Hi~ For M4M
Really nice map
Well, that's all from me~
Good Luck!
- Eternal Sleep
- 00:36:741 (3,4) - These seem a little squished, so maybe spread them apart a little
- 00:42:195 (1) - I think it would look and play better if it was a curve, so it led into the next few circles like this
- 00:54:195 (3,4) - Same as before (a little squished)
- 01:02:922 (3,4,1) - It think it would be better if you made these equal distances apart so it would play better (just because of how the pattern goes)
- 01:27:741 (1) - I think it should be a circle instead, because there's no real sound (?) on the blue tick
- 02:05:104 (1) - Make the top part of this a little more circular like this
- 02:22:559 (1) - Make this curves in this a little less curved will make it a little better looking (picture)
- 02:35:650 (1) - Remove NC
- 03:11:650 (2) - Maybe you could try removing the finish at the start of this slider so it could mirror the quiet part before the next section
- 03:34:559 (1) - This is a little uneven (one side is longer than the other), but its not really noticeable so you could probably leave it alone if you want
- 03:41:650 (2) - You can hear beats and sounds within this slider, so maybe try this rhythm (from 03:41:650 to 03:43:013 )
- 04:12:741 (5) - NC maybe?
- 04:19:559 (2,3,4) - This part kinda looks and plays a little weird, maybe try something like this
- 04:45:468 (3) - on this part maybe you could ctrl g the (3), and have (4) be a small jump like you've been doing in the rest of the map
- 04:46:559 (1) - If you do the last suggestion, also move the red tick so the angle is down, not up on this slider
Really nice map
Well, that's all from me~
Good Luck!