Xinely wrote:
find 2 more mods for Insane above (im not good for judging hard diffs)
hi, you posted in my queue and guess who's one of my favorite vocalists
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hint)
metadata:
http://primary-yuiko.com/8th_album/sweet's_holiday/add "meis clauson" to tags as he is the other memeber of primary
also "c81" would be nice as it was released there
you can also add some other things from the staff section of the album page to your tags if you want
"Sweet
’s Holiday" is wrong, it should be "Sweet
's Holiday" (yes they are different, look at the apostrophe)
it would also be great if you could link the album page in the description to support the artist!
general:
mp3 quality is rather poor at 128kbit, I could provide a better one, but yours is some cut version so gg
[sweet]
ar 9.3 is not needed here, it just feels too much for how simple the song and your patterns are, 9-9.2 are better suited
00:00:911 (2,3) - it feels like your spacing got messes up, 3 is way stronger, but you put a jump on 2 ??
well at least you do it consistently for the intro lol
00:09:244 (3) - why is such major sound stacked, 00:06:911 (4) - makes more sense // 00:14:411 (2,3) - too
similar for 00:23:911 (3,4) - , also inconsistent with similar ones like 00:29:244 (3,4,5) - where spacing makes more sense.
ranndomly stopping on rather strong sounds just feels weird
00:13:244 (4,5,6,1) - can you make those overlaps more even/consistent for visuals?
00:35:744 (2,3) - this one actually makes sense with the music since red tick is rather weak!
00:36:911 (2) - similar spacing as 00:31:578 (2) - would make sense since it's basically the same and rather strong // 00:51:078 (5) -
00:38:078 (1,3) - this looks so off and kills aesthetics, how about changing 1
http://i.imgur.com/iauHYb1.jpg00:39:911 (3,4) - more stacks that dont work for me. music is so consistent but you randomly stop and then go back to jumps ; /
01:00:244 (5) - small jump here like 01:00:911 (2) - fits the music much better // 01:02:911 (5) -
01:10:911 (5,2) - those might be okay with that spacing cause music is weaker
01:12:411 (6) - having such an obtuse pattern gives this not the emphasis it deserves. try to get some acute angle on this
01:14:744 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - praise 2016
same comments for last part as for the intro about stacks etc
01:29:411 (1) - why is this suddenly a huge jump, nothing in the music ipmplies such a drastic change
01:27:744 (2) - gradually decreasing sv and volume until the end would fir with the song fading out
[ex]
spacing of the intro for this diff makes more sense lol
00:07:244 (1,3,6) - same overlap for visuals, current looks just so random, like you ran out of spots to put the circle
00:15:244 (1,2,3) - the 1/2 sliders on the other diffs are the better option
00:17:078 (2,4) - could be cleaner like
http://i.imgur.com/kD6fRpj.jpg00:37:744 (4) - why is this suddenly stacked when it's so important ; / // 00:38:578 (2,3) -
00:48:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - would be nice to have some buildup in the jumps instead of starting that huge already. sth simple like moving 2 like this
http://i.imgur.com/k2yIy7X.jpg would work already
00:57:578 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,2,3,5) - this feels so messy with all the random overlaps
01:02:578 (3) - how about making it like
http://i.imgur.com/6pyDH12.jpg or
http://i.imgur.com/ljMA8EF.jpg palys similar and works much better with 1
01:03:244 (1,3) - could you not
http://i.imgur.com/Q80FIEg.jpg01:03:744 (3,4,5) - 1/4 and 1/2 spacing that look exactly the same gg
01:07:411 (1) - why no jump here like on the ones before, it's even stronger and start of the chorus, lowering spacing makes no sense here
01:07:744 (2) - should also have a jump then => how about sth like
http://i.imgur.com/vDHS5u8.jpg ?
01:10:578 (4,1) - can you make this cleaner? like
http://i.imgur.com/h2jsgC1.jpg (4 is not offscreen)
01:15:578 (2) - having way more spacing on this than 01:15:744 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - makes like no sense with the music
[insane]
literally same comments about stacks as higher diffs
00:14:411 (2,4,1,2,3,4) - like seen on higher diffs you like to overlap a lot, that is fine, but if you dont get some spacing strucutre etc behind them it just looks messy and random ; /
00:18:744 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - there are other parts of the screen you can also use lol
00:25:911 (7) - why not place it somewhere where it looks cleaner like
http://i.imgur.com/AxiRG8M.jpg or similar
01:03:578 (2,4) -
http://i.imgur.com/YIOxCpK.jpg this hurts
01:08:578 (1) - why such low spacing on this strong sound o:
01:23:744 (2,3,4,5) - pls dont put slowdowns like this on such obtuse angles, it's a pain to snap and requires lots of momentum control
i disagreee with some spacing choices, but my main concern are rather messy visuals (mostly the overlaps with lacking structure) and some random stacks.
even though judging from what's getting qualified daily that probably doesn't matter for ranking
but it matters if you want to make good things and not just acceptable ones!
gl
I didn't even like the song that much when I stzarted modding this, even though it's yuiko. but I'm starting to feel like mapping a full version of this now lol