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00:14:647 (8) - stab me for being nazi, but this doesnt look very aligned. or its nearly alligned but it isnt, and its bugging me. comparison below
00:19:536 (1,2,3,4) - try doing something like http://puu.sh/qL1j5/349dcc1887.jpg. make 5 -> 6 -> 1 look more triangle and have the rest of the notes follow downwards via stack or manual stack. imo is alot cleaner than this http://puu.sh/qL1me/edc47a1416.jpg
00:21:313 (4,5,6,7,8) - same issue here as the first mod.
00:22:536 - missing beat here. tbh you can stack it with 00:22:424 (2) - and itll still be fine. adds to the challenge. anyway, try to fill this note in, its super out of place.
00:28:424 (4,5,6,7,8) - ima stop repeating myself :p just make it aligned properly. ignore this if im actually blind ;l
00:36:424 (1,2,3) - lmao you did it here :/
00:41:313 (1) - http://puu.sh/qL1Fm/4d8e703996.jpg not a perfect triangle lol. not a huge issue, but since your map relies of shapes alot, might as well put this in here.
00:51:535 (7) - NC? theres a new drumming pattern.
00:53:313 (7) - this here.
01:11:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - idk about you, but id make this stream cleaner lol. doesnt look very curve perfect if thats even a term. i mean, http://puu.sh/qL1Us/db62ff1365.jpg compared to this http://puu.sh/qL1VF/aabd4f9e51.jpg, i think the 1st one is more pleasing to the eye.
01:17:091 (6) - id flip this the other way to compliment the next slider's direction. http://puu.sh/qL1ZC/3ad502fbef.jpg
01:51:091 (1) - imo id ctrl g this so its more consistent to this 01:50:424 (6,7) - . also i think as it is rn it gives unecessary emphasis to 01:51:313 (2) -
i meaaaan, 01:52:869 (1,2) - youve been doing this during the entire section so why not keep it the same. you seem to be copy pasting a lot of patterns anyway.
02:00:869 (5) - ctrl g. i dont think the DS should be that wide. even for a map like this, imo its too wide.
02:08:425 (5) - NC this? i think this part is pretty defined and should be on its own NC section. also helps tell players that this section is different. http://puu.sh/qL2fM/36a6d6ba7b.jpg
02:10:202 (5) - ^
02:11:980 (5) - ^
02:13:758 (13) - ^and similar parts
02:19:092 (13) - this one in particular coz the last 2 notes of the previous stream (02:18:870 (11,12) - )are particularly silent and might throw off some players. NC might help with reading.
03:15:536 - wanna map the guitar? you did last time.
03:23:091 (8) - NC?
--everything beyond this point is personal opinion and can be ignored--
03:03:425 (6) - NC coz new section? :/ and for similar parts lol
hurk
00:19:536 (1,2,3,4) - try doing something like http://puu.sh/qL1j5/349dcc1887.jpg. make 5 -> 6 -> 1 look more triangle and have the rest of the notes follow downwards via stack or manual stack. imo is alot cleaner than this http://puu.sh/qL1me/edc47a1416.jpg
00:21:313 (4,5,6,7,8) - same issue here as the first mod.
00:22:536 - missing beat here. tbh you can stack it with 00:22:424 (2) - and itll still be fine. adds to the challenge. anyway, try to fill this note in, its super out of place.
00:28:424 (4,5,6,7,8) - ima stop repeating myself :p just make it aligned properly. ignore this if im actually blind ;l
00:36:424 (1,2,3) - lmao you did it here :/
00:41:313 (1) - http://puu.sh/qL1Fm/4d8e703996.jpg not a perfect triangle lol. not a huge issue, but since your map relies of shapes alot, might as well put this in here.
00:51:535 (7) - NC? theres a new drumming pattern.
00:53:313 (7) - this here.
01:11:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - idk about you, but id make this stream cleaner lol. doesnt look very curve perfect if thats even a term. i mean, http://puu.sh/qL1Us/db62ff1365.jpg compared to this http://puu.sh/qL1VF/aabd4f9e51.jpg, i think the 1st one is more pleasing to the eye.
01:17:091 (6) - id flip this the other way to compliment the next slider's direction. http://puu.sh/qL1ZC/3ad502fbef.jpg
01:51:091 (1) - imo id ctrl g this so its more consistent to this 01:50:424 (6,7) - . also i think as it is rn it gives unecessary emphasis to 01:51:313 (2) -
i meaaaan, 01:52:869 (1,2) - youve been doing this during the entire section so why not keep it the same. you seem to be copy pasting a lot of patterns anyway.
02:00:869 (5) - ctrl g. i dont think the DS should be that wide. even for a map like this, imo its too wide.
02:08:425 (5) - NC this? i think this part is pretty defined and should be on its own NC section. also helps tell players that this section is different. http://puu.sh/qL2fM/36a6d6ba7b.jpg
02:10:202 (5) - ^
02:11:980 (5) - ^
02:13:758 (13) - ^and similar parts
02:19:092 (13) - this one in particular coz the last 2 notes of the previous stream (02:18:870 (11,12) - )are particularly silent and might throw off some players. NC might help with reading.
03:15:536 - wanna map the guitar? you did last time.
03:23:091 (8) - NC?
--everything beyond this point is personal opinion and can be ignored--
03:03:425 (6) - NC coz new section? :/ and for similar parts lol
hurk