Because I said I would:
(this is my first time sorry)
00:20:868 (1) - put something here
00:25:142 (3) - again place something after here? the pause feels kind of awkward. maybe something like this http://puu.sh/fl08r/93cf99686c.jpg
00:55:229 (5,6,7,1) - have 5 blanket 1 better
02:05:607 (1,2) - I think at this point in the song the 1/6 section is still to faint too here (as it fades in). my suggestion is to remove the note after and extend the slider to the red tick. sounds and plays a lot better. also change the long slider after maybe? something like this http://puu.sh/fl30j/20565ab574.jpg plays/sounds a lot better in my opinion but ultimately it's up to you
02:09:096 (5) - repeat this slider once more
02:10:491 (1,2,3,4) - maybe just move these a little closer together? ._.
02:29:851 (1) - better blanket
02:40:142 (2) - move this down slightly to x:112 y:96. really picky change but I think it looks a little better
03:55:054 (8,1) - move 1 like this http://puu.sh/fl4Tn/8d150502f0.jpg. While it doesn't look as cool i think it plays better. With some readjustment you could have 03:55:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - go around the outside of 03:54:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
04:14:589 (8,1) - just make the above more like this one. the transition from 8 to 1 feels a lot smoother and less sudden (unless that was what you were going for)
04:11:189 (1) - keep this one the same combo as 04:10:840 (1,2,3,4) -
04:19:561 (1) - ctrl g.
04:22:351 (1) - ctrl g again. I know these are meant to be repeats but this feels better
Increase volume in the kiai time maybe. Also, any reason for OD 8.3 and HP 6.7?
Really cool map with some great ideas. Hope I could help ♥
(this is my first time sorry)
00:20:868 (1) - put something here
00:25:142 (3) - again place something after here? the pause feels kind of awkward. maybe something like this http://puu.sh/fl08r/93cf99686c.jpg
00:55:229 (5,6,7,1) - have 5 blanket 1 better
02:05:607 (1,2) - I think at this point in the song the 1/6 section is still to faint too here (as it fades in). my suggestion is to remove the note after and extend the slider to the red tick. sounds and plays a lot better. also change the long slider after maybe? something like this http://puu.sh/fl30j/20565ab574.jpg plays/sounds a lot better in my opinion but ultimately it's up to you
02:09:096 (5) - repeat this slider once more
02:10:491 (1,2,3,4) - maybe just move these a little closer together? ._.
02:29:851 (1) - better blanket
02:40:142 (2) - move this down slightly to x:112 y:96. really picky change but I think it looks a little better
03:55:054 (8,1) - move 1 like this http://puu.sh/fl4Tn/8d150502f0.jpg. While it doesn't look as cool i think it plays better. With some readjustment you could have 03:55:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - go around the outside of 03:54:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
04:14:589 (8,1) - just make the above more like this one. the transition from 8 to 1 feels a lot smoother and less sudden (unless that was what you were going for)
04:11:189 (1) - keep this one the same combo as 04:10:840 (1,2,3,4) -
04:19:561 (1) - ctrl g.
04:22:351 (1) - ctrl g again. I know these are meant to be repeats but this feels better
Increase volume in the kiai time maybe. Also, any reason for OD 8.3 and HP 6.7?
Really cool map with some great ideas. Hope I could help ♥