Garven wrote:

Hey again, wanhyrzh~

[Skin]
spinner-circle should have a center point in the middle like in the default skin. This way people can know where to aim their spinning at. That felt redundant, but yeah. added~
Sectionpass looks really low quality due to the style of the picture. I'd suggest you find something that fits better with the rest of the images that you have used. I find another

[Easy]
00:46:129 (3) - May be a bit confusing as to when this slider is going to end for newer players. Maybe try some different configuration? k
01:11:295 - Kind of felt like a weird spot for a fountain, but whatever. I guess you use them throughout, so eh. Ignore this I guess, hehe.yeah throw out XD
01:48:962 (1) - Really soon after a spinner for an easy. Maybe end the spinner at 01:48:129? k
01:44:129 (1) - This would be a good spot for kiai if you choose to use it. Oh I don't like KIAI in this map~sorry;_;
02:20:962 - I'm not a fan of .5 sections in the easiest difficulty of a map set.
02:20:962 (1,2) - And due to that .5 section, this felt awkward to play visually, though after listening to it a couple times I can see what you're going for. It just was visually deceptive due to the slow down.I make the slider end at 2
03:03:462 (1) - Soon after a spinner again. Maybe end the spinner at 03:02:129?I end it at 03:02:629
03:29:629 (3,4) - These are sticking into the HP a little bit. Maybe lower the entire combo by one grid? Don't worry about distance snap.fixed
Really nice easy difficulty!

[Shuna's Normal]
In general, it felt really fast-paced for a normal.
There were a few slider ends that weren't quite stacked perfectly, but whatever. They look fine.

[Hard]
01:41:462 (1,2) - Maybe space these out a bit further? I keep thinking these'll be full speed k
02:10:129 (1) - End this spinner at 02:11:462k
02:30:962 (2) - The break after this feels way too son after the last break. It kind of kills the pacing of the map. I'd map through the guitar solo then break during the slow part you mapped... but eh. You've already done it, hehe. Just my opinion here.ok I'll think about it
03:05:962 (1) - This combo ran pretty long. I'd suggest splitting it up.I just want to mke it feels like a whole part~
Wow, kiai spam at the end there, haha.

Really nice set you have here, wanh!

banvi wrote:

Oh , I like this song~ :3
Nice skin & BG. Map is fine for me : )

General
Please add Vocaloid in Tags. (Because "Vocaloid2" is not search "Vocaloid")
Composer name is ok.

All diff
How do you add Kiai at chorus of the song???
(00:36:129 ~ 00:36:129 , 01:50:129 ~ 02:11:462 , 03:11:462 ~ 03:32:795)
You can ignore this suggestion.

Good Luck

AeoNRivaS wrote:

Yay! Mod:
[Hard]:
repeat: All those sliders with a curve and a sharp turn, really bug me. ;_;

all suggestions. my modding is never not a suggestion (if that makes sense).

Rukarioman wrote:

SB:
Why not SB the names on a certain time in the beginning like you did with the guest diffs? I think it would be better to be consistent.

Easy:
00:36:462 (3) - maybe add another repeat? no for I follow the song~
00:47:462 (5) - one grid down and left OK
02:06:962 (2) - the middle sliderpoint two ticks up 1 tick up is better imo


Man I really like your maps^^ Thank you~
Star~

blissfulyoshi wrote:

I am a little worried about the sb load shooting above 5x at 02:46:129, so if you can make the sb01 and sb04 fade in and fade out time overlap a little less, it would be nice, but optimizing the code cases the sb to screw up, don't bother. yeah I know this...I hate the newly adding SB LOAD ;_; anyway I will try to fix this~

Easy:
Timing section mod: (I really wish I knew about that trick with kiai timing earlier)
02:31:629 - unneeded timing section, please remove I move it back to 02:31:462~
Hard:

Hard:
Normal mod:
03:07:462 (7) - this slider would look more aesthetically pleasing if the curve was sharper k

Timing section mod:
00:45:962 - unneeded timing section, please removek
03:11:462 - a quarter snap before this timing section add a timing section with the same hitsound volume and type, but no kiaik

Gladi's Insane:
As other people have said, please make the preview time the same as the other diffs.k
Timing section mod:
01:23:462 - move back a quarter snap for the volume changek

Very nice mapset. Besides Shuna's diff, I have very few things to complain about. Star.

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Shuna]
01:10:962 (4) - Stack it with 01:09:962 (2).Looks better to me. k
01:38:796 (1,2) - 1 grid left both.k
03:04:795 (2) - 1 right to make it simmetrical.k

All I can find,great job!
Star~

Doomsday wrote:

Hi

1. I got offset: 790 (A little earlier than yours) I keep my 796~
2. For vocaloid songs, people usually put "Vocaloid" in the source. "PolyphonicBranch" shoul be in the tags, and "Vocaloid" should be in the sourcesame as CDFA said

[EASY]

Looks nice enough. More interesting than most Easy difficulties I find Thank you~

[SHUNA'S NORMAL]

00:24:796 to 00:32:129 - You could probably map to the lyrics more here. Sticking to constant 1/4's like you did doesn't work well in this case.I leave this to Arusha

Apart from that, Nice map

[HARD]

Seems clean. I even kinda liked what you did at 00:46:129, with the slow sliders. I don't usually like things like that. It does get much harder suddenly at the end though, which feels odd, but apart from that, nice.Thank you~~

[GLADI'S INSANE] (Gladinsane c:)I leave this to Gladi...

Fun stuff, mostly.

00:44:962 (3) - Eww. I don't see where this 0.5xBPM slider fits in. I actually missed on my run since I had no idea it was a slow slider. Remove it?
01:43:629 (3) - ^
02:45:296 (7,1,2) - I can live with the massive deathstreams, but this overlap threw me off completely. Could you move it so you can see the (2) note at least?

A pretty nice map you have here. It isn't groundbreaking, but it's fairly interesting, well balanced, and pretty fun to boot, which is all good

Starred

TheVileOne wrote:

Easy

00:51:462 (2,3,4,5) - Too slow IMO.for the new players XD

01:09:629 (1) - Remove new combo?k

Shuna's Normal

Fine

Hard

00:41:462 (1,2) - Line up better?k

03:03:462 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - I find this awkward to hit. It might be because my cursor is glitched.

Gladi's InsaneI leave this to Gladi

00:34:462 (7) - Move right and up 1 unit? (Fixes spacing and aligns note with 00:34:795 (1) - )

01:48:018 (4,5,6,7,8) - I don't even have to play this to know it will play awkward. Of course I haven't got a good idea what pros consider "awkward".

02:49:986 - Add note?

Sorry I couldn't help very much on this difficulty.


It's a well rounded beatmap. Not exactly my cup of tea, but good. It deserves a star.

Krisom wrote:

General-
I find the sliderball kinda disturbing and not fitting with the rest of the skin/SB :< I mean, the Skin/SB is all dark and serious, and the sliderball is a spinning chibi len sayin like "YAY! I like bananas!!". Same goes for the warningarrow and sectionpass/sectionfail.I know what you mean but I will keep them until I find better ones

Easy-
01:50:129 (2) - Add a finish at the startk
03:08:629 (4) - Consider moving this 1/2 later, its much more intuitive for the newbies this way. I think it's OK~
Well, this is technically well made, but even though the star rating is 1.71, I find that you used way too many 1/2 notes :< yeah due to the song...I'm a nood mapper ;_;

Shuna's-
00:19:462 (1,2,3,4) - Clap (2) and (4) and unclap (1)'s and (3)'s endk
00:51:462 (1) - Finish at the start? k
03:11:462 (1) - ^?k
This diff is so beautiful

Hard-
PLEASE AVOID ABUSING THE FOUNTAINS AT THE END!!! It takes away all the seriousness of the SB (Also, the last fountain should be at 03:44:962, just leave that one if you want fountains)OK delete two of them
Also, is there a reason on why this diff uses the soft custom hitsounds and the others don't? Please hitsound all your (aka: just Easy and Hard, as the guest diffs can do what they want) diffs in a similar way to add quality to the mapset.Easy have much less notes, and doesn't follow the song, so normal hitsound is better imo. But when it comes to Hard, since it follows the song and most of the song lyrics are on the red tick, so I think soft hitsound for the two parts are OK

Gladi's-
I don't see anything wrong here~

~Arusha did a great job here

GladiOol wrote:

TheVileOne wrote:

00:34:462 (7) - Move right and up 1 unit? (Fixes spacing and aligns note with 00:34:795 (1)

I did the same here 01:33:962 (7), so why not post about that then too x)
Always keep your eyes open for ze copy pasta. But no, won't fix. I don't want to have perfectly alligned stuff, I like to have things random.

TheVileOne wrote:

01:48:018 (4,5,6,7,8) - I don't even have to play this to know it will play awkward. Of course I haven't got a good idea what pros consider "awkward".

True, fix'd.

TheVileOne wrote:

02:49:986 - Add note?

No.

~

Doomsday wrote:

00:44:962 (3) - Eww. I don't see where this 0.5xBPM slider fits in. I actually missed on my run since I had no idea it was a slow slider. Remove it?
01:43:629 (3) - ^

Yes~ fix'd. It even surprised me when I just played it. I fail~

Doomsday wrote:

02:45:296 (7,1,2) - I can live with the massive deathstreams, but this overlap threw me off completely. Could you move it so you can see the (2) note at least?

Nah, it's perfectly read-able in my opinion.


[attachment=0:f9c68]Len Kagamine - Kimi ni Sasagu Fantasia (wanhyrzh) [Gladi's Insane].osu[/attachment:f9c68]

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Easy]
00:03:129 - Why you have silenced tick notes in sliders? just because they don't fit the song imo
00:07:712 - ^
00:07:879 - ^
00:08:046 - ^
00:08:212 - ^
and many more, i think there is not point
00:34:795 - this slider is a little away from field, please fix that. I think it's OK when playing

[Normal]
00:56:129 - one grid left k
02:31:462 - 20 seconds break not rankable. OK we will think about it

[Hard]
03:43:629 - finish I think now it's OK
03:44:129 - ^
03:44:629 - ^

[Insane]
:3

Lizbeth wrote:

Gladi's Insane
Couldn't find mistakes, good job

Hard
all good just a suggestion
00:08:795 (1) - add a repeat, then 00:09:462 (2) - remove a repeat and move to next red tick, sounds better imo :3 yeah

Shuna's Normal
Nice diff <3 I enjoy it
suggestion: We'll think about them~
03:26:962 - add note
03:27:129 - ^

Easy
I find this diff a bit hard to follow when using red ticks (maybe is just me@.@) but technically is fine

star

Soaprman wrote:

General
poor background image... only there as a formality... living its life buried beneath storyboard... oh, the humanity! (not a complaint or anything, just an observation) so I make my Hard longer to make use of the BG...I use it just because it really fits the song's title imo. And I let it appear at the end, means a happy end XD

Any reason why the credits for Shuna's diff are on the lower right, and the rest on the upper right? Nothing wrong with this, just something I noticed. because Arusha's name is much longer and I think that position is better >_>

Gladi's InsaneOK I'll let Gladi know later~
00:50:796 (5,6,7) - space these a little closer together. I didn't have any idea from looking that they were so close on the timeline. They broke my combo and my heart. (normally I don't bother mentioning minor spacing things but you also just switched from 1/4 to 1/6 here so keeping spacing consistent is kind of important)
01:49:462 (5,6,7) - same here.

other difficulties
Don't remember anything tripping me up on these... good work!

These are nice maps. Well done, you guys.

fartownik wrote:

hi, here's what I found:

Add some kiai time? I see only some random kiai "flashes", but not the proper kiai time. It's not necessary, but it'd be nice to see some difference in gameplay in the final chorus. I just think that KIAI with such bright hitcircles will be a hell...

The SB load raises to 6,75 at 02:46. I know it was mentioned before, but I don't know if you tried to fix it. This thing is pretty annoying, and if you did your best, and it's still out of the limit, it'll be acceptable. Oh I have fixed since 9.8~You may download the old SB?
Refer to this thread.

The length is not consistent. It would be nice if you map all of the diffs into the end, like in Hard. OK I'll try this in my another diff~

[Easy]

02:58:129 (1) - I feel like you were too lazy to map this part properly. This spinner is out of place and sounds off. >_> I do as that in Gladi's diff~Now I trun down the volume to make it sound better~

[Hard]

00:13:629 - The end of the spinner should soft-whistle. Like in Easy. k
00:52:129 (7) - Add a Clap. k


[Gladi]

Awesome difficulty.

00:51:462 - The volume from here is too low, raise it to 60-70%. k
01:50:129 - ^ k
03:11:462 - ^ k
01:47:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - <3


Cool SB and really good mapset.
starred

NatsumeRin wrote:

recheck for Hard.

00:09:629 (1) - 感觉不需要new combo k
00:11:462 (1) - 晚1/2结束change to soft whistle
00:51:462 (5,6) - 考虑换slider，只是感觉这样会比较流畅k
00:52:796 (1,2) - ^k
01:00:962 (1,2) - 这里注意下，虽然你是压了版边，但是叠了几个后很可能会出去，谨慎为上k
01:04:796 (1,2,3,4,5) - 给个建议，2放在14的延长线上，用3代替原4，4代替原3，5仍然叠在4尾great!
02:31:462 (1) - 这里开始把音量升高点。+10%
03:06:629 (5) - 从这个尾开始的三个三连1/2，都用clap-clap-normal great
03:08:796 (11) - 这个尾开始，用clap-clap-normal-clap-clap-clapRin大的音效好精致><
03:26:962 (1) & 03:28:296 (1) - 建议维持同一风格来放这两组。。。k

LesTrucsRose wrote:

[Hard]
00:10:129 (3,4,5) - Move all 3 of these slider up by 2 gridspaces on gridlevel 3. The bottom 2 were a little too close to the edge. K
02:31:295 - Lower the volume here by 2 lines in the timing panel. 1 is OK imo
03:04:962 (2) - It's kind of hard to see this beat. Consider moving things around.K

Excellent

Arusha Shuna wrote:

fartownik wrote:

[Shuna]

Hitsound mod:

00:34:796 (1) - - The claps sound odd and misplaced. Reset all selected object's samples, and then add a Finish at the beggining and a Clap on on the end.
00:36:129 (2) - - ^ but without finish.
00:37:462 (1) - Delete Clap.
00:37:796 (2) - Add clap.
00:38:129 (3) - Add Finish instead of a Clap on the beggining. Optionally you can add a Finish on the end too.
00:40:129 (1) - Same as previous sliders.
00:41:462 (2) - ^ but without Finish.
00:56:795 (1) - ^
00:58:129 (2) - ^ but without Finish.
00:59:462 (3) - Reset all selected object's samples.
01:02:129 (1) - The same as previous sliders (following your rhythm from 00:51:462 (1,2,3,4)
01:03:462 (2) - ^ but without Finish.
01:33:462 (1,2) - Same as previous sliders.
01:38:796 (1,2) - ^
02:32:796 (1,2) - Just delete Claps. The Finishes would be nice in the entire part.
02:38:129 (1,2) - ^

Non hitsound:

02:30:962 - Uh, add a note.

There are similar patterns in the whole diff, try to fix them all.

all done!

LesTrucsRose wrote:

[Shuna's Normal]
00:29:462 (5) - Instead of putting this beat over slider 00:30:462 (3), why not move it up? suggestion]

seems nice, done!

Hyguys123123132 wrote:

My mod.

[General]
It become more better with video. Video makes the file size much more bigger
(all diffs)Fix the background , it's walking(Unraked).(02:11:879 - 03:03:462) Oh they're SBs but not background. Of course SBs can be moving.
You should put a kiai time there. Haha KIAI is just for fun but not a problem.

[Easy]
Sounds cool , only fix the background :3.

[Shuna's Normal]

Fix those sliders. I can't find anything to fix here

[Hard]
No errors in this diff.

[Gladi's Insane]
No errors again and ... wow , what an insane diff!

Crazy Jay wrote:

gladi的guest hp好像高了点，改不改随意 不改了……改了分数少300W>_>

[Hard]
00:30:962 (6) - 往左一个tiny grid K
00:31:295 (7) - 往上一个tiny grid K

Len/Len/Len/Len/
star

Derekku wrote:

Sorry that it took me so long to get to this. =x

[General]
*I found it strange that you added the default hitcircle elements to the folder. Why not remove them and just force the default skin to cover the parts that your skin doesn't? (Nice skin, though, btw) OK I do something to the hitcircle XD
*No kiai? ): (OH, I see the fountains now :v)
*You could place the preview point a bit earlier (like the red tick before 00:24:462) so that the song select fade-in doesn't cut off the beginning of the lyrics. yeah I make 24295 now
*Offset sounds great. XD

[Easy]
00:03:462 (1) - Single notes like this (with lots of silence before and after) are a bit hard to hit with correct timing in an easy difficulty. I'd rather that it was a slider (perhaps ending on 00:04:795), but if you insist on leaving it, I won't argue. A slider instead~nice idea!
00:05:295 (1,2) - I definitely won't let you slide by with these, though. Please make these a slider, since (2) would be very hard to hit correctly. K
02:26:295 (3) - Please don't have unpredictable red tick notes by themselves like this (in an easy) especially since the timing/rhythm is a bit strange during this section. OK a slider instead
02:47:462 (1,2,3,4) - Again, I don't care for the single beats with lots of spacing/silence around them. The music almost stops before (1), which makes it confusing. OK I make some sliders~
*Overall, this difficulty was a bit tricky to follow (even for an experienced player like me). The offbeat red tick notes were slightly confusing (even when paired with sliders), but it would take too much remapping to make this as easy as I would like it to be. In the future, try to map your easy difficulties a bit, well... easier. Sure, it's less than 2 stars, but that's only because of the small amount of notes overall. Star rating isn't the most accurate measure of difficulty for things such as this. PS: I don't think that this difficulty is "bad" (in case you're worrying).
*Nice hitsounds (on Hard too) (: Thank you

[Shuna's Normal]
*Much easier to follow than Easy. Obviously harder, but Arusha mapped more white ticks, leaving the offbeat red ones on repeats and the like to help show the player the rhythm.

[Hard]
*Looks fine!

[Gladi's Insane]
*fffffffffff those deathstreams >(
*I would've liked a 0.5x section at 02:22:129 to break up the 20 second break (instead of just a long break and then deathstreams EVERYWHERE). ;~;
*Though, it's still really fun <3

Great job!