HEY !
Insane
Karen
GL !
Insane
- 00:37:783 (6) - I would personally turn this slider into two circles (could be stacked) to make it a bit more intense as the intensity in the music starts to build up and about to transition to another section. The beats are both pretty strong. Also going into a triple it feels more comfortable.
- 01:09:783 (3) -This is the only part in kiai where you didn't map the drum at 01:09:926 (3) - . Might be for variety but I still would map it like 01:12:069 (3,4) - however I did notice the pitch doesn't change there so idk, your choice.
- 01:31:069 (2,3,4) - Line them up perfectly more like 01:28:783 (2,3,4) - if you can
- 02:16:926 (3,1) - Improve this stack by moving 02:16:926 (3) -
- 02:32:211 (3,4) - Move 02:32:355 (4) - slidertail a bit to the right for perfect linear movement, would look cleaner
- 02:47:355 (1,1) - Your DS for 1/1 gaps in this section are always 1.40 maybe make these too ?
- 00:44:069 (2,3) - Sudden stack kind of breaks the momentum even though I can understand why you put it there, you didn't stack any before
- 00:46:355 (2,3) - Same although you could probably make a pattern like placing (3) under (1)
- 01:10:069 (5) - Stack with 01:09:069 (1) - ?
Karen
- 00:10:069 (2,3) - This spacing if is about half the spacing you do in the next similar patterns like 00:12:355 (2,3) - is there a reason to, it's like the only one.
- 01:14:783 (1) - Would NC the mark the end of kiai. Kind of like you did here 00:07:355 (1) -
- 02:25:926 (2,3,4,5) - Ouch, these stacks really kill the momentum in the most intense section of the song especially when you never stacked before. Highly recommend reworking this pattern.
- 02:35:212 (3,4,5,6) - Very awkward movement IMO, I think the kicksliders should at least be going a bit in the direction of the following circle. Or having them go all in the same direction. Having 02:35:212 (3,4) - go in a different direction then the other two just doesn't work.
- 02:45:355 (1) - Remove NC here don't think it's needed, refer to 02:46:783 (1,2,3,4) - for example.
- 02:56:355 (6) - Should definitely unstack this circle, the pitch is higher and it's the last circle so should probably stand out more then the previous two.
GL !