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Little

Joined November 2012

Little 2016-04-19T23:02:40+00:00

Mercusheigan wrote:
Insane

00:22:151 (2) - could be better shaped to blanket with 00:23:164 (1) - No, it makes the spacing awkward.

00:56:205 (1) - I'd rather stack on 00:56:407 (2) - than 5 No. I want jump there.

01:01:678 (1) - maybe add an inherit point to increase the SV of this slider a bit? No.

01:59:651 (5) - maybe give it more curves? Curved slightly more.

02:02:691 (1) - same as in 00:56:205 (1)

02:08:164 (1) - same as in 01:01:678 (1) -

03:03:097 (1) - moving to 64, 316 looks better IMO No.

03:26:407 (3,4,5) - all blankets should have same spacing IMO Cleaned up the blankets a bit.

@Rizia fixed both.
Thanks!
http://f.ttle.li/mYcn.zip

Doormat

2,049 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Doormat 2016-04-19T23:51:28+00:00

updated to this point-

Rizia

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Joined January 2012

Rizia 2016-04-20T11:31:14+00:00

great

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

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Joined November 2013

Chaoslitz 2016-04-20T16:51:47+00:00

[General]

Confirmed with metadata?

[Easy]

00:00:462 (1,2,3,4) - I wonder if you are going to place in asymmetry lol
03:11:205 (2) - Better unstack the reverse arrow from the slider end of 03:09:380 (3) to prevent any reading issues

[Normal]

01:14:245 (6,7,8) - Don't stack too much notes in a Normal diff lol, it may be better to use a 1/2 reverse slider
02:20:732 (6,7,8) - ^
03:12:624 (6,7,8) - ^

[Hard]

02:56:407 (1) - Unnecessary NC

nice mapset!
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Doormat

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Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Doormat 2016-04-20T17:10:46+00:00

hi hi chaos o/
metadata check (i highlighted it with a red box)

Chaoslitz wrote:
[Easy]
00:00:462 (1,2,3,4) - I wonder if you are going to place in asymmetry lol actually 00:00:462 (1,2,3,4,1) - is a pentagon so i think this is fine
03:11:205 (2) - Better unstack the reverse arrow from the slider end of 03:09:380 (3) to prevent any reading issues
[Normal]
01:14:245 (6,7,8) - Don't stack too much notes in a Normal diff lol, it may be better to use a 1/2 reverse slider
02:20:732 (6,7,8) - ^
03:12:624 (6,7,8) - ^ had to do some moving around here in order to accommodate for the 1/2 reverse slider
[Hard]
02:56:407 (1) - Unnecessary NC

nice mapset!
Call me back

no comment = fixed. thanks again!