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Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Taiko]

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katacheh

Jonawaga wrote:

Hello, katacheh, M4M on your queue,
[Kantan]
  1. 00:26:874 (16) - k, this is the first note where you follow the lyrics, to 00:26:207 (15,16) - these two should be different to make the transition clear, you could try 00:26:207 (15,16,17,18,19) - dkddk or dkdkd Change to dkddk
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:48:207 (70,71) - since there a pitch change here, and no pitch change 00:49:041 (72,73) - here, 00:48:707 (71,72) - this should be kd Fixed!
  2. 00:54:041 (83,84) - ^ Fixed!
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:27:874 (63,64,65,66) - kkd k to differentiate with 00:30:541 (75,76,77,78) - this, and to differentiate 00:28:207 (65,66) - these good! fixed.
  2. 00:32:541 (84) - k here because the pitch changes Fixed!
  3. 00:33:374 (88) - d to make 00:33:374 (88,89) - these the same and differentiate 00:33:207 (87,88) - these Fixed!
  4. 01:16:541 (309) - d to differentiate 01:16:541 (309,310) - these, the pitch is too different a finisher at 01:16:874 (310) - to make them different
[Oni]
  1. 00:27:374 (68) - k to make 00:27:207 (67,68) - these the same V
  2. 00:36:207 (132,133,134,135,136,137) - there's no reason to have this many d's in a row because the drum sound?
  3. 01:15:874 (393) - d no change, because the drum sound.
  4. 01:16:207 (395) - k d to make different with 01:16:541 (398) -
[Muzu/Oni Together]
  1. 00:23:374 - This note is on Muzu but is not on Oni. I recommend you either add something here on Oni or Remove something here in Muzu, only if you think it seems good. Same for all of these. added!
  2. 00:49:624 - change the note in muzu.
  3. 00:50:791 - ^
  4. 00:52:624 - ^
  5. 00:56:291 - ^
Good Luck~!!
Thanks for mod><
Kazaze
Hi from your modding queue, requesting a M4M on this map.
Hope my mode will help!

Kantan
• 00:01:179 (2) - Removing this note sounds very nice in my opinion
• 00:18:874 (6) - d, lower tone than 00:18:207 (5)
• 01:00:874 (56) - a d sounds good here
• 01:04:041 - I would add a k here
• 01:06:707 - and a d here, what do you think?
Futsuu
•00:01:522 (3) - This one could be removed in order to make a break
•You could remove 00:18:541 (12,13,14,15) - and follow the piano like this
• Following the vocals, you can add a note here : 00:38:874 (d maybe)
and 3 notes here : 00:41:207 , 00:41:541 & 00:41:874 (What about d k d)
•There's a cymbal sound here 01:14:541 (133) , I think it really need to be mapped, you could add a finisher, maybe a D just like the following 01:15:374 (135)
Muzukashii
• 00:31:874 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - Change to (kdkdkkd)
• 00:59:291 (228) - Remove
• 01:17:707 - Add a d here, and maybe here 01:18:374 (317) too
Oni
• 00:27:707 (71) - Remove maybe?
• 00:48:791 (212) ^
• Remove 00:51:124 (230) and add a d here : 00:50:957
• 00:59:291 (292) - I would remove this one, it feels weird with the vocals
• 01:01:124 - Add a k
• 01:09:707 (357) - Change to k and remove 01:09:874 (358)
• 01:12:041 - Add a d

And that's all, this is a great map, I wish you luck!
Topic Starter
katacheh

Kazaze wrote:

Hi from your modding queue, requesting a M4M on this map.
Hope my mode will help!

Kantan
• 00:01:179 (2) - Removing this note sounds very nice in my opinion good! fixed.
• 00:18:874 (6) - d, lower tone than 00:18:207 (5) but 00:18:874 (6) - higher than 00:19:541 (7) - so I think k is better.
• 01:00:874 (56) - a d sounds good here 01:00:874 (56) - has high pitch, so I changed other notes.
• 01:04:041 - I would add a k here good! but I dont want too many notes on 1/2.
• 01:06:707 - and a d here, what do you think?^

Futsuu
•00:01:522 (3) - This one could be removed in order to make a break ok. Fixed.
•You could remove 00:18:541 (12,13,14,15) - and follow the piano like this feel a little weird.
• Following the vocals, you can add a note here : 00:38:874 (d maybe) add some notes
and 3 notes here : 00:41:207 , 00:41:541 & 00:41:874 (What about d k d) ^
•There's a cymbal sound here 01:14:541 (133) , I think it really need to be mapped, you could add a finisher, maybe a D just like the following 01:15:374 (135) Added a kat. I just want to emphasize the piano sound.

Muzukashii
• 00:31:874 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - Change to (kdkdkkd) good! changed.
• 00:59:291 (228) - Remove ok. Fixed.
• 01:17:707 - Add a d here, and maybe here 01:18:374 (317) too Ok. Fixed!
Oni
• 00:27:707 (71) - Remove maybe? no change.
• 00:48:791 (212) ^ ddddk feels good, so no change.
• Remove 00:51:124 (230) and add a d here : 00:50:957 ok. Fixed.
• 00:59:291 (292) - I would remove this one, it feels weird with the vocals I think kdk feels good.. so I didnt change.
• 01:01:124 - Add a k feels a little weird.
• 01:09:707 (357) - Change to k and remove 01:09:874 (358) no change.
• 01:12:041 - Add a dI want to break here.


And that's all, this is a great map, I wish you luck!

Thanks for mod~ I will mod your map later. :D
Smallwu
ㄢㄢ 神偷SM來偷KDS了
[General]
Tags 增加 : "Simon moe" "Short Version" "LET'S GO! K.R.T. GIRLS" ""stu00608" "Fantazy" 以及"FanFan"
第一個是因為你的標籤裡面有"希萌創意" 所以另外再加個英文版本 第二個則是因為你目前這首歌的版本較Youtube上的完整版短
第三個是因為這是影片最後的畫面 第四, 五, 和六是因為他們是GDer

標籤部分或許還能增加"Hoskey" 我不太確定 因為我不知道 "A&R:Hoskey (Ayre Records)"是什麼
這就交給你決定了?_? Youtube完整版
另外我能問下 safe_house_t 是什麼嗎

OD/HP設置看起來有一點問題 我建議設置改成
FanFanOni : 5/5
stu's Inner Oni : 5/5.5 (若照難度), 或是 5.5/6 (若照名稱)
Oni : 5.5/6 (若照難度), 或是 5/5.5 (若照名稱)

奶辰的Oni難度較低 然而卻是Inner (即使他真正的難度的確較高了許多=w=)
看要不要改一下難度名 (Inner Oni --> Oni , 原本的Oni改成...Inner Oni?_?)

僅摸三個鬼 因為之前的Kantan~Muzu已經摸過了 估計我也摸不出東西了:3

[FanFanOni]
:idea: 這follow鋼琴的技術 太神拉!! :idea:

00:00:494 - 讓紅線及綠線的Volume一致

00:14:036 - 建議在這邊插一個已經變成Normal的綠線(變速.音量不變) 這樣子新手比較不容易因為超速而聽到Soft音效的 (35)

00:14:208 - 00:14:541 - 插毛變速 完全沒有漸層感呀這裡?_?
00:14:874 - 00:15:541 - 要變就變這裡 每個間距增加 0.02x ^q^

00:25:291 (99) - 移除 1. 這裡根本沒有鼓聲 2. 你從 00:21:874 開始就有在follow提琴聲 移除這顆可以凸顯後面的琴聲

00:43:707 (182,183,184) - ddk 因為最後那顆是特別響亮的鈸聲

00:44:374 (187,188,189) - kkd 因為最後那顆是特別低沉的鼓聲

00:46:624 (203) 和 00:46:791 (205) - 原本那串太長了 另外順便把 (204) 改成don :3
00:46:707 (204,205) - d d 如果你不要上面那條的話 ;3 鋼琴是在最後五顆才出現的音效 你可能聽錯了?_?

00:46:707 (203) - 改成don? 感覺這樣聽起來比較

01:07:874 (343) - 感覺能K ?W?

01:14:874 (380) - k 我知道這裡的音和後面的K一樣 可是聽起來感覺這裡放k可以有更好的效果

01:17:207 (393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402) - d d d d d d k d k d 在快要結束的時候才做變化感覺比較潮

01:20:041 or 01:19:874- Add a Spinner 只有你的難度沒有 Fan界87大奇觀之一?_?

關於二連音的部分 雖然只有兩組 但我覺得還是把他們連起來變成ddd的三連打比較合適 (二連很難抓Acc你知道ㄇ)
[stu's Inner Oni]
:idea: 檢查AiMod , 另外還要關閉"Enable Custom Colours" :idea:

00:00:494 - 0.60x的起始速度感覺太低了? 試試0.75x唄>w< 另外要讓紅線和綠線的Volume一致

00:08:722 (27) - k 原本放d應該是為了不讓後面的鋼琴段太突兀 可是這裡的voice太凸顯 轉去跟鋼琴會讓人覺得奇怪?w?
00:08:894 和 00:09:065 - 加d 雖然這兩處沒有任何音 但作為連結這兩個部分似乎是挺合適的 我是這麼覺得 @口@

00:10:436 (34,35) - d k to follow voice 因為起的"ㄧ"有特別拉高

00:12:151 (1) - 太短了吧ww 將起點拉至 00:11:636 當作在跟尾音或許挺不錯 或是直接像FanFanOni那樣直接空著

00:23:374 (60,61,62) - kkd or ddk 感覺最後一顆和前面兩顆與眾不同

00:24:041 (64) - k 聽起來這顆音比前面那顆高了一些 或ˋ是前面那顆完全沒有提琴聲(似乎是鼓聲偽裝成了提琴?W? 越聽越糊)

00:24:541 (66,67,68) - kkd or kdd (66)是鈸用kat (68)是鼓用don 中間那顆沒音效 建議用k 私心希望

00:37:041 (139,140) - Ctrl+G (138)有(138)的音效 而(138)用D 故(139)也用D 而且(140)的音效聽起來弱了些

00:38:874 (150) - 這裡的鼓聲較為其他地方更用力(?) 同時為下面的變化做一些修飾的效果 讓這段聽起來不那麼單調

00:39:207 (152,153) - d X 這裡聽不出來原本在跟什麼音效 前後兩段相似的段落你也沒有放三連打 私心是希望跟鼓^q^

00:39:707 (156,157) - K d or D k , 原因同 00:38:874 (150) .K d是依照原本的擺設 D k則是因為後面那個音多了鈸的音效

00:40:541 (159) - K 我也不知道為啥 重播好幾次感覺都是K較合適??_??__??_?__? 而且其他兩個Oni在這也都使用K

00:42:374 (169,170) - K d 原因同 00:38:874 (150)

00:44:207 (177) - k 因為這裡有較為響亮的鼓聲

00:44:707 (181) - d 因為這裡有較為低沉的鼓聲 (看要不要連著 00:44:624 (180) 一起改)

*Kiai Part的Volume直接調整成100%吧 別用60% 日常段較高潮段應該得比較不突出才對*

01:08:041 (364) - d 前面有鈸聲 後面則有提琴聲 這顆啥都沒有 是顆邊緣note 就讓他特別些吧

01:08:624 - 或許可以加顆d? 我真的聽不出來這裡到底有無鼓聲=口=

*Kiai Part的結尾 在我看來Volume可以考慮減少個15~25% (也可維持100%)*

01:13:374 (388) - d 前面也很多琴聲 怎麼就這裡和後面那顆跟了 這樣超怪ww

01:13:874 - Add d or k (私心k) 原因同上 雖然這裡也有鼓聲 但是這樣放感覺就像是在follow鋼琴

01:14:541 (394) - 感覺可以使用K

01:14:874 (395) - 考慮不用Finisher? 說不出原因 感覺這樣聽比較順 ;w;

01:15:374 (398) - 感覺可以使用D :3

01:17:374 (408,409) - k k 因為你似乎在這單點段落主要在follow鋼琴
[Oni]
00:08:208 (27,28) - Ctrl+G? 我是聽不出個所以然 不過感覺你前面主要都是在跟voice 所以...換嘛<3

00:10:951 (34) - d 這顆音效和前後兩顆相較之下似乎低了些

00:30:874 (93) - d 因為k似乎跟到voice了?_?

00:31:124 - add d to follow pitch

00:33:707 - 00:33:874 - kkd or ddk 因為有鈸

00:34:291 (116) - 移除這顆感覺更讚?_?

00:37:541 (139) - 此處無聲 汝應將其移至 00:37:874 並將原D改至 00:37:707 方可獲得BN愛戴 (更動後 其形變為DD K DK)

00:40:207 (154) - 移至 00:40:374 原因同上述所言

00:42:874 (170) - 移至 00:43:041 原因同上述所言

00:51:374 (233) - 感覺不太適合用K...

00:56:707 (274) - 不太適合用K...

01:06:207 (337) - 因為已經沒有前面那種鈸的音效了

01:06:457 和 01:06:957 - Add d SMの悪趣味

01:06:707 (341) - 已經沒有前面那種鈸的音效了

01:07:207 (345) - k 沒有鈸了

01:07:541 (347) - d 感覺這樣比較能好好地凸顯後面的K ?_?

=====
我覺得我要被榨乾了
Topic Starter
katacheh

Smallwu wrote:

ㄢㄢ 神偷SM來偷KDS了
[General]
Tags 增加 : "Simon moe" "Short Version" "LET'S GO! K.R.T. GIRLS" ""stu00608" "Fantazy" 以及"FanFan" 加了~
第一個是因為你的標籤裡面有"希萌創意" 所以另外再加個英文版本 第二個則是因為你目前這首歌的版本較Youtube上的完整版短
第三個是因為這是影片最後的畫面 第四, 五, 和六是因為他們是GDer

標籤部分或許還能增加"Hoskey" 我不太確定 因為我不知道 "A&R:Hoskey (Ayre Records)"是什麼 是覺得有相關就可以加 A&R的意思可以去Google查到
這就交給你決定了?_? Youtube完整版
另外我能問下 safe_house_t 是什麼嗎 CG製作的公司之類的?_?

OD/HP設置看起來有一點問題 我建議設置改成
FanFanOni : 5/5
stu's Inner Oni : 5/5.5 (若照難度), 或是 5.5/6 (若照名稱)
Oni : 5.5/6 (若照難度), 或是 5/5.5 (若照名稱) 我的難度就保持6 其他部份我要問一下fanfan和stu

奶辰的Oni難度較低 然而卻是Inner (即使他真正的難度的確較高了許多=w=)
看要不要改一下難度名 (Inner Oni --> Oni , 原本的Oni改成...Inner Oni?_?) 我忘記更新了......

僅摸三個鬼 因為之前的Kantan~Muzu已經摸過了 估計我也摸不出東西了:3 謝摟%%

[FanFanOni]
:idea: 這follow鋼琴的技術 太神拉!! :idea: 神一般的followwww

00:00:494 - 讓紅線及綠線的Volume一致

00:14:036 - 建議在這邊插一個已經變成Normal的綠線(變速.音量不變) 這樣子新手比較不容易因為超速而聽到Soft音效的 (35)

00:14:208 - 00:14:541 - 插毛變速 完全沒有漸層感呀這裡?_?
00:14:874 - 00:15:541 - 要變就變這裡 每個間距增加 0.02x ^q^

00:25:291 (99) - 移除 1. 這裡根本沒有鼓聲 2. 你從 00:21:874 開始就有在follow提琴聲 移除這顆可以凸顯後面的琴聲

00:43:707 (182,183,184) - ddk 因為最後那顆是特別響亮的鈸聲

00:44:374 (187,188,189) - kkd 因為最後那顆是特別低沉的鼓聲

00:46:624 (203) 和 00:46:791 (205) - 原本那串太長了 另外順便把 (204) 改成don :3
00:46:707 (204,205) - d d 如果你不要上面那條的話 ;3 鋼琴是在最後五顆才出現的音效 你可能聽錯了?_?

00:46:707 (203) - 改成don? 感覺這樣聽起來比較

01:07:874 (343) - 感覺能K ?W?

01:14:874 (380) - k 我知道這裡的音和後面的K一樣 可是聽起來感覺這裡放k可以有更好的效果

01:17:207 (393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402) - d d d d d d k d k d 在快要結束的時候才做變化感覺比較潮

01:20:041 or 01:19:874- Add a Spinner 只有你的難度沒有 Fan界87大奇觀之一?_?

關於二連音的部分 雖然只有兩組 但我覺得還是把他們連起來變成ddd的三連打比較合適 (二連很難抓Acc你知道ㄇ)
[stu's Inner Oni]
:idea: 檢查AiMod , 另外還要關閉"Enable Custom Colours" :idea: colours這邊我就先改了喔

00:00:494 - 0.60x的起始速度感覺太低了? 試試0.75x唄>w< 另外要讓紅線和綠線的Volume一致

00:08:722 (27) - k 原本放d應該是為了不讓後面的鋼琴段太突兀 可是這裡的voice太凸顯 轉去跟鋼琴會讓人覺得奇怪?w?
00:08:894 和 00:09:065 - 加d 雖然這兩處沒有任何音 但作為連結這兩個部分似乎是挺合適的 我是這麼覺得 @口@

00:10:436 (34,35) - d k to follow voice 因為起的"ㄧ"有特別拉高

00:12:151 (1) - 太短了吧ww 將起點拉至 00:11:636 當作在跟尾音或許挺不錯 或是直接像FanFanOni那樣直接空著

00:23:374 (60,61,62) - kkd or ddk 感覺最後一顆和前面兩顆與眾不同

00:24:041 (64) - k 聽起來這顆音比前面那顆高了一些 或ˋ是前面那顆完全沒有提琴聲(似乎是鼓聲偽裝成了提琴?W? 越聽越糊)

00:24:541 (66,67,68) - kkd or kdd (66)是鈸用kat (68)是鼓用don 中間那顆沒音效 建議用k 私心希望

00:37:041 (139,140) - Ctrl+G (138)有(138)的音效 而(138)用D 故(139)也用D 而且(140)的音效聽起來弱了些

00:38:874 (150) - 這裡的鼓聲較為其他地方更用力(?) 同時為下面的變化做一些修飾的效果 讓這段聽起來不那麼單調

00:39:207 (152,153) - d X 這裡聽不出來原本在跟什麼音效 前後兩段相似的段落你也沒有放三連打 私心是希望跟鼓^q^

00:39:707 (156,157) - K d or D k , 原因同 00:38:874 (150) .K d是依照原本的擺設 D k則是因為後面那個音多了鈸的音效

00:40:541 (159) - K 我也不知道為啥 重播好幾次感覺都是K較合適??_??__??_?__? 而且其他兩個Oni在這也都使用K

00:42:374 (169,170) - K d 原因同 00:38:874 (150)

00:44:207 (177) - k 因為這裡有較為響亮的鼓聲

00:44:707 (181) - d 因為這裡有較為低沉的鼓聲 (看要不要連著 00:44:624 (180) 一起改)

*Kiai Part的Volume直接調整成100%吧 別用60% 日常段較高潮段應該得比較不突出才對*

01:08:041 (364) - d 前面有鈸聲 後面則有提琴聲 這顆啥都沒有 是顆邊緣note 就讓他特別些吧

01:08:624 - 或許可以加顆d? 我真的聽不出來這裡到底有無鼓聲=口=

*Kiai Part的結尾 在我看來Volume可以考慮減少個15~25% (也可維持100%)*

01:13:374 (388) - d 前面也很多琴聲 怎麼就這裡和後面那顆跟了 這樣超怪ww

01:13:874 - Add d or k (私心k) 原因同上 雖然這裡也有鼓聲 但是這樣放感覺就像是在follow鋼琴

01:14:541 (394) - 感覺可以使用K

01:14:874 (395) - 考慮不用Finisher? 說不出原因 感覺這樣聽比較順 ;w;

01:15:374 (398) - 感覺可以使用D :3

01:17:374 (408,409) - k k 因為你似乎在這單點段落主要在follow鋼琴
[Oni]
00:08:208 (27,28) - Ctrl+G? 我是聽不出個所以然 不過感覺你前面主要都是在跟voice 所以...換嘛<3

00:10:951 (34) - d 這顆音效和前後兩顆相較之下似乎低了些 好? 這樣的話我muzu也改了 維持一致(之前有人挑我一致性x-x)

00:30:874 (93) - d 因為k似乎跟到voice了?_? 我其實很喜歡dkk這樣 所以沒改

00:31:124 - add d to follow pitch 變成英文了?_? 英文太爛看不懂(x 這邊的話沒改

00:33:707 - 00:33:874 - kkd or ddk 因為有鈸 你是不是想說這邊00:34:041 - 的話我改了

00:34:291 (116) - 移除這顆感覺更讚?_? 是覺得這樣可以 這邊也改了 因為上面改了

00:37:541 (139) - 此處無聲 汝應將其移至 00:37:874 並將原D改至 00:37:707 方可獲得BN愛戴 (更動後 其形變為DD K DK) 遵旨 如BN之所願

00:40:207 (154) - 移至 00:40:374 原因同上述所言 ^

00:42:874 (170) - 移至 00:43:041 原因同上述所言 ^

00:51:374 (233) - 感覺不太適合用K... 暫時沒改 因為不喜歡那邊用D... 或是有什麼更好的建議?

00:56:707 (274) - 不太適合用K...

01:06:207 (337) - 因為已經沒有前面那種鈸的音效了 其實我是跟著鋼琴聲K的

01:06:457 和 01:06:957 - Add d SMの悪趣味

01:06:707 (341) - 已經沒有前面那種鈸的音效了 是覺得最後越來越高潮的時候反而沒有K很怪 我換了一種patterns

01:07:207 (345) - k 沒有鈸了

01:07:541 (347) - d 感覺這樣比較能好好地凸顯後面的K ?_?

=====
我覺得我要被榨乾了 想喝SM汁^q^
謝摸摸^q^/
Fantazy

Smallwu wrote:

[FanFanOni]
*Fan' Oni 欠%喔
:idea: 這follow鋼琴的技術 太神拉!! :idea:

00:00:494 - 讓紅線及綠線的Volume一致 已%

00:14:036 - 建議在這邊插一個已經變成Normal的綠線(變速.音量不變) 這樣子新手比較不容易因為超速而聽到Soft音效的 (35) %新手來%你嘛?

00:14:208 - 00:14:541 - 插毛變速 完全沒有漸層感呀這裡?_? DDX 其實原本有想過 DXXX
00:14:874 - 00:15:541 - 要變就變這裡 每個間距增加 0.02x ^q^ 插!!!!DXXX

00:25:291 (99) - 移除 1. 這裡根本沒有鼓聲 2. 你從 00:21:874 開始就有在follow提琴聲 移除這顆可以凸顯後面的琴聲 阿 沒發現 反而被你%現了

00:43:707 (182,183,184) - ddk 因為最後那顆是特別響亮的鈸聲 鈸聲勢什麼來著 我已經被%聾了

00:44:374 (187,188,189) - kkd 因為最後那顆是特別低沉的鼓聲 跟上面改成 kkd 和 ddd 以下沉%音樂

00:46:624 (203) 和 00:46:791 (205) - 原本那串太長了 另外順便把 (204) 改成don :3 跟你一樣長 00:46:791 (204) - delete but not dondon
00:46:707 (204,205) - d d 如果你不要上面那條的話 ;3 鋼琴是在最後五顆才出現的音效 你可能聽錯了?_? 東東登登登東登 實際ddkkkdk 但想簡單一奌? ddkkddk就醬? and (%%%%)x滑音驟醬 想

00:46:707 (203) - 改成don? 感覺這樣聽起來比較 ?_?_?_? 你可以從別的diff從中取得快感(?

01:07:874 (343) - 感覺能K ?W? 原本是要這兩顆01:07:541 (340,341) - 不過音有點弱 沒有那種阿斯的感覺(?

01:14:874 (380) - k 我知道這裡的音和後面的K一樣 可是聽起來感覺這裡放k可以有更好的效果 就試避免一次%太多 後面來不及%的意思?

01:17:207 (393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402) - d d d d d d k d k d 在快要結束的時候才做變化感覺比較潮 喔!! 不錯 潮到出水 (?_?_?_?_??_?_?

01:20:041 or 01:19:874- Add a Spinner 只有你的難度沒有 Fan界87大奇觀之一?_? 幹 對吼 想說少%了什麼 ?_?

關於二連音的部分 雖然只有兩組 但我覺得還是把他們連起來變成ddd的三連打比較合適 (二連很難抓Acc你知道ㄇ) 槓 就像SM一樣那麼難%(?
stu00608

Smallwu wrote:

[stu's Inner Oni]
:idea: 檢查AiMod , 另外還要關閉"Enable Custom Colours" :idea: 這部分可能是轉移過去之後沒注意到 感謝!

00:00:494 - 0.60x的起始速度感覺太低了? 試試0.75x唄>w< 另外要讓紅線和綠線的Volume一致 體感0.6 (?

00:08:722 (27) - k 原本放d應該是為了不讓後面的鋼琴段太突兀 可是這裡的voice太凸顯 轉去跟鋼琴會讓人覺得奇怪?w? 這邊其實不是最原本的擺法 00:08:208 就先刪這顆
00:08:894 和 00:09:065 - 加d 雖然這兩處沒有任何音 但作為連結這兩個部分似乎是挺合適的 我是這麼覺得 @口@ 覺得沒有必要

00:10:436 (34,35) - d k to follow voice 因為起的"ㄧ"有特別拉高 沒那麼有感欸... 如果其他有人也提出來我再考慮改

00:12:151 (1) - 太短了吧ww 將起點拉至 00:11:636 當作在跟尾音或許挺不錯 或是直接像FanFanOni那樣直接空著 00:11:979 我改起點到這裡 疏失疏失 lol

00:23:374 (60,61,62) - kkd or ddk 感覺最後一顆和前面兩顆與眾不同 00:23:374 改d 00:23:457 del

00:24:041 (64) - k 聽起來這顆音比前面那顆高了一些 或ˋ是前面那顆完全沒有提琴聲(似乎是鼓聲偽裝成了提琴?W? 越聽越糊) 保留

00:24:541 (66,67,68) - kkd or kdd (66)是鈸用kat (68)是鼓用don 中間那顆沒音效 建議用k 私心希望 kkd採用

00:37:041 (139,140) - Ctrl+G (138)有(138)的音效 而(138)用D 故(139)也用D 而且(140)的音效聽起來弱了些 覺得沒那麼嚴重

00:38:874 (150) - 這裡的鼓聲較為其他地方更用力(?) 同時為下面的變化做一些修飾的效果 讓這段聽起來不那麼單調 00:38:791 加了d

00:39:207 (152,153) - d X 這裡聽不出來原本在跟什麼音效 前後兩段相似的段落你也沒有放三連打 私心是希望跟鼓^q^ 00:39:291 del

00:39:707 (156,157) - K d or D k , 原因同 00:38:874 (150) .K d是依照原本的擺設 D k則是因為後面那個音多了鈸的音效 覺得沒那麼嚴重

00:40:541 (159) - K 我也不知道為啥 重播好幾次感覺都是K較合適??_??__??_?__? 而且其他兩個Oni在這也都使用K okok

00:42:374 (169,170) - K d 原因同 00:38:874 (150) 覺得沒那麼嚴重

00:44:207 (177) - k 因為這裡有較為響亮的鼓聲 okok

00:44:707 (181) - d 因為這裡有較為低沉的鼓聲 (看要不要連著 00:44:624 (180) 一起改) okok

*Kiai Part的Volume直接調整成100%吧 別用60% 日常段較高潮段應該得比較不突出才對* 改成90了

01:08:041 (364) - d 前面有鈸聲 後面則有提琴聲 這顆啥都沒有 是顆邊緣note 就讓他特別些吧 覺得沒有必要

01:08:624 - 或許可以加顆d? 我真的聽不出來這裡到底有無鼓聲=口= 保留

*Kiai Part的結尾 在我看來Volume可以考慮減少個15~25% (也可維持100%)*

01:13:374 (388) - d 前面也很多琴聲 怎麼就這裡和後面那顆跟了 這樣超怪ww 的確是 改了

01:13:874 - Add d or k (私心k) 原因同上 雖然這裡也有鼓聲 但是這樣放感覺就像是在follow鋼琴 added d

01:14:541 (394) - 感覺可以使用K 不用吧 接著後面會變奇怪

01:14:874 (395) - 考慮不用Finisher? 說不出原因 感覺這樣聽比較順 ;w; 就有個fu再那邊咩 打起來可以配合起伏

01:15:374 (398) - 感覺可以使用D :3 okok

01:17:374 (408,409) - k k 因為你似乎在這單點段落主要在follow鋼琴 不綽

我覺得我要被榨乾了
感謝尼 :)
frukoyurdakul
Hello from my modding queue! im surprised, no gimmick map?!

This map has so many stars and the diffs are pretty good, so these comments are suggestions instead of errors.

Kantan is good enough.

Futsuu
00:35:541 (50) - Well, don't you think this slider is a bit much for futsuu? Maybe you can replace it with actual notes that are spaced in 1/2. For instance: 00:35:541 - d here, 00:35:874 - d here, 00:36:207 - k here, 00:36:374 - d here and 00:36:541 - d here.

Muzukashii
00:43:874 (135,136,137) - Well, there is no drum attack here yet 00:41:041 (123,124) - you kept these attacks as 1/2 spaced notes. Why don't you swap these patterns?

01:08:374 (268,269) - I recommend kkk (1/4) and k (1/2). That way the drum attack will be emphasized.

Fan's Oni
00:25:957 (103) - How about a don? The drum sound is very low.

00:53:707 (253) - The vocal is starting from the previous note and you already did a kat to emphasize it, so you can change this to don to emphasize the kick sound of drums.

stu's Oni
00:22:041 - 00:22:374 - Why skipped these kicks here? Dons at these points will be good.

01:05:041 (332,333,334) - 01:05:541 (336,337,338) - I think these 2 patterns are hard for an oni diff. The players who play oni diffs will have trouble to hit them, since these patterns have color switches. Maybe you can make these easier like using ddk or kkd.

01:06:207 - A bit long stream don't you think? You can divide this stream into 2 or 3 (and maybe even more) patterns which have 11 notes maximum.

01:10:874 - You can add a don here to support the kick sound.

01:19:957 (1) - The 1/8 snap on this spinner looks weird, I couldn't read the last note because of my skin for instance. You can move it to 01:20:041 - here.

Oni
00:25:124 - Maybe you can add a don here since there is a noticeable kick sound.

00:36:124 (132) - I think you can delete this one, the drum attack is pretty slow, a triplet after a 5-plet pattern is not neccesary.

01:11:541 (366) - I think you are following the keyboard sounds here, so the keyboard sound is pretty low. I think you can turn this to a don.

01:13:874 (380,381) - Ctrl + g? It will support the higher keyboard sound.

A solid mapset, good luck on ranking! Now we see katacheh ranked maps? ;-;
_yu68
hi~
mod from stu's m4m
If there is something you can't understand because of my noot good English, please chat or PM

mod
[General]
  1. Nowadays, there are few maps with Soft hitsounds, so it is recommended to unify hitsounds to Normal. Also there is no reason to use Soft hitsounds.
[Kantan]
  1. HP:7 -> 8? since notes is few
  2. 00:11:465 (11) - delete and 00:11:808 (1) - move spinner start point to 00:11:465 - ? same as Futsuu
  3. 00:18:207 (5) - or 00:18:874 (6) - change to don? to make even color scheme
  4. 00:26:874 (16) - delete? to make a break right after a complex rhythm
  5. 00:35:541 (27) - ~ 00:36:541 - change to slider? same as Futsuu
  6. 00:40:541 (31) - change to don? same as 00:18:207 -
  7. 00:48:707 (40) - move to 00:48:874 - ? ignore vocal to make a simpler rhythm
  8. 00:54:041 (47) - same as ^
  9. 01:00:207 (55) - delete? to make a break right after a complex rhythm
  10. 01:06:874 - add kat? to express a drum sound
[Futsuu]
  1. HP:6 -> 7? same reason as Kantan
  2. In the intro, I think should delete more notes and make more difference with Muzukashii.
    1. 00:02:208 (4) -
    2. 00:04:951 (10) -
    3. 00:07:008 (15) -
    4. 00:08:379 (18) -
  3. 00:20:874 (17) - add finisher? same as Kantan and Muzukashii
  4. 00:26:207 - add don(with finisher)? to unify the basic rhythm with other diffs
[Muzukashii]
  1. This diff is too difficult compared other diffs, so it is recommended to delete all 1/4s.
    It is also recommended to reduce other notes to adjust difficulty spread.

    • delete all?
    1. 00:25:957 (53,54) -
    2. 00:27:041 (59) -
    3. 00:28:041 (64) -
    4. 00:29:707 (71) -
    5. 00:30:707 (76) -
    6. 00:32:374 (83) -
    7. 00:33:874 (90) -
    8. 00:34:874 (95) -
    9. 00:35:207 (97) -
    10. 00:43:957 (136) -
    11. 00:44:707 (141) -
    12. 00:46:957 (154,155) -
    13. 00:47:707 (158) -
    14. 00:48:291 (162) -
    15. 00:49:457 (169) -
    16. 00:49:707 (171) -
    17. 00:50:374 (174) -
    18. 00:50:791 (177) -
    19. 00:51:041 (179) -
    20. 00:52:041 (184) -
    21. 00:53:041 (189) -
    22. 00:53:624 (193) -
    23. 00:54:791 (200) -
    24. 00:55:041 (202) -
    25. 00:55:707 (205) -
    26. 00:56:124 (208) -
    27. 00:56:374 (210) -
    28. 00:57:374 (215) -
    29. 00:57:791 (218) -
    30. 00:58:041 (220) -
    31. 01:14:291 (296,297) -
    32. 01:19:124 (318) -
      I can't propose any more because of my lack of ability. However, I think you should reduce more notes to adjust difficulty spread.
      If you reduce notes, you can change the color scheme according to your preference to make even color scheme.
  2. 00:36:707 (106) - delete? to emphasize 00:36:874 -
  3. 00:38:207 (111) - delete? to fit to drum sounds
  4. 00:40:874 (122) - ^
  5. 00:43:541 (133) - ^
  6. 01:14:541 (298) - add finisher? to emphasize cymbal sound
[Oni]
  1. This diff also needs to reduce notes.(same reason as Muzukashii)
    There is also a method that make this diff difficult more, rename to Inner Oni and make new Oni.
    If you make a new Oni you should use simple 1/4 for difficulty spread.(ddd, kkk, ddk, kkd)

    • delete all?
    1. 00:26:124 (60) -
    2. 00:26:374 (62) -
    3. 00:26:791 (65) -
    4. 00:27:707 (71) -
    5. 00:29:041 (79) -
    6. 00:29:457 (82) -
    7. 00:30:124 (87) -
    8. 00:30:374 (89) -
    9. 00:30:791 (92) -
    10. 00:32:291 (101) -
    11. 00:32:791 (105) -
    12. 00:33:041 (107) -
    13. 00:33:457 (110) -
    14. 00:34:124 (115) -
    15. 00:34:374 (117) -
    16. 00:34:791 (120) -
    17. 00:35:291 (124) -
    18. 00:35:624 (127) -
    19. 00:39:124 (149) -
    20. 00:41:624 (163) -
    21. 00:41:791 (165) -
    22. 00:46:457 (192) -
    23. 00:46:624 (194) -
    24. 00:46:791 (196) -
    25. 00:47:707 (203,204) -
    26. 00:48:291 (208) - or 00:48:457 (210) -
    27. 00:48:791 (213,214,215) -
    28. 00:50:041 (223) -
    29. 00:50:291 (225) - or 00:50:457 (227) -
    30. 00:50:957 (231) -
    31. 00:53:041 (244,245) -
    32. 00:53:624 (249) - or 00:53:791 (251) -
    33. 00:54:124 (254,255,256) -
    34. 00:55:374 (264) -
    35. 00:55:624 (266) - or 00:55:791 (268) -
    36. 00:56:291 (272) -
    37. 00:57:791 (282) -
    38. 00:58:374 (288) -
    39. 01:00:124 (299) - or 01:00:457 (302) -
    40. 01:00:957 (306,307) -
    41. 01:12:957 (374) -
    42. 01:17:457 (401) -
    43. 01:18:124 (406) -
      If you reduce notes, you can change the color scheme according to your preference to make even color scheme.
  2. 00:30:791 (92) - change to don and move to 00:31:124 - ? to fit to drum sounds
  3. 00:33:457 (110) - move to 00:33:791 - ? ^
  4. 00:35:374 (125) - change to don? to emphasize 00:35:541 -
  5. 00:36:707 (136) - delete? to emphasize 00:36:874 -
  6. 00:38:207 (142) - delete? to fit to drum sounds
  7. 00:40:874 (157) - ^
  8. 00:43:541 (173,174) - ^
  9. 01:14:207 (382) - change to don, 01:14:457 (385) - delete and 01:14:541 (386) - add finisher ? same reason as Muzukashii
[Fan's Oni]
  1. 00:28:541 (114) - change to kat? to express presence or absence of vocal
  2. 00:39:374 (162) - delete or change to kat? to emphasize 00:39:541 -
  3. 00:42:041 (176) - ^
  4. 00:52:624 (245,246) - delete? to make a break like 00:47:207 -
  5. 00:53:124 (249) - move to 00:53:457 - ? same as this measure 00:47:541 -
[stu's Oni]
  1. 00:22:041 - add any circle? to fit to melody
  2. 00:29:541 (94) - change to don? to make a difference with this measure 00:26:207 -
  3. 00:33:041 (114,115) - delete? same pattern
  4. 00:36:707 (139) - delete or change to kat? to emphasize 00:36:874 -
  5. 01:04:707 (330) - 01:06:041 (340) - delete? to make a break before the stream
  6. 01:08:457 - add any circle? to fit to drum sounds

good luck!
Topic Starter
katacheh

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Hello from my modding queue! im surprised, no gimmick map?! XD

This map has so many stars and the diffs are pretty good, so these comments are suggestions instead of errors.

Kantan is good enough. Thanks!

Futsuu
00:35:541 (50) - Well, don't you think this slider is a bit much for futsuu? Maybe you can replace it with actual notes that are spaced in 1/2. For instance: 00:35:541 - d here, 00:35:874 - d here, 00:36:207 - k here, 00:36:374 - d here and 00:36:541 - d here. The instance is great, but should I need to give some break here? keep.

Muzukashii
00:43:874 (135,136,137) - Well, there is no drum attack here yet deleted 136
00:41:041 (123,124) - you kept these attacks as 1/2 spaced notes. Why don't you swap these patterns? yeah;w;

01:08:374 (268,269) - I recommend kkk (1/4) and k (1/2). That way the drum attack will be emphasized. changed!


Oni
00:25:124 - Maybe you can add a don here since there is a noticeable kick sound. V

00:36:124 (132) - I think you can delete this one, the drum attack is pretty slow, a triplet after a 5-plet pattern is not neccesary. I see

01:11:541 (366) - I think you are following the keyboard sounds here, so the keyboard sound is pretty low. I think you can turn this to a don. Good! changed

01:13:874 (380,381) - Ctrl + g? It will support the higher keyboard sound. ^


A solid mapset, good luck on ranking! Now we see katacheh ranked maps? ;-;
Thank you for modding! my diffs and fan's Oni Updated with frukoyurdakul's mod
Fantazy

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Fan's Oni
00:25:957 (103) - How about a don? The drum sound is very low. D:::: is it ?? or my ears problem;w; but i heard medium but is partial high ?_?

00:53:707 (253) - The vocal is starting from the previous note and you already did a kat to emphasize it, so you can change this to don to emphasize the kick sound of drums. change~~

_yu68 wrote:

[Fan's Oni]
  1. 00:28:541 (114) - change to kat? to express presence or absence of vocal m.. here is with the voice?
  2. 00:39:374 (162) - delete or change to kat? to emphasize 00:39:541 - emphasize the big note?A?
  3. 00:42:041 (176) - ^ ?A?
  4. 00:52:624 (245,246) - delete? to make a break like 00:47:207 - was put with the..ah....idk what that sound >.>
  5. 00:53:124 (249) - move to 00:53:457 - ? same as this measure 00:47:541 - change
stu00608
frukoyurdakul's mod

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Hello from my modding queue! im surprised, no gimmick map?!

stu's Oni
00:22:041 - 00:22:374 - Why skipped these kicks here? Dons at these points will be good. ok! I add a at 00:22:041[/color]

01:05:041 (332,333,334) - 01:05:541 (336,337,338) - I think these 2 patterns are hard for an oni diff. The players who play oni diffs will have trouble to hit them, since these patterns have color switches. Maybe you can make these easier like using ddk or kkd. You're right :3 . Why this map called "Oni" because there stars are lower than kata's Oni diff . It's a Inner before preparing for rank

01:06:207 - A bit long stream don't you think? You can divide this stream into 2 or 3 (and maybe even more) patterns which have 11 notes maximum. same as ↑

01:10:874 - You can add a don here to support the kick sound. ok! added

01:19:957 (1) - The 1/8 snap on this spinner looks weird, I couldn't read the last note because of my skin for instance. You can move it to 01:20:041 - here. ok!

A solid mapset, good luck on ranking! Now we see katacheh ranked maps? ;-;
_yu68's mod

_yu68 wrote:

hi~
mod from stu's m4m
If there is something you can't understand because of my noot good English, please chat or PM

[stu's Oni]
  1. 00:22:041 - add any circle? to fit to melody fixed!
  2. 00:29:541 (94) - change to don? to make a difference with this measure 00:26:207 - You're right O: . fixed!
  3. 00:33:041 (114,115) - delete? same pattern ok! fixed
  4. 00:36:707 (139) - delete or change to kat? to emphasize 00:36:874 - keep :3
  5. 01:04:707 (330) - 01:06:041 (340) - delete? to make a break before the stream sounds good I fixed it , but I keep this because I want to check everyone whether they think this is a Inner :3
  6. 01:08:457 - add any circle? to fit to drum sounds that make 01:08:791 sounds weird so I delete it
good luck!
thank you :)
Topic Starter
katacheh

_yu68 wrote:

hi~ Hi~
mod from stu's m4m
If there is something you can't understand because of my noot good English, please chat or PM

[box=mod][General]
  1. Nowadays, there are few maps with Soft hitsounds, so it is recommended to unify hitsounds to Normal. Also there is no reason to use Soft hitsounds. Since there is no durm sound(only piano and vocal) at the start, I think it's good to use soft.
[Kantan]
  1. HP:7 -> 8? since notes is few ok
  2. 00:11:465 (11) - delete and 00:11:808 (1) - move spinner start point to 00:11:465 - ? same as Futsuu yes
  3. 00:18:207 (5) - or 00:18:874 (6) - change to don? to make even color scheme I think original is good.
  4. 00:26:874 (16) - delete? to make a break right after a complex rhythm yes, good!
  5. 00:35:541 (27) - ~ 00:36:541 - change to slider? same as Futsuu yes c:
  6. 00:40:541 (31) - change to don? same as 00:18:207 - yes but what is relation with 18:207?
  7. 00:48:707 (40) - move to 00:48:874 - ? ignore vocal to make a simpler rhythm yes good
  8. 00:54:041 (47) - same as ^ ^
  9. 01:00:207 (55) - delete? to make a break right after a complex rhythm Fixed!
  10. 01:06:874 - add kat? to express a drum sound keep.
[Futsuu]
  1. HP:6 -> 7? same reason as Kantan ^
  2. In the intro, I think should delete more notes and make more difference with Muzukashii.
    1. 00:02:208 (4) - V
    2. 00:04:951 (10) - V
    3. 00:07:008 (15) - V
    4. 00:08:379 (18) - V
  3. 00:20:874 (17) - add finisher? same as Kantan and Muzukashii yeah I missed it
  4. 00:26:207 - add don(with finisher)? to unify the basic rhythm with other diffs ^
[Muzukashii]
  1. This diff is too difficult compared other diffs, so it is recommended to delete all 1/4s.
    It is also recommended to reduce other notes to adjust difficulty spread.

    • delete all? deleted some of them. thank you for point out them c:
    1. 00:25:957 (53,54) -
    2. 00:27:041 (59) -
    3. 00:28:041 (64) -
    4. 00:29:707 (71) -
    5. 00:30:707 (76) -
    6. 00:32:374 (83) -
    7. 00:33:874 (90) -
    8. 00:34:874 (95) -
    9. 00:35:207 (97) -
    10. 00:43:957 (136) -
    11. 00:44:707 (141) -
    12. 00:46:957 (154,155) -
    13. 00:47:707 (158) -
    14. 00:48:291 (162) -
    15. 00:49:457 (169) -
    16. 00:49:707 (171) -
    17. 00:50:374 (174) -
    18. 00:50:791 (177) -
    19. 00:51:041 (179) -
    20. 00:52:041 (184) -
    21. 00:53:041 (189) -
    22. 00:53:624 (193) -
    23. 00:54:791 (200) -
    24. 00:55:041 (202) -
    25. 00:55:707 (205) -
    26. 00:56:124 (208) -
    27. 00:56:374 (210) -
    28. 00:57:374 (215) -
    29. 00:57:791 (218) -
    30. 00:58:041 (220) -
    31. 01:14:291 (296,297) -
    32. 01:19:124 (318) -
      I can't propose any more because of my lack of ability. However, I think you should reduce more notes to adjust difficulty spread.
      If you reduce notes, you can change the color scheme according to your preference to make even color scheme.
  2. 00:36:707 (106) - delete? to emphasize 00:36:874 - yes
  3. 00:38:207 (111) - delete? to fit to drum sounds ^
  4. 00:40:874 (122) - ^ ^
  5. 00:43:541 (133) - ^ ^
  6. 01:14:541 (298) - add finisher? to emphasize cymbal sound keep this. I want to emphasize piano sound.
[Oni]
  1. This diff also needs to reduce notes.(same reason as Muzukashii)
    There is also a method that make this diff difficult more, rename to Inner Oni and make new Oni. Oni is ok.
    If you make a new Oni you should use simple 1/4 for difficulty spread.(ddd, kkk, ddk, kkd) Since many ranked maps (recently) are not following difficulty spread (still have some maps are following), I did not think I need to do that. and also I have GDs to link up diffs.

    • delete all?
    1. 00:26:124 (60) -
    2. 00:26:374 (62) -
    3. 00:26:791 (65) -
    4. 00:27:707 (71) -
    5. 00:29:041 (79) -
    6. 00:29:457 (82) -
    7. 00:30:124 (87) -
    8. 00:30:374 (89) -
    9. 00:30:791 (92) -
    10. 00:32:291 (101) -
    11. 00:32:791 (105) -
    12. 00:33:041 (107) -
    13. 00:33:457 (110) -
    14. 00:34:124 (115) -
    15. 00:34:374 (117) -
    16. 00:34:791 (120) -
    17. 00:35:291 (124) -
    18. 00:35:624 (127) -
    19. 00:39:124 (149) -
    20. 00:41:624 (163) -
    21. 00:41:791 (165) -
    22. 00:46:457 (192) -
    23. 00:46:624 (194) -
    24. 00:46:791 (196) -
    25. 00:47:707 (203,204) -
    26. 00:48:291 (208) - or 00:48:457 (210) -
    27. 00:48:791 (213,214,215) -
    28. 00:50:041 (223) -
    29. 00:50:291 (225) - or 00:50:457 (227) -
    30. 00:50:957 (231) -
    31. 00:53:041 (244,245) -
    32. 00:53:624 (249) - or 00:53:791 (251) -
    33. 00:54:124 (254,255,256) -
    34. 00:55:374 (264) -
    35. 00:55:624 (266) - or 00:55:791 (268) -
    36. 00:56:291 (272) -
    37. 00:57:791 (282) -
    38. 00:58:374 (288) -
    39. 01:00:124 (299) - or 01:00:457 (302) -
    40. 01:00:957 (306,307) -
    41. 01:12:957 (374) -
    42. 01:17:457 (401) -
    43. 01:18:124 (406) -
      If you reduce notes, you can change the color scheme according to your preference to make even color scheme.
  2. 00:30:791 (92) - change to don and move to 00:31:124 - ? to fit to drum sounds I would like to keep this.
  3. 00:33:457 (110) - move to 00:33:791 - ? ^
  4. 00:35:374 (125) - change to don? to emphasize 00:35:541 - keep
  5. 00:36:707 (136) - delete? to emphasize 00:36:874 - yeah just like other diffs c:
  6. 00:38:207 (142) - delete? to fit to drum sounds yes
  7. 00:40:874 (157) - ^
  8. 00:43:541 (173,174) - ^
  9. 01:14:207 (382) - change to don, 01:14:457 (385) - delete and 01:14:541 (386) - add finisher ? same reason as Muzukashii keep this. same as muzu
good luck!
Thank you very much!
_yu68

katacheh wrote:

yes but what is relation with 18:207?
It's a mistake, so please ignore. X3
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muzukashii
00:18:207 (18) - 感覺可以改成 k
00:24:541 - 加個 d?
Oni
00:05:294 (17,18) - 要不要加個k 配合鋼琴音
00:14:874 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - d_ddk_kkd 改成 ddddkkk_D 配合旋律也能增加難度
00:22:041 (38,39,40) - 感覺改成kdd比較符合旋律
00:25:874 (58,59,60,61,62) - 感覺61的d有點多餘
00:31:874 (99,100,101,102,103,104) - k_d_ddd_k 打起來不太協調 感覺 k_ddd_d_k比較能配合後面的
還有100也許能改成k?
00:34:041 (115,116,117) - 看要不要改成ddk 117感覺比較適合k
00:34:707 (120) - 改成k 配合人聲
00:48:207 (202,203,204,205,206) - 把205砍掉 變成 kkd_k 因為後面還有一串連打 連續兩個有點怪
00:54:041 (248,249,250,251,252) - 把249消失 改成 k_kkd 原因和剛剛一樣
01:17:374 (395,396,397) - 把396改成k來凸顯395397 :arrow: dkd
01:18:707 (405,406,407,408,409) - kdkdd 比較合鋼琴

都沒人幫我ㄉ圖mod...幫QQ
Smallwu

125601228 wrote:

都沒人幫我ㄉ圖mod...幫QQ
我懂你ㄉ感受QQ
Topic Starter
katacheh

125601228 wrote:

muzukashii
00:18:207 (18) - 感覺可以改成 k 這個沒有改 d會比較順暢
00:24:541 - 加個 d? 這邊也沒改 跟著風琴聲之類的?A? 讓他跟oni有差別

Oni
00:05:294 (17,18) - 要不要加個k 配合鋼琴音 是想說跟人聲就好了:3
00:14:874 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - d_ddk_kkd 改成 ddddkkk_D 配合旋律也能增加難度 其實以前是ddddkkkkd 這邊沒改 跟著鼓聲就好了
00:22:041 (38,39,40) - 感覺改成kdd比較符合旋律 這邊也沒改 覺得ddd就好了XD
00:25:874 (58,59,60,61,62) - 感覺61的d有點多餘 好像是ww 刪掉了
00:31:874 (99,100,101,102,103,104) - k_d_ddd_k 打起來不太協調 感覺 k_ddd_d_k比較能配合後面的 這邊的話換成k ddd d k 之前SM也說過這邊自己是覺得沒差 可以有變化這樣ww
還有100也許能改成k?
00:34:041 (115,116,117) - 看要不要改成ddk 117感覺比較適合k 好w 我前後也換了一些花色 感覺比較搭
00:34:707 (120) - 改成k 配合人聲 V
00:48:207 (202,203,204,205,206) - 把205砍掉 變成 kkd_k 因為後面還有一串連打 連續兩個有點怪 我喜歡這邊所以沒改;w;
00:54:041 (248,249,250,251,252) - 把249消失 改成 k_kkd 原因和剛剛一樣 同上x-x
01:17:374 (395,396,397) - 把396改成k來凸顯395397 :arrow: dkd 覺得ddd比較好
01:18:707 (405,406,407,408,409) - kdkdd 比較合鋼琴 kkddk比較圓滑的感覺?A? 暫時沒改

都沒人幫我ㄉ圖mod...幫QQ ......QAQ 我有空的時候可以幫你摸摸
謝謝摸圖-w-
iloveyou4ever
Hello,隨便摸=w=
[General]
Tags:請加上''stu00608'',''Fantazy''因為他們是做GD的
Hp:把stu's Oni轉成hp5.5好像較好

[Fan's Oni]
00:34:541 - 這兩粒轉k比較好

00:46:457 - 把這個remove
-我認為這五粒才是高潮(00:46:874 - ),所以我不太支持前面放7個音pattern

00:57:707 - 轉d?

01:18:041 - 如果你是跟鋼琴,我建議轉k
不是的就無視=w=

[stu's Oni]
00:08:722 - 這個跟前面的ctrl+g
這個音高比前面那個高

00:34:374 - 把這個remove
-00:33:207 - 這串好像太長了=3=,把這個斷一斷比較好

00:38:874 - 轉k
vocal pitch升了

00:53:541 - 轉k?

01:01:207 - 轉k
-能與01:01:541 - 彼此呼應(我也不清楚我在說什麼ww)

01:03:374 - 轉d
emphasis finisher

01:06:207 - 會不會太長了XDD

01:18:707 - 轉kdkkkdkkdk比較好?

就這樣,加油=w=
Topic Starter
katacheh

iloveyou4ever wrote:

Hello,隨便摸=w= 安安>3<
[General]
Tags:請加上''stu00608'',''Fantazyee''因為他們是做GD的 其實我都有加了 只是下載的頁面都沒顯示... 不知道為什麼啦qwq

就這樣,加油=w=
謝謝摸摸=w=/
stu00608

iloveyou4ever wrote:

Hello,隨便摸=w=

[stu's Oni]
00:08:722 - 這個跟前面的ctrl+g
這個音高比前面那個高 這個先不改 保留

00:34:374 - 把這個remove ok!
-00:33:207 - 這串好像太長了=3=,把這個斷一斷比較好

00:38:874 - 轉k ok!
vocal pitch升了

00:53:541 - 轉k? 本來就是:3?

01:01:207 - 轉k
-能與01:01:541 - 彼此呼應(我也不清楚我在說什麼ww) 保留

01:03:374 - 轉d ok
emphasis finisher

01:06:207 - 會不會太長了XDD 這張原本是Inner阿 :3

01:18:707 - 轉kdkkkdkkdk比較好? 覺得還好ww

就這樣,加油=w=
感謝大大 :) :) 多丟些PP譜讓我刷(
Fantazy

iloveyou4ever wrote:

[Fan's Oni]
00:34:541 - 這兩粒轉k比較好 m................好?

00:46:457 - 把這個remove
-我認為這五粒才是高潮(00:46:874 - ),所以我不太支持前面放7個音pattern 欸等等 欸有意思!! 很有意思!!!!!!

00:57:707 - 轉d? 跟那個應該是鋼琴的鋼琴聲

01:18:041 - 如果你是跟鋼琴,我建議轉k
不是的就無視=w= ((無視>.>
Charlotte
First IRC LOG
15:48 Charlotte: I modding your map
15:52 Charlotte: First All diff suggestion
15:52 Charlotte: Last spinner is fade out part.so I pefer add some green (e.g.75→65→55%)
15:52 katacheh: ok
15:52 katacheh: i see
15:53 Charlotte: 01:24:874 - but,have strong sound.so you can again 75% or other %
15:53 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020348 Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Kantan]]
15:54 katacheh: like this?
15:54 katacheh: https://puu.sh/uiSwZ/723ee28138.png
15:54 katacheh: 65% 55% 45% 75%
15:55 Charlotte: try
15:57 Charlotte: I prefer 55 40 25 75
15:58 katacheh: ok sounds good
16:01 Charlotte: 00:27:874 - del 00:30:541 - del 00:33:202 - del
16:02 Charlotte: I think this 1/1 triplet is little strange.
16:02 katacheh: ok fixed
16:04 Charlotte: 00:44:541 - move to 00:44:207 -
16:04 Charlotte: dd k(1/2) d slider (This flow is hard to Kantan player)
16:04 Charlotte: 00:44:207 - have sound.
16:05 katacheh: i see.. fixed c:
16:06 Charlotte: 00:47:874 - You can remove this notes
16:06 Charlotte: 00:47:541 (49,50,51,52) - same rhythm
16:06 Charlotte: 00:47:541 - 00:49:541 -
16:07 katacheh: removed c:
16:08 katacheh: 00:53:207 - too right?
16:09 Charlotte: yes
16:10 Charlotte: 00:58:541 - del
16:10 katacheh: yes fixed
16:12 Charlotte: 00:51:374 - move to 00:51:541 - How about you think?
16:12 katacheh: make it easier?
16:13 katacheh: okay fixed that
16:13 katacheh: 00:56:707 - and 00:59:374 - too?
16:14 Charlotte: 00:59:374 - no
16:14 katacheh: ok
16:14 Charlotte: 00:51:374 - 00:56:707 - only
16:14 Charlotte: same part
16:14 katacheh: okay
16:15 Charlotte: can you update?
16:15 katacheh: yes
16:15 Charlotte: plz~~ =w=
16:16 katacheh: updated c:
16:18 Charlotte: 01:16:207 - & 01:16:541 - add?
16:19 katacheh: yes good..-w-
16:19 katacheh: added
16:19 Charlotte: I think Kantan is good :D
16:20 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020316 Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Futsuu]]
16:22 Charlotte: 00:29:374 - move to 00:29:707 -
16:23 Charlotte: aa
16:23 Charlotte: miss
16:23 Charlotte: igonore please
16:23 katacheh: okay
16:28 Charlotte: 00:26:207 - 00:36:541 - https://puu.sh/uiUoY/0508b76273.jpg
16:28 Charlotte: try?
16:30 Charlotte: 00:35:374 - You can add notes.
16:30 katacheh: wait a min..
16:32 katacheh: sound good xD...
16:32 katacheh: changed
16:33 katacheh: no need to put 1/2 at here?
16:33 Charlotte: 1/1-1/1-1/1(5plet) is sound good
16:33 Charlotte: yes
16:33 katacheh: okay
16:34 Charlotte: Kantan = 2/1 only so no need 1/2 notes
16:35 katacheh: but this is futsuu xD?
16:35 Charlotte: 00:51:041 - del
16:35 Charlotte: yes
16:35 Charlotte: no need all part 1/2 notes
16:35 katacheh: oh.. i see c:
16:36 katacheh: 00:56:374 - del too?
16:36 Charlotte: yes
16:36 Charlotte: more clean
16:36 katacheh: fixed that
16:37 Charlotte: update plz~
16:38 katacheh: done!
16:41 Charlotte: 01:12:541 - move to 01:13:207 -
16:42 Charlotte: Futsuu suggestion is that's all
16:42 katacheh: fixed
16:42 katacheh: ty c:
16:43 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020269 Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Muzukashii]]
16:43 Charlotte: Kantan~Mzu & I'll mod stu diff =w=
16:43 Charlotte: Muzu
16:44 katacheh: okay
16:46 Charlotte: 00:01:008 - del & 00:01:694 - del 00:01:351 - add notes
16:47 Charlotte: 00:15:041 - del
16:48 katacheh: 00:01:008 - this part i follow the vocal ?
16:49 katacheh: 00:15:041 - fixed this c:
16:49 Charlotte: aa ok.first suggestion ignore please
16:52 Charlotte: 00:21:707 - del
16:52 katacheh: fixed!
16:55 Charlotte: 00:45:541 - you can remove notes.
16:55 katacheh: yes
16:59 Charlotte: I'll check your Muzukashii later
16:59 katacheh: okay
16:59 katacheh: thank you

Muzukashii HP5,5→6?
stu's Oni OD5→5.5?

[ stu's Oni]


  • 00:14:874 - change to k & 00:15:041 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - kdkkddk? I think more fit.You can try it.

    00:28:374 - add d & 00:28:707 - add k.This map is Oni.so 1/1-pattern is little strange.

    00:34:791 - add k.I think 1/2 pattern is long & I think follow the vocal.

    00:35:374 - change to d.for emphasized to next 00:35:541 -

    00:36:541 - change to k.don pattern is long.I think need variety.

    00:36:707 - You can remove this notes.for emphasized to next 00:36:874 - (if agreed this suggestion,also other place change please)

    00:41:374 - change to d.for emphasized to next kk

    00:45:374 - d & 00:45:874 - d.I think don is not bad.

    00:46:624 - del & 00:46:791 - del.felt a bit long.

    00:52:707 - If you think 1/2 + 1/4 pattern is long,you can remove this notes.

    00:56:124 - move to 00:55:791 - & 00:56:457 - add don.

    00:57:957 - del & 00:58:124 - del.I think no need.You can make variety pattern.

    01:03:874 - d & 01:04:374 - d.because,next notes is K.for emphasized to next K

    01:05:707 - don?

    01:06:207 - pattern is lonnngggg.I have suggestion.You can try it.01:06:207 - 01:08:874 - https://puu.sh/up4qA/a37763aafa.jpg

    01:10:041 - add k.follow the piano.

    01:16:457 - add d.

    01:18:374 - del.1/2 pattern is long.
stu00608

Charlotte wrote:

First IRC LOG
15:48 Charlotte: I modding your map
15:52 Charlotte: First All diff suggestion
15:52 Charlotte: Last spinner is fade out part.so I pefer add some green (e.g.75→65→55%)
15:52 katacheh: ok
15:52 katacheh: i see
15:53 Charlotte: 01:24:874 - but,have strong sound.so you can again 75% or other %
15:53 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020348 Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Kantan]]
15:54 katacheh: like this?
15:54 katacheh: https://puu.sh/uiSwZ/723ee28138.png
15:54 katacheh: 65% 55% 45% 75%
15:55 Charlotte: try
15:57 Charlotte: I prefer 55 40 25 75
15:58 katacheh: ok sounds good
16:01 Charlotte: 00:27:874 - del 00:30:541 - del 00:33:202 - del
16:02 Charlotte: I think this 1/1 triplet is little strange.
16:02 katacheh: ok fixed
16:04 Charlotte: 00:44:541 - move to 00:44:207 -
16:04 Charlotte: dd k(1/2) d slider (This flow is hard to Kantan player)
16:04 Charlotte: 00:44:207 - have sound.
16:05 katacheh: i see.. fixed c:
16:06 Charlotte: 00:47:874 - You can remove this notes
16:06 Charlotte: 00:47:541 (49,50,51,52) - same rhythm
16:06 Charlotte: 00:47:541 - 00:49:541 -
16:07 katacheh: removed c:
16:08 katacheh: 00:53:207 - too right?
16:09 Charlotte: yes
16:10 Charlotte: 00:58:541 - del
16:10 katacheh: yes fixed
16:12 Charlotte: 00:51:374 - move to 00:51:541 - How about you think?
16:12 katacheh: make it easier?
16:13 katacheh: okay fixed that
16:13 katacheh: 00:56:707 - and 00:59:374 - too?
16:14 Charlotte: 00:59:374 - no
16:14 katacheh: ok
16:14 Charlotte: 00:51:374 - 00:56:707 - only
16:14 Charlotte: same part
16:14 katacheh: okay
16:15 Charlotte: can you update?
16:15 katacheh: yes
16:15 Charlotte: plz~~ =w=
16:16 katacheh: updated c:
16:18 Charlotte: 01:16:207 - & 01:16:541 - add?
16:19 katacheh: yes good..-w-
16:19 katacheh: added
16:19 Charlotte: I think Kantan is good :D
16:20 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020316 Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Futsuu]]
16:22 Charlotte: 00:29:374 - move to 00:29:707 -
16:23 Charlotte: aa
16:23 Charlotte: miss
16:23 Charlotte: igonore please
16:23 katacheh: okay
16:28 Charlotte: 00:26:207 - 00:36:541 - https://puu.sh/uiUoY/0508b76273.jpg
16:28 Charlotte: try?
16:30 Charlotte: 00:35:374 - You can add notes.
16:30 katacheh: wait a min..
16:32 katacheh: sound good xD...
16:32 katacheh: changed
16:33 katacheh: no need to put 1/2 at here?
16:33 Charlotte: 1/1-1/1-1/1(5plet) is sound good
16:33 Charlotte: yes
16:33 katacheh: okay
16:34 Charlotte: Kantan = 2/1 only so no need 1/2 notes
16:35 katacheh: but this is futsuu xD?
16:35 Charlotte: 00:51:041 - del
16:35 Charlotte: yes
16:35 Charlotte: no need all part 1/2 notes
16:35 katacheh: oh.. i see c:
16:36 katacheh: 00:56:374 - del too?
16:36 Charlotte: yes
16:36 Charlotte: more clean
16:36 katacheh: fixed that
16:37 Charlotte: update plz~
16:38 katacheh: done!
16:41 Charlotte: 01:12:541 - move to 01:13:207 -
16:42 Charlotte: Futsuu suggestion is that's all
16:42 katacheh: fixed
16:42 katacheh: ty c:
16:43 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020269 Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Muzukashii]]
16:43 Charlotte: Kantan~Mzu & I'll mod stu diff =w=
16:43 Charlotte: Muzu
16:44 katacheh: okay
16:46 Charlotte: 00:01:008 - del & 00:01:694 - del 00:01:351 - add notes
16:47 Charlotte: 00:15:041 - del
16:48 katacheh: 00:01:008 - this part i follow the vocal ?
16:49 katacheh: 00:15:041 - fixed this c:
16:49 Charlotte: aa ok.first suggestion ignore please
16:52 Charlotte: 00:21:707 - del
16:52 katacheh: fixed!
16:55 Charlotte: 00:45:541 - you can remove notes.
16:55 katacheh: yes
16:59 Charlotte: I'll check your Muzukashii later
16:59 katacheh: okay
16:59 katacheh: thank you

Muzukashii HP5,5→6?
stu's Oni OD5→5.5?

[ stu's Oni]


  • 00:14:874 - change to k & 00:15:041 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - kdkkddk? I think more fit.You can try it. keep :D

    00:28:374 - add d & 00:28:707 - add k.This map is Oni.so 1/1-pattern is little strange. ok!

    00:34:791 - add k.I think 1/2 pattern is long & I think follow the vocal. ok!

    00:35:374 - change to d.for emphasized to next 00:35:541 ok!

    00:36:541 - change to k.don pattern is long.I think need variety. fixed. this part has been modded twice

    00:36:707 - You can remove this notes.for emphasized to next 00:36:874 - (if agreed this suggestion,also other place change please) I think no :o

    00:41:374 - change to d.for emphasized to next kk ok!

    00:45:374 - d & 00:45:874 - d.I think don is not bad. I changed the whole part to dkddkk 00:45:207 (183,184,185,186,187,188)

    00:46:624 - del & 00:46:791 - del.felt a bit long. I like the hard one 8-)

    00:52:707 - If you think 1/2 + 1/4 pattern is long,you can remove this notes. ok!

    00:56:124 - move to 00:55:791 - & 00:56:457 - add don. ok!

    00:57:957 - del & 00:58:124 - del.I think no need.You can make variety pattern. keep :D

    01:03:874 - d & 01:04:374 - d.because,next notes is K.for emphasized to next K ok!

    01:05:707 - don? ok! I just want to make a different XD

    01:06:207 - pattern is lonnngggg.I have suggestion.You can try it.01:06:207 - 01:08:874 - https://puu.sh/up4qA/a37763aafa.jpg thank you but only this part I want it keep SO LONG XD

    01:10:041 - add k.follow the piano. ok!

    01:16:457 - add d. nice idea! ok!

    01:18:374 - del.1/2 pattern is long. follow the drum so \(ツ)/

    実はこれ前Innerです ;)  でもスターはkataさんのdiffと同じくらいなのでOniに変えたんだ なるべく元の難しさをそのままランクしてほしいと思います :D
    ありがとうございます! そちらの譜面ができたらmodします :) :)
Topic Starter
katacheh

Charlotte wrote:

First IRC LOG
15:48 Charlotte: I modding your map
15:52 Charlotte: First All diff suggestion
15:52 Charlotte: Last spinner is fade out part.so I pefer add some green (e.g.75→65→55%)
15:52 katacheh: ok
15:52 katacheh: i see
15:53 Charlotte: 01:24:874 - but,have strong sound.so you can again 75% or other %
15:53 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020348 Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Kantan]]
15:54 katacheh: like this?
15:54 katacheh: https://puu.sh/uiSwZ/723ee28138.png
15:54 katacheh: 65% 55% 45% 75%
15:55 Charlotte: try
15:57 Charlotte: I prefer 55 40 25 75
15:58 katacheh: ok sounds good
16:01 Charlotte: 00:27:874 - del 00:30:541 - del 00:33:202 - del
16:02 Charlotte: I think this 1/1 triplet is little strange.
16:02 katacheh: ok fixed
16:04 Charlotte: 00:44:541 - move to 00:44:207 -
16:04 Charlotte: dd k(1/2) d slider (This flow is hard to Kantan player)
16:04 Charlotte: 00:44:207 - have sound.
16:05 katacheh: i see.. fixed c:
16:06 Charlotte: 00:47:874 - You can remove this notes
16:06 Charlotte: 00:47:541 (49,50,51,52) - same rhythm
16:06 Charlotte: 00:47:541 - 00:49:541 -
16:07 katacheh: removed c:
16:08 katacheh: 00:53:207 - too right?
16:09 Charlotte: yes
16:10 Charlotte: 00:58:541 - del
16:10 katacheh: yes fixed
16:12 Charlotte: 00:51:374 - move to 00:51:541 - How about you think?
16:12 katacheh: make it easier?
16:13 katacheh: okay fixed that
16:13 katacheh: 00:56:707 - and 00:59:374 - too?
16:14 Charlotte: 00:59:374 - no
16:14 katacheh: ok
16:14 Charlotte: 00:51:374 - 00:56:707 - only
16:14 Charlotte: same part
16:14 katacheh: okay
16:15 Charlotte: can you update?
16:15 katacheh: yes
16:15 Charlotte: plz~~ =w=
16:16 katacheh: updated c:
16:18 Charlotte: 01:16:207 - & 01:16:541 - add?
16:19 katacheh: yes good..-w-
16:19 katacheh: added
16:19 Charlotte: I think Kantan is good :D
16:20 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020316 Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Futsuu]]
16:22 Charlotte: 00:29:374 - move to 00:29:707 -
16:23 Charlotte: aa
16:23 Charlotte: miss
16:23 Charlotte: igonore please
16:23 katacheh: okay
16:28 Charlotte: 00:26:207 - 00:36:541 - https://puu.sh/uiUoY/0508b76273.jpg
16:28 Charlotte: try?
16:30 Charlotte: 00:35:374 - You can add notes.
16:30 katacheh: wait a min..
16:32 katacheh: sound good xD...
16:32 katacheh: changed
16:33 katacheh: no need to put 1/2 at here?
16:33 Charlotte: 1/1-1/1-1/1(5plet) is sound good
16:33 Charlotte: yes
16:33 katacheh: okay
16:34 Charlotte: Kantan = 2/1 only so no need 1/2 notes
16:35 katacheh: but this is futsuu xD?
16:35 Charlotte: 00:51:041 - del
16:35 Charlotte: yes
16:35 Charlotte: no need all part 1/2 notes
16:35 katacheh: oh.. i see c:
16:36 katacheh: 00:56:374 - del too?
16:36 Charlotte: yes
16:36 Charlotte: more clean
16:36 katacheh: fixed that
16:37 Charlotte: update plz~
16:38 katacheh: done!
16:41 Charlotte: 01:12:541 - move to 01:13:207 -
16:42 Charlotte: Futsuu suggestion is that's all
16:42 katacheh: fixed
16:42 katacheh: ty c:
16:43 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020269 Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Muzukashii]]
16:43 Charlotte: Kantan~Mzu & I'll mod stu diff =w=
16:43 Charlotte: Muzu
16:44 katacheh: okay
16:46 Charlotte: 00:01:008 - del & 00:01:694 - del 00:01:351 - add notes
16:47 Charlotte: 00:15:041 - del
16:48 katacheh: 00:01:008 - this part i follow the vocal ?
16:49 katacheh: 00:15:041 - fixed this c:
16:49 Charlotte: aa ok.first suggestion ignore please
16:52 Charlotte: 00:21:707 - del
16:52 katacheh: fixed!
16:55 Charlotte: 00:45:541 - you can remove notes.
16:55 katacheh: yes
16:59 Charlotte: I'll check your Muzukashii later
16:59 katacheh: okay
16:59 katacheh: thank you

Muzukashii HP5,5→6?Fixed!
and Updated stu's Oni
Ozu
hi, come from your m4m forum ( ´ ▽ ` )ノツ
Hope to help a little to this map :)
If you can't read my poor English, plz ignore it.


[ General ]

01:19:874 (1) - we are not BANCHOBOT xD. Maybe we can finish this spinner early. how about add finish drum sound from 01:24:707 (1) ?



[ Kantan ]

00:39:207 (34) - delete?
00:41:874 (38) - ^

00:56:874 (61) - move 00:56:707 cause of vocal flow



[ Futsuu ]

00:17:541 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - little long stream in futsuu. How about dkd kdk or dkddk d?

00:57:874 (104,105,106,107,108,109) - k d k d dk

01:08:541 (131) - delete? cause of next Big note and avoid 6 stream.

01:13:874 (143) - delete.



[ Muzukashii ]

00:15:374 (6) - delete? next is D and muzu diff player is diffrenet at Big note even it connected.

00:57:707 (196,197,198) - ddd and 00:58:041 (199) - k

01:15:041 (280) - delete or KK? Kk seems not good.



[ Fan's Oni ]

00:00:494 (1) ~ 00:12:836 (34) - i think this part is following piano, and i think it is better to add a little note following vocal with present notes.

00:28:207 (113,114) - ctrl g. vocal sound is going up from 113 to 114.
00:30:874 (123,124) - ^

00:44:707 (190) - k. so many d is here.

00:57:707 (276,277,278,279,280) - kkddk?

01:01:374 (300) - d. to avoid monotonous same color notes.

01:14:374 (375) - k?

01:16:041 (383,384,385,386) - k ddd



[ stu's Oni ]

00:01:865 (6,7) - ctrl g? although they are same pattern both No.1~3 and No.4~6, more smooth.

00:15:041 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - i think this stream looks not-suitable and little strange sound. how about change 00:15:541 (13) to d to follow drum line?

00:36:707 (140) - delete. next to Big note and there is no sound.
00:39:374 (154) - ^
00:42:041 (167) - ^ and change 00:41:874 (166) to k.

00:58:207 (285) - D and 00:58:124 (284) - delete



[ Oni ]

00:15:874 (11) ~ 00:21:207 (34) - note is a little lacking than every next parts in this diff. put some 1/4 ?

00:37:707 (137) - d? Impact of next K is so high.
00:40:374 (151) - ^
00:43:041 (166) - ^

01:14:541 (379) - d and delete 01:14:707 (380) . no sound in 380 and for smooth flow.


So perfect that I can't touch anymore ^3^b
I think this is really perfect and fun map xD
Take my Star ★ and Hope to ranked soon~

+OMG graveyard from yesterday wwwww
Topic Starter
katacheh

404 AccNotFound wrote:

hi, come from your m4m forum ( ´ ▽ ` )ノツ
Hope to help a little to this map :)
If you can't read my poor English, plz ignore it.


[ General ]

01:19:874 (1) - we are not BANCHOBOT xD. Maybe we can finish this spinner early. how about add finish drum sound from 01:24:707 (1) ?
yeah but i hate note after spinner. xD



[ Kantan ]

00:39:207 (34) - delete? no. why? xD Is this not too hard or what?
00:41:874 (38) - ^

00:56:874 (61) - move 00:56:707 cause of vocal flow i know but i want to put simple rhythm in kantan.



[ Futsuu ]

00:17:541 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - little long stream in futsuu. How about dkd kdk or dkddk d? not too long i think.c:

00:57:874 (104,105,106,107,108,109) - k d k d dk change!

01:08:541 (131) - delete? cause of next Big note and avoid 6 stream. keep.

01:13:874 (143) - delete. keep.



[ Muzukashii ]

00:15:374 (6) - delete? next is D and muzu diff player is diffrenet at Big note even it connected. i think it's fine?

00:57:707 (196,197,198) - ddd and 00:58:041 (199) - k i think original one is better.

01:15:041 (280) - delete or KK? Kk seems not good. changed!



[ Oni ]

00:15:874 (11) ~ 00:21:207 (34) - note is a little lacking than every next parts in this diff. put some 1/4 ? it's fine i think.

00:37:707 (137) - d? Impact of next K is so high. i think D is fine c:
00:40:374 (151) - ^^
00:43:041 (166) - ^^

01:14:541 (379) - d and delete 01:14:707 (380) . no sound in 380 and for smooth flow. keep 379 and del 380


So perfect that I can't touch anymore ^3^b
I think this is really perfect and fun map xD
Take my Star ★ and Hope to ranked soon~ THANKS!

+OMG graveyard from yesterday wwwww
Thanks for mod!
Fantazy

404 AccNotFound wrote:

[ Fan's Oni ]

00:00:494 (1) ~ 00:12:836 (34) - i think this part is following piano, and i think it is better to add a little note following vocal with present notes. ya..but.. how and it will make feeling not quite right?

00:28:207 (113,114) - ctrl g. vocal sound is going up from 113 to 114. change
00:30:874 (123,124) - ^ V

00:44:707 (190) - k. so many d is here. for the same pattern , change 00:44:874 (191) - to K

00:57:707 (276,277,278,279,280) - kkddk? Follow a sound? its high high? change to ddkdk for easier?

01:01:374 (300) - d. to avoid monotonous same color notes. how about 01:01:541 (301,302,303,304,305) - d kdk k?

01:14:374 (375) - k? its going down here

01:16:041 (383,384,385,386) - k ddd d kkd
stu00608
[ stu's Oni ]

00:01:865 (6,7) - ctrl g? although they are same pattern both No.1~3 and No.4~6, more smooth. no thx D: I make it same like 00:03:922

00:15:041 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - i think this stream looks not-suitable and little strange sound. how about change 00:15:541 (13) to d to follow drum line? keep it :P .

00:36:707 (140) - delete. next to Big note and there is no sound. In fact there should be a ddD lol. So I delete this note here because the k can show the guitar sound.
00:39:374 (154) - ^
00:42:041 (167) - ^ and change 00:41:874 (166) to k. keep it :P . Actually there isn't no sound

00:58:207 (285) - D and 00:58:124 (284) - delete fixed :)

thx :)
mliencheng
路過一mod

不好意思換電腦了 mod格式隨便一點

[ stu's Oni ]

00:15:457 - 我覺得後面那個k就好 這個可以放d以凸顯後面的高音

00:25:957 - k , 他音跟前面的音一樣 所以建議放k

01:11:374 - 跟 01:10:041 一樣的音, 可以加個k?

01:12:707 - 高音, k?


:)
stu00608

mliencheng wrote:

路過一mod

不好意思換電腦了 mod格式隨便一點

[ stu's Oni ]

00:15:457 - 我覺得後面那個k就好 這個可以放d以凸顯後面的高音 ok. 滿多人有提出來的

00:25:957 - k , 他音跟前面的音一樣 所以建議放k 好owob

01:11:374 - 跟 01:10:041 一樣的音, 可以加個k? 那我把 01:10:707也一併砍掉 前後都有對到

01:12:707 - 高音, k? 那邊我跟鼓音 如果要改那 01:13:374 也要一起改 先保留


:)
:) :) :) :) :)
Xay
Hi, I got here through stu's userpage. Giving mod because I want to learn and need kds!!

I will try to write in simple english, but I am sorry if it is difficult to understand.


[General]

BGs: OK
Offset: OK
MP3: OK (I think?)


[Kantan]

I am bad at modding Kantan, but I think this diff is good.


[Futsuu]

00:03:922 (7) - k here, because voice is similar to 00:00:836 (1,2)

00:18:541 - remove d here? triplets seem good enough

00:38:874 (57,58) - k d sounds better to me

00:47:207 onward is good :)


[Muzukashii]

00:04:436 - k here because of 00:01:522 (4,5,6)

00:21:541 (31,32,33,34,35,36) - Suggestion:


00:46:207 (131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139) - Suggestion:


00:54:374 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182) - I would change these patterns so they are not identical to 00:53:207 (169,170,171,172,173,174,175). Maybe something like this?


01:19:374 (298) - k here?


[Fan's Oni]

Couldn't find anything, this map is good !!


[stu's Oni]

00:14:458 - d here to emphasize drums stronger

01:01:874 (311) - k maybe to follow flow of 01:00:374 (300,301,302,303) ?

01:06:874 (346,347) - make both notes k, because I think that makes this stream more fun

Can't find more, map is fun :)


[Oni]

00:16:041 (12) - d here, just like at 00:18:541 (22,23,24,25,26)

I do not want to destroy patterns in this map because I think they are good.


I hope this helps, good luck everyone!!
Topic Starter
katacheh

Xay wrote:

Hi, I got here through stu's userpage. Giving mod because I want to learn and need kds!!

I will try to write in simple english, but I am sorry if it is difficult to understand.


[General]

BGs: OK
Offset: OK
MP3: OK (I think?)


[Kantan]

I am bad at modding Kantan, but I think this diff is good. Thanks


[Futsuu]

00:03:922 (7) - k here, because voice is similar to 00:00:836 (1,2) changed!

00:18:541 - remove d here? triplets seem good enough okay c:

00:38:874 (57,58) - k d sounds better to me ;) changed!

00:47:207 onward is good :) changed!


[Muzukashii]

00:04:436 - k here because of 00:01:522 (4,5,6) I'm following vocal here//

00:21:541 (31,32,33,34,35,36) - Suggestion:

no change. i think original is good.

00:46:207 (131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139) - Suggestion:

keep. dont want kkd in this diff.

00:54:374 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182) - I would change these patterns so they are not identical to 00:53:207 (169,170,171,172,173,174,175). Maybe something like this?

Changed but i want to aviod ddk
01:19:374 (298) - k here? keep. there's no high pitch or what


[Oni]

00:16:041 (12) - d here, just like at 00:18:541 (22,23,24,25,26) keep to have some variety..

I do not want to destroy patterns in this map because I think they are good.


I hope this helps, good luck everyone!!
Thanks for mod!!
stu00608

Xay wrote:

Hi, I got here through stu's userpage. Giving mod because I want to learn and need kds!!

I will try to write in simple english, but I am sorry if it is difficult to understand.


[stu's Oni]

00:14:458 - d here to emphasize drums stronger It's no sound here so :/

01:01:874 (311) - k maybe to follow flow of 01:00:374 (300,301,302,303) ? keep :D

01:06:874 (346,347) - make both notes k, because I think that makes this stream more fun

Can't find more, map is fun :) I think it's unnecessary :/

nothing changed but still thank you !! :) :) :)

I hope this helps, good luck everyone!!
Skylish
From my modding queue. Sorry for waiting so long since I am too busy irl ;w;.

[General]

> 00:00:494 - Using HS:S is too soft for Taiko HS in most cases. The music genre or dynamic of song does not support for a Soft Hitsound obviously. You may use HS:N 40~50% (the setting in Stu's Oni) instead of using HS:S 75%. (In 99% cases Taiko maps use HS:N)

[Kantan]

! 00:00:494 - not really recommended to use any SV changes in Kantan even it's just 90%. Consider remove it, except you have very strong rationale behind.

> 00:16:541 - you can remove this note for the sake of consistency at 00:18:207 (7,8,9) - , and showing a better note spread with Futsuu as well.

> 00:44:874 - Finish is available right here to state it per 2 bars.

> 00:59:374 - umm, how about shifting it 1/2 forward to 00:59:541 - , so as to fit your previous mapping style in Kiai (having the note hit on the on beat instead of the exact vocal timing)?

> 01:02:207 - / 01:02:707 - / 01:16:874 - Finish them, strong instrumental accompaniment.

[Futsuu]

> 00:21:202 - shifting it to 00:20:541 - seems better. Then you will have constant nnn nnn nnn pattern from 00:16:207 - to 00:20:874 - . (00:21:207 - no need to worry about missing a drum kick here since the D at 00:20:874 - dominates the music there, that's fine.)

> 00:58:207 (104) - you definitely missed a Finish here.

> 01:00:374 - unnecessary note breaks your consistent vocal mapping channel, remove it.

> 01:03:541 - / 01:04:874 - / 01:06:207 - Finisher of coz ~_~

> 01:07:874 - It's a potential Finisher due to the high-pitch drum kick. I see you used it in Oni only, you may make this timing consistent in all of your difficulties.

> 01:14:541 (144,145,146) - they should be N n N because of the drum set. The instrumental part seems having a bigger dynamic here, although the melody goes to the piano.

[Muzukashii]

> 00:22:207 - shiting it to 00:21:707 - can be more consistent to 00:16:207 (9,10,11) - / 00:17:541 (14,15,16) - these patterns. Meanwhile, shifting this note can also emphasize the expression of melody-mapping.

> 00:36:541 - Change it to k for emphasizing the upcoming Dons, matching 1st & 3rd beat drum kick?

> 00:57:791 - shifting it to 00:57:624 - so as to let the vocal start outstandingly at 00:57:874 - ?

> 01:03:541 - / 01:04:874 - / 01:06:207 - / all Finishers should be used right here lol

> 01:07:874 - it depends what are you going to change in Futsuu, either using Finisher or normal note is fine

> 01:14:541 - same case in Futsuu, I am pretty confused about the usage of Finisher here. I can understand that you want to emphasize the strong piano fz chord by using Fnishers, but on the other sides, you neglect the drum elements which should be more famailiarized actually in Taiko mapping. Therefore, how about k KK D ---> K kk D ?

[Oni]

> 00:20:874 - You missed a Finish here

> 00:23:541 - inappropriate and unclear usage of Finish here. The obvious one should be at 00:24:874 - , not 00:23:541 - . Remove the latter's Finish please, the piano chord or drum set cannot support its existence.

> 00:25:874 - actually you can just map what you did in Muzukashii right here, ddd suit the low-pitch drum hit triplet. kkd seems a bit weird, I can't exactly tell where it's strange though.

> 00:26:207 - another missing Finish

> 00:26:374 - You may remove it to create a space to make the spotlight shed on the vocal. Take ref. at 00:28:707 - / 00:31:707 -

> 00:36:124 - adding a kat here to form a triplet to show better note spread with Muzukashii

> 00:36:541 - same advice in other difficulties, changing it to kat?

> 00:37:707 - / 00:40:374 - / 00:43:041 - small notes fit better since they can emphasize the upcoming K/D

> 00:46:624 - you may remove this note to redue the length of this stream (it's too long for Oni but okay for Inner Oni). Meanwhile, the drum kick at 00:46:541 - can be specified with its end.

> 00:48:791 - / 00:54:124 - Remove it since two consecutive 5-plets seems too much in the whole Oni.

> 00:51:374 - / 00:56:707 - be consistent! Finish is not really needed

> 01:14:207 - How about kkd K? The following suggestion at 01:14:874 (377,378,379) - would be the same in Muzukashii.

[Fan's Oni]

> 00:00:494 - I feel like the upcoming gap is too big. How about adding a kat at 00:01:179 - ? (though I know that you are trying to follow the instrumental part very strictly)

> 00:14:036 - ineffective green timing point, you may remove it.

> 00:17:207 (55,56,57,58,59) - sounds a bit dull, maybe putting a note at 00:17:291 - would be richer in terms of patterns

> 00:22:041 - using ddd triplet to fill up the gap to map the instrumental part as well? It seems you are going to match all things....

> 00:24:707 - this little part is very strange here: 00:24:874 - / 00:25:374 - they share the same dynamic but you used different patterns to display them. The former is loud enough for a Finisher, try not to waste it if possible... How about something like this? 00:24:707 -

> 00:36:541 - same in other difficulties, change it to a kat?

> 01:06:207 - it is as same as 01:16:874 - in terms of structure, let them be consistent (either normal note/ Big note)

> 01:15:374 - cymbal crash here same as 01:14:541 - , Finish is needed consequently

[Stu's Oni]

> 00:10:779 - you may add a d here because you start mapping piano since 00:08:722 -

> 00:46:207 - this stream is way too long, cut it down please.... Similar at Oni's case, how about removing 00:46:624 - ?

> 00:59:541 (292,293,294) - sounds unnecessary and cannot show the similar gap like what you did at 00:56:874 - / 00:51:541 - , consider remove these 3 notes.

> 01:06:207 - completely over-mapped stream, nerf it already. You may use K ddd K this rhythm back again until 01:07:541 - . For example 01:06:207 (1) - :

> 01:16:874 - missing Finish, add it back

> 01:19:707 - ddk does not fit that single guitar chord ending to be very honest. A simple D + spinner / single spinner ending is good to go.

[]

There should be more to be polished in GDs, get a few more mods and feedback, then find me again. Good luck from now on.
Topic Starter
katacheh

Skylish wrote:

From my modding queue. Sorry for waiting so long since I am too busy irl ;w;.

[General]

> 00:00:494 - Using HS:S is too soft for Taiko HS in most cases. The music genre or dynamic of song does not support for a Soft Hitsound obviously. You may use HS:N 40~50% (the setting in Stu's Oni) instead of using HS:S 75%. (In 99% cases Taiko maps use HS:N) Ok I changed this. N 50%

[Kantan]

! 00:00:494 - not really recommended to use any SV changes in Kantan even it's just 90%. Consider remove it, except you have very strong rationale behind. changed! i dont really know about this xD

> 00:16:541 - you can remove this note for the sake of consistency at 00:18:207 (7,8,9) - , and showing a better note spread with Futsuu as well. ok i see. changed!

> 00:44:874 - Finish is available right here to state it per 2 bars. yea right!

> 00:59:374 - umm, how about shifting it 1/2 forward to 00:59:541 - , so as to fit your previous mapping style in Kiai (having the note hit on the on beat instead of the exact vocal timing)? changed!

> 01:02:207 - V / 01:02:707 - V / 01:16:874 - V Finish them, strong instrumental accompaniment.

[Futsuu]

> 00:21:202 - shifting it to 00:20:541 - seems better. Then you will have constant nnn nnn nnn pattern from 00:16:207 - to 00:20:874 - . (00:21:207 - no need to worry about missing a drum kick here since the D at 00:20:874 - dominates the music there, that's fine.) alright!

> 00:58:207 (104) - you definitely missed a Finish here. added!

> 01:00:374 - unnecessary note breaks your consistent vocal mapping channel, remove it. deleted

> 01:03:541 - / 01:04:874 - / 01:06:207 - Finisher of coz ~_~ added all

> 01:07:874 - It's a potential Finisher due to the high-pitch drum kick. I see you used it in Oni only, you may make this timing consistent in all of your difficulties. added finisher

> 01:14:541 (144,145,146) - they should be N n N because of the drum set. The instrumental part seems having a bigger dynamic here, although the melody goes to the piano. ok.. following drums now

[Muzukashii]

> 00:22:207 - shiting it to 00:21:707 - can be more consistent to 00:16:207 (9,10,11) - / 00:17:541 (14,15,16) - these patterns. Meanwhile, shifting this note can also emphasize the expression of melody-mapping. alright. changed!

> 00:36:541 - Change it to k for emphasizing the upcoming Dons, matching 1st & 3rd beat drum kick? i think this is a low pitch drum sound. keep this. upcoming Dons are already have finisher to emphase.

> 00:57:791 - shifting it to 00:57:624 - so as to let the vocal start outstandingly at 00:57:874 - ? changed!

> 01:03:541 - / 01:04:874 - / 01:06:207 - / all Finishers should be used right here lol added

> 01:07:874 - it depends what are you going to change in Futsuu, either using Finisher or normal note is fine added same as futsuu

> 01:14:541 - same case in Futsuu, I am pretty confused about the usage of Finisher here. I can understand that you want to emphasize the strong piano fz chord by using Fnishers, but on the other sides, you neglect the drum elements which should be more famailiarized actually in Taiko mapping. Therefore, how about k KK D ---> K kk D ?

[Oni]

> 00:20:874 - You missed a Finish here added

> 00:23:541 - inappropriate and unclear usage of Finish here. The obvious one should be at 00:24:874 - , not 00:23:541 - . Remove the latter's Finish please, the piano chord or drum set cannot support its existence. removed finisher

> 00:25:874 - actually you can just map what you did in Muzukashii right here, ddd suit the low-pitch drum hit triplet. kkd seems a bit weird, I can't exactly tell where it's strange though. i think 1st and 2nd drum pitch are higher than 3rd one. keep this.

> 00:26:207 - another missing Finish added;-;

> 00:26:374 - You may remove it to create a space to make the spotlight shed on the vocal. Take ref. at 00:28:707 - / 00:31:707 - removed!

> 00:36:124 - adding a kat here to form a triplet to show better note spread with Muzukashii added and changed ddd to kkk in muzu

> 00:36:541 - same advice in other difficulties, changing it to kat? i think this is low pitch drum. keep

> 00:37:707 - / 00:40:374 - / 00:43:041 - small notes fit better since they can emphasize the upcoming K/D yea changed!

> 00:46:624 - you may remove this note to redue the length of this stream (it's too long for Oni but okay for Inner Oni). Meanwhile, the drum kick at 00:46:541 - can be specified with its end. alright! changed!

> 00:48:791 - / 00:54:124 - Remove it since two consecutive 5-plets seems too much in the whole Oni. I like this and want to keep this... and this diff is like a harder oni than other GD's Oni, idk if i need to change this to inner oni.


> 00:51:374 - / 00:56:707 - be consistent! Finish is not really needed ok removed!

> 01:14:207 - How about kkd K? The following suggestion at 01:14:874 (377,378,379) - would be the same in Muzukashii. changed!
Thanks for mod!
Fantazy

Skylish wrote:

[Fan's Oni]

> 00:00:494 - I feel like the upcoming gap is too big. How about adding a kat at 00:01:179 - ? (though I know that you are trying to follow the instrumental part very strictly) i agree.. but...m.... i feel little strange? :thinking:
> 00:14:036 - ineffective green timing point, you may remove it. oh no i didnt notice it DX

> 00:17:207 (55,56,57,58,59) - sounds a bit dull, maybe putting a note at 00:17:291 - would be richer in terms of patterns add kdd

> 00:22:041 - using ddd triplet to fill up the gap to map the instrumental part as well? It seems you are going to match all things.... m......ok? add it

> 00:24:707 - this little part is very strange here: 00:24:874 - / 00:25:374 - they share the same dynamic but you used different patterns to display them. The former is loud enough for a Finisher, try not to waste it if possible... How about something like this? 00:24:707 - After listening carefull ... oh no , i do mix drum and violin? patterns D:::::: , change it

> 00:36:541 - same in other difficulties, change it to a kat? i feel d is better
> 01:06:207 - it is as same as 01:16:874 - in terms of structure, let them be consistent (either normal note/ Big note)
why i feel strange after u say????_?_? some kind of end finish feel *fix other big notes
> 01:15:374 - cymbal crash here same as 01:14:541 - , Finish is needed consequently 01:14:541 -is much more lower?
but i think that would be good feel in playing? ((change but if there are any comment
stu00608

Skylish wrote:

[Stu's Oni]

> 00:10:779 - you may add a d here because you start mapping piano since 00:08:722 - I'm following the vocal D:

> 00:46:207 - this stream is way too long, cut it down please.... Similar at Oni's case, how about removing 00:46:624 - ? no , since this diff was a Inner Oni so I want to keep it

> 00:59:541 (292,293,294) - sounds unnecessary and cannot show the similar gap like what you did at 00:56:874 - / 00:51:541 - , consider remove these 3 notes. 00:59:707 here is a drum sound , if i del that 3 notes it will be more weird so I keep it

> 01:06:207 - completely over-mapped stream, nerf it already. You may use K ddd K this rhythm back again until 01:07:541 - . For example 01:06:207 (1) - : no , same as 00:46:207

> 01:16:874 - missing Finish, add it back no , for that isn't a loud sound

> 01:19:707 - ddk does not fit that single guitar chord ending to be very honest. A simple D + spinner / single spinner ending is good to go. fixed it

[]
thank you :)

There should be more to be polished in GDs, get a few more mods and feedback, then find me again. Good luck from now on.
Aisha
Hey kata o/ modding your GD's as req :p

[Fan's Oni]

  • Hi Fantazy o/
  1. 00:01:522 (2) - this note is a little unnecesary since you're totally following piano on the intro :p
  2. 00:06:494 (15) - same as above, you could delete them :p (suggestion ofc)
  3. 00:11:979 (29) - ^ and make this 00:12:151 (30) - don according to piano pitch (almost same as next note)
  4. What about deleting 00:18:707 (65,66) - and making atriple on 00:19:207 - according to rhythm and to have consistency?
  5. Kiai is fine but notes like 00:52:874 (248) - finishing on big white lines are a little strange (about consistency)
  6. 01:14:541 (377) - big note why? D:
  7. 01:17:207 (391,392,393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400) - what about using d d k d d d k d d d on singletaps? Sounds better imo ^^
[stu's Oni]
  1. 00:03:751 (11,12) - what about using ctrl+g according to vocals? I think it feels like this pattern: 00:01:522 (4,5,6) - sounds same as the second one but isn't at all :p
  2. 00:57:541 (276,277,278,279,280,281,282) - this one could fit better at ddkkddk to emphatise more next kat. If you use lot of kat it loses the emphasis imo
  3. 01:19:291 (422) - try a don here, current kkdk at finishing stream is kind strange
I just hope it can helps you boys (you too kata xD). Nice mapset; I'm sure this will get ranked soon so GL!
stu00608

xfraczynho wrote:

Hey kata o/ modding your GD's as req :p

[stu's Oni]
  1. 00:03:751 (11,12) - what about using ctrl+g according to vocals? I think it feels like this pattern: 00:01:522 (4,5,6) - sounds same as the second one but isn't at all :p I don't think kdk will better than kkd , so keep D:
  2. 00:57:541 (276,277,278,279,280,281,282) - this one could fit better at ddkkddk to emphatise more next kat. If you use lot of kat it loses the emphasis imo fixed it
  3. 01:19:291 (422) - try a don here, current kkdk at finishing stream is kind strange
I think it's normal XD
I just hope it can helps you boys (you too kata xD). Nice mapset; I'm sure this will get ranked soon so GL!Thank you <333
Fantazy

xfraczynho wrote:

[Fan's Oni]

  • Hi Fantazy o/ O/
  1. 00:01:522 (2) - this note is a little unnecesary since you're totally following piano on the intro :p =A=? but if delete will make tooo much space?
  2. 00:06:494 (15) - same as above, you could delete them :p (suggestion ofc) =3=
  3. 00:11:979 (29) - ^ and make this 00:12:151 (30) - don according to piano pitch (almost same as next note) sound not bad 00:12:151 (30) - change d and 31 change k but 00:12:151 (30,31) - are different =A=
  4. What about deleting 00:18:707 (65,66) - and making atriple on 00:19:207 - according to rhythm and to have consistency?
    m....?_? i followed the drum and little highlight these single drums 00:19:541 (70,71) -
  5. Kiai is fine but notes like 00:52:874 (248) - finishing on big white lines are a little strange (about consistency) ah....eh...mh....mah? ?A?A?A? i make Unite for 00:47:541 (211) - 00:52:874 (247) - 00:58:207 (283) - add finish and no note after 1/2
  6. 01:14:541 (377) - big note why? D:D::::::::::: ?W? IDKwww 01:14:874 (377,380) - change these finish
  7. 01:17:207 (391,392,393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400) - what about using d d k d d d k d d d on singletaps? Sounds better imo ^^ not bad but... i steel wana highlight this part 01:18:207 - of going higher?
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