1. apple's Hard (2.96 stars, 542 notes)
2. Camellia (5.11 stars, 743 notes)
3. CS' Hard - 4Key (2.5 stars, 1568 notes)
4. CS' Normal - 4Key (1.58 stars, 911 notes)
5. Easy (1.33 stars, 213 notes)
6. Little's Insane (4.3 stars, 696 notes)
7. Normal (2.21 stars, 363 notes)

SinnPacked wrote:

This map was a lot of fun to play.

[Camellia]

00:29:510 - Seems to be missing a hit circle ……e …… without 1/8 imo

00:38:285 - This hitcircle is silent

00:45:785 - I'd consider a repeated slider

00:53:435 - This hitcircle is also silent

01:00:785 - IMO doubles would be appropriate for this section

01:43:385 - Another good place for a repeated slider

01:47:585 - I feel like I should be hitting something on this upbeat ……replace …… i add click here 03:25:985 - , to increasing ?

02:50:135 (2,3) - This double is silent

Great work!

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hii there~

CS req Here

4k=1~4

Mania Mod here

• [CSNM]

1. 00:02:972 - add SV 1.25x? so noob not suprise since at 00:26:597 - being fast ''w')b yea good idea, added lol
2. 00:33:047 - add at 2? piano. as u mapped at 00:36:947 (36947|1,37097|2,37247|3,37397|0) - :3 here is 1/6 piano sound so i thought it may be a little bit forcing for NM diff
3. 01:03:797 (63797|1,64097|2) - change to 1/2s LN like as 01:02:597 (62597|0,62897|3,63197|0,63497|3) - cool
4. 01:11:447 - add in 3? like before, these are 1/6 piano sound so i decide to ignore this one xD
5. 01:15:347 - 01:15:647 - add note like as 00:36:947 (36947|1,37097|2,37247|3,37397|0) - ok i added on other side too
6. 01:23:297 (83297|2) - delete? no piano like 01:21:797 (81797|0,82097|1,82397|2,82697|3,82997|1) - feel empty to leave the kick note here, so i keep it but i used a LN to empyhsize the last piano sound better
7. 01:34:547 - 01:34:847 - add same as before ok
8. 01:56:747 - add piano? would prefer to catch those louder pitch piano sound here,
9. 01:59:297 (119297|2,119597|3) - delete? no piano deleted the red tick note but the white tick have piano sound here
10. 02:16:397 - 02:17:597 - 02:18:797 - etc add note for clap sound? like this 02:19:997 (139997|1,139997|0,141197|1,141197|3) - the drum sound are soft unlike start 02:31:397 - then i would use double for it, is good for build up pattern here
    
    [CSHD]
11. 00:46:997 (46997|3,46997|2) - 00:49:397 (49397|3,49397|2) - 00:56:597 (56597|1,56597|0) - 00:58:997 (58997|1,58997|0) - etc, delete one note? like this 00:51:797 (51797|2) - ? since no drum there? just kick only i know but it just feel a little special there for double, is like emphysize the piano sound here
12. 01:51:497 (111497|1) - LN star here 01:51:197 (111197|1) - ? pretty sure it started at the red tick line
13. 02:02:897 (122897|3,123047|2,123497|1,123647|2,124097|3,124247|2) - etc, idk why there just using single note while 02:04:697 (124697|0,124697|3,124847|2,124847|1) - using double note :3 yea you are right but it just feel too full here and i wanted to give some space for single stream here instead jumpstream till the end
14. 03:07:397 - ~03:08:297 - i think each blue line have sound too like as 03:08:447 (188447|2,188747|2,189047|2,189347|2,189647|1) - some are pretty noticeable like u mention that yea, but some are not too obvious, would prefer to add note to those much noticeable piano sound here

Goodluck 'w')b

• 
  Easy
  
  01:28:997 (1) - Maybe change to shorter slider + 1 circle. Looks better IMO.
  01:50:597 (3) - Same, but not as necessary.

• 
  Normal
  
  01:16:997 (1) - Piano plays right in the middle. Sounds weird.
  03:16:997 (1) - Red slider point feels somewhat misplaced. Straight or curved slider would suit better IMO.

• 
  Camellia
  
  00:28:997 (1,2) - These 2 should look the same. First one with red slider point doesn't really fit.
  00:58:396 (3,4) - You did it here tho, lol.
  02:50:147 (2,3,4) - The triple kinda feels forced. Consider replacing it(?).
  03:18:797 (3,4,5) - Make triple into double? Piano seems to be playing that.
  03:21:197 (1,2,3,4) - Making these jumps more like a cross would increase readability. I'm saying this 'cause these broke my sightread FC (fml) :c
  03:55:397 (1,2,3,4) - Sliders seem unfitting. Might just be me tho.

Ikaros wrote:

Just a random mod passing by.

Can't really say much to Easy/Normal but i'll try.

• 
  Easy
  
  01:28:997 (1) - Maybe change to shorter slider + 1 circle. Looks better IMO.……i think skip some paino better …… if not it's have 1/1 * ∞ ……
  01:50:597 (3) - Same, but not as necessary.

• 
  Normal
  
  01:16:997 (1) - Piano plays right in the middle. Sounds weird.……same as easy diff
  03:16:997 (1) - Red slider point feels somewhat misplaced. Straight or curved slider would suit better IMO. …… ok

• 
  Camellia
  
  00:28:997 (1,2) - These 2 should look the same. First one with red slider point doesn't really fit.
  00:58:396 (3,4) - You did it here tho, lol.
  02:50:147 (2,3,4) - The triple kinda feels forced. Consider replacing it(?). …… deleted
  03:18:797 (3,4,5) - Make triple into double? Piano seems to be playing that.……paino is triple ?
  03:21:197 (1,2,3,4) - Making these jumps more like a cross would increase readability. I'm saying this 'cause these broke my sightread FC (fml) :c……cross a bit …… hard to layout
  03:55:397 (1,2,3,4) - Sliders seem unfitting. Might just be me tho.……

Hope it was helpful. If not, i'll stop modding forever. Camellia was really fun to play.

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120,48,129797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,143,130397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,165,130997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,84,131597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
350,31,132197,2,0,P|393:29|438:46,1,80

Urushi38 wrote:

[Cammelia]
01:14:297 (4,5) - Add NC on (4)? really hard to read
01:33:497 (4,5) - ^
01:42:797 (5,6) - ^

02:01:397 (1) - ctrl+G? …… look like same ……

03:51:197 (3,4) - …… all good follow a bit ordinary ……
I prefer this

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[normal]

02:19:997 (2) - use (1) again?

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03:26:597 (1) - put 115,208 stackstackstack
03:39:497 (4) - put 318,79　^

[Easy]
02:09:797 (3,4,5,6,1) - This pattern looks too hard for easy diff because its shape angle.
How about this. …… i use it many times and other part hard than it' …… i think it's ok

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120,48,129797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,143,130397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,165,130997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,84,131597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
350,31,132197,2,0,P|393:29|438:46,1,80

nice map
good luck

Zero__wind wrote:

NM from my queue

Red: unrankable issues
Purple: highly recommend to fix

General
关掉两个mania diff的widescreen support …… 這個我等等gder
00:45:797 - 个人感觉这里开始的一段kiai没必要加 它和后面两个相同旋律的kiai段的强弱还是有一定差异 感觉这里并不算是高潮部分……一二段是完全一樣的 = =
3分半的图 Easy Normal都不给个break……其实是不太好的……也太勤劳

Easy
HP2? Easy用3感觉有点高
00:40:397 (5) - 故意没whistle的吗？因为我看你前面全部都加了 这里突然没有……這裡是因為……複製最高難度的但是重音在藍線上面所以就沒了……加了個
01:09:797 (1,2) - 好像blanket不太好
01:14:597 (1) - 头上音效美丽……這裡是因為……漏了
01:33:797 (1) - 掉了whistle
02:02:597 (1) - 这不finish的？
02:10:997 (5,6) - 都不加whistle吗 如果是觉得这里音乐变弱了我觉得可以只有6留空，5的那个钢琴音还是挺强的我觉得 可以whistle一下
02:30:797 (6) - 音效美丽
02:36:197 (1) - 鉴于你从这个滑条的尾巴上就开始改用clap了 所以考虑在02:36:197 (1,2) - 的头上都用normal sample？

Normal
01:07:397 (1) - 头上漏了whistle？因为我看你把sampleset都改成soft了但是什么都没加……是的
01:26:597 (1) - ^ 这里也没有 是因为音调低？
01:37:097 (2) - 挪到(472,152)会比较自然？……我覺得很挫……
02:10:997 (3,4) - 嘛 这里和Easy的音效不太一样
02:28:997 (1) - 算不上是问题 或许和后面的2一样 用直滑条？
02:36:197 (1,3) - 和Easy一样， 加normal？

Camellia
00:34:097 (2,2) - 去掉whistle？感觉比一律都给加上表现力更强一些 像00:30:197 (1,2,3,4) - 这种强弱有区分的就挺好 …… 這裡應該都是一樣的，我基本是……右手部分都加whistle
00:42:347 (2,6) - 从前后的排版风格看来 我以为你会倾向于避免这种不完全的overlap …… 我也覺得 = =
00:58:997 (1) - 不知道是不是有意的反正这个滑条看起来比别的1/2都要弯不少似的 看着有点不合群
01:16:097 (2,4) - 这两拍应该是不要whistle的吧……和前面相似的地方对比一下的话 比如01:06:197 (1,2) -
01:20:747 (2,4) - 这两拍没有whistle又觉得很奇怪 前面类似的地方都是全部都加了的 而且这两个钢琴音调很高呀 如果真要选择在01:20:597 (1,2,3,4) - 这种梗不全部whistle的话我觉得1和3不加2和4加会更合曲一些
01:23:597 (5,6) - 这里节奏突然慢下来 建议在5的地方加NC 类似01:42:797 (1) - ……這個也是……不知為何漏了
02:50:147 (2,3) - 我觉得像这里 2和3的尾巴上就可以不要whistle呀 和02:45:197 (3,4) - 差不多吧
03:16:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我打的时候觉得这里如果是个间距递增类型的梗会更爽 比较符合上升音阶的感觉吧……有點麻煩，我想想
03:48:047 (8) - 感觉这种没什么音的可以把whistle去掉
03:50:447 (8,1) - blanket不太好的样子

就这些了
good luck

Colourful wrote:

不请自来。。只是看看水仙姥爷最近在做什么新图（）

xxx

玩下来感觉00:55:097 (2) 这个note有点多余。。