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Liuth

Joined July 2013

Liuth 2017-01-09T21:13:38+00:00

Easy

00:52:782 (5) - maybe move that circle either to x256 or just somewhere near tail of the slider? since the slider doesn't give it a good blanket and that place seems a bit random

Sieg's Normal

00:12:582 (2,3) - kinda nazi but that blanket can be a little bit better, if you'd move second white point to x20 y200 and ending white point to x136 y96
00:17:082 (1) - this blanket can also be a bit better ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7017879 )
00:33:882 (1) - maybe move the red point y coordinate from 92 to 90, so tail of the slider would show kinda better direction to straight notes 00:34:782 (2,3,4) - ? (how is it right now: http://puu.sh/tgOBC/3435824b8e.jpg )
00:36:582 (2,3) - wouldn't that cause a bit of flow problems?
01:09:432 (5) - this blanket can also be a little bit better done ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7017957 )
02:18:882 (4) - I don't know of it's a good idea to set alone "weird" slider like that, it doesn't really fit the style of the previous ones since it's the only slider like that in the whole difficulty.

Twin Hard

00:42:282 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I know it's kiai and so but compared to previous patterns, isn't this one a bit too difficult? It's harder to play than this 00:51:882 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - or this 01:30:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for example and flow is also way sharper.
02:27:882 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - same ^^^^

Insane

01:24:732 (2,3) - these sliders are a bit too sharp, at least for me. maybe you should make them a bit softer?
01:34:332 (2,3) - same ^^^
01:35:682 (4,5) - ^^^

gosh I love so much your sexy triangles in Hard diff

GL, song is amazing! <3

Myxo

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Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Myxo 2017-01-14T10:18:11+00:00

Liuth wrote:
Easy

00:52:782 (5) - maybe move that circle either to x256 or just somewhere near tail of the slider? since the slider doesn't give it a good blanket and that place seems a bit random fixed

Twin Hard

00:42:282 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I know it's kiai and so but compared to previous patterns, isn't this one a bit too difficult? It's harder to play than this 00:51:882 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - or this 01:30:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for example and flow is also way sharper.
02:27:882 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - same ^^^^ the movement actually plays more smoothly i think, because players are more used to sharp movements, also yeah in any case i don't think it's a difficulty spike and insane uses a lot of movements like this too

Insane

01:24:732 (2,3) - these sliders are a bit too sharp, at least for me. maybe you should make them a bit softer?
01:34:332 (2,3) - same ^^^
01:35:682 (4,5) - ^^ i know what you mean, but these are here to form proper hearts so i think it's fine :b

gosh I love so much your sexy triangles in Hard diff

GL, song is amazing! <3

Thanks for modding! :3

Sonnyc

7,754 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2017-01-15T11:25:29+00:00

Easy.
Regarding the hitsounds in the kiai section, though I know it is consistent with higher diffs but due to the lower note density, several finishes felt too spammed imo.
00:37:482 - 01:25:482 - Inconsistent hitsound.
02:09:882 (1) - You'll want to make this a blue for consistency with other diffs.
02:19:482 (1) - And a yellow for this.

Hard.
01:00:882 - 02:08:082 - Why does the break end here unlike other diffs?
00:42:282 (4) - 01:30:282 (1) - Inconsistent combo setting broke the further combo color consistency. Remove nc of (1).
00:52:332 (7,8) - Mind making the spacing consistent with 01:40:332 (7,8)?
02:19:482 (1) - Change color to yellow.

Insane.
00:23:832 (7) - Minor spacing error makes a redundant follow point visible.
00:32:682 - 01:20:682 - I feel the volume to be a little too much compared to the relatively calm part. Please consider reducing it.
00:50:532 (4) - 01:38:532 - 02:36:132 (4) - Inconsistent rhythm while the song being consistent, and you also were being consistent in patterns didn't felt great.
01:54:582 - Are you sure with this finish? The sound feels quite redundant.
02:19:482 (1) - Considering a yellow combo color was used at the start of the kiai section along the 1/2 slider symmetry pattern, you'll also want to make this a yellow. It will also make further combo colors consistent.

Good map.

Myxo

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Myxo 2017-01-16T12:39:14+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Easy.
Regarding the hitsounds in the kiai section, though I know it is consistent with higher diffs but due to the lower note density, several finishes felt too spammed imo. removed some
00:37:482 - 01:25:482 - Inconsistent hitsound. fixed
02:09:882 (1) - You'll want to make this a blue for consistency with other diffs. okay
02:19:482 (1) - And a yellow for this. fixed

Hard.
01:00:882 - 02:08:082 - Why does the break end here unlike other diffs? fixed
00:42:282 (4) - 01:30:282 (1) - Inconsistent combo setting broke the further combo color consistency. Remove nc of (1). fixed
00:52:332 (7,8) - Mind making the spacing consistent with 01:40:332 (7,8)? doesn't really matter because it's a small difference and i prefer to keep the visual spacing consistent
02:19:482 (1) - Change color to yellow. done

Insane.f
00:23:832 (7) - Minor spacing error makes a redundant follow point visible. fixed
00:32:682 - 01:20:682 - I feel the volume to be a little too much compared to the relatively calm part. Please consider reducing it. fixed
00:50:532 (4) - 01:38:532 - 02:36:132 (4) - Inconsistent rhythm while the song being consistent, and you also were being consistent in patterns didn't felt great. hmm i prefer to keep this, because players won't remember this pattern and using a slight variation of it doens't hurt as it complements the pattern in each case.
01:54:582 - Are you sure with this finish? The sound feels quite redundant. removed, same for other finishes in this section
02:19:482 (1) - Considering a yellow combo color was used at the start of the kiai section along the 1/2 slider symmetry pattern, you'll also want to make this a yellow. It will also make further combo colors consistent. okay

Good map.

Thanks a lot! :3 Update, also with Sieg's fixes below.

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2017-01-16T13:02:38+00:00

Liuth wrote:
Sieg's Normal

00:12:582 (2,3) - kinda nazi but that blanket can be a little bit better, if you'd move second white point to x20 y200 and ending white point to x136 y96
sure, huh
00:17:082 (1) - this blanket can also be a bit better ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7017879 )
sure
00:33:882 (1) - maybe move the red point y coordinate from 92 to 90, so tail of the slider would show kinda better direction to straight notes 00:34:782 (2,3,4) - ? (how is it right now: http://puu.sh/tgOBC/3435824b8e.jpg )
sure
00:36:582 (2,3) - wouldn't that cause a bit of flow problems?
should be fine
01:09:432 (5) - this blanket can also be a little bit better done ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7017957 )
sure
02:18:882 (4) - I don't know of it's a good idea to set alone "weird" slider like that, it doesn't really fit the style of the previous ones since it's the only slider like that in the whole difficulty.
it's kind of unique for the unique sound, also it's not very far from what is used

thanks!

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Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2017-01-16T13:14:57+00:00

Nominated.

Myxo

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Topic Starter

Myxo 2017-01-16T13:18:51+00:00

Thank you!

Aurele

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Aurele 2017-01-17T02:42:50+00:00

yay~!

ZekeyHache

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ZekeyHache 2017-01-17T03:35:40+00:00

Gabe wrote:
yay~!

Seijiro

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Seijiro 2017-01-17T10:47:54+00:00

as requested :3

Insane:
- 02:17:682 (3,4,5) - I'd like to keep that old, symmetrical feeling on this one so what do you think about something like this? (ok, maybe 5 can be placed a little better and the next 1 can be ctrl+g'd too)
- 00:52:932 - is this beat really there o.O? I removed hitsounds to check and it looks like there's just and ending sound, not a real click

Twin Hard:
- 00:13:782 (4) - well, maybe not the best solution, but if you place this slider like this you can avoid the ugly overlap and also avoid moving too much stuff around (I guess only 00:14:382 (5) - needs to be adjusted a little in that case)

Sieg:
- there is a huge difference between when you use 00:42:432 (3,4) - and when you use 00:51:882 (2,3) - . The last one really helps a lot to keep the rhythm, while the first one is more like a challenge to see if beginners can handle that sort of stuff :/ I'd personally use the second one.
- 01:45:882 (4,5) - it feels more natural to have the slider instead of 4 tbh. (it's basically a ctrl + g rhythm-wise) // 01:50:682 (4,5) - 01:55:482 (4,5) - same

Easy looks fine to me~

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Sieg

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Sieg 2017-01-17T12:16:14+00:00

MrSergio wrote:
Sieg:
- there is a huge difference between when you use 00:42:432 (3,4) - and when you use 00:51:882 (2,3) - . The last one really helps a lot to keep the rhythm, while the first one is more like a challenge to see if beginners can handle that sort of stuff :/ I'd personally use the second one.
I personally like to vary, music allows.
- 01:45:882 (4,5) - it feels more natural to have the slider instead of 4 tbh. (it's basically a ctrl + g rhythm-wise) // 01:50:682 (4,5) - 01:55:482 (4,5) - same
k

thanks!

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Myxo

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Myxo 2017-01-17T19:06:35+00:00

MrSergio wrote:
as requested :3

Insane:
- 02:17:682 (3,4,5) - I'd like to keep that old, symmetrical feeling on this one so what do you think about something like this? (ok, maybe 5 can be placed a little better and the next 1 can be ctrl+g'd too) Hmm, but 02:17:982 (4,5) - are already symmetrical and I prefer not having that overlap so D:
- 00:52:932 - is this beat really there o.O? I removed hitsounds to check and it looks like there's just and ending sound, not a real click yeah it's definitely there, it's the same sound like in the other kiais

Twin Hard:
- 00:13:782 (4) - well, maybe not the best solution, but if you place this slider like this you can avoid the ugly overlap and also avoid moving too much stuff around (I guess only 00:14:382 (5) - needs to be adjusted a little in that case) i actually like how that overlap looks xD and i think the flow and spacing are better as it is now

Easy looks fine to me~

Hue

Thank you very much! :3 Updated!