Hi. Here from #modreqs. Mapset is really good and most of this is just minor personal stuff. Hope this helps!
I like the nightcore version btw[Easy]
00:42:206 (1) – One downside of having a spinner here is that the beginning of the kiai has no objects, which feels weird to hear the exciting part of the song start but not get to play it. Another downside is that it's not consistent with 01:25:625 (4,1) - . For these reasons, I think you should get rid of this spinner, and maybe just use a pause.
01:48:692 (1) – Make this a circle.
02:30:754 (2,1,2) – Triangle looks better:
http://puu.sh/rQSGY/5ca4882967.jpg[BOUYAA's Normal]
01:13:414 (1,2,1,2) – I think if you go hard with the vocals at 01:12:057 (3,4,5,6) - , you should try to continue it here, especially since the current rhythm feels too weak after the strong section. Try this:
http://puu.sh/rQT6Y/850280b70a.jpg. Alternatively, making 01:12:735 (5) – into a 1/1 slider and deleting (6) might be a smoother transition from vocals to bass.
02:01:582 (2,3,1,2,3) - Try this:
http://puu.sh/rQTw6/a2c6253864.jpg02:46:867 (1) – Make this a 1/1 slider so that it stays with consistent with the other difficulties in the mapset by ending at 02:47:206 -
00:10:489 – Not that it really matters, but snap the green line here
[phaz's Hard]
00:08:285 (1,1) – this overlap doesn't look great to me. By moving everything that comes before it, you can set it up to look more like:
http://puu.sh/rQOGM/867ff8a368.png00:34:319 (5) – This is overmapped and doesn't feel appropriate given no other ¼ triples in this section.
02:02:091 (2,3) – overlap doesn't look great to me
02:06:331 (1,2,3,4,5) – You should follow the vocals here by making (1) and (3) into ½ sliders to stay consistent with the rest of this section mostly following the vocals. Right now, it feels too energetic since the vocals take a rest here.
02:16:507 – put a circle here to stay consistent with the drums you're about to follow at 02:17:186 (4) - . Otherwise (4) feels too energetic
02:30:415 (1,2) – This DS is kind of high for a note that doesn't feel strong in the song. Like yeah, cool looking pattern, but you can't find a different cool looking pattern that fits this?
[Insane]
00:32:708 (1,2,3) – Since (3) is different, I don't think you need to use the same structure, which might be able to set you up for a smoother transition from counterclockwise to clockwise flow since this felt slightly odd to play. Try:
http://puu.sh/rQOgi/4787f1e085.jpg00:55:435 (3,4,1,2,3) – It's a little unfortunate that (3,4) has the same flow as (4,1,2,3). Compare this with 02:33:128 (3,4,1,2,3) – which has a little more distinction between these notes which emphasizes the strong note at 02:33:807 (1) – a little more.
00:58:149 (3,1,2) – Wish this had the same rhythm as 02:35:842 (3,4,1,2) - . Yes, currently it is better paced since 02:35:842 (3,4,1,2) – is stronger, but there's ways to keep a good pacing while continuing the strong vocal emphasis you started with at 00:57:131 (1,2) – (as far as how to pace it, you could try using decreasing DS to keep this pattern weak. A bad example:
http://puu.sh/rQNxE/3464fe6dd3.jpg)
01:41:568 (3,1) – if so, stay consistent
01:42:755 (4,5,1) - Linear flow + 1/1 pause = weird
01:18:332 (5,6,1) – Kind of same issue but not as bad
01:35:971 (4,5,1) – Linear flow doesn't emphasize the (1) note as much as I'd like it to.
02:34:655 (5,1) – The strong vocal makes me want the DS to be higher. It doesn't really work that well with the current flow though, so idk
Good luck!