Blitzfrog
Blitzfrog wrote:
Hey
00:26:511 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Shape here needs a bit of fixing to make it look better
00:32:648 (1) - Here I would shorten the slider and put one extra note after it because it seemed awkward and kinda hard to read due to sudden change in style
for example
00:46:284 (1,2,3,4) - These notes seemed a bit out of place and quite sudden/weird, I would either change it from 00:43:557 (1) to 1 slider 2 hit circles and just change those 4 notes and continue with the slider pattern
00:47:648 - Would put one more note there to finish the stanza off (there is also a beat there, hear-able in the music) I wouldnt call it a beat as much as it is the current draging sound ending. I think putting a note to it sounds kinda off
00:10:829 (1,2,3,4) - Would look better and feels better if random, follows the tick of the music(sort of random "pondering" feel)
00:43:898 (2) - Kinda sad that you ignored the flute here, nothing major I think its too quiet
00:53:784 (2,3,4,5) - Imo it would feel better to have the 4 higher than the 3 so that there is this "spring" feeling, nothing major Not sure wht you mean here :S
01:17:136 (5) - Here you should replace that with notes as the ticks in the background is very strong and also so that...(next line) I actually disagree with the strongness of the sounds here, dont think the first part har stronger sounds really
01:17:648 (1) - This! can be turned into a slider as it is such a strong beat this also allows variation
Would shorten the sliders on:
01:29:920 (1) & 01:30:773 (3) Agree with the first one but disagree with the 2nd one, i think that one flows well as it is
To add in one extra circle there for a better flow
01:32:648 (1,2,3) - Hit sound is a bit loud and sticks out a bit
Hope I was able to help
Thanks! I put comments in the spoiler on stuff i wont change right now atleast.