[General]
[kj's voiceless normal]
I hope I could help you, good luck with your map!
- Add some costum colours!
- HP should be between 1 and 3
00:40:122 (1) - You could change this slider into a straight slider because I personally think this shape doesn't fit the upcoming object.
00:44:122 (1) - ^
00:42:622 (3,4) - Try to pull off a blanket out of this.
00:46:622 (3) - Looks weird the way because it almost overlaps with the slider tail of 00:45:122 (2) . Consider moving it a little bit further away from it.
01:17:122 (1,2) - Try to make these more curved for a better circular flow
[kj's voiceless normal]
- Note density should consist of mostly 1/1, occasional 1/2, or slower rhythms.I see that this difficulty is using too many 1/2 beats.
00:09:872 (3,4) - This sounds weird rhythmically. Something like this should work!
00:11:372 (6) - I kinda like it if you extend it a little bit more to the next red tick
00:13:872 (3) - Sounds kinda weird! Deleting this circle and moving 00:14:122 (4) - to where the circle was would work!
00:15:872 - A circle here could work for a better rhythm
00:34:122 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is what I meant by the "Note density". It's using too many 1/2 beats for a normal difficulty. I recommend you to find a way to get sections of a song that spams 1/2 beats like this slower and easier, leaving 1/1 gaps and occasionally 1/2 gaps.
00:56:122 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - ^
00:40:372 (2) - Stack it on the slider tail of 00:41:122 (4)
01:03:872 (7) - You can only use 1/2 sliders with reverse in normals. This might be too hard for new players to read the reverse.
01:19:872 (7) - ^
01:27:872 (1) - ^
01:11:872 (7,1) - Don't do this. Some players can't read this. Replace it with 2 circles if needed.
01:18:122 (1) - Change combo here maybe :3
01:40:622 (3,4) - Spacing is too low
01:48:122 (1) - NC!
- HP should be between 4 and 6
00:11:872 - Placing a circle here wouldn't be bad
00:21:122 (5,6) - CTRL + G these two for a better rhythm and change placement!
00:23:872 (3,4) - Flow
00:27:122 (5,6) - Why overlap here? Doesn't make sense
00:30:872 (7,8) - ^
00:34:122 (5,6) - ^
00:38:872 (8,9) - ^ You get it already :p
00:56:122 (1,2,3) - I recommend that you change some of these 1/3 beats to a short reverse slider to avoid being always the same pattern during this section
01:25:622 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Why are these more spaced when the others aren't like 01:23:622 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) ?
01:35:872 (6) - Stack this on the slider tail of 01:34:872 (4)
I hope I could help you, good luck with your map!