Bakari wrote:

[Hyper]
00:44:950 (1,3) - these are literally the only sliders in the entire difficulty shaped in such a way. Feels quite random and out of place, if you ask me.

Gabe wrote:

[Polka's Normal]

1. 00:12:950 (1,2) - Looking at these sliders, the flow felts weird at first. I mean, it's good, but the emplacement of the slider (2) makes me unconfortable. The reflex I would have to catch this slider would be if it was stacked with the end of this slider 00:12:150 (3) -. So, I believe that if you stack this slider with the end of this one (00:12:150 (3) - ), the movement will be better. The curves point to one another nicely. I personally think the flow is fine here.
2. 00:14:550 (2,1,2) - If you applied or not the previous suggestion, these objects are not totally aligned. It would be better if you move these in a way that would make them perfectly aligned.
3. 00:27:350 (1) - If we look previously, you were adding a new combo every two big-downbeats. At this point, you added a new combo to this circle so it would be easier to recognize the star form. However, by doing this, your new combo consistency is broken. You should delete this new combo at this point so you don't have to add a new combo to 00:30:550 (3) - and 00:43:350 (3) - since they are similar. (TL:DR, delete the new combo)
4. 00:32:150 (7) - The current new combo is pretty long and it would be suggested to add a new one at this point.

Redid all the NCs so we should be good.
Nice one! THANKS

LGV894 wrote:

no update, I think it's okay

1. 00:13:750 (3,4,5) - probably a jump to even spacing out? Have I suggested that before? a picture
2. 00:38:150 (6,1) - the spacing here is quite confusing, could trick players into thinking it is a 3/4 thing. Probable you should space it.

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00:19:350 (1,2,3,4) - this would look better as a shape rather than a zigzag, a shape matches well with the jumps after.
00:35:750 (3,5) - the flow feels a little weird, i think blanketing that slider and hit circle will fix it, 00:36:150 (4,5,6) - will then form a nice isosceles like pattern. reuse here maybe? 00:44:150 (4,5,6) -
00:37:350 - add a hit circle, there is a clear beat in the song here

nice hitsounds bruh

Hard:

modding is hard

besides that one labeled point this was pretty cool.
00:35:350 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think it be better to put the hit circles in a shape and flow into the sliders, this looks really messy
use this( 00:28:950 (1,2,3) - ) pattern here( 00:46:750 (2,3,4) - ) maybe?

Advanced:

advanced modding skills

This is just a suggestion, this difficulty was done really well!

00:36:750 (5) - and 00:37:150 (1) - think 2 hit circles here will be better

Bakari wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:13:750 (3,4,5) - probably a jump to even spacing out? Have I suggested that before? a picture
2. 00:38:150 (6,1) - the spacing here is quite confusing, could trick players into thinking it is a 3/4 thing. Probable you should space it.

Bakari wrote:

However, it is not. The sliders clearly break the style context as well as challenge readability, they also feel very out of place. Would you mind giving us a good reason to keep them?

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CanadianBaka wrote:

what the hell is that avatar pickkle? I think you have some explaining to do

ezek wrote:

Chiquitibum a la bim bom ba!
Chiquitibum a la bim bom ba!
A la bio, a la bao, a la bim bom ba!
Stingy! Stingy!, RA RA RA!

Pickkle wrote:

Polka's Normal

00:17:750 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make a different pattern? (suggestion) Why
00:17:750 (1,2,3,4) - maybe curve these. They are


very well made map. thx

CanadianBaka wrote:

what? i think this map is way far from being bubbled. sorry. (no offence bakari)


[kris-kris-kreme]

00:19:350 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this buildup is bad, sorry. well, maybe I shouldn't say it like that. mostly concerned about 00:20:950 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these notes right here, they don't look nice and they flow horribly. first of all 00:21:950 (2,3,4) - this is really linear, breaking your circular flow immediately, i mean, 00:21:150 (2,3,4) - triangle/circular flow, 00:21:950 (2,3,4) - linear flow? The map is not supposed to have much circular flow in it. The map is very "industrial" and "snappy", so I mapped it accordingly.

00:23:750 (1,2,3,4,1) - these kickslider's don't work with the SV you have, they are really awkward to play. I would raise SV I honestly don't see a reason to do this. I think it plays fine.

00:25:750 (1,2,3,4,5) - here you have perfect circular flow, but 00:26:950 (1,2,3,1) - right here the circular flow you have turns into vertical flow, which feels really off and awkward. As I mentioned earlier, I didn't want the map to have a lot of circular flow in it. I used this snappy flow to emphasis my point. This specific type of directional emphasis is called a "drop off".

00:29:750 (4,5,1) - here again, flow drastically changes to that weird diagonal straight flow, also 00:29:950 (5,1) - space these further apart, there's no emphasis at all ^

00:30:150 (1,2,3,1,2) - these are two completely different flow and patterns, even though it's literally the same exact thing over again The rhythm actually does change, therefore I changed.

00:30:950 (1,4) - why aren't these stacked? This just looks really weird and you don't use it anytime before or after Fixed; I must have forgot to stack them because that was my intention.

00:31:750 (4,1,2) - honestly again, the weird flow. If it helps let me draw it out for you: https://puu.sh/tRMXf/4be5b5b437.jpg ;w; As mentioned before

00:32:950 (3,4,5) - I can circle my cursor to hit these notes, but 00:33:750 (1,2,3) - riight here I can't, because your making me go really deep when trying to hit 00:34:150 (3) - this slider from 00:33:950 (2) - this circle. ^^; as mentioned before

00:38:150 (1) - no, this shape doesn't work with your current SV. I really don't see why not. It's not like you're going to be following the slider, and it's just for aesthetic. Like I mentioned in my previous mod, the word is ugly and I think the slider kind of fits.

00:42:150 (2,4) - wow, why do you suddenly stack a sliderend? Uhm... So they don't overlap? ^^;


okay, thats just the flow issues and aesthetical issues pushed out of the way. I wanna adress the spacing and emphasis issues also


00:30:550 (2,3) - 2.3x / 2.4x apart, but 00:31:350 (2,3) - these are 3.2x apart? There's no emphasis at all... I agree. I changed a little bit!

00:31:750 (4) - ctrl + g this for better emphasis on 00:32:150 (1) - this note, it will also make flow better Fixed already

00:33:950 (2,3) - 2.9x apart, 00:34:750 (5,6) - 1.8x apart? They are the exact same so they should have the exact same spacing... Uhm... They're not 2.9x apart, but I understand ^^;

00:35:550 (2,3) - 2.3x spacing 00:41:550 (2,1) - 1/6x spacing? also, no emphasis 00:41:750 (1) - on this? you should space it more These are completely different sections... I don't think I need to. Fixed 00:41:750 - though.

00:43:350 (1,2) - now for some reason it's almost spread 3x apart Yes...? ;w; That is not even a mod you're telling me what the map says.

00:46:350 (6,1) - 1.8x apart? ^ =w=.


ok, there's a bunch of random spacing, the aesthetetics are really bad (mainly talking about all of the unnecesarry overlaps) and the flow is pour. There's a lot of room for improvement in it Same with your grammar c:


I like LGV's hyper, really nice diff


[Hard]


very simmilar problems to the diff above ^^

00:14:150 (4,5) - why is there no spacing emphasis? I did not want any here. This "section" is meant to be just the beginning, so I didn't put much "emphasis" on anything.

00:16:150 (1) - again, this should have a slight spacing emphasis (yes, you have to have proper spacing in hards also regardless if it might make the sr jump slightly) ^

00:17:750 (1) - same idea as above, this should have emphasis ^

00:21:950 (5,6) - no need to emphasize this one, it's a very noticeable inconsistency. I didn't ;w;. 00:20:950 (1,2,5) - are in a line anyway.

00:26:950 (5,1) - why seperated by 1.9x? To support reverse flow.

00:28:150 (4) - same here, there's no music behind it allowing you to increase the spacing ^

00:28:950 (1,2,3) - why such a weird overlap? I'd also like to say 00:26:950 (5,1,3,4,2,3) - these should all have the same amount of spacing I guess...? I don't think the overlap is weird :/ Both sliders are the same distance from each other and they both cover equal amount of the circle. That's like saying stream are all weird overlaps

00:30:550 (1,2,3,4) - why really noticeable and big increase in spacing? Nice try! c: They're actually all smaller than the average jumps. The reason for this is because the flow changes to a straight/linear type of flow. You're not jumping farther, you're just moving in a "plain" line.

00:31:950 (6,1) - the aesthetic for this isn't very nice I think it's fine ;w;

00:35:350 (1,2,3,4) - this isn't really a pattern... it goes from up down up.... sideways? 00:35:950 (4) - this note should point up. But it would make an overlap, so you should fix that. I knew exactly what you were thinking, you wanted it to look nicer so you didn't make it go fully up, but that tells me your too lazy to move some notes around to make the overlap look nicer. You are wrong once again! ^w^. That was not my intention. My intention was for the player to move left and then to be snapped back to the right by the upcoming sliders. Nice try though!

00:38:950 (3,4) - this looks like a 1/2 stack with your ar I think it's fine. Even if it's tricky to read, it's a Hard. You don't have to FC first try.

00:39:350 (4) - nc

00:42:150 (3,4) - again, no need for emphasis here, also 00:42:150 (3,4,1,2,4) - inconsistent spacing between these two lmfao I like how you call that emphasis even though the jump before it is .5x larger. I also don't understand the second part.

00:46:750 (2,3) - what exactly is this? you can obviously see it doesn't resemble 00:42:950 (1,2) - this lmfao it's not supposed to


again, the spacing, flow, and aesthetics are really poorly made in this diff and can improve a lot!


the advanced diff looks OK but there's still a lot of room for improvement aesthetic wise



ok, don't take this as a vendetta, i'm not out to get you, but i'm quite honestly surprised as to why this was bubbled (no offence bakari) idk kinda seems like it lol

CanadianBaka wrote:

I looked over my mod and I must have been tired or not that into it and I didn't give that well explanations

I will be taking my time through this mod to give as much information as I can



[Kris]


00:21:750 (1,2,3,4) - this shape doesn't compliment, or 'carry on' the flow from 00:20:950 (1,2,3,4) - these set of notes. It would be a lot better if you chose one of the two patterns and kept them consistent through the shapes. I personally like how you made a triangle 00:21:150 (2,3,4) - right here, so instead of it being a snappy linear jump 00:21:950 (2,3,4) - here, I would just mimmick the 'triangle' shape you did. Also, 00:21:150 (2,2) - this overlap would look way better if you either made the overlap deeper (overlap them more) stack, or just completely not overlap (which I don't suggest not overlapping because it would most likely ruin the whole aesthetic of the buildup) The reason I chose this specific patters was to group (2,3,4) and to also being the player to the right side of the screen before jumping to the stream on the left.

00:23:750 (1,2,3,4) - the reason I say these kicksliders don't work with current SV is because kicksliders aren't normally used in 4.2* (based on my experience, when I was 100k or sth) and usually wait to be used in highish bpm 4.9* up. The kicksliders you have can be awkward to play because most players playing this will be around 100kish and at 100k you aren't introduced to kicksliders yet, what makes it worse is the fact that I hear way more than just the 1/4, I'm hearing more 1/8!! I would just make it a relatively slow slider, like 0.3.3x SV (just pop into taiko mode to do that) and position the notes something like this The reason I keep the kicksliders is because the music has the quiet "wobbles" in it. I did lower the SV though to be better readable. Also when I was 130k-100k I was playing 5* maps ^^; so I feel like in this case, that won't play much of a role.


so you want the map a more snappy map? ok... but there are still a lot of patterns that can maybe be improved aesthetic wise

00:28:950 (1,2,3) - considering you want a snappy feel to the map, players cant snap well between these circular placed objects, making it a tight pattern like this will feel much better and go with your map... even something like this would be better, of course you'd fix the spacing after making the changes. Not everything is supposed to be snappy... I just wanted a snappy feel overall!

00:34:550 (4,5,6) - here again it's hard for the players to snap, 00:34:950 (6) - it's hard to hit this because your making the player travel diagonally across the screen from 00:34:750 (5) - this note rather then the back and forthy motion that you want

00:38:150 (1) - this shape looks better like this , you still get to keep the 'weirdness' of it and it looks much more polished. I don't know why you hate this slider so much ;w;


00:48:150 (1,1,1,1) - this is just personal preference, but maybe making these all NC would look nice :3 Meh ;w; No thank you I think it's fine



tbh, I think I wasn't thinking very well when I made my earlier negative mod, but yes, this map can certainly be improved all around. I hope to see this ranked in the future.

CanadianBaka wrote:

whats your opinion on the kicksliders, Bakari? They show the rhythm complexity escalation well, why not let them be?

I think the triangles with a hold note you pointed out aren't consistent with 00:28:950 (1,2,3) - this, I know flow can be subjective but if you look at this triangle it's more circular playing wise, but triangles like 00:33:750 (1,2,3) - this can't be played with a wide circular movement but more of a snappy movement. I know it's subjective but the flow can at least be consistent in some places? You can't criticize triangles for not giving circular flow. At all. They're triangles. Besides, it sounds more like "I know it's subjective, but I expect it to be subjective in a way that is comfortable with me". Correct me if you have more opinions to back you up.


00:34:750 (5,6) - for this triangle your making the player go up completely diagonally, jumping from 00:34:750 (5) - this note to 00:34:950 (6) - this one. zig zag stuff everywhere, or that's how I play it.


I also think spacing's an issue in some places Sliders are insensitive to accuracy as of now, besides slightly broken DS can work here. So I guess spacing shouldn't be a big issue as long as you still can read patterns. After all, it still gets the idea delivered and does not hurt readability.


00:33:950 (2,3) - spaced 2.5x however 00:34:750 (5) - this is only 1.9x / 2,0x ?

00:42:350 (3,4) - here it jumps to 2.6x when it's been consistently at 1.9x

00:43:350 (1,2) - why is this now 2.8x?

I mean, I just highlight a random note and look at this:

again, another random note ( 00:47:350 (4) - ) and spacing's like this, with music not even emphasizing it


I think you can do a better look at spacing




the flow honestly seems pretty fun other then the triangles I pointed up there, but the spacing is really inconsistent, can you check Bakari?



sorry for bugging you guys so much, you just want it ranked but these things keep bothering me T. T how can I say no to some extra mods? It's a good thing we've got our backs covered when there're caring people like you.

CanadianBaka wrote:

I like LGV's hyper, really nice diff

LGV894 wrote:

CanadianBaka wrote:

I like LGV's hyper, really nice diff

thanks lol

ok what happened to my map?

wtf why did my slider revert back to the old one?