kuyukiP wrote:

Hi there~

Easy:
At 01:06:962, I think this works better.[attachment=0:32b54]sasa.PNG[/attachment:32b54]
You see how the fourth is shorter and at the blue tick instead? In fact the voice start at the following white tick XD I just try to avoid short sliders in this diff~
Maybe map longer? And consider making the hitsounds louder at some parts? Hitsounds havn't been made yet ;_;

Shauna's Normal:
Fine, good job~

Hard:
Spacing is too far apart at some points, open up AIMod and it'll show you places~ (Unless you want them far apart like that since it's a "hard" difficulty) Yes I do them purposely XD. I think those parts are godd to have jumps~

Really good job all in all, love this song and this map is very fun to play. Star~

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi ~ Mod requested and I'm here :3

Fun fact; I downloaded this map before you asked me to mod it, but it was when this was incomplete, I wanted to mod it back then but forgot to check to see if it was completed, good thing you asked me to mod, I really wanted to help you :3

Skin;
- Nice skin, well themed.
- Umm, section pass ... I'm not sure, doesn't fit with the other stuff you have imo
- Do something nice for the hitcircle ??

SB;
- I want your abilities in SB D: Great SB :3 Thank you XD

General;
- Preview time for Gladi's insane is different than the other diffs. Fixed~
- Skin preference to default please, because some people use their own skins and since you haven't skin all elements it looks bad when your skin is combined with the skin that the user is using :3Fixed~
- I'm not sure about those really short kiai time section you have (the ones that don't start or end on a note) but they look good (:

Easy;
- 00:05:295 >> make this into a slider that starts here and ends at 00:05:795I think now is ok~
- 00:33:129 >> end at 00:33:795 I think now is ok~
- 00:33:962 >> move to 00:34:129 and add finishI think now is ok~
- 00:50:295 >> make this end at 00:50:629 then add a repeatI think now is ok~
- 02:20:962 >> gradually silence this spinner OR make the end of the spinner lower in soundLower~
- 03:15:295 >> add one repeat ?? I think now is ok~
- 03:18:962 >> new comboNo for I didn't use NC at the earlier parts.
- 03:32:629 >> lower the volume of the end of this spinner OR silence the end completelyI think here needs a bit high sounds due to the song

Shuna's Normal;
- 03:24:795 >> one grid left Fixed~

Hard;
- 03:08:629 >> new comboI think 1~13 is a whole part~not going to break it~
- 03:32:795 >> I love how you mapped from this point on, well I love how you mapped everything but I love this part and on more :3Thank you~

Gladi's Insane;
- Is okk ~

* Nice, nice, hope it gets ranked faster than your last map :3
* Star ~

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[Easy]
第一个note(好吧尽管它是个转圈)离开始太近了，需要一个lead-in. 如果这么做，请在其他难度也统一。 删掉转圈在00:03:462加了个NOTE~
00:07:462 (1) - 感觉3/2拍折返一次压音明显好。。。finish-whistle-finish OK~
00:48:795 (2) - 感觉一个终结在00:49:462的slider就够了（中间不要折返），这样来拖这个长音。现在的话。。吵吵的（对比其他部分）这个处理效果很棒><
00:59:295 (4) - 这个起音位置怪怪的。。。换成白线起音的单条滑条+note了
02:00:629 (2) - 晚1/2开始会不会更好，还可以跟3有个对应。。好主意~
02:20:962 (1) - 。。。我说啊没有别的办法了吗？换掉了~
03:12:629 (3) - 同建议晚1/2开始。 OK~
03:31:295 (1) - finish? 以及没用的绿线顺手删了吧。 Finish~那些绿线是持续喷水用的~
不错了。不过这歌有些音在Easy上确实比较stress……

[Shuna's Normal]
00:11:462 (1) - finish? K
01:59:296 (6) - finish? K
03:02:129 (4) - change the place of whistle i guess = = whistle at the end is better imo. K
03:24:795 (1) - should be 1 grid left to stack together with 3&4? K

[Hard]
两个比较多的点……一个是，如果你在一个地方停拍只是为了做陷阱……就没必要那么摆，例如00:29:962 (2,3,4,5)，没有流动感，很顿。 另一个是，不要在spinner后面在正中间堆若干节奏不同的note，据我所知没多少人喜欢这个，参见mapping技巧区的post spinner note一贴。这两个问题下面我就不说了= = 因为如果要改就要动比较大，而一个一个对照的意义不大。[/color] 嗯，这个我也会修一下
00:03:629 (1) - 而且这个结束点也有点奇怪。。。提前一拍？ 好~
00:10:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 果断建议你换3个由中心向外的slider。这一阵的circle太多。好主意~
00:35:129 (2,3) - 和后面风格符合的话，是下一格再左一格弄成直线更好的样子。。不知道你的想法。嗯，那就直线吧~~
00:46:129 (3,4,5,6,7) - 作为Hard来讲略远的感觉。决定留着（殴
01:44:129 (1...) - 同。 同（再殴
02:26:295 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - new combo都这样了摆成对称的两组比堆中间好很多。个人意见。重新摆过了，不叠了>.>
03:40:796 (1,1,1) - 我不知道断在这的人会做何感想……删掉中间那个1了<.<虽然少个音稍微有点不习惯

[Gladi's Insane]
custom clap is far better than default one imo.... why not use? "I don't like the clap in the refrains, please make it normal again D:"
00:34:712 (1) - start 1/4 from a blue line... why... just suggest remove this one. k.
00:49:018 (2) - i guess this should be on the 1/3 line...don't know why it's here. k.
00:56:629 (4) - add a note?k.
01:33:295 - add a note?k.
01:47:712 (2) - 1/3 line.k.
01:55:295 - add a note?k.
03:10:462 (7) - change this to a 0.5x slider end at 03:11:295? k.

Roddie wrote:

Hi :3

Blue: Suggestions.
Purple: Should be fixed in my opinion.
Red: Must be fixed.

General:

-Add kiai time. I think the notes' colors will be quite hard to read if KIAI time is added

Easy:

01:32:629 (4)-Add a clap on end of slider. yeah that's right!
01:41:795 (2)-Remove finish and add a clap instead? I think finish is better~

Shuna's Normal: I leave these to Arusha~

00:19:462 (1, 2, 3, 4) -Remove claps from end of sliders from 1 and 3? And add claps on 2 and 4?
00:34:795 (1 ,2)-Remove clap from beginning of slider on 1. Remove clap from reverse arrow and add a clap on end of slider on 2.
00:37:462 (1, 2, 3)-Remove clap from 1, add a clap on 2, and remove a clap from beginning of slider on 3.
00:40:129 (1, 2)-Remove clap from beginning of slider on 1. Remove clap from reverse arrow and add a clap on end of slider on 2.
00:56:795 (1, 2, 3, 5)-Remove clap from beginning of slider on 1. Remove clap from reverse arrow and add a clap on end of slider on 2. And remove a clap from beginning of slider on 3. And add a clap on 5.
01:02:129 (1, 2)-Remove clap from reverse arrow and add a clap on end of slider on 1. And remove clap from beginning of slider on 2.
02:32:795 (1 ,2)-^

Hard:

Good

Gladi's Insane:

Perfect!

Nice song and storyboard.

I feel like this isn't a proper mod that I did . If my mod post didn't help, don't give me a kudosu.

Star!

wmfchris wrote:

no kiai?

[Gladi's insane]
0:28:462 (5,6) spacing fixed
0:56:462 (3,4,1) spacing of (3,4) different from (4,1)it's the same~
1:48:379 (7,8) (7) left 1 bit and down 1 grid, (8) right a bit and down 1 grid? k
2:33:295 (2,3) spacingfixed
2:35:629 (3) down 1 grid?no need~
2:36:462 (10) right 1 grid?k
2:42:212 (1,2,3) spacing too large?just the same as other parts

[hard]
3:06:129 (2,3,4,5) right 1 grid?no need~
nice spacing

star~

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

[General]
1) You need an aproachcircle.png (same as default, I guess) added~
2) No fail-background?added~
3) The scorebar-colour is too hard to see when HP Drain in halfchanged~

[Easy]
*) Don't place the notes on blue/red tick, or else, the begginer player will be more confusingI think they just fit the song
*) Do not use 0,5x BPM Adjustment, because the new player are waaay too confusing^

00:36:129 (2) - I don't like this notes is overlapped with previous slider, I guess
01:06:962 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern are waaay too confusing for new playerfixed~
01:48:962 (1) - Too far from spinner, or else, the new player will difficult to reach that objectcloser~
03:03:462 (1) - These slider are too short easy diffthey can be hit as a note~
03:04:629 (2) - ^^
03:05:962 (1) - ^^
[/color]
[Shuna's Normal] I leave this to Arusha~
00:28:129 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:30:462 (1) - ^
00:56:795 (1) - Maybe, use 4 point of slider to make perfect curve?
00:58:129 (2) - ^
03:26:462 (x) - Add note here?

[Hard]
02:00:795 (7) - New combo?I do it at 02:00:629(6)~
03:11:462 (5) - ^^
03:40:962 (1) - Move backward to white tick and extend?fixed~

[Gladi's Insane] I'm asking Gladi~
Circle Size -1? So this diff is more fun?

Nice song
STAR

Lissette wrote:

Shuna's Normal
03:03:462 - move timing section 1/2 beat early, because you are changing to normal hitsound :>k
Nice diff <3

Easy
01:00:295 - add note? feels empty k
01:49:962 (2) - move to next white tick, then shorten by 1/2 beat k
02:26:296 (1) - start 1/2 laterk
03:08:629 (4) - move to next white tick, then shorten by 1/2 beatn
03:15:295 (4) - remove repeat, and make it end at 03:15:795k
03:21:962 (2) - move to next white tick, then shorten by 1/2 beatn
03:31:295 - don't spam kiai time fountainsn

Star! ^^

GladiOol wrote:

My diff.

00:56:629 (4) - delete this note.
01:48:018 (4) - Move one grid level to the left.
01:48:240 (6) - One to the right.
01:55:295 (4) - delete this note.
03:10:462 (7) - Wtf is this? D: I never put that there. Replace for a note again please. Stack the note under slider end 03:09:962 (6).


@wmfchris less nazi-mod please >_<

eee wrote:

eeemod GO!!!

[Easy]
00:08:795 (1) - end this 1/2 later (or 1/1 back, that's to the previous red tick, so it ends like Shuna's) (?) only a suggestion I think it's OK~
02:26:129 (4) - for me, sounds better 1/2 later. That *ding* is 1/2 later, and I think that sound is prominent here. (?) yes
02:26:462 (1) - end 1/1 later with a finish hitsound (?)yes
difficulty shifts towards the end, but that's not a big deal.

[Shuna]
I think the storyboard "scale to original size/zoom out" should end 00:03:462 so it snaps to the music :-/yesNice diff <3
cool patterns complimented by some neat sliders

[Hard]
00:11:462 (1) - same as [Easy] remember it is only a suggestion no need imo~
cool, several confusing patterns here and there, but it's a nice map

[GladiOol]
there's a different preview point fixed
crazy, yes, but very cool in auto/edit

that is all

Sakura Hana wrote:

Please remember, some of theese errors are suggestions not directions, feel free to take or leave any or edit as you see fit

[osz File Scan!]
Nothing wrong here.

[General]
Gladi's Insane has a different preview point that the rest of the diffs. fixed~
Inconsistent Mapping, [Hard] Is longer than all the other diffs while the rest have a consistent ending point, consider cutting Hard or making the other diffs longer hmm...I think it maybe OK since just a bit longer

[Gladi's Insane]
Set Preview Point to 24397 to match up the other diffs. fixed~
00:39:129 (1,2) - Are theese necessary? dont think are following anything.I think maybe Gladi is following the earlier parts' style~

[Hard]
02:30:795 (1,2) - Instead of putting this in the dead center after the spinner, you could try separaing them and putting them at the sides of the center symmetrically like this:

That way the player wont be blinded by the spinner's hitburstfixed~

[Shuna's Normal]
Omg love them sliders <3
Didnt find any problems here.

[Easy]
00:05:629 (X) - Add a note? looks like a good place to add one.I think if here is a note, new players may feel hard to hit the next note~

Garven wrote:

Hey again, wanhyrzh~

[Skin]
spinner-circle should have a center point in the middle like in the default skin. This way people can know where to aim their spinning at. That felt redundant, but yeah. added~
Sectionpass looks really low quality due to the style of the picture. I'd suggest you find something that fits better with the rest of the images that you have used. I find another

[Easy]
00:46:129 (3) - May be a bit confusing as to when this slider is going to end for newer players. Maybe try some different configuration? k
01:11:295 - Kind of felt like a weird spot for a fountain, but whatever. I guess you use them throughout, so eh. Ignore this I guess, hehe.yeah throw out XD
01:48:962 (1) - Really soon after a spinner for an easy. Maybe end the spinner at 01:48:129? k
01:44:129 (1) - This would be a good spot for kiai if you choose to use it. Oh I don't like KIAI in this map~sorry;_;
02:20:962 - I'm not a fan of .5 sections in the easiest difficulty of a map set.
02:20:962 (1,2) - And due to that .5 section, this felt awkward to play visually, though after listening to it a couple times I can see what you're going for. It just was visually deceptive due to the slow down.I make the slider end at 2
03:03:462 (1) - Soon after a spinner again. Maybe end the spinner at 03:02:129?I end it at 03:02:629
03:29:629 (3,4) - These are sticking into the HP a little bit. Maybe lower the entire combo by one grid? Don't worry about distance snap.fixed
Really nice easy difficulty!

[Shuna's Normal]
In general, it felt really fast-paced for a normal.
There were a few slider ends that weren't quite stacked perfectly, but whatever. They look fine.

[Hard]
01:41:462 (1,2) - Maybe space these out a bit further? I keep thinking these'll be full speed k
02:10:129 (1) - End this spinner at 02:11:462k
02:30:962 (2) - The break after this feels way too son after the last break. It kind of kills the pacing of the map. I'd map through the guitar solo then break during the slow part you mapped... but eh. You've already done it, hehe. Just my opinion here.ok I'll think about it
03:05:962 (1) - This combo ran pretty long. I'd suggest splitting it up.I just want to mke it feels like a whole part~
Wow, kiai spam at the end there, haha.

Really nice set you have here, wanh!

banvi wrote:

Oh , I like this song~ :3
Nice skin & BG. Map is fine for me : )

General
Please add Vocaloid in Tags. (Because "Vocaloid2" is not search "Vocaloid")
Composer name is ok.

All diff
How do you add Kiai at chorus of the song???
(00:36:129 ~ 00:36:129 , 01:50:129 ~ 02:11:462 , 03:11:462 ~ 03:32:795)
You can ignore this suggestion.

Good Luck

AeoNRivaS wrote:

Yay! Mod:
[Hard]:
repeat: All those sliders with a curve and a sharp turn, really bug me. ;_;

all suggestions. my modding is never not a suggestion (if that makes sense).

Rukarioman wrote:

SB:
Why not SB the names on a certain time in the beginning like you did with the guest diffs? I think it would be better to be consistent.

Easy:
00:36:462 (3) - maybe add another repeat? no for I follow the song~
00:47:462 (5) - one grid down and left OK
02:06:962 (2) - the middle sliderpoint two ticks up 1 tick up is better imo


Man I really like your maps^^ Thank you~
Star~

blissfulyoshi wrote:

I am a little worried about the sb load shooting above 5x at 02:46:129, so if you can make the sb01 and sb04 fade in and fade out time overlap a little less, it would be nice, but optimizing the code cases the sb to screw up, don't bother. yeah I know this...I hate the newly adding SB LOAD ;_; anyway I will try to fix this~

Easy:
Timing section mod: (I really wish I knew about that trick with kiai timing earlier)
02:31:629 - unneeded timing section, please remove I move it back to 02:31:462~
Hard:

Hard:
Normal mod:
03:07:462 (7) - this slider would look more aesthetically pleasing if the curve was sharper k

Timing section mod:
00:45:962 - unneeded timing section, please removek
03:11:462 - a quarter snap before this timing section add a timing section with the same hitsound volume and type, but no kiaik

Gladi's Insane:
As other people have said, please make the preview time the same as the other diffs.k
Timing section mod:
01:23:462 - move back a quarter snap for the volume changek

Very nice mapset. Besides Shuna's diff, I have very few things to complain about. Star.

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Shuna]
01:10:962 (4) - Stack it with 01:09:962 (2).Looks better to me. k
01:38:796 (1,2) - 1 grid left both.k
03:04:795 (2) - 1 right to make it simmetrical.k

All I can find,great job!
Star~

Doomsday wrote:

Hi

1. I got offset: 790 (A little earlier than yours) I keep my 796~
2. For vocaloid songs, people usually put "Vocaloid" in the source. "PolyphonicBranch" shoul be in the tags, and "Vocaloid" should be in the sourcesame as CDFA said

[EASY]

Looks nice enough. More interesting than most Easy difficulties I find Thank you~

[SHUNA'S NORMAL]

00:24:796 to 00:32:129 - You could probably map to the lyrics more here. Sticking to constant 1/4's like you did doesn't work well in this case.I leave this to Arusha

Apart from that, Nice map

[HARD]

Seems clean. I even kinda liked what you did at 00:46:129, with the slow sliders. I don't usually like things like that. It does get much harder suddenly at the end though, which feels odd, but apart from that, nice.Thank you~~

[GLADI'S INSANE] (Gladinsane c:)I leave this to Gladi...

Fun stuff, mostly.

00:44:962 (3) - Eww. I don't see where this 0.5xBPM slider fits in. I actually missed on my run since I had no idea it was a slow slider. Remove it?
01:43:629 (3) - ^
02:45:296 (7,1,2) - I can live with the massive deathstreams, but this overlap threw me off completely. Could you move it so you can see the (2) note at least?

A pretty nice map you have here. It isn't groundbreaking, but it's fairly interesting, well balanced, and pretty fun to boot, which is all good

Starred

TheVileOne wrote:

Easy

00:51:462 (2,3,4,5) - Too slow IMO.for the new players XD

01:09:629 (1) - Remove new combo?k

Shuna's Normal

Fine

Hard

00:41:462 (1,2) - Line up better?k

03:03:462 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - I find this awkward to hit. It might be because my cursor is glitched.

Gladi's InsaneI leave this to Gladi

00:34:462 (7) - Move right and up 1 unit? (Fixes spacing and aligns note with 00:34:795 (1) - )

01:48:018 (4,5,6,7,8) - I don't even have to play this to know it will play awkward. Of course I haven't got a good idea what pros consider "awkward".

02:49:986 - Add note?

Sorry I couldn't help very much on this difficulty.


It's a well rounded beatmap. Not exactly my cup of tea, but good. It deserves a star.

Krisom wrote:

General-
I find the sliderball kinda disturbing and not fitting with the rest of the skin/SB :< I mean, the Skin/SB is all dark and serious, and the sliderball is a spinning chibi len sayin like "YAY! I like bananas!!". Same goes for the warningarrow and sectionpass/sectionfail.I know what you mean but I will keep them until I find better ones

Easy-
01:50:129 (2) - Add a finish at the startk
03:08:629 (4) - Consider moving this 1/2 later, its much more intuitive for the newbies this way. I think it's OK~
Well, this is technically well made, but even though the star rating is 1.71, I find that you used way too many 1/2 notes :< yeah due to the song...I'm a nood mapper ;_;

Shuna's-
00:19:462 (1,2,3,4) - Clap (2) and (4) and unclap (1)'s and (3)'s endk
00:51:462 (1) - Finish at the start? k
03:11:462 (1) - ^?k
This diff is so beautiful

Hard-
PLEASE AVOID ABUSING THE FOUNTAINS AT THE END!!! It takes away all the seriousness of the SB (Also, the last fountain should be at 03:44:962, just leave that one if you want fountains)OK delete two of them
Also, is there a reason on why this diff uses the soft custom hitsounds and the others don't? Please hitsound all your (aka: just Easy and Hard, as the guest diffs can do what they want) diffs in a similar way to add quality to the mapset.Easy have much less notes, and doesn't follow the song, so normal hitsound is better imo. But when it comes to Hard, since it follows the song and most of the song lyrics are on the red tick, so I think soft hitsound for the two parts are OK

Gladi's-
I don't see anything wrong here~

~Arusha did a great job here

GladiOol wrote:

TheVileOne wrote:

00:34:462 (7) - Move right and up 1 unit? (Fixes spacing and aligns note with 00:34:795 (1)

I did the same here 01:33:962 (7), so why not post about that then too x)
Always keep your eyes open for ze copy pasta. But no, won't fix. I don't want to have perfectly alligned stuff, I like to have things random.

TheVileOne wrote:

01:48:018 (4,5,6,7,8) - I don't even have to play this to know it will play awkward. Of course I haven't got a good idea what pros consider "awkward".

True, fix'd.

TheVileOne wrote:

02:49:986 - Add note?

No.

~

Doomsday wrote:

00:44:962 (3) - Eww. I don't see where this 0.5xBPM slider fits in. I actually missed on my run since I had no idea it was a slow slider. Remove it?
01:43:629 (3) - ^

Yes~ fix'd. It even surprised me when I just played it. I fail~

Doomsday wrote:

02:45:296 (7,1,2) - I can live with the massive deathstreams, but this overlap threw me off completely. Could you move it so you can see the (2) note at least?

Nah, it's perfectly read-able in my opinion.


[attachment=0:f9c68]Len Kagamine - Kimi ni Sasagu Fantasia (wanhyrzh) [Gladi's Insane].osu[/attachment:f9c68]

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Easy]
00:03:129 - Why you have silenced tick notes in sliders? just because they don't fit the song imo
00:07:712 - ^
00:07:879 - ^
00:08:046 - ^
00:08:212 - ^
and many more, i think there is not point
00:34:795 - this slider is a little away from field, please fix that. I think it's OK when playing

[Normal]
00:56:129 - one grid left k
02:31:462 - 20 seconds break not rankable. OK we will think about it

[Hard]
03:43:629 - finish I think now it's OK
03:44:129 - ^
03:44:629 - ^

[Insane]
:3

Lizbeth wrote:

Gladi's Insane
Couldn't find mistakes, good job

Hard
all good just a suggestion
00:08:795 (1) - add a repeat, then 00:09:462 (2) - remove a repeat and move to next red tick, sounds better imo :3 yeah

Shuna's Normal
Nice diff <3 I enjoy it
suggestion: We'll think about them~
03:26:962 - add note
03:27:129 - ^

Easy
I find this diff a bit hard to follow when using red ticks (maybe is just me@.@) but technically is fine

star

Soaprman wrote:

General
poor background image... only there as a formality... living its life buried beneath storyboard... oh, the humanity! (not a complaint or anything, just an observation) so I make my Hard longer to make use of the BG...I use it just because it really fits the song's title imo. And I let it appear at the end, means a happy end XD

Any reason why the credits for Shuna's diff are on the lower right, and the rest on the upper right? Nothing wrong with this, just something I noticed. because Arusha's name is much longer and I think that position is better >_>

Gladi's InsaneOK I'll let Gladi know later~
00:50:796 (5,6,7) - space these a little closer together. I didn't have any idea from looking that they were so close on the timeline. They broke my combo and my heart. (normally I don't bother mentioning minor spacing things but you also just switched from 1/4 to 1/6 here so keeping spacing consistent is kind of important)
01:49:462 (5,6,7) - same here.

other difficulties
Don't remember anything tripping me up on these... good work!

These are nice maps. Well done, you guys.

fartownik wrote:

hi, here's what I found:

Add some kiai time? I see only some random kiai "flashes", but not the proper kiai time. It's not necessary, but it'd be nice to see some difference in gameplay in the final chorus. I just think that KIAI with such bright hitcircles will be a hell...

The SB load raises to 6,75 at 02:46. I know it was mentioned before, but I don't know if you tried to fix it. This thing is pretty annoying, and if you did your best, and it's still out of the limit, it'll be acceptable. Oh I have fixed since 9.8~You may download the old SB?
Refer to this thread.

The length is not consistent. It would be nice if you map all of the diffs into the end, like in Hard. OK I'll try this in my another diff~

[Easy]

02:58:129 (1) - I feel like you were too lazy to map this part properly. This spinner is out of place and sounds off. >_> I do as that in Gladi's diff~Now I trun down the volume to make it sound better~

[Hard]

00:13:629 - The end of the spinner should soft-whistle. Like in Easy. k
00:52:129 (7) - Add a Clap. k


[Gladi]

Awesome difficulty.

00:51:462 - The volume from here is too low, raise it to 60-70%. k
01:50:129 - ^ k
03:11:462 - ^ k
01:47:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - <3


Cool SB and really good mapset.
starred

NatsumeRin wrote:

recheck for Hard.

00:09:629 (1) - 感觉不需要new combo k
00:11:462 (1) - 晚1/2结束change to soft whistle
00:51:462 (5,6) - 考虑换slider，只是感觉这样会比较流畅k
00:52:796 (1,2) - ^k
01:00:962 (1,2) - 这里注意下，虽然你是压了版边，但是叠了几个后很可能会出去，谨慎为上k
01:04:796 (1,2,3,4,5) - 给个建议，2放在14的延长线上，用3代替原4，4代替原3，5仍然叠在4尾great!
02:31:462 (1) - 这里开始把音量升高点。+10%
03:06:629 (5) - 从这个尾开始的三个三连1/2，都用clap-clap-normal great
03:08:796 (11) - 这个尾开始，用clap-clap-normal-clap-clap-clapRin大的音效好精致><
03:26:962 (1) & 03:28:296 (1) - 建议维持同一风格来放这两组。。。k

LesTrucsRose wrote:

[Hard]
00:10:129 (3,4,5) - Move all 3 of these slider up by 2 gridspaces on gridlevel 3. The bottom 2 were a little too close to the edge. K
02:31:295 - Lower the volume here by 2 lines in the timing panel. 1 is OK imo
03:04:962 (2) - It's kind of hard to see this beat. Consider moving things around.K

Excellent

Arusha Shuna wrote:

fartownik wrote:

[Shuna]

Hitsound mod:

00:34:796 (1) - - The claps sound odd and misplaced. Reset all selected object's samples, and then add a Finish at the beggining and a Clap on on the end.
00:36:129 (2) - - ^ but without finish.
00:37:462 (1) - Delete Clap.
00:37:796 (2) - Add clap.
00:38:129 (3) - Add Finish instead of a Clap on the beggining. Optionally you can add a Finish on the end too.
00:40:129 (1) - Same as previous sliders.
00:41:462 (2) - ^ but without Finish.
00:56:795 (1) - ^
00:58:129 (2) - ^ but without Finish.
00:59:462 (3) - Reset all selected object's samples.
01:02:129 (1) - The same as previous sliders (following your rhythm from 00:51:462 (1,2,3,4)
01:03:462 (2) - ^ but without Finish.
01:33:462 (1,2) - Same as previous sliders.
01:38:796 (1,2) - ^
02:32:796 (1,2) - Just delete Claps. The Finishes would be nice in the entire part.
02:38:129 (1,2) - ^

Non hitsound:

02:30:962 - Uh, add a note.

There are similar patterns in the whole diff, try to fix them all.

all done!

LesTrucsRose wrote:

[Shuna's Normal]
00:29:462 (5) - Instead of putting this beat over slider 00:30:462 (3), why not move it up? suggestion]

seems nice, done!

Hyguys123123132 wrote:

My mod.

[General]
It become more better with video. Video makes the file size much more bigger
(all diffs)Fix the background , it's walking(Unraked).(02:11:879 - 03:03:462) Oh they're SBs but not background. Of course SBs can be moving.
You should put a kiai time there. Haha KIAI is just for fun but not a problem.

[Easy]
Sounds cool , only fix the background :3.

[Shuna's Normal]

Fix those sliders. I can't find anything to fix here

[Hard]
No errors in this diff.

[Gladi's Insane]
No errors again and ... wow , what an insane diff!

Crazy Jay wrote:

gladi的guest hp好像高了点，改不改随意 不改了……改了分数少300W>_>

[Hard]
00:30:962 (6) - 往左一个tiny grid K
00:31:295 (7) - 往上一个tiny grid K

Len/Len/Len/Len/
star

Derekku wrote:

Sorry that it took me so long to get to this. =x

[General]
*I found it strange that you added the default hitcircle elements to the folder. Why not remove them and just force the default skin to cover the parts that your skin doesn't? (Nice skin, though, btw) OK I do something to the hitcircle XD
*No kiai? ): (OH, I see the fountains now :v)
*You could place the preview point a bit earlier (like the red tick before 00:24:462) so that the song select fade-in doesn't cut off the beginning of the lyrics. yeah I make 24295 now
*Offset sounds great. XD

[Easy]
00:03:462 (1) - Single notes like this (with lots of silence before and after) are a bit hard to hit with correct timing in an easy difficulty. I'd rather that it was a slider (perhaps ending on 00:04:795), but if you insist on leaving it, I won't argue. A slider instead~nice idea!
00:05:295 (1,2) - I definitely won't let you slide by with these, though. Please make these a slider, since (2) would be very hard to hit correctly. K
02:26:295 (3) - Please don't have unpredictable red tick notes by themselves like this (in an easy) especially since the timing/rhythm is a bit strange during this section. OK a slider instead
02:47:462 (1,2,3,4) - Again, I don't care for the single beats with lots of spacing/silence around them. The music almost stops before (1), which makes it confusing. OK I make some sliders~
*Overall, this difficulty was a bit tricky to follow (even for an experienced player like me). The offbeat red tick notes were slightly confusing (even when paired with sliders), but it would take too much remapping to make this as easy as I would like it to be. In the future, try to map your easy difficulties a bit, well... easier. Sure, it's less than 2 stars, but that's only because of the small amount of notes overall. Star rating isn't the most accurate measure of difficulty for things such as this. PS: I don't think that this difficulty is "bad" (in case you're worrying).
*Nice hitsounds (on Hard too) (: Thank you

[Shuna's Normal]
*Much easier to follow than Easy. Obviously harder, but Arusha mapped more white ticks, leaving the offbeat red ones on repeats and the like to help show the player the rhythm.

[Hard]
*Looks fine!

[Gladi's Insane]
*fffffffffff those deathstreams >(
*I would've liked a 0.5x section at 02:22:129 to break up the 20 second break (instead of just a long break and then deathstreams EVERYWHERE). ;~;
*Though, it's still really fun <3

Great job!