d K d (as in muzu) great!

great map
good luck
thanks for moding! :)
Topic Starter
katacheh

Fantazyy wrote:

嘛~~~~我或許不是改得很好 :P 而且有點多 >:( 永遠不嫌多

kantan
00:05:979 (9) - k k d 感覺比較配030 我改成了k d k 因為後面想要放藍色
00:18:874 - 放個k 後面那顆改d good! 再前面一顆我改成了k
00:23:541 (25) - d->k 不改
00:28:207 (33) - k->d 不改 我覺得k比較好
00:29:541 - d 太難(太長了)
00:32:207 - d 同上
00:32:874 (38) - d->k 修正
00:37:374 - k 不改 覺得大圓同一色比較好
00:40:041 - d 太難
00:40:541 (45) - d 不改
00:42:707 - d 太難
00:43:207 (47) - k 我在對人聲
01:01:541 (71) - k 已改
01:02:207 (72) - d已改 :)
太多了吧ww

futsuu
00:11:465 (25) - k->d good!
00:27:874 (33) - 這邊改 k d d . 覺得ddk比較好
00:31:207 (42) - d->k good!
00:37:374 (56) - d->k 我想要大圓同色
00:40:041 (59) - 後2顆k->d 同上
01:02:707 (103) - d->k 覺得D比較好
01:17:541 (135) - k->d 已修正
01:19:874 - 這裡的話..樓上說+k 嘛 ....覺得D大比較好?? :P :P ~~ 是在說放D吧 先不改 如果以後有人再建議我改 我再改

muzukashi
盡量別跟樓上的衝突~~~
00:00:836 (1) - 開頭改 kkd kdd d k~~ GOOD
00:09:922 (25) - kd dd k d 我改成 kd kk k d
00:25:707 (48) - d->k 已修正
00:27:874 - 00:30:541 - 00:33:207 - 這三個地方就配人聲吧?? 不好... 一下人聲一下音樂
01:03:541 (250) - 這邊 kddkddk比較配 ┐
01:04:874 (257) - 這邊則是ddkdddk ├ 好像這樣比較好耶 已修正
01:06:207 (264) - 而這邊kddkddkdd ┘
01:10:374 (284) - dd dk 覺得dk kk 比較好
01:16:207 (302) - d d k 要不要大顆看你~ 改成了dkk 小顆比較好
01:17:374 (305) - 這裡改小 不好..
01:18:041 (307) - 這邊d大 GOOD!
01:18:707 (309) - 這邊k大 我改成了KK

Oni
00:56:213 (272) - 這邊改成 kdddd K 好像比較好? GOOD!
00:59:713 (298) - 這邊 d k dkd 就好030 我改成 d k kkd
01:00:880 (307) - kkd-d-k-dkd-k-d-kkd-d-k 我覺得原本的比較好
抱歉有很多都沒改 :?

thanks for modding!!! 謝謝摟
Fantazy
ㄏㄏ 如果你真的要Oni 444combo 8-)

00:26:791 - 這邊改一下 3連擊
00:27:624 - 這邊也是
00:28:291 - 然後這裡的 前面換過來

00:40:957 - 這裡就不連擊了

你的預覽段落~~(ˊ。c。ˋ)


再找點別人吧 ?? 我到時看看如果能更好就給你 射~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~AwA一顆星
(此處可當廢文owo
Topic Starter
katacheh

Fantazyy wrote:

ㄏㄏ 如果你真的要Oni 444combo 8-) 不是一定要啦 只是很好看!!! (7/12)已經不行了w

00:26:791 - 這邊改一下 3連擊
00:27:624 - 這邊也是
00:28:291 - 然後這裡的 前面換過來 我改成了 k ddd d k d d d k ddk d k

00:40:957 - 這裡就不連擊了 不好...

你的預覽段落~~(ˊ。c。ˋ) 剛才放了~


再找點別人吧 ?? 我到時看看如果能更好就給你 射~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~AwA 一顆星
快射!!!!
(此處可當廢文owo
我才剛弄完 又有新貼文 當作跟上面一起的吧
謝謝囉! :)
Nyan
[Kantan]

01:03:541 (75,76,77,78,79) - d _ d _ k _ k _ d
01:08:874 (79) - add Finish

[Futsuu]

00:23:541 (23,24,25) - remove Finish
01:07:541 (114,115,116,117) - k k k k D

[Muzukashii]

00:23:541 (40,41,42,43) - remove Finish
00:25:041 (45,46) - remove Finish
00:30:541 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - k _ d k d _ d
01:14:874 (298,299,300) - K _ d D

[Oni]

01:18:707 (405,406,407,408,409) - kkdkkkdkkk

Actually a good mapset. ☆☆☆ I am satisfied now.
Topic Starter
katacheh

Nyan wrote:

[Kantan]

01:03:541 (75,76,77,78,79) - d _ d _ k _ k _ d Fixed.
01:08:874 (79) - add Finish Fixed.

[Futsuu]

00:23:541 (23,24,25) - remove Finish Fixed.
01:07:541 (114,115,116,117) - k k k k D Fixed.

[Muzukashii]

00:23:541 (40,41,42,43) - remove Finish Fixed!
00:25:041 (45,46) - remove Finish Fixed.
00:30:541 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - k _ d k d _ d I changed to k d k _ k _ d
01:14:874 (298,299,300) - K _ d D no... I think the original is better.

[Oni]

01:18:707 (405,406,407,408,409) - kkdkkkdkkk Fixed! Awesome!! I also added 01:17:457 (398) and 01:18:124 (403)

Actually a good mapset. ☆☆☆ I am satisfied now. Thank you! :)
Thanks for modding and stars!
Poii
:)Poii and Kuu NM service :)

|d for don| D for Big Don| k for katsu| K for Big Katsu|

Kantan
Mods
Demn good, EZ to play nice diff

Futsuu
Mods
00:08:722 (21) - why d ? you place k in all of your diff
00:24:041 (24,25) - d k or k d ? i think k d, <= you can ignore this
01:00:541 (99) - to d, the vocal is not strong enough, i mean loud enough

Muzukashii
Mods
00:21:707 - missing d ?
00:15:291 - add 1, make it triplets, the snare sound
00:23:874 (41) - change to k, its snare
00:24:374 (43) - change to d for a better sound, that is not snare (i think)

Oni
Mods
00:23:874 (47) - change to k
00:24:374 (49) - to d

8-) Free comment, Free reject 8-)


Good Lick Luck :)
Topic Starter
katacheh

PoPoii wrote:

:)Poii and Kuu NM service :)

|d for don| D for Big Don| k for katsu| K for Big Katsu|

Kantan
Mods
Demn good, EZ to play nice diff Thanks! :D

Futsuu
Mods
00:08:722 (21) - why d ? you place k in all of your diff Fixed!! and I changed 00:08:379 (20) to d
00:24:041 (24,25) - d k or k d ? i think k d, <= you can ignore this I think d k feels better. :3
01:00:541 (99) - to d, the vocal is not strong enough, i mean loud enough I think k fits vocal ...so I didn't change.

Muzukashii
Mods
00:21:707 - missing d ? Good! Fixed!!
00:15:291 - add 1, make it triplets, the snare sound I think it is enough... I didn't change.
00:23:874 (41) - change to k, its snare snare sounds not obviously,(compare with the other sound..) so I didn't change.
00:24:374 (43) - change to d for a better sound, that is not snare (i think) ^

Oni
Mods
00:23:874 (47) - change to k I didn't change.. same as muzu
00:24:374 (49) - to d ^

8-) Free comment, Free reject 8-)


Good Lick Luck :)
Thanks for modding!! :)
Prophecy
Hello, from chinese modding queue, as you didn't specify language, Using English as default.

d = don | k = kat

[General]
  1. You're using whistle in Kantan, Futsuu , Muzukashii. but not in Oni, please make sure you're using same kat sound.
  2. Please find more tags, it's not just about 3 or something like that.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:12:836 (15) - I am suggesting you to delete this note and replaced by a spinner , the sound it mostly like a spinner with a accompany
    piano sound.
  2. 00:24:041 (27,29) - I don't really suggest you to use 1/2 in Kantan as well, I know you're following the main heavy sound. Considerate to remove it or move it away.
  3. 00:26:207 (30) - It's a bit weird after a big notes sound, how about to add a finisher?
  4. 00:45:374 (50) - no pls, Kantan is for beginner, usually we put simple 1/1 in kantan, not complex 1/2.
  5. 00:46:207 (52) - this slider 00:45:874 - should be start at here?
  6. 00:48:707 (55) - same as above , 1/2
  7. 00:51:374 (59) - ^
  8. 00:54:041 (62) - ^
  9. 00:56:707 (66) - ^
  10. 00:58:207 (67) - add finisher.
  11. 00:59:374 (69,74) - same as before one.
Nice, good luck!
Topic Starter
katacheh

Prophecy wrote:

Hello, from chinese modding queue, as you didn't specify language, Using English as default. QwQ

d = don | k = kat

[General]
  1. You're using whistle in Kantan, Futsuu , Muzukashii. but not in Oni, please make sure you're using same kat sound. Fixed~
  2. Please find more tags, it's not just about 3 or something like that. Ok. I will find more tags.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:12:836 (15) - I am suggesting you to delete this note and replaced by a spinner , the sound it mostly like a spinner with a accompany
    piano sound. Fixed!
  2. 00:24:041 (27,29) - I don't really suggest you to use 1/2 in Kantan as well, I know you're following the main heavy sound. Considerate to remove it or move it away. I didn't change...
  3. 00:26:207 (30) - It's a bit weird after a big notes sound, how about to add a finisher? I added and feels weird too.. so I didn't change.
  4. 00:45:374 (50) - no pls, Kantan is for beginner, usually we put simple 1/1 in kantan, not complex 1/2.
  5. 00:46:207 (52) - this slider 00:45:874 - should be start at here? umm.. I didn't changed because vocal..
  6. 00:48:707 (55) - same as above , 1/2 Should I just removed it? I feel emptiness... I moved forward 1/2 but feels really weird... so I didn't change.
  7. 00:51:374 (59) - ^
  8. 00:54:041 (62) - ^
  9. 00:56:707 (66) - ^
  10. 00:58:207 (67) - add finisher. Fixed
  11. 00:59:374 (69,74) - same as before one.
Nice, good luck!
Sorry I'm not good at making Kantan... but seems many ranked kantan placed 1/2. (I think it is acceptable...)
Thanks for modding!!
Prophecy

katacheh wrote:

Hello, from chinese modding queue, as you didn't specify language, Using English as default. QwQ
eeezzzeee
Hi from my queue

[Oni]
  1. 00:31:124 - add something here? I can hear the cymbal
  2. 00:33:791 - ^
  3. 00:38:207 (140,141,142,143,144) - change to d kkd d http://puu.sh/pZYdn/2dc15d962c.jpg because the drum roll is at 00:38:457 -
  4. 00:40:874 (155,156,157,158) - change to k ddk http://puu.sh/pZYfe/a26dd0a2cd.jpg
  5. 00:43:957 (175) - i think deleting this would sound better
  6. 01:01:374 (312,313,314,315) - http://puu.sh/pZYsB/ccef5bc8e1.jpg like this sounds better to me
  7. 01:08:541 (353,354) - change to k? since they have the same instrument as 01:08:207 (351,352) -
  8. 01:11:707 - add d and 01:12:041 - delete this
  9. 01:14:207 (379) - change to k?
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:15:541 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - can you try to make them different patterns
  2. 00:47:374 (159) - try deleting this because this chain of 1/2 notes is too long
  3. 01:12:541 - add k
  4. 01:15:874 - add k
[Futsuu]
Nothing!

[Kantan]
  1. 00:02:551 (4,8) - maybe delete these two since its right in the beginning it should be a little easier
osu 需要更多中文歌曲! lol my chinese writing/reading is so bad

good luck!
Topic Starter
katacheh

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi from my queue >w<//

[Oni]
  1. 00:31:124 - add something here? I can hear the cymbal umm... I think it's enough... so I didn't change.
  2. 00:33:791 - ^ ^
  3. 00:38:207 (140,141,142,143,144) - change to d kkd d http://puu.sh/pZYdn/2dc15d962c.jpg because the drum roll is at 00:38:457 - GOOD! Fixed!
  4. 00:40:874 (155,156,157,158) - change to k ddk http://puu.sh/pZYfe/a26dd0a2cd.jpg Fixed! but I moved 00:41:457 (160) to 00:41:624 (161) because ddk ddk ddk feel not good here..
  5. 00:43:957 (175) - i think deleting this would sound better Fixed!
  6. 01:01:374 (312,313,314,315) - http://puu.sh/pZYsB/ccef5bc8e1.jpg like this sounds better to me GOOD! Fixed!!
  7. 01:08:541 (353,354) - change to k? since they have the same instrument as 01:08:207 (351,352) - umm.. I changed to d ddk kkd(the drum sound)
  8. 01:11:707 - add d and 01:12:041 - delete this Fixed.
  9. 01:14:207 (379) - change to k? Ok.. Fixed.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:15:541 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - can you try to make them different patterns ok..
  2. 00:47:374 (159) - try deleting this because this chain of 1/2 notes is too long deleted!
  3. 01:12:541 - add k Fixed!
  4. 01:15:874 - add k Fixed.
[Futsuu]
Nothing!

[Kantan]
  1. 00:02:551 (4,8) - maybe delete these two since its right in the beginning it should be a little easier Good! Fixed!!
osu 需要更多中文歌曲! agree! lol my chinese writing/reading is so bad

good luck! Thanks! :D
Thanks for Modding!!
[ Erika ]
我愛這首歌ww

[Kantan]
00:07:351 (8) - k
00:11:465 (12) - k
00:18:207 (5,6,7,8,9) - k k d d k
00:22:207 (10) - k
01:00:874 (56) - k

[Futsuu]
00:03:922 (9,10,11,12,13) - k d k k d
00:11:465 (25) - k
00:18:874 (13) - k
00:20:207 (16) - k
00:23:207 (22,23) - k d
00:36:874 (55) - k
00:39:541 (58) - d
01:02:207 (102) - k
01:05:874 (110) - k

[Muzukashii]
00:04:951 (14) - k
00:11:465 (30) - k
00:24:041 (43) - k
00:53:541 (194,195) - k k
00:57:874 (220,221,222) - k k d
00:59:374 (228) - k

[Oni]
00:05:979 (19) - k
00:11:465 (35) - k
00:59:374 (297) - k

我mod的不怎麼好,還請見諒,但是這個map我很喜歡,加油!
Topic Starter
katacheh

[ Erika ] wrote:

我愛這首歌ww \(♡˙︶˙♡)是中文耶!!

[Kantan]
00:07:351 (8) - k 已修正
00:11:465 (12) - k 已修正 前面的(11)我改成d
00:18:207 (5,6,7,8,9) - k k d d k 後面的音是下降的感覺 所以沒有改
00:22:207 (10) - k 已修正
01:00:874 (56) - k 已修正

[Futsuu]
00:03:922 (9,10,11,12,13) - k d k k d Good! (14)(15)我改成了d k
00:11:465 (25) - k 已修正 (23) (24)我改成k d
00:18:874 (13) - k 沒有改 感覺之前的比較好
00:20:207 (16) - k 已修正
00:23:207 (22,23) - k d 沒有改 之前的比較搭音樂
00:36:874 (55) - k 我想讓大圓同一色:3
00:39:541 (58) - d ^
01:02:207 (102) - k 沒有改 D感覺比較好
01:05:874 (110) - k 沒有改 因為這邊節奏比較難 想讓他有規律一點

[Muzukashii]
00:04:951 (14) - k 沒有改 d感覺比較好
00:11:465 (30) - k 已修正! 我把(27)(29) 改成 d d
00:24:041 (43) - k 沒有改 d感覺比較好
00:53:541 (194,195) - k k GOOD!! 我也把(196)(197)改成d k
00:57:874 (220,221,222) - k k d 這樣改會讓1/4不同顏色 所以沒有改
00:59:374 (228) - k GOOD! 已修正

[Oni]
00:05:979 (19) - k 已修正! 還有前面有一些改變00:04:265 (14,15,16,17,18,19) - dkkddk
00:11:465 (35) - k 已修正
00:59:374 (297) - k 已修正 我加了一個d在00:59:291 (297) -

我mod的不怎麼好,還請見諒 沒有這回事@_@ ,但是這個map我很喜歡,加油! \\(=´ω`=謝謝你)
Thanks for modding!!
Smallwu
Hi, mod from my queue

藍色是"建議" 就是我覺得這樣會更好 可是我講不出原因的想法

[General]
bg往下效果會比較好

(.osu檔用記事本開啟 各個難度都要)


第三行的"0,0,"BG.jpg",0,70"我忘記畫起來了_(:з」∠)_
[Kantan]
00:15:541 (3) - K 你在Futsuu也有在這邊放大圓 (Muzu和Oni因為note太多所以就不finish了)

[Futsuu]
00:05:979 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - k k d k k d k 我自己聽歌聲音高是這樣 :3

00:19:207 (14,15) - Ctrl+G
[Muzukashii]
00:03:579 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - kdk k d d k d
(接下)
00:05:979 (18,19,20,21,22,23) - k k d k k d k (同Futsuu) 最後一顆我覺得別大圓比較好

00:20:207 - 這裡原本是ddkdd 改成 dxkdd (x=沒有) 因為x的那個地方沒有什麼特別的音

00:23:374 - Add d

00:45:207 (146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158) - ddddkdkdkkddk

移除 01:08:707 (275)
↓DO IT IF U ACCEPT↓
01:08:874 (276) - D

可以很明顯的感受到你最後都在跟鋼琴 01:19:207 也有鋼琴聲 你忘記加了

其實我覺得 01:08:874 - 01:19:874 有點亂 考慮修一下?

[Oni]
00:08:722 (29) - 同Muzukashii 建議你這邊不要大圓

00:20:207 (31,32,33,34,35) - d kdd 原因同Muzukashii

00:23:541 - 00:25:374

有用藍色框起來的是大圓

00:32:291 (99) - 我覺得把它移到 00:32:124 會比較合節奏 :3

00:45:541 (182,183,184,185) - k d k d 個人喜好

加油喔>w<//
Topic Starter
katacheh

Smallwu wrote:

Hi, mod from my queue キタ━━━━(゚∀゚)━━━━ッ!!

藍色是"建議" 就是我覺得這樣會更好 可是我講不出原因的想法

[General]
bg往下效果會比較好

(.osu檔用記事本開啟 各個難度都要)

修正! 看到臉了:33

第三行的"0,0,"BG.jpg",0,70"我忘記畫起來了_(:з」∠)_
[Kantan]
00:15:541 (3) - K 你在Futsuu也有在這邊放大圓 (Muzu和Oni因為note太多所以就不finish了) 已修正!

[Futsuu]
00:05:979 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - k k d k k d k 我自己聽歌聲音高是這樣 :3 GOOD! 已修正:33

00:19:207 (14,15) - Ctrl+G 嗚喔! 原來會變成反色 我都不知道:33 已修正
[Muzukashii]
00:03:579 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - kdk k d d k d 修正!
(接下)
00:05:979 (18,19,20,21,22,23) - k k d k k d k (同Futsuu) 最後一顆我覺得別大圓比較好 好:3 已修正!

00:20:207 - 這裡原本是ddkdd 改成 dxkdd (x=沒有) 因為x的那個地方沒有什麼特別的音 oAo.. 我有聽到鼓聲的說 你說的可能是ddkxd吧 好像也不是oAo.. 我沒有改 ddkdd感覺比較好

00:23:374 - Add d 加了:3/

00:45:207 (146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158) - ddddkdkdkkddk oAo... 變得比較好聽了 已修正

移除 01:08:707 (275)
↓DO IT IF U ACCEPT↓
01:08:874 (276) - D ACCEPT!:3

可以很明顯的感受到你最後都在跟鋼琴 01:19:207 也有鋼琴聲 你忘記加了 加了kd

其實我覺得 01:08:874 - 01:19:874 有點亂 考慮修一下?好\oAo..... 我稍微加了一些些note 應該比較不亂了.......吧(?

[Oni]
00:08:722 (29) - 同Muzukashii 建議你這邊不要大圓 已修正

00:20:207 (31,32,33,34,35) - d kdd 原因同Muzukashii 恩.. 沒改 跟muzu一樣

00:23:541 - 00:25:374

有用藍色框起來的是大圓 修正 好像很多人建議我這邊要改 我以為已經滿搭的了 然而只有我自己這麼認為:3

00:32:291 (99) - 我覺得把它移到 00:32:124 會比較合節奏 :3 我比較喜歡現在的 比較有變化(?) 不過其實兩種都可以

00:45:541 (182,183,184,185) - k d k d 個人喜好 我換成dkdk

加油喔>w<// \\>ε<
謝謝摸圖摟!!
kiminokokoro
不同意不用给kudoso

所有难度
00:00:494 考虑下加条0.9sv 绿线

摸不动低难度

Oni
真的不太建议在连续的歌声中按照歌声编谱>_<
另外别再做鬼畜谱了>_<
另外 大多数情况下 有女声的曲用k做结尾效果都比较好


00:25:124 - 加 d 背景鼓声
00:28:041(72) - 改成k 背景吉他
00:30:041(85,86,87) - 改成 kdd 为了符合之前背景鼓声的每一拍 d k d k节奏(看你喜好)
00:30:707(90,91,92) - 改成kkd 同上
00:33:374(108,109,110) - 改成dkd 同上
00:35:207(122) - 改成k
00:36:707(135) - 删除 为了强调后面重音
00:47:291(200,201,202) - 删除 一是鱼蛋过长不适合 二 为了强调后面
00:47:541(203) - 改为d ( d k d k节奏)
00:48:207(208,209,210,211,212) - 建议改为dkddk 或 kdddk
00:48:707(213,214) - 建议改为kk 强调00:48:874的d
00:49:207(218) - 改为k ( d k d k节奏)
00:50:207(225,226,227,228,229) - 建议改为ddddk
00:53:541(246,247,248) - 建议改为ddk ( d k d k节奏)
00:55:541(267,268,269,270,271) - 建议改为 kkkdk
00:56:207(273,274,275,276,277) - 建议改为两连 dk kd
01:00:957(310,311) - 改为kk
01:01:374(313,314) - 改为kk
01:02:207(319) - 改为d ( d k d k节奏)
01:02:541(322,323) - k d ( d k d k节奏)
01:04:207(330) - 改为k ( d k d k节奏)(并且不影响强调歌词)
01:12:707(375) - 改为k
01:14:207(383) - 从这里开始的5连建议改成以d 为开头的 k为结尾的3+1
01:15:041(390) - 改为d
01:15:374(391) - 改为k

最后 求摸https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/477855
Topic Starter
katacheh

kiminokokoro wrote:

不同意不用给kudoso

所有难度
00:00:494 考虑下加条0.9sv 绿线 增加了:D

摸不动低难度

Oni
真的不太建议在连续的歌声中按照歌声编谱>_<
另外别再做鬼畜谱了>_< ←鬼畜譜才是王道
另外 大多数情况下 有女声的曲用k做结尾效果都比较好


00:25:124 - 加 d 背景鼓声 沒改 我沒聽到鼓聲oAo 而且旁邊都是大圓
00:28:041(72) - 改成k 背景吉他 打起來感覺之前比較好 沒改
00:30:041(85,86,87) - 改成 kdd 为了符合之前背景鼓声的每一拍 d k d k节奏(看你喜好)我挺喜歡現在的感覺 所以沒改;w;
00:30:707(90,91,92) - 改成kkd 同上 ^
00:33:374(108,109,110) - 改成dkd 同上 ^
00:35:207(122) - 改成k oAoa 本來就是k
00:36:707(135) - 删除 为了强调后面重音 因為有鼓聲 所以沒刪
00:47:291(200,201,202) - 删除 一是鱼蛋过长不适合 二 为了强调后面 覺得這邊小串沒什麼問題 串也能強調後面
00:47:541(203) - 改为d ( d k d k节奏)我是kdkd節奏
00:48:207(208,209,210,211,212) - 建议改为dkddk 或 kdddk 覺得kkddk很好;w;...... 抱歉沒改
00:48:707(213,214) - 建议改为kk 强调00:48:874的d 這邊人聲很合欸 我沒改了...
00:49:207(218) - 改为k ( d k d k节奏) 我配合kdkd
00:50:207(225,226,227,228,229) - 建议改为ddddk ^
00:53:541(246,247,248) - 建议改为ddk ( d k d k节奏)^
00:55:541(267,268,269,270,271) - 建议改为 kkkdk ^ 配合1/2的kdkd
00:56:207(273,274,275,276,277) - 建议改为两连 dk kd 有點怪... 我沒有改
01:00:957(310,311) - 改为kk OK! 修正
01:01:374(313,314) - 改为kk 修正!
01:02:207(319) - 改为d ( d k d k节奏)沒改 覺得這樣很好
01:02:541(322,323) - k d ( d k d k节奏)^
01:04:207(330) - 改为k ( d k d k节奏)(并且不影响强调歌词)這樣不好..
01:12:707(375) - 改为k 修正!
01:14:207(383) - 从这里开始的5连建议改成以d 为开头的 k为结尾的3+1 .... 沒改 搭配鋼琴
01:15:041(390) - 改为d 覺得k好
01:15:374(391) - 改为k ^ 覺得d好


最后 求摸https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/477855
謝謝摸圖了!!
Ayyri
Hello there.

M4M from Bow Queue

Keep in mind, these are my suggestions, don't change something I mentioned unless it seems good to you! :)

[General]
  1. I'd recommend changing the overall volume to ~75% since the song was a bit hard to hear over the hitsounds.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:20:874 - Could be changed to D to follow the finish in the background here.
  2. 01:00:207 - Change to d to better emphasize the higher note at 01:00:874 -
  3. Extend the spinner at 01:19:874 - to end at 01:24:874 - since the guitar is held out longer than where it currently ends.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:01:522 - and 00:01:865 - Ctrl+G to better emphasize the vocals at 00:01:865 -
  2. 00:02:208 - and 00:02:551 - Ctrl+G. Same reason as above.
  3. 00:24:041 - and 00:24:374 - Ctrl+G. This pattern is the opposite of 00:23:207 - and 00:23:541 - (Since it rises through 00:23:207 - and 00:23:541 - then falls during 00:24:041 - and 00:24:374 - )
  4. 00:26:207 - This could be moved to 00:25:707 - to follow the beginning of the drums, but if you're following the vocals at 00:26:541 - then I would suggest removing 00:26:207 -
  5. 00:27:541 - and 00:28:207 - Ctrl+G to emphasize the rise in the vocal at 00:27:541 -
  6. 00:46:541 - Why isn't this section mapped? You mapped it in Kantan, and that difficulty is supposed to be easier than Futsuu.
  7. 00:47:541 - Change to D. You had it like that in Kantan, and it emphasizes the rise in vocals here too.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:22:041 - Move this to 00:22:207 - . It sounds rather awkward where it currently is, and there's a sound at 00:22:207 - which should be hittable.
  2. Using the above suggestion, you could change 00:22:207 - to k if you don't want to have ddk twice in a row.
  3. 00:46:957 - Add a d here to better follow the piano roll in the background here.
  4. 01:13:541 - Add a k. You're currently missing a piano beat here leaving it unmapped.
[Oni]
  1. 00:22:041 - Same suggestion as in Muzukashii.
  2. 00:46:207 - to 00:47:541 - This pattern is a bit hard for an Oni. Please make it a bit less dense here.
  3. Basically from 00:47:707 - to 01:02:707 - you should try and make these patterns a bit less dense, since density wise, this is quite the jump from Muzukashii to Oni.
Topic Starter
katacheh

Ayyri wrote:

Hello there. Hi~

M4M from Bow Queue

Keep in mind, these are my suggestions, don't change something I mentioned unless it seems good to you! :)

[General]
  1. I'd recommend changing the overall volume to ~75% since the song was a bit hard to hear over the hitsounds. Ok! Fixed!
[Kantan]
  1. 00:20:874 - Could be changed to D to follow the finish in the background here. Fixed!
  2. 01:00:207 - Change to d to better emphasize the higher note at 01:00:874 - Fixed!
  3. Extend the spinner at 01:19:874 - to end at 01:24:874 - since the guitar is held out longer than where it currently ends. [c 0BF00]Ok. Fixed[/color]
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:01:522 - and 00:01:865 - Ctrl+G to better emphasize the vocals at 00:01:865 - Fixed!
  2. 00:02:208 - and 00:02:551 - Ctrl+G. Same reason as above. Fixed!
  3. 00:24:041 - and 00:24:374 - Ctrl+G. This pattern is the opposite of 00:23:207 - and 00:23:541 - (Since it rises through 00:23:207 - and 00:23:541 - then falls during 00:24:041 - and 00:24:374 - ) no change. Feel rising during 00:24:041 to 00:24:374
  4. 00:26:207 - This could be moved to 00:25:707 - to follow the beginning of the drums, but if you're following the vocals at 00:26:541 - then I would suggest removing 00:26:207 - Good! But I deleted 00:26:207 instead of moving it. (feel weird after big kat)
  5. 00:27:541 - and 00:28:207 - Ctrl+G to emphasize the rise in the vocal at 00:27:541 - Ok. I also changed 00:27:874 (32) - to k
  6. 00:46:541 - Why isn't this section mapped? You mapped it in Kantan, and that difficulty is supposed to be easier than Futsuu. Oh..>< I added a Slider and changed some notes.
  7. 00:47:541 - Change to D. You had it like that in Kantan, and it emphasizes the rise in vocals here too. Fixed!
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:22:041 - Move this to 00:22:207 - . It sounds rather awkward where it currently is, and there's a sound at 00:22:207 - which should be hittable. I added d at 00:22:207 instead of moving 00:22:041(because 00:22:041 (35) should be hittable too.)
  2. Using the above suggestion, you could change 00:22:207 - to k if you don't want to have ddk twice in a row. No change. [/color]
  3. 00:46:957 - Add a d here to better follow the piano roll in the background here. Good! Added.
  4. 01:13:541 - Add a k. You're currently missing a piano beat here leaving it unmapped. Added!
[Oni]
  1. 00:22:041 - Same suggestion as in Muzukashii. Ok! I added to ddd.
  2. 00:46:207 - to 00:47:541 - This pattern is a bit hard for an Oni. Please make it a bit less dense here. ..I see.>< I changed/deleted some notes.
  3. Basically from 00:47:707 - to 01:02:707 - you should try and make these patterns a bit less dense, since density wise, this is quite the jump from Muzukashii to Oni. I see...but less changes. Feel not good with thin notes..
Thanks for modding!
Skylish
Hi, from my M4M modding queue. (In order to save your time on spending on Google translate, I would like to use Chinese to mod this time. In case Chinese mapper would like to get a Chinese mod, they should mention in the queue ~)~. )

[General]

> 看起來好像沒大問題,但會否考慮增加 前進吧!高捷少女的日文到Tags? Ref.: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/342327 , https://www.facebook.com/K.R.T.GIRLS/in ... =page_info Tags應該不只目前找到的…

> Note consistency 有待改善 :P

[Kantan]

> 01:13:541 - 刪掉,01:11:541 - 至 01:12:874 - ,及01:12:874 - 至 01:14:207 - 之間的音樂是類同的,所以前面用 k k ,後面就可以用 k d。中間不需要額外加音,一來不對著前面的節奏,二來這段音樂要map的話需要用off-beat patterns,這不是你的原意。

> 01:16:874 (72) - 轉成K,1.有明顯cymbal crash 2. k比較合音

[Futsuu]

> 00:37:374 (56) - 用K,請參考同時段的Muzukashii。

> 00:40:041 (59) - 用 D比較好,可以跟前面的D K D作一個強烈對比。 (可以看一下Muzu的mod再考慮)

> 00:42:207 (61) - 改成D,Muzukashii中你用了D,聽起來也是比較合適。

> 00:44:541 (64) - try this:

除了Futsuu外,所有難度在這裡都是跟歌詞來map的,不知為何你要用ddddk去map不知甚麼東西 :D

> 00:46:541 - 加slider? 因為你在沒有vocal的時候,在00:35:541 - 加了slider。

> 01:16:874 (135) - 用Finish,我忘了是否你一早就已經在用K還是我自己私加上去~_~,這裡都提一下有用Finish的需要。

[Muzukashii]

> 00:39:541 (121,123) - ctrl+G,這樣比較對音,同時請參考Futsuu的mod。

> 00:52:624 - 這裡可加k去弄一個3連音出來,就像00:47:541 (160,161,162) - 。

> 01:14:541 - try this? D KkkD

01:14:541 - 有很明顯的cymbal crash,應該是忘了加Finish吧?_?,後面的KkkD節奏是根據之前你在
00:24:874 (46,47,48,49) - 用的節奏而提議的。

> 01:16:874 - 用Finish,明顯的cymbal crash。(如果你改用Finish的話,前面01:16:541 - 請用d (like Futsuu)。)同時,後面的Finish是否有需要這樣用? 在Futsuu和Kantan都不見得有如此需要。

[Oni]

> 00:14:874 - 這stream overmapped了。如果仔細點聆聽音樂的話,應該map 成這樣:


> 00:25:041 (50,51) - 不用Finish的效果比較好,就如Muzukashii一樣。

> 00:43:541 - 至Kiai之前,請檢查 Muzukashii 和Oni 的consistency。

> 01:15:707 - try this?

01:16:874 (397) - 是Finish,改動的原因大致上跟之前提及過的一樣。

> 01:18:707 - 改善了stream的流暢度和依Muzukashii的音去調節:

應該比起一堆kkkdkkk好打,而且挺對準音調的,不合意的則當作參考。

Quite solid beatmap considering only single diff. Note consistency needs to be improved.

**點解港鐵都唔整番D代表人物啊我頂-,-**
Topic Starter
katacheh

Skylish wrote:

Hi, from my M4M modding queue. (In order to save your time on spending on Google translate, I would like to use Chinese to mod this time. In case Chinese mapper would like to get a Chinese mod, they should mention in the queue ~)~. )

[General]

> 看起來好像沒大問題,但會否考慮增加 前進吧!高捷少女的日文到Tags? Ref.: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/342327 , https://www.facebook.com/K.R.T.GIRLS/in ... =page_info Tags應該不只目前找到的… 我再多找找

> Note consistency 有待改善 :P

[Kantan]

> 01:13:541 - 刪掉,01:11:541 - 至 01:12:874 - ,及01:12:874 - 至 01:14:207 - 之間的音樂是類同的,所以前面用 k k ,後面就可以用 k d。中間不需要額外加音,一來不對著前面的節奏,二來這段音樂要map的話需要用off-beat patterns,這不是你的原意。修正

> 01:16:874 (72) - 轉成K,1.有明顯cymbal crash 2. k比較合音 好 修正

[Futsuu]

> 00:37:374 (56) - 用K,請參考同時段的Muzukashii。 修正

> 00:40:041 (59) - 用 D比較好,可以跟前面的D K D作一個強烈對比。 (可以看一下Muzu的mod再考慮) 修正

> 00:42:207 (61) - 改成D,Muzukashii中你用了D,聽起來也是比較合適。 修正

> 00:44:541 (64) - try this:

除了Futsuu外,所有難度在這裡都是跟歌詞來map的,不知為何你要用ddddk去map不知甚麼東西 :D我在前一個mod修正了

> 00:46:541 - 加slider? 因為你在沒有vocal的時候,在00:35:541 - 加了slider。 ^

> 01:16:874 (135) - 用Finish,我忘了是否你一早就已經在用K還是我自己私加上去~_~,這裡都提一下有用Finish的需要。 修正

[Muzukashii]

> 00:39:541 (121,123) - ctrl+G,這樣比較對音,同時請參考Futsuu的mod。 Fixed!

> 00:52:624 - 這裡可加k去弄一個3連音出來,就像00:47:541 (160,161,162) - 。

> 01:14:541 - try this? D KkkD

01:14:541 - 有很明顯的cymbal crash,應該是忘了加Finish吧?_?,後面的KkkD節奏是根據之前你在
00:24:874 (46,47,48,49) - 用的節奏而提議的。 不增加finisher 主要跟的是鋼琴 而且不加finish比較可以強調後面.. 改成了d Kk D

> 01:16:874 - 用Finish,明顯的cymbal crash。(如果你改用Finish的話,前面01:16:541 - 請用d (like Futsuu)。)同時,後面的Finish是否有需要這樣用? 在Futsuu和Kantan都不見得有如此需要。 增加了finisher 換了一種樣式

[Oni]

> 00:14:874 - 這stream overmapped了。如果仔細點聆聽音樂的話,應該map 成這樣:

好,修正

> 00:25:041 (50,51) - 不用Finish的效果比較好,就如Muzukashii一樣。修正

> 00:43:541 - 至Kiai之前,請檢查 Muzukashii 和Oni 的consistency。 讓muzu配合oni了

> 01:15:707 - try this?

01:16:874 (397) - 是Finish,改動的原因大致上跟之前提及過的一樣。 GOOD! 已修正

> 01:18:707 - 改善了stream的流暢度和依Muzukashii的音去調節:

應該比起一堆kkkdkkk好打,而且挺對準音調的,不合意的則當作參考。 換了新樣式

Quite solid beatmap considering only single diff. Note consistency needs to be improved. 另外做了一些修正

**點解港鐵都唔整番D代表人物啊我頂-,-**
Thanks for modding!
xtrem3x
Random mods


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

BG image in 1366x768 (?)


Kantan

  • 00:46:207 - this Slider can finish in 00:46:874- to change rhythm in kiai time (and break)

    00:47:541 - Change color in this note...


Futsuu

  • 00:04:951 (12,13) - ctrl+g to follow pitch vocal sound.

    00:15:207 - Change this note to d .. have same sound as previous note.

    00:31:874 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - this part can be better with d k k d k d d k d k d ... same to follow vocal.

    00:46:207 - this Slider can finish in 00:46:874- to change rhythm in kiai time (and break)

    00:47:541 - Change color in this note...

    01:08:041 - Move this note to 01:07:874- to variety (?)


Muzukashii

  • 00:00:836 - Same kdk as Oni.

    00:11:636 (1) - spinner finish in 00:12:836-

    00:15:541 - Is possible add finish here (?)

    00:20:874 - add finish in this note.
    00:52:874 - Same ^

    01:02:041 - This -> This .. deleting 2 notes in triple and blue notes are big...


Oni

  • 00:03:579 (11,12,13) - change this for kdk as similar triple in 00:00:836-

    00:04:608 (15,17) - ctrl+g in these notes ... complementary with above point ^

    00:11:636 (1) - spinner finish in 00:12:836-

    00:20:874 - add finish in this note.

    01:02:207 - this section is better with this combination ... K ddd K

    01:07:207 (344,345,346) - this part change to D d D ... have more bass sound than high sounds.

    01:11:541- is possible add other note here ... preferally k
Topic Starter
katacheh

xtrem3x wrote:

Random mods


General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

BG image in 1366x768 (?) Fixed!


Kantan

  • 00:46:207 - this Slider can finish in 00:46:874- to change rhythm in kiai time (and break) Good! Fixed!

    00:47:541 - Change color in this note... no change.(for consistency with other diffs and feels good with K)


Futsuu

  • 00:04:951 (12,13) - ctrl+g to follow pitch vocal sound. Fixed!

    00:15:207 - Change this note to d .. have same sound as previous note. no change.(for consistency with other diffs and feels good with k)

    00:31:874 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - this part can be better with d k k d k d d k d k d ... same to follow vocal. V

    00:46:207 - this Slider can finish in 00:46:874- to change rhythm in kiai time (and break) V

    00:47:541 - Change color in this note... ^
    01:08:041 - Move this note to 01:07:874- to variety (?) Ok, also added d 01:08:207 ()


Muzukashii

  • 00:00:836 - Same kdk as Oni. V

    00:11:636 (1) - spinner finish in 00:12:836- V

    00:15:541 - Is possible add finish here (?) V

    00:20:874 - add finish in this note. V
    00:52:874 - Same ^ V

    01:02:041 - This -> This .. deleting 2 notes in triple and blue notes are big...Changed to _ K d d K


Oni

  • 00:03:579 (11,12,13) - change this for kdk as similar triple in 00:00:836- V

    00:04:608 (15,17) - ctrl+g in these notes ... complementary with above point ^ V

    00:11:636 (1) - spinner finish in 00:12:836-V

    00:20:874 - add finish in this note. V

    01:02:207 - this section is better with this combination ... K ddd K Good! Fixed!

    01:07:207 (344,345,346) - this part change to D d D ... have more bass sound than high sounds. No change.. K d K feel better and look good (to me...)

    01:11:541- is possible add other note here ... preferally kV
I wonder if you will finish kantan and futsuu..>< Thanks again!
Thanks for your mod!
xtrem3x
Complete ... ^
LunaticP
[Oni]

00:19:707 (27) - move to 00:18:874 - the drum sound is there and not 00:19:707

00:24:541 (50) - k that is k k

00:26:874 (65) - k

00:35:874 (128) - d

00:36:041 (129,130) - dd

00:36:707 (134) - remove


[Muzu]

00:28:374 (66) - remove

00:34:957 (99) - remove

[Futsuu]

00:11:636 (1) - too close , remove 00:11:465 (25) - and extent the spinner
Topic Starter
katacheh

LunaticP wrote:

[Oni]

00:19:707 (27) - move to 00:18:874 - the drum sound is there and not 00:19:707 Great! Fixed!

00:24:541 (50) - k that is k k V

00:26:874 (65) - k V

00:35:874 (128) - d no change kkddk feel better

00:36:041 (129,130) - dd changed to kkd

00:36:707 (134) - remove no change : drum sound here


[Muzu]

00:28:374 (66) - remove V

00:34:957 (99) - remove V

[Futsuu]

00:11:636 (1) - too close , remove 00:11:465 (25) - and extent the spinner Good~ Fixed!
Thanks for mod!! ><
Jonarwhal
Hello, katacheh, M4M on your queue,
[Kantan]
  1. 00:26:874 (16) - k, this is the first note where you follow the lyrics, to 00:26:207 (15,16) - these two should be different to make the transition clear, you could try 00:26:207 (15,16,17,18,19) - dkddk or dkdkd
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:48:207 (70,71) - since there a pitch change here, and no pitch change 00:49:041 (72,73) - here, 00:48:707 (71,72) - this should be kd
  2. 00:54:041 (83,84) - ^
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:27:874 (63,64,65,66) - kkd k to differentiate with 00:30:541 (75,76,77,78) - this, and to differentiate 00:28:207 (65,66) - these
  2. 00:32:541 (84) - k here because the pitch changes
  3. 00:33:374 (88) - d to make 00:33:374 (88,89) - these the same and differentiate 00:33:207 (87,88) - these
  4. 01:16:541 (309) - d to differentiate 01:16:541 (309,310) - these, the pitch is too different
[Oni]
  1. 00:27:374 (68) - k to make 00:27:207 (67,68) - these the same
  2. 00:36:207 (132,133,134,135,136,137) - there's no reason to have this many d's in a row
  3. 01:15:874 (393) - d
  4. 01:16:207 (395) - k
[Muzu/Oni Together]
  1. 00:23:374 - This note is on Muzu but is not on Oni. I recommend you either add something here on Oni or Remove something here in Muzu, only if you think it seems good. Same for all of these.
  2. 00:44:707 -
  3. 00:49:624 -
  4. 00:50:791 -
  5. 00:52:624 -
  6. 00:56:291 -
Good Luck~!!
Topic Starter
katacheh

Jonawaga wrote:

Hello, katacheh, M4M on your queue,
[Kantan]
  1. 00:26:874 (16) - k, this is the first note where you follow the lyrics, to 00:26:207 (15,16) - these two should be different to make the transition clear, you could try 00:26:207 (15,16,17,18,19) - dkddk or dkdkd Change to dkddk
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:48:207 (70,71) - since there a pitch change here, and no pitch change 00:49:041 (72,73) - here, 00:48:707 (71,72) - this should be kd Fixed!
  2. 00:54:041 (83,84) - ^ Fixed!
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:27:874 (63,64,65,66) - kkd k to differentiate with 00:30:541 (75,76,77,78) - this, and to differentiate 00:28:207 (65,66) - these good! fixed.
  2. 00:32:541 (84) - k here because the pitch changes Fixed!
  3. 00:33:374 (88) - d to make 00:33:374 (88,89) - these the same and differentiate 00:33:207 (87,88) - these Fixed!
  4. 01:16:541 (309) - d to differentiate 01:16:541 (309,310) - these, the pitch is too different a finisher at 01:16:874 (310) - to make them different
[Oni]
  1. 00:27:374 (68) - k to make 00:27:207 (67,68) - these the same V
  2. 00:36:207 (132,133,134,135,136,137) - there's no reason to have this many d's in a row because the drum sound?
  3. 01:15:874 (393) - d no change, because the drum sound.
  4. 01:16:207 (395) - k d to make different with 01:16:541 (398) -
[Muzu/Oni Together]
  1. 00:23:374 - This note is on Muzu but is not on Oni. I recommend you either add something here on Oni or Remove something here in Muzu, only if you think it seems good. Same for all of these. added!
  2. 00:49:624 - change the note in muzu.
  3. 00:50:791 - ^
  4. 00:52:624 - ^
  5. 00:56:291 - ^
Good Luck~!!
Thanks for mod><
Kazaze
Hi from your modding queue, requesting a M4M on this map.
Hope my mode will help!

Kantan
• 00:01:179 (2) - Removing this note sounds very nice in my opinion
• 00:18:874 (6) - d, lower tone than 00:18:207 (5)
• 01:00:874 (56) - a d sounds good here
• 01:04:041 - I would add a k here
• 01:06:707 - and a d here, what do you think?
Futsuu
•00:01:522 (3) - This one could be removed in order to make a break
•You could remove 00:18:541 (12,13,14,15) - and follow the piano like this
• Following the vocals, you can add a note here : 00:38:874 (d maybe)
and 3 notes here : 00:41:207 , 00:41:541 & 00:41:874 (What about d k d)
•There's a cymbal sound here 01:14:541 (133) , I think it really need to be mapped, you could add a finisher, maybe a D just like the following 01:15:374 (135)
Muzukashii
• 00:31:874 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - Change to (kdkdkkd)
• 00:59:291 (228) - Remove
• 01:17:707 - Add a d here, and maybe here 01:18:374 (317) too
Oni
• 00:27:707 (71) - Remove maybe?
• 00:48:791 (212) ^
• Remove 00:51:124 (230) and add a d here : 00:50:957
• 00:59:291 (292) - I would remove this one, it feels weird with the vocals
• 01:01:124 - Add a k
• 01:09:707 (357) - Change to k and remove 01:09:874 (358)
• 01:12:041 - Add a d

And that's all, this is a great map, I wish you luck!
Topic Starter
katacheh

Kazaze wrote:

Hi from your modding queue, requesting a M4M on this map.
Hope my mode will help!

Kantan
• 00:01:179 (2) - Removing this note sounds very nice in my opinion good! fixed.
• 00:18:874 (6) - d, lower tone than 00:18:207 (5) but 00:18:874 (6) - higher than 00:19:541 (7) - so I think k is better.
• 01:00:874 (56) - a d sounds good here 01:00:874 (56) - has high pitch, so I changed other notes.
• 01:04:041 - I would add a k here good! but I dont want too many notes on 1/2.
• 01:06:707 - and a d here, what do you think?^

Futsuu
•00:01:522 (3) - This one could be removed in order to make a break ok. Fixed.
•You could remove 00:18:541 (12,13,14,15) - and follow the piano like this feel a little weird.
• Following the vocals, you can add a note here : 00:38:874 (d maybe) add some notes
and 3 notes here : 00:41:207 , 00:41:541 & 00:41:874 (What about d k d) ^
•There's a cymbal sound here 01:14:541 (133) , I think it really need to be mapped, you could add a finisher, maybe a D just like the following 01:15:374 (135) Added a kat. I just want to emphasize the piano sound.

Muzukashii
• 00:31:874 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - Change to (kdkdkkd) good! changed.
• 00:59:291 (228) - Remove ok. Fixed.
• 01:17:707 - Add a d here, and maybe here 01:18:374 (317) too Ok. Fixed!
Oni
• 00:27:707 (71) - Remove maybe? no change.
• 00:48:791 (212) ^ ddddk feels good, so no change.
• Remove 00:51:124 (230) and add a d here : 00:50:957 ok. Fixed.
• 00:59:291 (292) - I would remove this one, it feels weird with the vocals I think kdk feels good.. so I didnt change.
• 01:01:124 - Add a k feels a little weird.
• 01:09:707 (357) - Change to k and remove 01:09:874 (358) no change.
• 01:12:041 - Add a dI want to break here.


And that's all, this is a great map, I wish you luck!

Thanks for mod~ I will mod your map later. :D
Smallwu
ㄢㄢ 神偷SM來偷KDS了
[General]
Tags 增加 : "Simon moe" "Short Version" "LET'S GO! K.R.T. GIRLS" ""stu00608" "Fantazy" 以及"FanFan"
第一個是因為你的標籤裡面有"希萌創意" 所以另外再加個英文版本 第二個則是因為你目前這首歌的版本較Youtube上的完整版短
第三個是因為這是影片最後的畫面 第四, 五, 和六是因為他們是GDer

標籤部分或許還能增加"Hoskey" 我不太確定 因為我不知道 "A&R:Hoskey (Ayre Records)"是什麼
這就交給你決定了?_? Youtube完整版
另外我能問下 safe_house_t 是什麼嗎

OD/HP設置看起來有一點問題 我建議設置改成
FanFanOni : 5/5
stu's Inner Oni : 5/5.5 (若照難度), 或是 5.5/6 (若照名稱)
Oni : 5.5/6 (若照難度), 或是 5/5.5 (若照名稱)

奶辰的Oni難度較低 然而卻是Inner (即使他真正的難度的確較高了許多=w=)
看要不要改一下難度名 (Inner Oni --> Oni , 原本的Oni改成...Inner Oni?_?)

僅摸三個鬼 因為之前的Kantan~Muzu已經摸過了 估計我也摸不出東西了:3

[FanFanOni]
:idea: 這follow鋼琴的技術 太神拉!! :idea:

00:00:494 - 讓紅線及綠線的Volume一致

00:14:036 - 建議在這邊插一個已經變成Normal的綠線(變速.音量不變) 這樣子新手比較不容易因為超速而聽到Soft音效的 (35)

00:14:208 - 00:14:541 - 插毛變速 完全沒有漸層感呀這裡?_?
00:14:874 - 00:15:541 - 要變就變這裡 每個間距增加 0.02x ^q^

00:25:291 (99) - 移除 1. 這裡根本沒有鼓聲 2. 你從 00:21:874 開始就有在follow提琴聲 移除這顆可以凸顯後面的琴聲

00:43:707 (182,183,184) - ddk 因為最後那顆是特別響亮的鈸聲

00:44:374 (187,188,189) - kkd 因為最後那顆是特別低沉的鼓聲

00:46:624 (203) 和 00:46:791 (205) - 原本那串太長了 另外順便把 (204) 改成don :3
00:46:707 (204,205) - d d 如果你不要上面那條的話 ;3 鋼琴是在最後五顆才出現的音效 你可能聽錯了?_?

00:46:707 (203) - 改成don? 感覺這樣聽起來比較

01:07:874 (343) - 感覺能K ?W?

01:14:874 (380) - k 我知道這裡的音和後面的K一樣 可是聽起來感覺這裡放k可以有更好的效果

01:17:207 (393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402) - d d d d d d k d k d 在快要結束的時候才做變化感覺比較潮

01:20:041 or 01:19:874- Add a Spinner 只有你的難度沒有 Fan界87大奇觀之一?_?

關於二連音的部分 雖然只有兩組 但我覺得還是把他們連起來變成ddd的三連打比較合適 (二連很難抓Acc你知道ㄇ)
[stu's Inner Oni]
:idea: 檢查AiMod , 另外還要關閉"Enable Custom Colours" :idea:

00:00:494 - 0.60x的起始速度感覺太低了? 試試0.75x唄>w< 另外要讓紅線和綠線的Volume一致

00:08:722 (27) - k 原本放d應該是為了不讓後面的鋼琴段太突兀 可是這裡的voice太凸顯 轉去跟鋼琴會讓人覺得奇怪?w?
00:08:894 和 00:09:065 - 加d 雖然這兩處沒有任何音 但作為連結這兩個部分似乎是挺合適的 我是這麼覺得 @口@

00:10:436 (34,35) - d k to follow voice 因為起的"ㄧ"有特別拉高

00:12:151 (1) - 太短了吧ww 將起點拉至 00:11:636 當作在跟尾音或許挺不錯 或是直接像FanFanOni那樣直接空著

00:23:374 (60,61,62) - kkd or ddk 感覺最後一顆和前面兩顆與眾不同

00:24:041 (64) - k 聽起來這顆音比前面那顆高了一些 或ˋ是前面那顆完全沒有提琴聲(似乎是鼓聲偽裝成了提琴?W? 越聽越糊)

00:24:541 (66,67,68) - kkd or kdd (66)是鈸用kat (68)是鼓用don 中間那顆沒音效 建議用k 私心希望

00:37:041 (139,140) - Ctrl+G (138)有(138)的音效 而(138)用D 故(139)也用D 而且(140)的音效聽起來弱了些

00:38:874 (150) - 這裡的鼓聲較為其他地方更用力(?) 同時為下面的變化做一些修飾的效果 讓這段聽起來不那麼單調

00:39:207 (152,153) - d X 這裡聽不出來原本在跟什麼音效 前後兩段相似的段落你也沒有放三連打 私心是希望跟鼓^q^

00:39:707 (156,157) - K d or D k , 原因同 00:38:874 (150) .K d是依照原本的擺設 D k則是因為後面那個音多了鈸的音效

00:40:541 (159) - K 我也不知道為啥 重播好幾次感覺都是K較合適??_??__??_?__? 而且其他兩個Oni在這也都使用K

00:42:374 (169,170) - K d 原因同 00:38:874 (150)

00:44:207 (177) - k 因為這裡有較為響亮的鼓聲

00:44:707 (181) - d 因為這裡有較為低沉的鼓聲 (看要不要連著 00:44:624 (180) 一起改)

*Kiai Part的Volume直接調整成100%吧 別用60% 日常段較高潮段應該得比較不突出才對*

01:08:041 (364) - d 前面有鈸聲 後面則有提琴聲 這顆啥都沒有 是顆邊緣note 就讓他特別些吧

01:08:624 - 或許可以加顆d? 我真的聽不出來這裡到底有無鼓聲=口=

*Kiai Part的結尾 在我看來Volume可以考慮減少個15~25% (也可維持100%)*

01:13:374 (388) - d 前面也很多琴聲 怎麼就這裡和後面那顆跟了 這樣超怪ww

01:13:874 - Add d or k (私心k) 原因同上 雖然這裡也有鼓聲 但是這樣放感覺就像是在follow鋼琴

01:14:541 (394) - 感覺可以使用K

01:14:874 (395) - 考慮不用Finisher? 說不出原因 感覺這樣聽比較順 ;w;

01:15:374 (398) - 感覺可以使用D :3

01:17:374 (408,409) - k k 因為你似乎在這單點段落主要在follow鋼琴
[Oni]
00:08:208 (27,28) - Ctrl+G? 我是聽不出個所以然 不過感覺你前面主要都是在跟voice 所以...換嘛<3

00:10:951 (34) - d 這顆音效和前後兩顆相較之下似乎低了些

00:30:874 (93) - d 因為k似乎跟到voice了?_?

00:31:124 - add d to follow pitch

00:33:707 - 00:33:874 - kkd or ddk 因為有鈸

00:34:291 (116) - 移除這顆感覺更讚?_?

00:37:541 (139) - 此處無聲 汝應將其移至 00:37:874 並將原D改至 00:37:707 方可獲得BN愛戴 (更動後 其形變為DD K DK)

00:40:207 (154) - 移至 00:40:374 原因同上述所言

00:42:874 (170) - 移至 00:43:041 原因同上述所言

00:51:374 (233) - 感覺不太適合用K...

00:56:707 (274) - 不太適合用K...

01:06:207 (337) - 因為已經沒有前面那種鈸的音效了

01:06:457 和 01:06:957 - Add d SMの悪趣味

01:06:707 (341) - 已經沒有前面那種鈸的音效了

01:07:207 (345) - k 沒有鈸了

01:07:541 (347) - d 感覺這樣比較能好好地凸顯後面的K ?_?

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我覺得我要被榨乾了
Topic Starter
katacheh

Smallwu wrote:

ㄢㄢ 神偷SM來偷KDS了
[General]
Tags 增加 : "Simon moe" "Short Version" "LET'S GO! K.R.T. GIRLS" ""stu00608" "Fantazy" 以及"FanFan" 加了~
第一個是因為你的標籤裡面有"希萌創意" 所以另外再加個英文版本 第二個則是因為你目前這首歌的版本較Youtube上的完整版短
第三個是因為這是影片最後的畫面 第四, 五, 和六是因為他們是GDer

標籤部分或許還能增加"Hoskey" 我不太確定 因為我不知道 "A&R:Hoskey (Ayre Records)"是什麼 是覺得有相關就可以加 A&R的意思可以去Google查到
這就交給你決定了?_? Youtube完整版
另外我能問下 safe_house_t 是什麼嗎 CG製作的公司之類的?_?

OD/HP設置看起來有一點問題 我建議設置改成
FanFanOni : 5/5
stu's Inner Oni : 5/5.5 (若照難度), 或是 5.5/6 (若照名稱)
Oni : 5.5/6 (若照難度), 或是 5/5.5 (若照名稱) 我的難度就保持6 其他部份我要問一下fanfan和stu

奶辰的Oni難度較低 然而卻是Inner (即使他真正的難度的確較高了許多=w=)
看要不要改一下難度名 (Inner Oni --> Oni , 原本的Oni改成...Inner Oni?_?) 我忘記更新了......

僅摸三個鬼 因為之前的Kantan~Muzu已經摸過了 估計我也摸不出東西了:3 謝摟%%

[FanFanOni]
:idea: 這follow鋼琴的技術 太神拉!! :idea: 神一般的followwww

00:00:494 - 讓紅線及綠線的Volume一致

00:14:036 - 建議在這邊插一個已經變成Normal的綠線(變速.音量不變) 這樣子新手比較不容易因為超速而聽到Soft音效的 (35)

00:14:208 - 00:14:541 - 插毛變速 完全沒有漸層感呀這裡?_?
00:14:874 - 00:15:541 - 要變就變這裡 每個間距增加 0.02x ^q^

00:25:291 (99) - 移除 1. 這裡根本沒有鼓聲 2. 你從 00:21:874 開始就有在follow提琴聲 移除這顆可以凸顯後面的琴聲

00:43:707 (182,183,184) - ddk 因為最後那顆是特別響亮的鈸聲

00:44:374 (187,188,189) - kkd 因為最後那顆是特別低沉的鼓聲

00:46:624 (203) 和 00:46:791 (205) - 原本那串太長了 另外順便把 (204) 改成don :3
00:46:707 (204,205) - d d 如果你不要上面那條的話 ;3 鋼琴是在最後五顆才出現的音效 你可能聽錯了?_?

00:46:707 (203) - 改成don? 感覺這樣聽起來比較

01:07:874 (343) - 感覺能K ?W?

01:14:874 (380) - k 我知道這裡的音和後面的K一樣 可是聽起來感覺這裡放k可以有更好的效果

01:17:207 (393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402) - d d d d d d k d k d 在快要結束的時候才做變化感覺比較潮

01:20:041 or 01:19:874- Add a Spinner 只有你的難度沒有 Fan界87大奇觀之一?_?

關於二連音的部分 雖然只有兩組 但我覺得還是把他們連起來變成ddd的三連打比較合適 (二連很難抓Acc你知道ㄇ)
[stu's Inner Oni]
:idea: 檢查AiMod , 另外還要關閉"Enable Custom Colours" :idea: colours這邊我就先改了喔

00:00:494 - 0.60x的起始速度感覺太低了? 試試0.75x唄>w< 另外要讓紅線和綠線的Volume一致

00:08:722 (27) - k 原本放d應該是為了不讓後面的鋼琴段太突兀 可是這裡的voice太凸顯 轉去跟鋼琴會讓人覺得奇怪?w?
00:08:894 和 00:09:065 - 加d 雖然這兩處沒有任何音 但作為連結這兩個部分似乎是挺合適的 我是這麼覺得 @口@

00:10:436 (34,35) - d k to follow voice 因為起的"ㄧ"有特別拉高

00:12:151 (1) - 太短了吧ww 將起點拉至 00:11:636 當作在跟尾音或許挺不錯 或是直接像FanFanOni那樣直接空著

00:23:374 (60,61,62) - kkd or ddk 感覺最後一顆和前面兩顆與眾不同

00:24:041 (64) - k 聽起來這顆音比前面那顆高了一些 或ˋ是前面那顆完全沒有提琴聲(似乎是鼓聲偽裝成了提琴?W? 越聽越糊)

00:24:541 (66,67,68) - kkd or kdd (66)是鈸用kat (68)是鼓用don 中間那顆沒音效 建議用k 私心希望

00:37:041 (139,140) - Ctrl+G (138)有(138)的音效 而(138)用D 故(139)也用D 而且(140)的音效聽起來弱了些

00:38:874 (150) - 這裡的鼓聲較為其他地方更用力(?) 同時為下面的變化做一些修飾的效果 讓這段聽起來不那麼單調

00:39:207 (152,153) - d X 這裡聽不出來原本在跟什麼音效 前後兩段相似的段落你也沒有放三連打 私心是希望跟鼓^q^

00:39:707 (156,157) - K d or D k , 原因同 00:38:874 (150) .K d是依照原本的擺設 D k則是因為後面那個音多了鈸的音效

00:40:541 (159) - K 我也不知道為啥 重播好幾次感覺都是K較合適??_??__??_?__? 而且其他兩個Oni在這也都使用K

00:42:374 (169,170) - K d 原因同 00:38:874 (150)

00:44:207 (177) - k 因為這裡有較為響亮的鼓聲

00:44:707 (181) - d 因為這裡有較為低沉的鼓聲 (看要不要連著 00:44:624 (180) 一起改)

*Kiai Part的Volume直接調整成100%吧 別用60% 日常段較高潮段應該得比較不突出才對*

01:08:041 (364) - d 前面有鈸聲 後面則有提琴聲 這顆啥都沒有 是顆邊緣note 就讓他特別些吧

01:08:624 - 或許可以加顆d? 我真的聽不出來這裡到底有無鼓聲=口=

*Kiai Part的結尾 在我看來Volume可以考慮減少個15~25% (也可維持100%)*

01:13:374 (388) - d 前面也很多琴聲 怎麼就這裡和後面那顆跟了 這樣超怪ww

01:13:874 - Add d or k (私心k) 原因同上 雖然這裡也有鼓聲 但是這樣放感覺就像是在follow鋼琴

01:14:541 (394) - 感覺可以使用K

01:14:874 (395) - 考慮不用Finisher? 說不出原因 感覺這樣聽比較順 ;w;

01:15:374 (398) - 感覺可以使用D :3

01:17:374 (408,409) - k k 因為你似乎在這單點段落主要在follow鋼琴
[Oni]
00:08:208 (27,28) - Ctrl+G? 我是聽不出個所以然 不過感覺你前面主要都是在跟voice 所以...換嘛<3

00:10:951 (34) - d 這顆音效和前後兩顆相較之下似乎低了些 好? 這樣的話我muzu也改了 維持一致(之前有人挑我一致性x-x)

00:30:874 (93) - d 因為k似乎跟到voice了?_? 我其實很喜歡dkk這樣 所以沒改

00:31:124 - add d to follow pitch 變成英文了?_? 英文太爛看不懂(x 這邊的話沒改

00:33:707 - 00:33:874 - kkd or ddk 因為有鈸 你是不是想說這邊00:34:041 - 的話我改了

00:34:291 (116) - 移除這顆感覺更讚?_? 是覺得這樣可以 這邊也改了 因為上面改了

00:37:541 (139) - 此處無聲 汝應將其移至 00:37:874 並將原D改至 00:37:707 方可獲得BN愛戴 (更動後 其形變為DD K DK) 遵旨 如BN之所願

00:40:207 (154) - 移至 00:40:374 原因同上述所言 ^

00:42:874 (170) - 移至 00:43:041 原因同上述所言 ^

00:51:374 (233) - 感覺不太適合用K... 暫時沒改 因為不喜歡那邊用D... 或是有什麼更好的建議?

00:56:707 (274) - 不太適合用K...

01:06:207 (337) - 因為已經沒有前面那種鈸的音效了 其實我是跟著鋼琴聲K的

01:06:457 和 01:06:957 - Add d SMの悪趣味

01:06:707 (341) - 已經沒有前面那種鈸的音效了 是覺得最後越來越高潮的時候反而沒有K很怪 我換了一種patterns

01:07:207 (345) - k 沒有鈸了

01:07:541 (347) - d 感覺這樣比較能好好地凸顯後面的K ?_?

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我覺得我要被榨乾了 想喝SM汁^q^
謝摸摸^q^/
Fantazy

Smallwu wrote:

[FanFanOni]
*Fan' Oni 欠%喔
:idea: 這follow鋼琴的技術 太神拉!! :idea:

00:00:494 - 讓紅線及綠線的Volume一致 已%

00:14:036 - 建議在這邊插一個已經變成Normal的綠線(變速.音量不變) 這樣子新手比較不容易因為超速而聽到Soft音效的 (35) %新手來%你嘛?

00:14:208 - 00:14:541 - 插毛變速 完全沒有漸層感呀這裡?_? DDX 其實原本有想過 DXXX
00:14:874 - 00:15:541 - 要變就變這裡 每個間距增加 0.02x ^q^ 插!!!!DXXX

00:25:291 (99) - 移除 1. 這裡根本沒有鼓聲 2. 你從 00:21:874 開始就有在follow提琴聲 移除這顆可以凸顯後面的琴聲 阿 沒發現 反而被你%現了

00:43:707 (182,183,184) - ddk 因為最後那顆是特別響亮的鈸聲 鈸聲勢什麼來著 我已經被%聾了

00:44:374 (187,188,189) - kkd 因為最後那顆是特別低沉的鼓聲 跟上面改成 kkd 和 ddd 以下沉%音樂

00:46:624 (203) 和 00:46:791 (205) - 原本那串太長了 另外順便把 (204) 改成don :3 跟你一樣長 00:46:791 (204) - delete but not dondon
00:46:707 (204,205) - d d 如果你不要上面那條的話 ;3 鋼琴是在最後五顆才出現的音效 你可能聽錯了?_? 東東登登登東登 實際ddkkkdk 但想簡單一奌? ddkkddk就醬? and (%%%%)x滑音驟醬 想

00:46:707 (203) - 改成don? 感覺這樣聽起來比較 ?_?_?_? 你可以從別的diff從中取得快感(?

01:07:874 (343) - 感覺能K ?W? 原本是要這兩顆01:07:541 (340,341) - 不過音有點弱 沒有那種阿斯的感覺(?

01:14:874 (380) - k 我知道這裡的音和後面的K一樣 可是聽起來感覺這裡放k可以有更好的效果 就試避免一次%太多 後面來不及%的意思?

01:17:207 (393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402) - d d d d d d k d k d 在快要結束的時候才做變化感覺比較潮 喔!! 不錯 潮到出水 (?_?_?_?_??_?_?

01:20:041 or 01:19:874- Add a Spinner 只有你的難度沒有 Fan界87大奇觀之一?_? 幹 對吼 想說少%了什麼 ?_?

關於二連音的部分 雖然只有兩組 但我覺得還是把他們連起來變成ddd的三連打比較合適 (二連很難抓Acc你知道ㄇ) 槓 就像SM一樣那麼難%(?
stu00608

Smallwu wrote:

[stu's Inner Oni]
:idea: 檢查AiMod , 另外還要關閉"Enable Custom Colours" :idea: 這部分可能是轉移過去之後沒注意到 感謝!

00:00:494 - 0.60x的起始速度感覺太低了? 試試0.75x唄>w< 另外要讓紅線和綠線的Volume一致 體感0.6 (?

00:08:722 (27) - k 原本放d應該是為了不讓後面的鋼琴段太突兀 可是這裡的voice太凸顯 轉去跟鋼琴會讓人覺得奇怪?w? 這邊其實不是最原本的擺法 00:08:208 就先刪這顆
00:08:894 和 00:09:065 - 加d 雖然這兩處沒有任何音 但作為連結這兩個部分似乎是挺合適的 我是這麼覺得 @口@ 覺得沒有必要

00:10:436 (34,35) - d k to follow voice 因為起的"ㄧ"有特別拉高 沒那麼有感欸... 如果其他有人也提出來我再考慮改

00:12:151 (1) - 太短了吧ww 將起點拉至 00:11:636 當作在跟尾音或許挺不錯 或是直接像FanFanOni那樣直接空著 00:11:979 我改起點到這裡 疏失疏失 lol

00:23:374 (60,61,62) - kkd or ddk 感覺最後一顆和前面兩顆與眾不同 00:23:374 改d 00:23:457 del

00:24:041 (64) - k 聽起來這顆音比前面那顆高了一些 或ˋ是前面那顆完全沒有提琴聲(似乎是鼓聲偽裝成了提琴?W? 越聽越糊) 保留

00:24:541 (66,67,68) - kkd or kdd (66)是鈸用kat (68)是鼓用don 中間那顆沒音效 建議用k 私心希望 kkd採用

00:37:041 (139,140) - Ctrl+G (138)有(138)的音效 而(138)用D 故(139)也用D 而且(140)的音效聽起來弱了些 覺得沒那麼嚴重

00:38:874 (150) - 這裡的鼓聲較為其他地方更用力(?) 同時為下面的變化做一些修飾的效果 讓這段聽起來不那麼單調 00:38:791 加了d

00:39:207 (152,153) - d X 這裡聽不出來原本在跟什麼音效 前後兩段相似的段落你也沒有放三連打 私心是希望跟鼓^q^ 00:39:291 del

00:39:707 (156,157) - K d or D k , 原因同 00:38:874 (150) .K d是依照原本的擺設 D k則是因為後面那個音多了鈸的音效 覺得沒那麼嚴重

00:40:541 (159) - K 我也不知道為啥 重播好幾次感覺都是K較合適??_??__??_?__? 而且其他兩個Oni在這也都使用K okok

00:42:374 (169,170) - K d 原因同 00:38:874 (150) 覺得沒那麼嚴重

00:44:207 (177) - k 因為這裡有較為響亮的鼓聲 okok

00:44:707 (181) - d 因為這裡有較為低沉的鼓聲 (看要不要連著 00:44:624 (180) 一起改) okok

*Kiai Part的Volume直接調整成100%吧 別用60% 日常段較高潮段應該得比較不突出才對* 改成90了

01:08:041 (364) - d 前面有鈸聲 後面則有提琴聲 這顆啥都沒有 是顆邊緣note 就讓他特別些吧 覺得沒有必要

01:08:624 - 或許可以加顆d? 我真的聽不出來這裡到底有無鼓聲=口= 保留

*Kiai Part的結尾 在我看來Volume可以考慮減少個15~25% (也可維持100%)*

01:13:374 (388) - d 前面也很多琴聲 怎麼就這裡和後面那顆跟了 這樣超怪ww 的確是 改了

01:13:874 - Add d or k (私心k) 原因同上 雖然這裡也有鼓聲 但是這樣放感覺就像是在follow鋼琴 added d

01:14:541 (394) - 感覺可以使用K 不用吧 接著後面會變奇怪

01:14:874 (395) - 考慮不用Finisher? 說不出原因 感覺這樣聽比較順 ;w; 就有個fu再那邊咩 打起來可以配合起伏

01:15:374 (398) - 感覺可以使用D :3 okok

01:17:374 (408,409) - k k 因為你似乎在這單點段落主要在follow鋼琴 不綽

我覺得我要被榨乾了
感謝尼 :)
frukoyurdakul
Hello from my modding queue! im surprised, no gimmick map?!

This map has so many stars and the diffs are pretty good, so these comments are suggestions instead of errors.

Kantan is good enough.

Futsuu
00:35:541 (50) - Well, don't you think this slider is a bit much for futsuu? Maybe you can replace it with actual notes that are spaced in 1/2. For instance: 00:35:541 - d here, 00:35:874 - d here, 00:36:207 - k here, 00:36:374 - d here and 00:36:541 - d here.

Muzukashii
00:43:874 (135,136,137) - Well, there is no drum attack here yet 00:41:041 (123,124) - you kept these attacks as 1/2 spaced notes. Why don't you swap these patterns?

01:08:374 (268,269) - I recommend kkk (1/4) and k (1/2). That way the drum attack will be emphasized.

Fan's Oni
00:25:957 (103) - How about a don? The drum sound is very low.

00:53:707 (253) - The vocal is starting from the previous note and you already did a kat to emphasize it, so you can change this to don to emphasize the kick sound of drums.

stu's Oni
00:22:041 - 00:22:374 - Why skipped these kicks here? Dons at these points will be good.

01:05:041 (332,333,334) - 01:05:541 (336,337,338) - I think these 2 patterns are hard for an oni diff. The players who play oni diffs will have trouble to hit them, since these patterns have color switches. Maybe you can make these easier like using ddk or kkd.

01:06:207 - A bit long stream don't you think? You can divide this stream into 2 or 3 (and maybe even more) patterns which have 11 notes maximum.

01:10:874 - You can add a don here to support the kick sound.

01:19:957 (1) - The 1/8 snap on this spinner looks weird, I couldn't read the last note because of my skin for instance. You can move it to 01:20:041 - here.

Oni
00:25:124 - Maybe you can add a don here since there is a noticeable kick sound.

00:36:124 (132) - I think you can delete this one, the drum attack is pretty slow, a triplet after a 5-plet pattern is not neccesary.

01:11:541 (366) - I think you are following the keyboard sounds here, so the keyboard sound is pretty low. I think you can turn this to a don.

01:13:874 (380,381) - Ctrl + g? It will support the higher keyboard sound.

A solid mapset, good luck on ranking! Now we see katacheh ranked maps? ;-;
_yu68
hi~
mod from stu's m4m
If there is something you can't understand because of my noot good English, please chat or PM

mod
[General]
  1. Nowadays, there are few maps with Soft hitsounds, so it is recommended to unify hitsounds to Normal. Also there is no reason to use Soft hitsounds.
[Kantan]
  1. HP:7 -> 8? since notes is few
  2. 00:11:465 (11) - delete and 00:11:808 (1) - move spinner start point to 00:11:465 - ? same as Futsuu
  3. 00:18:207 (5) - or 00:18:874 (6) - change to don? to make even color scheme
  4. 00:26:874 (16) - delete? to make a break right after a complex rhythm
  5. 00:35:541 (27) - ~ 00:36:541 - change to slider? same as Futsuu
  6. 00:40:541 (31) - change to don? same as 00:18:207 -
  7. 00:48:707 (40) - move to 00:48:874 - ? ignore vocal to make a simpler rhythm
  8. 00:54:041 (47) - same as ^
  9. 01:00:207 (55) - delete? to make a break right after a complex rhythm
  10. 01:06:874 - add kat? to express a drum sound
[Futsuu]
  1. HP:6 -> 7? same reason as Kantan
  2. In the intro, I think should delete more notes and make more difference with Muzukashii.
    1. 00:02:208 (4) -
    2. 00:04:951 (10) -
    3. 00:07:008 (15) -
    4. 00:08:379 (18) -
  3. 00:20:874 (17) - add finisher? same as Kantan and Muzukashii
  4. 00:26:207 - add don(with finisher)? to unify the basic rhythm with other diffs
[Muzukashii]
  1. This diff is too difficult compared other diffs, so it is recommended to delete all 1/4s.
    It is also recommended to reduce other notes to adjust difficulty spread.

    • delete all?
    1. 00:25:957 (53,54) -
    2. 00:27:041 (59) -
    3. 00:28:041 (64) -
    4. 00:29:707 (71) -
    5. 00:30:707 (76) -
    6. 00:32:374 (83) -
    7. 00:33:874 (90) -
    8. 00:34:874 (95) -
    9. 00:35:207 (97) -
    10. 00:43:957 (136) -
    11. 00:44:707 (141) -
    12. 00:46:957 (154,155) -
    13. 00:47:707 (158) -
    14. 00:48:291 (162) -
    15. 00:49:457 (169) -
    16. 00:49:707 (171) -
    17. 00:50:374 (174) -
    18. 00:50:791 (177) -
    19. 00:51:041 (179) -
    20. 00:52:041 (184) -
    21. 00:53:041 (189) -
    22. 00:53:624 (193) -
    23. 00:54:791 (200) -
    24. 00:55:041 (202) -
    25. 00:55:707 (205) -
    26. 00:56:124 (208) -
    27. 00:56:374 (210) -
    28. 00:57:374 (215) -
    29. 00:57:791 (218) -
    30. 00:58:041 (220) -
    31. 01:14:291 (296,297) -
    32. 01:19:124 (318) -
      I can't propose any more because of my lack of ability. However, I think you should reduce more notes to adjust difficulty spread.
      If you reduce notes, you can change the color scheme according to your preference to make even color scheme.
  2. 00:36:707 (106) - delete? to emphasize 00:36:874 -
  3. 00:38:207 (111) - delete? to fit to drum sounds
  4. 00:40:874 (122) - ^
  5. 00:43:541 (133) - ^
  6. 01:14:541 (298) - add finisher? to emphasize cymbal sound
[Oni]
  1. This diff also needs to reduce notes.(same reason as Muzukashii)
    There is also a method that make this diff difficult more, rename to Inner Oni and make new Oni.
    If you make a new Oni you should use simple 1/4 for difficulty spread.(ddd, kkk, ddk, kkd)

    • delete all?
    1. 00:26:124 (60) -
    2. 00:26:374 (62) -
    3. 00:26:791 (65) -
    4. 00:27:707 (71) -
    5. 00:29:041 (79) -
    6. 00:29:457 (82) -
    7. 00:30:124 (87) -
    8. 00:30:374 (89) -
    9. 00:30:791 (92) -
    10. 00:32:291 (101) -
    11. 00:32:791 (105) -
    12. 00:33:041 (107) -
    13. 00:33:457 (110) -
    14. 00:34:124 (115) -
    15. 00:34:374 (117) -
    16. 00:34:791 (120) -
    17. 00:35:291 (124) -
    18. 00:35:624 (127) -
    19. 00:39:124 (149) -
    20. 00:41:624 (163) -
    21. 00:41:791 (165) -
    22. 00:46:457 (192) -
    23. 00:46:624 (194) -
    24. 00:46:791 (196) -
    25. 00:47:707 (203,204) -
    26. 00:48:291 (208) - or 00:48:457 (210) -
    27. 00:48:791 (213,214,215) -
    28. 00:50:041 (223) -
    29. 00:50:291 (225) - or 00:50:457 (227) -
    30. 00:50:957 (231) -
    31. 00:53:041 (244,245) -
    32. 00:53:624 (249) - or 00:53:791 (251) -
    33. 00:54:124 (254,255,256) -
    34. 00:55:374 (264) -
    35. 00:55:624 (266) - or 00:55:791 (268) -
    36. 00:56:291 (272) -
    37. 00:57:791 (282) -
    38. 00:58:374 (288) -
    39. 01:00:124 (299) - or 01:00:457 (302) -
    40. 01:00:957 (306,307) -
    41. 01:12:957 (374) -
    42. 01:17:457 (401) -
    43. 01:18:124 (406) -
      If you reduce notes, you can change the color scheme according to your preference to make even color scheme.
  2. 00:30:791 (92) - change to don and move to 00:31:124 - ? to fit to drum sounds
  3. 00:33:457 (110) - move to 00:33:791 - ? ^
  4. 00:35:374 (125) - change to don? to emphasize 00:35:541 -
  5. 00:36:707 (136) - delete? to emphasize 00:36:874 -
  6. 00:38:207 (142) - delete? to fit to drum sounds
  7. 00:40:874 (157) - ^
  8. 00:43:541 (173,174) - ^
  9. 01:14:207 (382) - change to don, 01:14:457 (385) - delete and 01:14:541 (386) - add finisher ? same reason as Muzukashii
[Fan's Oni]
  1. 00:28:541 (114) - change to kat? to express presence or absence of vocal
  2. 00:39:374 (162) - delete or change to kat? to emphasize 00:39:541 -
  3. 00:42:041 (176) - ^
  4. 00:52:624 (245,246) - delete? to make a break like 00:47:207 -
  5. 00:53:124 (249) - move to 00:53:457 - ? same as this measure 00:47:541 -
[stu's Oni]
  1. 00:22:041 - add any circle? to fit to melody
  2. 00:29:541 (94) - change to don? to make a difference with this measure 00:26:207 -
  3. 00:33:041 (114,115) - delete? same pattern
  4. 00:36:707 (139) - delete or change to kat? to emphasize 00:36:874 -
  5. 01:04:707 (330) - 01:06:041 (340) - delete? to make a break before the stream
  6. 01:08:457 - add any circle? to fit to drum sounds

good luck!
Topic Starter
katacheh

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Hello from my modding queue! im surprised, no gimmick map?! XD

This map has so many stars and the diffs are pretty good, so these comments are suggestions instead of errors.

Kantan is good enough. Thanks!

Futsuu
00:35:541 (50) - Well, don't you think this slider is a bit much for futsuu? Maybe you can replace it with actual notes that are spaced in 1/2. For instance: 00:35:541 - d here, 00:35:874 - d here, 00:36:207 - k here, 00:36:374 - d here and 00:36:541 - d here. The instance is great, but should I need to give some break here? keep.

Muzukashii
00:43:874 (135,136,137) - Well, there is no drum attack here yet deleted 136
00:41:041 (123,124) - you kept these attacks as 1/2 spaced notes. Why don't you swap these patterns? yeah;w;

01:08:374 (268,269) - I recommend kkk (1/4) and k (1/2). That way the drum attack will be emphasized. changed!


Oni
00:25:124 - Maybe you can add a don here since there is a noticeable kick sound. V

00:36:124 (132) - I think you can delete this one, the drum attack is pretty slow, a triplet after a 5-plet pattern is not neccesary. I see

01:11:541 (366) - I think you are following the keyboard sounds here, so the keyboard sound is pretty low. I think you can turn this to a don. Good! changed

01:13:874 (380,381) - Ctrl + g? It will support the higher keyboard sound. ^


A solid mapset, good luck on ranking! Now we see katacheh ranked maps? ;-;
Thank you for modding! my diffs and fan's Oni Updated with frukoyurdakul's mod
Fantazy

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Fan's Oni
00:25:957 (103) - How about a don? The drum sound is very low. D:::: is it ?? or my ears problem;w; but i heard medium but is partial high ?_?

00:53:707 (253) - The vocal is starting from the previous note and you already did a kat to emphasize it, so you can change this to don to emphasize the kick sound of drums. change~~

_yu68 wrote:

[Fan's Oni]
  1. 00:28:541 (114) - change to kat? to express presence or absence of vocal m.. here is with the voice?
  2. 00:39:374 (162) - delete or change to kat? to emphasize 00:39:541 - emphasize the big note?A?
  3. 00:42:041 (176) - ^ ?A?
  4. 00:52:624 (245,246) - delete? to make a break like 00:47:207 - was put with the..ah....idk what that sound >.>
  5. 00:53:124 (249) - move to 00:53:457 - ? same as this measure 00:47:541 - change
stu00608
frukoyurdakul's mod

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Hello from my modding queue! im surprised, no gimmick map?!

stu's Oni
00:22:041 - 00:22:374 - Why skipped these kicks here? Dons at these points will be good. ok! I add a at 00:22:041[/color]

01:05:041 (332,333,334) - 01:05:541 (336,337,338) - I think these 2 patterns are hard for an oni diff. The players who play oni diffs will have trouble to hit them, since these patterns have color switches. Maybe you can make these easier like using ddk or kkd. You're right :3 . Why this map called "Oni" because there stars are lower than kata's Oni diff . It's a Inner before preparing for rank

01:06:207 - A bit long stream don't you think? You can divide this stream into 2 or 3 (and maybe even more) patterns which have 11 notes maximum. same as ↑

01:10:874 - You can add a don here to support the kick sound. ok! added

01:19:957 (1) - The 1/8 snap on this spinner looks weird, I couldn't read the last note because of my skin for instance. You can move it to 01:20:041 - here. ok!

A solid mapset, good luck on ranking! Now we see katacheh ranked maps? ;-;
_yu68's mod

_yu68 wrote:

hi~
mod from stu's m4m
If there is something you can't understand because of my noot good English, please chat or PM

[stu's Oni]
  1. 00:22:041 - add any circle? to fit to melody fixed!
  2. 00:29:541 (94) - change to don? to make a difference with this measure 00:26:207 - You're right O: . fixed!
  3. 00:33:041 (114,115) - delete? same pattern ok! fixed
  4. 00:36:707 (139) - delete or change to kat? to emphasize 00:36:874 - keep :3
  5. 01:04:707 (330) - 01:06:041 (340) - delete? to make a break before the stream sounds good I fixed it , but I keep this because I want to check everyone whether they think this is a Inner :3
  6. 01:08:457 - add any circle? to fit to drum sounds that make 01:08:791 sounds weird so I delete it
good luck!
thank you :)
Topic Starter
katacheh

_yu68 wrote:

hi~ Hi~
mod from stu's m4m
If there is something you can't understand because of my noot good English, please chat or PM

[box=mod][General]
  1. Nowadays, there are few maps with Soft hitsounds, so it is recommended to unify hitsounds to Normal. Also there is no reason to use Soft hitsounds. Since there is no durm sound(only piano and vocal) at the start, I think it's good to use soft.
[Kantan]
  1. HP:7 -> 8? since notes is few ok
  2. 00:11:465 (11) - delete and 00:11:808 (1) - move spinner start point to 00:11:465 - ? same as Futsuu yes
  3. 00:18:207 (5) - or 00:18:874 (6) - change to don? to make even color scheme I think original is good.
  4. 00:26:874 (16) - delete? to make a break right after a complex rhythm yes, good!
  5. 00:35:541 (27) - ~ 00:36:541 - change to slider? same as Futsuu yes c:
  6. 00:40:541 (31) - change to don? same as 00:18:207 - yes but what is relation with 18:207?
  7. 00:48:707 (40) - move to 00:48:874 - ? ignore vocal to make a simpler rhythm yes good
  8. 00:54:041 (47) - same as ^ ^
  9. 01:00:207 (55) - delete? to make a break right after a complex rhythm Fixed!
  10. 01:06:874 - add kat? to express a drum sound keep.
[Futsuu]
  1. HP:6 -> 7? same reason as Kantan ^
  2. In the intro, I think should delete more notes and make more difference with Muzukashii.
    1. 00:02:208 (4) - V
    2. 00:04:951 (10) - V
    3. 00:07:008 (15) - V
    4. 00:08:379 (18) - V
  3. 00:20:874 (17) - add finisher? same as Kantan and Muzukashii yeah I missed it
  4. 00:26:207 - add don(with finisher)? to unify the basic rhythm with other diffs ^
[Muzukashii]
  1. This diff is too difficult compared other diffs, so it is recommended to delete all 1/4s.
    It is also recommended to reduce other notes to adjust difficulty spread.

    • delete all? deleted some of them. thank you for point out them c:
    1. 00:25:957 (53,54) -
    2. 00:27:041 (59) -
    3. 00:28:041 (64) -
    4. 00:29:707 (71) -
    5. 00:30:707 (76) -
    6. 00:32:374 (83) -
    7. 00:33:874 (90) -
    8. 00:34:874 (95) -
    9. 00:35:207 (97) -
    10. 00:43:957 (136) -
    11. 00:44:707 (141) -
    12. 00:46:957 (154,155) -
    13. 00:47:707 (158) -
    14. 00:48:291 (162) -
    15. 00:49:457 (169) -
    16. 00:49:707 (171) -
    17. 00:50:374 (174) -
    18. 00:50:791 (177) -
    19. 00:51:041 (179) -
    20. 00:52:041 (184) -
    21. 00:53:041 (189) -
    22. 00:53:624 (193) -
    23. 00:54:791 (200) -
    24. 00:55:041 (202) -
    25. 00:55:707 (205) -
    26. 00:56:124 (208) -
    27. 00:56:374 (210) -
    28. 00:57:374 (215) -
    29. 00:57:791 (218) -
    30. 00:58:041 (220) -
    31. 01:14:291 (296,297) -
    32. 01:19:124 (318) -
      I can't propose any more because of my lack of ability. However, I think you should reduce more notes to adjust difficulty spread.
      If you reduce notes, you can change the color scheme according to your preference to make even color scheme.
  2. 00:36:707 (106) - delete? to emphasize 00:36:874 - yes
  3. 00:38:207 (111) - delete? to fit to drum sounds ^
  4. 00:40:874 (122) - ^ ^
  5. 00:43:541 (133) - ^ ^
  6. 01:14:541 (298) - add finisher? to emphasize cymbal sound keep this. I want to emphasize piano sound.
[Oni]
  1. This diff also needs to reduce notes.(same reason as Muzukashii)
    There is also a method that make this diff difficult more, rename to Inner Oni and make new Oni. Oni is ok.
    If you make a new Oni you should use simple 1/4 for difficulty spread.(ddd, kkk, ddk, kkd) Since many ranked maps (recently) are not following difficulty spread (still have some maps are following), I did not think I need to do that. and also I have GDs to link up diffs.

    • delete all?
    1. 00:26:124 (60) -
    2. 00:26:374 (62) -
    3. 00:26:791 (65) -
    4. 00:27:707 (71) -
    5. 00:29:041 (79) -
    6. 00:29:457 (82) -
    7. 00:30:124 (87) -
    8. 00:30:374 (89) -
    9. 00:30:791 (92) -
    10. 00:32:291 (101) -
    11. 00:32:791 (105) -
    12. 00:33:041 (107) -
    13. 00:33:457 (110) -
    14. 00:34:124 (115) -
    15. 00:34:374 (117) -
    16. 00:34:791 (120) -
    17. 00:35:291 (124) -
    18. 00:35:624 (127) -
    19. 00:39:124 (149) -
    20. 00:41:624 (163) -
    21. 00:41:791 (165) -
    22. 00:46:457 (192) -
    23. 00:46:624 (194) -
    24. 00:46:791 (196) -
    25. 00:47:707 (203,204) -
    26. 00:48:291 (208) - or 00:48:457 (210) -
    27. 00:48:791 (213,214,215) -
    28. 00:50:041 (223) -
    29. 00:50:291 (225) - or 00:50:457 (227) -
    30. 00:50:957 (231) -
    31. 00:53:041 (244,245) -
    32. 00:53:624 (249) - or 00:53:791 (251) -
    33. 00:54:124 (254,255,256) -
    34. 00:55:374 (264) -
    35. 00:55:624 (266) - or 00:55:791 (268) -
    36. 00:56:291 (272) -
    37. 00:57:791 (282) -
    38. 00:58:374 (288) -
    39. 01:00:124 (299) - or 01:00:457 (302) -
    40. 01:00:957 (306,307) -
    41. 01:12:957 (374) -
    42. 01:17:457 (401) -
    43. 01:18:124 (406) -
      If you reduce notes, you can change the color scheme according to your preference to make even color scheme.
  2. 00:30:791 (92) - change to don and move to 00:31:124 - ? to fit to drum sounds I would like to keep this.
  3. 00:33:457 (110) - move to 00:33:791 - ? ^
  4. 00:35:374 (125) - change to don? to emphasize 00:35:541 - keep
  5. 00:36:707 (136) - delete? to emphasize 00:36:874 - yeah just like other diffs c:
  6. 00:38:207 (142) - delete? to fit to drum sounds yes
  7. 00:40:874 (157) - ^
  8. 00:43:541 (173,174) - ^
  9. 01:14:207 (382) - change to don, 01:14:457 (385) - delete and 01:14:541 (386) - add finisher ? same reason as Muzukashii keep this. same as muzu
good luck!
Thank you very much!
_yu68

katacheh wrote:

yes but what is relation with 18:207?
It's a mistake, so please ignore. X3
125601228
muzukashii
00:18:207 (18) - 感覺可以改成 k
00:24:541 - 加個 d?
Oni
00:05:294 (17,18) - 要不要加個k 配合鋼琴音
00:14:874 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - d_ddk_kkd 改成 ddddkkk_D 配合旋律也能增加難度
00:22:041 (38,39,40) - 感覺改成kdd比較符合旋律
00:25:874 (58,59,60,61,62) - 感覺61的d有點多餘
00:31:874 (99,100,101,102,103,104) - k_d_ddd_k 打起來不太協調 感覺 k_ddd_d_k比較能配合後面的
還有100也許能改成k?
00:34:041 (115,116,117) - 看要不要改成ddk 117感覺比較適合k
00:34:707 (120) - 改成k 配合人聲
00:48:207 (202,203,204,205,206) - 把205砍掉 變成 kkd_k 因為後面還有一串連打 連續兩個有點怪
00:54:041 (248,249,250,251,252) - 把249消失 改成 k_kkd 原因和剛剛一樣
01:17:374 (395,396,397) - 把396改成k來凸顯395397 :arrow: dkd
01:18:707 (405,406,407,408,409) - kdkdd 比較合鋼琴

都沒人幫我ㄉ圖mod...幫QQ
Smallwu

125601228 wrote:

都沒人幫我ㄉ圖mod...幫QQ
我懂你ㄉ感受QQ
Topic Starter
katacheh

125601228 wrote:

muzukashii
00:18:207 (18) - 感覺可以改成 k 這個沒有改 d會比較順暢
00:24:541 - 加個 d? 這邊也沒改 跟著風琴聲之類的?A? 讓他跟oni有差別

Oni
00:05:294 (17,18) - 要不要加個k 配合鋼琴音 是想說跟人聲就好了:3
00:14:874 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - d_ddk_kkd 改成 ddddkkk_D 配合旋律也能增加難度 其實以前是ddddkkkkd 這邊沒改 跟著鼓聲就好了
00:22:041 (38,39,40) - 感覺改成kdd比較符合旋律 這邊也沒改 覺得ddd就好了XD
00:25:874 (58,59,60,61,62) - 感覺61的d有點多餘 好像是ww 刪掉了
00:31:874 (99,100,101,102,103,104) - k_d_ddd_k 打起來不太協調 感覺 k_ddd_d_k比較能配合後面的 這邊的話換成k ddd d k 之前SM也說過這邊自己是覺得沒差 可以有變化這樣ww
還有100也許能改成k?
00:34:041 (115,116,117) - 看要不要改成ddk 117感覺比較適合k 好w 我前後也換了一些花色 感覺比較搭
00:34:707 (120) - 改成k 配合人聲 V
00:48:207 (202,203,204,205,206) - 把205砍掉 變成 kkd_k 因為後面還有一串連打 連續兩個有點怪 我喜歡這邊所以沒改;w;
00:54:041 (248,249,250,251,252) - 把249消失 改成 k_kkd 原因和剛剛一樣 同上x-x
01:17:374 (395,396,397) - 把396改成k來凸顯395397 :arrow: dkd 覺得ddd比較好
01:18:707 (405,406,407,408,409) - kdkdd 比較合鋼琴 kkddk比較圓滑的感覺?A? 暫時沒改

都沒人幫我ㄉ圖mod...幫QQ ......QAQ 我有空的時候可以幫你摸摸
謝謝摸圖-w-
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Hello,隨便摸=w=
[General]
Tags:請加上''stu00608'',''Fantazy''因為他們是做GD的
Hp:把stu's Oni轉成hp5.5好像較好

[Fan's Oni]
00:34:541 - 這兩粒轉k比較好

00:46:457 - 把這個remove
-我認為這五粒才是高潮(00:46:874 - ),所以我不太支持前面放7個音pattern

00:57:707 - 轉d?

01:18:041 - 如果你是跟鋼琴,我建議轉k
不是的就無視=w=

[stu's Oni]
00:08:722 - 這個跟前面的ctrl+g
這個音高比前面那個高

00:34:374 - 把這個remove
-00:33:207 - 這串好像太長了=3=,把這個斷一斷比較好

00:38:874 - 轉k
vocal pitch升了

00:53:541 - 轉k?

01:01:207 - 轉k
-能與01:01:541 - 彼此呼應(我也不清楚我在說什麼ww)

01:03:374 - 轉d
emphasis finisher

01:06:207 - 會不會太長了XDD

01:18:707 - 轉kdkkkdkkdk比較好?

就這樣,加油=w=
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