[Easy]
- 00:12:122 (1,2,3,4) - There is lack of flow right here! Try to change the position of those sliders, because it can confuse the mind of the player. Keep in mind that he is starting so you have to use basic game style :3
- 00:28:122 (1,2) - Same here, try to extend your mapping style, so it can get funnier for the player :3
- 00:32:622 (2) - I would recommend you to move this note elsewhere. Like that for exemple: https://puu.sh/sPX5e/280c5bddcf.png
- 00:58:122 (3,4,1) - There is also lack of flow here! Try changing the pattern, instead of doing triangles, try to do linear thing, that could be better I guess.
- 01:15:122 (5,1,2,3) - For this part, try something like that. It would give a better flow I guess. https://puu.sh/sPXf0/4efb568466.png
- 01:33:122 (2,3) - Consider moving this part, because there is no flow, and the reverse slider leads to nothing...
- There is a lot of blanket things to rework, so check ALL your sliders about this. I didn't point all of that because it would be a lot, and I don't know if you'll remove some things with this mod! :3
- 00:15:372 (6) - Try to space it more from the slider, in my opinion, it's very close, so I think you can move it, and it could be better like that, and give more space to move :3
- 00:24:622 (3,4) - Try to change the position of the note, because this is very strange, and it's like the circle is lost :/
- 00:40:372 (2,3,4) - Space it more, there is overlap, and it's not good, so rework on this part. And it stuck the map, I mean, look, there is more than 9 beats on the same grid corner, you have to extend your mapping style bro!
- 01:11:872 (7,1) - Try to avoid things like that in Normal diff, do some things like reverse sliders, I think that it could fit better with it :3
- 00:31:622 (8) - Why not stacking this note on the beginning of the slider? o/
- 00:34:622 (6) - Same for here !
- Do it for all the things like that, only if you did like I said :p
- From here, you change too much of style of mapping, sometimes its 3 circles, sometimes one slider, one note. But don't forget that there is no consistency if you keep doing it like that! So try to rework this part, and I guess it will be okay!