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Cool map, good luck!
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- Stack leniency at 2 is too low, I'd raise it ples
- Honestly overall, some of the overlaps I'm not too much a fan of, like at 00:10:421 (5,6,7,1) or 00:44:828 (1,2,3,4). Polish things up a bit.
- 00:04:828 (5) - Object not snapped to timeline.
- 00:05:335 (7) - Object not snapped to timeline.
- 00:11:438 (2,4) - The difference in spacing like this can make this section a bit hard to interpret, especially with the rhythm changes (1.3x vs 2.1x) try to be a little more consistent with this especially at the introduction of the rhythm changes.
- 00:13:472 (4) - Honestly the placement of this is really hard to read in gameplay, perhaps you could stack it on the end of 00:13:642 (1)?
- 00:19:828 (2) - Overlap this like you do the other 1/4s. Making clear differentiations in how you map between how you map 1/2 and 1/4 rhythms can help a lot for odd rhythms like this, slightly overlapping it like you do the other instances of 1/4 will help players to recognize how this should play. If you do change it, make it so that it fits the mood of the song at least. You switch several times throughout the map, I'd go through and make it more consistent.
- 00:33:303 (3,1) - Aesthetically speaking, things like this would look nicer if you make them parallel :>
- 00:35:337 (1) - Would be nicer if you could blanket the second curve of this around (2) better.
- 00:35:845 (2,3,4) - Odd DS change here? The triple has 0.46x and 0.67x, might want to resnap.
- 00:38:642 (2,3) - Just an idea maybe, but to emphasize sound/SV changes perhaps you could pull it off of the overlap. Puush is dead on me so I can't snap a picture, but basically keep (2,3) sort of overlapped but away from (1) if that makes sense.
- 00:49:489 (3) - Not as bad as the last, but re-snap the DS here again too.
- 00:51:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try to line up the circles underneath with the sliders better, since you do so with the middle slider+circle combo.
- Just re-iterating, I think this map would be a lot better if you consistently map similar sounds. 01:24:914 (4,5) - vs 01:26:015 (3,4) - for example, same rhythm but mapped differently can be confusing, especially in a part where the song's feelings aren't changing too much. Be more consistent with things like this.
- 01:30:845 (4) - DS issue
- 01:42:455 (3) - I don't know... the sound at the end of this slider could certainly be more emphasized, no? Why not give it its own note? two 3/4 sliders into the next measure would fit perfectly I say.
- 01:58:388 (3) - Make this a kickslider? I know you turned down how much of this is a stream as to make it more fitting for the difficulty, but straight up ignoring it and continuing the 1/2 isn't too fitting either.
- 01:59:405 - I'd put a circle here and then the spinner 1/4 after, since as it is you aren't really representing the powerful note it finishes on by putting a spinner there.
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- 01:48:218 (7) - Sliderend not snapped, please re-snap to timeline.
- Again, fix stacking leniency, 2 isn't necessary for what you're doing.
- 00:04:659 (4,5,6) - Differentiate spacing a little here? 2 different rhythms, same spacing.
- 00:10:083 - The cymbal here could be mapped, no? Would be easier to interpret the rhythm that way anyways.
- 00:10:421 (2,3,1) - Just my personal preference, this looks super weird. Maybe overlap it in a straight fashion and not a curved one?
- I have a big issue with your rhythm choices here early and I strongly suggest you change this. The song is more intense in places like 00:13:642 (1,2,3,4), and you have very simple rhythms to represent it, and yet at 00:19:066 (1,2,3,4), the song gets calmer, whilst you give it more dense rhythms. Rhythm wise this should definitely be switched, or perhaps you could do the slider thing throughout this section and just change the spacing to fit the intensity? Regardless, I'd change how you do this.
- 00:29:913 (1) - to 00:32:286 (1) - love this part, nice.
- 00:32:625 (1,1) - Just nitpicking, nice blanket idea but center the curve of the big slider a bit better so the blanket isn't slightly off.
- Starting to feel like you changed the spacing on triples on purpose, so if you did I'm sorry. In case you didn't though, both 00:45:506 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - have spacing's of 0.1x difference between the notes in the triple, since you copy pasted it, so I'd adjust it.
- 01:04:998 (12,13,1) - SV changes made DS here a bit weird, can you make them even?
- 01:05:845 (1) - Perhaps place this note a little higher, it makes the movement sharper to the note for emphasis on the kick and then gives better entry into a really unique stream shape.
- 01:58:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,1) - Boii this shape tho. Could you ctrl+shift+f a better rounded shape maybe?
- Overall, I think your rhythm choices are fitting and work great for this song with just a few nitpicky things, but I think you should try to improve consistency throughout the map in spacing/emphasis and work on aesthetics a bit (overlaps, blanketing, stacks, angles, etc.)
Cool map, good luck!