Togetic wrote:
Renbery's Beginner00:17:323 (1) - this slider shape i feel looks strange because of how much it is bent so i would bend it less for aesthetic purposes made less bent
00:39:226 (3) - ^ ^nubery's Easy00:20:544 (2,1) - these two sliders look out of place considering before all the slider shapes were all curved and blanketed to reflect change in music
00:37:937 (1) - this slider shape works better here although i'm still not a big fan will keep as is
Lexis wrote:
[nubery's Easy ]
00:14:746 (1,4) - This overlap looks really weird I think it's fine-- doesn't overlap in game and barely overlaps as it's fading on editor
00:25:053 (1,2) - You could improve this blanket tried
00:28:274 (2,3) - ^ tried
00:35:038 (1,2,4) - ^ tried
renbery
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thanks both!