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Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年10月23日 at 0:42:11

Artist: Iyaz
Title: Solo
Tags: Roddie Antu Villegas DiamondCrash
BPM: 130
Filesize: 5335kb
Play Time: 03:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. DC's Easy (1.4 stars, 147 notes)
  2. Hard (4.7 stars, 490 notes)
  3. Normal (3.24 stars, 290 notes)
  4. Roddie's Hard (4.87 stars, 495 notes)
Download: Iyaz - Solo
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Easy By: DiamondCrash
Normal and Hard By: The 08 team_Bourdon
Roddie's Hard By: Roddie
Hitsounds By: Roddie
StoryBoaring By: Antu Villegas

Thanks you all :)

Please RE-download before you download at 2010.10.22 11:55(GMT+8)

so ... Enjoy~ :D
[deleted user]
连打有点多啦 :)
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

Play Offline wrote:

连打有点多啦 :)
嗯~會修改的 :D ...
TerisKey
:)

加油lol
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

TerisKey wrote:

:)

加油lol
謝謝~~我會加油的~ :D
Roddie
There you go.

Download: Diffs.rar

All fixed for you~

I'll finish my difficulty soon enough.

Star for now!
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

hybrid579 wrote:

There you go.

[attachment=0:27e22]Diffs.rar[/attachment:27e22]

All fixed for you~

I'll finish my difficulty soon enough.

Star for now!
Thank you very much~~ :D
Roddie
Finished my difficulty~

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [hyb's Intense].osu

Hope you like it! :)

Add me in the tags by the way.

And add a storyboard saying "Beatmap By: hybrid579" in my difficulty, please. :3
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

hybrid579 wrote:

Finished my difficulty~

[attachment=0:547d6]Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [hyb's Intense].osu[/attachment:547d6]

Hope you like it! :)

Add me in the tags by the way.

And add a storyboard saying "Beatmap By: hybrid579" in my difficulty, please. :3
:) okay~~
Roddie
Updated from Teara's mod~

And thanks. :3

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [hyb's Intense].osu
Teara
Hi!

IRC mod for Hybrid's Diff.

SPOILER
19:31 <Teara> : 00:07:383 (1,2,3,4,1) -
19:31 <Teara> : doesnt make sense
19:32 <hybrid579> : i tried 2 syc it with the vocals
19:32 <hybrid579> : sync*
19:32 <Teara> : not possible I think
19:32 <Teara> : still doesnt make sense, try something else?:
19:33 <hybrid579> : replace it with slider?
19:33 <Teara> : maybe
19:33 <Teara> : spinner can work too
19:33 <hybrid579> : im trying not 2 use 2 much spinners
19:33 <hybrid579> : lol
19:34 <Teara> : slider then
19:34 <hybrid579> : k
19:34 <hybrid579> : its done
19:34 <Teara> : 01:32:306 (6) -
19:34 <Teara> : new combo
19:34 <hybrid579> : k
19:34 <hybrid579> : done
19:35 <Teara> : 02:04:959 (6) -
19:35 <Teara> : delete
19:35 <hybrid579> : u sure?
19:35 <Teara> : yup
19:35 <Teara> : listen to it at 50
19:35 <Teara> : %
19:35 <hybrid579> : wont that throw players off?
19:35 <Teara> : nope
19:35 <Teara> : some yes, but the diff is for advance players
19:36 <hybrid579> : k
19:36 <hybrid579> : its fixed
19:36 <hybrid579> : guess ur right
19:36 <Teara> : 02:19:267 (1) -
19:36 <Teara> : add note
19:36 <Teara> : 02:19:729 (5) -
19:36 <Teara> : delete
19:37 <Teara> : 02:35:075 (3) -
19:37 <Teara> : remove new combo
19:37 <Teara> : 02:36:921 (4) -
19:37 <Teara> : new combo
19:38 <Teara> : 02:45:229 (4) - spacing sucks
19:38 <Teara> : redo =p
19:38 <Teara> : 02:47:998 (3) -
19:38 <Teara> : new combo

Also

Normal/Hard seems fine.

I'll only point out the things that really bother me.

Mostly its overlaps, personally, I dislike it. Also, for [Hard] some streams are nice, then others are ugly, please fix it =p

ok, Here we go!

[Hard]

00:22:153 (9) - Align properly with [8]
00:22:614 (1,3,4) - Overlap :<
00:28:614 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Looks ugly, fix it? ( 02:11:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is nice )

Only cosmetics. Good job and star
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

Teara wrote:

Hi!

IRC mod for Hybrid's Diff.

SPOILER
19:31 <Teara> : 00:07:383 (1,2,3,4,1) -
19:31 <Teara> : doesnt make sense
19:32 <hybrid579> : i tried 2 syc it with the vocals
19:32 <hybrid579> : sync*
19:32 <Teara> : not possible I think
19:32 <Teara> : still doesnt make sense, try something else?:
19:33 <hybrid579> : replace it with slider?
19:33 <Teara> : maybe
19:33 <Teara> : spinner can work too
19:33 <hybrid579> : im trying not 2 use 2 much spinners
19:33 <hybrid579> : lol
19:34 <Teara> : slider then
19:34 <hybrid579> : k
19:34 <hybrid579> : its done
19:34 <Teara> : 01:32:306 (6) -
19:34 <Teara> : new combo
19:34 <hybrid579> : k
19:34 <hybrid579> : done
19:35 <Teara> : 02:04:959 (6) -
19:35 <Teara> : delete
19:35 <hybrid579> : u sure?
19:35 <Teara> : yup
19:35 <Teara> : listen to it at 50
19:35 <Teara> : %
19:35 <hybrid579> : wont that throw players off?
19:35 <Teara> : nope
19:35 <Teara> : some yes, but the diff is for advance players
19:36 <hybrid579> : k
19:36 <hybrid579> : its fixed
19:36 <hybrid579> : guess ur right
19:36 <Teara> : 02:19:267 (1) -
19:36 <Teara> : add note
19:36 <Teara> : 02:19:729 (5) -
19:36 <Teara> : delete
19:37 <Teara> : 02:35:075 (3) -
19:37 <Teara> : remove new combo
19:37 <Teara> : 02:36:921 (4) -
19:37 <Teara> : new combo
19:38 <Teara> : 02:45:229 (4) - spacing sucks
19:38 <Teara> : redo =p
19:38 <Teara> : 02:47:998 (3) -
19:38 <Teara> : new combo

Also

Normal/Hard seems fine.

I'll only point out the things that really bother me.

Mostly its overlaps, personally, I dislike it. Also, for [Hard] some streams are nice, then others are ugly, please fix it =p

ok, Here we go!

[Hard]

00:22:153 (9) - Align properly with [8]
00:22:614 (1,3,4) - Overlap :<
00:28:614 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Looks ugly, fix it? ( 02:11:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is nice )

Only cosmetics. Good job and star
okay~Thank you~ :)
Antu Villegas
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

leamega008 wrote:

http://www.mediafire.com/?yznmdyhnjti Try this SB
nice~ Thank you~ :)
ayey
HI~
[Normal]
Fine , I guess

[Hard]
02:06:691 (x) - Add a note?
03:15:576 (8,9) - Delete this note?

[hyb's Intense]
00:08:075 (2) - Move 1/4 backward?
00:15:229 (2) - 1 grid up
00:47:652 (x) - Add a note?
02:24:921 (x) - ^

Starred~
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

ayey wrote:

HI~
[Normal]
Fine , I guess

[Hard]
02:06:691 (x) - Add a note?
03:15:576 (8,9) - Delete this note?

[hyb's Intense]
00:08:075 (2) - Move 1/4 backward?
00:15:229 (2) - 1 grid up
00:47:652 (x) - Add a note?
02:24:921 (x) - ^

Starred~
okay~~ i try that...and thanks :D
Roddie

ayey wrote:

HI~

[hyb's Intense]
00:08:075 (2) - Move 1/4 backward? (Fixed.)
00:15:229 (2) - 1 grid up (Fixed.)
00:47:652 (x) - Add a note? (No.)
02:24:921 (x) - ^ (Fixed.)

Starred~
Thanks, ayey. :D

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [hyb's Intense].osu
Antu Villegas

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

leamega008 wrote:

http://www.mediafire.com/?yznmdyhnjti Try this SB
nice~ Thank you~ :)
I will add more things to it.
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

leamega008 wrote:

I will add more things to it.
Thank you~ waiting ur SB :D
hawkzor
Hey :)

[Normal]

00:59:076 (3) - Move this underneath (1)

01:19:614 (1) - Make this spinner 5 ticks shorter, and move it forward so it starts on 01:20:191 - and ends on 01:21:230 - , then:
01:18:460 (1) - Move this slider 2 ticks back, so it starts on the red tick, and then make it repeat, for spacing move it so it starts underneath 01:17:999 (9) - or close to it within spacing. [This part sounds better to me mapped to the vocals here]

02:33:460 (1) - Same as above. Make this spinner 5 ticks shorter, and move it forward so it starts on 02:34:037 - and ends on 02:35:076 -, then:
02:32:307 (1) - Move this slider 2 ticks back, then make it 4 ticks longer and keep the repeat. After that move it into spacing again, underneath or so that is not to far away from 02:31:845 (9) -

03:03:230 (10) - Remove this hitcircle, then:
03:01:384 (9) - Remove the last repeat, then move the slider 2 ticks forward ,and then make the slider 4 ticks longer, and keep the repeat. Then adjust spacing before and after to keep everything within spacing.

[Hard]

00:21:460 (8) - Move this underneath the repeating slider (7) before it
00:29:076 (6) - Add clap
00:35:537 (8) - Add clap

00:47:076 (1) - Remove this hitcircle, then move this slider 00:47:191 (2) - one tick back, and add a note on 00:46:845 (x) - if you want, remember to put a new combo in again.

00:58:614 (5) - Add clap
01:13:384 (6) - Add clap

01:07:153 (4) - Seems like it doesn't fit ,Remove both repeats for this slider. Then remove this hitcircle 01:08:768 (5) - , then add a new slider starting here 01:07:845 (x) - and ending here 01:08:307 (x) - [white tick to white tick] and make it repeat. it let it start with a clap and finish with a clap on the time-line, (no clap in the middle where it repeats).

02:20:537 (8) - Same as above. Remove both repeats for (8). Remove 02:22:153 (9)- . Then add a new slider from 02:21:230 (x) - to 02:21:691 (x)- and make it repeat once. No clap on the new slider , maybe one in the middle where it repeats.

02:26:307 (1) - Add clap
03:04:614 (9) - Add finish

[hyb's intense]

IRC mod~

here is about half of it
SPOILER
02:53 <hawkzor> : 00:41:998 -
02:53 <hybrid579> : ok
02:54 <hawkzor> : http://i31.tinypic.com/2drtmaa.jpg
02:54 <hawkzor> : like that
02:55 <hybrid579> : ok
02:55 <hybrid579> : i got it
02:55 <hybrid579> : lol
02:56 <hybrid579> : and wat about 00:41:998 -?
02:57 <hawkzor> : The same as the previous one
02:57 <hawkzor> : and at 00:54:459 -
02:57 <hawkzor> : I mean the distance does change when it a stream
02:57 <hawkzor> : but not by enough I think
02:58 <hawkzor> : The other way to fix it is to just move all the streams closer to each other
02:58 <hawkzor> : like the spacings with stream
02:58 <hawkzor> : streams*
02:59 <hybrid579> : http://puu.sh/2U3
02:59 <hybrid579> : ?
03:02 <hawkzor> : Yeah like that
03:02 <hybrid579> : awesome :3
03:02 <hybrid579> : lol
03:02 <hawkzor> : but you have to do that for all streams ;p
03:02 <hybrid579> : ok ._.
03:03 <hybrid579> : all of them for streams?
03:03 <hawkzor> : or atleast the ones that are close to other notes with open ticks bewteen them
03:03 <hybrid579> : ah
03:03 <hybrid579> : ok
03:04 <hawkzor> : Yeah like example this is fine i guess 00:39:690 -
03:05 <hybrid579> : im sure its fine xD
03:05 <hybrid579> : lol
03:06 <hawkzor> : but check like here : 01:05:306 -
03:06 <hawkzor> : There is also only 1 tick open between (3) and (4)
03:06 <hybrid579> : k
03:06 <hawkzor> : but theres a bigger spacing gap
03:06 <hawkzor> : So thats fine
03:07 <hybrid579> : k :3
03:07 <hawkzor> : and then just a bit on 01:08:998 -
03:07 <hawkzor> : (1) and (2)
03:07 <hybrid579> : k
03:07 <hawkzor> : there is also one tick open between them
03:07 <hawkzor> : But there the notes touch each other
03:07 <hybrid579> : ur right
03:08 <hawkzor> : See that differance is spacing :P
03:08 <hybrid579> : yup
03:08 <hybrid579> : wat do u suggest?
03:08 <hawkzor> : You should keep the same spacing throughout the map ;p
03:09 <hawkzor> : Probaly let someone mod it first and see what they say
03:09 <hawkzor> : because I don't really know that much ;p
03:10 <hawkzor> : uI dont mod a lot
03:10 <hybrid579> : test this part out for me
03:10 <hybrid579> : 02:22:844
03:10 <hybrid579> : 02:22:844 -
03:10 <hybrid579> : there is a spacing problem i made there
03:11 <hybrid579> : test it out and let me know wat u think
03:11 <hawkzor> : Did you change it
03:11 <hybrid579> : i didnt change it now ._.
03:12 <hawkzor> : That part is actually fine the way it is
03:12 <hawkzor> : because the stream part is a stack
03:12 <hybrid579> : rly? O_o
03:12 <hawkzor> : so it doesn't make a differnce
03:12 <hawkzor> : the spacing
03:13 <hawkzor> : But it just doesn't match with the rest of the map
03:13 <hybrid579> : right ._.
03:13 <hybrid579> : i'll try and fix that then
03:13 <hawkzor> : if you want to keep spacings like this 01:05:306 -
03:14 <hawkzor> : But yeah i think the best way to do it is just changing to spacings of all streams
03:14 <hawkzor> : But its probaly gonna be a lot of work


Message me In-Game if you don't understand any of the mods.

Very nice map , Star~<3
Roddie
Updated~

Thanks, hawkzor. 8-)

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [hyb's Intense].osu

Oh, plus Kudosu star from me! :)
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

hawkzor wrote:

Hey :)

[Normal]

00:59:076 (3) - Move this underneath (1)

01:19:614 (1) - Make this spinner 5 ticks shorter, and move it forward so it starts on 01:20:191 - and ends on 01:21:230 - , then:
01:18:460 (1) - Move this slider 2 ticks back, so it starts on the red tick, and then make it repeat, for spacing move it so it starts underneath 01:17:999 (9) - or close to it within spacing. [This part sounds better to me mapped to the vocals here]

02:33:460 (1) - Same as above. Make this spinner 5 ticks shorter, and move it forward so it starts on 02:34:037 - and ends on 02:35:076 -, then:
02:32:307 (1) - Move this slider 2 ticks back, then make it 4 ticks longer and keep the repeat. After that move it into spacing again, underneath or so that is not to far away from 02:31:845 (9) -

03:03:230 (10) - Remove this hitcircle, then:
03:01:384 (9) - Remove the last repeat, then move the slider 2 ticks forward ,and then make the slider 4 ticks longer, and keep the repeat. Then adjust spacing before and after to keep everything within spacing.

[Hard]

00:21:460 (8) - Move this underneath the repeating slider (7) before it
00:29:076 (6) - Add clap
00:35:537 (8) - Add clap

00:47:076 (1) - Remove this hitcircle, then move this slider 00:47:191 (2) - one tick back, and add a note on 00:46:845 (x) - if you want, remember to put a new combo in again.

00:58:614 (5) - Add clap
01:13:384 (6) - Add clap

01:07:153 (4) - Seems like it doesn't fit ,Remove both repeats for this slider. Then remove this hitcircle 01:08:768 (5) - , then add a new slider starting here 01:07:845 (x) - and ending here 01:08:307 (x) - [white tick to white tick] and make it repeat. it let it start with a clap and finish with a clap on the time-line, (no clap in the middle where it repeats).

02:20:537 (8) - Same as above. Remove both repeats for (8). Remove 02:22:153 (9)- . Then add a new slider from 02:21:230 (x) - to 02:21:691 (x)- and make it repeat once. No clap on the new slider , maybe one in the middle where it repeats.

02:26:307 (1) - Add clap
03:04:614 (9) - Add finish

[hyb's intense]

IRC mod~

here is about half of it
SPOILER
02:53 <hawkzor> : 00:41:998 -
02:53 <hybrid579> : ok
02:54 <hawkzor> : http://i31.tinypic.com/2drtmaa.jpg
02:54 <hawkzor> : like that
02:55 <hybrid579> : ok
02:55 <hybrid579> : i got it
02:55 <hybrid579> : lol
02:56 <hybrid579> : and wat about 00:41:998 -?
02:57 <hawkzor> : The same as the previous one
02:57 <hawkzor> : and at 00:54:459 -
02:57 <hawkzor> : I mean the distance does change when it a stream
02:57 <hawkzor> : but not by enough I think
02:58 <hawkzor> : The other way to fix it is to just move all the streams closer to each other
02:58 <hawkzor> : like the spacings with stream
02:58 <hawkzor> : streams*
02:59 <hybrid579> : http://puu.sh/2U3
02:59 <hybrid579> : ?
03:02 <hawkzor> : Yeah like that
03:02 <hybrid579> : awesome :3
03:02 <hybrid579> : lol
03:02 <hawkzor> : but you have to do that for all streams ;p
03:02 <hybrid579> : ok ._.
03:03 <hybrid579> : all of them for streams?
03:03 <hawkzor> : or atleast the ones that are close to other notes with open ticks bewteen them
03:03 <hybrid579> : ah
03:03 <hybrid579> : ok
03:04 <hawkzor> : Yeah like example this is fine i guess 00:39:690 -
03:05 <hybrid579> : im sure its fine xD
03:05 <hybrid579> : lol
03:06 <hawkzor> : but check like here : 01:05:306 -
03:06 <hawkzor> : There is also only 1 tick open between (3) and (4)
03:06 <hybrid579> : k
03:06 <hawkzor> : but theres a bigger spacing gap
03:06 <hawkzor> : So thats fine
03:07 <hybrid579> : k :3
03:07 <hawkzor> : and then just a bit on 01:08:998 -
03:07 <hawkzor> : (1) and (2)
03:07 <hybrid579> : k
03:07 <hawkzor> : there is also one tick open between them
03:07 <hawkzor> : But there the notes touch each other
03:07 <hybrid579> : ur right
03:08 <hawkzor> : See that differance is spacing :P
03:08 <hybrid579> : yup
03:08 <hybrid579> : wat do u suggest?
03:08 <hawkzor> : You should keep the same spacing throughout the map ;p
03:09 <hawkzor> : Probaly let someone mod it first and see what they say
03:09 <hawkzor> : because I don't really know that much ;p
03:10 <hawkzor> : uI dont mod a lot
03:10 <hybrid579> : test this part out for me
03:10 <hybrid579> : 02:22:844
03:10 <hybrid579> : 02:22:844 -
03:10 <hybrid579> : there is a spacing problem i made there
03:11 <hybrid579> : test it out and let me know wat u think
03:11 <hawkzor> : Did you change it
03:11 <hybrid579> : i didnt change it now ._.
03:12 <hawkzor> : That part is actually fine the way it is
03:12 <hawkzor> : because the stream part is a stack
03:12 <hybrid579> : rly? O_o
03:12 <hawkzor> : so it doesn't make a differnce
03:12 <hawkzor> : the spacing
03:13 <hawkzor> : But it just doesn't match with the rest of the map
03:13 <hybrid579> : right ._.
03:13 <hybrid579> : i'll try and fix that then
03:13 <hawkzor> : if you want to keep spacings like this 01:05:306 -
03:14 <hawkzor> : But yeah i think the best way to do it is just changing to spacings of all streams
03:14 <hawkzor> : But its probaly gonna be a lot of work


Message me In-Game if you don't understand any of the mods.

Very nice map , Star~<3
:D thank you very much~~~
dkun
'ello~

Feel free to disregard anything I post.
Normal
Nothing much to report here.

Hard
Just on a side note, you could replace some of the 1/4 streams in the beginning with some short repeating sliders.
00:55:384 (6) - New combo here? Just following how you're comboing things.
01:31:384 (7) - ^
02:17:076 (1,2) - For some reason, I don't like this stack. Space out, maybe?
02:17:768 (1,1) - Is this part trying to go with the vocals? Because it doesn't fit.
03:07:384 (6) - New combo here?

hyb's Intense
01:01:383 (1,2) - Could you move the 1/4 stream to the two to match with the placement of these two notes? Or space it out like you did at 01:08:998 (1,2)
02:03:459 (3-9) - These can't be spaced out like the ones following?

Side notes
Great job on the map~ Looking forward to this getting ranked.
Take a ★ ~
Roddie

dkun wrote:

'ello~

hyb's Intense
01:01:383 (1,2) - Could you move the 1/4 stream to the two to match with the placement of these two notes? Or space it out like you did at 01:08:998 (1,2)
02:03:459 (3-9) - These can't be spaced out like the ones following?

^All fixed.
Thanks for the mod, dkun. 8-)

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [hyb's Intense].osu
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

dkun wrote:

'ello~

Feel free to disregard anything I post.
Normal
Nothing much to report here.

Hard
Just on a side note, you could replace some of the 1/4 streams in the beginning with some short repeating sliders.
00:55:384 (6) - New combo here? Just following how you're comboing things.
01:31:384 (7) - ^
02:17:076 (1,2) - For some reason, I don't like this stack. Space out, maybe?
02:17:768 (1,1) - Is this part trying to go with the vocals? Because it doesn't fit.
03:07:384 (6) - New combo here?

Take a ★ ~
Thanks you very much~ :D
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

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    • Offset: 7380 (resnap all notes)
    • The SB Images contains unnecessary trasparency.
    • Max background size is 1024x768.
    • The easiest difficulty must be below a 3-star difficulty level.
    • Set a preview point.

    • Honestly, I don't like this skin: delete it.
[Normal]

  • • 00:14:764 (5) - New combo
    • 00:21:456 (2) - Start this slider here 00:21:687 and end it here 00:22:149
    • 03:04:033 (2) - Start this slider here 03:04:149
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

  • • Tags: leamega008 hybrid579 (Tags should be the same on all difficulties)
    • Offset: 7380 (resnap all notes)
    • The SB Images contains unnecessary trasparency.
    • Max background size is 1024x768.
    • The easiest difficulty must be below a 3-star difficulty level.
    • Set a preview point.

    • Honestly, I don't like this skin: delete it.
[Normal]

  • • 00:14:764 (5) - New combo
    • 00:21:456 (2) - Start this slider here 00:21:687 and end it here 00:22:149
    • 03:04:033 (2) - Start this slider here 03:04:149
Thank you~~ :D
bearing019
General;

Why do you have 2 of the same image in your song folder...?
There are more breaks in insane than in hard...? Perhaps you'd like to add another break in hard.
Is that skin really necessary? I'd get rid of it.

Normal;

00:49:610 (1,1) - One spinner here?
01:37:380 (3) - This seems random. Maybe just a 1/2 repeat?

Oh, and I think you need an easy. Have one on me.

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [DC's Easy].osu
Roddie

DiamondCrash wrote:

General;

There are more breaks in insane than in hard...? Perhaps you'd like to add another break in hard.

^Nah. Added more notes on the 2nd break in my difficulty. So it should be okay now.
Thanks for mentioning, DC. 8-)

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [hyb's Intense].osu
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

DiamondCrash wrote:

General;

Why do you have 2 of the same image in your song folder...?
There are more breaks in insane than in hard...? Perhaps you'd like to add another break in hard.
Is that skin really necessary? I'd get rid of it.

Normal;

00:49:610 (1,1) - One spinner here?
01:37:380 (3) - This seems random. Maybe just a 1/2 repeat?

Oh, and I think you need an easy. Have one on me.
Thanks ur easy difficulty~ :D
RandomJibberish
You got my first MATmod. Lucky you.

General
I don't like the random skin elements, it'd be best to get rid of them
If you do keep them I'm pretty sure you need a sliderball.
The white combo colour is really ugly, especially during kiai. Make it grey or beige or something

Get rid of that .osb

DC's Easy
Is awesome
DC probably feels all left out becuase his name isn't at the start though :P

Normal
01:17:995 (1) - Move forward onto red tick?
01:46:149 (3) - Move out of stack to look like previous combos?
02:17:533 (5,6,7) - Move back onto red ticks and remove repeat from slider. And fix spacing of course
02:31:841 (1) - Move forward onto red ticks
03:16:610 (3,4) - Move back onto red ticks
03:17:533 (1) - End at 03:18:687?

Hard
Wow huge difficulty jump from that easyish normal. I'd suggest getting rid of the streams and making it less of an insane, especially since you already have another silly streamy diff
00:12:456 (1,2,3) - Move back a whole beat?
01:20:533 (3) - IMO if it needs a warning it shouldn't be there. Move this and the beat before so you can see the repeat?
01:50:303 (8) - Looks odd. Straighten out into a smooth curve or make the wiggles even
03:15:687 (1) - End at 03:18:687?

Hyb's Intense
00:24:229 (4,5) - Spaaacing
00:27:459 (5) - Shorten by 1/2
03:18:229 (7) - Shorten by a beat

Pretty good map.
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

RandomJibberish wrote:

You got my first MATmod. Lucky you.

General
I don't like the random skin elements, it'd be best to get rid of them
If you do keep them I'm pretty sure you need a sliderball.
The white combo colour is really ugly, especially during kiai. Make it grey or beige or something

Get rid of that .osb

DC's Easy
Is awesome
DC probably feels all left out becuase his name isn't at the start though :P

Normal
01:17:995 (1) - Move forward onto red tick?
01:46:149 (3) - Move out of stack to look like previous combos?
02:17:533 (5,6,7) - Move back onto red ticks and remove repeat from slider. And fix spacing of course
02:31:841 (1) - Move forward onto red ticks
03:16:610 (3,4) - Move back onto red ticks
03:17:533 (1) - End at 03:18:687?

Hard
Wow huge difficulty jump from that easyish normal. I'd suggest getting rid of the streams and making it less of an insane, especially since you already have another silly streamy diff
00:12:456 (1,2,3) - Move back a whole beat?
01:20:533 (3) - IMO if it needs a warning it shouldn't be there. Move this and the beat before so you can see the repeat?
01:50:303 (8) - Looks odd. Straighten out into a smooth curve or make the wiggles even
03:15:687 (1) - End at 03:18:687?

Hyb's Intense
00:24:229 (4,5) - Spaaacing
00:27:459 (5) - Shorten by 1/2
03:18:229 (7) - Shorten by a beat

Pretty good map.
Thank you~ :)
Roddie

RandomJibberish wrote:

You got my first MATmod. Lucky you.

Hyb's Intense
00:24:229 (4,5) - Spaaacing Fixed.
00:27:459 (5) - Shorten by 1/2 No.
03:18:229 (7) - Shorten by a beat No.

Pretty good map.
Thanks for the mod. RJ. :P

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [hyb's Intense].osu
bearing019
Add my name to tags kthx
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

DiamondCrash wrote:

Add my name to tags kthx
Have been added~ :)
Dotsu
抱歉有点晚了 :(

Only suggestions:

[DC's Easy]

  • 01:47:533 (3,1): Spacing,too close
    02:48:456 (3): Align with 2
    03:18:691 : Do you forget to slient it?

[Normal]

  • 00:35:072 (1): Finish
    00:49:610 (1): ^
    00:53:533 (5): 上一格
    00:57:226 (5): 左一格
    00:58:149 (1): 中间+Clap
    01:05:995 (3): Clap
    01:20:072 : 转盘在这里开始 并+Finish
    01:49:149 (1): Finish
    02:03:687 (1): Finish
    02:07:379 (5): 上一格
    02:11:072 (5): ^
    02:16:610 (4): 结尾+Clap
    02:20:303 (9): New combo
    02:33:918 : 转盘在这里开始
    02:56:303 (9): 结尾+Whistle
    03:04:149 (2): 结尾+Finish
    03:11:995 (6): New combo
[Hard]

  • 00:36:918 (11): Finish
    00:47:072 (3,4): 有点难看 建议完全重叠
    00:51:687 (1): Finish
    01:20:533 (2): 结尾+Finish
    01:35:995 (9): Finish
    01:50:303 (8): 开头+Clap 结尾+Finish
    02:03:803 (1): Finish
    02:19:841 (3): 开头+Clap
    02:21:226 (2): 结尾+Clap
    02:35:072 (6): Finish
    02:51:687 (7): New combo
    03:05:995 (3): Clap
    03:11:995 (6): New combo
[hyb's Intense]

  • 00:21:459 (1): Finish
    00:51:690 (1): Add finish at the beginning
    00:54:690 (2,3,4): Distance
    00:58:613 (2): Add Clap at the beginning
    01:13:844 (1,2): Spacing,too close
    02:05:536 (1): Add finish at the beginning
    02:14:767 (7,1,2): Distance
    02:22:844 (1,2,3): Distance
    02:23:536 (5): Clap
    02:24:459 (8): ^
    03:04:613 (1): Add finish at the beginning

Good map~

@STAR@
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

impossiblexu wrote:

抱歉有点晚了 :(

Only suggestions:

[DC's Easy]

  • 01:47:533 (3,1): Spacing,too close
    02:48:456 (3): Align with 2
    03:18:691 : Do you forget to slient it?

[Normal]

  • 00:35:072 (1): Finish
    00:49:610 (1): ^
    00:53:533 (5): 上一格
    00:57:226 (5): 左一格
    00:58:149 (1): 中间+Clap
    01:05:995 (3): Clap
    01:20:072 : 转盘在这里开始 并+Finish
    01:49:149 (1): Finish
    02:03:687 (1): Finish
    02:07:379 (5): 上一格
    02:11:072 (5): ^
    02:16:610 (4): 结尾+Clap
    02:20:303 (9): New combo
    02:33:918 : 转盘在这里开始
    02:56:303 (9): 结尾+Whistle
    03:04:149 (2): 结尾+Finish
    03:11:995 (6): New combo
[Hard]

  • 00:36:918 (11): Finish
    00:47:072 (3,4): 有点难看 建议完全重叠
    00:51:687 (1): Finish
    01:20:533 (2): 结尾+Finish
    01:35:995 (9): Finish
    01:50:303 (8): 开头+Clap 结尾+Finish
    02:03:803 (1): Finish
    02:19:841 (3): 开头+Clap
    02:21:226 (2): 结尾+Clap
    02:35:072 (6): Finish
    02:51:687 (7): New combo
    03:05:995 (3): Clap
    03:11:995 (6): New combo
[hyb's Intense]

  • 00:21:459 (1): Finish
    00:51:690 (1): Add finish at the beginning
    00:54:690 (2,3,4): Distance
    00:58:613 (2): Add Clap at the beginning
    01:13:844 (1,2): Spacing,too close
    02:05:536 (1): Add finish at the beginning
    02:14:767 (7,1,2): Distance
    02:22:844 (1,2,3): Distance
    02:23:536 (5): Clap
    02:24:459 (8): ^
    03:04:613 (1): Add finish at the beginning

Good map~

@STAR@
謝謝~~沒關係, 有幫到我就好 :D
Roddie

impossiblexu wrote:

Only suggestions:

[hyb's Intense]

  • 00:21:459 (1): Finish
    00:51:690 (1): Add finish at the beginning
    00:54:690 (2,3,4): Distance
    00:58:613 (2): Add Clap at the beginning
    01:13:844 (1,2): Spacing,too close
    02:05:536 (1): Add finish at the beginning
    02:14:767 (7,1,2): Distance
    02:22:844 (1,2,3): Distance
    02:23:536 (5): Clap
    02:24:459 (8): ^
    03:04:613 (1): Add finish at the beginning
^All fixed.
Thanks for the mod, impossiblexu! :)

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [hyb's Intense].osu
bearing019

impossiblexu wrote:

[DC's Easy]

01:47:533 (3,1): Spacing,too close lolno
02:48:456 (3): Align with 2 lolno
ouranhshc
Intense
overmapped

Hard - too much 1/4 streams it would be better if you made most of them short repeating sliders
00:10:149 (4) - 2 grids left
01:30:918 (6) - line up with (5)


forum pm me when intense and Hard are fixed
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

ouranhshc wrote:

Intense
overmapped

Hard - too much 1/4 streams it would be better if you made most of them short repeating sliders No Fixed

00:10:149 (4) - 2 grids left
01:30:918 (6) - line up with (5)

^ Fixed


forum pm me when intense and Hard are fixed
Fixed~ and Thanks~ :D
Bob Lennon_old
nice map!!
star~~~~~! :P
Rukario
Nice map.

You should fix.
Suggestion.
If you fix then fix it at the part you copy paste it too.
SB:
For DC's:
Maybe put it at some point DC makes a break otherwise, you know a lot of people skip^^
For Roddie's: Uhhhhh he is not called hybrid anymore so maybe fix his name xD


DC's Easy:
DC maps <3333333.
Notthing to say perfect.

Normal:
00:45:687 (2) - move on grid right?
00:53:995 (1) - ignore distance snap and put in the middle?
00:55:841 (1) - ^
00:56:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - two grids down.
00:57:687 (1) - put in the middle.

Sorry that I went so nazi on this diff, but I love prettyness.

Hard:
A bit overmapped but pretty good.

Roddie's Intense:
01:35:998 (1) - stack with the slider end of before?
02:59:998 (2,4) - maybe like this?
03:12:921 (4) - one grid right?
Otherwise you know I love your maps Roddie <3


Star~~
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

Rukarioman wrote:

Nice map.

You should fix.
Suggestion.
If you fix then fix it at the part you copy paste it too.
SB:
For DC's:
Maybe put it at some point DC makes a break otherwise, you know a lot of people skip^^
For Roddie's: Uhhhhh he is not called hybrid anymore so maybe fix his name xD


DC's Easy:
DC maps <3333333.
Notthing to say perfect.

Normal:
00:45:687 (2) - move on grid right?
00:53:995 (1) - ignore distance snap and put in the middle?
00:55:841 (1) - ^
00:56:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - two grids down.
00:57:687 (1) - put in the middle.

Sorry that I went so nazi on this diff, but I love prettyness.

^All fixed~

Hard:
A bit overmapped but pretty good.

Roddie's Intense:
01:35:998 (1) - stack with the slider end of before?
02:59:998 (2,4) - maybe like this?
03:12:921 (4) - one grid right?
Otherwise you know I love your maps Roddie <3


Star~~
Thank you very much~ :D
Roddie

Rukarioman wrote:

Roddie's Intense:
01:35:998 (1) - stack with the slider end of before?
02:59:998 (2,4) - maybe like this?
03:12:921 (4) - one grid right?

^All fixed.

Otherwise you know I love your maps Roddie <3 Yes. <3


Star~~
Thanks, Rukario. 8-)

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Intense].osu
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon
okay~ All Fixed~ :D
ZeroTwo002_AI
給星給星 :)
IOSYS_Qiu Li
我也來給星了 :)
watermind123
給星 給星
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

IOSYS_BaKa-[9] wrote:

給星給星 :)
謝謝~~ :)

IOSYS_Qiu Li wrote:

我也來給星了 :)
謝謝~ :)
sscck740823
再來一顆
Ramble Stars
圖做的不錯喔 今後也要加油~~!!
給星!!
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

Ramble Stars wrote:

圖做的不錯喔 今後也要加油~~!!
給星!!
謝謝~

sscck740823 wrote:

再來一顆
謝謝~

watermind123 wrote:

給星 給星
謝謝~

謝謝你們呀~~ :D
Doomsday
Better late than never :)

  1. For the offset, I got 7,386. BPM looks fine though
  2. Personally, I think that setting the preview point at the chorus would sound better, since its where most people would recognise the song. 00:51:226 sounds like a good spot to set it imo.
  3. Maybe you should add a Kiai section for the last chorus too? (at 03:04:610). Don't forgot to do it for all difficulties!
  4. Change the grey hitcolour? It seems hard to see on that background.
[DC'S EASY]

Lookin' good

[NORMAL]

Seems fine, but it feels like a pretty tough normal. It leads on from the Easy alright though so I'll let that one slide.

[HARD]

For the little streams in the choruses (like at 01:01:841 (3,4,5,6,7), 00:58:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) etc.) , I can see what you were doing, but since you were mapping to the lyrics before, these almost feel random. Perhaps you could remove these, or some of these?

00:22:610 to 00:34:610 - I think it would be much more interesting if you mapped to the lyrics more here. It feels disjointed and almost dull at the moment since its repetitive. The same issue happens at 01:32:303 too, and the other verses.

[RODDIE'S INSANE]

This has a different timing to the other difficulties. the timing for all difficulties should really be the same. I would change it to the one I've got anyway.


Apart from that, a bit streamy, but nothing too major. Seems fine.

Hmm. A pretty nice map you got here. Normal and Hard could've been mapped to the lyrics a bit more, but its not too major.

Starred
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon
SPOILER

Doomsday wrote:

Better late than never :)

  1. For the offset, I got 7,386. BPM looks fine though
  2. Personally, I think that setting the preview point at the chorus would sound better, since its where most people would recognise the song. 00:51:226 sounds like a good spot to set it imo.
  3. Maybe you should add a Kiai section for the last chorus too? (at 03:04:610). Don't forgot to do it for all difficulties!
  4. Change the grey hitcolour? It seems hard to see on that background.
[DC'S EASY]

Lookin' good

[NORMAL]

Seems fine, but it feels like a pretty tough normal. It leads on from the Easy alright though so I'll let that one slide.

[HARD]

For the little streams in the choruses (like at 01:01:841 (3,4,5,6,7), 00:58:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) etc.) , I can see what you were doing, but since you were mapping to the lyrics before, these almost feel random. Perhaps you could remove these, or some of these?

00:22:610 to 00:34:610 - I think it would be much more interesting if you mapped to the lyrics more here. It feels disjointed and almost dull at the moment since its repetitive. The same issue happens at 01:32:303 too, and the other verses.

[RODDIE'S INSANE]

This has a different timing to the other difficulties. the timing for all difficulties should really be the same. I would change it to the one I've got anyway.


Apart from that, a bit streamy, but nothing too major. Seems fine.

Hmm. A pretty nice map you got here. Normal and Hard could've been mapped to the lyrics a bit more, but its not too major.

Starred
^All Fixed and Thank you very much~ :D
lzy
8-)
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

lzy wrote:

8-)
0.0 thanks

xBubu wrote:

嘿嘿
0.0
xBubu
嘿嘿
Mashley
Crop the background so you don't get black bars around the top and bottom.
Set the preview point at 00:50:770

DC's Easy
Fine

Normal
01:17:770 (1) - Feels better 1/1 later so it hits on the 'solo'
02:17:309 (4) - New combo
03:12:924 (3,4) - 4 is a little out of pattern

Hard
00:49:385 (1) - Remove new combo

Roddie's Intense
Approach speed is way too high. Tone it down.
02:15:462 (1,2) - Spacing's weird
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon
SPOILER

Mashley wrote:

Crop the background so you don't get black bars around the top and bottom.
Set the preview point at 00:50:770

DC's Easy
Fine

Normal
01:17:770 (1) - Feels better 1/1 later so it hits on the 'solo'
02:17:309 (4) - New combo
03:12:924 (3,4) - 4 is a little out of pattern

Hard
00:49:385 (1) - Remove new combo

Roddie's Intense
Approach speed is way too high. Tone it down.
02:15:462 (1,2) - Spacing's weird
Thanks your helped~ and normal,hard is fixed
Roddie

Mashley wrote:

Roddie's Intense
Approach speed is way too high. Tone it down.
02:15:462 (1,2) - Spacing's weird

^All fixed.
Thanks!

And I fixed my difficulty. Spacing is all fixed! :)......Almost... =_=

And another Kudosu Star for you! >~<

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Intense].osu
James2250
As requested by Roddie~

-Delete osb file in folder
-I don't really like the resolution of your bg (black bars when playing at top/bottom), the best resolutions are 1024x768 or 800x600 but anything 4:3 works, resize it plz
-Every difficulty needs a preview point
-Although I recommend all kiai times are the same make sure they are the same on Normal/Hard (check ending of final one)

DC's Easy:
I don't really like sliders going so close to hp bar (especially on easier difficulty)
02:55:386 (2)
02:59:078 (3) but it isn't unrankable so ok
map looks nice

Normal:
00:49:616 (1,1) - slightly close to the end of a spinner for a Normal but it should be fine
Could do combo modding but isn't really needed, I would just make sure most of the combo's on the kiai time match up if possible

Hard:
looks nice

Roddie's Hard:
00:07:847 (2,1) - try not to have too many anti jumps
00:23:539 (3,4) - spacing
00:42:462 (6,1) - anti jump comment
01:00:924 (5,1) - ^
01:33:693 (4,1) - ^
02:38:309 (4,5,6,7) - align with 1
I think the rest of the spacing is ok but go through and double check it

*star*
Roddie

James2250 wrote:

Roddie's Hard:
00:07:847 (2,1) - try not to have too many anti jumps
00:23:539 (3,4) - spacing
00:42:462 (6,1) - anti jump comment
01:00:924 (5,1) - ^
01:33:693 (4,1) - ^
02:38:309 (4,5,6,7) - align with 1

^All fixed.

I think the rest of the spacing is ok but go through and double check it Okay. ._.
Thanks, James. 8-)

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

James2250 wrote:

As requested by Roddie~

-Delete osb file in folder
-I don't really like the resolution of your bg (black bars when playing at top/bottom), the best resolutions are 1024x768 or 800x600 but anything 4:3 works, resize it plz
-Every difficulty needs a preview point
-Although I recommend all kiai times are the same make sure they are the same on Normal/Hard (check ending of final one)

Normal:
00:49:616 (1,1) - slightly close to the end of a spinner for a Normal but it should be fine
Could do combo modding but isn't really needed, I would just make sure most of the combo's on the kiai time match up if possible

Hard:
looks nice

Roddie's Hard:
00:07:847 (2,1) - try not to have too many anti jumps
00:23:539 (3,4) - spacing
00:42:462 (6,1) - anti jump comment
01:00:924 (5,1) - ^
01:33:693 (4,1) - ^
02:38:309 (4,5,6,7) - align with 1
I think the rest of the spacing is ok but go through and double check it

*star*
Fixed~ and thank you~ ;)
wmfchris
[Roddie's Hard]
0:!3:386 (2) down 1 grid
0:32:078 (1) up 2 grids?
0:50:539 (5) up 1 grid
1:49:616 (1,2) spacing
2:03:462 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) right 1 grid
2:08:309 (1) up 1 grid
2:54:462 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing
3:16:847 (2,3,4) spacing of (2,3) differetn from (3,4)

[hard]
0:20:193 (7) put it nearer to next (1) and extend by 1/2?
no big problem

star~
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

wmfchris wrote:

[Roddie's Hard]
0:!3:386 (2) down 1 grid
0:32:078 (1) up 2 grids?
0:50:539 (5) up 1 grid
1:49:616 (1,2) spacing
2:03:462 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) right 1 grid
2:08:309 (1) up 1 grid
2:54:462 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing
3:16:847 (2,3,4) spacing of (2,3) differetn from (3,4)

[hard]
0:20:193 (7) put it nearer to next (1) and extend by 1/2?
no big problem

star~
Thanks wmfchris 8-)
Roddie

wmfchris wrote:

[Roddie's Hard]
0:!3:386 (2) down 1 grid
0:32:078 (1) up 2 grids?
0:50:539 (5) up 1 grid
1:49:616 (1,2) spacing
2:03:462 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) right 1 grid
2:08:309 (1) up 1 grid
2:54:462 (1,2,3,4) uneven spacing
3:16:847 (2,3,4) spacing of (2,3) differetn from (3,4)

^All fixed.
Thanks, Chris! :)

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon
Fixed and updated~ 8-)
Antu Villegas
when I have time, I will re-do the SB ;)
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

Antu Villegas wrote:

when I have time, I will re-do the SB ;)
ok 8-)
abalee
Roddie's
Preview point not set.
00:49:616 (3,4,5) -, 00:51:232 (6,1) - ,03:00:462 (3,4) - : Does them a spacing problem?
02:04:847 (5,6) - : A jump?

Easy:
Preview point not set.

and the .osb file issues.
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

abalee wrote:

Roddie's
Preview point not set.
00:49:616 (3,4,5) -, 00:51:232 (6,1) - ,03:00:462 (3,4) - : Does them a spacing problem?
02:04:847 (5,6) - : A jump?

Easy:
Preview point not set. Fixed

and the .osb file issues. Fixed
Thank you~ :)
Roddie

abalee wrote:

Roddie's
Preview point not set. Get that fixed, Bourdon. D:
00:49:616 (3,4,5) -, 00:51:232 (6,1) - ,03:00:462 (3,4) - : Does them a spacing problem? Fixed.
02:04:847 (5,6) - : A jump? Yes. :3
Thanks, abalee. ^^

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon
^ All Fixed~ :P
orioncomet
[General]
* imo setting perview time at 00:50:539 or something is better then 0 =w=;

[Roddie's Hard]
* orz 0.8x distance spacing is hard to see about spacing indeed ;w;
00:45:232 (2,3,4,5) - spacing, look like they're 1/2 -3-;
03:17:770 (5) - could you make it a bit farther then this ;w;..

other diffs seem fine ~
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
* imo setting perview time at 00:50:539 or something is better then 0 =w=;

[Roddie's Hard]
* orz 0.8x distance spacing is hard to see about spacing indeed ;w;
00:45:232 (2,3,4,5) - spacing, look like they're 1/2 -3-;
03:17:770 (5) - could you make it a bit farther then this ;w;..

other diffs seem fine ~
Thx~ orioncomet :D
Roddie

orioncomet wrote:

[Roddie's Hard]
* orz 0.8x distance spacing is hard to see about spacing indeed ;w; Not really.
00:45:232 (2,3,4,5) - spacing, look like they're 1/2 -3-; Fixed.
03:17:770 (5) - could you make it a bit farther then this ;w;.. Fixed.
Thanks. :D

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Hard].osu
Garven
As per your request:

[General]
DC's Easy has a different preview point than the rest of the difficulties. Please line that up.
Please crop the extra transparency from the three "Beatmap by:" images.
A spinnerapproachcircle would be nice.

[DC's Easy]
Maybe HP drain -1?
Eeew, so many whistles on slider slides.
01:47:539 (3,1) - This spacing is kinda deceitful for an easy.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the spinner.
Nice~

[Normal]
00:43:386 (2) - Do an H-flip to reduce overlap
01:14:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not a very eye-pleasing pattern. Well, I guess there are a lot with some-what random-looking placement. :/
I like what you did with the start of each chorus, but what you do afterward it kind of dulls the sheen. It goes into a nice slowly spinning circle of vocal happiness to 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 *yawn* Think you could spruce up the rhythmic end of this difficulty a bit? As it is, it's all technically fine, but only has small bursts of fun.

[Hard]
00:35:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I really think this is pushing out of the territory of a Hard difficulty. Think you can work in some consecutive repeating sliders instead? basically applies to any of these streams that are longer than 5 beats, if you choose to do this.
03:19:155 - Just delete that second to last timing section and make this last timing section the end of the kiai time. Also I would like to suggest you reduce the volume to minimum.
Kinda wish you followed the lyrics a little more than you do. :< Otherwise fine though.

[Roddie's Hard]
00:52:616 (2,3) - It might be asking for a lot, but do you think when you use stacked sliders like this you could try to make them look like one smooth curve instead of humped like they are now?
01:41:539 (9) - Hrm... it'd be neat if you could line up the slider end with the 8.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the slider.

Normal felt a little boring to me, but the other diffs were nice~
Roddie

Garven wrote:

[Roddie's Hard]
00:52:616 (2,3) - It might be asking for a lot, but do you think when you use stacked sliders like this you could try to make them look like one smooth curve instead of humped like they are now? Fixed I hope.
01:41:539 (9) - Hrm... it'd be neat if you could line up the slider end with the 8. Its fine.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the slider. Done.
Thanks, Garven. 8-)

Download: Iyaz - Solo (The 08 team_Bourdon) [Roddie's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon
SPOILER

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[General]
DC's Easy has a different preview point than the rest of the difficulties. Please line that up.
Please crop the extra transparency from the three "Beatmap by:" images.
A spinnerapproachcircle would be nice.

[DC's Easy]
Maybe HP drain -1?
Eeew, so many whistles on slider slides.
01:47:539 (3,1) - This spacing is kinda deceitful for an easy.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the spinner.
Nice~

[Normal]
00:43:386 (2) - Do an H-flip to reduce overlap
01:14:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not a very eye-pleasing pattern. Well, I guess there are a lot with some-what random-looking placement. :/
I like what you did with the start of each chorus, but what you do afterward it kind of dulls the sheen. It goes into a nice slowly spinning circle of vocal happiness to 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 *yawn* Think you could spruce up the rhythmic end of this difficulty a bit? As it is, it's all technically fine, but only has small bursts of fun.

[Hard]
00:35:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I really think this is pushing out of the territory of a Hard difficulty. Think you can work in some consecutive repeating sliders instead? basically applies to any of these streams that are longer than 5 beats, if you choose to do this.
03:19:155 - Just delete that second to last timing section and make this last timing section the end of the kiai time. Also I would like to suggest you reduce the volume to minimum.
Kinda wish you followed the lyrics a little more than you do. :< Otherwise fine though.

[Roddie's Hard]
00:52:616 (2,3) - It might be asking for a lot, but do you think when you use stacked sliders like this you could try to make them look like one smooth curve instead of humped like they are now?
01:41:539 (9) - Hrm... it'd be neat if you could line up the slider end with the 8.
03:19:155 - Sounds better if you completely silence the end of the slider.

Normal felt a little boring to me, but the other diffs were nice~
Thank you~~ Garven :)
abalee
late, but take a try for it.
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

abalee wrote:

late, but take a try for it.
Thx~ abalee :D
Glass
Great mapset ;)
Andrea
[Overall]

You have to add a "cursor.png" if you're going to use a "cursortrail.png". If you're going to add it or remove the cursortrail, remember to do a full submission.

That's it. Fix and I'll rank!
Topic Starter
The 08 team_Bourdon

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

You have to add a "cursor.png" if you're going to use a "cursortrail.png". If you're going to add it or remove the cursortrail, remember to do a full submission.

That's it. Fix and I'll rank!
Fixed~ and thank you~~ :D
Andrea
Ready to go now!

Ranked~
Roddie
Ya!!!!

Congrats Bourdon, DC, and yours truly. 8-)
Keksi
Sorry but i dont like it :S
Roddie

Keksi wrote:

Sorry but i dont like it :S
Good for you.

Now, how come you didn't like it?
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