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[Easy]
check distance snap errors in AIMod
00:47:098 (1,2) - can you use a different rhythm here? the red ticks feel really wrong here because there are no dominant beats that land on it. the most dominant beats here are on 00:47:752 - 00:49:060 - so try to include those
01:00:177 (1,2) - flow here can be too confusing for an easy since it reverses in on itself. this isn't really appropriate for the difficulty so try simply this flow
01:09:332 (1) - dont think u need this nc
01:45:954 (1) - ^
[Normal]
01:18:488 (1) - finish should be on slider end not on head
[Hard]
00:24:537 (4,5,1) - the spacing looks a bit closer than normal
00:25:518 (1) - do u really need the nc? i mean yea you're emphasising the beats but it makes some combos really long and others really short, i think its better if you just stick to nc'ing every measure for a better indication of score. also its kinda inconsistent since u haven't nced 00:28:133 (4)
00:27:153 (1,2) - swap the nc's here for the finish
00:33:365 (1) - probably dont need the nc
00:56:907 (1) - 00:59:523 (1) -01:02:139 (1) - remove these too? the melodies are in beats of 4 so i dont see the need to divide it in two
01:14:973 - drag the break back to how it normally would be
01:17:180 (1) - 01:18:488 (1) - 01:20:450 (1) - too many combo's here again, you can remove the ones i highlighted. the other nc's are fine since they emphasise the finish 01:17:834 (1)
01:42:030 (1,1) - spacing might be a bit too high here since this is a 1/3 gap. maybe move them closer for readability?
[Insane]
00:20:940 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i honestly dont think this amount of density is appropriate. there r no sounds on the blue ticks (or if there is, its very feint) so it would probably be better to just make these 1/2 sliders instead. it also provides a nice build up into 00:21:594 (1) - as the players can notice the density increase
00:43:338 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - aaaaa too many finishes. can you remove these are they are really jarring and instead add a finish on 00:43:174 (1) . the normal sampleset + whistles already do a good job at emphasising the notes
01:18:488 - doesn't need finish as the beat isn't really dominant
[Extra]
00:43:501 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - remove finishes
00:57:071 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - maybe u could space this a bit more
01:09:332 - finish on head
01:33:529 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - these triplets should be the other way around like i mentioned in my other post
01:33:774 - also: the piano is 1/6 here so it might be better to use sliders instead if you dont want to include the 1/6 by doing a rhythm like
http://puu.sh/sgwVA/c8c88b8d3d.jpg[Oberum Primus]
00:21:757 (2,2) - maybe overlap these two in the same way 00:21:594 (1,1) - overlap? makes a nicer pattern
00:37:125 (1) - remove finish
00:40:068 (1) - would be nicer if you instead made 00:39:904 (3) - a 1/2 slider since 00:40:068 - doesn't really deserve to be clicked as it has no intensity compared to 00:40:232
00:41:376 (4) - use a 1/4 slider? there are sounds on the blue tick 00:41:458
00:43:828 (1,2,1,2) - doesnt need finishes
00:54:945 (1) - surprised u made this a 1/2 slider when most other diffs have a 3/4 here
00:55:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - there is nothing that supports a stream here, please do something different
00:57:561 (1) - 3/4 slider?
00:58:215 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same thing
01:00:177 (1) - 01:00:831 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:16:853 (2,3,4,5) - 01:18:161 (2,3,4,5) - the movement here doesn't really make sense because there are no piano melodies here. it would be better to make these 1/4 repeats and instead have movement for the piano eg. 01:15:872 (1) - 01:17:180 (1)
01:33:692 (3) - see the comment i made in the extra
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