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FictionJunction YUUKA - Yakusoku [OsuMania]
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man im tired sorry
ill end here, maybe ill get back to you with a more concise mod
if you have any questions send it to me on discord, be sure to send a screenshot of the issue at hand first though so id know what it is
no kudos since im not done
theres a japanese name for this song look here: https://canta-per-me.net/lyrics/yakusoku/
resize your bg it bugs me
i want to kill myself
nothing more
resize your bg it bugs me
i want to kill myself
nothing more
[chart]
i dont want to play anything so ill just go in blind or something
00:10:819 (10819|2,11050|2) - your pitch
00:15:665 (15665|1,15896|1) - same
i mean like if youre trying to pack everything into 3 columns you could choose to do something else; like maybe move 00:11:050 (11050|2) - to 2 to emphasize the jump between these 00:11:050 (11050|2,11280|3) - two notes in pitch or something idk
00:19:473 (19473|1) - i dont really see the point of this note being here, vocals are roughly on 1/2 and there isnt really any strong beat here too
00:20:396 (20396|1) - same deal as above, just feels like a leftover beat from before
00:19:588 (19588|3) - remove this LN, you kinda like stopped it abruptly at 00:21:434 - so why not just end the walls at the transition
00:20:050 (20050|2,20165|0,20280|2,20396|1) - 00:20:973 (20973|0,21088|1,21203|2,21319|1) - looking at the section afterward id rather you follow the piano here because like those synth sounds are so ass to find ( i.e. theres like one 00:22:934 - here and possibly one 00:24:665 - here too) so yeah up to you
00:23:742 - 00:24:665 - these piano sounds are stronger than the ones you chose to double but theyre single notes idk
00:24:665 (24665|1,24896|1) - i get the 00:23:280 (23280|1,23511|1) - this thing here but i dont get the other one i highlighted - i mean like theres this left hand bias there anyway
00:38:742 (38742|1,38742|2,38973|0,38973|3,38973|2) - pretty sure theyre both the same intensity
00:42:817 (42817|0,42894|0) - snapping lmao
00:41:741 (41741|3,41856|0) - personal preference but id rather you have these LNs be normal notes since things like this are ass to time and i hate LNs in general
00:52:817 - double thing here
00:55:356 (55356|3) - the guitar rifts again at 00:55:471 - so this is kinda bleh
00:54:894 (54894|2,55356|3) - why not just remove the LNs to transition into the jacks
00:55:817 (55817|2,55817|1,55933|0,55933|2,56048|1,56048|3,56164|3,56164|2,56279|0,56279|1,56394|2,56394|1) - suggesting something cleaner
just realized this chart is chock full of LNs
01:00:894 (60894|2,61010|3,61125|2,61241|3,61356|2) - is it possible for you to make this into a both hand trill since like 01:06:433 - you did that here so
01:07:587 - LN here
01:07:933 (67933|3) - youre not following the shaking sound thing and theres no guitar thing here so
01:08:971 (68971|1,69202|0) - pretty sure its these two notes that are meant to be stacked
01:13:471 (73471|0,73587|0) - jacks are not representative of the shaking sound, i mean like its a little too intense for it you know what i mean
01:14:856 (74856|3,74971|3,75317|2,75433|2) - i mean like please you know this is awkward
you could technically remove the LNs so that the jacks are easier to handle but idk up to you ill just ignore all the jacks for now
01:16:702 - note please
to be honest you have a lot of those missing shaking sounds, please review this section yourself. kinda encourage you to remove the LNs more now since you absolutely need the space
01:23:279 (83279|1,83510|1,83741|1) - might just be an error when you tried to nerf it but yeah this is odd
01:25:933 (85933|0) - if you really want to keep the quad then move this note to 3
01:40:125 (100125|1,100202|0,100279|1) - move all this to the right hand
the LNs are so frustrating zzzzzzzz
01:32:971 (92971|0,93202|0,93433|0) - i dont really appreciate things like this especially in LN walls so if you could please re-arrange some of them
01:37:356 (97356|0) - move to 2, ^
01:39:894 (99894|0,99894|1,100010|0,100125|1,100202|0,100279|1) - try this
01:53:510 (113510|2) - rip in peaces this LN trying to follow vocals 2016-2016
01:54:202 (114202|1,114202|3,114202|0) - i dont really appreciate you trying to force a triple to follow the crash here, like you create unintentional jacks that arent really emphasizing anything, theyre just sitting there being annoying to hit
01:59:048 (119048|2,119164|3,119279|2,119394|3,119510|2) - is this trill intentional
01:59:625 - theres the really light drum thing here wanna follow that
01:57:779 - 01:58:010 - 02:02:164 - are these intentionally missed
02:02:279 (122279|3,122279|0) - not sure if this warrants a double
02:09:317 (129317|2,129317|3,129548|2,129548|3,129779|2,129779|3) - all on the 1/6 ticks before
also please dont do flashy things like this, a simple jumptrill is enough, if you really want you could have the LNs just keep them consistently sized but thing here is the guitars are on 1/6 snaps whilst the drums are on 1/4 so up to you
02:14:279 - this part is a mess
02:14:971 (134971|2,135202|2) - make the spacing between the two larger a little please
02:22:125 (142125|3,142241|2,142356|3,142471|2,142587|3) - feels like youve been copy pasting idk; feels weird to have drums hihats and everything rolled into a trill
02:27:664 (147664|0,147779|3,147894|0,148010|3,148125|0) - aw man you really did copy and paste
alright since you did so ill skip this whole section; give it a review yourself and tweak the patterns a little to fit the music please
02:44:394 (164394|0,164510|2) - crtl-g
02:46:010 (166010|1,166010|0) - 02:46:241 (166241|1,166241|0) - not sure if these warrant a double
02:46:587 - interestingly enough you didnt have a double here even though the sounds pretty strong
02:47:164 (167164|1) - to 1
03:01:587 (181587|0,181587|1,181702|3,181817|1,181817|2) - you sure you dont want these to be jumptrills
03:15:087 - note
03:15:587 - note 1/6
03:15:894 (195894|2,195894|3,196125|2,196125|3) - did you like skip everything here or something there seems to be so many inconsistencies here
03:16:356 (196356|1,196356|2,196471|2,196471|1,196587|0,196587|2) - you sure this sound warrants 3 note jacking
03:17:741 - 03:19:587 - 03:21:433 - whyd you miss out the hihats man
03:21:317 (201317|0,201548|3,201664|2) - same sections - like i dont get why these are singles even though the drums are there so
03:22:356 - section is disproportionately denser than the rest, and it feels its to no particular effect
03:25:125 - the hihat thing from before applies here too btw
00:10:819 (10819|2,11050|2) - your pitch
00:15:665 (15665|1,15896|1) - same
i mean like if youre trying to pack everything into 3 columns you could choose to do something else; like maybe move 00:11:050 (11050|2) - to 2 to emphasize the jump between these 00:11:050 (11050|2,11280|3) - two notes in pitch or something idk
00:19:473 (19473|1) - i dont really see the point of this note being here, vocals are roughly on 1/2 and there isnt really any strong beat here too
00:20:396 (20396|1) - same deal as above, just feels like a leftover beat from before
00:19:588 (19588|3) - remove this LN, you kinda like stopped it abruptly at 00:21:434 - so why not just end the walls at the transition
00:20:050 (20050|2,20165|0,20280|2,20396|1) - 00:20:973 (20973|0,21088|1,21203|2,21319|1) - looking at the section afterward id rather you follow the piano here because like those synth sounds are so ass to find ( i.e. theres like one 00:22:934 - here and possibly one 00:24:665 - here too) so yeah up to you
00:23:742 - 00:24:665 - these piano sounds are stronger than the ones you chose to double but theyre single notes idk
00:24:665 (24665|1,24896|1) - i get the 00:23:280 (23280|1,23511|1) - this thing here but i dont get the other one i highlighted - i mean like theres this left hand bias there anyway
00:38:742 (38742|1,38742|2,38973|0,38973|3,38973|2) - pretty sure theyre both the same intensity
00:42:817 (42817|0,42894|0) - snapping lmao
00:41:741 (41741|3,41856|0) - personal preference but id rather you have these LNs be normal notes since things like this are ass to time and i hate LNs in general
00:52:817 - double thing here
00:55:356 (55356|3) - the guitar rifts again at 00:55:471 - so this is kinda bleh
00:54:894 (54894|2,55356|3) - why not just remove the LNs to transition into the jacks
00:55:817 (55817|2,55817|1,55933|0,55933|2,56048|1,56048|3,56164|3,56164|2,56279|0,56279|1,56394|2,56394|1) - suggesting something cleaner
just realized this chart is chock full of LNs
01:00:894 (60894|2,61010|3,61125|2,61241|3,61356|2) - is it possible for you to make this into a both hand trill since like 01:06:433 - you did that here so
01:07:587 - LN here
01:07:933 (67933|3) - youre not following the shaking sound thing and theres no guitar thing here so
01:08:971 (68971|1,69202|0) - pretty sure its these two notes that are meant to be stacked
01:13:471 (73471|0,73587|0) - jacks are not representative of the shaking sound, i mean like its a little too intense for it you know what i mean
01:14:856 (74856|3,74971|3,75317|2,75433|2) - i mean like please you know this is awkward
you could technically remove the LNs so that the jacks are easier to handle but idk up to you ill just ignore all the jacks for now
01:16:702 - note please
to be honest you have a lot of those missing shaking sounds, please review this section yourself. kinda encourage you to remove the LNs more now since you absolutely need the space
01:23:279 (83279|1,83510|1,83741|1) - might just be an error when you tried to nerf it but yeah this is odd
01:25:933 (85933|0) - if you really want to keep the quad then move this note to 3
01:40:125 (100125|1,100202|0,100279|1) - move all this to the right hand
the LNs are so frustrating zzzzzzzz
01:32:971 (92971|0,93202|0,93433|0) - i dont really appreciate things like this especially in LN walls so if you could please re-arrange some of them
01:37:356 (97356|0) - move to 2, ^
01:39:894 (99894|0,99894|1,100010|0,100125|1,100202|0,100279|1) - try this
01:53:510 (113510|2) - rip in peaces this LN trying to follow vocals 2016-2016
01:54:202 (114202|1,114202|3,114202|0) - i dont really appreciate you trying to force a triple to follow the crash here, like you create unintentional jacks that arent really emphasizing anything, theyre just sitting there being annoying to hit
01:59:048 (119048|2,119164|3,119279|2,119394|3,119510|2) - is this trill intentional
01:59:625 - theres the really light drum thing here wanna follow that
01:57:779 - 01:58:010 - 02:02:164 - are these intentionally missed
02:02:279 (122279|3,122279|0) - not sure if this warrants a double
02:09:317 (129317|2,129317|3,129548|2,129548|3,129779|2,129779|3) - all on the 1/6 ticks before
also please dont do flashy things like this, a simple jumptrill is enough, if you really want you could have the LNs just keep them consistently sized but thing here is the guitars are on 1/6 snaps whilst the drums are on 1/4 so up to you
02:14:279 - this part is a mess
02:14:971 (134971|2,135202|2) - make the spacing between the two larger a little please
img
02:14:433 (134433|0) - is on 1/8
02:22:125 (142125|3,142241|2,142356|3,142471|2,142587|3) - feels like youve been copy pasting idk; feels weird to have drums hihats and everything rolled into a trill
02:27:664 (147664|0,147779|3,147894|0,148010|3,148125|0) - aw man you really did copy and paste
alright since you did so ill skip this whole section; give it a review yourself and tweak the patterns a little to fit the music please
02:44:394 (164394|0,164510|2) - crtl-g
02:46:010 (166010|1,166010|0) - 02:46:241 (166241|1,166241|0) - not sure if these warrant a double
02:46:587 - interestingly enough you didnt have a double here even though the sounds pretty strong
02:47:164 (167164|1) - to 1
03:01:587 (181587|0,181587|1,181702|3,181817|1,181817|2) - you sure you dont want these to be jumptrills
03:15:087 - note
03:15:587 - note 1/6
03:15:894 (195894|2,195894|3,196125|2,196125|3) - did you like skip everything here or something there seems to be so many inconsistencies here
03:16:356 (196356|1,196356|2,196471|2,196471|1,196587|0,196587|2) - you sure this sound warrants 3 note jacking
03:17:741 - 03:19:587 - 03:21:433 - whyd you miss out the hihats man
03:21:317 (201317|0,201548|3,201664|2) - same sections - like i dont get why these are singles even though the drums are there so
03:22:356 - section is disproportionately denser than the rest, and it feels its to no particular effect
img
cleaned it up for you, although i disagree with your layering scheme im too lazy to make one myself and yours is pretty alright anyway just needed a little tweaking
03:25:125 - the hihat thing from before applies here too btw
man im tired sorry
ill end here, maybe ill get back to you with a more concise mod
if you have any questions send it to me on discord, be sure to send a screenshot of the issue at hand first though so id know what it is
no kudos since im not done
Topic Starter
Yea sure thing m8, thanks for even giving a crap.Abraxos wrote:
stuff
Will do editing either tomorrow or next week :>
[round 2]
done yay
kudos pls thanks
have fun or something
edit: oh and if you have any questions just ask me through discord things
03:31:356 (211356|2,211356|3) - seems like you only doubled drum beats/snare beats so whats this
03:32:510 (212510|3,212510|2,212625|0) - double should be second here, drum thing
03:34:356 - why is this blank
03:36:779 (216779|1,216779|0,216779|3,216894|2) - i mean the hihat thing is on the red tick and the beat for the hand is pretty meh
03:37:471 (217471|0,217471|2,217471|1,217817|3,217817|0,217817|2,218164|1,218164|3,218164|2) - not really intuitive to hit, its not like disconnected from the music but there are plenty of other sounds around them that kinda mask it a little so it becomes a amalgam of ebfesnoudfhiou
03:53:394 (233394|2,233625|0) - pretty much ghost notes; well like there are sounds but theyre pretty minimal, my suggestion is not to include them since guitar things
04:11:048 (251048|2,251048|3,251279|2,251279|1,251510|3,251510|1) - the pianos pretty soft you want to like make these less bam
04:25:471 (265471|1) - prolly design choice but like i would encourage you to cut this at 04:27:433 - so you can accommodate for the whatever youre doing there
same things apply for whatever ive told you for the choruses before
04:44:510 (284510|1,284971|0,285202|1) - idk man youre like skipping over the drum beats which is pretty odd
compare 04:44:510 (284510|1,284971|0,285202|1,287971|3,288087|1,288202|0,288317|1,288433|3) - to 04:49:817 (289817|0,289933|2,289933|1,290164|3,290279|1,290279|2) - pls
04:56:510 (296510|0) - vocals start at 04:56:971 -
04:59:510 (299510|2,299510|1,299625|0,299625|1,299741|2,299741|0,299856|3,299856|1,299971|2,299971|3,300087|0,300087|1) - densest part at the end even though the sounds here are pretty much dead like me so i dont really appreciate this
05:20:477 (320477|0,320524|1,320571|3) - believe that this is on 1/12 with one additional note (i mean like its guitar things and all but whatever up to you)
03:32:510 (212510|3,212510|2,212625|0) - double should be second here, drum thing
03:34:356 - why is this blank
03:36:779 (216779|1,216779|0,216779|3,216894|2) - i mean the hihat thing is on the red tick and the beat for the hand is pretty meh
03:37:471 (217471|0,217471|2,217471|1,217817|3,217817|0,217817|2,218164|1,218164|3,218164|2) - not really intuitive to hit, its not like disconnected from the music but there are plenty of other sounds around them that kinda mask it a little so it becomes a amalgam of ebfesnoudfhiou
03:53:394 (233394|2,233625|0) - pretty much ghost notes; well like there are sounds but theyre pretty minimal, my suggestion is not to include them since guitar things
img
those like trilly things kinda go with the guitar, maybe you could do this thing
04:11:048 (251048|2,251048|3,251279|2,251279|1,251510|3,251510|1) - the pianos pretty soft you want to like make these less bam
04:25:471 (265471|1) - prolly design choice but like i would encourage you to cut this at 04:27:433 - so you can accommodate for the whatever youre doing there
same things apply for whatever ive told you for the choruses before
04:44:510 (284510|1,284971|0,285202|1) - idk man youre like skipping over the drum beats which is pretty odd
compare 04:44:510 (284510|1,284971|0,285202|1,287971|3,288087|1,288202|0,288317|1,288433|3) - to 04:49:817 (289817|0,289933|2,289933|1,290164|3,290279|1,290279|2) - pls
04:56:510 (296510|0) - vocals start at 04:56:971 -
04:59:510 (299510|2,299510|1,299625|0,299625|1,299741|2,299741|0,299856|3,299856|1,299971|2,299971|3,300087|0,300087|1) - densest part at the end even though the sounds here are pretty much dead like me so i dont really appreciate this
05:20:477 (320477|0,320524|1,320571|3) - believe that this is on 1/12 with one additional note (i mean like its guitar things and all but whatever up to you)
done yay
kudos pls thanks
have fun or something
edit: oh and if you have any questions just ask me through discord things
Topic Starter
1st part of the mod from Abraxos done, only one I didn't accept was the 00:41:740 (41740|2,41741|1,41741|3,41856|0,41971|3,41971|2) - this part of LNs, cause I feel it fits the guitar part nicely and nicer.
Edit: 2nd part done, pretty much accepted everything too.
Edit: 2nd part done, pretty much accepted everything too.
Promise me you will be there when I am down...no
Promise me...
Please...
mod
7k
00:01:127 (1127|4,1357|3,1588|2,1819|1,2050|2,2050|0) - http://puu.sh/qzseY/44bbfad0e0.jpg then 00:02:280 (2280|1) - move to 1
00:11:511 (11511|2,11742|1) - ctrl+right (move 1 col to the right)
00:17:742 (17742|4) - add 1 note at 2
00:18:434 (18434|4,18434|1,18665|2,18665|6,18896|1,18896|4) - http://puu.sh/qzsnw/451eecca09.jpg
00:23:050 (23050|1) - move to 5 or 7
00:59:279 (59279|1,59510|2) - ctrl+j
01:01:817 (61817|6,61933|5) - ctrl+left (move 1 col to the left)
01:03:894 (63894|2,64010|3,64125|0) - 01:04:356 (64356|2) - http://puu.sh/qzsuk/f0dd551a7f.jpg
01:09:202 (69202|3) - move to 2
02:20:741 (140741|1) - move to 3
03:23:279 (203279|1,203279|2,203394|2,203394|1,203510|2,203510|1,203625|2,203625|1,203741|4,203741|5,203856|4,203856|5,203971|5,203971|4,204087|4,204087|5) - eee -> http://puu.sh/qzsHA/d65d9da730.jpg or reverse idk kkk
04:10:356 (250356|4) - - add 1 note
04:11:048 (251048|4,251279|6,251510|4) - http://puu.sh/qzsnw/451eecca09.jpg
04:44:856 - add on 6
04:45:087 - add on 2
4k
00:01:819 (1819|2) - move to 2
01:08:971 (68971|1) - move to 1
01:15:202 (75202|3) - move to 1
kk bb
|1|2|3|4|
Hitsounding : I feel weird about HS, it's inconsistency, you should re-hs for your map
I think you follow vocals toooooooooo much, Mania mode isn't recommended to follow vocals.
i was shocked when i take a look on this map xDD
00:21:434 - add note at |3|
00:22:357 - add note at |4|
00:54:894 - http://puu.sh/qzA1n/b2672b2f70.PNG I think do like this
00:57:202 (57202|3) - move to |2|
00:57:664 (57664|1) - move to |3|
00:58:356 (58356|3) - move to |1|
00:59:741 - i think you should make triple notes here, it's quite loud
01:11:279 to 01:24:202 - i think you use jacks so much here, pls spread to other column
01:24:202 - http://puu.sh/qzAw6/4753d8350f.PNG how about this?
01:39:894 (99894|3) - delete and move 01:40:010 (100010|0) - to |4|
01:40:817 (100817|1) - delete, it isn't loud here
02:45:894 - http://puu.sh/qzAHO/fe5c514738.PNG how about this?
03:17:048 (197048|2) - move to |2|
03:27:664 (207664|3) - move to |3|
03:53:741 - spread note to red line plz, there is the sound, and maybe delete all LNs heere, like i said, o!m isn't suitable to follow vocals.
04:11:741 - this too, should remove all LN and follow Bass and Piano here
04:27:433 - http://puu.sh/qzB6H/afc5538299.PNG how about this? (use 1/16)
05:00:202 (300202|1) - delete
05:00:202 (300202|3) - change to normal note
Main Problems : I think you use LN to follow vocals TOO MUCH here, and the jacks is TOO MUCH too, the jacks that i found, it shouldn't put the notes like this, it isn't same sound, so spread to other column, but it seem like a fun map
anyway, good luck on ranking!
i guess itd be nice if i left my opinion here
4K chart is generally alright, i mean come on now its 130 bpm so i dont really see the need to point out simplistic anchoring that are essentially separate notes on this bpm
im not a huge fan of the LNs nor the jacks but it doesnt necessarily spell for a complete remap
@rave you should at least give things like 01:55:241 (115241|1,115241|0) - a look; happily enough i seemed to have missed all of these sections and ive noticed that the layering on those sections is a little wonky; i.e. 01:55:241 (115241|1,115241|0) - is pretty much deadbeat whilst 01:55:125 (115125|1,115125|0,115356|3,115356|2,115471|3,115471|2) - are noticeably higher in volume than the rest
03:16:356 (196356|3,196356|2,196471|1,196471|0,196587|3,196587|2,196702|1,196702|0) - also relevant to the above mentioned section - you might want to check on your consistency too btw
maybe try lowering OD to 7.6 or 7.5 since this chart is a hard difficulty and LNs
05:00:087 (300087|0,300087|1,300202|1,300202|0) - dont think this warrants a wristjack but its just my opinion
03:45:894 - double
yeah ill stop looking through it
main thing is the consistency of your pattern usage and layering, so you might wanna like give this chart a good re-look again; btw if you do need my assistance you could shoot me highlight on discord and ill try to be online and other things
good luck with rankos again
dont kds this btw
4K chart is generally alright, i mean come on now its 130 bpm so i dont really see the need to point out simplistic anchoring that are essentially separate notes on this bpm
im not a huge fan of the LNs nor the jacks but it doesnt necessarily spell for a complete remap
@rave you should at least give things like 01:55:241 (115241|1,115241|0) - a look; happily enough i seemed to have missed all of these sections and ive noticed that the layering on those sections is a little wonky; i.e. 01:55:241 (115241|1,115241|0) - is pretty much deadbeat whilst 01:55:125 (115125|1,115125|0,115356|3,115356|2,115471|3,115471|2) - are noticeably higher in volume than the rest
03:16:356 (196356|3,196356|2,196471|1,196471|0,196587|3,196587|2,196702|1,196702|0) - also relevant to the above mentioned section - you might want to check on your consistency too btw
maybe try lowering OD to 7.6 or 7.5 since this chart is a hard difficulty and LNs
05:00:087 (300087|0,300087|1,300202|1,300202|0) - dont think this warrants a wristjack but its just my opinion
03:45:894 - double
yeah ill stop looking through it
main thing is the consistency of your pattern usage and layering, so you might wanna like give this chart a good re-look again; btw if you do need my assistance you could shoot me highlight on discord and ill try to be online and other things
good luck with rankos again
dont kds this btw
Blue - Accepted and fixed
Yellow - Fixed, but may need some additional checking
Red - Rejected
Purple - Will be considered/Unsure
Green - Note/Comment
Yellow - Fixed, but may need some additional checking
Red - Rejected
Purple - Will be considered/Unsure
Green - Note/Comment
Oh wow you really modded after ravioli posted on discord.
A big thank you from me
Your mod was amaze.ArcherLove wrote:
Promise me you will be there when I am down...no
Promise me...
Please...
mod
7k
00:01:127 (1127|4,1357|3,1588|2,1819|1,2050|2,2050|0) - http://puu.sh/qzseY/44bbfad0e0.jpg then 00:02:280 (2280|1) - move to 1 - Accepted
00:11:511 (11511|2,11742|1) - ctrl+right (move 1 col to the right) - Eh, no reason to reject.
00:17:742 (17742|4) - add 1 note at 2 - I cannot see a reason to add a note here. I hear nothing but the choir and the synth.
00:18:434 (18434|4,18434|1,18665|2,18665|6,18896|1,18896|4) - http://puu.sh/qzsnw/451eecca09.jpg - I dunno, it feels more uncomfortable this way? Will be considered since the current pattern isn't all that comfortable anyway.
00:23:050 (23050|1) - move to 5 or 7 - Moved to 5
00:59:279 (59279|1,59510|2) - ctrl+j - Sure why not.
01:01:817 (61817|6,61933|5) - ctrl+left (move 1 col to the left) - idk why I left it that way.
01:03:894 (63894|2,64010|3,64125|0) - 01:04:356 (64356|2) - http://puu.sh/qzsuk/f0dd551a7f.jpg - oooh. This is alot more comfortable.
01:09:202 (69202|3) - move to 2 - Well I guess it's better to drop the notes returning thing thing.
02:20:741 (140741|1) - move to 3 - Oops. Could've avoided this.
03:23:279 (203279|1,203279|2,203394|2,203394|1,203510|2,203510|1,203625|2,203625|1,203741|4,203741|5,203856|4,203856|5,203971|5,203971|4,204087|4,204087|5) - eee -> http://puu.sh/qzsHA/d65d9da730.jpg or reverse idk kkk - I prefer the current pattern but eh that's not bad either. I'll consider it.
04:10:356 (250356|4) - - add 1 note - Similar to the one way above.
04:11:048 (251048|4,251279|6,251510|4) - http://puu.sh/qzsnw/451eecca09.jpg - ^
04:44:856 - add on 6 - Oooh. Missed these kicks
04:45:087 - add on 2 - ^
-snip-
kk bb
Thanks a ton
Topic Starter
ArcherLove's mod applied.
Abrax's mod applied (all accepted).
Wolfy's mod applied but not accepting the LN removal because it will break the flow and style of this song. The section you were talking about acts as a cool-down and a slow part of the song to compensate with the harder and more livelier parts of the map.
Abrax's mod applied (all accepted).
Wolfy's mod applied but not accepting the LN removal because it will break the flow and style of this song. The section you were talking about acts as a cool-down and a slow part of the song to compensate with the harder and more livelier parts of the map.
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4k
Okay, it's done. I hope it helps 00:09:665 (9665|0,9896|3) - maybe just move them to 4 and 3? I think it will give better pr
00:10:819 (10819|2,11050|1) - ctrl+h
00:14:280 (14280|1,14511|2,14742|3,14973|1,15203|2,15434|3,15665|2,15896|1,16127|2,16357|3,16588|1,16819|3,17050|2,17280|1,17511|2,17742|3,17973|2,18203|1) - in there anchors at 3 hurt me, you need to remove them, here's an example
00:25:588 (25588|3) - should be there one more note?
00:24:665 (24665|3,24665|2,24896|0,24896|1,25127|2,25127|3) - make it 43 32 21 to avoid anchor on 4
00:25:357 (25357|0) - move this to 3 and 00:25:819 (25819|2) - to 1 or 2 (do it, if you accept ^)
00:28:357 (28357|2,28588|3) - ctrl + g
00:28:819 (28819|1,28819|2) - make it 24
00:29:280 (0,29280|3,29511|2,29742|1,29973|0,30203|2,30434|1) - maybe move 00:29:280 (29280|3,29511|2) - one column left and make 00:29:742 (29742|1,29973|0,30203|2,30434|1) - stair from 4 to 1
00:31:357 (31357|1,31357|0,31588|3,31588|2) - ctrl+g
00:31:819 (31819|1,32050|0,32050|1,32280|2,32280|3,32511|0,32511|1) - i could suggest you this
00:32:511 (32511|1,32511|0,32742|3,32973|2,33203|3,33434|1,33434|0,33665|2,33896|0,34127|2,34357|3,34357|1,34588|2,34819|0,35050|3,35050|1,35280|2,35511|0,35742|3,35742|1,35973|2) - you should work more on pitch in there, I would do it like this
00:36:203 (36203|2,36203|0,36550|2,36550|1,36896|1,36896|0,37127|0,37127|2,37473|1,37473|3,37819|2,37819|0,38050|3,38050|1,38396|2,38396|3,38742|2,38742|1,38973|0,38973|2,39319|1,39319|3,39665|2,39665|1) - pitch again, it can be done better
btw 00:38:742 (38742|2,38742|1,38973|2,38973|0) - these are the same sound
00:39:896 (39896|2,39896|3,40011|0,40011|1,40242|0,40242|1,40357|3,40357|2,40588|2,40588|3,40695|0,40695|1,40909|0,40909|1,41016|3,41016|2) - you can do better sv than this, it doesn't change anything, try making it more intensive. you can do it like putting on 00:39:896 (39896|2,39896|3) - 1,15x and on 00:40:127 - putting 0,85x and do it identically at the rest
00:40:588 (40588|3,40588|2,40695|1,40695|0,40909|1,40909|0,41016|3,41016|2) - change layer in there, these aren't same as 00:39:896 (39896|2,39896|3,40011|1,40011|0,40242|1,40242|0,40357|3,40357|2) - you can do 13 31 or 23 14
00:41:257 (41257|0) - maybe make it longer? i recommend to extend it to 00:41:619, sound is longer than 1/2th
I won't comment much on the ln parts, because for me they're weird. You should consider re-layering them with pitch revelance, because it's sometimes weird. I'll only point out obvious errors or sth.
00:41:741 (41741|3,41856|0) - these are ONE sound
00:50:741 (50741|2) - make the start of this ln a note at 4 and add LN starting from 2/8th (first yellow line) to the end of old ln end in third column
01:08:971 (68971|3) - maybe end it at white line?
01:10:356 (70356|3) - move it to 3 for pitch
01:24:317 (84317|1) - make it 2 notes, according to 01:25:010 (85010|0,85010|1) -
01:32:048 (92048|1,92279|0) - make them one ln, if you wanna map pitch shifts, then map also things like in 01:29:741 (89741|2) - at blue line is pitch shift
02:02:971 (122971|3,123087|0) - they are 2 separate sounds, do not apply point from 00:41:741
02:09:202 (129202|1,129279|2,129433|1,129510|2,129664|1,129741|2) - make them notes, it's a bit hard to play and can make people lose acc
02:12:317 (132317|3) - but these are same sound
02:14:279 (134279|0,134366|1,134452|2) - wrong snap, make them just 1/4th lns
02:15:087 (135087|0) - missing ln
02:22:817 (142817|2,143048|3) - they should be one ln, if pitch shift, remember to look for other pitch shifts and make them
02:31:817 (151817|3) - move to 3
02:48:664 (168664|2) - this should be 2 1/2th lns
02:54:664 (174664|3,174894|2) - one sound
03:00:664 (180664|1) - add note
03:01:125 (181125|3) - remove it
03:01:241 (181241|0) - move it to 4 and do it like this or sth
03:02:510 (182510|1,182741|2) - again one sound, if pitch shift blahblah
03:08:048 (188048|2,188279|3) - ^^^^
03:08:048 (188048|2,188279|3) - ^
04:38:510 (278510|1,278741|0) - ^
05:10:817 (310817|1,311048|0) - ctrl+h and move one column left
00:10:819 (10819|2,11050|1) - ctrl+h
00:14:280 (14280|1,14511|2,14742|3,14973|1,15203|2,15434|3,15665|2,15896|1,16127|2,16357|3,16588|1,16819|3,17050|2,17280|1,17511|2,17742|3,17973|2,18203|1) - in there anchors at 3 hurt me, you need to remove them, here's an example
00:25:588 (25588|3) - should be there one more note?
00:24:665 (24665|3,24665|2,24896|0,24896|1,25127|2,25127|3) - make it 43 32 21 to avoid anchor on 4
00:25:357 (25357|0) - move this to 3 and 00:25:819 (25819|2) - to 1 or 2 (do it, if you accept ^)
00:28:357 (28357|2,28588|3) - ctrl + g
00:28:819 (28819|1,28819|2) - make it 24
00:29:280 (0,29280|3,29511|2,29742|1,29973|0,30203|2,30434|1) - maybe move 00:29:280 (29280|3,29511|2) - one column left and make 00:29:742 (29742|1,29973|0,30203|2,30434|1) - stair from 4 to 1
00:31:357 (31357|1,31357|0,31588|3,31588|2) - ctrl+g
00:31:819 (31819|1,32050|0,32050|1,32280|2,32280|3,32511|0,32511|1) - i could suggest you this
00:32:511 (32511|1,32511|0,32742|3,32973|2,33203|3,33434|1,33434|0,33665|2,33896|0,34127|2,34357|3,34357|1,34588|2,34819|0,35050|3,35050|1,35280|2,35511|0,35742|3,35742|1,35973|2) - you should work more on pitch in there, I would do it like this
00:36:203 (36203|2,36203|0,36550|2,36550|1,36896|1,36896|0,37127|0,37127|2,37473|1,37473|3,37819|2,37819|0,38050|3,38050|1,38396|2,38396|3,38742|2,38742|1,38973|0,38973|2,39319|1,39319|3,39665|2,39665|1) - pitch again, it can be done better
btw 00:38:742 (38742|2,38742|1,38973|2,38973|0) - these are the same sound
00:39:896 (39896|2,39896|3,40011|0,40011|1,40242|0,40242|1,40357|3,40357|2,40588|2,40588|3,40695|0,40695|1,40909|0,40909|1,41016|3,41016|2) - you can do better sv than this, it doesn't change anything, try making it more intensive. you can do it like putting on 00:39:896 (39896|2,39896|3) - 1,15x and on 00:40:127 - putting 0,85x and do it identically at the rest
00:40:588 (40588|3,40588|2,40695|1,40695|0,40909|1,40909|0,41016|3,41016|2) - change layer in there, these aren't same as 00:39:896 (39896|2,39896|3,40011|1,40011|0,40242|1,40242|0,40357|3,40357|2) - you can do 13 31 or 23 14
00:41:257 (41257|0) - maybe make it longer? i recommend to extend it to 00:41:619, sound is longer than 1/2th
I won't comment much on the ln parts, because for me they're weird. You should consider re-layering them with pitch revelance, because it's sometimes weird. I'll only point out obvious errors or sth.
00:41:741 (41741|3,41856|0) - these are ONE sound
00:50:741 (50741|2) - make the start of this ln a note at 4 and add LN starting from 2/8th (first yellow line) to the end of old ln end in third column
01:08:971 (68971|3) - maybe end it at white line?
01:10:356 (70356|3) - move it to 3 for pitch
01:24:317 (84317|1) - make it 2 notes, according to 01:25:010 (85010|0,85010|1) -
01:32:048 (92048|1,92279|0) - make them one ln, if you wanna map pitch shifts, then map also things like in 01:29:741 (89741|2) - at blue line is pitch shift
02:02:971 (122971|3,123087|0) - they are 2 separate sounds, do not apply point from 00:41:741
02:09:202 (129202|1,129279|2,129433|1,129510|2,129664|1,129741|2) - make them notes, it's a bit hard to play and can make people lose acc
02:12:317 (132317|3) - but these are same sound
02:14:279 (134279|0,134366|1,134452|2) - wrong snap, make them just 1/4th lns
02:15:087 (135087|0) - missing ln
02:22:817 (142817|2,143048|3) - they should be one ln, if pitch shift, remember to look for other pitch shifts and make them
02:31:817 (151817|3) - move to 3
02:48:664 (168664|2) - this should be 2 1/2th lns
02:54:664 (174664|3,174894|2) - one sound
03:00:664 (180664|1) - add note
03:01:125 (181125|3) - remove it
03:01:241 (181241|0) - move it to 4 and do it like this or sth
03:02:510 (182510|1,182741|2) - again one sound, if pitch shift blahblah
03:08:048 (188048|2,188279|3) - ^^^^
03:08:048 (188048|2,188279|3) - ^
04:38:510 (278510|1,278741|0) - ^
05:10:817 (310817|1,311048|0) - ctrl+h and move one column left
[ Gyuso ]
hi hi raveille n minseo NM req from
feel free to reject, just my suggestion
Nice map Goodluck
feel free to reject, just my suggestion
[4k]
00:17:050 (17050|2,17511|2,17973|2,18434|2,18665|2,19127|2,19357|2) - much note in col 3 maybe u can spread it
cuz u make 00:38:396 (38396|2,38742|2,38973|2) - , 00:38:396 (38396|2) - maybe move to 1
01:20:510 (80510|1) - move to 3 for balance
02:05:971 (125971|3) - move to 3 i can't find why u make jack here
02:06:894 (126894|2) - move to 2
02:16:587 (136587|2,136702|0,136817|1,136933|0,137048|1,137164|2,137279|0,137279|1) - over left hand plz re arrange
03:02:048 (182048|1,182048|2,182048|3) - why 4 note ? 3 enough for cymbal, remove col 3
03:18:664 - add note again for cymbal
03:20:510 - ^
03:21:894 - ^
03:53:510 (233510|3) - move to 3
03:53:741 - add note again for cymbal
start here 03:53:741 - why u put LN only ? i think same with first part 00:01:127 -
04:56:971 (296971|1,297202|1,297664|1,297894|1,298125|1,298471|1,298702|1) - over again in col 2 maybe u should spread it
sorry i can't mod 7k 00:17:050 (17050|2,17511|2,17973|2,18434|2,18665|2,19127|2,19357|2) - much note in col 3 maybe u can spread it
cuz u make 00:38:396 (38396|2,38742|2,38973|2) - , 00:38:396 (38396|2) - maybe move to 1
01:20:510 (80510|1) - move to 3 for balance
02:05:971 (125971|3) - move to 3 i can't find why u make jack here
02:06:894 (126894|2) - move to 2
02:16:587 (136587|2,136702|0,136817|1,136933|0,137048|1,137164|2,137279|0,137279|1) - over left hand plz re arrange
03:02:048 (182048|1,182048|2,182048|3) - why 4 note ? 3 enough for cymbal, remove col 3
03:18:664 - add note again for cymbal
03:20:510 - ^
03:21:894 - ^
03:53:510 (233510|3) - move to 3
03:53:741 - add note again for cymbal
start here 03:53:741 - why u put LN only ? i think same with first part 00:01:127 -
04:56:971 (296971|1,297202|1,297664|1,297894|1,298125|1,298471|1,298702|1) - over again in col 2 maybe u should spread it
Nice map Goodluck
NM delivery
Hii Raveille >w<)/
I'm fall In love with this song <3
Here take my Star >w<
for this time i just mod 4K one qwq i'm still learning 7K note structure
Kolom
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[General]
Hmm about the 4K diff name.. how about "Pinky Promise" :>> it's more good in my opinion '3'
Hmm about the 4K diff name.. how about "Pinky Promise" :>> it's more good in my opinion '3'
[Pinky Swear]
00:41:257 (41257|0) - this LN should be end on white tick imo
00:41:971 (41971|2) - delte there's no kick,or snare sound right there
00:45:202 (45202|1) - actually you can separated this not into 2 LN the second one starts from here 00:45:317 -
00:53:741 - 01:05:856 (65856|1) - 01:57:779 (117779|2) - ghosting
00:55:125 (55125|1,55125|0) - 01:54:202 (114202|3,114202|0) - just 2 notes?? this one has 3 notes 00:54:202 (54202|0,54202|1,54202|2) - ( i see there's a lot of Cymbal sound with just 2 notes and also cymbal sound with 3 notes concisteny :>>)
01:09:433 (69433|0) - why just one there's a kick right there D:
01:11:279 (71279|3,71279|1) - just 2??? it has Loud Cymbal there
01:12:202 (72202|1) - 01:17:741 (77741|1) - 01:33:202 (93202|3) - 01:49:817 (109817|0) - 02:21:202 (141202|0) - and many more delete there's just a snare... (i see there's a snare with 2 notes and 1 notes.. consistency please :>)
01:13:010 (73010|1) - 01:13:933 (73933|1) - following what?? if it's a guitar sound the snap should be on 1/6
01:25:933 (85933|0) - wrong snap should be on 1/6 snap
01:32:741 (92741|1) - 01:47:510 (107510|2) - Should be 2 note for emphasis and also there's a snare sound too
01:39:317 - 01:59:625 - 03:00:548 - missing kick
01:56:510 - 01:58:356 - 02:00:202 - missing hithat
02:00:433 (120433|2) - why just one D: there's a cymbal sound there
02:09:433 (129433|0) - delete.. there's no kick sound
03:00:664 (180664|1,180664|3) - why just 2?? there's a cymbal sound D: concistensy please
03:00:894 (180894|1,181010|3) - CTRL + J?? it's pretty hard to read this 03:01:010 (181010|3) - note in collum 4
Rest of them it's just concistency problem :>>
00:41:257 (41257|0) - this LN should be end on white tick imo
00:41:971 (41971|2) - delte there's no kick,or snare sound right there
00:45:202 (45202|1) - actually you can separated this not into 2 LN the second one starts from here 00:45:317 -
00:53:741 - 01:05:856 (65856|1) - 01:57:779 (117779|2) - ghosting
00:55:125 (55125|1,55125|0) - 01:54:202 (114202|3,114202|0) - just 2 notes?? this one has 3 notes 00:54:202 (54202|0,54202|1,54202|2) - ( i see there's a lot of Cymbal sound with just 2 notes and also cymbal sound with 3 notes concisteny :>>)
01:09:433 (69433|0) - why just one there's a kick right there D:
01:11:279 (71279|3,71279|1) - just 2??? it has Loud Cymbal there
01:12:202 (72202|1) - 01:17:741 (77741|1) - 01:33:202 (93202|3) - 01:49:817 (109817|0) - 02:21:202 (141202|0) - and many more delete there's just a snare... (i see there's a snare with 2 notes and 1 notes.. consistency please :>)
01:13:010 (73010|1) - 01:13:933 (73933|1) - following what?? if it's a guitar sound the snap should be on 1/6
01:25:933 (85933|0) - wrong snap should be on 1/6 snap
01:32:741 (92741|1) - 01:47:510 (107510|2) - Should be 2 note for emphasis and also there's a snare sound too
01:39:317 - 01:59:625 - 03:00:548 - missing kick
01:56:510 - 01:58:356 - 02:00:202 - missing hithat
02:00:433 (120433|2) - why just one D: there's a cymbal sound there
02:09:433 (129433|0) - delete.. there's no kick sound
03:00:664 (180664|1,180664|3) - why just 2?? there's a cymbal sound D: concistensy please
03:00:894 (180894|1,181010|3) - CTRL + J?? it's pretty hard to read this 03:01:010 (181010|3) - note in collum 4
Rest of them it's just concistency problem :>>
That's all my mod owo..
It's a good Map and Nice SB too uwu
(anyway can we mutual qwq i've add you a long long time ago raveille)
Good Luck >w<)/
Topic Starter
Added ^~^ Also THANKS FOR STAR WJDDKDKSOJAJD-[Hotaru]- wrote:
cute things
Also, thanks for all the feedback and mods I've been getting. School week now so no laptop at the moment, will get to them soon :>
hai , NM request as raveille request.
i think i will just mod 7k , but since the SR is too big idk it will be help or not xD
okay here we go
7k Column Guide
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i think i will just mod 7k , but since the SR is too big idk it will be help or not xD
okay here we go
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mod
thanks for requesting and good luck , the song is nice btw v:MS2000 7k Everlasting Promise : i think it will be better if MinSeo's Everlasting 7k Promise xD (just ignore this xD)
Increase OD to 8 or 7.5
00:14:050 (14050|4,14280|3,14511|2,14742|1,14973|2) - this is should be like this its have better pitch relevancy, if this is applied i suggest you to move 00:13:819 (13819|1) - and 00:15:203 (15203|3,15434|4,15665|6) -
00:21:319 - missing notes? i hear piano with 25% playback , suggest you to place single on 5
00:35:050 (35050|0) - move this to 5 or 7
00:35:973 (35973|2,36203|1) - ctrl + j
00:58:356 (58356|3) - delete this make it same with 00:58:817 (58817|3,58817|1) - , i prefer just make it all double 1 LNs and 1single xD
01:26:971 (86971|0) - delete the sound same like 01:26:741 (86741|3,86741|4) -
01:28:817 (88817|5,89048|6) - delete , i think its too much to present hi-hat. do it in all notes like this
01:40:010 (100010|0,100010|5,100125|1,100125|4,100241|3,100241|2) - suggestion 01:40:125 - i place this as triple because it snare
01:55:356 (115356|2) - delete , its too much
02:13:125 - missing notes?
02:20:741 (140741|2) - place in 7
02:23:971 (143971|3) - move to 2
02:28:356 (148356|3) - move to 2
02:44:510 (164510|5,164510|0) - make this single
03:29:856 - 03:30:087 - idk why this place is so empty
03:39:087 - col 1 , so empty , i suggest you to move some notes there
04:31:471 - make this jumptrill
05:01:125 (301125|0) - move to 7 , pitch
05:01:817 (301817|2,302048|0) - ctrl + J
05:20:399 (320399|2,320462|0,320524|1,320524|6) - what is this? , its just a bass and piano , make it LNs with ending notes
05:22:024 (322024|2) - make it double , and dont make it a LNs , just normal notes
tbh , i cant mod like on kiai or melody , idk how i feel that part is forced to be overnotes place. and i cant see anything.
i suggest you to decrease the value of hihat , double hihat is too much i think , to me its an overdozes value and forced to be so hard. just in case i just want to make this map is fun to play.
sorry for bad english , i hope you understand what im saying about xD
Increase OD to 8 or 7.5
00:14:050 (14050|4,14280|3,14511|2,14742|1,14973|2) - this is should be like this its have better pitch relevancy, if this is applied i suggest you to move 00:13:819 (13819|1) - and 00:15:203 (15203|3,15434|4,15665|6) -
00:21:319 - missing notes? i hear piano with 25% playback , suggest you to place single on 5
00:35:050 (35050|0) - move this to 5 or 7
00:35:973 (35973|2,36203|1) - ctrl + j
00:58:356 (58356|3) - delete this make it same with 00:58:817 (58817|3,58817|1) - , i prefer just make it all double 1 LNs and 1single xD
01:26:971 (86971|0) - delete the sound same like 01:26:741 (86741|3,86741|4) -
01:28:817 (88817|5,89048|6) - delete , i think its too much to present hi-hat. do it in all notes like this
01:40:010 (100010|0,100010|5,100125|1,100125|4,100241|3,100241|2) - suggestion 01:40:125 - i place this as triple because it snare
01:55:356 (115356|2) - delete , its too much
02:13:125 - missing notes?
02:20:741 (140741|2) - place in 7
02:23:971 (143971|3) - move to 2
02:28:356 (148356|3) - move to 2
02:44:510 (164510|5,164510|0) - make this single
03:29:856 - 03:30:087 - idk why this place is so empty
03:39:087 - col 1 , so empty , i suggest you to move some notes there
04:31:471 - make this jumptrill
05:01:125 (301125|0) - move to 7 , pitch
05:01:817 (301817|2,302048|0) - ctrl + J
05:20:399 (320399|2,320462|0,320524|1,320524|6) - what is this? , its just a bass and piano , make it LNs with ending notes
05:22:024 (322024|2) - make it double , and dont make it a LNs , just normal notes
tbh , i cant mod like on kiai or melody , idk how i feel that part is forced to be overnotes place. and i cant see anything.
i suggest you to decrease the value of hihat , double hihat is too much i think , to me its an overdozes value and forced to be so hard. just in case i just want to make this map is fun to play.
sorry for bad english , i hope you understand what im saying about xD
Blue - Accepted and fixed
Yellow - Fixed, but may need some additional checking
Red - Rejected
Purple - Will be considered/Unsure
Green - Note/Comment
Yellow - Fixed, but may need some additional checking
Red - Rejected
Purple - Will be considered/Unsure
Green - Note/Comment
Oh look a mod.
Thanks for the mod!Alsty- wrote:
hai , NM request as raveille request. - o/
i think i will just mod 7k , but since the SR is too big idk it will be help or not xD - Nah, every mod counts.
okay here we go - wheeeeeee7k Column Guide
1|2|3|4|5|6|7modthanks for requesting and good luck , the song is nice btw v:MS2000 7k Everlasting Promise : i think it will be better if MinSeo's Everlasting 7k Promise xD (just ignore this xD) - Ohhh. Everlasting 7K Promise sounds pretty good. But idk, I didn't choose the diff name. My naming sense isn't something I can boast about. I'll ask Raveille for his opinion.
Increase OD to 8 or 7.5 - Ehhh... This diff is quite noodly so idk if I should make the OD that high. I'll try looking for others' opinions as well.
00:14:050 (14050|4,14280|3,14511|2,14742|1,14973|2) - this is should be like this its have better pitch relevancy, if this is applied i suggest you to move 00:13:819 (13819|1) - and 00:15:203 (15203|3,15434|4,15665|6) - Applied.
00:21:319 - missing notes? i hear piano with 25% playback , suggest you to place single on 5 - Placed one on 7 instead
00:35:050 (35050|0) - move this to 5 or 7 - I see no reason to do so. It's more comfortable to hit there anyway.
00:35:973 (35973|2,36203|1) - ctrl + j - Ehhh. Sure I see no reason to reject.
00:58:356 (58356|3) - delete this make it same with 00:58:817 (58817|3,58817|1) - , i prefer just make it all double 1 LNs and 1single xD - Sort of a reject and an accept at the same time. A note at a different place was at the wrong place.
01:26:971 (86971|0) - delete the sound same like 01:26:741 (86741|3,86741|4) - - I hear a kick, though I can't say that I'm 100% confident.
01:28:817 (88817|5,89048|6) - delete , i think its too much to present hi-hat. do it in all notes like this - Same as above.
01:40:010 (100010|0,100010|5,100125|1,100125|4,100241|3,100241|2) - suggestion 01:40:125 - i place this as triple because it snare - Half accept. The snare is there but there's also kicks in all 1/4s there as well.
01:55:356 (115356|2) - delete , its too much - Ooops.
02:13:125 - missing notes? - Somewhere nearby
02:20:741 (140741|2) - place in 7 - Sure
02:23:971 (143971|3) - move to 2 - It's there on purpose and I won't change it unless there is a good reason to do so
02:28:356 (148356|3) - move to 2 - I prefer it here.
02:44:510 (164510|5,164510|0) - make this single - okay
03:29:856 - 03:30:087 - idk why this place is so empty - Because I cannot pick up any sounds to justify a note there.
03:39:087 - col 1 , so empty , i suggest you to move some notes there - Eh okay.
04:31:471 - make this jumptrill - I like my current pattern. Side note : I assumed that by jumptrill you meant something like this.
05:01:125 (301125|0) - move to 7 , pitch - Eh okay. TBH I didn't care too much about pitch relevancy while mapping this
05:01:817 (301817|2,302048|0) - ctrl + J - Sure?
05:20:399 (320399|2,320462|0,320524|1,320524|6) - what is this? , its just a bass and piano , make it LNs with ending notes - It is bass and piano. And meh I'll leave the piano notes as short notes.
05:22:024 (322024|2) - make it double , and dont make it a LNs , just normal notes - The short LN is good enough for the emphasis.
tbh , i cant mod like on kiai or melody , idk how i feel that part is forced to be overnotes place. and i cant see anything. - Well, the layering is additive, and the guitar is 1 LN, kicks are 2 SNs, so 3 notes in total. Does get a little cluttered up but it seems playable. I'll need to clean it up more for better playability though.
i suggest you to decrease the value of hihat , double hihat is too much i think , to me its an overdozes value and forced to be so hard. just in case i just want to make this map is fun to play. - No hihats are doubles. Unless I goofed up somewhere and accidentally added another note. I assume all doubles are kicks (though there is a high chance I forgot about another sound that uses doubles.)
sorry for bad english , i hope you understand what im saying about xD - But your English was good?
Topic Starter
Applied all applicable mods to 4k but I do have some notes to point out for those who are wondering at the moment:
03:53:741 - to 04:24:664 -
THIS IS PURPOSELY DONE. It's to allow a cool down and a slow section in contrast to the opening. Imagine this song is based on a story of a girl waiting for her lover to return, and finally she sees him, and suddenly time slows down with the choir being a major role in this scene. I am trying to portray this.
tl;dr This portion is to portray a slow scene of the song.
too much vocal sound + drumb beats
makes it quite boring.
There are much more boring songs out there. What we are trying to portray here is a story. We try to fit in the mood, so if it feels boring it is most likely you and not us.
Remapping is not an option. Thinking the easy way out is to just "remap" doesn't help us learn but makes us more annoyed.
For difficulty names: I have to differentiate between 4 and 7K, thus they exist inside the difficulty names. If not just having Pinky Swear, and MS2000's 7K Everlasting Promise looks weird.
With that said, Pinky Promise sounds good but then having Everlasting Promise as a name would be a little conflicting with the titles. Everlasting 7K Promise sounds a lot weirder as I want the keymode first followed by the actual difficulty title.
That's all
03:53:741 - to 04:24:664 -
THIS IS PURPOSELY DONE. It's to allow a cool down and a slow section in contrast to the opening. Imagine this song is based on a story of a girl waiting for her lover to return, and finally she sees him, and suddenly time slows down with the choir being a major role in this scene. I am trying to portray this.
tl;dr This portion is to portray a slow scene of the song.
too much vocal sound + drumb beats
makes it quite boring.
There are much more boring songs out there. What we are trying to portray here is a story. We try to fit in the mood, so if it feels boring it is most likely you and not us.
Remapping is not an option. Thinking the easy way out is to just "remap" doesn't help us learn but makes us more annoyed.
For difficulty names: I have to differentiate between 4 and 7K, thus they exist inside the difficulty names. If not just having Pinky Swear, and MS2000's 7K Everlasting Promise looks weird.
With that said, Pinky Promise sounds good but then having Everlasting Promise as a name would be a little conflicting with the titles. Everlasting 7K Promise sounds a lot weirder as I want the keymode first followed by the actual difficulty title.
That's all
KaySon_old_1
4k pinky swear~
LETS DO THIS!!!!!!
00:29:742 - prefer to map to voice here
00:50:894 - what are sound are mapping too, if dunno cause of filler rule, delete this part
01:10:356 - for the patterns below, try adding a bigger sound for the heighten part of the voice like this (my preference)
01:11:741 - if your gonna map the drum finish by adding doubles, keep it consistent with the sound, don't add random doubles if you are trying to go for that, unless you want to keep the doubles, then just have it as triples
01:25:817 (85817|3,85894|1,85971|0) - i prefer this
01:31:125 (91125|0,91125|1,91356|2,91356|3) - i prefer this|
01:31:587 - for some of the LNs in the map, the voice has a small cut off in between each sentence or w/e. try releasing some of the LNs on blue instead
01:39:664 (99664|0,99779|1,99894|3,100010|2) - these are soft sounds, not to add doubles
01:39:664 (99664|0,99779|1,99894|3,100010|2,109587|2,109817|1,110048|2,110279|1) - make LNs shorter
01:39:664 (99664|0,99779|1,99894|3,100010|2,109587|2,109817|1,110048|2,110279|1) - repetitive as pattern before last
02:09:202 (129202|1,129202|0,129279|2,129279|3) - map to what? not needed lol
02:09:202 (129202|0,129279|1,129433|3,129510|2,129664|0,129741|1) - my idea i guess
02:44:741 (164741|1) - move to 1
02:45:196 - again here, if you're gonna have doubles, have louder sounds have triples like the next 2 bass drums
03:00:202 - feels cluttered to me with the LN, might have to change
03:03:433 - try mapping to the piano now for this part since the rest of the map is mainly voice, repetitive
03:15:587 (195587|1,195664|3,195779|0) - ehhh, change, noticeable filler notes or maybe change how it looks
03:15:587 (195587|1,195664|3,195779|0) - sudden diff spike? towards the end have the triples there cause the drums are fading in
03:15:587 (195587|1,195664|3,195779|0) - can start mapping to the guitar if you want here
03:38:741 (218741|3,218741|2,218856|3,218856|2,218971|3,218971|1,218971|0) - prefer this, easier on the jack pattern
03:40:356 - could add short LNs here
03:42:664 - yeah map to the guitar solo maybe
03:53:749 - the background sounds could be mapped here with the LNs instead of it being just the voice
04:12:202 - more notes from this point on
04:56:510 (296510|2,296741|0) - added these, the LN was off, time wise
05:00:548 (300548|0) - end the LNs the white line below where its at now
05:12:433 - the next 2 patterns, change it up, repetitive
DONE!~
LETS DO THIS!!!!!!
00:29:742 - prefer to map to voice here
00:50:894 - what are sound are mapping too, if dunno cause of filler rule, delete this part
01:10:356 - for the patterns below, try adding a bigger sound for the heighten part of the voice like this (my preference)
01:11:741 - if your gonna map the drum finish by adding doubles, keep it consistent with the sound, don't add random doubles if you are trying to go for that, unless you want to keep the doubles, then just have it as triples
01:25:817 (85817|3,85894|1,85971|0) - i prefer this
01:31:125 (91125|0,91125|1,91356|2,91356|3) - i prefer this|
01:31:587 - for some of the LNs in the map, the voice has a small cut off in between each sentence or w/e. try releasing some of the LNs on blue instead
01:39:664 (99664|0,99779|1,99894|3,100010|2) - these are soft sounds, not to add doubles
01:39:664 (99664|0,99779|1,99894|3,100010|2,109587|2,109817|1,110048|2,110279|1) - make LNs shorter
01:39:664 (99664|0,99779|1,99894|3,100010|2,109587|2,109817|1,110048|2,110279|1) - repetitive as pattern before last
02:09:202 (129202|1,129202|0,129279|2,129279|3) - map to what? not needed lol
02:09:202 (129202|0,129279|1,129433|3,129510|2,129664|0,129741|1) - my idea i guess
02:44:741 (164741|1) - move to 1
02:45:196 - again here, if you're gonna have doubles, have louder sounds have triples like the next 2 bass drums
03:00:202 - feels cluttered to me with the LN, might have to change
03:03:433 - try mapping to the piano now for this part since the rest of the map is mainly voice, repetitive
03:15:587 (195587|1,195664|3,195779|0) - ehhh, change, noticeable filler notes or maybe change how it looks
03:15:587 (195587|1,195664|3,195779|0) - sudden diff spike? towards the end have the triples there cause the drums are fading in
03:15:587 (195587|1,195664|3,195779|0) - can start mapping to the guitar if you want here
03:38:741 (218741|3,218741|2,218856|3,218856|2,218971|3,218971|1,218971|0) - prefer this, easier on the jack pattern
03:40:356 - could add short LNs here
03:42:664 - yeah map to the guitar solo maybe
03:53:749 - the background sounds could be mapped here with the LNs instead of it being just the voice
04:12:202 - more notes from this point on
04:56:510 (296510|2,296741|0) - added these, the LN was off, time wise
05:00:548 (300548|0) - end the LNs the white line below where its at now
05:12:433 - the next 2 patterns, change it up, repetitive
DONE!~
Hi from CloudHolic's Mania modding queue!
But I'm so sorry to tell you that I can't mod your map.
Tbh, it's not a problem that can be solved with modding.
Your map is too vocal-dependent, contrary to almost mania maps.
Non-vocal part is quite good, but in vocal part, your pattern is too simple - It's just 1 LN for vocal, and drums.
And it makes your map too boring to play. What's worse, it's drain time makes it more tedious.
I bet no 7k player can play this simple pattern with 5 mins.
So your map needs remap. I suggest two things.
1. Try mapping instruments, not vocal, like many mania maps.
2. If you want to keep vocal, then try it more fun to play.
I recommend to see this beatmap, Petit Rabbits's - Daydream cafe (you remix) made by frolica.
Although it's 6.7* and 175BPM, I think you can learn vocal mapping from this map.
No kd, since I don't do any actual mod. ;w;
But I'm so sorry to tell you that I can't mod your map.
Tbh, it's not a problem that can be solved with modding.
Your map is too vocal-dependent, contrary to almost mania maps.
Non-vocal part is quite good, but in vocal part, your pattern is too simple - It's just 1 LN for vocal, and drums.
And it makes your map too boring to play. What's worse, it's drain time makes it more tedious.
I bet no 7k player can play this simple pattern with 5 mins.
So your map needs remap. I suggest two things.
1. Try mapping instruments, not vocal, like many mania maps.
2. If you want to keep vocal, then try it more fun to play.
I recommend to see this beatmap, Petit Rabbits's - Daydream cafe (you remix) made by frolica.
Although it's 6.7* and 175BPM, I think you can learn vocal mapping from this map.
No kd, since I don't do any actual mod. ;w;
Blue - Accepted and fixed
Yellow - Fixed, but may need some additional checking
Red - Rejected
Purple - Will be considered/Unsure
Green - Note/Comment
Yellow - Fixed, but may need some additional checking
Red - Rejected
Purple - Will be considered/Unsure
Green - Note/Comment
Oh well 2 people telling me to remap.CloudHolic wrote:
Hi from CloudHolic's Mania modding queue!
But I'm so sorry to tell you that I can't mod your map. -
Tbh, it's not a problem that can be solved with modding.
Your map is too vocal-dependent, contrary to almost mania maps.- meh. Just because it's niche shouldn't make it bad.
Non-vocal part is quite good, but in vocal part, your pattern is too simple - It's just 1 LN for vocal, and drums. - I'll see if I can make the vocal parts more complex, though it won't be easy/
And it makes your map too boring to play. What's worse, it's drain time makes it more tedious. - Subjective
I bet no 7k player can play this simple pattern with 5 mins. - Well certainly there are who can play this. That was a bit extreme.
So your map needs remap. I suggest two things.
1. Try mapping instruments, not vocal, like many mania maps. - I'm fine with removing the vocal mapping if it gives me too much headaches but if I remove vocal mapping, I'm not sure if I'll be able to find an instrument, uhhh, more complex than the vocals. Specific suggestions for which instruments would have been nice.
2. If you want to keep vocal, then try it more fun to play. - "Fun" is too subjective. I would've preferred something more objective. But then as you mentioned above, I won't deny my diff's simplicity, which is something I will be fixing over time.
I recommend to see this beatmap, Petit Rabbits's - Daydream cafe (you remix) made by frolica.
Although it's 6.7* and 175BPM, I think you can learn vocal mapping from this map. - 2hard4me
No kd, since I don't do any actual mod. ;w;
I'll start considering, but I probably won't be doing so unless someone gives me a more detailed explanation why.
Don't misunderstand.
I don't dislike remapping.
I remap whenever I feel that a map is bad enough and requires too much fixing.
But I expect something a little less than about this much get convinced (and that post didn't even ask me to remap.)
Not in terms of volume (not even I would want to read an essay while playing osu), but in terms of reasoning.
No offense to the modder though.
I can understand how it feels to mod something that looks like
Hello Raveille~ Here's my mod!
+These are just my suggestions! Accepting these or not is totally depended on you.
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This song is great :> I love it
Then, Good luck on your map!
+These are just my suggestions! Accepting these or not is totally depended on you.
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4K Pinky Swear
AiMod
- 00:41:740 - Object isn't snapped!
- Check 'Display epilepsy warning' because this map contains storyboard (which is made by awesome Protastic101)
- It would be great if you add some hitsounds (Including custom hitsounds). I can help you adding hitsounds if you want~
- 00:19:588 - Delete (Unnecessary green line)
- 00:41:257 - Delete (Unnecessary green line)
- 01:40:817 - Delete (Unnecessary green line)
- 02:32:048 - Delete (Unnecessary green line)
- 03:17:279 - Delete (Unnecessary green line) (N:C1 and N:C2 look same because this map has no custom hitsound)
- 04:25:125 - Delete (Unnecessary green line)
- 04:29:741 - Delete (Unnecessary green line)
- 04:44:971 - Delete (Unnecessary green line)
Ok, then, let's start :>
- 00:29:742 - add one note on column 1 for emphasis on the vocal as you did at 00:22:357 (22357|1,22357|3) here
- 00:40:934 (40934|2,40934|3,41050|1,41050|0,41280|3,41280|2,41280|1) - I think those notes are snapped wrongly. 1/12 -> 00:40:896 for First one, 00:41:011 for Second one, 00:41:242 for Last one
- 01:01:933 - add one note on column 3 (missing note)
- 01:03:894 - add one note on column 1 (for the drum + vocal as you did from 00:56:510 )
- 01:11:048 (71048|3) - I recommend you to delete it in order to emphasize the vocal and the change of section (or mood)
- From 01:11:279 to 01:23:741 - Try following some drums. For example) http://puu.sh/qK9DU/8c30a9a51c.jpg - http://puu.sh/qK9Iw/1ca5449afd.jpg - http://puu.sh/qK9Km/4431ac63d4.jpg - http://puu.sh/qK9N3/78a49b49e0.jpg - http://puu.sh/qK9OJ/ac7950abe9.jpg Well, It's just a suggestion
- 01:59:510 (119510|2) - delete (double is quite much on this)
- 02:02:741 (122741|0) - I prefer to delete it since that sound is quite lower than 02:02:394 (122394|2,122394|1,122510|0,122510|3) these
- 02:25:125 - add one note on column 1 (same as 01:03:894 )
-+ I suggest emphasize this part more because a calm section comes after that section. +-- These are all related to this point
+-- 03:40:817 - add one note on column 1 ^
+-- 03:42:664 - add one note on column 3 ^
+-- 03:44:510 - add one note on column 4 ^
+-- 03:48:202 - add one note on column 4 ^
+-- 03:48:317 - add one note on column 2 ^
+-- 03:50:164 - add one note on column 4 ^
- 03:52:702 (232702|3) - delete AND 03:52:817 - add one note on column 4 (strong drum is not in 03:52:702, but in 03:52:817 )
- 03:53:279 - add one note on column 2 (for strong drum sound)
- 04:27:721 (267721|2,267779|1,267837|0,267894|3,267894|2) - I can hear only three drums here. I suggest you to -> 04:27:837 (267837|0) - delete AND 04:27:894 (267894|3,267894|2) - delete AND (1/12) 04:27:856 - add notes on column 1 and 4
- 04:28:010 - add one note on column 2 (there's sound)
-+ I suggest emphasize this part more because not only is it the last part of the song, but also calm section comes after that part. +--- These are all related to this point
+--- 04:47:279 - add one note on column 1
+--- 04:49:125 - add one note on column 3
+--- 04:50:971 - add one note on column 4
+--- 04:54:664 - add one note on column 1
+--- 04:54:894 (294894|0) - move to column 2
+--- 04:56:510 - add one note on column 3
- 04:56:510 (296510|0) - move to column 2 AND 04:56:741 (296741|3) - delete AND 04:56:971 (296971|0) - start this LN from 04:56:741 (the long vocal starts from 04:56:741 )
- 00:41:740 - Object isn't snapped!
- Check 'Display epilepsy warning' because this map contains storyboard (which is made by awesome Protastic101)
- It would be great if you add some hitsounds (Including custom hitsounds). I can help you adding hitsounds if you want~
- 00:19:588 - Delete (Unnecessary green line)
- 00:41:257 - Delete (Unnecessary green line)
- 01:40:817 - Delete (Unnecessary green line)
- 02:32:048 - Delete (Unnecessary green line)
- 03:17:279 - Delete (Unnecessary green line) (N:C1 and N:C2 look same because this map has no custom hitsound)
- 04:25:125 - Delete (Unnecessary green line)
- 04:29:741 - Delete (Unnecessary green line)
- 04:44:971 - Delete (Unnecessary green line)
Ok, then, let's start :>
- 00:29:742 - add one note on column 1 for emphasis on the vocal as you did at 00:22:357 (22357|1,22357|3) here
- 00:40:934 (40934|2,40934|3,41050|1,41050|0,41280|3,41280|2,41280|1) - I think those notes are snapped wrongly. 1/12 -> 00:40:896 for First one, 00:41:011 for Second one, 00:41:242 for Last one
- 01:01:933 - add one note on column 3 (missing note)
- 01:03:894 - add one note on column 1 (for the drum + vocal as you did from 00:56:510 )
- 01:11:048 (71048|3) - I recommend you to delete it in order to emphasize the vocal and the change of section (or mood)
- From 01:11:279 to 01:23:741 - Try following some drums. For example) http://puu.sh/qK9DU/8c30a9a51c.jpg - http://puu.sh/qK9Iw/1ca5449afd.jpg - http://puu.sh/qK9Km/4431ac63d4.jpg - http://puu.sh/qK9N3/78a49b49e0.jpg - http://puu.sh/qK9OJ/ac7950abe9.jpg Well, It's just a suggestion
- 01:59:510 (119510|2) - delete (double is quite much on this)
- 02:02:741 (122741|0) - I prefer to delete it since that sound is quite lower than 02:02:394 (122394|2,122394|1,122510|0,122510|3) these
- 02:25:125 - add one note on column 1 (same as 01:03:894 )
-+ I suggest emphasize this part more because a calm section comes after that section. +-- These are all related to this point
+-- 03:40:817 - add one note on column 1 ^
+-- 03:42:664 - add one note on column 3 ^
+-- 03:44:510 - add one note on column 4 ^
+-- 03:48:202 - add one note on column 4 ^
+-- 03:48:317 - add one note on column 2 ^
+-- 03:50:164 - add one note on column 4 ^
- 03:52:702 (232702|3) - delete AND 03:52:817 - add one note on column 4 (strong drum is not in 03:52:702, but in 03:52:817 )
- 03:53:279 - add one note on column 2 (for strong drum sound)
- 04:27:721 (267721|2,267779|1,267837|0,267894|3,267894|2) - I can hear only three drums here. I suggest you to -> 04:27:837 (267837|0) - delete AND 04:27:894 (267894|3,267894|2) - delete AND (1/12) 04:27:856 - add notes on column 1 and 4
- 04:28:010 - add one note on column 2 (there's sound)
-+ I suggest emphasize this part more because not only is it the last part of the song, but also calm section comes after that part. +--- These are all related to this point
+--- 04:47:279 - add one note on column 1
+--- 04:49:125 - add one note on column 3
+--- 04:50:971 - add one note on column 4
+--- 04:54:664 - add one note on column 1
+--- 04:54:894 (294894|0) - move to column 2
+--- 04:56:510 - add one note on column 3
- 04:56:510 (296510|0) - move to column 2 AND 04:56:741 (296741|3) - delete AND 04:56:971 (296971|0) - start this LN from 04:56:741 (the long vocal starts from 04:56:741 )
This song is great :> I love it
Then, Good luck on your map!
Posting here for shits and giggles until I mod this
Edit 1: MINSEO, PREPARE YOUR DIFFICULTY FOR THE ULTIMATE NERF MUA AH AH AH AH *hack hack, cough* oh dear god, someone send help, I'm dyin- *cough cough, hnerghghghghhghg* /me ded
Edit 1: MINSEO, PREPARE YOUR DIFFICULTY FOR THE ULTIMATE NERF MUA AH AH AH AH *hack hack, cough* oh dear god, someone send help, I'm dyin- *cough cough, hnerghghghghhghg* /me ded
D:Protastic101 wrote:
Posting here for shits and giggles until I mod this
Edit 1: MINSEO, PREPARE YOUR DIFFICULTY FOR THE ULTIMATE NERF MUA AH AH AH AH *hack hack, cough* oh dear god, someone send help, I'm dyin- *cough cough, hnerghghghghhghg* /me ded
hmm poke me once all mods are applied
Topic Starter
Done all necessary edits from Hollas and RedBall.
Will like to stress once again that 03:53:741 - to 04:24:664 - is basically the calm after the storm, so I only want to focus on vocals and nothing else as adding other notes ruins the feelings. If many others strongly object, I will see what I can do, in the meantime, I did not add anything in this portion.
Hollas' mod was a bit hard to understand, so some suggestions were not applied
Otherwise, thanks a lot guise!
Will like to stress once again that 03:53:741 - to 04:24:664 - is basically the calm after the storm, so I only want to focus on vocals and nothing else as adding other notes ruins the feelings. If many others strongly object, I will see what I can do, in the meantime, I did not add anything in this portion.
Hollas' mod was a bit hard to understand, so some suggestions were not applied
Otherwise, thanks a lot guise!
hiho modsu
hope it may help
Here you go , Good Luck :3 sorry if some seems hesitant , I was really 50/50 about some suggestion here so feel free
hope it may help
dadon
Check your aimod in case some of the thingys listed weren't planned
[7K Everlasting Promise]
key = 1/2/3/4/5/6/7
OD : 8 or higher
Imo 7 is fairly too easy.
00:36:550 (36550|4) - I suggest moving to 7 , I think this can be missread as a 1/2
01:00:779 (60779|3) - remove this one, note is ghosting here
01:25:048 (85048|1,85048|0) - this should be on the blue line hre : 01:25:010 (85010|0) -
01:35:741 (95741|0,95741|1,95741|6) - add one more note according to : 01:34:817 (94817|1,94817|4,94817|5,94817|6) - same sound
01:35:856 (95856|3) - there is a drum sound here , you could add one note
01:41:971 (101971|3) - you should add one more note to 3 , according to your next pattern they all have thoose double notes , example : 01:43:356 (103356|1,103356|0,103471|6,103471|5,103587|0,103587|1,103702|5,103702|6) -
02:10:125 (130125|0,130241|1) - i'm not 100% sure for this one , but it seems like being the same guitar sound fading out and not two different sounds , you could make it only one 1/2 LN if you want
02:42:894 (162894|1) - how about move to 6 , making a jack on the end of the LN instead of after a note , sounds easier imho
03:22:356 (202356|5,202356|4) - this snap sounds more like this imho
03:23:279 (203279|2,203279|1,203394|2,203394|1,203510|2,203510|1,203625|1,203625|2,203741|4,203741|5,203856|4,203856|5,203971|5,203971|4,204087|5,204087|4) - This is really tricky to get right
I'd suggest you to move the pattern every two chord or three but jacking here is kinda tricky and sudden imho
03:17:510 (197510|6,198048|0) - beside, the fact that the two LNS dosn't end on the same point feels abit weird (eventho it's not really a problem)
05:05:971 (305971|1) - add another note , according to : 05:03:894 (303894|1,303894|4,304125|6,304125|2) - , 05:04:817 (304817|2,304817|0,305048|1,305048|3) -
05:06:664 (306664|4,306894|1) - ^ add one more note to thoose two notes
[4K pinky Swear]
key=1/2/3/4
00:41:742 (41742|1) - this object isn't snapped (check ai mod here)
00:23:165 (23165|3) - the piano dosn't play here, so I suggest removing this note
00:45:399 - move to 2 ? , same pattern flow tham 00:49:125 (49125|1,49241|0,49356|2) - imo
00:50:741 (50741|3,50914|2) - The LN order is reversed, the short LN should be first then plays the second one , the guitar makes a short 1/8 , switch them position ?
01:28:817 (88817|3) - I think this should be two notes according to next pattern : 01:30:548 (90548|0,90664|1,90779|0) - or 01:36:087 (96087|2,96202|1,96317|0,96433|1,96433|2) -
01:39:433 (99433|3) - move to 2 ? , I think mini jack while holding the LN in 3 is kind of hard , it's probably okay aswell feel free
01:48:202 (108202|3,108433|2) - ctrl+J to not stack alot of notes in 4 consecutively (up to you there)
01:58:587 (118587|1) - move to 4 for hand balance
02:09:279 (129279|3,129317|3,129510|2,129510|3,129741|3,129741|2) - I usggest following the drum instead of the guitar here, I just realized it was for the guitar effect, still I think followin the drum for thoose is easier to catch up for players
^ basically make it a 1/4 pattern
03:09:433 (189433|3,189664|2) - Ctrl+J , same as earlier to make less consecutive notes in 4
03:26:971 (206971|3) - add a note here ? there is a drum sound here
03:39:779 (219779|1,219779|2,220125|2,220125|1) - shouldn't this be two notes ? same as : 03:41:625 (221625|2,221625|3,221971|0,221971|2) - or 03:43:471 (223471|2,223471|0,223817|0,223817|3) -
05:11:279 (311279|3) - add a note there is a piano sound here
[7K Everlasting Promise]
key = 1/2/3/4/5/6/7
OD : 8 or higher
Imo 7 is fairly too easy.
00:36:550 (36550|4) - I suggest moving to 7 , I think this can be missread as a 1/2
01:00:779 (60779|3) - remove this one, note is ghosting here
01:25:048 (85048|1,85048|0) - this should be on the blue line hre : 01:25:010 (85010|0) -
01:35:741 (95741|0,95741|1,95741|6) - add one more note according to : 01:34:817 (94817|1,94817|4,94817|5,94817|6) - same sound
01:35:856 (95856|3) - there is a drum sound here , you could add one note
01:41:971 (101971|3) - you should add one more note to 3 , according to your next pattern they all have thoose double notes , example : 01:43:356 (103356|1,103356|0,103471|6,103471|5,103587|0,103587|1,103702|5,103702|6) -
02:10:125 (130125|0,130241|1) - i'm not 100% sure for this one , but it seems like being the same guitar sound fading out and not two different sounds , you could make it only one 1/2 LN if you want
02:42:894 (162894|1) - how about move to 6 , making a jack on the end of the LN instead of after a note , sounds easier imho
03:22:356 (202356|5,202356|4) - this snap sounds more like this imho
03:23:279 (203279|2,203279|1,203394|2,203394|1,203510|2,203510|1,203625|1,203625|2,203741|4,203741|5,203856|4,203856|5,203971|5,203971|4,204087|5,204087|4) - This is really tricky to get right
I'd suggest you to move the pattern every two chord or three but jacking here is kinda tricky and sudden imho
03:17:510 (197510|6,198048|0) - beside, the fact that the two LNS dosn't end on the same point feels abit weird (eventho it's not really a problem)
05:05:971 (305971|1) - add another note , according to : 05:03:894 (303894|1,303894|4,304125|6,304125|2) - , 05:04:817 (304817|2,304817|0,305048|1,305048|3) -
05:06:664 (306664|4,306894|1) - ^ add one more note to thoose two notes
[4K pinky Swear]
key=1/2/3/4
00:41:742 (41742|1) - this object isn't snapped (check ai mod here)
00:23:165 (23165|3) - the piano dosn't play here, so I suggest removing this note
00:45:399 - move to 2 ? , same pattern flow tham 00:49:125 (49125|1,49241|0,49356|2) - imo
00:50:741 (50741|3,50914|2) - The LN order is reversed, the short LN should be first then plays the second one , the guitar makes a short 1/8 , switch them position ?
01:28:817 (88817|3) - I think this should be two notes according to next pattern : 01:30:548 (90548|0,90664|1,90779|0) - or 01:36:087 (96087|2,96202|1,96317|0,96433|1,96433|2) -
01:39:433 (99433|3) - move to 2 ? , I think mini jack while holding the LN in 3 is kind of hard , it's probably okay aswell feel free
01:48:202 (108202|3,108433|2) - ctrl+J to not stack alot of notes in 4 consecutively (up to you there)
01:58:587 (118587|1) - move to 4 for hand balance
02:09:279 (129279|3,129317|3,129510|2,129510|3,129741|3,129741|2) - I usggest following the drum instead of the guitar here, I just realized it was for the guitar effect, still I think followin the drum for thoose is easier to catch up for players
^ basically make it a 1/4 pattern
03:09:433 (189433|3,189664|2) - Ctrl+J , same as earlier to make less consecutive notes in 4
03:26:971 (206971|3) - add a note here ? there is a drum sound here
03:39:779 (219779|1,219779|2,220125|2,220125|1) - shouldn't this be two notes ? same as : 03:41:625 (221625|2,221625|3,221971|0,221971|2) - or 03:43:471 (223471|2,223471|0,223817|0,223817|3) -
05:11:279 (311279|3) - add a note there is a piano sound here
Here you go , Good Luck :3 sorry if some seems hesitant , I was really 50/50 about some suggestion here so feel free
Topic Starter
oops sorry Eter forgot to add your mod when I updated
tired today will do stuff tomorrow maybe if not then I'll see if I can pull time this weekend or next week ;-;
tired today will do stuff tomorrow maybe if not then I'll see if I can pull time this weekend or next week ;-;
Blue - Accepted and fixed
Yellow - Fixed, but may need some additional checking
Red - Rejected
Purple - Will be considered/Unsure
Green - Note/Comment
Yellow - Fixed, but may need some additional checking
Red - Rejected
Purple - Will be considered/Unsure
Green - Note/Comment
ooo a mod came while I was editing my diff.
Some may be invalid due to changes.
I'll explain all of the relevant ones tho.
Thanks alot for the mod!Eternalie wrote:
hiho modsu
hope it may helpdadonCheck your aimod in case some of the thingys listed weren't planned
[7K Everlasting Promise]
key = 1/2/3/4/5/6/7
OD : 8 or higher
Imo 7 is fairly too easy. - I'm currently putting more noodles so idk if OD8 will be suitable after all the noodle additions.
00:36:550 (36550|4) - I suggest moving to 7 , I think this can be missread as a 1/2 - Eh sure.
01:00:779 (60779|3) - remove this one, note is ghosting here - Oooo. Ghost note.
01:25:048 (85048|1,85048|0) - this should be on the blue line hre : 01:25:010 (85010|0) - I initially thought it was on a 1/6 but oh well. I guess I'm wrong.
01:35:741 (95741|0,95741|1,95741|6) - add one more note according to : 01:34:817 (94817|1,94817|4,94817|5,94817|6) - same sound - I somehow missed that.
01:35:856 (95856|3) - there is a drum sound here , you could add one note - Sure.
01:41:971 (101971|3) - you should add one more note to 3 , according to your next pattern they all have thoose double notes , example : 01:43:356 (103356|1,103356|0,103471|6,103471|5,103587|0,103587|1,103702|5,103702|6) - Oops.
02:10:125 (130125|0,130241|1) - i'm not 100% sure for this one , but it seems like being the same guitar sound fading out and not two different sounds , you could make it only one 1/2 LN if you want - Technically it is 1 guitar sound but the pitch slides up. I'll change how the LN looks.
02:42:894 (162894|1) - how about move to 6 , making a jack on the end of the LN instead of after a note , sounds easier imho - Imo that it's so hard to hit but I guess this does make things slightly easier.
03:22:356 (202356|5,202356|4) - this snap sounds more like this imho - Well that does look cleaner too. Not 100% sure here.
03:23:279 (203279|2,203279|1,203394|2,203394|1,203510|2,203510|1,203625|1,203625|2,203741|4,203741|5,203856|4,203856|5,203971|5,203971|4,204087|5,204087|4) - This is really tricky to get right
I'd suggest you to move the pattern every two chord or three but jacking here is kinda tricky and sudden imho - Oh well I did this originally cuz it felt easier to hit the shields after this this way but I guess the jacks themselves are hard to hit.
03:17:510 (197510|6,198048|0) - beside, the fact that the two LNS dosn't end on the same point feels abit weird (eventho it's not really a problem) - I think one of the 2 LNs were changed before/while you were modding.
05:05:971 (305971|1) - add another note , according to : 05:03:894 (303894|1,303894|4,304125|6,304125|2) - , 05:04:817 (304817|2,304817|0,305048|1,305048|3) - - I couldn't really hear the piano but I guess it fits the pattern.
05:06:664 (306664|4,306894|1) - ^ add one more note to thoose two notes - ^
-snip-
Here you go , Good Luck :3 sorry if some seems hesitant , I was really 50/50 about some suggestion here so feel free - Meh most of them were good points o.o)b
Will send the file to rav.
Probably won't be updated until tomorrow.
Updates for the 7K.
Just leaving it here as Raveille won't be updating the map for a while.
Map is now collab with ArcherLove
ArcherLove's part 03:53:741 - ~ 05:31:212 -
Need to rename the diff to fit this change.
Just leaving it here as Raveille won't be updating the map for a while.
Map is now collab with ArcherLove
ArcherLove's part 03:53:741 - ~ 05:31:212 -
Need to rename the diff to fit this change.
Hi! If this mod is bad and not helpful to you, I apologies in advance.
MS2000's 7K Everlasting Promise:
01:45:202 - Add a note on column 6 to complement 01:45:202 (105202|6) -
04:30:202 (270202|1,270202|0) - Make 3 note chord. Add extra note on column 7 or something.
04:30:664 (270664|5,270664|6) - Same as above. Add the extra note on column 1 or something.
05:05:971 (305971|1) - Needs another note with it since sound is emphasised here, just like you did with the previous notes.
05:12:894 (312894|1) - Move to 05:12:664 since that's when I hear the vocal sing a new note. Remember to extend it after moving it to match with the other LNs!
I couldn't find much, sorry... Map is pretty smooth and fun!
Oh, and if I made errors, sorry about that too.
MS2000's 7K Everlasting Promise:
01:45:202 - Add a note on column 6 to complement 01:45:202 (105202|6) -
04:30:202 (270202|1,270202|0) - Make 3 note chord. Add extra note on column 7 or something.
04:30:664 (270664|5,270664|6) - Same as above. Add the extra note on column 1 or something.
05:05:971 (305971|1) - Needs another note with it since sound is emphasised here, just like you did with the previous notes.
05:12:894 (312894|1) - Move to 05:12:664 since that's when I hear the vocal sing a new note. Remember to extend it after moving it to match with the other LNs!
I couldn't find much, sorry... Map is pretty smooth and fun!
Oh, and if I made errors, sorry about that too.
Topic Starter
Applied Eter's mod, however...
00:23:165 - speed 25% here, there's a piano sound
00:45:399 - don't understand this bit cause you are referring to an empty space, update the map maybe?
I think you modded a non-updated map LOL but it's ok no worries. Applied rest when applicable.
00:23:165 - speed 25% here, there's a piano sound
00:45:399 - don't understand this bit cause you are referring to an empty space, update the map maybe?
I think you modded a non-updated map LOL but it's ok no worries. Applied rest when applicable.
I think you modded the non-updated version...kaythen wrote:
Hi! If this mod is bad and not helpful to you, I apologies in advance.
MS2000's 7K Everlasting Promise:
01:45:202 - Add a note on column 6 to complement 01:45:202 (105202|6) -
04:30:202 (270202|1,270202|0) - Make 3 note chord. Add extra note on column 7 or something.
04:30:664 (270664|5,270664|6) - Same as above. Add the extra note on column 1 or something.
05:05:971 (305971|1) - Needs another note with it since sound is emphasised here, just like you did with the previous notes.
05:12:894 (312894|1) - Move to 05:12:664 since that's when I hear the vocal sing a new note. Remember to extend it after moving it to match with the other LNs!
I couldn't find much, sorry... Map is pretty smooth and fun!
Oh, and if I made errors, sorry about that too.
