lots of minor things lol
00:10:374 - new claps make it already stand out, but adding some volume increase, even if it is just 55% would be nice
00:23:898 (2) - yes it fits your visuals, but spacing for 1/2 finish is extremely underwhelming, compared to 00:21:411 (2) - etc. right now it's patterned like much weaker things, see 00:31:048 (1,2) - => more spacing pls
00:36:333 (3) - stack felt unfitting here due to 2 being so much weaker. maybe you can stack 00:36:178 (2) - udner 00:35:867 (1) - or just move it somewhere else. other stacks like 00:40:064 (2,3) - work way better
00:46:281 (2,3,4) - idk if you have stacking enabled or not, but make sure you want it to look like that (really small gap) ingame and not more like
http://i.imgur.com/jlSQJ41.jpg cause your other 1/4 gaps all seem a bit bigger
01:06:955 (1) - I like the idea with the bump here, just would be great if could make it more noticeable as I barely noticed it while playing lol
01:15:737 -
01:22:343 (2) - kinda underwhelming spacing, why not
http://i.imgur.com/9qFb95w.jpg01:28:250 - 01:59:649 - would reduce volume overall for these parts by like 5-10%, it's only 3 points so anyways, current seemed a little too loud, then 55% on 01:59:649 - and ke ep 02:00:426 - and following as they are
02:17:836 (7) - yeah the finish should def be here instead (and maybe also the nc). seems weird to hear a cymbal in the music but then one in the hitsounds a note later
03:12:084 (1,2) - transition into stream didn't feel that nice to play due to angles, could try moving 1 (but idk where without changing other things) or maybe try a stream shape like my unpolished example:
http://i.imgur.com/m3rUHPK.jpg03:56:229 (1) -
http://i.imgur.com/c1c7Q8Q.jpg ending looks kinda eww without sliderends and overall I think it would look much nicer if you made the curve more even lol
http://i.imgur.com/2U3lWEH.jpg03:57:473 (1) - what sonnyc said. considering these sliders are held for so long, making them as clean as possible actually matters more. also you can save yourself some work next time you make such loops by simply using 2xred nodes (stacked here)
http://i.imgur.com/j6sF9E5.jpgother ones are cute already
04:14:416 (4) - same snare sound as last note, so clap would be good here too
04:14:727 - should be drum sampleset for the noticeable kick?
04:41:929 (2) - you pay quite a lot of attention to vocals so skipping the one on the red tick here felt weird
Sonnyc wrote:
05:00:115 (1,1,1) - Mind making the spacing consistent to make it more organized in visual?
disagree with this, since I think the increasing spacing on the last note of this is nice. but I think the whole pattern would be great with a bit more spacing for ending the song
while I didn't like some of the overmaps that much personally, they work fine here so I'll give them a chance