whats up, m4m from queue
[General]
This would honestly make a great cs5 map if you nerfed a bit of the jump patterns, this map is much more flow and pattern orieinted than jump oriented so it'd be nice if you considered it
BG also feels a bit weak imo, i'd try searching for something else (especially since your current bg has been used in some maps before and doesn't fit with the custom colors you used for the map)
[Starlight]
00:04:934 (1) - either remove nc here or add one at 00:02:447 (3) -
00:26:385 (2,3,4,5,1) - bit of spacing inconsistency here, would do something like this personally
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/605982900:29:649 (1) - ctrl-g would be cool here since it has a nice lead to 2 and has good flow break to emphasize vocals
00:40:530 (3) - make this one straight to fit with all the others?
00:58:872 (3,4,5) - seems kinda weird that you decided to stack these triples and space 01:00:737 (1,2,3) - out for example despite both having same rhythm/intensity. this happens in a few more instances so this is just one example
01:07:577 (1) - i'd make this straight and change the angle a bit
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/605986901:08:820 (2) - could probably blanket this with 1 a bit better
02:01:203 (3) - ctrl g is cool here because it emphasizes the increase in instrument intensity better imo
02:09:908 (1,2) - how about change it to the same pattern as before like you did with 02:08:043 (1,2,1,2) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/605986902:17:991 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1) - this is pretty overdone imo, especially since the guitar synth thing doesn't change much and you mapped the previous parts of it normally, also if you are going to agree to the cs5 change this is the type of jump i'd suggest nerfing (i still think this pattern needs nerfing regardless)
02:30:426 (1) - ctrl g for better emphasis?
02:35:867 (2,3,4) - don't really hear a triple here
02:37:188 - additionally, you probably want to add a note here to fit the rhythm better
02:56:385 (3,4,1) - don't really hear a triple there either, i'd do one slider which starts on 02:56:385 - and ends on 02:56:696 -
03:10:685 (2) - i'd change this shape to this, looks better imo
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/605996803:17:680 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this circular motion pattern plays kinda bad, i think you could add some variety by ctrl ging 03:18:302 (2,3) - and 03:19:235 (2,3) -
03:22:810 (2,3,4) - 03:23:277 (2,3,4) - any reason why these are bigger in spacing than 03:23:742 (2,3,4) - 03:24:208 (2,3,4) - ?
03:40:996 (4) - kinda missing some drum beats to click here
03:43:794 (1) - ^
03:57:473 (1) - 03:59:960 (1) - 04:02:447 (1) - 04:04:934 (1) - i'd silence sliderends here
04:16:437 (1,1) - i don't think SV usage is very good here, i think you need to make 04:16:437 (1) - have 0.8 and 04:17:369 (1) - have 0.7 instead of the other way around, creates much more emphasis and a buildup-like feel
05:02:136 (1) - i'd snap this to the sliderhead of 05:00:115 (1) - , gives this a more melodic feeling imo