Hard
02:12:536 (1) - i think the spacing has to be a bit bigger. right now it's lower than 1.0x (with the previous SV. it says 1.08x because you change SV). if you move sliders a bit you can make it look fancy http://i.imgur.com/nAm4wG6.png (selected is (1))
00:04:286 (1,2) - it honestly looks more like a jump. i think you need a bigger spacing between those (same for Normal diff)
Insane
00:48:386 (10) - prev. spacing is 0.89, you better make it 1.0 or something
01:02:786 (3,4,1) - you could make the triple compliment the slider shape. also you could make a better blanket http://i.imgur.com/sOnaKhq.png
02:02:936 (1) - i personally hate this idea with a single 1/4 slider. this breaks the stream structure and makes you start the stream from a red tick, which is usually unnatural. if nobody was failing at this moment when playtesting then it's fine. but i never like this stuff
02:14:486 (1,2,3) - actually you could emphasize this section with a bit of increasing jumps: http://i.imgur.com/KuHEiqE.png something like that. the music is increasing here so these jumps would fit
02:38:486 (1,2,3,4) - you could make the final jumps bigger, for the hype! these are really easy to say the least
W1
well, you can just skip this mod and not listen to it. it is all about this diff making no sense and being overmapped
*start of hate section*
00:08:111 (2) - no sound in the music here
00:11:711 (6) - same
00:26:861 (2) - same. actually, nevermind these things about too much triples. the map would be too boring if you didn't add it.
00:28:136 (1,2,3,4,5) - what is the reason to decrease sv here? i don't get it. voice pitch? that's so strange to me
00:35:711 (2) - no sound in the music here
00:39:611 (6) - same
00:39:686 (1,2) - but this one really bothers me. why did you add a 3/4 slider here? why here? music is just the same as everywhere else. you could add it anywhere, but you did it here. why?
00:41:711 (5) - no sound in the music here
00:41:936 - but here you didn't add a note, while the music had a sound
00:44:111 (7) - ok i'm tired of mentioning these triples, not pointing this out anymore
00:53:936 (5,6) - this is so strange, never seen this before, you're sure it plays fine and fun? because it's basically an anti-jump and may be very confusing
01:02:486 (1) - creativity of this slider is overwhelming
01:14:936 (2,1) - this anti-jump is honestly bad. i'd place it somewhere more to the left. and also you missed a quite important note at 01:15:386 -, it's even more loud than the downbeat. if you add a note here and change the slider position, then this pattern will be a lot better.
01:26:936 (3) - these 3/4 totally don't fit imo. it's not the first and not the last, it just sounds so bad even just when i hear the hitsounds. doesn't fit at all. added for the sake of difficulty and doesn't emphasize or compliments anything
01:32:186 (1,2,3,1) - these 3/4s, however, are cool and good, they fit and play nicely.
02:02:936 (1,4) - these kicksliders don't fit at all, i think. the music it quite stable and not suggesting such a strange use of them. it's a usual 4/4 and hardest notes are at downbeats. your rhythm suggests that 02:03:686 (5) - is the hardest note (stream start), but it's offbeat and should not be emphasized like that. i'd remove the second kickslider and remap this small part
02:04:286 (1) - you don't need a slider here, since you have a note at the blue tick.
02:21:836 (3,4,5,1,2) - this pattern when the music is just 1/2... cool lol
*end of hate section*
Effulasjdmyhnmjence
00:04:436 (2,1,1) - first of all, copy one of them and just replace the others with a copy, rotated by 120°. it would be a lot better to make a symmetrical round pattern. right now one of them is wrongly directed: http://i.imgur.com/qD56sJr.jpg and what i suggest is something like: http://i.imgur.com/hxSmHLy.jpg (if you want the last slider to be closer to (1) start)
00:23:486 (1) - you can encircle (2) better
00:46:136 (1,2) - i don't think these 3/4 sliders fit every chorus start. really, they make no sense to the music. i'd make it usual 1/1
01:34:136 (1,1) - this is very questionable in terms of readablility. very questionable. no suggestions though
02:05:486 (5,3) - the choice for placement of these sliders is questionable as well
02:12:536 (1) - i think the spacing has to be a bit bigger. right now it's lower than 1.0x (with the previous SV. it says 1.08x because you change SV). if you move sliders a bit you can make it look fancy http://i.imgur.com/nAm4wG6.png (selected is (1))
00:04:286 (1,2) - it honestly looks more like a jump. i think you need a bigger spacing between those (same for Normal diff)
Insane
00:48:386 (10) - prev. spacing is 0.89, you better make it 1.0 or something
01:02:786 (3,4,1) - you could make the triple compliment the slider shape. also you could make a better blanket http://i.imgur.com/sOnaKhq.png
02:02:936 (1) - i personally hate this idea with a single 1/4 slider. this breaks the stream structure and makes you start the stream from a red tick, which is usually unnatural. if nobody was failing at this moment when playtesting then it's fine. but i never like this stuff
02:14:486 (1,2,3) - actually you could emphasize this section with a bit of increasing jumps: http://i.imgur.com/KuHEiqE.png something like that. the music is increasing here so these jumps would fit
02:38:486 (1,2,3,4) - you could make the final jumps bigger, for the hype! these are really easy to say the least
W1
well, you can just skip this mod and not listen to it. it is all about this diff making no sense and being overmapped
*start of hate section*
00:08:111 (2) - no sound in the music here
00:11:711 (6) - same
00:26:861 (2) - same. actually, nevermind these things about too much triples. the map would be too boring if you didn't add it.
00:28:136 (1,2,3,4,5) - what is the reason to decrease sv here? i don't get it. voice pitch? that's so strange to me
00:35:711 (2) - no sound in the music here
00:39:611 (6) - same
00:39:686 (1,2) - but this one really bothers me. why did you add a 3/4 slider here? why here? music is just the same as everywhere else. you could add it anywhere, but you did it here. why?
00:41:711 (5) - no sound in the music here
00:41:936 - but here you didn't add a note, while the music had a sound
00:44:111 (7) - ok i'm tired of mentioning these triples, not pointing this out anymore
00:53:936 (5,6) - this is so strange, never seen this before, you're sure it plays fine and fun? because it's basically an anti-jump and may be very confusing
01:02:486 (1) - creativity of this slider is overwhelming
01:14:936 (2,1) - this anti-jump is honestly bad. i'd place it somewhere more to the left. and also you missed a quite important note at 01:15:386 -, it's even more loud than the downbeat. if you add a note here and change the slider position, then this pattern will be a lot better.
01:26:936 (3) - these 3/4 totally don't fit imo. it's not the first and not the last, it just sounds so bad even just when i hear the hitsounds. doesn't fit at all. added for the sake of difficulty and doesn't emphasize or compliments anything
01:32:186 (1,2,3,1) - these 3/4s, however, are cool and good, they fit and play nicely.
02:02:936 (1,4) - these kicksliders don't fit at all, i think. the music it quite stable and not suggesting such a strange use of them. it's a usual 4/4 and hardest notes are at downbeats. your rhythm suggests that 02:03:686 (5) - is the hardest note (stream start), but it's offbeat and should not be emphasized like that. i'd remove the second kickslider and remap this small part
02:04:286 (1) - you don't need a slider here, since you have a note at the blue tick.
02:21:836 (3,4,5,1,2) - this pattern when the music is just 1/2... cool lol
*end of hate section*
Effulasjdmyhnmjence
00:04:436 (2,1,1) - first of all, copy one of them and just replace the others with a copy, rotated by 120°. it would be a lot better to make a symmetrical round pattern. right now one of them is wrongly directed: http://i.imgur.com/qD56sJr.jpg and what i suggest is something like: http://i.imgur.com/hxSmHLy.jpg (if you want the last slider to be closer to (1) start)
00:23:486 (1) - you can encircle (2) better
00:46:136 (1,2) - i don't think these 3/4 sliders fit every chorus start. really, they make no sense to the music. i'd make it usual 1/1
01:34:136 (1,1) - this is very questionable in terms of readablility. very questionable. no suggestions though
02:05:486 (5,3) - the choice for placement of these sliders is questionable as well