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Narcissu
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Satellite
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i can support
Narcissu
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;w; thx very much, i love you
Faaa97
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I was going to mod it, but I couldn't find any issue with standart diffs. I don't play mania so can't mod those.

Something to add: maybe 3* - 4* diffs?

Good job with Camellia diff and good luck in ranking.
Narcissu
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ye will add 3~4 diff :)
-[ AmiShici ]-
-[ AmiShici ]-
Hii there~

CS req Here

4k=1~4
Mania Mod here
  • [CSNM]
  1. 00:02:972 - add SV 1.25x? so noob not suprise since at 00:26:597 - being fast ''w')b
  2. 00:33:047 - add at 2? piano. as u mapped at 00:36:947 (36947|1,37097|2,37247|3,37397|0) - :3
  3. 01:03:797 (63797|1,64097|2) - change to 1/2s LN like as 01:02:597 (62597|0,62897|3,63197|0,63497|3) -
  4. 01:11:447 - add in 3?
  5. 01:15:347 - 01:15:647 - add note like as 00:36:947 (36947|1,37097|2,37247|3,37397|0) -
  6. 01:23:297 (83297|2) - delete? no piano like 01:21:797 (81797|0,82097|1,82397|2,82697|3,82997|1) -
  7. 01:34:547 - 01:34:847 - add same as before
  8. 01:56:747 - add piano?
  9. 01:59:297 (119297|2,119597|3) - delete? no piano
  10. 02:16:397 - 02:17:597 - 02:18:797 - etc add note for clap sound? like this 02:19:997 (139997|1,139997|0,141197|1,141197|3) -

    [CSHD]
  11. 00:46:997 (46997|3,46997|2) - 00:49:397 (49397|3,49397|2) - 00:56:597 (56597|1,56597|0) - 00:58:997 (58997|1,58997|0) - etc, delete one note? like this 00:51:797 (51797|2) - ? since no drum there? just kick only
  12. 01:51:497 (111497|1) - LN star here 01:51:197 (111197|1) - ?
  13. 02:02:897 (122897|3,123047|2,123497|1,123647|2,124097|3,124247|2) - etc, idk why there just using single note while 02:04:697 (124697|0,124697|3,124847|2,124847|1) - using double note :3
  14. 03:07:397 - ~03:08:297 - i think each blue line have sound too like as 03:08:447 (188447|2,188747|2,189047|2,189347|2,189647|1) -
Goodluck 'w')b
Critical_Star
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-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hii there~

CS req Here

4k=1~4
Mania Mod here
  • [CSNM]
  1. 00:02:972 - add SV 1.25x? so noob not suprise since at 00:26:597 - being fast ''w')b yea good idea, added lol
  2. 00:33:047 - add at 2? piano. as u mapped at 00:36:947 (36947|1,37097|2,37247|3,37397|0) - :3 here is 1/6 piano sound so i thought it may be a little bit forcing for NM diff
  3. 01:03:797 (63797|1,64097|2) - change to 1/2s LN like as 01:02:597 (62597|0,62897|3,63197|0,63497|3) - cool
  4. 01:11:447 - add in 3? like before, these are 1/6 piano sound so i decide to ignore this one xD
  5. 01:15:347 - 01:15:647 - add note like as 00:36:947 (36947|1,37097|2,37247|3,37397|0) - ok i added on other side too
  6. 01:23:297 (83297|2) - delete? no piano like 01:21:797 (81797|0,82097|1,82397|2,82697|3,82997|1) - feel empty to leave the kick note here, so i keep it but i used a LN to empyhsize the last piano sound better
  7. 01:34:547 - 01:34:847 - add same as before ok
  8. 01:56:747 - add piano? would prefer to catch those louder pitch piano sound here,
  9. 01:59:297 (119297|2,119597|3) - delete? no piano deleted the red tick note but the white tick have piano sound here
  10. 02:16:397 - 02:17:597 - 02:18:797 - etc add note for clap sound? like this 02:19:997 (139997|1,139997|0,141197|1,141197|3) - the drum sound are soft unlike start 02:31:397 - then i would use double for it, is good for build up pattern here ;)

    [CSHD]
  11. 00:46:997 (46997|3,46997|2) - 00:49:397 (49397|3,49397|2) - 00:56:597 (56597|1,56597|0) - 00:58:997 (58997|1,58997|0) - etc, delete one note? like this 00:51:797 (51797|2) - ? since no drum there? just kick only i know but it just feel a little special there for double, is like emphysize the piano sound here
  12. 01:51:497 (111497|1) - LN star here 01:51:197 (111197|1) - ? pretty sure it started at the red tick line :o
  13. 02:02:897 (122897|3,123047|2,123497|1,123647|2,124097|3,124247|2) - etc, idk why there just using single note while 02:04:697 (124697|0,124697|3,124847|2,124847|1) - using double note :3 yea you are right but it just feel too full here and i wanted to give some space for single stream here instead jumpstream till the end
  14. 03:07:397 - ~03:08:297 - i think each blue line have sound too like as 03:08:447 (188447|2,188747|2,189047|2,189347|2,189647|1) - some are pretty noticeable like u mention that yea, but some are not too obvious, would prefer to add note to those much noticeable piano sound here
Goodluck 'w')b
thanks ya ami 'w')/
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awesome map <3
Crystal
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beep beep

[Camellia]
AR9.25??
00:28:997 (1,2) - 感觉形状一样的比较好看
01:01:997 (5) - NC? 前面有个间隔1/1的是4个1NC 知道是按白线下的不过这次还是NC下感觉比较好(?
01:59:597 (5) - ^
02:30:797 - why skip
02:34:997 (5) - NC 前面的都加了
02:39:797 (5) - 也是
02:58:997 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏大约是这样的 http://puu.sh/q938X/4b5b7d29b4.jpg 感觉可以2 3连个滑条 1/16 snap
03:18:797 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/q93e7/0e14a6ba0c.jpg 也是随便两个连成滑条?

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Narcissu
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Narcissu
顏色是為了每一段都藍色開頭，我修了一下手動跳過都改了……那個節奏是為了打起來好打一點，相同的01:05:597 (2,3,4,5,1) - 也是錯的snap……不過我看了記譜應該是再來一碗他自己手彈彈偏了= =

除了1/8和一樣的形狀和kiai 的換色都改了

thx mod ><
Ikaros
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Ikaros
Just a random mod passing by.

Can't really say much to Easy/Normal but i'll try.


  • Easy

    01:28:997 (1) - Maybe change to shorter slider + 1 circle. Looks better IMO.
    01:50:597 (3) - Same, but not as necessary.

  • Normal

    01:16:997 (1) - Piano plays right in the middle. Sounds weird.
    03:16:997 (1) - Red slider point feels somewhat misplaced. Straight or curved slider would suit better IMO.

  • Camellia

    00:28:997 (1,2) - These 2 should look the same. First one with red slider point doesn't really fit.
    00:58:396 (3,4) - You did it here tho, lol.
    02:50:147 (2,3,4) - The triple kinda feels forced. Consider replacing it(?).
    03:18:797 (3,4,5) - Make triple into double? Piano seems to be playing that.
    03:21:197 (1,2,3,4) - Making these jumps more like a cross would increase readability. I'm saying this 'cause these broke my sightread FC (fml) :c
    03:55:397 (1,2,3,4) - Sliders seem unfitting. Might just be me tho.
Hope it was helpful. If not, i'll stop modding forever. Camellia was really fun to play. :D
Narcissu
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Narcissu

Ikaros wrote:

Just a random mod passing by.

Can't really say much to Easy/Normal but i'll try.


  • Easy

    01:28:997 (1) - Maybe change to shorter slider + 1 circle. Looks better IMO.……i think skip some paino better …… if not it's have 1/1 * ∞ ……
    01:50:597 (3) - Same, but not as necessary.

  • Normal

    01:16:997 (1) - Piano plays right in the middle. Sounds weird.……same as easy diff
    03:16:997 (1) - Red slider point feels somewhat misplaced. Straight or curved slider would suit better IMO. …… ok

  • Camellia

    00:28:997 (1,2) - These 2 should look the same. First one with red slider point doesn't really fit.
    00:58:396 (3,4) - You did it here tho, lol.
    02:50:147 (2,3,4) - The triple kinda feels forced. Consider replacing it(?). …… deleted
    03:18:797 (3,4,5) - Make triple into double? Piano seems to be playing that.……paino is triple ?
    03:21:197 (1,2,3,4) - Making these jumps more like a cross would increase readability. I'm saying this 'cause these broke my sightread FC (fml) :c……cross a bit …… hard to layout
    03:55:397 (1,2,3,4) - Sliders seem unfitting. Might just be me tho.……
Hope it was helpful. If not, i'll stop modding forever. Camellia was really fun to play. :D
it's useful …… thx mod :D
Leiwa
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Joined July 2012
Leiwa
[Cammelia]
01:14:297 (4,5) - Add NC on (4)? really hard to read
01:33:497 (4,5) - ^
01:42:797 (5,6) - ^

02:01:397 (1) - ctrl+G?

03:51:197 (3,4) -
I prefer this
SPOILER

[normal]

02:19:997 (2) - use (1) again?
SPOILER

03:26:597 (1) - put 115,208 stackstackstack
03:39:497 (4) - put 318,79　^

[Easy]
02:09:797 (3,4,5,6,1) - This pattern looks too hard for easy diff because its shape angle.
How about this.
SPOILER
120,48,129797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,143,130397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,165,130997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,84,131597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
350,31,132197,2,0,P|393:29|438:46,1,80

nice map
good luck :)
Narcissu
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Narcissu

Urushi38 wrote:

[Cammelia]
01:14:297 (4,5) - Add NC on (4)? really hard to read
01:33:497 (4,5) - ^
01:42:797 (5,6) - ^

02:01:397 (1) - ctrl+G? …… look like same ……

03:51:197 (3,4) - …… all good follow a bit ordinary ……
I prefer this
SPOILER

[normal]

02:19:997 (2) - use (1) again?
SPOILER

03:26:597 (1) - put 115,208 stackstackstack
03:39:497 (4) - put 318,79　^

[Easy]
02:09:797 (3,4,5,6,1) - This pattern looks too hard for easy diff because its shape angle.
How about this. …… i use it many times and other part hard than it' …… i think it's ok
SPOILER
120,48,129797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,143,130397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,165,130997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,84,131597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
350,31,132197,2,0,P|393:29|438:46,1,80

nice map
good luck :)
no replay = fix
thx mod ;w;
AhrixAhri
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AhrixAhri
Camellia was really fun to sight read thanks for the awesome map!
Narcissu
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i'm happy if you like it xd
Zero__wind
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NM from my queue

Red: unrankable issues
Purple: highly recommend to fix

General
关掉两个mania diff的widescreen support
00:45:797 - 个人感觉这里开始的一段kiai没必要加 它和后面两个相同旋律的kiai段的强弱还是有一定差异 感觉这里并不算是高潮部分
3分半的图 Easy Normal都不给个break……其实是不太好的……也太勤劳

Easy
HP2? Easy用3感觉有点高
00:40:397 (5) - 故意没whistle的吗？因为我看你前面全部都加了 这里突然没有
01:09:797 (1,2) - 好像blanket不太好
01:14:597 (1) - 头上音效美丽
01:33:797 (1) - 掉了whistle
02:02:597 (1) - 这不finish的？
02:10:997 (5,6) - 都不加whistle吗 如果是觉得这里音乐变弱了我觉得可以只有6留空，5的那个钢琴音还是挺强的我觉得 可以whistle一下
02:30:797 (6) - 音效美丽
02:36:197 (1) - 鉴于你从这个滑条的尾巴上就开始改用clap了 所以考虑在02:36:197 (1,2) - 的头上都用normal sample？

Normal
01:07:397 (1) - 头上漏了whistle？因为我看你把sampleset都改成soft了但是什么都没加……
01:26:597 (1) - ^ 这里也没有 是因为音调低？
01:37:097 (2) - 挪到(472,152)会比较自然？
02:10:997 (3,4) - 嘛 这里和Easy的音效不太一样
02:28:997 (1) - 算不上是问题 或许和后面的2一样 用直滑条？
02:36:197 (1,3) - 和Easy一样， 加normal？

Camellia
00:34:097 (2,2) - 去掉whistle？感觉比一律都给加上表现力更强一些 像00:30:197 (1,2,3,4) - 这种强弱有区分的就挺好
00:42:347 (2,6) - 从前后的排版风格看来 我以为你会倾向于避免这种不完全的overlap
00:58:997 (1) - 不知道是不是有意的反正这个滑条看起来比别的1/2都要弯不少似的 看着有点不合群
01:16:097 (2,4) - 这两拍应该是不要whistle的吧……和前面相似的地方对比一下的话 比如01:06:197 (1,2) -
01:20:747 (2,4) - 这两拍没有whistle又觉得很奇怪 前面类似的地方都是全部都加了的 而且这两个钢琴音调很高呀 如果真要选择在01:20:597 (1,2,3,4) - 这种梗不全部whistle的话我觉得1和3不加2和4加会更合曲一些
01:23:597 (5,6) - 这里节奏突然慢下来 建议在5的地方加NC 类似01:42:797 (1) -
02:50:147 (2,3) - 我觉得像这里 2和3的尾巴上就可以不要whistle呀 和02:45:197 (3,4) - 差不多吧
03:16:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我打的时候觉得这里如果是个间距递增类型的梗会更爽 比较符合上升音阶的感觉吧
03:48:047 (8) - 感觉这种没什么音的可以把whistle去掉
03:50:447 (8,1) - blanket不太好的样子

就这些了
good luck
Narcissu
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Narcissu

Zero__wind wrote:

NM from my queue

Red: unrankable issues
Purple: highly recommend to fix

General
关掉两个mania diff的widescreen support …… 這個我等等gder
00:45:797 - 个人感觉这里开始的一段kiai没必要加 它和后面两个相同旋律的kiai段的强弱还是有一定差异 感觉这里并不算是高潮部分……一二段是完全一樣的 = =
3分半的图 Easy Normal都不给个break……其实是不太好的……也太勤劳

Easy
HP2? Easy用3感觉有点高
00:40:397 (5) - 故意没whistle的吗？因为我看你前面全部都加了 这里突然没有……這裡是因為……複製最高難度的但是重音在藍線上面所以就沒了……加了個
01:09:797 (1,2) - 好像blanket不太好
01:14:597 (1) - 头上音效美丽……這裡是因為……漏了
01:33:797 (1) - 掉了whistle
02:02:597 (1) - 这不finish的？
02:10:997 (5,6) - 都不加whistle吗 如果是觉得这里音乐变弱了我觉得可以只有6留空，5的那个钢琴音还是挺强的我觉得 可以whistle一下
02:30:797 (6) - 音效美丽
02:36:197 (1) - 鉴于你从这个滑条的尾巴上就开始改用clap了 所以考虑在02:36:197 (1,2) - 的头上都用normal sample？

Normal
01:07:397 (1) - 头上漏了whistle？因为我看你把sampleset都改成soft了但是什么都没加……是的
01:26:597 (1) - ^ 这里也没有 是因为音调低？
01:37:097 (2) - 挪到(472,152)会比较自然？……我覺得很挫……
02:10:997 (3,4) - 嘛 这里和Easy的音效不太一样
02:28:997 (1) - 算不上是问题 或许和后面的2一样 用直滑条？
02:36:197 (1,3) - 和Easy一样， 加normal？

Camellia
00:34:097 (2,2) - 去掉whistle？感觉比一律都给加上表现力更强一些 像00:30:197 (1,2,3,4) - 这种强弱有区分的就挺好 …… 這裡應該都是一樣的，我基本是……右手部分都加whistle
00:42:347 (2,6) - 从前后的排版风格看来 我以为你会倾向于避免这种不完全的overlap …… 我也覺得 = =
00:58:997 (1) - 不知道是不是有意的反正这个滑条看起来比别的1/2都要弯不少似的 看着有点不合群
01:16:097 (2,4) - 这两拍应该是不要whistle的吧……和前面相似的地方对比一下的话 比如01:06:197 (1,2) -
01:20:747 (2,4) - 这两拍没有whistle又觉得很奇怪 前面类似的地方都是全部都加了的 而且这两个钢琴音调很高呀 如果真要选择在01:20:597 (1,2,3,4) - 这种梗不全部whistle的话我觉得1和3不加2和4加会更合曲一些
01:23:597 (5,6) - 这里节奏突然慢下来 建议在5的地方加NC 类似01:42:797 (1) - ……這個也是……不知為何漏了
02:50:147 (2,3) - 我觉得像这里 2和3的尾巴上就可以不要whistle呀 和02:45:197 (3,4) - 差不多吧
03:16:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我打的时候觉得这里如果是个间距递增类型的梗会更爽 比较符合上升音阶的感觉吧……有點麻煩，我想想
03:48:047 (8) - 感觉这种没什么音的可以把whistle去掉
03:50:447 (8,1) - blanket不太好的样子

就这些了
good luck
no replay = fixxxxx

thx very much :)
Colourful
80 posts
Joined July 2012
Colourful
不请自来。。只是看看水仙姥爷最近在做什么新图（）
xxx
玩下来感觉00:55:097 (2) 这个note有点多余。。
Narcissu
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Narcissu

Colourful wrote:

不请自来。。只是看看水仙姥爷最近在做什么新图（）
xxx
玩下来感觉00:55:097 (2) 这个note有点多余。。
感覺空超過1/2會有點影響連貫……而且這邊是有個音的Orz，其他類似01:04:697 (2) - 都有加圈不過低難度沒有
Maxus
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Maxus
Hello Narcissu and star :D
Mod for mania mode here :3

[CS'Normal]
01:03:197 - add note here? you also add for crash at 02:00:797 -
01:05:747 (65747|3,65897|2,66047|1) - wrong snapped? i'm quite sure this is 1/12 below.. at 01:05:697 - 01:05:847 - 01:05:997 - i'm not really sure if the simplification is allowed here.
01:21:797 - Just my thinking a bit, but this is maybe a bit too taxing for left hand bcause of 01:19:997 (79997|0,79997|1,80597|1,80897|0,81797|0,82097|1,82397|0) - , maybe you could make it like: http://puu.sh/qlR7Y/3a817a08f1.png
02:10:397 (130397|1,130697|2,130997|3) - Ctrl+H here? for the pitch and better flow
02:14:897 - http://puu.sh/qlRWm/2c4077fb60.png well my suggestion, it should give more variation and flow here.
02:25:697 (145697|1,146297|2) - Ctrl+G this? to avoid a bit of 02:25:097 (145097|1,145397|0,145697|1,145997|0) -
02:29:597 (149597|2,149897|3) - also Ctrl+G D:
03:38:147 - don't ignore this D:
03:40:697 - hmm is this intentionally ignored to follow piano?
03:49:847 (229847|2,229997|1,230147|0) - well, i know you want to make constant stair here, but i think you can make this col 1-3-2 here. a bit mirroring 03:49:397 (229397|2,229547|1,229697|3) - ,should be flow better :3

[CS' Hard]
00:33:797 (33797|0,34097|0) - don't jack will be better bcause of pitch here, try: http://puu.sh/qlT0a/bd76fe59ea.png
00:44:897 (44897|2,45197|2,45497|2,46097|2,46397|2,46997|2,47297|2,47597|2) - aaaa please avoid ;w;
01:02:147 - i feel there's still sound of second piano sound that you follow here, connect the pattern maybe?
01:03:647 (63647|2,63797|3) - you can jack this since the secondary piano here actually same pitch.
01:24:947 (84947|2,85097|0,85247|1) - I'm quite sure you follow piano here right? if then, the snap must be at 1/6 below, mainly at 01:24:897 - 01:25:047 - 01:25:197 - (the current snap wrong i think)
02:10:547 - i think this can be change a bit so this won't be too left handed, bcause there's already 02:09:197 (129197|0,129197|1,129497|0,129497|1,129797|1,129797|0) - to begin with, how about try: http://puu.sh/qlYS8/a7625f55d4.png
02:14:147 (134147|1) - move to 1 here?
02:19:397 (139397|0) - you can turn this to LN imo,you did the same to 02:21:497 (141497|3) - , try: http://puu.sh/qlYYk/526583523c.png
03:48:197 (228197|1) - move to 4 here, i feel empty on right column here.
03:57:797 - awww this is the one that buttseck my 100% acc so hard D: maybe you can try this? http://puu.sh/qlZpD/e395fa2

Well, Nice song nice map here :D , great job
Good luck :3
Critical_Star
Beatmap Nominator
1,241 posts
Joined December 2013
Critical_Star

DixonBlackwing wrote:

Hello Narcissu and star :D
Mod for mania mode here :3

[CS'Normal]
01:03:197 - add note here? you also add for crash at 02:00:797 -
01:05:747 (65747|3,65897|2,66047|1) - wrong snapped? i'm quite sure this is 1/12 below.. at 01:05:697 - 01:05:847 - 01:05:997 - i'm not really sure if the simplification is allowed here.
01:21:797 - Just my thinking a bit, but this is maybe a bit too taxing for left hand bcause of 01:19:997 (79997|0,79997|1,80597|1,80897|0,81797|0,82097|1,82397|0) - , maybe you could make it like: http://puu.sh/qlR7Y/3a817a08f1.png
02:10:397 (130397|1,130697|2,130997|3) - Ctrl+H here? for the pitch and better flow
02:14:897 - http://puu.sh/qlRWm/2c4077fb60.png well my suggestion, it should give more variation and flow here. i think is fine here
02:25:697 (145697|1,146297|2) - Ctrl+G this? to avoid a bit of 02:25:097 (145097|1,145397|0,145697|1,145997|0) -
02:29:597 (149597|2,149897|3) - also Ctrl+G D: it flow nicely here, i think is fine
03:38:147 - don't ignore this D:
03:40:697 - hmm is this intentionally ignored to follow piano?
03:49:847 (229847|2,229997|1,230147|0) - well, i know you want to make constant stair here, but i think you can make this col 1-3-2 here. a bit mirroring 03:49:397 (229397|2,229547|1,229697|3) - ,should be flow better :3

[CS' Hard]
00:33:797 (33797|0,34097|0) - don't jack will be better bcause of pitch here, try: http://puu.sh/qlT0a/bd76fe59ea.png
00:44:897 (44897|2,45197|2,45497|2,46097|2,46397|2,46997|2,47297|2,47597|2) - aaaa please avoid ;w; it should'nt be a problem here since it flow nicely with the sound variation
01:02:147 - i feel there's still sound of second piano sound that you follow here, connect the pattern maybe? not really clear there so i guess can ignore that
01:03:647 (63647|2,63797|3) - you can jack this since the secondary piano here actually same pitch. hmm, i don;t think is the same ;w;
01:24:947 (84947|2,85097|0,85247|1) - I'm quite sure you follow piano here right? if then, the snap must be at 1/6 below, mainly at 01:24:897 - 01:25:047 - 01:25:197 - (the current snap wrong i think)
02:10:547 - i think this can be change a bit so this won't be too left handed, bcause there's already 02:09:197 (129197|0,129197|1,129497|0,129497|1,129797|1,129797|0) - to begin with, how about try: http://puu.sh/qlYS8/a7625f55d4.png
02:14:147 (134147|1) - move to 1 here?
02:19:397 (139397|0) - you can turn this to LN imo,you did the same to 02:21:497 (141497|3) - , try: http://puu.sh/qlYYk/526583523c.png
03:48:197 (228197|1) - move to 4 here, i feel empty on right column here.
03:57:797 - awww this is the one that buttseck my 100% acc so hard D: maybe you can try this? http://puu.sh/qlZpD/e395fa2 rip puush

Well, Nice song nice map here :D , great job thanks! ;) nice mod!
Good luck :3
no reply = fixed :)
Mint
1,611 posts
Joined February 2013
Mint
我还不知道little的gd会怎么样，如果我自己的gd太难的话，我就会把有的1/4去掉.

can i copy your hitsounds =w=？？
Narcissu
1,764 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu
我覺得只會太簡單lol

因為之後更新了mp3和音效文件，我幫你改了timing（雖然我不是很確定）和tag（我一開始寫了moe little moe）也按照我的難度加了音效，總之更新一下 :)

------

應該是……我不知道little的gd会怎么样……
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
不请自来，争取明后两天内摸掉迟到了两天。。。
一晚上上来连续刚了3pc的Camellia，3pc全部fail在了3分20秒后某处，手已经爆炸了。。。

General

  1. 蛋疼的钢琴曲timing: 00:33:797 - 到00:35:897 - 之间，感觉弹得有点随机，导致物件跟音乐偏差有点多。可以的话最好timing下，加点红线，免得被挑刺

Camellia

  1. 00:48:197 (1,2) - 这里，我没有在音乐中给这个大间距找到个合适的理由，感觉有些随机。这样放你意下如何？
    SPOILER
  2. 00:56:597 (1) - 把这个折返，往下移动大约25个单位。这样在视觉的间距上显得更统一。
  3. 01:17:597 (2) - 我个人倾向这样的形状。这样跟前面的联系更紧密，跟后面的物件更疏离，感觉跟音乐更搭。
    SPOILER
  4. 01:40:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这样改改吧。现在这个感觉5突然缩小了间距，有点一卡一卡的。
    SPOILER
  5. 03:08:897 (2) - 你觉得把这个ctrl+g，然后略微上移怎么样？钢琴连续三个相同的音，用相同方向的滑条来强调，最后一个较高的音一反向，挺有意思的。
  6. 03:09:797 (1,2,3,4,5) - 跟01:40:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 一样，感觉4,5太近，有些卡。

Nightcore看起来似乎是一样的，就懒得细看了。

appleeaterx

直到开始摸你的图，我才发现你的id是吃苹果的人。之前一直以为它是个生造的词语，或者是古语什么的。连字典都查不到。。。
  1. Consider raising the AR to 7.5-8. The distance in the last kiai is quite special, which is really, really tricky in AR7.
  2. 00:45:797 (1) - i feel it's not a good idea to follow the light piano sound in the main melody. (actually u didn't do that in the other sections) Change this into a 1/2 one. 00:50:597 (1) - the same
  3. 02:57:797 (1,2,3) - how about this? the current reverse has more than 1 turning point in a high-density area, which is really hard for newbies imo. also i rearrange the flow (especially 4,5,6), to make it more smooth.
    SPOILER
  4. 03:25:697 (6,7) - 03:24:797 (3,4,5) - same distance for different rhythm without any hint. which is quite weird in this AR imo.

E和N不摸。这首似乎已经做了好久了。每次上线来看到水仙上线，基本都在搞这个。早日起飞咯。
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sahuang
2,294 posts
Joined December 2014
sahuang

Colourful wrote:

不请自来。。只是看看水仙姥爷最近在做什么新图（）
xxx
玩下来感觉00:55:097 (2) 这个note有点多余。。
ren?????????
Narcissu
1,764 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Adol Christin wrote:

不请自来，争取明后两天内摸掉迟到了两天。。。
一晚上上来连续刚了3pc的Camellia，3pc全部fail在了3分20秒后某处，手已经爆炸了。。。

General

  1. 蛋疼的钢琴曲timing: 00:33:797 - 到00:35:897 - 之间，感觉弹得有点随机，导致物件跟音乐偏差有点多。可以的话最好timing下，加点红线，免得被挑刺……這個我想了挺久還是覺得單紅打圖最單純……因為這個都是某一個音差很大不是那種均勻的= =

Camellia

  1. 00:48:197 (1,2) - 这里，我没有在音乐中给这个大间距找到个合适的理由，感觉有些随机。这样放你意下如何？……這樣後面的距離都一樣看上去……舒服點
    SPOILER
  2. 00:56:597 (1) - 把这个折返，往下移动大约25个单位。这样在视觉的间距上显得更统一。
  3. 01:17:597 (2) - 我个人倾向这样的形状。这样跟前面的联系更紧密，跟后面的物件更疏离，感觉跟音乐更搭。……不不不包起來好看 :roll:
    SPOILER
  4. 01:40:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这样改改吧。现在这个感觉5突然缩小了间距，有点一卡一卡的。
    SPOILER
  5. 03:08:897 (2) - 你觉得把这个ctrl+g，然后略微上移怎么样？钢琴连续三个相同的音，用相同方向的滑条来强调，最后一个较高的音一反向，挺有意思的。
  6. 03:09:797 (1,2,3,4,5) - 跟01:40:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 一样，感觉4,5太近，有些卡。

Nightcore看起来似乎是一样的，就懒得细看了。
大距離單點再接大距離滑條就很難了……現在雖然卡手但是難度都在其他大跳之下所以就這樣了

no reply = fix
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
3,735 posts
Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
Gorgeous Camellia diff ToT

starred
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
3,701 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
really great mapset

easy
02:43:397 (3) - do not ovelap more better http://puu.sh/qzER8/de89c65ffb.jpg
03:12:197 (5) - 1/1 spaming circle is danger so add nc for hpdrain.
03:48:197 (5) - same as above

apple's hard
00:35:597 (5) - looks fine. but i like 1/2 slider + circle pattern!
00:50:597 (1) - should be changed 1/2 slider because on ur pattern about 01:48:197 (1) -
01:04:397 (6) - same as 00:35:597 (5) -
01:07:997 (3) - changed 3/4 slider ? 1/2 slider is not bad. but i want to follow melody.
02:11:297 (4,5) - changed 1/1 slider more better good rhythm imo.
02:43:097 (7) - changed 1/4 slider ? on you are pattern about 02:47:897 (7,7,7) -
awesome awesome

Little's insane
03:48:497 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - big fun <3

camellia
03:12:796 (3) - unsnap slider end
nothing to say ~

general
should be check combo color all diff.
Please turn off the timing points (red line) which you do not use.

overall. awesome diffspread mapset!
other difficulty looks fine to me. if you are ready call me again!
Narcissu
1,764 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

FrostxE wrote:

Gorgeous Camellia diff ToT

starred
::>_<::

================================

@Satellite

fix akkkkkllllll

except combo color …… i want to keep bule when every kiai start like 00:45:797 - 00:55:397 - 。but i can‘t add NC every bar so i add a new color, Normal & Easy need’t add NC every bar so need't 5 combo color …… if it's not unrankable i wish keep it

will fix other diff timing after GDer reply
kanor
927 posts
Joined August 2013
kanor
[little的insane]
01:51:197 (3,4) -这两个滑条感觉ctrl+G一下感觉更舒服
03:01:397 (1) - ^ 反选一下感觉flow更舒服一点
03:48:497 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 这一串知道思路，但是难度会不会有点太大了呀......就整个diff来说orz 实在要摆的话最好顺时针就统一顺时针？这样顺时针一个图形逆时针又一个图形感觉难度有些脱节了......最主要的感觉还是不合曲，这段钢琴感觉是从高到低十分流畅，这里连续三次逆flow感觉还是有些违和.....
[主难度]
00:39:797 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉这里直接用四个滑条不好嘛？这里的节奏不是很理解.....这么下也不是不行，自己做出节奏也可以但是音效不强调的话感觉还是不如直接用曲子的节奏......
01:05:597 (2,3,4,5) - 这个弧线的弧度再大一点厚不厚呀，再弯一点感觉flow更流畅一点
没了，GL :)
Narcissu
1,764 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu
弧度小一點好看

另外的重音在藍線上面所以就換了一下，雖然其他地方沒有換
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little

Satellite wrote:

Little's insane
03:48:497 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - big fun <3 <3

kanor wrote:

[little的insane]
01:51:197 (3,4) -这两个滑条感觉ctrl+G一下感觉更舒服 I think the current direction is fine, but I moved (3,4,1) to make the distance more comfortable.
03:01:397 (1) - ^ 反选一下感觉flow更舒服一点 This flow is fine. It's not supposed to be smooth, because I want to put accent on (1) and (3).
03:48:497 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 这一串知道思路，但是难度会不会有点太大了呀......就整个diff来说orz 实在要摆的话最好顺时针就统一顺时针？这样顺时针一个图形逆时针又一个图形感觉难度有些脱节了......最主要的感觉还是不合曲，这段钢琴感觉是从高到低十分流畅，这里连续三次逆flow感觉还是有些违和..... I think it's important to have special pattern for this part, since it's really the climax of the music. I think that the direction changes are not that hard to play, and have proper build-up to it with the previous patterns.
Thanks.
http://f.ttle.li/y0Sj.zip
Mint
1,611 posts
Joined February 2013
Mint

Adol Christin wrote:

直到开始摸你的图，我才发现你的id是吃苹果的人。之前一直以为它是个生造的词语，或者是古语什么的。连字典都查不到。。。
  1. Consider raising the AR to 7.5-8. The distance in the last kiai is quite special, which is really, really tricky in AR7. :arrow: raise AR to 7.3, keep spread with little's & normal diff + mostly 1/1 mapping
  2. 00:45:797 (1) - i feel it's not a good idea to follow the light piano sound in the main melody. (actually u didn't do that in the other sections) Change this into a 1/2 one. 00:50:597 (1) - the same :arrow: fixed
  3. 02:57:797 (1,2,3) - how about this? the current reverse has more than 1 turning point in a high-density area, which is really hard for newbies imo. also i rearrange the flow (especially 4,5,6), to make it more smooth. :arrow: fixced
    SPOILER
  4. 03:25:697 (6,7) - 03:24:797 (3,4,5) - same distance for different rhythm without any hint. which is quite weird in this AR imo. :arrow: fixed
[/notice]

Satellite wrote:

apple's hard
00:35:597 (5) - looks fine. but i like 1/2 slider + circle pattern! :arrow: timing is strange here... so want to have focus on 00:36:497 (1) - instead, maybe fix in later update if timing gets fixed
00:50:597 (1) - should be changed 1/2 slider because on ur pattern about 01:48:197 (1) - :arrow: fixed
01:04:397 (6) - same as 00:35:597 (5) -
01:07:997 (3) - changed 3/4 slider ? 1/2 slider is not bad. but i want to follow melody. :arrow: fixed
02:11:297 (4,5) - changed 1/1 slider more better good rhythm imo. :arrow: i feel the clap-like sound on (5) indicates how next section is going to be, so map to prepare player :3
02:43:097 (7) - changed 1/4 slider ? on you are pattern about 02:47:897 (7,7,7) - :idea: 777 lol, fixed
awesome awesome :arrow: satellite cutie w
thanks !!

apl
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Flower Dance.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 103247
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Flower Dance
TitleUnicode:Flower Dance
Artist:DJ OKAWARI
ArtistUnicode:DJ OKAWARI
Creator:Narcissu
Version:apple's Hard
Source:
Tags:a cup of coffee appleeaterx little cloudsplash16 Critical_Star
BeatmapID:1046358
BeatmapSetID:476691

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4.5
CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.3
SliderMultiplier:2.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Combo3 : 255,255,128
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48,188,213497,2,0,P|60:232|60:244,1,42,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,312,213797,6,0,P|104:304|160:328,1,84,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,352,214247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,300,214397,2,0,L|252:212,1,84,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,160,214847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,112,214997,2,0,P|212:104|184:104,1,42,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,64,215297,2,0,P|128:112|132:124,1,42,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,180,215597,1,10,0:0:0:0:
260,224,215897,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,224,216047,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,160,216197,6,0,P|352:156|392:180,1,84,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,144,216647,1,2,0:0:0:0:
504,212,216797,2,0,L|492:284,2,42,10|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,68,217397,2,0,L|448:-4,2,42,2|2|2,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
360,84,217847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,48,217997,2,0,P|248:32|192:48,1,84,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,84,218447,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,84,218597,5,2,1:2:0:0:
228,176,218897,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,292,219197,1,10,0:0:0:0:
88,200,219497,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,176,219797,2,0,L|312:168,1,84,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
424,112,220397,2,0,P|440:164|436:212,1,84,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,300,220997,6,0,L|276:288,1,84,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,344,221447,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,292,221597,2,0,L|92:281,1,84,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,168,222197,2,0,P|24:128|40:72,1,84,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
92,36,222647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,68,222797,2,0,L|248:56,1,84,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,20,223247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,72,223397,6,0,P|428:108|428:136,1,42,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,172,223697,2,0,P|316:148|264:152,2,84,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,256,224447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,256,224597,2,0,P|480:232|532:236,2,84,2|2|10,1:2|1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,368,225497,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,368,225647,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,328,225797,6,0,L|268:232,1,84,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,184,226247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,120,226397,2,0,L|296:112,2,42,10|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,64,226997,2,0,L|96:56,2,42,2|2|2,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
200,16,227447,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,40,227597,2,0,L|316:32,2,42,10|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,132,228197,5,2,1:2:0:0:
208,252,228497,2,0,L|220:316,1,42,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,364,228797,2,0,P|296:356|316:328,1,42,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,256,229097,2,0,P|300:264|280:292,1,42,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,332,229397,2,0,L|472:308,1,84,2|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
436,188,229997,2,0,L|448:128,1,42,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,116,230297,2,0,L|360:176,1,42,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,184,230597,6,0,P|240:160|212:164,1,84,0|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,204,231047,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,168,231197,2,0,P|68:124|84:84,2,84,10|2|2,0:0|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
116,288,232097,1,2,1:2:0:0:
116,288,232247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,340,232397,2,0,P|216:316|256:312,1,84,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,344,232847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,308,232997,6,0,L|416:212,1,84,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,156,233447,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,104,233597,2,0,P|352:132|308:128,1,84,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,88,234047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,234197,2,0,L|104:120,1,42,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,64,234497,2,0,P|40:120|44:148,1,84,2|10,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,228,235097,2,0,P|144:260|144:284,1,42,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,348,235397,6,0,P|200:344|236:372,1,84,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,364,235847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,320,235997,2,0,L|440:328,2,42,10|0|2,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,228,236597,2,0,L|224:220,2,42,2|0|2,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
348,180,237047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,192,237197,2,0,P|436:236|436:252,1,42,10|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,180,237497,2,0,P|352:159|359:139,1,42,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,88,237797,5,2,1:2:0:0:
365,30,238097,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,63,238397,1,10,0:0:0:0:
206,166,238697,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,184,238997,5,2,1:2:0:0:
178,126,239297,1,2,1:2:0:0:
287,159,239597,1,10,0:0:0:0:
337,262,239897,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,308,240197,5,6,0:0:0:0:
Narcissu
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Narcissu
update 111

i delete all diff red line so your need update, i'm sorry for hurry to pull you reply mod ……
ZZHBOY
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ZZHBOY
mania check

\1\2\3\4\

[CS' Normal]
  1. 00:36:497 (36497|0) - 之前都没有跟这个低音琴00:31:697 - 00:32:297 - 所以最好统一下 都不要去跟好了
  2. 00:41:897 - 00:43:097 - 低音琴不是很明显 还是建议就跟高音的好了
  3. 01:02:597 (62597|0,63197|0) - 音高不一样 后面一个音好像低点 01:02:597 (62597|0) - 把这个移到第二栏?
  4. 01:05:747 (65747|3,66047|1) - 这两个还是去了吧 没有snap好
  5. 01:24:947 (84947|0,85247|3) - ^
  6. 01:52:097 (112097|3) - 这个删掉吧 统一在clap那里2note
  7. 01:59:297 - 01:59:747 - 这里也有类似的琴音 建议还是不要空 或者都只跟1/2就好
  8. 02:01:697 (121697|0) - 同01:52:097 (112097|3) -
  9. 02:19:997 - 02:21:197 - 我觉得从这里开始就可以在clap的地方放点2note了 和后面统一点
  10. 02:49:097 (169097|1,169397|0) - swap column for pitch?
  11. 03:04:997 - 漏了一个note?
  12. 03:34:847 (214847|1) - 这里没明显琴音 去了吧
[CS' Hard]
  1. 00:29:447 - 00:30:047 - 这两个地方我觉得1note就可以了
  2. 00:41:297 - 00:41:597 - 这些地方可以再加一个note跟下低音的琴
如果改的话类似的地方注意保持统一下 其他地方都还好

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Critical_Star
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ZZHBOY wrote:

mania check

\1\2\3\4\

[CS' Normal]
  1. 00:36:497 (36497|0) - 之前都没有跟这个低音琴00:31:697 - 00:32:297 - 所以最好统一下 都不要去跟好了
  2. 00:41:897 - 00:43:097 - 低音琴不是很明显 还是建议就跟高音的好了
  3. 01:02:597 (62597|0,63197|0) - 音高不一样 后面一个音好像低点 01:02:597 (62597|0) - 把这个移到第二栏?
  4. 01:05:747 (65747|3,66047|1) - 这两个还是去了吧 没有snap好 好像是1/12 snap这儿，不过其他diff都用1/4snap,我觉得没问题吧
  5. 01:24:947 (84947|0,85247|3) - ^ ^
  6. 01:52:097 (112097|3) - 这个删掉吧 统一在clap那里2note 这个给kick一个note吧，感觉少了一个kick感觉
  7. 01:59:297 - 01:59:747 - 这里也有类似的琴音 建议还是不要空 或者都只跟1/2就好 01:59:297 - 这里是kick 01:59:747 - 这里音琴不是很明显,所以不加了
  8. 02:01:697 (121697|0) - 同01:52:097 (112097|3) - ^
  9. 02:19:997 - 02:21:197 - 我觉得从这里开始就可以在clap的地方放点2note了 和后面统一点
  10. 02:49:097 (169097|1,169397|0) - swap column for pitch?
  11. 03:04:997 - 漏了一个note?
  12. 03:34:847 (214847|1) - 这里没明显琴音 去了吧 我听到啊;w;
[CS' Hard]
  1. 00:29:447 - 00:30:047 - 这两个地方我觉得1note就可以了 这是给high pitch piano 的，我觉得很适合吧
  2. 00:41:297 - 00:41:597 - 这些地方可以再加一个note跟下低音的琴这里还是不跟低音的琴吧，感觉有点乱
如果改的话类似的地方注意保持统一下 其他地方都还好

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no reply = fixed , thanks~ :)
ZZHBOY
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:)
Satellite
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Satellite
recheck

camellia
00:58:396 (3) - slider end unsnapped.
Narcissu
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Narcissu
why have many unsnap :cry:

============

@little/apple : i close up widescreen support …… your have to update again Orz
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Satellite
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rerecheck and STD mode seems fine to me.

so Bubbled.

mania icon here : p/5405131
Bursthammy
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FINALLY

A 5+ STAR FLOWER DANCE IS GOING TO BE RANKED

IS IT MY BIRTHDAY OR SOMETHING
sahuang
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sahuang
nice map
starred <3

水仙的大...几把..插的人家好爽啊啊啊啊啊
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Narcissu
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Lasse
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fun map
but shouldn't 03:18:797 (3,4,5) - be snapped to 1/12?
there are 3 piano sounds, but 03:18:872 (4) - sounds late and there is no piano hit on 03:18:947 -
I think this is closer http://i.imgur.com/W7obfHP.jpg
Narcissu
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yes 03:18:947 - without piano, but i think 3hit more comfortable so i overmap …… this light song gives the feeling is "fluency" , if other point it i will use 2hit

it's not 1/8 ???



edit:

sahuang wrote:

Lasse wrote:

fun map
but shouldn't 03:18:797 (3,4,5) - be snapped to 1/12?
there are 3 piano sounds, but 03:18:872 (4) - sounds late and there is no piano hit on 03:18:947 -
I think this is closer http://i.imgur.com/W7obfHP.jpg
discussed with lasse and also narcissu,it should be 1/12 03:18:797 (3,4,5) - .In mania it's also snapped to 1/12
fix the inconsistency pls :o
ok i change to 1/12 slider …… but i still want wiat kyubey
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sahuang
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Lasse wrote:

fun map
but shouldn't 03:18:797 (3,4,5) - be snapped to 1/12?
there are 3 piano sounds, but 03:18:872 (4) - sounds late and there is no piano hit on 03:18:947 -
I think this is closer http://i.imgur.com/W7obfHP.jpg
discussed with lasse and also narcissu,it should be 1/12 03:18:797 (3,4,5) - .In mania it's also snapped to 1/12
fix the inconsistency pls :o
sahuang
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Rebubbled.
Narcissu
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@dear kyubey: kencho want to check it …… maybe you will lose your work again ……

==================

some bn's story

Little chan
  1. i ask little m4m from queue, it's "First Served" not “100 pick 3”
  2. i forget post in queue …… queue colsed when i notice
  3. little mod my map, short a star
  4. little check my map after one month…… i never ask he
  5. i add little to friend …… not mu = =
  6. i ask little for icon, he do

shit ZZHBOY
why player love your map
because other map bad

why bad map ranked
because ZZHBOY is bn, he accept modreq form his friend
Kencho
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1111

  • Black is Personal comments.
    Bold Black is Highly recommended to fix.
    Red is Unrankable that you should fix.

[General]
  1. 主要是02:59:447 - 這個地方apple's Hard裡面是1/12，主難度是1/8，雖然兩個都snap不對，但我個人覺得1/8比較好

[Easy]
  1. Looks good.

[Normal]
  1. Looks good.x2

[apple's Hard]
  1. 02:59:447 (7) - Actually the real beats is like this, but I think here use 1/4 slider will be safe.
    SPOILER

[Little's Insane]
  1. 03:04:097 (2,3,4) - 03:08:597 (1,2,3,4) - DS a little bit too far, can you use smaller DS here?
  2. 03:30:197 (1,2,3,4) - Same, maybe copy 03:30:197 (1,3) - to replace 03:30:497 (2,4) - then ctrl+H and ctrl+J? Also don't forget to cancel NC and set hitsounds.
  3. 03:34:097 (4) - 03:43:697 (4) - NC?

[Camellia]
  1. 02:41:447 (2) - 可以稍微放遠點
  2. 02:41:597 (3,4,5,1) - 這個打著不太舒服，34太遠，51太近，如果能換個好打點的排列就好了
  3. 03:33:197 (3,4,5,1) - 和上面的類似，感覺51太近了，把1放到03:32:597 (1) - 滑條尾附近的地方會比較好，如果改了當然後面的排列也要稍微改一下
  4. 03:21:497 (3,3) - 沒疊好
  5. 03:26:897 (2,4) - ^
Good Luck!
Call me back when you are ready
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Little
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All fixed in my diff, thanks!

http://f.ttle.li/WV0P.zip
Lavender
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Fly
moonlightleaf
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Fight

02:41:597 (3,4,5,1) - 只是建议
SPOILER

03:33:197 (3,4,5,1) - 这里反而没啥关系

其实都没啥关系 都敲300了都
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Narcissu
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我距離几乎都是1.2，第一個我覺得沒問題

the song sound like “easy play”, but it's 1/12 ……
like a people very moe, but he is boy not girl, so i use 1/4 …… should be girl
Kencho
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Qualified!

Mint
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Narcissu wrote:

like a people very moe, but he is boy not girl, so i use 1/4 …… should be girl
can we just appreciate this golden quote

congrats !!
Agatsu
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gratz!
Gaia
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這首歌　(ღ˘˘ღ)
恭喜 ^^
ktgster
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ktgster
Offset is a bit off. Needs +10ms.
Asahina Momoko
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oooooooooooooooo congrats!!!! :)
Little
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Grats!
Narcissu
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ktgster wrote:

Offset is a bit off. Needs +10ms.
wait me ask for some

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look like offline now

but at least SS all early 1s https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6002450 http://puu.sh/qiEHQ/277e2c49a4.jpg https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6002574

Doormat chan play early and fail :?

so i want keep unless more people point out
Doormat
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to iterate on Narcissu's point i also checked it in editor and it seems fine for me; the drums line up with the metronome pretty well.

i only failed because i suck at this game xd

edit: played around with editor a bit after i posted and it wouldn't hurt to change offset by +5 to +10; this could be fixed with web offset thing kite mentioned
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Narcissu
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don't mind, i fail too :cry:
Shiro
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Offset needs +12. If you're wondering why SS scores are all early (like basing an offset on that is a good idea), it's because the song is slow. 200 BPM single tap is very slow, especially with density as low as you have it in the map. People tend to click this too fast, especially when it goes with large spacing.

Also, the hitsounding could be improved. First and foremost, you don't follow the basic drumline of the song.
Here's what you have:

Here's what the song actually does:

You may think it's small, but this additional kick bothered the hell out of me every time I looked at this. Please do fix this. I assume that you did this on purpose and you're creating your own rhythm with the hitsounds for the kiai, but I don't think it works. This additional kick simply ruins the whole hitsounding to me, which other than that is decent.

Second big issue: this tick sound is extremely intrusive on (technically) overmapped objects, mostly sliderends. Note that I have absolutely no problem with those objects being sliders, but the fact their end has that strong hitsound is a bother. If you want your map to sound nicer, you'll need to find a quieter sample to substitute to the objects that do not follow directly the piano. Also, you're wasting the whistle sample with the double tick thing, when you could have used it to follow the hi-hat which would have been a nice addition to the hitsounding. If you find a quieter sample, I'm willing to redo your hitsounding for you in the Camellia diff. If I were you, I would keep the tick sound as a whistle and use it for hi-hat, but if you want to use it to highlight the piano, that's fine.

Third issue: the hitsounding's structure is lacking and not following the song's.
02:12:197 (1) - The drumline restarts at a fairly audible level around here. Yours starts here 02:17:597 (3) - which doesn't make any sense. For the sake of structure and how you decided to structure the map, I'd advise to restart the drumline only later, at 02:21:797 (1) - which is the point where your map accelerates again. It would be more consistent with your structure and the acceleration would work better that way.
02:36:197 (1) - Same here. Don't switch the sample this early, it doesn't make sense. It ruins the potential hitsound change effect you could have to emphasize the kiai. Keep the louder samples for the kiai and use the quieter ones there. Also, 02:38:597 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - most of these kicks don't exist in the song. And again, before you say "I want to build up to the kiai", the violin takes care of it, not the drums. This is intrusive.

I would have liked to see the end mapped, if only to have a calm, soothing ending, but that's up to you. There are many things I could point out in the map itself too, but they're purely stylistic choices and I have no big qualms with how you mapped this. If you're curious, I can post them, but I don't consider them critical and certainly not worth DQing over. The rest of what I pointed out, however, I do consider worth a DQ.
Frostmourne
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Your mapset is amazing. Don't change or believe on posts that try to force you to change based on their opinions. Your hitsounds are amazing, are relieved to play, and what should be done on this music.

The only objective opinions on this is offset should be around +5 ~ +10. Might be disqualified but please fix only this problem if you do.
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Kite
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just slap an online offset onto the map and done cya inb4 unneccessary drama erupts
Narcissu
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but 200 is fast for me and Doormat …… of course its not key for timing, i believe FrostXe use +5 ~ +10

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i add extra Hitsound when kiai, make Hitsound rich, as you see 01:04:997 - 01:43:397 - not

and 02:57:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - have more kick because music more intense, as you know other song will have more kick when 8/16 bar, it follow music format

we can‘t add 24clap when other 180BPM Easy diff, and have to skip 24 clap when Insane diff because Dotted Rhythm, i think you will want not DQ this map even if “bothered the hell out of me”

with sophistry point of view, i follow music not sound, you heard paino and drum, i heard Flower Dance

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Drum volume is this http://puu.sh/qYbII/af5fa4c60c.jpg

it's really make me agony, i considered use Hitsound 1~ 20, or skip drum, change volume by green line, finally i think start 02:36:197 - is best,

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timing should be DQ, i think its better than online offset …… if you still think its should +12ms, i need evidence or more opinion. the song not 100% by computer so i cant use software check it, i just believe FrostXe because he have many fans
Raiden
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Raiden
I get +7/+8 ms but it is indeed early
Narcissu
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Narcissu

Raiden wrote:

I get +7/+8 ms but it is indeed early
k

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ah …… i cant find cute girl DQ it, its a bit hard for me …… as shiro say player will click early, maybe keep it is best, a right timing make people lose SS lol, i tired consider, let online offest come

but if anyone has suggestions feel free to post it ……

and my english very bad. if you cant understand, let me know Orz
Monstrata
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Monstrata
Huh... I think you can just fix offset with an online offset shift... It will be just the same as if you dq'ed and changed the offset yourself. The online offset will automatically update all maps so players won't even need to update/redownload your map to see the offset shift.

Yohanes
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Yohanes
Holy God Narcissu, stop being my favorite mapper wwwwww

Gratz! Hope the offset problem will be fixed soon
Sellenite
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Sellenite
someone's hitsound really ruin the map omg gg.
rhythm need to step by step,hitsound also.hitsound structure not equal to your dq level
mdzz
Kyouren
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Kyouren
So beautiful <3
Adol Christin
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Adol Christin
map is really nice, and hitsound fits the piano well. At least I dont have any uncomfortable feeling on current hitsound.
sahuang
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sahuang
As monstrata said online offset shift is fine to use...
Listened to hitsounds again,i have to say it's really awesome hitsounding, idk why ppl still have so many disagreements on it.

Narcissu wrote:

with sophistry point of view, i follow music not sound, you heard paino and drum, i heard Flower Dance
Impressive!!
Gaia
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Gaia
hitsounds allow the mapper to express their maps in their own way, if it's not overdone then there shouldn't be any problem. he just wanted to emphasize the extra note that's all

我賣萌 要幫忙的話可以來找我 ^^"
Fycho
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Fycho
Set the online offset, about the hitsounds, I do think more opinions are needed before we do a disqualification.
In my opinion, the hitsounds fits the music and map's rhythm quite well, and they sound natural.

Some discussions wouldn't hurt, and we will see then.
Lavender
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Lavender
Hitsounds are fine for me, I've ever done additional hitsounds like this before.
Shiro
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Shiro

Fycho wrote:

Set the online offset, about the hitsounds, I do think more opinions are needed before we do a disqualification.
In my opinion, the hitsounds fits the music and map's rhythm quite well, and they sound natural.

Some discussions wouldn't hurt, and we will see then.
I'm satisfied with Narcissu's answer on my concerns, even if I don't agree with what he did since as I said that additional kick really ruins the whole thing to me, but there's no need for a DQ.

Narcissu wrote:

with sophistry point of view, i follow music not sound, you heard paino and drum, i heard Flower Dance
Correction: you hear your version of Flower Dance, I hear the composer's. I wouldn't have the pretention to try to change the song to something that suits me better, but it seems you do. Same goes to the map: I map to the song, you don't. To each their own.
Little
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Little

Shiro wrote:

Correction: you hear your version of Flower Dance, I hear the composer's. I wouldn't have the pretention to try to change the song to something that suits me better, but it seems you do. Same goes to the map: I map to the song, you don't. To each their own.
Correction: Narcissu hears Narcissu's version, you hear your version. Not everyone will have the same interaction with a piece of music, and not everyone will have the same interpretation. Don't talk down on others as if your interpretation of the music is the only correct one. Music is more than simply a collection of sounds.
Shiirn
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Shiirn
If you're hearing beats where there are none, please consult an otolaryngologist.

Interpretation is fine and all, but "I hear a beat there" is significantly different than "I feel that a beat there does not ruin the aesthetic or musical import of this song, rather, it enhances it". One is delusional bullshit, the other is potentially creative mapping.

And once you're into the extremely subjective area of "placing beats where there are none" you must accept that there will be people who vapidly disagree and people who think you're the best thing since magic three points.
Raiden
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Raiden

Shiirn wrote:

If you're hearing beats where there are none in music, please consult an otolaryngologist.
I'd rather go for a psychiatrist, honestly. Schizophrenia is a serious matter.

Sorry, had to do it.
Narcissu
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Narcissu

Shiirn wrote:

If you're hearing beats where there are none, please consult an otolaryngologist.

Interpretation is fine and all, but "I hear a beat there" is significantly different than "I feel that a beat there does not ruin the aesthetic or musical import of this song, rather, it enhances it". One is delusional bullshit, the other is potentially creative mapping.

And once you're into the extremely subjective area of "placing beats where there are none" you must accept that there will be people who vapidly disagree and people who think you're the best thing since magic three points.
people can not distinguish between magic and science, because he lose course.

if you know why C12H16O6(NO2)4 + fire = boom, you will know why i add drum here, even given a more appropriate solution make the sky infected more colors

if you don't know what is Nitrocellulose, just quiet to see the Fireworks, enjoy music with play map

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sorry, had to do it …… i see your post in other therd, but i never join drama. between psychiatrist and otolaryngologist, i think a music teacher better

btw im Mathematics Students not Chemistry Student or Music Students, and i never pass English exam
Shiirn
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Shiirn
I never said you were doing anything wrong, nor did I say I disagree with the map. I already know it is pointless to discuss anything across a language barrier, as everything I say will be taken as offensively as possible.

I'm simply pointing out that intentionally adding objects where there are no beats in the song will bring questions.

I'm actually more on the creative expression side of mapping rather than the technical formula side, although they're fairly interconnected at a high enough level.


Thanks for assuming I'm being a dick, though.
Cherry Blossom
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Cherry Blossom
I don't know if it was already mentioned in the thread.
but there is a problem here, (maybe serious timing problems ?)

Comparing this 01:05:597 (2,3,4,5) - to 01:15:347 (2,3) -

01:15:347 (2,3) - is snapped correctly, because the piano sounds are on 1/4 ticks.
But 01:05:597 (2,3,4,5) - and especially this beat 01:05:747 (3) - should not be snapped on 1/4, the current one is too late, the piano sound in the background is earlier.
But you made things consistent, i mean you always used circles for piano sounds which are not snapped correctly on 1/4.
Narcissu
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Narcissu
i understand, i said the song not 100% by computer …… other mod say it yet p=5385597, its chinese maybe you cant read. just listen 00:33:797 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , and more part.

In short, i want to save my daughter, i choose my mother once and i regret, paino different with drum, choose daughter better, believe me

my mother fell into the water

my daughter fell into the water
jawns
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jawns
I really think there are a lot of things that could be discussed about the Camellia map.

First of all, why would you use hit circles when there is no sound in the music? This happens a few places, but it is most obvious here: 00:38:297 (4) - I don't think there can be any justification for why this is a hit circle.

Second of all, not only do you use hit circles when there is no sound, you also ignore some very clear sounds. This is very clear at the part beginning at 02:02:597 (1) - . So many notes are completely ignored, with a slider going right through them. I can't see why you wouldn't map any of those. I think there are issues with the "chorus" of the song as well, but that's not as obvious.
Narcissu
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Narcissu
std not mania, can‘t one-to-one correspondence or follow everything. without paino/low sound so not add whistle, ignore right hand then left hand more obvious

i do it because i want to map more beautiful, i can't map the song with 1/4 note * 128
Adol Christin
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历经无数的搞事终于出狱了，水仙果然神马破
alas1a
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alas1a
I can't get passed this one part.
skillzprotech
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