Xinely wrote:

from pikachu PIKA PIKA PIKAAAAAA


Kotori will do changes for hitsounds since he did the hitsounds job!
General :
- you may want to add empty sound of soft-sliderslide and soft-sliderslide2.. that sliderslide is so noisy here aaa not fit with calm song imo

Easy :
- 00:17:165 (2) - make spacing consistent. 0,84x and 0,89x are different things fixed!
- 00:27:665 (2) - miss whistle
- 00:27:665 (2) - 00:31:665 (2) - ^ i guess. just saw you did whistle at 4th whitetick for 00:23:665 - 00:25:665 (4) - so yeah
- 00:59:665 (2) - same, miss whistle i guess
- 01:00:165 (3,1) - at least copy paste for a mirror design pls fixed!
- 01:04:165 (4) - is whistle on body intentional? it doesnt sound nicely tho
- 01:05:165 (5) - ^
- 00:17:971 - unsnapped timing line deleted!

Normal :
- 00:02:915 (2) - spacing consistent pls :C changed
- 00:25:165 (3) - somehow the rhythm feels something missing like for 00:25:415 - 00:25:790 - , try make like http://puu.sh/t2zPG/803f802942.jpg?
- 00:33:165 (3) - ^ for those two, I don't really agree with it, since we don't really pay attention that beat, and i wanted to map some basics beats for the normal, so i didn't changed those two
- 00:53:165 (3,4) - rip design for (4), try at least http://puu.sh/t2zWd/b535cdac0d.jpg for cuter design? D: sure fixed!
- 00:53:165 (3,4) - intentional whistle for body?

Hard :
- 00:07:165 (3,4,5,6) - make more perfect square design
- 00:09:165 (3,4,5,6) - ^ changed for those two!
- 00:18:540 - why not add circle here? the music is so strong and feels weird to skip refused, because we hear a lot those beats in the song, and in my opinion, if i would map this beat, i should also map the others, and it would increase the difficulty of this map to high.. so i don't really agree with this idea!
- 00:25:665 - this should be mapped. you can hear at this drum is same with 00:25:540 - , skipping one of them is totally bad imo fixed!
- 00:32:165 (1,2) - just my taste but you often do straight sliders here it turning to be bored for me, how about a bit change like http://puu.sh/t2ArA/6d8ea8e442.jpg or something else i wanted to keep a basic patterns and repetitive, because the song is like that, and i wanted to represent this song into the map!
- 00:37:540 (7) - 241,110 for perfect line fixed!
- 00:48:165 (1) - why not make jump here for consistent with 00:36:165 (1) - ? fixed!
- 01:04:165 (1) - ^ same!
- 00:50:165 (1) - is whistle body intentional?
- 01:05:165 (5) - fits for jump too. your diff somehow is too ez and i think this can be a jump yes! i agree!

std is fine after check my mod for me just not sure with taiko because i cant judge so i leave a std icon later instead

Xinely wrote:

from pikachu

General :
- you may want to add empty sound of soft-sliderslide and soft-sliderslide2.. that sliderslide is so noisy here aaa not fit with calm song imo wtf,where is a soft-sliderslide pls i only hear sliderslide with normal but well gonna change

Easy :
- 00:17:165 (2) - make spacing consistent. 0,84x and 0,89x are different things
- 00:27:665 (2) - miss whistle added
- 00:27:665 (2) - 00:31:665 (2) - ^ i guess. just saw you did whistle at 4th whitetick for 00:23:665 - 00:25:665 (4) - so yeah added
- 00:59:665 (2) - same, miss whistle i guess
- 01:00:165 (3,1) - at least copy paste for a mirror design pls
- 01:04:165 (4) - is whistle on body intentional? it doesnt sound nicely tho am a idiot sry~ fixed
- 01:05:165 (5) - ^^^
- 00:17:971 - unsnapped timing line

Normal :
- 00:02:915 (2) - spacing consistent pls :C
- 00:25:165 (3) - somehow the rhythm feels something missing like for 00:25:415 - 00:25:790 - , try make like http://puu.sh/t2zPG/803f802942.jpg?
- 00:33:165 (3) - ^
- 00:53:165 (3,4) - rip design for (4), try at least http://puu.sh/t2zWd/b535cdac0d.jpg for cuter design? D:
- 00:53:165 (3,4) - intentional whistle for body? I'm a idiot 2.0 fixed~

Hard :
- 00:07:165 (3,4,5,6) - make more perfect square design
- 00:09:165 (3,4,5,6) - ^
- 00:18:540 - why not add circle here? the music is so strong and feels weird to skip
- 00:25:665 - this should be mapped. you can hear at this drum is same with 00:25:540 - , skipping one of them is totally bad imo
- 00:32:165 (1,2) - just my taste but you often do straight sliders here it turning to be bored for me, how about a bit change like http://puu.sh/t2ArA/6d8ea8e442.jpg or something else
- 00:37:540 (7) - 241,110 for perfect line
- 00:48:165 (1) - why not make jump here for consistent with 00:36:165 (1) - ?
- 01:04:165 (1) - ^
- 00:50:165 (1) - is whistle body intentional? wow i'm really a that big idiot... fixed !
- 01:05:165 (5) - fits for jump too. your diff somehow is too ez and i think this can be a jump

std is fine after check my mod for me just not sure with taiko because i cant judge so i leave a std icon later instead

Volta wrote:

[Kantan]
the diffs is currently lacks of 4/1 breaks and consistency.

00:32:665 (33,34) - new players will need 4/1 break often, so consider to delete these notes
00:34:415 - pattern with 1/2 beat is hard for newbie, delete this note and just stick to simple beat This shows the start of the kiai time
00:37:665 - and try to add note here instead if you want to make it more dense No, it is fine
00:40:665 - delete

00:42:415 - delete to make more simple beat
00:42:665 - add d to make it consistent with 00:34:665 -
00:44:665 - delete It will stay where it is
00:45:665 - and 00:46:665 - add note No, sorry
00:48:665 (53,54,55) - delete to make 4/1 break

00:50:165 ~ end - try to make similar structure as above, maybe with some color variation I think it is already fine.

_Meep_ wrote:

this is some very complicated applause that apparently goes for a whole one minute, vinxis people.

_Meep_ wrote:

this is some very complicated applause that apparently goes for a whole one minute, vinxis people.

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

• 
  
  No need Widescreen Support (taiko)

• 
  
  OD5→3 HP6→9
  
  SV1.68→1.40
  
  (song setup only now)

• 
  
  I prefer OD4.for OD spread.
  
  hmm..pattern is good.but,dencity is high.
  
  e.g. 00:38:165 - 00:45:165 -
  
  I prefer use bule tick on muzukashii ↑
  
  If remove some notes,spread will be bad.→Muzukashi must remove some notes.
  
  00:56:665 (24,25) - swap.I think dkk dkk is little strange.
  
  01:05:915 - you can change d.for emphasized to next 01:06:165 -

Futsuu]

• 
  
  I prefer OD4.for OD spread. Rebalanced HP & OD for spread.
  
  hmm..pattern is good.but,dencity is high.
  
  e.g. 00:38:165 - 00:45:165 - I like what i've done here, no real explain to say, but for me, it sounds good enough
  I prefer use bule tick on muzukashii ↑
  
  If remove some notes,spread will be bad.→Muzukashi must remove some notes.
  
  00:56:665 (24,25) - swap.I think dkk dkk is little strange. Ye, applied
  
  01:05:915 - you can change d.for emphasized to next 01:06:165 - No need to contrast the last note.

1. 00:50:665 - Ajoute un don pour "équilibrer" la densité de la section 00:34:165 - à 00:50:165 - et de l'autre moitié, et pour être cohérent avec 00:34:665 (33) - ?
2. 00:46:915 - Cette note placé sur 1/2 semble trop par hasard et trop soudain, parce que tous les rythmes de la map ne sont que sur les ticks blancs. Je l'aurais bougé à 00:46:665 -.

sheela wrote:

[Oui's Kantan]

1. 00:50:665 - Ajoute un don pour "équilibrer" la densité de la section 00:34:165 - à 00:50:165 - et de l'autre moitié, et pour être cohérent avec 00:34:665 (33) - ?
2. 00:46:915 - Cette note placé sur 1/2 semble trop par hasard et trop soudain, parce que tous les rythmes de la map ne sont que sur les ticks blancs. Je l'aurais bougé à 00:46:665 -.

Tu peux me rappeler!

Volta wrote:

xinely asked me to look at the taiko again before she icon it, actually i'm still concerned with the kantan because there is no 4/1 break from 00:16:165 ~ until end which is almost 1 minute. one possible solution is to move 00:49:165 - to 00:46:665 - and then rearrange the color to your taste. ok

additonal:
00:29:165 - consider to change to k, it fits with the drum and high pitch piano sound i think it is already good
00:33:665 - you said in previous reply you want to show the start of kiai time, maybe adding k here for the drum will satisfy you it will be too much in this case

Aldwych wrote:

Gonna look on the evening and leave some points in Addition of volta's thoughts aswell.

As promised :

00:13:165 (8) - I would delete this note just because looking previously you have (3 * 4/1 + 3 * 2/1) note construction, so it's just a consistency point.

00:26:165 (23) - Even tho it looks like solid in terms of pattern consistency, it's not really on the rythm side because you've done an offset on your placements. In fact there should have a triple starting here. Althought i don't mind that much it is for me good to notice it. there will be three triplets in a row, which will be too much

00:30:165 (28,29,30,31) - As volta said there's a lack of breaks which i also agree, tbh this is a good place for, on the other hand, i would like to point the 4* 2/1 which is not regular compared to what we have before.

00:44:165 (45,46,47,48,49,50) - 00:52:165 (54,55,56,57) - Why such long 2/1?

01:05:165 (69,70,71) - This is the only triple you didn't start on a big white tick.

Also about the kiai, i don't really feel any difficulty evolution in the kiai part, but maybe it's not on your mapping style to do this.

These are my points on the kantan, you can talk with volta if they sounds decent or not if you prefer.

Secretpipe wrote:

when rank

also futsuu needs to be denser at the start

Denied, Non-sense mapping which will have no link with what i map, and tbh, that's not the place for looking on spread since it's the calm intro.

Nofool wrote:

Chromoxx est pas totalement en tord niveau spread, gros jump entre les diffs, jusqu'à la muzu est une oni quoi. Mes suggestions c'est surtout de la simplification + variation pour la kantan qu'il manque askip d'après le com du BN. Clairement si vous appliquez rien il va nuke la map maintenant que tu l'as appelé @Pachiru :/ donc j'vous conseil clairement d'appliquer des trucs/aller dans le sens de mes suggestions. Ca rendrait le set bien + safe.

le truc qui me tilt tho :
kantan => OD4/HP9
futsuu => OD4.5/HP8
muzukashii => OD5/HP7

Franchement les settings sont bien, perso c'est pas une map qui mérite le joueur de punir à mort, surtout vu le BPM, j'aurais pas dit non si le BPM était élevé, mais c'est pas le cas (pour la défense de ma futsuu, vu que y'a du 3/4, ca a encore moins d'intérêt de relever encore plus l'OD)


[Futsuu]
Mouais rien d'affolant non plus mais bon le fait que tu t'attaches juste aux sons de la musiques sans grosse réflexion rend le truc moins cohérent/plus dure qu'il pourrait l'être.

*- S'il cencerise encore sur le début, sachant que j'ai demandé à Oui de faire exactement le même que toi sans avoir vu cque t'avais fait lul (donc il aurait autant de notes au lieu d'une de plus), j'ai une idée vite fait : ajoutes des d à - 00:05:665 - et - 00:13:665 - ? C'est un peu freestyle mais ça passe relativement bien avec la song => k - - - d - - d k - - - d *2 Perso je trouve ca moche vu que les notes ajoutés ne correspondent a aucun layer. Mais j'ai quand même map plus a cet endroit, mais vraiement pour les jean-nazispread (c'est devenu pire que la peste cet argument, on peux pas simplement en venir à "est-ce que c'est décent pour une futsuu?" "Est-ce que c'est valable par rapport au reste de la diff?" Oui ou Non.

*- 00:18:165 - jusqu'au début 540 (39,40) - toutes celles là j'les aurais delete cash et surtout celles avant le kiai. Certe c'est dans la song et y'a quand même la répétition du dkk kd mais ces notes approtent pas grand chose à part un gros diff jump par rapport à la kantan lul. Je vois pas le reel intéret a part casser la forme/le relief de la map et donne une futsuu au rythme basique comme au final 95% des futsuu
En plus de delete tout ça j'aurais décallé - 00:28:915 (29) - à - 00:28:665 - histoire d'avoir le même schéma qu'à - 00:20:665 (10,11) -.
Ca fait répétition de d - - dkk - kd - d - k - - - d - - dkk - kd - - kd, y'a des beat ignorés ouais mais idk c'est plus cohérent en terme de look, plus simple à jouer donc meilleurs spread avec la kantan. Tu veux carrément décaler à des endroits ou y'a rien, je connais l'overmapping et l'undermapping mais le void mapping, ca non.

*- kiai : Pareil j'virerais les - 00:41:540 (7,8) - / - 00:49:540 (5,6) - (surtout ça avant une big note) / - 00:57:540 (27,28) - / - 01:05:540 (5,6) -. Juste histoire de calmer le diff jump avec la kantan, les variations sont ok mais ces 5/4 sont trop sévères encore j'pense. A la place de - 01:05:540 (5,6) - j'callerais même un d à - 01:05:790 - pour la petite variation finale. Même réponse que pour le relief

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gl

Nofool wrote:

[Kantan]
C'est (pas spécialement) mauvais mais bon le but c'est juste que l'autre BN dise c'est ok donc faut map en fonction de lui.. vu ses coms ton but ici est d'avoir + de variation mais en restant simple comme c'est une kantan. Mes idées pour t'aider :

*- Début jusqu'à - 00:16:165 (9) -, + de variation potentiel, tu peux alterner k d k d etc. - 00:02:165 - / - 00:06:165 - / ... t'as un petit son un peu + aigu qui est ok pour des k.

*- 00:09:165 (2) - J'vois l'idée mais ça rend bof comme y'a vraiment rien qui le supporte plus qu'ailleurs dans la song, delete j'pense.

*- 00:18:165 - Jusqu'au kiai, pour cette part à ta place j'ferais un truc + safe, assez répétitif avec 2 break dont 1 avant le kiai. Concrètement j'aurais fait ça :
ddk d k ddk d (break) kdk d k kdk d (break) kiai
Les breaks sont indispensables imo (surtout celui avant le kiai), ça te ferait delete - 00:25:165 (17) - et - 00:33:165 (26) -. Les kdk sur la deuxième moitiée sonnent ok avec la musique et font bien différents des ddk.

* - kiai : Ton break est nickel, problème du bn la variation comme d'hab. Le fait qu'il y est que des triplets lui cache la variation en fait j'pense. Du coup jte propose d'intriduire des doublets tout en gardant un truc clean répétitif :

- du début jusqu'à ton premier break : d k ddk d k dd kd k ddk d k k (break)
^ Jte conseil de start les triplets au deuxième temps, le premier ici ce serait à - 00:36:165 -, juste histoire de varier avec la formation de la première moitiée de la map. Après le dd kd commencerait à - 00:40:165 -. Avec ça il risque pas de te casser les couilles à cause du spam triplets.Et jee garderais tes deux k à la fin de la part, de la variation en+.

- break jusqu'à la fin : d kdd k dd kddk d kdd k dd kddk D (fin)
^ Cette fois j'commencerais les triplets encore à un endroit différent toujours pour la variation, le premier ici serait à - 00:51:165 -. Surtout gros changement j'utiliserais du dd kddk, ça reste hyper simple vu le bpm mais surtout grosse variation et compliquation des patterns sur la fin de la map (y'a un petit effet + fort sur cette dernière partie de la song donc ça passe bien).
La diff avec les changements que j'propose serait à 0,92* donc ça va large.

Xinely wrote:

Oni :
- 00:12:415 (37) - probably remove this? it makes inconsistency around 00:04:415 - because last was empty. and personally i think the rhythms are too long compared with muzu pattern is getting longer here for the sake of not being repetitive and buildup, i added a note on 00:16:415 - though to further that and not make it look like just a one time thing
- 00:51:665 (227) - 00:59:665 (271) - personally i think k is better due drum is strong and music's stress is increasing. basically the music is same like 00:39:665 (165) - it's keeping consistency with the sounds like 00:38:915 (161,162,163) - and if i changed there would be too much ddkdk

well what is taiko i dont even know

Secretpipe wrote:

c t rapid!

gl pour remettre ça sur les rails pd

Pachiru wrote:

I got contact with Ayyri on Discord, so she send me code when she finished ~

Secretpipe wrote:

c t rapid!

gl pour remettre ça sur les rails pd

qoot8123 wrote:

Before this map got qualified, remember to enable "widescreen support" in taiko difficulties, because there is storyboard in this set.

1. Hitsounds must be .wav. Please replace or convert the soft-hitclap hitsound with a .wav one.
2. Shouldn't Taiko difficulties have epilepsy warning enabled?

1. 00:06:165 (1,1) - try to individually inverse (Ctrl+G), this way the whole Intro will stick to x0.4 spacing or some values around it. It ust makes it feel a bit better-thought.
   Note: it'd also be cool if you could match some beat/slidertick and the red anchor in the sliderbody. This way everything in these sliders would follow the song.
2. 00:23:165 (2,3) - minor - the transition could be slightly improved by softening the angle between these two.What do you think about this picture?
3. 01:02:165 (1,2,3) - the transition is not exactly smooth. Let's go for something a bit more natural here? example

1. 00:16:165 (1,2) - given that this is the only overlap of this kind you probably should avoid this as it stands out of the context and feels a bit unfitting with your style.
2. 00:47:165 (3) - minor - slightly overlaps with HP Bar. Is there any way to place it lower?
3. 01:00:165 (1,2,3,4) - why do you turn (4) to go in a different direction? All four of these sliders follow similar beats, so it's probably better to make them look similar as well.
   00:52:165 (1,2,3,4) - same.

1. 00:33:665 - why would you leave a strong beat unmapped? Perhaps you could have it mapped and add some 1/4 sliders, so that it doesn't feel too streamy. Or you could simplify the rhythm like this

Bakari wrote:

You see, when you speak French no one really understands a thing and you pretty much leave modders without any clue of what exactly is happening. At least give a short comment on what you've discussed already :c Indeed! I'm sorry, in the short discussion we had, Gabe told me to ask Irre for the re-bubble, but since he didn't checked the mapset, I wont do this, that's all :3
[General]

1. Hitsounds must be .wav. Please replace or convert the soft-hitclap hitsound with a .wav one.
2. Shouldn't Taiko difficulties have epilepsy warning enabled? Since there is no flashing stuff on the Taiko diffs SB, I think that it's quite useless to add it o,o But if you want me to add it, I can !

[Easy]

1. 00:06:165 (1,1) - try to individually inverse (Ctrl+G), this way the whole Intro will stick to x0.4 spacing or some values around it. It ust makes it feel a bit better-thought.
   Note: it'd also be cool if you could match some beat/slidertick and the red anchor in the sliderbody. This way everything in these sliders would follow the song.
2. 00:23:165 (2,3) - minor - the transition could be slightly improved by softening the angle between these two.What do you think about this picture?
3. 01:02:165 (1,2,3) - the transition is not exactly smooth. Let's go for something a bit more natural here? example

[Normal]

1. 00:16:165 (1,2) - given that this is the only overlap of this kind you probably should avoid this as it stands out of the context and feels a bit unfitting with your style. I agree that's something that I don't use anymore on the diff apart this, but I also did a small overlap on the Easy diff, and to me it doesn't look quite disturbing, also it kinda mark the strong beat, by going in the other way than the curving slider.
2. 00:47:165 (3) - minor - slightly overlaps with HP Bar. Is there any way to place it lower?
3. 01:00:165 (1,2,3,4) - why do you turn (4) to go in a different direction? All four of these sliders follow similar beats, so it's probably better to make them look similar as well.
   00:52:165 (1,2,3,4) - same.

[Hard]

1. 00:33:665 - why would you leave a strong beat unmapped? Perhaps you could have it mapped and add some 1/4 sliders, so that it doesn't feel too streamy. Or you could simplify the rhythm like this

I can't agree with the difficulty naming as I on't see a Normal working with 1/4 sliders. Probably something like Simple/Advanced/Challenging would be more accurate. Apart from that it's pretty neat, remind me to recheck it.

HeyItsSins wrote:

Your first qualified map! Congratulations >U< I'm so happy for you!!