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"I only need mod on Insane, Extra, and Sweet Neko </3" queue
hello
insane
- 00:17:411 - is quite strong because of the drum+the other sound. Sooo increase the ds here for some emphasis would be a good idea. (like you already did here 00:20:078 - or here 00:18:828 - or here 00:22:744 - or here 00:25:411 (4) - .... ) example what you could do without changin too much http://puu.sh/pX8On/77b67da474.jpg
- 00:25:911 (7) - same goes for this one. Doing this is kinda sweet http://puu.sh/pX8W4/63f3d619cc.jpg as you kinda did here 00:49:411 (5,6,7,1) -
- 00:41:911 (4) - hidden circle kinda surprised me here, especially in combination with the "huge" jumps. If you feel the same you could http://puu.sh/pX943/07e9dfcdba.jpg
- 00:50:411 (3,4,5,6,7) - could deform this to a beautiful hexagon tho http://puu.sh/pX9h7/6f74c41e53.jpg
- what i also would like to adress is how you often tend to place objects extremly close side by side like 01:03:244 (1,2,3,4) - which could easily be changed to smth llike http://puu.sh/pX9wz/74b1b6302c.jpg. Makes the diff even more beautiful tbh B-)
extra
- the last point also applies to the extra eg 00:32:744 (1,2,3,4,5) -
- 00:48:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - personally i would reduce the spacing here slightly even though the focal is stronger and leave the huge jumps for the kiai
- 00:55:244 (1) - might be because im crazy but it looks kinda like 00:54:078 (1) - so i figured it would be as fast as that slider. Picking an other form to emphasize the slowdown would probably be the best (goes great with the prev slider http://puu.sh/pXaew/6bb2427079.jpg)
neko
i dislike how 01:14:744 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - and01:04:078 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - are like 5x harder than the rest of the map but no one really cares bout stuff like this and it should be fine to leave it as it is
however i would recommend adding jumps here 01:12:078 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 01:12:078 (4,6) - should definitly be more emphasized :<
also
places you should consider adding finishes: 00:57:911 - 00:59:411 (1) - 01:02:578 - 01:03:244 - 01:04:078 - 01:04:744 - 01:10:078 - 01:13:244 - 01:13:911 - 01:15:078 - 01:15:411 - 01:16:578 - 01:18:078 - 01:21:911 - 01:22:578 - 01:22:911 - 01:23:411 - and so on, its quite obv xx
places you should consider removing finishes: 01:10:244 -
nice diffs, pretty much good to go imo
good luck
!
"I only need mod on Insane, Extra, and Sweet Neko </3" queue
hello
insane
- 00:17:411 - is quite strong because of the drum+the other sound. Sooo increase the ds here for some emphasis would be a good idea. (like you already did here 00:20:078 - or here 00:18:828 - or here 00:22:744 - or here 00:25:411 (4) - .... ) example what you could do without changin too much http://puu.sh/pX8On/77b67da474.jpg
- 00:25:911 (7) - same goes for this one. Doing this is kinda sweet http://puu.sh/pX8W4/63f3d619cc.jpg as you kinda did here 00:49:411 (5,6,7,1) -
- 00:41:911 (4) - hidden circle kinda surprised me here, especially in combination with the "huge" jumps. If you feel the same you could http://puu.sh/pX943/07e9dfcdba.jpg
- 00:50:411 (3,4,5,6,7) - could deform this to a beautiful hexagon tho http://puu.sh/pX9h7/6f74c41e53.jpg
- what i also would like to adress is how you often tend to place objects extremly close side by side like 01:03:244 (1,2,3,4) - which could easily be changed to smth llike http://puu.sh/pX9wz/74b1b6302c.jpg. Makes the diff even more beautiful tbh B-)
extra
- the last point also applies to the extra eg 00:32:744 (1,2,3,4,5) -
- 00:48:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - personally i would reduce the spacing here slightly even though the focal is stronger and leave the huge jumps for the kiai
- 00:55:244 (1) - might be because im crazy but it looks kinda like 00:54:078 (1) - so i figured it would be as fast as that slider. Picking an other form to emphasize the slowdown would probably be the best (goes great with the prev slider http://puu.sh/pXaew/6bb2427079.jpg)
neko
i dislike how 01:14:744 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - and01:04:078 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - are like 5x harder than the rest of the map but no one really cares bout stuff like this and it should be fine to leave it as it is
however i would recommend adding jumps here 01:12:078 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 01:12:078 (4,6) - should definitly be more emphasized :<
also
places you should consider adding finishes: 00:57:911 - 00:59:411 (1) - 01:02:578 - 01:03:244 - 01:04:078 - 01:04:744 - 01:10:078 - 01:13:244 - 01:13:911 - 01:15:078 - 01:15:411 - 01:16:578 - 01:18:078 - 01:21:911 - 01:22:578 - 01:22:911 - 01:23:411 - and so on, its quite obv xx
places you should consider removing finishes: 01:10:244 -
nice diffs, pretty much good to go imo
good luck