1. 00:14:165 (2) - Ajoute un nouveau combo ici, sinon c'est un peu trop long avec le dernier slider. Ensuite, le slider n'est pas symétrique, tu pourrais essayer de faire quelque chose de mieux!
   Pourquoi est-ce qu'il n'y a pas d'hitsounds ici? Je te suggère d'en ajouter pour ajouter des sons à la difficulté.

1. Parfait! Tu as bien mis tes hitsounds.
2. En ouvrant le AiMod, on peut remarquer qu'il y a une erreur du côté de 'Stack Leniency', essaye de modifier un peu pour remédier au problème!

1. Il manque les hitsounds ici! Sinon, la structure est bien fait, les objets sont aux bons endroits avec un bon spacing. Bravo!

HootOwlStar wrote:

m4m from queue. the std diffs are quite solid so the mod will be short.
[general]

1. not sure about the gap between Easy and Normal since ez is like notes with 1/1 gaps and small distance spacings while norm is full of 1/2. could consider to introduce some simple 1/2 patterns in the ez diff, like making 00:57:165 (4) - and 01:05:165 (4) - 3/2 reverses
2. the kiai section distribution is fucked up. try this out https://puu.sh/spemD/38da9a3804.JPG
3. the .mp3 file is disrupted in the end so it would be better if you reedit the music file again. and remember to do hitsounds dude.
4. the current background image is 1367x768, in which it doesn't satisfy the 16:9 resolution so as @Ayyri said, fix the bg size.

[mod]

1. in ez, 00:02:165 (1,1) - firstly the current pattern ruins the music section count. using simple explanations, consider 8 beats as a section (since the notes occurs to undergo repetition) then 00:10:165 - becomes the start of the new section. covering it up with a reverse instead of given some emphasis onto it via ways would be really weird in some kind of sense. like do the words make any sense in the first place lolz. consider to apply the suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6621168 (view the timeline and the sliders). secondly the distance snapping is ruined here. move slider (1) to x:76 and horizontally flip the clone so that it reaches x:436 and that would do the trick. of course you need to adjust the parts afterwards as well anyway.
2. in norm, just saying that 00:22:915 (2) - didn't really correspond with making an equilateral triangle with 00:21:165 (3) - and 00:22:165 (1) -
3. in hard diff though. really like the diff anyway but still some minor things.
   -> 00:17:665 (4) - would be better if you split the slider into 2 circles or at least make the slider design different from 00:17:165 (3) - to emphasize the audibly stronger beats. the former will be better btw.
   -> 01:06:165 (11) - missed NC.

please find me in game or ask others if you don't understand any of it lolz i'm new to the gae m. good luck anyway.

I changed everything here, but for the ez modification, I just didn't do the same as you did, but it's still a good thing, thanks for your mod, I appreciate it a lot!!!! For hitsounds, it will be done by a friend so don't worry <3

MugiwaraSekai wrote:

as requested

hard
pk pas d'hitsounds un ami va les faire pour moi!
00:09:165 (3,4,5,6) - 00:15:165 (3,4,5,6) - tu devrais améliorer ce square pattern justement j'ai fais exprès de le faire avec un style bancale!
00:42:040 - essaie de faire un triplet par ici?pas ici, je trouve que ça s'adapte mal avec la suite :/ je garde quand même l'idée en tête au cas ou owo
00:19:665 (7,8,9) - continue le stream jusque la blue tick ?nope, je suis pas d'accord, j'étais pas trop chaud pour mettre trop de petits streams :/
00:35:040 - essaie de placer une note ici? comme tu as suivi depuis le début ces wub wub changé !
tu devrais essayer de mettre d'autre pattern que le carré, genre étoile etc ça devrait changer (;

normal
00:18:915 (2) - 00:22:915 (2) - 00:26:915 (2) - etc. je crois c'est trop difficile pour les débutants d'en avoir deux des comme ça avec 00:19:415 (3) - (simple opinion, tu peux garder) je pense que c'est bon pour le moment, il faut s'y habituer
00:57:165 (3) - pourquoi pas tenter ce genre de slider pour innover ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6626145 comme pour (00:33:165 (3) -)vu que je suis le même rythme sur le pattern d'avant, je pense que ce serait mieux que je le laisse comme ça, je garde tout de meme l'idée en tête !

easy
tu devrais importer un soft-sliderslide parce que le son de 00:02:165 (1) - rend trop lourd ):
00:08:165 (1) - je pense qu'il devrait démarrer à 00:10:165 -
00:26:206 (1) - fail je crois snap le sur la white tick
tu devrais tenter d'autres rythme pour la variété parce que ce rythme 00:54:165 (1,2,3,4) - est overused je pense
Tout a été changé avec le mod précédent
[]
gl!
MERCI BEAUCOUP A TOI <3

Gabe wrote:

Salut! #modreqs

Easy

1. 00:14:165 (2) - Ajoute un nouveau combo ici, sinon c'est un peu trop long avec le dernier slider. Ensuite, le slider n'est pas symétrique, tu pourrais essayer de faire quelque chose de mieux!
   Pourquoi est-ce qu'il n'y a pas d'hitsounds ici? Je te suggère d'en ajouter pour ajouter des sons à la difficulté.

Normal

1. Parfait! Tu as bien mis tes hitsounds.
2. En ouvrant le AiMod, on peut remarquer qu'il y a une erreur du côté de 'Stack Leniency', essaye de modifier un peu pour remédier au problème!

Hard

1. Il manque les hitsounds ici! Sinon, la structure est bien fait, les objets sont aux bons endroits avec un bon spacing. Bravo!

J'ai honte de seulement te donner ça, mais tes difficultés en stds sont super bien! J'espère qu'un BN puisse passer bientôt!

Answered on IRC. Thanks a lot Gabe ! <3

Noffy wrote:

[Easy]
Hi I'm here to mod sliders :^)

00:02:165 (1) - The white anchor point after the red one makes the turn look a bit odd. Maybe consider having it like this instead? http://puu.sh/stixV/42b4c9babb.jpg (the first three points are also adjusted a bit for slightly smoother curve.) indeed! thanks for pointing out that!
00:06:165 (1) - (if you do ^ )
00:10:165 (1) - Maybe make exactly symmetrical accross the y-axis? owo Or at least so that the two ends are the same height, the right is noticably lower than left at the moment umu. yup! I changed everything on this slider to make it symmetrical as possible!
00:14:165 (1) - Try centering the red anchors on the white ticks? It'll help this slider be more ~symmetrical~ changed too ! it might look better now!
00:21:665 (4) - Maybe move a little bit to the left so the circle would come straight out of (3)? >w< http://puu.sh/stk92/48c76a4e47.jpg sure thing ! i didn't noticed that, thanks for the picture <3
00:26:165 (1) - Hmm, why not make this more curved like 00:30:165 (1) - is so that they can match? It's a bit flat right now. i changed the slider, but not like you say, i put a red anchor to make it more triangular~
00:33:665 (5,1) - Please improve blanket :< done !!! >w<
00:40:165 (3,4) - Maybe copy and paste 3 to ensure that these two are perfectly symmetrical? It's slightly off right now. done for both of them, but it looks still the same for me, anyway, i do the change!
00:44:165 (3,4) - ^
00:57:165 (4,1) - Maybe consider extending (4) to the blue tick like this to better follow the drums. It does result in a 1/2 gap, but I think that should be okay considering how slow the song is. at the first time, i did 1/1 circle here, so i suppose that it might be better to keep it as 1/2 because the spacing between notes are were close... thanks anyway >w<!
01:05:165 (4,1) - ^ same as above.

[Normal]
Maybe consider making this difficulty CS 3.5? so that the set can go 3>3.5>4 SURE ! GREAT IDEA OMG
Part of why I suggest that is because I think it makes your patterns look more nice and spacious in this difficulty >w<
(especially things like 00:04:165 (1,2,3) - I think look better at 3.5 owo)

00:02:165 (1,2,3) - Flow is a bit harsh here. Consider moving 1 and 2 to the left and down a bit. Like thissuchanged!
00:10:165 (1,2,3) - This looks nice! >w<!
00:17:165 (2,3) - Maybe instead have 3 come straight out of 2? It feels a bit more natural this way, having it go down feels a bit off when 2 required moving up out of the end of 00:16:165 (1) - i don't change for now, but i have a great idea if i have to change this!
00:18:165 (1,2) - Spacing randomly dropped here?yeah, probably, i don't know why xd
00:19:665 - Since the bzzt starts here, maybe having the rhythm like this could fit better: clicky

bzzt

00:22:915 (2,3,4) - Same rhythm suggestion as above ^
00:26:915 (2,3,4) - ^
00:30:915 (2,3,4) - ^

i dont plan to map on bzzt for the normal diff nor the hard
00:41:165 (3,4) - Should be like this instead to match with how you mapped 00:25:165 (3) - and 00:33:165 (3) -
00:49:165 (3,4) - ^
00:57:165 (3) - ^ for those three i think i will keep it like that since its not really an 1/3 beat, but a small triplet, and i want to avoid that for the normal diff, but great point ! >w<
01:05:665 (4,5,1) - Hmm, I think having a triangle like this right at the end looks a bit odd. Maybe make a nice curve instead?i'll keep it like that, since the last beat is a strong beat, so i have to make some trick moves for this point, that's why i keep it like that! >w<

[Hard]
00:04:165 (1) - Maybe consider having just a circle at 00:04:415 instead, since the main melody pauses for a little bit there.

same thing

00:08:415 (1) -
00:12:165 (1) -

i keep that idea in mind, and if it share so much problems, then i will change it!
00:47:165 (3) - Consider changing like this http://puu.sh/stlF0/ca172d57c2.jpg so that the bend is consistent with 00:43:165 (3) - done!

[Ayyri's Muzukashii]
00:04:165 - While there is a note here, it feels unfitting for it to be mapped this way because it's not part of the main melody. Maybe consider changing this to a d, as it is a deeper note.
Same goes for this occurrence in later bars>
00:08:165
00:12:165
Maybe?


Ayy this map is pretty nice owo. GL!

1. add a mute sliderslide ?
2. How about decrease the volume oh soft-hitclap ; it currently really hurt my ears with this pitch. after modding the 3 diff ; please decrease it.
3. (In Hard diff) 00:19:665 (7,8,9) - how about using Drum as sampleset & soft as Additions. I think it fit better the 1/8 sound. same thing there : 00:23:665 (5,6,7) - 00:27:665 (5,6,7) - 00:31:665 (5,6,7) -

1. 00:28:165 - tu clap pas cette note ? je trouve ça bizarre que ce soit clap à certains endroit comme des claps de drum, mais que le set du clap soit un hit hat et ne clap pas le hit hat assez strong içi.

1. 00:16:165 (1,2) - Je comprends l'intention ainsi que la volonté de vouloir faire ce genre de pattern, mais je trouve que ça ne passe vraiment pas içi surtout quand plus de la moitier du slider end est overlap par le slider. http://puu.sh/sQbkS/678051941f.jpg
2. 00:52:165 (1) - lis bien les guideline wesh ; touching bar life. t'en a 2 autres qui sont border, mais comme ils touchent pas avec le skin par défaut ils sont safe. Mais pas celui la :c

1. 00:36:165 (1,2) - Tu peux ctrl+G si tu veux mieux suivre la melody avec le flow/spacing. Ou laisser tel que c'est pour le drum. si tu ctrl+g ; oublie pas de mettre les hit sounds comme il faut. Car comme tu peux l'entendre, la melody fait un peu comme un decrescendo après cette note 00:36:415 (2) - pour ensuite remonter içi 00:37:165 (5) - .

1. 00:10:165 (7,8,9) - 00:14:165 (12,13,14) - peut être un peu trop tôt pour passer en 1/1. ça donne presque la même intensité qu'un peu plus loin avec le drum. (ça rendrait même la part plus intense la la futsuu à cet endroit)

1. 00:18:915 (5,6,7,8,9) - je sais pas trop ce que t'as voulu faire pour ce pattern à cet endroit et les autres qui sont similaire. Mais si tu cherche à follow le drum, je dirais qu'avec le petit 1/8 sound, ça passerais mieux en dk kkd au lieu de dkk kd.
2. en parlant des endroits avec les sons+pattern similaires, si tu as fix, don't forget : 00:22:915 (14,15,16,17,18) - 00:26:915 (24,25,26,27,28) - 00:30:915 (32,33,34,35,36) -
3. 00:45:165 (18) - je trouve que le d casse réellement le flow içi. Change le en k (puis ça passe mieux musicalement)

1. I really feel bad about skipping this note 00:04:665 - . And also simular one like those 00:08:665 - 00:08:665 - etc etc.
   You're talking about this one 00:04:165 (9) - being a strong downbeat, which is sure true, but those note are strong too. Even stronger than those 00:04:915 (10) - 00:08:915 (23) - etc...
2. 01:06:165 (246) - your whole strong downbeat are K ; but this one, is the only one as D. Even those are k

AsyouSaidsir wrote:

Saw this in #modreqs and decided to mod because the song is nice, I still am new to modding so this may not be very helpful.

Easy

00:57:165 (4) - I don't know why did you pick this time to have a reverse slider, nothing in the song changes, I understand why you did it at the end since it gives a bigger impact before the final note, but here it just feels random. If you want to keep the slider the way it is you could at least remove the clap sound from the reverse arrow. i decided to add a reverse slider, because its made to prepare the player to the next normal diff that got some 1/4 or 1/2 reverse sliders, so it's to fit with the spread, and i judge that it could fit well here.

Normal

Can't find anything wrong. :p

Hard

00:19:665 (7,8,9) - Have you considered replacing all the triplets before the kiai time with 1/8th repeat sliders? The sounds the triplets are on feel faster than the clicking speed. when i made the first version of the hard diff, i did like you said here, with 1/8 sliders, but it feels very weird, and very hard to play for hard players. so i decided to do a triple because it can be easier for everybody.

This is a very well made map, good luck getting it ranked! thanks <3

SLM wrote:

Hello\
holy this SB is cool af :0 thanks to noffichi!

[Easy]

* 00:29:165 (4) - remove whistle at sliderbody done!

[Normal]

* 00:18:915 (2,3) - 00:22:915 (2,3) - 00:26:915 (2,3) - 00:30:915 (2,3) - these reverse 1/4 reverse sliders' hs sounds a bit noisy to me.
maybe remove clap at the slidertail? i think i'll add timing points, I'll see. for me it's okay actually.

* 00:33:165 (3) - flow is a bit awkward imo.oh? why? for me it's okay, because it leads directly to the next slider, i think it's good, no?
maybe blanket with 00:34:165 (1) - instead? http://puu.sh/sQ32b/e7ac5d9271.jpg

* 00:38:165 (1,2,3) - imo this flow curves a bit much.no, actually, i did it like that, because there is reason. so you can see that there is more strong sound at the circle, that's why i want to "move it away" from those sliders.
how about sth like this? http://puu.sh/sQ387/d5bc91b0da.jpg

* 00:56:165 (1,3) - maybe make them horizontal?i don't agree with it, but i keep the idea. i wanted to try something different from my previous mapping style, with a lot of straights sliders
http://puu.sh/sQ3oW/3d66a19e40.jpg

* 00:45:165 (3,4) - 00:53:165 (3,4) - 01:01:165 (3,4) - remove whistle at sliderbodysame as before


[Hard]

* 00:20:665 (2) - maybe ctrl+g? since you used same direction-going flow when there are two sliders in a row. such as 00:24:165 (1,2) - 00:28:165 (1,2) -
or just two straight sliders?: http://puu.sh/sQfeF/ec7002d2f2.jpg changed with straight slider!

* 00:41:165 (3) - 00:57:165 (3) - maybe add clap?

* 01:04:165 (1) - 01:05:165 (5) - ^

* 00:49:165 (5) - add clap like you did at 00:37:165 (5) -

* 00:50:165 (1) - remove whistle at sliderbody i'll see with kotori about hitsounds!

There are some other sliders that include clap at their sliderbody,
I think that's fine since default soft clap at sliderbody does nothing
but maybe consider removing them.

That's all. I tried to find more but map's good enough imo.
Sorry if my mod wasn't that helpful. dropping a star instead.
GL!

Kin wrote:

BONSOIR.
tavu je mod (M4M pd)

[hit sound]

1. add a mute sliderslide ?
2. How about decrease the volume oh soft-hitclap ; it currently really hurt my ears with this pitch. after modding the 3 diff ; please decrease it.
3. (In Hard diff) 00:19:665 (7,8,9) - how about using Drum as sampleset & soft as Additions. I think it fit better the 1/8 sound. same thing there : 00:23:665 (5,6,7) - 00:27:665 (5,6,7) - 00:31:665 (5,6,7) -

[Easy]

1. 00:28:165 - tu clap pas cette note ? je trouve ça bizarre que ce soit clap à certains endroit comme des claps de drum, mais que le set du clap soit un hit hat et ne clap pas le hit hat assez strong içi. tout ce qui sera des hitsounds, je verrai avec kotori du coup

[Normal]

1. 00:16:165 (1,2) - Je comprends l'intention ainsi que la volonté de vouloir faire ce genre de pattern, mais je trouve que ça ne passe vraiment pas içi surtout quand plus de la moitier du slider end est overlap par le slider. http://puu.sh/sQbkS/678051941f.jpg changé
2. 00:52:165 (1) - lis bien les guideline wesh ; touching bar life. t'en a 2 autres qui sont border, mais comme ils touchent pas avec le skin par défaut ils sont safe. Mais pas celui la :c

changé aussi

[Hard]
tu peux faire tes squares plus proprement wsh

1. 00:36:165 (1,2) - Tu peux ctrl+G si tu veux mieux suivre la melody avec le flow/spacing. Ou laisser tel que c'est pour le drum. si tu ctrl+g ; oublie pas de mettre les hit sounds comme il faut. Car comme tu peux l'entendre, la melody fait un peu comme un decrescendo après cette note 00:36:415 (2) - pour ensuite remonter içi 00:37:165 (5) - .je préfère laisser ça comme ça, je voulais pas tenter des trop gros sauts tu vois

c'est plutôt propre toussa ; j'regarde pas ton mapping pendant 2 ou 3 mois, et tu t'améliore.
merci mon pd <3

SLM wrote:

Hello\
holy this SB is cool af :0

[Easy]

* 00:29:165 (4) - remove whistle at sliderbody

[Normal]

* 00:18:915 (2,3) - 00:22:915 (2,3) - 00:26:915 (2,3) - 00:30:915 (2,3) - these reverse 1/4 reverse sliders' hs sounds a bit noisy to me.
maybe remove clap at the slidertail? i really dont know on which volume settings you are playing lul... i'm playing on music 45 and master 55 effects 100 and they feel completely fine to me,fix your volume settings,this sounds to me pretty much like,hey that plays shit with hr or dt pls fix lol



* 00:45:165 (3,4) - 00:53:165 (3,4) - 01:01:165 (3,4) - remove whistle at sliderbody yes sir


[Hard]

* 00:20:665 (2) - maybe ctrl+g? since you used same direction-going flow when there are two sliders in a row. such as 00:24:165 (1,2) - 00:28:165 (1,2) -
or just two straight sliders?: http://puu.sh/sQfeF/ec7002d2f2.jpg

* 00:41:165 (3) - 00:57:165 (3) - maybe add clap?

* 01:04:165 (1) - 01:05:165 (5) - ^

* 00:49:165 (5) - add clap like you did at 00:37:165 (5) -

* 00:50:165 (1) - remove whistle at sliderbody everything above applied,nice idea~

There are some other sliders that include clap at their sliderbody,
I think that's fine since default soft clap at sliderbody does nothing
but maybe consider removing them. tbh,what i think about hitsounding,the maps are actually supposed yes supposed to play with custom hitsounds if custom hitsounds are added and people are playing it with regular ones,meaning custom hitsounds off and it sounds shit with the ones from your skin,not the mappers fault,your fault

That's all. I tried to find more but map's good enough imo.
Sorry if my mod wasn't that helpful. dropping a star instead.
GL!

Kin wrote:

BONSOIR.
tavu je mod (M4M pd)

[hit sound]

1. add a mute sliderslide ? why ??
2. How about decrease the volume oh soft-hitclap ; it currently really hurt my ears with this pitch. after modding the 3 diff ; please decrease it. check what i've said above about volume
3. (In Hard diff) 00:19:665 (7,8,9) - how about using Drum as sampleset & soft as Additions. I think it fit better the 1/8 sound. same thing there : 00:23:665 (5,6,7) - 00:27:665 (5,6,7) - 00:31:665 (5,6,7) - sounds pretty weird to me,dont really like it at all ;w;

n0ah wrote:

Difficulty setup should include a really high drain rate and low hit accuracy(OD: 3~4). The slider velocity is 1.4 so you should probably change that from 1.68

00:09:165 (6) - change to k No.
00:24:165 (26,27,28) - and 00:28:165 (31,32,33) - ctrl+g, this throws newer players off cause its the same rhythm as before but the pattern changes Ok for the first one.
00:40:665 (50) - delete Why?
00:42:165 (52,53) - add d on white tick I think it's fine as it is right now
00:57:915 (75,76,77) - if you wanna do a 1/2nd snap here i'd say make it like this I'll take your idea, but i'll change the 76 one into a d
01:06:165 (88) - consider making this a finisher (D) it might sound better Ok.

Thank you for modding

Kin wrote:

[Oui's Kantan]

1. 00:10:165 (7,8,9) - 00:14:165 (12,13,14) - peut être un peu trop tôt pour passer en 1/1. ça donne presque la même intensité qu'un peu plus loin avec le drum. (ça rendrait même la part plus intense la la futsuu à cet endroit)

Ok, fixé.

Merci à toi

n0ah wrote:

random mod

Aldwych's Futsuu

00:34:665 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - I feel like this matches your next pattern better Ok for ddkkd, but not kdk, i prefer the kdd sounds here
00:43:665 (13,14,15,16,17) - I'd turn this into a ddkkd
Since the sounds goes down, it's not a good value proposition, however i decided to change into kkddd which is more accurate

kin wrote:

[Sandwych's Futsuu]

1. 00:18:915 (5,6,7,8,9) - je sais pas trop ce que t'as voulu faire pour ce pattern à cet endroit et les autres qui sont similaire. Mais si tu cherche à follow le drum, je dirais qu'avec le petit 1/8 sound, ça passerais mieux en dk kkd au lieu de dkk kd. A un moment, j'ai hésité entre les deux je l'admet, mais j'y trouve pas l'intéret de suivre ces 1/8 quand t'as pas la diff pour, donc je trouve que dkk kd passe mieux avec la mélodie.
2. en parlant des endroits avec les sons+pattern similaires, si tu as fix, don't forget : 00:22:915 (14,15,16,17,18) - 00:26:915 (24,25,26,27,28) - 00:30:915 (32,33,34,35,36) -
3. 00:45:165 (18) - je trouve que le d casse réellement le flow içi. Change le en k (puis ça passe mieux musicalement) Why not, après tout, ayyri et oui l'ont aussi en k.

Shurelia wrote:

1. meta should be confirmed by VINXIS himself.
2. nice SB.

1. 56256747_p0.jpg is unused.
2. mp3 file is 128kbps; can't vinxis provide you a 192kbps version idk

1. 00:49:165 (4) - How about splitting this slider into two hitcircles on both 1/1 ticks? This will leave the part more emphasized before the next kiai kicks in. Basically this is what you did to 00:33:165 (4,5) -.
2. 00:58:165 (1,2) - Wouldn't it be better if this type of rhythm is moved to 01:02:165 -, so that there's a long slider on 00:58:165 - instead to follow the consistency? I don't get the idea of how it would fit in the current rhythm patterns, but I can say that changing the rhythm before near the end is more accentuated.

1. 00:03:915 (4) - 00:09:915 (4) - 00:13:915 (4) - 00:15:915 (4) - I would delete these hitcircles to lift the weight up in that section. It seems fitting to add little breaks in the slow part in a normal difficulty.
2. 00:05:665 (4) - Same as above, only you can replace it by a single hitcircle.
3. 00:45:165 (3,4) - I don't think adding whistles to the sliders' bodies was intentional.
4. 01:01:165 (3,4) - I guess they were intentional, but they don't sound good, so I suggest you remove them.

1. 00:08:665 (2) - Lower its position to avoid touching the HP bar.
2. 00:17:665 (4,5) - I was thinking to Ctrl + G these hitcircles, merely because the flow would be changed from 00:04:665 (2,3,4) - 00:06:665 (2,3,4) - and etc., which will highlight the piano notes.
3. 00:36:415 (2,3,4,5,6) - The star pattern could be more polished and regular using the Create Polygon Circles tool.
4. 01:05:915 (9,10,1) - Do Ctrl + H to change the flow between 01:05:415 (6,7,8) - and 01:05:915 (9,10,1) - from the two sliders that you 'have taken note'.

1. 00:07:165 (4) - 00:09:165 (6) - 00:11:165 (8) - 00:13:165 (10) - Ces notes se sonnent vraiment bizarre quand tu commences la map avec un ryhtme de 4/1. Je les aurai supprimées, comme ça la première partie de la chanson jouera plus calme.
2. 00:58:665 (75) - Supprime la note peut-être? Je crois que c'est plus 'safe' quand avant celle-ci est un rhythm un peu confus 00:57:915 (73,74) -. C'est un peu donc dur pour les joueurs à se redresser.

1. 01:02:915 - Ajoute un don pour que le ryhtme soit cohérent avec 00:38:665 (52,53,54) -, 00:46:665 (20,21,22) - et etc.?

1. 00:20:165 (62) - Missing finisher? To follow the pattern of adding a finisher at the end of one section like 00:24:165 (76) - and 00:28:165 (92) -.

Shurelia wrote:

ya

[GeneraL]

1. meta should be confirmed by VINXIS himself.
2. nice SB.

[Easy]

1. 00:17:971 - unsnapped timing line at here fixed~
2. simple and decent diff. Gj

not much but good luck.

sheela wrote:

[General]

1. 56256747_p0.jpg is unused. deleted!
2. mp3 file is 128kbps; can't vinxis provide you a 192kbps version idkfixed

[Easy]

1. 00:49:165 (4) - How about splitting this slider into two hitcircles on both 1/1 ticks? This will leave the part more emphasized before the next kiai kicks in. Basically this is what you did to 00:33:165 (4,5) -.
2. 00:58:165 (1,2) - Wouldn't it be better if this type of rhythm is moved to 01:02:165 -, so that there's a long slider on 00:58:165 - instead to follow the consistency? I don't get the idea of how it would fit in the current rhythm patterns, but I can say that changing the rhythm before near the end is more accentuated. changed all the things you said!

[Normal]

1. 00:03:915 (4) - 00:09:915 (4) - 00:13:915 (4) - 00:15:915 (4) - I would delete these hitcircles to lift the weight up in that section. It seems fitting to add little breaks in the slow part in a normal difficulty.
2. 00:05:665 (4) - Same as above, only you can replace it by a single hitcircle.it give a good rhythm with the previous slider imo
3. 00:45:165 (3,4) - I don't think adding whistles to the sliders' bodies was intentional. replaced by clap
4. 01:01:165 (3,4) - I guess they were intentional, but they don't sound good, so I suggest you remove them.replaced by clap too!

[Hard]

1. 00:08:665 (2) - Lower its position to avoid touching the HP bar.
2. 00:17:665 (4,5) - I was thinking to Ctrl + G these hitcircles, merely because the flow would be changed from 00:04:665 (2,3,4) - 00:06:665 (2,3,4) - and etc., which will highlight the piano notes.
3. 00:36:415 (2,3,4,5,6) - The star pattern could be more polished and regular using the Create Polygon Circles tool.
4. 01:05:915 (9,10,1) - Do Ctrl + H to change the flow between 01:05:415 (6,7,8) - and 01:05:915 (9,10,1) - from the two sliders that you 'have taken note'.Fixed all the things here! :3

I guess that's it. Feel free to call me back.

sheela wrote:

[Oui's Kantan]

1. 00:07:165 (4) - 00:09:165 (6) - 00:11:165 (8) - 00:13:165 (10) - Ces notes se sonnent vraiment bizarre quand tu commences la map avec un ryhtme de 4/1. Je les aurai supprimées, comme ça la première partie de la chanson jouera plus calme.
2. 00:58:665 (75) - Supprime la note peut-être? Je crois que c'est plus 'safe' quand avant celle-ci est un rhythm un peu confus 00:57:915 (73,74) -. C'est un peu donc dur pour les joueurs à se redresser.

Yoshino-- wrote:

from q lo



Hard:


maybe lower hp a bit? changed

00:11:165 (3,4,5,6) - that square is a tiny bit off

00:27:165 (3,4,5) - triangle tiiiiiiiiny bit off

00:37:415 (6,7,8) - distance between these is uneven

00:58:165 (1) - stack sliderend with 00:56:915 (2) - ? done



Normal:


SeemsGood



Easy:

00:17:165 (2) - ds is kinda uneven here, probably doesn't matter though no it's okay aimod didn't said anyting so...

00:58:165 (1) - why is this not a slider like all the others? that's my bad, now its okay




good map, gl on ranking!

Mattchanhew wrote:

Hi, a mod from your queue

Easy

1. 00:19:164 (2,3) - Avoid any overlapping in slidersfor me it's still oki since it doesn't bother the player, because it don't hide the slider point/tail

Normal

1. 00:05:165 (3,4) - Make it curve so it flow betteri made it like that since it was good for me, and i don't see any problems by letting them straight, so i think it's good like that, also, it don't ruin the flow, so i guess its oki
2. 00:44:165 (1,2) - Same idea make it curve to flow better same as the previous mod

Hard

1. 00:05:165 (3,4,5,6) - Make it a square to make the spacing consistent between the circles, and looks better
2. 00:07:165 (3,4,5,6) - ^
3. 00:09:165 (3,4,5,6) - ^ for those 3 patterns, i think that's also a good idea, but i wanted to keep it like that because i wanted to keep the style as before, since the song is repetitive and i wanted to highlight this. and also, i did some not real squares, because i didn't wanted to keep the mapping style that i have, with some symmetrical and geometric pattern, so i prefer to keep it like that. i tried my best to explain you why i did that o,o
4. 00:11:165 (3,4,5,6) - Reverse the order of these 4 circles so it rotates clockwise rather than anti-clockwise, so it follows the flow as before erm, i think i did it already like before, no? it follows the same pattern as the other pattern o,o
5. 01:01:915 (4) - Put it in the same position as 01:00:915 (2) to match the pattern as beforeerm, i decided to decline this mod, because when you hear the song, it has to be like that to emphasize with the music. + it could ruin the flow with the next slider imo

Thats all! Im still new to modding so hope this helps!thanks

soft-hitnormal.wav
soft-hitnormal2.wav

sheela wrote:

[General]

1. 56256747_p0.jpg is unused.
2. mp3 file is 128kbps; can't vinxis provide you a 192kbps version idk

[Easy]

1. 00:49:165 (4) - How about splitting this slider into two hitcircles on both 1/1 ticks? This will leave the part more emphasized before the next kiai kicks in. Basically this is what you did to 00:33:165 (4,5) -.
2. 00:58:165 (1,2) - Wouldn't it be better if this type of rhythm is moved to 01:02:165 -, so that there's a long slider on 00:58:165 - instead to follow the consistency? I don't get the idea of how it would fit in the current rhythm patterns, but I can say that changing the rhythm before near the end is more accentuated.

[Normal]

1. 00:03:915 (4) - 00:09:915 (4) - 00:13:915 (4) - 00:15:915 (4) - I would delete these hitcircles to lift the weight up in that section. It seems fitting to add little breaks in the slow part in a normal difficulty.
2. 00:05:665 (4) - Same as above, only you can replace it by a single hitcircle.
3. 00:45:165 (3,4) - I don't think adding whistles to the sliders' bodies was intentional. well i was thinking if having them on the slider body or the start and head wouldnt really make a difference IF YOU HAVE CUSTOM HITSOUNDS ON WHICH YOU SHOULD IF THERE ARE SOME...but if you play them with custom off it does make difference but anyway,removed them of the body so nobody gets any problems~
4. 01:01:165 (3,4) - I guess they were intentional, but they don't sound good, so I suggest you remove them.

how did they end up here lol ? removed them

[Hard]

1. 00:08:665 (2) - Lower its position to avoid touching the HP bar.
2. 00:17:665 (4,5) - I was thinking to Ctrl + G these hitcircles, merely because the flow would be changed from 00:04:665 (2,3,4) - 00:06:665 (2,3,4) - and etc., which will highlight the piano notes.
3. 00:36:415 (2,3,4,5,6) - The star pattern could be more polished and regular using the Create Polygon Circles tool.
4. 01:05:915 (9,10,1) - Do Ctrl + H to change the flow between 01:05:415 (6,7,8) - and 01:05:915 (9,10,1) - from the two sliders that you 'have taken note'.

mraihani wrote:

hello, from your m4m queue


warning: not recommended.
delete these:

soft-hitnormal.wav
soft-hitnormal2.wav

and then overwrite soft-hitclap.wav with soft-hitclap2.wav


general
about the combo color, i like the 2nd combo color is (red: 137, green: 194, blue:86) like this:
sample text
00:02:165 - delete green timing point here (because the red one is already here)
red timing point at 00:02:165 -> default soft hitsound
00:17:165 - put the preview here

easy

00:02:165 (1,1,1,1) - change all 'finish' hitsound to 'whistle'
00:19:164 (2) - unsnapped.
00:19:164 (2) - give clap at head *
00:20:165 (3) - 'whistle' at head
00:20:165 (3) - remove clap at both ends
00:21:165 - clap*
00:23:165 - whistle
00:23:165 - clap*
00:24:165 - whistle
00:24:165 (3) - remove clap at both ends
00:25:165 - clap*
00:27:165 - clap*
00:29:165 - clap*
00:31:165 - clap*
00:33:665 (5) - remove clap
00:35:165 - clap*
00:36:165 - remove clap*
00:36:165 - whislte
00:37:665 - remove clap
00:39:165 - clap
00:40:165 - whistle and remove clap
00:40:665 - remove clap
00:41:665 - remove clap
00:43:165 - clap*
00:44:165 - whistle
00:44:165 - remove clap
00:44:665 - remove clap
00:45:665 - remove clap
00:47:165 - clap*
00:48:165 - remove clap at both ends
00:51:165 - clap*
00:52:165 - remove clap
00:52:165 - whistle
00:52:665 - remove clap
00:53:665 - remove clap
00:56:165 - replace clap with whistle
00:56:665 - remove clap
00:57:165 (4) - whistle the start, reverse arrow, and end. remove all clap. also remove whistle at body of slider.
00:57:165 add green timing point with default 'soft' sampleset
00:58:165 change to 'S:C1'
00:58:165 - 'finish'
00:59:165 - clap*
01:00:165 - remove clap on both ends
01:01:665 - remove clap
01:03:165 - clap*
01:04:165 - add green timing point here with default 'soft' sampleset
01:04:165 (4,5) - replace all clap with whistle

normal
00:18:915 - add green timing point here (default soft)
00:18:915 (2,3,4) - change all claps to whistle
00:20:165 - add green timing point here (s:c1)
00:22:915 - add green timing point here (default soft)
00:22:915 (2,3,4) - change all claps to whistle
00:24:165 - add green timing point here (s:c1)
00:26:915 - (2,3,4) - change all claps to whistle
00:26:915 - add green timing point here (default soft)
00:28:165 - add green timing point here (s:c1)
repeat for similar patterns

hard
ar 8
hp 6
od 7
* -> this could be done if the mod on light blue on top done.

good luck!

Xinely wrote:

from pikachu PIKA PIKA PIKAAAAAA


Kotori will do changes for hitsounds since he did the hitsounds job!
General :
- you may want to add empty sound of soft-sliderslide and soft-sliderslide2.. that sliderslide is so noisy here aaa not fit with calm song imo

Easy :
- 00:17:165 (2) - make spacing consistent. 0,84x and 0,89x are different things fixed!
- 00:27:665 (2) - miss whistle
- 00:27:665 (2) - 00:31:665 (2) - ^ i guess. just saw you did whistle at 4th whitetick for 00:23:665 - 00:25:665 (4) - so yeah
- 00:59:665 (2) - same, miss whistle i guess
- 01:00:165 (3,1) - at least copy paste for a mirror design pls fixed!
- 01:04:165 (4) - is whistle on body intentional? it doesnt sound nicely tho
- 01:05:165 (5) - ^
- 00:17:971 - unsnapped timing line deleted!

Normal :
- 00:02:915 (2) - spacing consistent pls :C changed
- 00:25:165 (3) - somehow the rhythm feels something missing like for 00:25:415 - 00:25:790 - , try make like http://puu.sh/t2zPG/803f802942.jpg?
- 00:33:165 (3) - ^ for those two, I don't really agree with it, since we don't really pay attention that beat, and i wanted to map some basics beats for the normal, so i didn't changed those two
- 00:53:165 (3,4) - rip design for (4), try at least http://puu.sh/t2zWd/b535cdac0d.jpg for cuter design? D: sure fixed!
- 00:53:165 (3,4) - intentional whistle for body?

Hard :
- 00:07:165 (3,4,5,6) - make more perfect square design
- 00:09:165 (3,4,5,6) - ^ changed for those two!
- 00:18:540 - why not add circle here? the music is so strong and feels weird to skip refused, because we hear a lot those beats in the song, and in my opinion, if i would map this beat, i should also map the others, and it would increase the difficulty of this map to high.. so i don't really agree with this idea!
- 00:25:665 - this should be mapped. you can hear at this drum is same with 00:25:540 - , skipping one of them is totally bad imo fixed!
- 00:32:165 (1,2) - just my taste but you often do straight sliders here it turning to be bored for me, how about a bit change like http://puu.sh/t2ArA/6d8ea8e442.jpg or something else i wanted to keep a basic patterns and repetitive, because the song is like that, and i wanted to represent this song into the map!
- 00:37:540 (7) - 241,110 for perfect line fixed!
- 00:48:165 (1) - why not make jump here for consistent with 00:36:165 (1) - ? fixed!
- 01:04:165 (1) - ^ same!
- 00:50:165 (1) - is whistle body intentional?
- 01:05:165 (5) - fits for jump too. your diff somehow is too ez and i think this can be a jump yes! i agree!

std is fine after check my mod for me just not sure with taiko because i cant judge so i leave a std icon later instead

Xinely wrote:

from pikachu

General :
- you may want to add empty sound of soft-sliderslide and soft-sliderslide2.. that sliderslide is so noisy here aaa not fit with calm song imo wtf,where is a soft-sliderslide pls i only hear sliderslide with normal but well gonna change

Easy :
- 00:17:165 (2) - make spacing consistent. 0,84x and 0,89x are different things
- 00:27:665 (2) - miss whistle added
- 00:27:665 (2) - 00:31:665 (2) - ^ i guess. just saw you did whistle at 4th whitetick for 00:23:665 - 00:25:665 (4) - so yeah added
- 00:59:665 (2) - same, miss whistle i guess
- 01:00:165 (3,1) - at least copy paste for a mirror design pls
- 01:04:165 (4) - is whistle on body intentional? it doesnt sound nicely tho am a idiot sry~ fixed
- 01:05:165 (5) - ^^^
- 00:17:971 - unsnapped timing line

Normal :
- 00:02:915 (2) - spacing consistent pls :C
- 00:25:165 (3) - somehow the rhythm feels something missing like for 00:25:415 - 00:25:790 - , try make like http://puu.sh/t2zPG/803f802942.jpg?
- 00:33:165 (3) - ^
- 00:53:165 (3,4) - rip design for (4), try at least http://puu.sh/t2zWd/b535cdac0d.jpg for cuter design? D:
- 00:53:165 (3,4) - intentional whistle for body? I'm a idiot 2.0 fixed~

Hard :
- 00:07:165 (3,4,5,6) - make more perfect square design
- 00:09:165 (3,4,5,6) - ^
- 00:18:540 - why not add circle here? the music is so strong and feels weird to skip
- 00:25:665 - this should be mapped. you can hear at this drum is same with 00:25:540 - , skipping one of them is totally bad imo
- 00:32:165 (1,2) - just my taste but you often do straight sliders here it turning to be bored for me, how about a bit change like http://puu.sh/t2ArA/6d8ea8e442.jpg or something else
- 00:37:540 (7) - 241,110 for perfect line
- 00:48:165 (1) - why not make jump here for consistent with 00:36:165 (1) - ?
- 01:04:165 (1) - ^
- 00:50:165 (1) - is whistle body intentional? wow i'm really a that big idiot... fixed !
- 01:05:165 (5) - fits for jump too. your diff somehow is too ez and i think this can be a jump

std is fine after check my mod for me just not sure with taiko because i cant judge so i leave a std icon later instead

Volta wrote:

[Kantan]
the diffs is currently lacks of 4/1 breaks and consistency.

00:32:665 (33,34) - new players will need 4/1 break often, so consider to delete these notes
00:34:415 - pattern with 1/2 beat is hard for newbie, delete this note and just stick to simple beat This shows the start of the kiai time
00:37:665 - and try to add note here instead if you want to make it more dense No, it is fine
00:40:665 - delete

00:42:415 - delete to make more simple beat
00:42:665 - add d to make it consistent with 00:34:665 -
00:44:665 - delete It will stay where it is
00:45:665 - and 00:46:665 - add note No, sorry
00:48:665 (53,54,55) - delete to make 4/1 break

00:50:165 ~ end - try to make similar structure as above, maybe with some color variation I think it is already fine.

_Meep_ wrote:

this is some very complicated applause that apparently goes for a whole one minute, vinxis people.

_Meep_ wrote:

this is some very complicated applause that apparently goes for a whole one minute, vinxis people.

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

• 
  
  No need Widescreen Support (taiko)

• 
  
  OD5→3 HP6→9
  
  SV1.68→1.40
  
  (song setup only now)

• 
  
  I prefer OD4.for OD spread.
  
  hmm..pattern is good.but,dencity is high.
  
  e.g. 00:38:165 - 00:45:165 -
  
  I prefer use bule tick on muzukashii ↑
  
  If remove some notes,spread will be bad.→Muzukashi must remove some notes.
  
  00:56:665 (24,25) - swap.I think dkk dkk is little strange.
  
  01:05:915 - you can change d.for emphasized to next 01:06:165 -

Futsuu]

• 
  
  I prefer OD4.for OD spread. Rebalanced HP & OD for spread.
  
  hmm..pattern is good.but,dencity is high.
  
  e.g. 00:38:165 - 00:45:165 - I like what i've done here, no real explain to say, but for me, it sounds good enough
  I prefer use bule tick on muzukashii ↑
  
  If remove some notes,spread will be bad.→Muzukashi must remove some notes.
  
  00:56:665 (24,25) - swap.I think dkk dkk is little strange. Ye, applied
  
  01:05:915 - you can change d.for emphasized to next 01:06:165 - No need to contrast the last note.

1. 00:50:665 - Ajoute un don pour "équilibrer" la densité de la section 00:34:165 - à 00:50:165 - et de l'autre moitié, et pour être cohérent avec 00:34:665 (33) - ?
2. 00:46:915 - Cette note placé sur 1/2 semble trop par hasard et trop soudain, parce que tous les rythmes de la map ne sont que sur les ticks blancs. Je l'aurais bougé à 00:46:665 -.

sheela wrote:

[Oui's Kantan]

1. 00:50:665 - Ajoute un don pour "équilibrer" la densité de la section 00:34:165 - à 00:50:165 - et de l'autre moitié, et pour être cohérent avec 00:34:665 (33) - ?
2. 00:46:915 - Cette note placé sur 1/2 semble trop par hasard et trop soudain, parce que tous les rythmes de la map ne sont que sur les ticks blancs. Je l'aurais bougé à 00:46:665 -.

Tu peux me rappeler!

Volta wrote:

xinely asked me to look at the taiko again before she icon it, actually i'm still concerned with the kantan because there is no 4/1 break from 00:16:165 ~ until end which is almost 1 minute. one possible solution is to move 00:49:165 - to 00:46:665 - and then rearrange the color to your taste. ok

additonal:
00:29:165 - consider to change to k, it fits with the drum and high pitch piano sound i think it is already good
00:33:665 - you said in previous reply you want to show the start of kiai time, maybe adding k here for the drum will satisfy you it will be too much in this case

Aldwych wrote:

Gonna look on the evening and leave some points in Addition of volta's thoughts aswell.

As promised :

00:13:165 (8) - I would delete this note just because looking previously you have (3 * 4/1 + 3 * 2/1) note construction, so it's just a consistency point.

00:26:165 (23) - Even tho it looks like solid in terms of pattern consistency, it's not really on the rythm side because you've done an offset on your placements. In fact there should have a triple starting here. Althought i don't mind that much it is for me good to notice it. there will be three triplets in a row, which will be too much

00:30:165 (28,29,30,31) - As volta said there's a lack of breaks which i also agree, tbh this is a good place for, on the other hand, i would like to point the 4* 2/1 which is not regular compared to what we have before.

00:44:165 (45,46,47,48,49,50) - 00:52:165 (54,55,56,57) - Why such long 2/1?

01:05:165 (69,70,71) - This is the only triple you didn't start on a big white tick.

Also about the kiai, i don't really feel any difficulty evolution in the kiai part, but maybe it's not on your mapping style to do this.

These are my points on the kantan, you can talk with volta if they sounds decent or not if you prefer.

Secretpipe wrote:

when rank

also futsuu needs to be denser at the start

Denied, Non-sense mapping which will have no link with what i map, and tbh, that's not the place for looking on spread since it's the calm intro.

Nofool wrote:

Chromoxx est pas totalement en tord niveau spread, gros jump entre les diffs, jusqu'à la muzu est une oni quoi. Mes suggestions c'est surtout de la simplification + variation pour la kantan qu'il manque askip d'après le com du BN. Clairement si vous appliquez rien il va nuke la map maintenant que tu l'as appelé @Pachiru :/ donc j'vous conseil clairement d'appliquer des trucs/aller dans le sens de mes suggestions. Ca rendrait le set bien + safe.

le truc qui me tilt tho :
kantan => OD4/HP9
futsuu => OD4.5/HP8
muzukashii => OD5/HP7

Franchement les settings sont bien, perso c'est pas une map qui mérite le joueur de punir à mort, surtout vu le BPM, j'aurais pas dit non si le BPM était élevé, mais c'est pas le cas (pour la défense de ma futsuu, vu que y'a du 3/4, ca a encore moins d'intérêt de relever encore plus l'OD)


[Futsuu]
Mouais rien d'affolant non plus mais bon le fait que tu t'attaches juste aux sons de la musiques sans grosse réflexion rend le truc moins cohérent/plus dure qu'il pourrait l'être.

*- S'il cencerise encore sur le début, sachant que j'ai demandé à Oui de faire exactement le même que toi sans avoir vu cque t'avais fait lul (donc il aurait autant de notes au lieu d'une de plus), j'ai une idée vite fait : ajoutes des d à - 00:05:665 - et - 00:13:665 - ? C'est un peu freestyle mais ça passe relativement bien avec la song => k - - - d - - d k - - - d *2 Perso je trouve ca moche vu que les notes ajoutés ne correspondent a aucun layer. Mais j'ai quand même map plus a cet endroit, mais vraiement pour les jean-nazispread (c'est devenu pire que la peste cet argument, on peux pas simplement en venir à "est-ce que c'est décent pour une futsuu?" "Est-ce que c'est valable par rapport au reste de la diff?" Oui ou Non.

*- 00:18:165 - jusqu'au début 540 (39,40) - toutes celles là j'les aurais delete cash et surtout celles avant le kiai. Certe c'est dans la song et y'a quand même la répétition du dkk kd mais ces notes approtent pas grand chose à part un gros diff jump par rapport à la kantan lul. Je vois pas le reel intéret a part casser la forme/le relief de la map et donne une futsuu au rythme basique comme au final 95% des futsuu
En plus de delete tout ça j'aurais décallé - 00:28:915 (29) - à - 00:28:665 - histoire d'avoir le même schéma qu'à - 00:20:665 (10,11) -.
Ca fait répétition de d - - dkk - kd - d - k - - - d - - dkk - kd - - kd, y'a des beat ignorés ouais mais idk c'est plus cohérent en terme de look, plus simple à jouer donc meilleurs spread avec la kantan. Tu veux carrément décaler à des endroits ou y'a rien, je connais l'overmapping et l'undermapping mais le void mapping, ca non.

*- kiai : Pareil j'virerais les - 00:41:540 (7,8) - / - 00:49:540 (5,6) - (surtout ça avant une big note) / - 00:57:540 (27,28) - / - 01:05:540 (5,6) -. Juste histoire de calmer le diff jump avec la kantan, les variations sont ok mais ces 5/4 sont trop sévères encore j'pense. A la place de - 01:05:540 (5,6) - j'callerais même un d à - 01:05:790 - pour la petite variation finale. Même réponse que pour le relief

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gl

Nofool wrote:

[Kantan]
C'est (pas spécialement) mauvais mais bon le but c'est juste que l'autre BN dise c'est ok donc faut map en fonction de lui.. vu ses coms ton but ici est d'avoir + de variation mais en restant simple comme c'est une kantan. Mes idées pour t'aider :

*- Début jusqu'à - 00:16:165 (9) -, + de variation potentiel, tu peux alterner k d k d etc. - 00:02:165 - / - 00:06:165 - / ... t'as un petit son un peu + aigu qui est ok pour des k.

*- 00:09:165 (2) - J'vois l'idée mais ça rend bof comme y'a vraiment rien qui le supporte plus qu'ailleurs dans la song, delete j'pense.

*- 00:18:165 - Jusqu'au kiai, pour cette part à ta place j'ferais un truc + safe, assez répétitif avec 2 break dont 1 avant le kiai. Concrètement j'aurais fait ça :
ddk d k ddk d (break) kdk d k kdk d (break) kiai
Les breaks sont indispensables imo (surtout celui avant le kiai), ça te ferait delete - 00:25:165 (17) - et - 00:33:165 (26) -. Les kdk sur la deuxième moitiée sonnent ok avec la musique et font bien différents des ddk.

* - kiai : Ton break est nickel, problème du bn la variation comme d'hab. Le fait qu'il y est que des triplets lui cache la variation en fait j'pense. Du coup jte propose d'intriduire des doublets tout en gardant un truc clean répétitif :

- du début jusqu'à ton premier break : d k ddk d k dd kd k ddk d k k (break)
^ Jte conseil de start les triplets au deuxième temps, le premier ici ce serait à - 00:36:165 -, juste histoire de varier avec la formation de la première moitiée de la map. Après le dd kd commencerait à - 00:40:165 -. Avec ça il risque pas de te casser les couilles à cause du spam triplets.Et jee garderais tes deux k à la fin de la part, de la variation en+.

- break jusqu'à la fin : d kdd k dd kddk d kdd k dd kddk D (fin)
^ Cette fois j'commencerais les triplets encore à un endroit différent toujours pour la variation, le premier ici serait à - 00:51:165 -. Surtout gros changement j'utiliserais du dd kddk, ça reste hyper simple vu le bpm mais surtout grosse variation et compliquation des patterns sur la fin de la map (y'a un petit effet + fort sur cette dernière partie de la song donc ça passe bien).
La diff avec les changements que j'propose serait à 0,92* donc ça va large.

Xinely wrote:

Oni :
- 00:12:415 (37) - probably remove this? it makes inconsistency around 00:04:415 - because last was empty. and personally i think the rhythms are too long compared with muzu pattern is getting longer here for the sake of not being repetitive and buildup, i added a note on 00:16:415 - though to further that and not make it look like just a one time thing
- 00:51:665 (227) - 00:59:665 (271) - personally i think k is better due drum is strong and music's stress is increasing. basically the music is same like 00:39:665 (165) - it's keeping consistency with the sounds like 00:38:915 (161,162,163) - and if i changed there would be too much ddkdk

well what is taiko i dont even know