This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年9月3日 at 1:53:49

Artist: DJ OKAWARI
Title: Flower Dance
Tags: a cup of coffee appleeaterx little cloudsplash16 Critical_Star
BPM: 100
Filesize: 7462kb
Play Time: 04:00
Difficulties Available:

1. apple's Hard (2.96 stars, 542 notes)
2. Camellia (5.11 stars, 743 notes)
3. CS' Hard - 4Key (2.5 stars, 1568 notes)
4. CS' Normal - 4Key (1.58 stars, 911 notes)
5. Easy (1.33 stars, 213 notes)
6. Little's Insane (4.3 stars, 696 notes)
7. Normal (2.21 stars, 363 notes)

Download: DJ OKAWARI - Flower Dance
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Oh, you see, you won’t have to send them anywhere. I’ll pay for them, and then, I’ll leave them here, for you

110BPM Ver http://puu.sh/qyrDf/603df63cb4.osz

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Hard by appleeaterx
Insane by Little
4k NM/HD by Critical_Star

This map was a lot of fun to play.

[Camellia]


Great work!

SinnPacked wrote:

This map was a lot of fun to play.

[Camellia]

00:29:510 - Seems to be missing a hit circle ……e …… without 1/8 imo

00:38:285 - This hitcircle is silent

00:45:785 - I'd consider a repeated slider

00:53:435 - This hitcircle is also silent

01:00:785 - IMO doubles would be appropriate for this section

01:43:385 - Another good place for a repeated slider

01:47:585 - I feel like I should be hitting something on this upbeat ……replace …… i add click here 03:25:985 - , to increasing ?

02:50:135 (2,3) - This double is silent

Great work!

thx mod xd

Narcissu the god !

SS Orz

i can support

;w; thx very much, i love you

I was going to mod it, but I couldn't find any issue with standart diffs. I don't play mania so can't mod those.

Something to add: maybe 3* - 4* diffs?

Good job with Camellia diff and good luck in ranking.

ye will add 3~4 diff

Hii there~

CS req Here

Goodluck 'w')b

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hii there~

CS req Here

4k=1~4

Mania Mod here

• [CSNM]

1. 00:02:972 - add SV 1.25x? so noob not suprise since at 00:26:597 - being fast ''w')b yea good idea, added lol
2. 00:33:047 - add at 2? piano. as u mapped at 00:36:947 (36947|1,37097|2,37247|3,37397|0) - :3 here is 1/6 piano sound so i thought it may be a little bit forcing for NM diff
3. 01:03:797 (63797|1,64097|2) - change to 1/2s LN like as 01:02:597 (62597|0,62897|3,63197|0,63497|3) - cool
4. 01:11:447 - add in 3? like before, these are 1/6 piano sound so i decide to ignore this one xD
5. 01:15:347 - 01:15:647 - add note like as 00:36:947 (36947|1,37097|2,37247|3,37397|0) - ok i added on other side too
6. 01:23:297 (83297|2) - delete? no piano like 01:21:797 (81797|0,82097|1,82397|2,82697|3,82997|1) - feel empty to leave the kick note here, so i keep it but i used a LN to empyhsize the last piano sound better
7. 01:34:547 - 01:34:847 - add same as before ok
8. 01:56:747 - add piano? would prefer to catch those louder pitch piano sound here,
9. 01:59:297 (119297|2,119597|3) - delete? no piano deleted the red tick note but the white tick have piano sound here
10. 02:16:397 - 02:17:597 - 02:18:797 - etc add note for clap sound? like this 02:19:997 (139997|1,139997|0,141197|1,141197|3) - the drum sound are soft unlike start 02:31:397 - then i would use double for it, is good for build up pattern here
    
    [CSHD]
11. 00:46:997 (46997|3,46997|2) - 00:49:397 (49397|3,49397|2) - 00:56:597 (56597|1,56597|0) - 00:58:997 (58997|1,58997|0) - etc, delete one note? like this 00:51:797 (51797|2) - ? since no drum there? just kick only i know but it just feel a little special there for double, is like emphysize the piano sound here
12. 01:51:497 (111497|1) - LN star here 01:51:197 (111197|1) - ? pretty sure it started at the red tick line
13. 02:02:897 (122897|3,123047|2,123497|1,123647|2,124097|3,124247|2) - etc, idk why there just using single note while 02:04:697 (124697|0,124697|3,124847|2,124847|1) - using double note :3 yea you are right but it just feel too full here and i wanted to give some space for single stream here instead jumpstream till the end
14. 03:07:397 - ~03:08:297 - i think each blue line have sound too like as 03:08:447 (188447|2,188747|2,189047|2,189347|2,189647|1) - some are pretty noticeable like u mention that yea, but some are not too obvious, would prefer to add note to those much noticeable piano sound here

Goodluck 'w')b

thanks ya ami 'w')/

beep beep

[Camellia]
AR9.25??
00:28:997 (1,2) - 感觉形状一样的比较好看
01:01:997 (5) - NC? 前面有个间隔1/1的是4个1NC 知道是按白线下的不过这次还是NC下感觉比较好(?
01:59:597 (5) - ^
02:30:797 - why skip
02:34:997 (5) - NC 前面的都加了
02:39:797 (5) - 也是
02:58:997 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏大约是这样的 http://puu.sh/q938X/4b5b7d29b4.jpg 感觉可以2 3连个滑条 1/16 snap
03:18:797 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/q93e7/0e14a6ba0c.jpg 也是随便两个连成滑条?

prpr

顏色是為了每一段都藍色開頭，我修了一下手動跳過都改了……那個節奏是為了打起來好打一點，相同的01:05:597 (2,3,4,5,1) - 也是錯的snap……不過我看了記譜應該是再來一碗他自己手彈彈偏了= =

除了1/8和一樣的形狀和kiai 的換色都改了

thx mod ><

Just a random mod passing by.

Can't really say much to Easy/Normal but i'll try.

• 
  Easy
  
  01:28:997 (1) - Maybe change to shorter slider + 1 circle. Looks better IMO.
  01:50:597 (3) - Same, but not as necessary.

• 
  Normal
  
  01:16:997 (1) - Piano plays right in the middle. Sounds weird.
  03:16:997 (1) - Red slider point feels somewhat misplaced. Straight or curved slider would suit better IMO.

• 
  Camellia
  
  00:28:997 (1,2) - These 2 should look the same. First one with red slider point doesn't really fit.
  00:58:396 (3,4) - You did it here tho, lol.
  02:50:147 (2,3,4) - The triple kinda feels forced. Consider replacing it(?).
  03:18:797 (3,4,5) - Make triple into double? Piano seems to be playing that.
  03:21:197 (1,2,3,4) - Making these jumps more like a cross would increase readability. I'm saying this 'cause these broke my sightread FC (fml) :c
  03:55:397 (1,2,3,4) - Sliders seem unfitting. Might just be me tho.

Hope it was helpful. If not, i'll stop modding forever. Camellia was really fun to play.

Ikaros wrote:

Just a random mod passing by.

Can't really say much to Easy/Normal but i'll try.

• 
  Easy
  
  01:28:997 (1) - Maybe change to shorter slider + 1 circle. Looks better IMO.……i think skip some paino better …… if not it's have 1/1 * ∞ ……
  01:50:597 (3) - Same, but not as necessary.

• 
  Normal
  
  01:16:997 (1) - Piano plays right in the middle. Sounds weird.……same as easy diff
  03:16:997 (1) - Red slider point feels somewhat misplaced. Straight or curved slider would suit better IMO. …… ok

• 
  Camellia
  
  00:28:997 (1,2) - These 2 should look the same. First one with red slider point doesn't really fit.
  00:58:396 (3,4) - You did it here tho, lol.
  02:50:147 (2,3,4) - The triple kinda feels forced. Consider replacing it(?). …… deleted
  03:18:797 (3,4,5) - Make triple into double? Piano seems to be playing that.……paino is triple ?
  03:21:197 (1,2,3,4) - Making these jumps more like a cross would increase readability. I'm saying this 'cause these broke my sightread FC (fml) :c……cross a bit …… hard to layout
  03:55:397 (1,2,3,4) - Sliders seem unfitting. Might just be me tho.……

Hope it was helpful. If not, i'll stop modding forever. Camellia was really fun to play.

it's useful …… thx mod

[Cammelia]
01:14:297 (4,5) - Add NC on (4)? really hard to read
01:33:497 (4,5) - ^
01:42:797 (5,6) - ^

02:01:397 (1) - ctrl+G?

03:51:197 (3,4) -
I prefer this

[normal]

02:19:997 (2) - use (1) again?

03:26:597 (1) - put 115,208 stackstackstack
03:39:497 (4) - put 318,79　^

[Easy]
02:09:797 (3,4,5,6,1) - This pattern looks too hard for easy diff because its shape angle.
How about this.

120,48,129797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,143,130397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,165,130997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,84,131597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
350,31,132197,2,0,P|393:29|438:46,1,80

nice map
good luck

Urushi38 wrote:

[Cammelia]
01:14:297 (4,5) - Add NC on (4)? really hard to read
01:33:497 (4,5) - ^
01:42:797 (5,6) - ^

02:01:397 (1) - ctrl+G? …… look like same ……

03:51:197 (3,4) - …… all good follow a bit ordinary ……
I prefer this

SPOILER

[normal]

02:19:997 (2) - use (1) again?

SPOILER

03:26:597 (1) - put 115,208 stackstackstack
03:39:497 (4) - put 318,79　^

[Easy]
02:09:797 (3,4,5,6,1) - This pattern looks too hard for easy diff because its shape angle.
How about this. …… i use it many times and other part hard than it' …… i think it's ok

SPOILER

120,48,129797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,143,130397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,165,130997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,84,131597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
350,31,132197,2,0,P|393:29|438:46,1,80

nice map
good luck

no replay = fix
thx mod ;w;

Camellia was really fun to sight read thanks for the awesome map!

i'm happy if you like it xd

NM from my queue

Red: unrankable issues
Purple: highly recommend to fix

General
关掉两个mania diff的widescreen support
00:45:797 - 个人感觉这里开始的一段kiai没必要加 它和后面两个相同旋律的kiai段的强弱还是有一定差异 感觉这里并不算是高潮部分
3分半的图 Easy Normal都不给个break……其实是不太好的……也太勤劳

Easy
HP2? Easy用3感觉有点高
00:40:397 (5) - 故意没whistle的吗？因为我看你前面全部都加了 这里突然没有
01:09:797 (1,2) - 好像blanket不太好
01:14:597 (1) - 头上音效美丽
01:33:797 (1) - 掉了whistle
02:02:597 (1) - 这不finish的？
02:10:997 (5,6) - 都不加whistle吗 如果是觉得这里音乐变弱了我觉得可以只有6留空，5的那个钢琴音还是挺强的我觉得 可以whistle一下
02:30:797 (6) - 音效美丽
02:36:197 (1) - 鉴于你从这个滑条的尾巴上就开始改用clap了 所以考虑在02:36:197 (1,2) - 的头上都用normal sample？

Normal
01:07:397 (1) - 头上漏了whistle？因为我看你把sampleset都改成soft了但是什么都没加……
01:26:597 (1) - ^ 这里也没有 是因为音调低？
01:37:097 (2) - 挪到(472,152)会比较自然？
02:10:997 (3,4) - 嘛 这里和Easy的音效不太一样
02:28:997 (1) - 算不上是问题 或许和后面的2一样 用直滑条？
02:36:197 (1,3) - 和Easy一样， 加normal？

Camellia
00:34:097 (2,2) - 去掉whistle？感觉比一律都给加上表现力更强一些 像00:30:197 (1,2,3,4) - 这种强弱有区分的就挺好
00:42:347 (2,6) - 从前后的排版风格看来 我以为你会倾向于避免这种不完全的overlap
00:58:997 (1) - 不知道是不是有意的反正这个滑条看起来比别的1/2都要弯不少似的 看着有点不合群
01:16:097 (2,4) - 这两拍应该是不要whistle的吧……和前面相似的地方对比一下的话 比如01:06:197 (1,2) -
01:20:747 (2,4) - 这两拍没有whistle又觉得很奇怪 前面类似的地方都是全部都加了的 而且这两个钢琴音调很高呀 如果真要选择在01:20:597 (1,2,3,4) - 这种梗不全部whistle的话我觉得1和3不加2和4加会更合曲一些
01:23:597 (5,6) - 这里节奏突然慢下来 建议在5的地方加NC 类似01:42:797 (1) -
02:50:147 (2,3) - 我觉得像这里 2和3的尾巴上就可以不要whistle呀 和02:45:197 (3,4) - 差不多吧
03:16:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我打的时候觉得这里如果是个间距递增类型的梗会更爽 比较符合上升音阶的感觉吧
03:48:047 (8) - 感觉这种没什么音的可以把whistle去掉
03:50:447 (8,1) - blanket不太好的样子

就这些了
good luck

Zero__wind wrote:

NM from my queue

Red: unrankable issues
Purple: highly recommend to fix

General
关掉两个mania diff的widescreen support …… 這個我等等gder
00:45:797 - 个人感觉这里开始的一段kiai没必要加 它和后面两个相同旋律的kiai段的强弱还是有一定差异 感觉这里并不算是高潮部分……一二段是完全一樣的 = =
3分半的图 Easy Normal都不给个break……其实是不太好的……也太勤劳

Easy
HP2? Easy用3感觉有点高
00:40:397 (5) - 故意没whistle的吗？因为我看你前面全部都加了 这里突然没有……這裡是因為……複製最高難度的但是重音在藍線上面所以就沒了……加了個
01:09:797 (1,2) - 好像blanket不太好
01:14:597 (1) - 头上音效美丽……這裡是因為……漏了
01:33:797 (1) - 掉了whistle
02:02:597 (1) - 这不finish的？
02:10:997 (5,6) - 都不加whistle吗 如果是觉得这里音乐变弱了我觉得可以只有6留空，5的那个钢琴音还是挺强的我觉得 可以whistle一下
02:30:797 (6) - 音效美丽
02:36:197 (1) - 鉴于你从这个滑条的尾巴上就开始改用clap了 所以考虑在02:36:197 (1,2) - 的头上都用normal sample？

Normal
01:07:397 (1) - 头上漏了whistle？因为我看你把sampleset都改成soft了但是什么都没加……是的
01:26:597 (1) - ^ 这里也没有 是因为音调低？
01:37:097 (2) - 挪到(472,152)会比较自然？……我覺得很挫……
02:10:997 (3,4) - 嘛 这里和Easy的音效不太一样
02:28:997 (1) - 算不上是问题 或许和后面的2一样 用直滑条？
02:36:197 (1,3) - 和Easy一样， 加normal？

Camellia
00:34:097 (2,2) - 去掉whistle？感觉比一律都给加上表现力更强一些 像00:30:197 (1,2,3,4) - 这种强弱有区分的就挺好 …… 這裡應該都是一樣的，我基本是……右手部分都加whistle
00:42:347 (2,6) - 从前后的排版风格看来 我以为你会倾向于避免这种不完全的overlap …… 我也覺得 = =
00:58:997 (1) - 不知道是不是有意的反正这个滑条看起来比别的1/2都要弯不少似的 看着有点不合群
01:16:097 (2,4) - 这两拍应该是不要whistle的吧……和前面相似的地方对比一下的话 比如01:06:197 (1,2) -
01:20:747 (2,4) - 这两拍没有whistle又觉得很奇怪 前面类似的地方都是全部都加了的 而且这两个钢琴音调很高呀 如果真要选择在01:20:597 (1,2,3,4) - 这种梗不全部whistle的话我觉得1和3不加2和4加会更合曲一些
01:23:597 (5,6) - 这里节奏突然慢下来 建议在5的地方加NC 类似01:42:797 (1) - ……這個也是……不知為何漏了
02:50:147 (2,3) - 我觉得像这里 2和3的尾巴上就可以不要whistle呀 和02:45:197 (3,4) - 差不多吧
03:16:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我打的时候觉得这里如果是个间距递增类型的梗会更爽 比较符合上升音阶的感觉吧……有點麻煩，我想想
03:48:047 (8) - 感觉这种没什么音的可以把whistle去掉
03:50:447 (8,1) - blanket不太好的样子

就这些了
good luck

no replay = fixxxxx

thx very much

不请自来。。只是看看水仙姥爷最近在做什么新图（）
玩下来感觉00:55:097 (2) 这个note有点多余。。

Colourful wrote:

不请自来。。只是看看水仙姥爷最近在做什么新图（）

xxx

玩下来感觉00:55:097 (2) 这个note有点多余。。

感覺空超過1/2會有點影響連貫……而且這邊是有個音的Orz，其他類似01:04:697 (2) - 都有加圈不過低難度沒有

Hello Narcissu and star
Mod for mania mode here :3

[CS'Normal]
01:03:197 - add note here? you also add for crash at 02:00:797 -
01:05:747 (65747|3,65897|2,66047|1) - wrong snapped? i'm quite sure this is 1/12 below.. at 01:05:697 - 01:05:847 - 01:05:997 - i'm not really sure if the simplification is allowed here.
01:21:797 - Just my thinking a bit, but this is maybe a bit too taxing for left hand bcause of 01:19:997 (79997|0,79997|1,80597|1,80897|0,81797|0,82097|1,82397|0) - , maybe you could make it like: http://puu.sh/qlR7Y/3a817a08f1.png
02:10:397 (130397|1,130697|2,130997|3) - Ctrl+H here? for the pitch and better flow
02:14:897 - http://puu.sh/qlRWm/2c4077fb60.png well my suggestion, it should give more variation and flow here.
02:25:697 (145697|1,146297|2) - Ctrl+G this? to avoid a bit of 02:25:097 (145097|1,145397|0,145697|1,145997|0) -
02:29:597 (149597|2,149897|3) - also Ctrl+G D:
03:38:147 - don't ignore this D:
03:40:697 - hmm is this intentionally ignored to follow piano?
03:49:847 (229847|2,229997|1,230147|0) - well, i know you want to make constant stair here, but i think you can make this col 1-3-2 here. a bit mirroring 03:49:397 (229397|2,229547|1,229697|3) - ,should be flow better :3

[CS' Hard]
00:33:797 (33797|0,34097|0) - don't jack will be better bcause of pitch here, try: http://puu.sh/qlT0a/bd76fe59ea.png
00:44:897 (44897|2,45197|2,45497|2,46097|2,46397|2,46997|2,47297|2,47597|2) - aaaa please avoid ;w;
01:02:147 - i feel there's still sound of second piano sound that you follow here, connect the pattern maybe?
01:03:647 (63647|2,63797|3) - you can jack this since the secondary piano here actually same pitch.
01:24:947 (84947|2,85097|0,85247|1) - I'm quite sure you follow piano here right? if then, the snap must be at 1/6 below, mainly at 01:24:897 - 01:25:047 - 01:25:197 - (the current snap wrong i think)
02:10:547 - i think this can be change a bit so this won't be too left handed, bcause there's already 02:09:197 (129197|0,129197|1,129497|0,129497|1,129797|1,129797|0) - to begin with, how about try: http://puu.sh/qlYS8/a7625f55d4.png
02:14:147 (134147|1) - move to 1 here?
02:19:397 (139397|0) - you can turn this to LN imo,you did the same to 02:21:497 (141497|3) - , try: http://puu.sh/qlYYk/526583523c.png
03:48:197 (228197|1) - move to 4 here, i feel empty on right column here.
03:57:797 - awww this is the one that buttseck my 100% acc so hard D: maybe you can try this? http://puu.sh/qlZpD/e395fa2

Well, Nice song nice map here , great job
Good luck :3

DixonBlackwing wrote:

Hello Narcissu and star
Mod for mania mode here :3

[CS'Normal]
01:03:197 - add note here? you also add for crash at 02:00:797 -
01:05:747 (65747|3,65897|2,66047|1) - wrong snapped? i'm quite sure this is 1/12 below.. at 01:05:697 - 01:05:847 - 01:05:997 - i'm not really sure if the simplification is allowed here.
01:21:797 - Just my thinking a bit, but this is maybe a bit too taxing for left hand bcause of 01:19:997 (79997|0,79997|1,80597|1,80897|0,81797|0,82097|1,82397|0) - , maybe you could make it like: http://puu.sh/qlR7Y/3a817a08f1.png
02:10:397 (130397|1,130697|2,130997|3) - Ctrl+H here? for the pitch and better flow
02:14:897 - http://puu.sh/qlRWm/2c4077fb60.png well my suggestion, it should give more variation and flow here. i think is fine here
02:25:697 (145697|1,146297|2) - Ctrl+G this? to avoid a bit of 02:25:097 (145097|1,145397|0,145697|1,145997|0) -
02:29:597 (149597|2,149897|3) - also Ctrl+G D: it flow nicely here, i think is fine
03:38:147 - don't ignore this D:
03:40:697 - hmm is this intentionally ignored to follow piano?
03:49:847 (229847|2,229997|1,230147|0) - well, i know you want to make constant stair here, but i think you can make this col 1-3-2 here. a bit mirroring 03:49:397 (229397|2,229547|1,229697|3) - ,should be flow better :3

[CS' Hard]
00:33:797 (33797|0,34097|0) - don't jack will be better bcause of pitch here, try: http://puu.sh/qlT0a/bd76fe59ea.png
00:44:897 (44897|2,45197|2,45497|2,46097|2,46397|2,46997|2,47297|2,47597|2) - aaaa please avoid ;w; it should'nt be a problem here since it flow nicely with the sound variation
01:02:147 - i feel there's still sound of second piano sound that you follow here, connect the pattern maybe? not really clear there so i guess can ignore that
01:03:647 (63647|2,63797|3) - you can jack this since the secondary piano here actually same pitch. hmm, i don;t think is the same ;w;
01:24:947 (84947|2,85097|0,85247|1) - I'm quite sure you follow piano here right? if then, the snap must be at 1/6 below, mainly at 01:24:897 - 01:25:047 - 01:25:197 - (the current snap wrong i think)
02:10:547 - i think this can be change a bit so this won't be too left handed, bcause there's already 02:09:197 (129197|0,129197|1,129497|0,129497|1,129797|1,129797|0) - to begin with, how about try: http://puu.sh/qlYS8/a7625f55d4.png
02:14:147 (134147|1) - move to 1 here?
02:19:397 (139397|0) - you can turn this to LN imo,you did the same to 02:21:497 (141497|3) - , try: http://puu.sh/qlYYk/526583523c.png
03:48:197 (228197|1) - move to 4 here, i feel empty on right column here.
03:57:797 - awww this is the one that buttseck my 100% acc so hard D: maybe you can try this? http://puu.sh/qlZpD/e395fa2 rip puush

Well, Nice song nice map here , great job thanks! nice mod!
Good luck :3

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我还不知道little的gd会怎么样，如果我自己的gd太难的话，我就会把有的1/4去掉.

can i copy your hitsounds =w=？？

我覺得只會太簡單lol

因為之後更新了mp3和音效文件，我幫你改了timing（雖然我不是很確定）和tag（我一開始寫了moe little moe）也按照我的難度加了音效，總之更新一下

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應該是……我不知道little的gd会怎么样……

不请自来，争取明后两天内摸掉迟到了两天。。。
一晚上上来连续刚了3pc的Camellia，3pc全部fail在了3分20秒后某处，手已经爆炸了。。。



Nightcore看起来似乎是一样的，就懒得细看了。


E和N不摸。这首似乎已经做了好久了。每次上线来看到水仙上线，基本都在搞这个。早日起飞咯。

Colourful wrote:

不请自来。。只是看看水仙姥爷最近在做什么新图（）

xxx

玩下来感觉00:55:097 (2) 这个note有点多余。。

ren?????????