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Pentori
ok im back. dont kd this
[Easy]
check distance snap errors in AIMod
00:47:098 (1,2) - can you use a different rhythm here? the red ticks feel really wrong here because there are no dominant beats that land on it. the most dominant beats here are on 00:47:752 - 00:49:060 - so try to include those
01:00:177 (1,2) - flow here can be too confusing for an easy since it reverses in on itself. this isn't really appropriate for the difficulty so try simply this flow
01:09:332 (1) - dont think u need this nc
01:45:954 (1) - ^

[Normal]
01:18:488 (1) - finish should be on slider end not on head

[Hard]
00:24:537 (4,5,1) - the spacing looks a bit closer than normal
00:25:518 (1) - do u really need the nc? i mean yea you're emphasising the beats but it makes some combos really long and others really short, i think its better if you just stick to nc'ing every measure for a better indication of score. also its kinda inconsistent since u haven't nced 00:28:133 (4)
00:27:153 (1,2) - swap the nc's here for the finish
00:33:365 (1) - probably dont need the nc
00:56:907 (1) - 00:59:523 (1) -01:02:139 (1) - remove these too? the melodies are in beats of 4 so i dont see the need to divide it in two
01:14:973 - drag the break back to how it normally would be
01:17:180 (1) - 01:18:488 (1) - 01:20:450 (1) - too many combo's here again, you can remove the ones i highlighted. the other nc's are fine since they emphasise the finish 01:17:834 (1)
01:42:030 (1,1) - spacing might be a bit too high here since this is a 1/3 gap. maybe move them closer for readability?

[Insane]
00:20:940 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i honestly dont think this amount of density is appropriate. there r no sounds on the blue ticks (or if there is, its very feint) so it would probably be better to just make these 1/2 sliders instead. it also provides a nice build up into 00:21:594 (1) - as the players can notice the density increase
00:43:338 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - aaaaa too many finishes. can you remove these are they are really jarring and instead add a finish on 00:43:174 (1) . the normal sampleset + whistles already do a good job at emphasising the notes
01:18:488 - doesn't need finish as the beat isn't really dominant

[Extra]
00:43:501 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - remove finishes
00:57:071 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - maybe u could space this a bit more
01:09:332 - finish on head
01:33:529 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - these triplets should be the other way around like i mentioned in my other post
01:33:774 - also: the piano is 1/6 here so it might be better to use sliders instead if you dont want to include the 1/6 by doing a rhythm like http://puu.sh/sgwVA/c8c88b8d3d.jpg

[Oberum Primus]
00:21:757 (2,2) - maybe overlap these two in the same way 00:21:594 (1,1) - overlap? makes a nicer pattern
00:37:125 (1) - remove finish
00:40:068 (1) - would be nicer if you instead made 00:39:904 (3) - a 1/2 slider since 00:40:068 - doesn't really deserve to be clicked as it has no intensity compared to 00:40:232
00:41:376 (4) - use a 1/4 slider? there are sounds on the blue tick 00:41:458
00:43:828 (1,2,1,2) - doesnt need finishes
00:54:945 (1) - surprised u made this a 1/2 slider when most other diffs have a 3/4 here
00:55:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - there is nothing that supports a stream here, please do something different
00:57:561 (1) - 3/4 slider?
00:58:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same thing
01:00:177 (1) - 01:00:831 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:16:853 (2,3,4,5) - 01:18:161 (2,3,4,5) - the movement here doesn't really make sense because there are no piano melodies here. it would be better to make these 1/4 repeats and instead have movement for the piano eg. 01:15:872 (1) - 01:17:180 (1)
01:33:692 (3) - see the comment i made in the extra

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Topic Starter
Bastionior

Pentori wrote:

ok im back. dont kd this AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA It's happening
[Easy]
check distance snap errors in AIMod s-sure all distance errors fixed
00:47:098 (1,2) - can you use a different rhythm here? the red ticks feel really wrong here because there are no dominant beats that land on it. the most dominant beats here are on 00:47:752 - 00:49:060 - so try to include those okay
01:00:177 (1,2) - flow here can be too confusing for an easy since it reverses in on itself. this isn't really appropriate for the difficulty so try simply this flow I think it's resolved if adding a note here 01:01:158 -
01:09:332 (1) - dont think u need this nc Fixed.
01:45:954 (1) - ^ Same.

[Normal]
01:18:488 (1) - finish should be on slider end not on head fixed.

[Hard]
00:24:537 (4,5,1) - the spacing looks a bit closer than normal i increased a bit..
00:25:518 (1) - do u really need the nc? i mean yea you're emphasising the beats but it makes some combos really long and others really short, i think its better if you just stick to nc'ing every measure for a better indication of score. also its kinda inconsistent since u haven't nced 00:28:133 (4) Fixed, kill me for every nc ;_;
00:27:153 (1,2) - swap the nc's here for the finish sure.
00:33:365 (1) - probably dont need the nc Fixed.
00:56:907 (1) - 00:59:523 (1) -01:02:139 (1) - remove these too? the melodies are in beats of 4 so i dont see the need to divide it in two Fixed.
01:14:973 - drag the break back to how it normally would be Done.
01:17:180 (1) - 01:18:488 (1) - 01:20:450 (1) - too many combo's here again, you can remove the ones i highlighted. the other nc's are fine since they emphasise the finish 01:17:834 (1) Fixed again, sorry ;_;
01:42:030 (1,1) - spacing might be a bit too high here since this is a 1/3 gap. maybe move them closer for readability? done, reformed, for something more intuitive, like on others highs diffs

[Insane]
00:20:940 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i honestly dont think this amount of density is appropriate. there r no sounds on the blue ticks (or if there is, its very feint) so it would probably be better to just make these 1/2 sliders instead. it also provides a nice build up into 00:21:594 (1) - as the players can notice the density increase okay fixed.
00:43:338 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - aaaaa too many finishes. can you remove these are they are really jarring and instead add a finish on 00:43:174 (1) . the normal sampleset + whistles already do a good job at emphasising the notes done
01:18:488 - doesn't need finish as the beat isn't really dominant okay.

[Extra]
00:43:501 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - remove finishes okay
00:57:071 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - maybe u could space this a bit more sure.
01:09:332 - finish on head okay
01:33:529 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - these triplets should be the other way around like i mentioned in my other post
01:33:774 - also: the piano is 1/6 here so it might be better to use sliders instead if you dont want to include the 1/6 by doing a rhythm like http://puu.sh/sgwVA/c8c88b8d3d.jpg

Both ahead fixed, i did something quite different from what I had imagined, applying a lot of symmetry to strengthen the flow, and improve aesthetics same on Oberum primus.

[Oberum Primus]
00:21:757 (2,2) - maybe overlap these two in the same way 00:21:594 (1,1) - overlap? makes a nicer pattern uhh.. Is not overlap exactly, i did according to the previous notes, just increased the distance.

00:37:125 (1) - remove finish okay
00:40:068 (1) - would be nicer if you instead made 00:39:904 (3) - a 1/2 slider since 00:40:068 - doesn't really deserve to be clicked as it has no intensity compared to 00:40:232 okay, looks better
00:41:376 (4) - use a 1/4 slider? there are sounds on the blue tick 00:41:458 done.
00:43:828 (1,2,1,2) - doesnt need finishes okay ;_;
00:54:945 (1) - surprised u made this a 1/2 slider when most other diffs have a 3/4 here I left 1/2, because of the kibbleru's mod, according to him: the transition between 1/4, 1/3 and 1/4 again is too complicated to read, I think.. this logic goes to 3/4 as well..
00:55:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - there is nothing that supports a stream here, please do something different kinda disagree again.. it's possible to perceive 1/4 with streams in this part, however, the beats are occasioned in white tick and blue tick is perceived by the piano without beats, listen well on 25% ;_;

00:57:561 (1) - 3/4 slider? ^
00:58:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same thing ^
01:00:177 (1) - 01:00:831 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:16:853 (2,3,4,5) - 01:18:161 (2,3,4,5) - the movement here doesn't really make sense because there are no piano melodies here. it would be better to make these 1/4 repeats and instead have movement for the piano eg. 01:15:872 (1) - 01:17:180 (1) I did something different, see if it was applicable according to your suggestion please.
01:33:692 (3) - see the comment i made in the extra fixed.

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Pentori
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23:43 *Pentori is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/949234 xi - ANiMA [Oberum Primus]]
23:43 Kalindraz: sure c'mon i'm ready
23:43 Kalindraz: tell xd
23:44 Pentori: 00:39:904 (3,4) - the beat on 00:40:232 - is pretty strong so i suggest you do a rhythm like http://puu.sh/shT6C/4e5bd8d249.jpg
23:46 Kalindraz: sure fixed
23:46 Pentori: 01:18:815 (1) - i think this should have whistle
23:47 Kalindraz: done!
23:47 Pentori: 01:33:283 (2,2,3) - and i think u should space this out more
23:48 Pentori: looks kinda cramped
23:48 Pentori: maybe do a nice triangle? http://puu.sh/shTfp/261f29566a.jpg
23:50 Kalindraz: okay done
23:50 Pentori: 00:43:501 (3) - oh and remove this finish
23:51 Kalindraz: kill me and kill finish abuse, fixed!
23:52 *Pentori is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/949232 xi - ANiMA [Hard]]
23:52 Kalindraz: let's go!
23:52 Pentori: 00:27:153 (1,2) - i think u forgot to swap nc's here xd
23:53 Kalindraz: done :D
23:53 Pentori: 01:14:564 - with the break here drag it toward the right
23:54 Pentori: should look like this http://puu.sh/shTsr/1b9e8e3f25.jpg
23:56 Kalindraz: Can you tell me the exact time to fix that .. because I can not see very well ;_;
23:56 Pentori: 01:14:564 -
23:57 Pentori: you should see like a little arrow thing
23:57 Pentori: just drag it toward the right
23:57 Kalindraz: okay, i think done :D
23:58 Pentori: 01:46:935 (4,1) - and u could seperate these a bit more to look nicer
23:58 Pentori: just a little bit more spacing http://puu.sh/shTBN/2cd0711af3.jpg
23:59 Kalindraz: done!
23:59 Pentori: ok cool, thats all
23:59 Pentori: can u update?
00:00 Kalindraz: okay
Plaudible
i t s h a p p e n i n g
_DT3

Plaudible wrote:

i t s h a p p e n i n g
Marianna

Plaudible wrote:

i t s h a p p e n i n g
Kibbleru
i t s h a p p e n e d
Kuron-kun
Gratz on happened!
Marianna
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ♥
_DT3
Wooo, this map definitely deserves it
Gratz Kalindraz!
Topic Starter
Bastionior
Oh guys, so thanks.. i can't believe hahahau
I was celebrating so much in #portuguese
i took a silence! 5 minutes nice kal
Ataraxia
QUEM TENTAR DAR DQ EU FAÇO MANIFESTACAO
Kyouren
Gratzz for your first ranked map! :3
Satellite
Really first ranked ?! too nice mapping :DDD
Congrats <3
Net0
Mais do que merecido. Parabéns Kalindraz :D :D
-Lunatic
aew carai
blooming tea
Gratz
Tarrasky
please fix the unsnap slider in Insane diff
Plaudible
gratz kalindraz! :)

(might wanna edit description though)
Topic Starter
Bastionior

Plaudible wrote:

gratz kalindraz! :)

(might wanna edit description though)
Thanks!! i think "Soon" because pending > qualified > ranked <3 i gonna edit later

Tarrasky wrote:

please fix the unsnap slider in Insane diff
WHAT?


C'MON, Don't play with that!!

Ataraxia
Sorry kalindraz !..................................................................................................................................................................................................
because the unsnap slider
Ideal
não vai ter golpe pq eu n vou deixar isso levar dq
Topic Starter
Bastionior
finally, done..
Thanks for all!
i can be relax now
Tarrasky
Congrats mah boy
TheRandomLamka
awsome map but hard :D
_DT3
Oh wow, I didn't expect that top 5 most played spot, it really deserves it though, nice work!
Gratz again ^^
Topic Starter
Bastionior

_DT3 wrote:

Oh wow, I didn't expect that top 5 most played spot, it really deserves it though, nice work!
Gratz again ^^
i can't believe (;° ロ°) .. also
thanks ლ (╹ ◡ ╹ ლ)
\(^∀^)メ(^∀^)ノ
Nuolong
congrats!!! yay :3 :) :D ;) :o >:( :( :? 8-) :lol: :x :P :oops: :cry: :| :roll: I bet you're feeling so many mixed emotions xD
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