[General]
the right channel for soft-hitnormal was very quiet compared to the left, i boosted the volume a bit for you http://puu.sh/oTn1e.wav
[Ataraxia's Easy]
00:45:530 (1,2,3) - arrangement can be cleaner here
00:57:333 (1) - remove NC
01:24:546 - i would add a circle here to fill in the vocals
this diff needs hitsounding lol, you can just copy it over from the highest diff
[Normal]
00:21:923 (5) - NC
00:51:431 (2,3,4) - omg why is this not centered
01:24:874 (1,2) - this is a bit misleading, since the previous slow section has this spacing as 1/1 you might want to reduce it here so people don't misread the rhythm
if i were you i would have added some 1/2 rhythm in the kiai, since this difficulty still has a lot of room for increased difficulty and reducing the gap to hard
[Hard]
01:06:185 (4) - would have gone with an extra repeat here
01:18:644 (4) - this plays better if you used the same rhythm from 01:17:333 (1,2)
nothing much to say, but you NC way too frequently in this diff, it would be best if you NC every two measures and keep the current NC frequency only for the kiai sections
[Light Insane]
Try AR8.3, fits the tempo of this diff better imo
00:02:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - since the heavy beat is on 00:02:907, you could change up the pattern to start with a repeat slider and end with a stream: 00:20:612 (6) - missing NC
00:23:235 (7) - ^
00:37:661 (6) - ^
01:06:185 (4) - kiai sounds pretty hype here, so i wouldn't brush this off with just a repeat slider, a small stream feels much more impactful
01:19:628 (5) - NC
01:27:005 (1,2,3) - make these equal distance
[Insane]
00:23:890 (3,4) - a little more distance here will make this more comfortable to hit
00:51:759 (4,1) - symmetry seems a bit forced here, moving 00:51:759 (4) lower will result in much better flow
01:19:628 (6) - NC
01:24:874 (10) - ^
[Nanadaime Hokage]
00:10:120 (1) - hiding the repeat under the previous slider end might cause readability issues, suggest you remove the stacking
00:45:202 (1) - i would have personally gone with a slower sv to emphasize the pause here, possibly 0.6x (it is extra so some variety is cool, you could do this to Insane too if you wish)
00:55:530 (4,5) - maybe ctrl+g on this, the linear flow doesn't work very well here
01:21:595 (1) - NC is not really needed here since the previous combo was all circle
overall a solid set, just need to fix some things on the lower diffs before calling me back
the right channel for soft-hitnormal was very quiet compared to the left, i boosted the volume a bit for you http://puu.sh/oTn1e.wav
[Ataraxia's Easy]
00:45:530 (1,2,3) - arrangement can be cleaner here
00:57:333 (1) - remove NC
01:24:546 - i would add a circle here to fill in the vocals
this diff needs hitsounding lol, you can just copy it over from the highest diff
[Normal]
00:21:923 (5) - NC
00:51:431 (2,3,4) - omg why is this not centered
01:24:874 (1,2) - this is a bit misleading, since the previous slow section has this spacing as 1/1 you might want to reduce it here so people don't misread the rhythm
if i were you i would have added some 1/2 rhythm in the kiai, since this difficulty still has a lot of room for increased difficulty and reducing the gap to hard
[Hard]
01:06:185 (4) - would have gone with an extra repeat here
01:18:644 (4) - this plays better if you used the same rhythm from 01:17:333 (1,2)
nothing much to say, but you NC way too frequently in this diff, it would be best if you NC every two measures and keep the current NC frequency only for the kiai sections
[Light Insane]
Try AR8.3, fits the tempo of this diff better imo
00:02:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - since the heavy beat is on 00:02:907, you could change up the pattern to start with a repeat slider and end with a stream: 00:20:612 (6) - missing NC
00:23:235 (7) - ^
00:37:661 (6) - ^
01:06:185 (4) - kiai sounds pretty hype here, so i wouldn't brush this off with just a repeat slider, a small stream feels much more impactful
01:19:628 (5) - NC
01:27:005 (1,2,3) - make these equal distance
[Insane]
00:23:890 (3,4) - a little more distance here will make this more comfortable to hit
00:51:759 (4,1) - symmetry seems a bit forced here, moving 00:51:759 (4) lower will result in much better flow
01:19:628 (6) - NC
01:24:874 (10) - ^
[Nanadaime Hokage]
00:10:120 (1) - hiding the repeat under the previous slider end might cause readability issues, suggest you remove the stacking
00:45:202 (1) - i would have personally gone with a slower sv to emphasize the pause here, possibly 0.6x (it is extra so some variety is cool, you could do this to Insane too if you wish)
00:55:530 (4,5) - maybe ctrl+g on this, the linear flow doesn't work very well here
01:21:595 (1) - NC is not really needed here since the previous combo was all circle
overall a solid set, just need to fix some things on the lower diffs before calling me back