SherryCherry wrote:

Hello o/

00:06:989 (1) - can be to finish here a spiner? Hmm No, I changed the lenght of the spinner, now it ends at 00:06:989 - but not on 00:06:989 (1)
00:21:047 (1,2,3) - . I know you kinda didnt try to repeat yourself, but this looks pretyt shitty imo :/ yea you're right, changed
00:48:989 (2,3) - fix blanket please Fixed
00:51:218 (1) - weird slider Changed it, I dont know how it was weird but changed anyways
01:42:132 (1) - 7) try moving to (x 336 y 92) to improve flow imo Here I don't know which circle you mean, if the 1 or ..a 7? Hmm idk so no change here, also moving that 1 there, Nah, or at least, not for now
01:46:075 (1,2) - could you please avoid such overlapping Changed
02:04:247 (2,3,4) - bad flow imo How? what should I put here? I don't know how's bad so no change, for now ~
02:14:189 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - overlap Changed
07:16:589 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) -This looks too uneven too Changed

gl~ Thanks!

Lince Cosmico wrote:

Winter

General:
• OD 8?
Objetos:
00:13:332 (2) - snap Fixed
00:19:332 (3,4) - no se vos, yo veo mal este blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5488703 Fixed
00:21:047 (1,2,3,4) - no creo que haga falta el anclaje rojo ahi xD Lo dejaré como lo tengo, para no seguir igual con curvas.. y rectas.. lo dejaré así
00:26:189 (1) - Creo que en vez de este slider va un circulo, no escucho un sonido aca 00:26:361 - Cierto, fixed
00:29:961 (3) - esto fluye mejor así http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5488733 Done
00:34:075 (7) - yo sacaria ese anclaje rojo y dejaria uno gris , asi queda mejor xD Done
00:37:504 (1) - Opinión estos sliders tan curvos no me dan mucha confianza xD Fixed
00:39:047 (5) - que tal si el anclaje de este lo tiramos para abajo? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5488746 Done
00:40:075 (8,1) - :v) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5488750 Fixed
00:44:018 (6,7,8,9) - porque no usas el mismo spacing para estos? Fixed
00:46:761 (3,4,5) - lo mismo Fixed
01:15:561 (6) - Ctrl + G Done
01:17:961 (7,8) - que tal si formas un blanket aca con el 8? Done
01:18:647 (1,2,3) - porque spacing distinto? , al menos separalos igual que acá 01:19:332 (4,5,6) - que ahi si quedo mejor Fixed
01:45:047 (2,3) - blanket : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5488841 Fixed
01:59:789 (1,3) - se ve raro el overlap Fixed
02:01:161 (1,2,3) - esta muy lejos xD y no fluye mucho, que tal moverlo un poco (a tu eleccion yo solo doy un ejemplo) : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5488872 Fixed
02:01:847 (1,2,3) - lo mismo Fixed
02:04:932 (5,3) - stack? Done
02:21:047 (4,5) - que tal hacerlos menos curvos y formar dos blankets? Done
02:21:561 (5,6) - separalo un poco mas
02:52:589 (4,5) - fix blanket Fixed
02:54:475 (3,4) - ese slider esta demasiado curvo, porque no lo haces como hiciste acá 02:59:618 (1,2,3,4) - ? Fixed
03:02:532 (7,8) - separalos un poco para no hacer el overlap (excepto que ese overlap este con un proposito) Fixed
03:05:618 (4) - porque lo curvas ahi? XD Fixed
03:17:961 (6,7,9) - intenta no hacer esta clase de overlaps, queda un poco feo imo, yo diría que lo stackees con alguno de los dos kicksliders marcados Fixed
03:19:161 (6,1) - Ctrl + G Done
03:27:561 (1) - wat xD no lo mandes hacia arriba cagas el flow (en todo caso no stackees el 4 pero preferiría que ese slider no suba tan raudamente) Fixed
03:50:361 (8,9) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5488933 ? Buena esa
03:54:304 (3,4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5488940 ? (fijate los numeros de combo) Nada más cambie el 5 y el 6, para evitar el overlap del (4)
03:54:475 (4) - este stackealo con algun circulo del stream ^
04:25:418 (2,3) - overlap :C Esto es así a proposito, por que si no el (3) queda muy lejos del final del 2 y la curvatura está bien "blankeada"
04:27:904 (2) - porque no encurvarlo como los demas? :p Lo cambie, buena esa, me salio un buen slider ahí
04:27:647 - aca realmente hay un sonido? parece overmapeado Deletedddd
04:34:932 (1) - fijate si el final del slider lo bajas un poco para que no overlapee Fixed
04:47:789 (4,1,2,3) - es un salto a cualquier lado a mi punto de vista, no fluye muy bien Lo cambie todo ahí, revisalo despues si puedes :p
04:58:932 (5,10,11) - Stackea el 5 con alguno de esos dos marcados Done
06:00:132 (1,1,1,1) - porque cambias la distancia en el ultimo? Fixed
06:01:847 (1,2) - hmmmmmmmmmmmmm movelo un poquitito a la derecha como para que no overlapee, aunque no se exactamente si es overlap o no, por las dudas XD
06:06:989 (3,1) - que tal hacer dos blankets acá?Done, creo, revisalo xD
06:15:218 (2,4) - este si es overlap XD Fixed
06:17:618 - creo que seria mejor que este sea clickeable Nope, no hay sonido allí, solo el del "wub" y para eso es el slider
06:27:561 (7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5488994 Buena esa
06:39:561 - deberia ser clickeable imo Nope, no hay sonido allí, solo el del "wub" y para eso es el slider
06:44:361 (9) - NC? Done
06:53:275 (5,7) - al 5 sacale el anclaje rojo y dale la misma curvatura que al 7 Done
07:00:218 - porque NC en un tic azul? ;w; Fixed, No sé como coño paso eso o.o
07:07:675 (1,2,3) - esto no fluye para nada x'D intenta acomodarlo de otra manera Done, creo, revisalo?
07:23:447 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - porque usaste distinto DS? o3o (a lo mejor me equivoque en esta x'D) Es que el de arriba estaba con una curva más cerrada que el otro, pero tenían el mismo DS, de todos modos lo cambie el de arriba
07:34:589 (9) - Ctrl + G? Nope, lo dejaré como está, forma una línea con el siguiente circulo y el otro, si le doy ctrl +g, va a quedar la punta de ese slider hacia arriba, y el siguiente circulo está abajo, está bien como está

Puse una sola Opinion en azul, pero eso es porque tengo retraso y me olvide de ponerlo en las otras
Jaja suerte Gracias!

CeleriLord wrote:

I'll try doing a small mod of this, cuz why not eh?

Winter

00:03:218 (1) - The sound that the slider follows start earlier than the slider, maybe start it at 00:02:189 Ok
00:35:447 (3) - Should move back to 00:35:275, and delete circle Nah, there is a sound, if I only put a slider this beat/sound will be missed 00:35:447 (3) -
00:38:532 (4,5) - Space more to fit the time between the notes Done
02:21:561 (5) - Make slider end on 02:22:075 Fixed
02:54:132 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing here is a bit weird Fixed
03:50:532 (9) - Make this circle closer to the slider that's before it Done
03:53:875 (2) - Move to 03:53:875, then place circle right after it. You copy the same time.. idk, no changes here for now o.o
04:45:047 (4) - Missed a spot for red ticks on this slider Right! fixed
04:50:875 (1,2,3) - and 04:51:218 (4,5,6) - DS is inconsistent. Distance between circles and the slider is not the same Fixed
04:54:647 (9) - NC here, remove NC here 04:55:075 (1) - Done
05:03:561 (1,3) - Put at same height Done
05:29:789 (7,8,1) - Try putting more space between the 8-1 then the 7-8, since there's more time between the 8-1, there's should be bigger spacing Done
05:49:675 - Add circle here Changed 05:49:504 (5) - to a small slider
05:50:189 (1) - For this slider, either you extend it to end at 05:52:247, or you switch it for a slider which ends at 05:52:247 I extended the slider
06:21:561 (6) - Try curving the slider so it fits in better with the stream Ok, done
06:27:904 (8,9,10,11) - This patter here doesn't flow very well, kinda weird to play I moved the circles, I think its good now, maybe changing it in the future if somoeone else tell me to changed

This is pretty much what I found, very fun map, good luck with ranking it Thanks!!

Lince Cosmico wrote:

NO KDS

Revisando el mod posterior:
04:47:789 (4,1,2,3) - y que tal hacer una curva en el triplet ese? asi conecta con el slider 4 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5533716 Ok
06:07:332 (1) - porque un anclaje rojo ? XDD Por que vengo usando esos anclajes así con rectas, si lo hago curvo allí se vera totalmente fuera de lugar
07:07:675 - y si haces que conecten? (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5533724 algo asi, NO tomes en cuenta la forma en la que lo hice, solo la conexión) En ninguna de todas las combinaciones circulo-slider que he hecho siguiendo ese sonido ha estado conectada, puesto que se oye como dos sonidos separados, pero iguales, entonces esto no necesariamente tiene que estar conectado :p

solo era lo que me pediste que revise XD

Joe Castle wrote:

No piensas que el spinner del inicio comienza muy temprano?

Reazen wrote:

M4M

Winter

Sliders like this 04:06:647 (7) - are probably unrankable you should ask QAT or something about it. When I make them for first time I was prepared to change them someday so... Changed

00:32:704 (3) - this is confusing, maybe https://gyazo.com/193bc1db5aa5899e056156b5b1a96710 Changed this, not like you said but I change it

00:38:532 (4) - rotate -45° ohohoo nice one

02:05:961 (5,6,7,8) - parts like this full of short sliders are kinda messy sometimes, maybe change SV to 1.0x before these parts?(like in this part 01:14:875 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ) In my opinion sliders are too long and feels like you have to hold it longer than you actually need to. Yea, changed all the parts like this

01:36:304 (4) - move to 01:36:475 - make it shorter and add short stream from 01:36:304 - https://gyazo.com/a69f0c6ffbf396d4129cefd364b39a8c No, because there is no sound 01:36:475 - (there is not any sound on the white tick) and it fits the vocals, also don't want to overmapp this part

01:22:418 (6,7) - distance is weird, maybe something like this https://gyazo.com/cb55979927690a33fff66e4e8e74a855 Yes, done

01:36:132 (3,4) - maybe https://gyazo.com/4bcfe51ed6eb60e2523453d146542292 Same as the other one, no

01:39:047 (5) - make it shorter with reverse and again, no, because there is no sound in the white tick

03:14:189 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - somehow it doesn't look right for me, maybe make all these sliders like 03:15:561 (1,2) - I changed this, maybe, check again now? dunno if I did this well

01:14:875 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - really hard to read, feels like it started too early, from this point 01:15:389 (5) - is ok but 01:14:875 (2,3,4) - is weird you should change it. I changed

Sorry for such short mod i am not used to modding hard diffs :/ np, thanks for modding!
Overall very good map I can't wait to see it ranked haha thanks

iYiyo wrote:

Hola, M4M here :3

• 
  [Winter]

1. 00:13:332 - No sé por qué acá estás cambiando tanto el SV si el ritmo no es como para cambiarlo. Tal vez le quieres dar énfasis, pero por ejemplo acá: 00:16:589 - sigue en x0,3 y la música no es tan intensa como para hacerlo, por lo que te recomiendo ser más constante en esta sección. Además deberías agregar un NC cada vez que cambias el SV, como recordatorio. Es cierto, en un principio lo cambiaba para hacerf enfasis cuando el sonido era más "fuerte" pero parece que fracase en hacerlo de una manera "perfecta" así que optare por dejar un solo sv en cada parte de estas y solo cambiarlo una vez cuando cambie
2. 00:17:618 (5,6) - el salto de 5 al 6 lo encuentro un poco alto para esta parte, considerando que los slider anteriores están super pegados. Por qué no consideras stackearlos? Hecho, aunque estoy re-haciendo esta parte lenta, por que es verdad, me pongo a detallarla y está pésima en general, así que puede que cambie cosas como ésta algo diferente
3. 00:29:275 - 01:07:675 - No sé por qué cambias tanto el SV en esta parte siendo que es todo el rato igual de calmada, encuentro que quedaría mejor si te apegas a uno, tal vez x0,6? Me quedare con x0.50 y x0.35 en el inicio que.. es más lento
4. 00:30:989 (7) - 00:33:732 (6) - Tal vez hacer de estos unos sliders? Considero que queda mejor si dejas el espacio vacío. Me parece que como está ahora juega bien y la idea tampoco es recargar todo de sliders, pero como he dicho al rehacer todo esto seguramente lo haré
5. 00:31:847 - Agregar nota? Así como lo hiciste acá 00:34:589 - Hecho
6. 00:35:447 (3) - Si te fijas 00:35:961 - acá te estás perdiendo un beat importante que antes no habías perdido ( 00:30:475 (4) - ). Te recomiendo reducir el slider y agregar algo que se ajuste. Hecho
7. 00:41:961 (6,7,8) - Si te fijas acá la distancia es la misma pero en la barra de tiempo dejas un espacio entre medio. Te recomiendo hacer de 00:41:961 (6) - un slider. Cambie la distancia pero no agregue un slider
8. 01:22:075 (4,5) - Haz de estos unos 1/4 al igual que hiciste con 01:22:418 (6,7) - Ok hecho
9. 02:15:561 (7,8,9) - ^ Quedaría mucho mejor imo. Yee
10. 02:19:847 (3,4,5) - No escucho estas notas en la música o es taaan bajo que siento que valen la pena mapearlos, ya que ni siquiera siguen la voz. Considera removerlos, ya que extender el slider 2 no queda bien tampoco. Quite ambos circulos y agregue un pequeño slider allí, que queda bien con el sonido que hay pero no se siente overmappeado
11. 02:21:561 (4,5) - Agregar más espacio entre ambos. Done
12. 03:04:075 - Agregar nota Done
13. 03:04:247 (4) - NC Done
14. 03:05:447 - Nota Done
15. 03:05:618 (6) - NC Done
16. 03:09:989 (4,1) - La distancia que hay aquí es a propósito? Sino, arreglalo. Uhh, se me paso esta al cambiar varias veces esta parte, arreglado!
17. 03:19:932 - Nota? así haces un triple y no suena tan vacio Me parece que como está ahora está bien, así que solo converti el circulo del medio a un pequeño slider para crear el triplet sin cambiar la manera de como se juega a como ya la tenía
18. 05:49:161 (4) - Hacer de este también un slider? Yee
19. 06:39:389 (5,6,7) - Esta parte es un poco rara, ya que 06:39:732 (7) - este slider está terminando en un punto donde hay un beat fuerte, por lo que, encuentro yo, que deberías hacer que el slider comenzara ahí en vez de que termine. Quizás podrías seguir este ritmo: http://puu.sh/q8PKm/802ba29f87.jpg Solo agregue dos circulos despues del slider, formando un triple allí y moví el slider al tick blanco, perfecto, y así juega bien, formar un mini stream como lo pusiste tú creo que no queda bien y aparte no hay más partes así en todo el mapa y podría confundir bastante, con un doble al final del slider, no
20. 06:52:932 (3,4) - Estas notas no existen, por lo que te recomiendo hacer de 2 un slider 1/1. Lo mismo que sucede más arriba, solo que aquí optare por agregar el slider 1/1

Las partes del kiai te quedaron mejor que las otras, ya que según yo el distanciado te queda un poco irregular en esas partes, trata de ser más consistente ahí, además de quizás evitar espacio en blancos que podrías enfatizarlos mejor con sliders (solo mi opinión) Si bueno, lo del distanciado y sv es verdad, eso lo arreglare e intentare re hacer esta parte lenta que bueno, si está pesima, en un principio la tenía bastaante diferente y creo que era mejor pero tratare de arreglarlo lo mejor posible. También hay secciones en donde cambias el SV pero no utilizas ningún slider... como por ej.: 06:35:447 - acá, en donde tampoco cambias el volumen, trata de checkear estos que pueden haber más en el mapa Los iba colocando para hacer los streams, dudo que tengan importancia pero igual los quitare. Also, algo que tienes que revisar también de nuevo es el NC, ya que hay partes en donde no eres consistente. Por ejemplo esta sección: 06:39:389 - para empezar estás haciendo un cambio de SV, por lo que deberías agregar un NC para evitar confusiones y preparar al player. 06:40:247 (1) - Este slider no debería tener NC ya que no es una parte en donde se enfatice. Lo haré

Bueno, eso es todo de mi parte :3 Aún te falta pulir un poco el mapa antes de querer rankearlo. Yee, para eso están los buenos mods como este, ha sido quizá el más util hasta ahohjora

Suerte! Thank you!

_Meep_ wrote:

m4m lel

ze mod by ze meep

00:48:304 (9,1) - Blanket pls This is already a blanket.. isnt it o.o? well, fixed maybe?
01:00:475 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't get why this part needs to be singletapps and played so fast on the first four notes hmm well, changed
02:46:418 (1) - Looks a bit ugly -.- Changed :p
03:17:618 (5) - Why horizontal? Horizontal? do you mean vertical? the slider? idk but I changed it a bit
03:20:704 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5745695 for smoothness n1, done
03:22:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Looks a bit ugly imo It looks pretty well for me and plays well, I will not change until someone else complain about it :p
thats all I could find,sorry :_:

1. 00:43:504 (2,2) - and 00:47:447 (6) - after playing a few times I'd make the end of these clickable, maybe change this into a circle + 1/2 slider/2 circles if you want some variety from 00:32:532 (2,3) - that loud drum is a bit the main feedback for your rythm while playing, felt a bit off it wasn't clickable like the rest
2. 00:55:161 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - and 00:57:904 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - instead of the circle + slider repeating try slider + circle repeating, since you're following the piano here it'll make the weaker piano notes land on a slider tail and the stronger ones will be clickable since its building to those, it sounds a better that way imo (and you have that drum again clickable as a bonus yay) I dunno if you had this innitially since 00:58:589 (4,5) - these hitsounds should be swapped since the drum is on (5)
3. 01:00:475 (1) - still has a weak drum would also drum finish this for consistency
4. 01:11:447 (1) - could stack with the end of 01:10:247 (1) - so you have 01:11:447 (1,1) and 01:11:618 (2,1) - the same visual distance, will look nicer
   like you did here 01:10:761 (6,7,8) -
5. 01:22:418 (6) - puttting the biggest jump on this one feels kinda weird since its the weakest of the 4 could reduce this a bit like place at 376/148 ish, will also look nicer with visual distance from 01:22:247 (5) - to the stream
6. 01:28:932 (1) - could also make this an sv change since you can hea its kind of a hold sound for 01:29:275 (2) - aswell
7. 01:36:818 (4) - make it a curved one like the rest of this sound to make it stand out a bit from the next sliders and for consistency
8. 02:06:132 (6) - stack with slider end of 02:06:989 (3) - instead would fit better hear to represent that buildup in the song ds wise aswell
9. 02:44:361 (4) - rahter long combo here would NC it
10. 02:45:218 (5) - 02:46:418 (1) - minor stack off also you could make 02:45:218 (5,7) - these parallel by changing (5) to avoid that overlap since you have that break for the flow recover anyway
11. 03:05:447 (3,1) - gotta have that blanket fix mod in here somewhere :d
12. 03:15:218 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - move whole thing to the right so 03:14:875 (5) - is stacket with 03:15:904 (3) -
13. 03:18:132 (4,1) - that overlap
14. 03:22:418 (5,6,7,8,1) - eehh agreeing with mod above here could look and play a bit better, I think its the only time for these streams that you have a jump at 03:22:675 (8,1) - aswell something like this would be better imo
    
15. 03:24:818 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would NC 5 here because you have to adjust your movement a bit like you did with all the similar streams with movement changes
16. 03:50:532 (9) - 268/220 for in the middle of that triangle between the sliders
17. 03:55:589 (8,1) - should still be .4 ds here since otherwise you have the increase of ds alrdy from 8 to 1
18. 04:13:332 (1,2) - same ds as 04:14:704 (5,6) - or vice versa to be consisent between the 1/2 gap
19. 04:14:704 (5,6) - rearrange a like this to make it look nicer
    
20. 05:00:647 (1,2,3) -05:03:218 (1,2,3) - bit of lonely combos here, could make 05:00:647 (9,10,1) - and 05:03:218 (8,9,10) -
21. 05:07:675 (2) - normal sampleset for the tail aswell sounds better here
23. 06:55:332 (2) - could use an anchor points here for the shift in vocals from beginning to end
24. 06:58:246 (1) - NC
25. 07:28:503 (6,1) - same as 03:55:589 (8,1) -

Wishkey wrote:

Sup man

1. 00:43:504 (2,2) - and 00:47:447 (6) - after playing a few times I'd make the end of these clickable, maybe change this into a circle + 1/2 slider/2 circles if you want some variety from 00:32:532 (2,3) - that loud drum is a bit the main feedback for your rythm while playing, felt a bit off it wasn't clickable like the rest
2. 00:55:161 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - and 00:57:904 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - instead of the circle + slider repeating try slider + circle repeating, since you're following the piano here it'll make the weaker piano notes land on a slider tail and the stronger ones will be clickable since its building to those, it sounds a better that way imo (and you have that drum again clickable as a bonus yay) I dunno if you had this innitially since 00:58:589 (4,5) - these hitsounds should be swapped since the drum is on (5)
3. 01:00:475 (1) - still has a weak drum would also drum finish this for consistency
4. 01:11:447 (1) - could stack with the end of 01:10:247 (1) - so you have 01:11:447 (1,1) and 01:11:618 (2,1) - the same visual distance, will look nicer
   like you did here 01:10:761 (6,7,8) -
5. 01:22:418 (6) - puttting the biggest jump on this one feels kinda weird since its the weakest of the 4 could reduce this a bit like place at 376/148 ish, will also look nicer with visual distance from 01:22:247 (5) - to the stream
6. 01:28:932 (1) - could also make this an sv change since you can hea its kind of a hold sound for 01:29:275 (2) - aswell
7. 01:36:818 (4) - make it a curved one like the rest of this sound to make it stand out a bit from the next sliders and for consistency
8. 02:06:132 (6) - stack with slider end of 02:06:989 (3) - instead would fit better hear to represent that buildup in the song ds wise aswell
9. 02:44:361 (4) - rahter long combo here would NC it
10. 02:45:218 (5) - 02:46:418 (1) - minor stack off also you could make 02:45:218 (5,7) - these parallel by changing (5) to avoid that overlap since you have that break for the flow recover anyway
11. 03:05:447 (3,1) - gotta have that blanket fix mod in here somewhere :d
12. 03:15:218 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - move whole thing to the right so 03:14:875 (5) - is stacket with 03:15:904 (3) -
13. 03:18:132 (4,1) - that overlap
14. 03:22:418 (5,6,7,8,1) - eehh agreeing with mod above here could look and play a bit better, I think its the only time for these streams that you have a jump at 03:22:675 (8,1) - aswell something like this would be better imo
    
    
    Lol you have the old BG xD
15. 03:24:818 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would NC 5 here because you have to adjust your movement a bit like you did with all the similar streams with movement changes
16. 03:50:532 (9) - 268/220 for in the middle of that triangle between the sliders
17. 03:55:589 (8,1) - should still be .4 ds here since otherwise you have the increase of ds alrdy from 8 to 1
18. 04:13:332 (1,2) - same ds as 04:14:704 (5,6) - or vice versa to be consisent between the 1/2 gap
19. 04:14:704 (5,6) - rearrange a like this to make it look nicer
    
20. 05:00:647 (1,2,3) -05:03:218 (1,2,3) - bit of lonely combos here, could make 05:00:647 (9,10,1) - and 05:03:218 (8,9,10) -
21. 05:07:675 (2) - normal sampleset for the tail aswell sounds better here
23. 06:55:332 (2) - could use an anchor points here for the shift in vocals from beginning to end
24. 06:58:246 (1) - NC
25. 07:28:503 (6,1) - same as 03:55:589 (8,1) -
    
    Applied ALL the changes as you said

gl with ranked man Thanks for this deep mod!

Itasha_S13 wrote:

DaPiePiece's Mod

17:25 DaPiePiece: Hey you wanted a mod right?
17:25 Itasha_S13: Yes
17:25 Itasha_S13: Iiiif you want m4m, please send me your map first
17:25 DaPiePiece: Just a mod, I don't have any finished maps at the moment
17:25 Itasha_S13: Oke
17:25 Itasha_S13: thanks :p
17:25 DaPiePiece: you want it in game or on the forums?
17:26 Itasha_S13: as you wish ~
17:26 DaPiePiece: I'll mod you ingame, a bit easier
17:26 Itasha_S13: Oke
17:29 DaPiePiece: alright so far I can say is that's it's really good
17:29 Itasha_S13: Ohuu thanks :p im glad
17:30 DaPiePiece: I'd put HP7 on a 5.5 star map, but that's your choice
17:30 Itasha_S13: Hmm maybe I will consider chaning it to 6.5
17:30 Itasha_S13: 6 its too easy right?
17:31 DaPiePiece: yeah a bit
17:31 DaPiePiece: alright
17:32 DaPiePiece: 00:12:475 (6) - I'd stack this on the slider right after, to emphasize on the piano note
17:32 DaPiePiece: 00:15:218 (6) - same here
17:32 DaPiePiece: 00:17:618 (5) - you do it here
17:33 Itasha_S13: stack with slider end?
17:33 DaPiePiece: 00:17:618 (5) - same thing, I'd stack on the slider after
17:33 DaPiePiece: No on the next slider
17:33 DaPiePiece: as in :
17:34 DaPiePiece: 00:26:189 (6,1) - stack these for example
17:34 DaPiePiece: 00:30:475 (4) - space this a bit more
17:34 DaPiePiece: 00:44:532 (6) - I'd blanket the with the slider before
17:37 DaPiePiece: 01:34:418 (3) - I'd place a note on the red tick. Your choice to do so or not, but I'd do it
17:37 Itasha_S13: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5762593
17:37 Itasha_S13: like this?
17:37 Itasha_S13: the blanket.
17:38 Itasha_S13: 01:34:589 - there is not any sound to click, But I will make it a slider
17:38 DaPiePiece: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5762598
17:38 DaPiePiece: or like this
17:38 DaPiePiece: Yeah it's your choice. I'd place a note since it feels empty
17:38 DaPiePiece: you can make that a slider too
17:40 DaPiePiece: 01:43:847 (6) - space this more
17:40 DaPiePiece: 01:44:532 (8) - I'd space this too more
17:41 DaPiePiece: 01:45:732 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this flow better
17:41 DaPiePiece: either space a bit mor, either change the form of the stream
17:42 Itasha_S13: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5762620
17:42 DaPiePiece: 01:50:018 (8) - note on the white tick, there is a syllable. Either slider either circle
17:43 DaPiePiece: like that but make the slider flow better after the stream
17:43 DaPiePiece: 01:57:561 (7,8,1) - fix this
17:44 DaPiePiece: 02:01:418 (2,3) - space more? Feels a bit awkward
17:44 DaPiePiece: 02:01:418 (2,3) - same
17:44 Itasha_S13: You sended me the same time
17:45 Itasha_S13: also.. I'm using the same spacing in all these parts, with doubles
17:45 DaPiePiece: oh sorry
17:45 DaPiePiece: same pattern like a slider after
17:45 Itasha_S13: I will space it just a biiitt more
17:45 DaPiePiece: 02:05:961 (5) - well I mean it feels a bit awkward
17:46 DaPiePiece: You need to snap the cursor from the slider end
17:46 DaPiePiece: You can make the slider go into that pattern a bit more
17:46 DaPiePiece: I'd space more, but there are other solutions
17:46 Itasha_S13: what about just ctrl+g?
17:47 Itasha_S13: 02:05:961 (5) - for this, I mena
17:48 DaPiePiece: I'd still move it a bit to the left, for the cursor velocity
17:48 Itasha_S13: 02:05:961 (5) - this?
17:48 Itasha_S13: Oke
17:48 DaPiePiece: yeah
17:49 DaPiePiece: 02:02:104 (5,6) - I'd curve these two. They just feel better when moving the cursor in a arc rather than snapping
17:50 Itasha_S13: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5762673
17:50 DaPiePiece: your choice. I'd curve
17:50 Itasha_S13: Like that? so I make the same in the one before
17:50 DaPiePiece: 02:16:075 (1) - space this away from the stream. Like move it more up and more left
17:51 DaPiePiece: Yeah like that is fine
17:51 DaPiePiece: 02:16:075 (1) - fix this
17:51 Itasha_S13: wrong timing x)
17:52 DaPiePiece: 02:50:018 (2) - move this to the left a bit
17:52 Itasha_S13: Done
17:52 DaPiePiece: 02:50:875 (5) - slider or if you want leave it like that
17:53 DaPiePiece: 03:04:075 (4) - to the right a bit
17:54 DaPiePiece: 03:25:075 (4) - make this flow better
17:54 DaPiePiece: 03:29:275 (6) - reduce the spacing
17:54 Itasha_S13: Actually it plays well, I will just rotate a bit so its less edgy
17:55 DaPiePiece: 03:33:389 (1,1,1) - emphasize this bit more by either spacing either making it flow differently
17:56 DaPiePiece: 03:36:389 (8) - fix this so it flows better
17:56 Itasha_S13: Same, it plays well and its intentional to make a change in the movement because the "wubbb thing" changes
17:57 Itasha_S13: I moved a bit tho
17:57 DaPiePiece: well, your choice, I'd make it flow better
17:57 DaPiePiece: also I must say that the way you mapped the chorus is quite unique and I like it
17:57 Itasha_S13: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5762721
17:58 DaPiePiece: 03:37:847 (1,2,3) - I'd move that a bit to the right to flow better
17:58 DaPiePiece: Yeah perfect like that
17:58 DaPiePiece: so it does point ou the "wub" and flows
17:59 DaPiePiece: 03:38:361 (5) - I would rotate this to face the bottom right corner, but your choice
18:00 DaPiePiece: 03:44:189 (1,2,3) - not to sure about this pattern. I'd change it to make it different. It flows awkwardly into the stream imo
18:01 Itasha_S13: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5762752
18:01 Itasha_S13: You mean like this?
18:01 DaPiePiece: 03:49:847 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - space this entire part more
18:02 DaPiePiece: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5762756
18:02 DaPiePiece: I mean like this. But your way is fine too
18:02 Itasha_S13: I changed the next slider too
18:02 Itasha_S13: I will let my way :p
18:03 DaPiePiece: 03:51:38make this horizontal to the slider
18:03 DaPiePiece: oh that didn't work..
18:03 DaPiePiece: 03:51:389 (3) - make this horizontal to the slider
18:04 DaPiePiece: 03:51:561 (1) - move this a bit down to the left
18:04 Itasha_S13: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5762769
18:04 DaPiePiece: yeah actually that's good too
18:04 Itasha_S13: Oke, and I changed the slider shape for the flow
18:04 DaPiePiece: 03:55:589 (8,1) - fix this
18:04 Itasha_S13: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5762774
18:05 Itasha_S13: Someone else pointed that in other mod
18:05 DaPiePiece: idk that much what you want to do there, expanding slider or separate close streams?
18:05 Itasha_S13: but I don't really understand what he meant because it was not very well explained
18:06 Itasha_S13: So I have to move the 1 from the 8 ?
18:06 DaPiePiece: what did you wanna make there>?
18:06 Itasha_S13: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5762784
18:06 Itasha_S13: Well, change the stream spacing
18:06 DaPiePiece: so expand it
18:07 Itasha_S13: ecause the song changes
18:07 DaPiePiece: yeah change that so it actually expands better
18:07 DaPiePiece: 04:02:361 (2) - space this more to the right
18:07 DaPiePiece: 04:03:047 (4) - to the left
18:08 DaPiePiece: 04:03:732 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5762798
18:08 DaPiePiece: 04:05:104 (2) - to the right
18:08 DaPiePiece: 04:05:789 (4) - to the left
18:09 DaPiePiece: 04:14:875 (4) - to the left
18:09 DaPiePiece: 04:22:247 (1,2,3,4,5) - love this part
18:10 DaPiePiece: 04:53:618 (1,2,3) - move to the left a bit down
18:11 DaPiePiece: 05:00:647 (9,10,11) - make this curve
18:12 DaPiePiece: from 04:22:247 (1) - to 05:07:675 (2) - very well done
18:13 DaPiePiece: 05:15:732 (4) - move this to the lef
18:13 DaPiePiece: *left
18:14 DaPiePiece: 06:00:132 (1,1,1) - same thing. either space more either change the flow to make it stand out
18:16 DaPiePiece: 06:47:789 (6) - raise this
18:16 DaPiePiece: 06:51:218 (4) - reduce the spacing, this is way to big of a jump
18:17 DaPiePiece: and that's it
18:18 DaPiePiece: TBH the map got a lot better later on
18:19 Itasha_S13: Hehm thanks, post on forum
18:20 DaPiePiece: yeah will
18:20 DaPiePiece: even though I suck at these types of maps
18:20 DaPiePiece: was a pleasure modding, gl on ranked this is a fun map to play
18:20 Itasha_S13: Thanks

Gus wrote:

hi m4m from #modreqs
[Winter]
General
- The song is really quiet and I think the hitsounds should be a little bit louder only because its so quiet It sounds good for me and no one ever have said something about it so.. I make louder, it will be like TOO loud

01:01:161 (4) - why not map this out like the rest of your first minute? because there is a break here and the music here its too quite to map it so.. a slider will be good before the spinner, if someone else told me to change, I will change
01:10:761 (6,7) and 01:11:447 (1,2) - I don't think big slider jumps like these are necessary this early into the beginning of the songyea Fixed
01:37:847 (1) - this slider looks stubby, I would drag it out a little more for visuals done
01:41:789 (7) - maybe make this into a slider that ends on big white tick.. break threw me off personally on my run through
01:50:018 (8) - ^ No, long slider or 2 slider doesn't sound good, no one has said something about this too and plays well.. so, no change for now
01:58:675 - missed beat (you have these all over the map so I don't know, maybe revise? but I guess this is intentional) Its totally intentional, if someone else tell me to add circles like this, I will, but I prefer not to..
02:18:818 (2) -

SPOILER

looks better with partial blanket here Changed, but not the same way
02:55:504 (1) - maybe drag this slider out a little bit more k
03:01:504 (4,5,6) - shape them at the angle with #7 fixed.. maybe?
04:25:847 (1) - I just want to say this slider is so cool! haha, I had more like this one before but some people said that theyre unrankable, but I dont wanna change this..
05:04:075 (2) - I don't know if this would break your style, but blanket with #5 Nah
06:27:904 (8) - NC here? Ye
06:57:389 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - most of your other streams have a combo of 8, this is 4 and 12 why not be 8 and 8? you might have to work stream around, this is of course subjective and not needed I NC these because the change of direction
07:39:217 (7,8,9,10) - also NC #7 or just move the NCs around like above suggested ^ NC the 7, I don't know how I didnt see this before, n1
07:51:561 (1) - maybe this is reason to make HP6... the spinner with HR seems pretty deadly, though I can't play HR and just watched auto struggle to gain back HP after spinning max Well, I will bring back the HP 6

Sorry if this is short I really tried after your helpful mod, your map is super polished and I think its very well done! This was basically nitpicking.. it's a good map. Good luck ranking! Thanks !

h4d0uk3n1 wrote:

Hi! M4M from #modreqs

00:02:189 (1) - i would start this spinner at 00:01:161 (since there sound begins) Well, you're right
00:38:532 (4) - this looks not nice because of strong curve (i wouldnt strongly curve short sliders on low SV) I changed its curve a bit, now looks better I think
01:02:875 (1) - start on previous red tick wait, why? the sound starts here 01:07:675 -
01:11:104 (8) - doesnt look nice (for all sliders like this one i recommend this technique) It looks good to me and it is not supossed to be totally curved
01:47:789 (2,3,4) - if you guide them in different directions, it would be better K, done
04:25:847 (1) - im not sure if its rankable (i mean reducing slider's speed by this amount of red dots), you should ask someone more experienced
04:34:932 (1) & 04:42:304 (1) - ^ Yea, I have seen some maps with sliders like this, and it plays and fits well, If someone else in the future, more experienced tell me to change I will, but I thinmk they're okay
04:31:332 (2) - there is unnecessary red dot Fixed
04:36:818 (1) - this slider can be better (there is unnecessary red dot too) Hmm I changed its shape a little bit and deleted the unnecesary red dot
07:46:161 (2) - this should be at 07:46:075
07:46:932 (3) - and this at 07:46:761 Both are well snapped since the sound starts in the blue tick, moving them as you suggested doesnt fit
07:51:561 (1) - spinner end sounds too loud Its already at 5% .. I guess I will add a blanket hitsound for this
In general, enjoyable map, but some sliders are puzzling. Sorry if it's a bad mod, i tried Thanks
Good luck!

• 00:13:847 (3,5) - Is this overlap necessary :3
  
  00:14:875 (5,6) - Since the rhythm changes from 1 beat to 1/2 , I don’t think it’s best idea to hide 6 behind 00:14:361 (4) -
  
  00:16:075 (2) - Something happens in the music. I am grumpy no notable difference can be observed in the map. To smaller extend, same 00:24:304 (2) -
  
  00:29:275 (1,2,3) - I think 00:29:789 (2,3) - having larger jump than 00:29:275 (1,2) - will fit the music better I might stack 00:29:789 (2) - with 00:29:275 (1) - end. Same with similar places later (00:32:018 (1,2,3) - 00:34:761 (1,2,3) - etc)
  
  01:10:247 (1,2) - I think jump is better because kickslider plays like a circle
  
  01:12:218 (6) - Maybe I’m deaf, but I don’t hear anything in music to justify this sharp turn
  
  01:57:732 (1) - ^ I think a sharp(er) turn would fit in here in the most lovely way
  
  01:18:989 (3,4) - why so close >< they have 1/2 gap. I think it will be better to differentiate this with 01:18:304 (2,1) - 01:18:647 (1,2) - 01:19:332 (4,5) - . I think 02:01:504 (3,4) - works well
  
  01:56:018 (3,1) - ^
  
  06:12:475 (3,1) - ^
  
  06:23:447 (3,1) - ^
  
  01:23:446 - Very significant sound imo. Consider inserting a jump or a flow break at 01:23:275 (6,7) -
  
  01:51:561 (1) - This slider looks like small intestine. So beautiful <3
  
  03:10:589 (4,6) - I am unsure if there’s something in the music to justify these large jumps
  
  03:37:418 (2,3) - I think something like (http://puu.sh/qrrwE/3622ba83c6.jpg) might flow slightly better because it will be [jump->change direction->hit 2 ->slider] instead of [jump -> slow down -> change direction -> slider]
  
  06:01:847 (1,1) - I think it will be neater to stack
  
  06:21:732 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It could be neater to make these into a blanket for four 06:21:217 (4) -
  07:28:246 (3) - Consider starting stream here because drums at 07:27:561 (1,2,3,1) - goes in four, and there are 1/4 sounds that are not mapped in blue ticks between 07:27:561 (1,2,3,1) - anyways

CaffeAmericano wrote:

Winter is coming

• 00:13:847 (3,5) - Is this overlap necessary :3 Right o.o fixed
  
  00:14:875 (5,6) - Since the rhythm changes from 1 beat to 1/2 , I don’t think it’s best idea to hide 6 behind 00:14:361 (4) - Yea, changed this whole part a bit, fixed
  
  00:16:075 (2) - Something happens in the music. I am grumpy no notable difference can be observed in the map. To smaller extend, same 00:24:304 (2) - Changed, just added more spacing, just a bit more
  
  00:29:275 (1,2,3) - I think 00:29:789 (2,3) - having larger jump than 00:29:275 (1,2) - will fit the music better I might stack 00:29:789 (2) - with 00:29:275 (1) - end. Same with similar places later (00:32:018 (1,2,3) - 00:34:761 (1,2,3) - etc) Changed, just added more spacing, just a bit more
  
  01:10:247 (1,2) - I think jump is better because kickslider plays like a circle Right, changed
  
  01:12:218 (6) - Maybe I’m deaf, but I don’t hear anything in music to justify this sharp turn The wubwub changes
  
  01:57:732 (1) - ^ I think a sharp(er) turn would fit in here in the most lovely way Yea, I was considering to change this stream shape before.. so I finally change
  
  01:18:989 (3,4) - why so close >< they have 1/2 gap. I think it will be better to differentiate this with 01:18:304 (2,1) - 01:18:647 (1,2) - 01:19:332 (4,5) - . I think 02:01:504 (3,4) - works well Done all of them
  
  01:56:018 (3,1) - ^
  
  06:12:475 (3,1) - ^
  
  06:23:447 (3,1) - ^
  
  01:23:446 - Very significant sound imo. Consider inserting a jump or a flow break at 01:23:275 (6,7) - Oke
  
  01:51:561 (1) - This slider looks like small intestine. So beautiful <3
  
  03:10:589 (4,6) - I am unsure if there’s something in the music to justify these large jumps Reduced its spacing
  
  03:37:418 (2,3) - I think something like (http://puu.sh/qrrwE/3622ba83c6.jpg) might flow slightly better because it will be [jump->change direction->hit 2 ->slider] instead of [jump -> slow down -> change direction -> slider] Ohhh niceee, changed
  
  06:01:847 (1,1) - I think it will be neater to stack Yea, true
  
  06:21:732 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It could be neater to make these into a blanket for four 06:21:217 (4) - How I didnt see this x.x, changed
  07:28:246 (3) - Consider starting stream here because drums at 07:27:561 (1,2,3,1) - goes in four, and there are 1/4 sounds that are not mapped in blue ticks between 07:27:561 (1,2,3,1) - anyways Right, added a new circle at 07:28:075 - and moved the stream

An interesting map mapped to an interesting song xD Good luck! Thanks !

1. First impression
   
   Holy crap, that's an 8 minute map. I like the song 'cause i like wubs in general and the song is actually really nice and not too repetitive, despite it's length.
   
   
2. Timing
   
   No objections, would be a shame if the previous modders didn't check the timing.
   
   
3. Hitsounding & Volume
   
   00:06:989 - Is this timing point necessary?
   00:07:332 (1) - Personal opinion: 30% might also seal the deal since 40% is a tiny bit too loud for this section. Not necessary.
   00:29:275 (1) - Same reason as before: 40% seems fine. Not necessary.
   00:51:218 (5) - I like the short increase of volume just before the decrease, can't help but think that there should be a NC.
   01:07:675 (1) - to 01:29:618 (1) - I'd like to see the volume go to like 75%. It might just be me, but the soft hits should be a bit louder in this section because it was a bit too quiet while playing.
   05:32:704 (1) - This section is very calm and using normal hitsounds kinda destroys the feeling for it. I recommend soft hitsounds (like the ones you already used) and blank sliderslides ( puu.sh/qAoak/3dda392b8f.wav ). IMO it would help to emphasize the upcoming section.
   05:54:989 (1) - This one should stay the same tho, because of the incoming drop, strong notes help with the buildup.
   07:51:561 (1) - Why make it 5% when the hit is blank anyways? If nobody notices it can stay. :d
   
   This is less than i thought. Some of these might seem like me wanting to force my opinion on you, but eventually it's up to you to decide if you want to change anything or not. As a last remark: the hitsounding in general doesn't really stand out but after taking a deeper this seems like a lot of work. Props to you dear sir/lady, that is really good effort right there.
   
   
4. Winter ('cause that's the only diff, duh)
   
   00:21:047 (1,2,3,4,5) - Change this pattern to one of 00:23:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and it'll look nicer. I'd explain why but it would take up too much space, so if you want to know the reason, just PM me in-game.
   00:12:818 (1,2,3,4,5) - Inconistent spacing. Looks ugly.
   00:15:561 (1,2,3,4) - Same, but this seems fine.
   01:20:875 (2) - Ctrl+G ?
   03:03:561 (3,1) - These 2 building an arc/circlearc like (http://puu.sh/qAq5Z/b2665341c8.jpg) would be nice.
   03:14:189 (1,2,3,4,5) - These and the following kicksliders are overspaced IMO, especially for a relatively calm section like this. (>4x spacing, come on man.) Please don't use over 4x spacing on these. Maybe something between 3.5x and 4x would be appropriate.
   04:25:847 (1) - The wobbles(?) are strong with this one. Might want to loosen them up a bit, might be a bit too static.
   04:34:932 (1) - Unlike the previous one, this one is a really questionable. Wobbles (i still don't know if that's what this is called) are really dangerous at the start of a slider since you don't really see them coming and thus they can break your combo rather easily. Still, you should keep them, because they're fitting to the song and i can't imagine anything that would fit.
   05:50:189 (4) - Extend it a bit? Stops a bit earlier than the vocals do.
   07:38:875 (1) - NC?
   07:42:647 (1) - Why is that NC? 07:41:961 (1) - Seems so lonely :<
   07:43:161 (2) - Also this slider should end on red tick, following slider is abit too sudden.
   
   
5. Last words
   
   Streams. Might be able to FC that if it wasn't for the damn streams . Overall fun map and nice song. Good luck in the future!

Ikaros wrote:

Never would've thought i'd do a mod from #modreqs but, oh well, here i am.
NM btw

I'm tryna make it pretty but don't expect too much.

1. First impression
   
   Holy crap, that's an 8 minute map. I like the song 'cause i like wubs in general and the song is actually really nice and not too repetitive, despite it's length.
   
   
2. Timing
   
   No objections, would be a shame if the previous modders didn't check the timing.
   
   
3. Hitsounding & Volume
   
   00:06:989 - Is this timing point necessary? Oh shet! the spinner is supoosed to end here!
   00:07:332 (1) - Personal opinion: 30% might also seal the deal since 40% is a tiny bit too loud for this section. Not necessary.
   00:29:275 (1) - Same reason as before: 40% seems fine. Not necessary. Changed both, 30 and 40 as you suggested
   00:51:218 (5) - I like the short increase of volume just before the decrease, can't help but think that there should be a NC. Oke
   01:07:675 (1) - to 01:29:618 (1) - I'd like to see the volume go to like 75%. It might just be me, but the soft hits should be a bit louder in this section because it was a bit too quiet while playing. Well, I think it was okay but I raised it to 70%
   05:32:704 (1) - This section is very calm and using normal hitsounds kinda destroys the feeling for it. I recommend soft hitsounds (like the ones you already used) and blank sliderslides ( puu.sh/qAoak/3dda392b8f.wav ). IMO it would help to emphasize the upcoming section. Agree! done
   05:54:989 (1) - This one should stay the same tho, because of the incoming drop, strong notes help with the buildup.
   07:51:561 (1) - Why make it 5% when the hit is blank anyways? If nobody notices it can stay. :d It doesn't matter, does it?
   
   This is less than i thought. Some of these might seem like me wanting to force my opinion on you, but eventually it's up to you to decide if you want to change anything or not. As a last remark: the hitsounding in general doesn't really stand out but after taking a deeper this seems like a lot of work. Props to you dear sir/lady, that is really good effort right there. xD thanks
   
   
4. Winter ('cause that's the only diff, duh)
   
   00:21:047 (1,2,3,4,5) - Change this pattern to one of 00:23:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and it'll look nicer. I'd explain why but it would take up too much space, so if you want to know the reason, just PM me in-game. I don't know what you mean.. hmm to make them short?
   00:12:818 (1,2,3,4,5) - Inconistent spacing. Looks ugly. o.o mapped using the DS enabled.. and It seems fine to me.. o.o
   00:15:561 (1,2,3,4) - Same, but this seems fine.
   01:20:875 (2) - Ctrl+G ? Ye
   03:03:561 (3,1) - These 2 building an arc/circlearc like (http://puu.sh/qAq5Z/b2665341c8.jpg) would be nice. Thats the point, I failed to make it perfect, but I changed it a bit, just didn't overlap it (I don't like it overlapped A><
   03:14:189 (1,2,3,4,5) - These and the following kicksliders are overspaced IMO, especially for a relatively calm section like this. (>4x spacing, come on man.) Please don't use over 4x spacing on these. Maybe something between 3.5x and 4x would be appropriate. Yeh, you're right, changed to 3,5
   04:25:847 (1) - The wobbles(?) are strong with this one. Might want to loosen them up a bit, might be a bit too static.
   04:34:932 (1) - Unlike the previous one, this one is a really questionable. Wobbles (i still don't know if that's what this is called) are really dangerous at the start of a slider since you don't really see them coming and thus they can break your combo rather easily. Still, you should keep them, because they're fitting to the song and i can't imagine anything that would fit. Well, t starts slow because the previous slider and then there is that .. sound and I think it flows well + for alllll the playtest I 've seen, no one has break the combo here.. for now, so Im not changing it, yet
   05:50:189 (4) - Extend it a bit? Stops a bit earlier than the vocals do. Ye
   07:38:875 (1) - NC? Ye
   07:42:647 (1) - Why is that NC? 07:41:961 (1) - Seems so lonely :< xD idk.. fixed anyways
   07:43:161 (2) - Also this slider should end on red tick, following slider is abit too sudden. Hoo, I don't know how I missed this, at first, when I mapped it, it ended on the red tick.. dunno how it gets messed up but fixed
   
   
5. Last words
   
   Streams. Might be able to FC that if it wasn't for the damn streams . Overall fun map and nice song. Good luck in the future! Thanks !

1. Maybe I'm missing something but I just want to make sure that the background is relevant to the song? I'm assuming the bg is like the vocalist or something but to me it seems sorta unfitting given the style of the remix.

1. 00:18:818 (2,3) - Why not use the same slider for both of these sounds. Currently the asymmetry is a little offputting and this is an easy change.
2. 00:31:332 (7,8,1) - Maybe equalize the spacing between these three? It'd look better aesthetically.
3. 00:34:589 (7,3) - blanket
4. 00:57:389 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4) - Starting at the first note, I find that the music here is so incredibly silent while the rhythm you're following stays at the exact same density... I reccomend making these sections far less dense, maybe only mapping circles on the drum hits or something like that.
5. 01:27:647 (1) - This slider is begging to be misread as the noteplacement is the same as 01:27:132 (2,3). I reccomend changing this so that it's easier to read, maybe by making the slider shape different or changing the sv again.
6. 01:28:246 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why not start all of this stacked on top of 01:27:218 (3)
7. 01:58:675 - Maybe put a note here so you don't skip the wub noise
8. 02:04:160 - ^
9. 02:09:646 - ^ At times you choose to put a note here and other times you don't... in some of them I can sort of understand you're reasoning for it but I think it's best to stay consistent at the noise is there every time.
10. 03:18:304 (5,6,1) - I think that the distance between these are too large... the jump here is bigger than a lot of the jumps in your kiai so I reccomend toning it down.
11. 03:23:104 (2,3) - ^
12. 03:19:332 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
13. 03:21:904 (8,1) - ^
14. 03:23:104 (2,3) - ^
15. 03:24:475 (3,1) - It might sound like I'm being repetitive, but seriously a lot of the jumps in this rather calm section are around 3x spacing which is bigger than anything in your first kiai.
16. 03:48:389 - Skipping the wub noise here again
17. 03:53:875 - ^
18. 03:58:418 (4,5) - Here you use 2.6~ spacing to represent a 1/1 gap, but 04:03:047 (4,5) here you bring it down to 1.6~... try to stay consistent.
19. 04:05:789 (4,5,6) - ^
20. 04:08:018 (2,3,1) - ^
21. 04:25:847 (1) - These kind of sliders aren't rankable, so I reccomend changing that.
22. 04:34:932 (1) - Unrankable as well
23. 04:36:818 (1) - While not the most beautiful slider in the world, these are far more rankable then the other sliders you have used in this section, so I reccomend changing them all to something more like this!
24. 04:53:275 (5,6,1) - This plays awkwardly and is again a huge jump that's not in your kiai.
25. 04:59:104 (6,7,1) - ^
26. 05:00:475 (8,9,10,11) - A more linear flow between these two would be more fitting in my opinion.
27. 05:06:304 (8,9) - Again, spacing is too large.
28. 06:09:646 - Wub noise skipped
29. 06:15:132 - ^
30. 06:18:560 - ^

Logic Agent wrote:

Hi! M4m stuff~

[General]

1. Maybe I'm missing something but I just want to make sure that the background is relevant to the song? I'm assuming the bg is like the vocalist or something but to me it seems sorta unfitting given the style of the remix. Yes, Its Eri Kumagai from Ongaku Shoujo, the singer

[Winter]

1. 00:18:818 (2,3) - Why not use the same slider for both of these sounds. Currently the asymmetry is a little offputting and this is an easy change. Fixed
   
2. 00:31:332 (7,8,1) - Maybe equalize the spacing between these three? It'd look better aesthetically. Fixed
   
3. 00:34:589 (7,3) - blanket Fixed
   
4. 00:57:389 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4) - Starting at the first note, I find that the music here is so incredibly silent while the rhythm you're following stays at the exact same density... I reccomend making these sections far less dense, maybe only mapping circles on the drum hits or something like that. changed, to more sliders
5. 01:27:647 (1) - This slider is begging to be misread as the noteplacement is the same as 01:27:132 (2,3). I reccomend changing this so that it's easier to read, maybe by making the slider shape different or changing the sv again. Changed its shape, but its still 1/4 and plays the same as the other, just that this is more slow because the sound of the song, still changed its shape, i think its better now
6. 01:28:246 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why not start all of this stacked on top of 01:27:218 (3) Ok, fixed
7. 01:58:675 - Maybe put a note here so you don't skip the wub noise
8. 02:04:160 - ^
9. 02:09:646 - ^ At times you choose to put a note here and other times you don't... in some of them I can sort of understand you're reasoning for it but I think it's best to stay consistent at the noise is there every time. Well, I don't use them in all the parts with this sound, because is not the same sound, actually it changes and sometimes its more abrupt, and thats the times I mapp the wub, and all the kiais have the same wub mapped like that in -almost- the same way, Im not changing this for now, I'll consider it, If someone else tell me to change, I will change
10. 03:18:304 (5,6,1) - I think that the distance between these are too large... the jump here is bigger than a lot of the jumps in your kiai so I reccomend toning it down. Fixed
11. 03:23:104 (2,3) - ^
12. 03:19:332 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
13. 03:21:904 (8,1) - ^
14. 03:23:104 (2,3) - ^
15. 03:24:475 (3,1) - It might sound like I'm being repetitive, but seriously a lot of the jumps in this rather calm section are around 3x spacing which is bigger than anything in your first kiai. Fixed all
16. 03:48:389 - Skipping the wub noise here again
17. 03:53:875 - ^
18. 03:58:418 (4,5) - Here you use 2.6~ spacing to represent a 1/1 gap, but 04:03:047 (4,5) here you bring it down to 1.6~... try to stay consistent.
19. 04:05:789 (4,5,6) - ^
20. 04:08:018 (2,3,1) - ^ Fixed
21. 04:25:847 (1) - These kind of sliders aren't rankable, so I reccomend changing that. I've seen a lot of maps with sliders like this, exactly like this, these serve the same function in these maps than mine, and mine plays well
22. 04:34:932 (1) - Unrankable as well I'm only changing this one
23. 04:36:818 (1) - While not the most beautiful slider in the world, these are far more rankable then the other sliders you have used in this section, so I reccomend changing them all to something more like this!
24. 04:53:275 (5,6,1) - This plays awkwardly and is again a huge jump that's not in your kiai. Fixed
25. 04:59:104 (6,7,1) - ^ Fixed
26. 05:00:475 (8,9,10,11) - A more linear flow between these two would be more fitting in my opinion. Fixed
27. 05:06:304 (8,9) - Again, spacing is too large. Fixed
28. 06:09:646 - Wub noise skipped
29. 06:15:132 - ^
30. 06:18:560 - ^

Overall I think that this map could use a bit of polishing aesthetically and in the consistency between sections. Some parts looked sorta rushed and played awkwardly, but I hope with some of these changes you'll be on the road to ranking! I wish you the best of luck! Thanks!

CookieKivi wrote:

wubstep!

wintah

hq background pls. ~

00:10:075 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe you wanna do smth like.. : Slider, Double, Slider, Double, Slider? I agree!
00:12:475 (6,1) - smth like dis? http://puu.sh/qLw7u.jpg 00:12:046 - no, because there is not any sound at 00:12:046 -
00:13:332 (8,9,10,11) - doublesliderdouble, like i mentioned before Done
00:15:217 (12,1) - http://puu.sh/qLw7u.jpg The same as the other.. no
00:17:617 (5,6) - dis would fit better http://puu.sh/qLwcV.jpg changed but not like you said ~
00:38:189 (3,4) - smth like this feels absolutly bad - another pattern pls
get those in the whole beginning. - we need more variousity - otherwise it'll feel boring. Changed some sliders to circles.. this way It will feel less boring I guess
01:34:418 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - dis pls http://puu.sh/qLwld.jpg 01:34:675 - there is not any sound there, and listen carefully.. its a short stream there, I will not change this
01:36:732 - add circle here to get the wub sound I agree
01:37:847 (1) - dis http://puu.sh/qLwpK.jpg wubsound ya Done
01:40:503 - add circle for wubsound Done
01:41:189 - ^ Done
01:42:217 - ^ Done
01:43:332 (5) - wubsounds ;; http://puu.sh/qLwvJ.jpg changed, not like this but changed
01:46:675 - wubsound add circle
01:47:703 - ^
01:58:675 - ^
02:04:160 - ^ I guess Im finally adding all these circles to these wubs

i love this song.
fix those errors all over the song = nice wubmap. Thanks

:3

Mark101 wrote:

some irc modding

00:32 Mark101: Hi, here from #modreqs. I saw your request and opening the map I found some errors. I would like to suggest some fix, is it okay for you?
00:32 Itasha_S13: SYes
00:33 Mark101: 00:08:361 (3) - you should place this object a bit more up, it is differently spaced from other sliders
00:34 Mark101: Oh, i forgot to tell: I could be really bad at explaining things, so if you don't correctly understand tell me
00:34 Itasha_S13: Sure np
00:34 Mark101: I'd also like to suggest to increase the slider speed, using 0,50 and 0,35 in this part is really weird
00:35 Itasha_S13: Alright I don't know how I didnt noticed that before
00:36 Itasha_S13: 0,35 and 0,50 is okay, the song is really slow there I dont think increasing it will be better
00:36 Mark101: 00:35:960 (4) - you should change this with 2 sliders because the slider ends on a beat that is stronger than the slider-start
00:36 Itasha_S13: Like I don't want damn long sliders there
00:36 Mark101: I would use 0,75, some sliders are really short
00:36 Mark101: 00:13:847 (4) -
00:36 Mark101: like this one
00:36 Itasha_S13: Thats the point
00:37 Mark101: 00:50:532 (1,2,3,4) - the sound is not totally changing, you should follow the same spacing for all the circles
00:38 Mark101: You could not even notice this error because there is really a minimal distance, but it makes difference :w:
00:38 Itasha_S13: I start following the piano there
00:38 Mark101: there is no piano in 00:50:532 (1,2,3,4) - lol
00:39 Itasha_S13: There is not error xD Im using the DS
00:39 Itasha_S13: 2x
00:39 Itasha_S13: Piano.. hmm
00:39 Itasha_S13: that sound
00:39 Itasha_S13: Its like a high pitched piano, not sure if its a piano
00:40 Mark101: 01:13:504 (1) - the slider end is on a beat stronger than the slider-start, you should change with 2 circles
00:40 Mark101: all those jumpstreams are weird imo, but it's not totally an error
00:41 Mark101: 01:18:989 (3) - same of 01:13:504 (1)-
00:41 Itasha_S13: there are not jumpstreams
00:41 Mark101: I name "jumpstreams" things like 01:26:532 (10,11) -
00:42 Itasha_S13: Kicksliders plays as a single circle so there is not problem
00:42 Itasha_S13: 01:18:989 (3) - not gonna change, following the "wubs"
00:44 Mark101: 01:54:647 (1,1,1) - this sounds really bad with those hitsounds, you should elongate them to the blue tick
00:45 Itasha_S13: Thanks you
00:45 Mark101: 01:57:047 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i don't hear literally any sound for the stream, is it me or that's true?
00:45 Mark101: 01:58:675 (2) - that's too much far from 01:58:418 (1) - , this should be unrankable
00:46 Mark101: it's a 175x2bpm jump
00:46 Mark101: 02:08:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same of 01:57:047 -
00:47 Itasha_S13: I mappe all these wubs with a stream, I can't imagine a better way to map them
00:47 Mark101: you had to map the Drum and bass ._.
00:48 Itasha_S13: That would make my map really boring tho
00:48 Mark101: Sorry but you can't use elements which aren't in the sound of the songs
00:49 Mark101: 02:11:961 (5) - make this a 5 ticks sliders instead of 6 and make the slider end a circle (because the slider end is on a strong beat)
00:50 Mark101: 02:57:904 (2,3) - this change of spacing is weird, not that wrong but i'd change this and move it closer to (2)
00:52 Itasha_S13: Is more further because the sound, I do emphasis on that sound since the beginning of the song by spacing it more
00:52 Itasha_S13: Like 00:40:761 (2,3) -
00:53 Mark101: 03:33:389 (1,1,1) - change like i said before even here
00:53 Itasha_S13: Yea I already changed all of them
00:53 Mark101: 03:35:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you already know what to do here
00:54 Mark101: 03:41:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:54 Mark101: 03:44:704 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
00:54 Mark101: 03:46:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
00:54 Mark101: ^
00:54 Itasha_S13: Im not gonna delete almost all the streams in my map, its just my way to map the wubs
00:54 Mark101: no why did I use the ^ as an "I agree" lmao
00:54 Mark101: You can't map those "wubs" like this
00:54 Itasha_S13: Ikr
00:54 Mark101: There is literally no sound for the stream
00:55 Mark101: This is unrankable
00:56 Mark101: 04:51:561 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5) -
00:56 Itasha_S13: well, until now no one have complain about these streams.. I will consider deleting them only if more modders tell me to
00:56 Mark101: there is no sound for this stream
00:56 Itasha_S13: I don't think its unrankable stuuf
00:57 Mark101: i've never seen a map with streams used like here tbh
00:57 Mark101: 04:56:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - no sound for streams
00:57 Mark101: 05:02:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:58 Mark101: 06:02:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i'm not gonna mention anymore those streams, this is the last time
00:59 Mark101: 06:06:904 (2) - this is a bit far from (1), you should short the distance
00:59 Itasha_S13: Yea, I will not change them anyways
00:59 Mark101: 06:09:646 (2) - absolutely short the distance here, thats again a 175 x 2 bpm jump
01:00 Mark101: 06:24:046 (2) - short the distance a bit also here
01:00 Mark101: 06:26:103 (2) - must short here because of the fast jump
01:00 Mark101: 06:31:589 (2) - ^
01:01 Mark101: 06:56:275 (2) - ^
01:01 Mark101: 06:56:961 (2) - ^
01:01 Mark101: 06:59:018 (2) - ^
01:01 Itasha_S13: Not gonna change all of them since its playable
01:02 Mark101: things like 06:09:646 (2) - MUST be changed, that's too much far
01:02 Mark101: 350 bpm jumps
01:02 Itasha_S13: It doesnt like like a 360bpm jump because that slider-.follow thing
01:02 Itasha_S13: the same reason why the kicksliders plays as a single circle
01:04 Mark101: even if there is a sliderend before you have to do this, have you ever seen jumps like these somewhere? It's even really bad to read
01:05 Itasha_S13: from all the playtest on this map no one ever have complain about them
01:05 Itasha_S13: because they really play good
01:05 Itasha_S13: Also not really bad to read since all the map is full of them
01:05 Mark101: if people can do a such jump it doesn't mean that this is 100% playable, and i'm almost sure that those people didn't consider this like an error
01:06 Itasha_S13: other thing is, reduce the volume of the effect to 0 and listen carefully to the song
01:06 Itasha_S13: in streams like this
01:06 Itasha_S13: well, in all the streams
01:06 Itasha_S13: 01:57:047 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
01:06 Mark101: I've modded the whole map without effects volume
01:06 Itasha_S13: there is a soft- sound that you can hear
01:07 Itasha_S13: then
01:07 Mark101: there is no soft sound lmao
01:07 Itasha_S13: you can clearly listen to the sound
01:07 Mark101: there is vocal+"wubs"+dnb
01:07 Itasha_S13: Yes it is
01:08 Itasha_S13: there a streamy sound all over the song
01:08 Mark101: btw, That's all, you haven't followed many suggestion, I think/hope that some more modders will say that so you'll agree
01:08 Itasha_S13: the same sample sound I used as soft sound
01:08 Mark101: You're the only one hearing that sound tbh
01:08 Itasha_S13: listen carefully
01:08 Mark101: and by the way even if there was a soft sound it shouldn't be mapped with a such spacing
01:09 Itasha_S13: Is not high spaced or anything
01:09 Mark101: Metadata: change 熊谷絵里（cv.瀬戸麻沙美） with 熊谷絵里（CV.瀬戸麻沙美）
01:09 Mark101: it should be in caps
01:10 Itasha_S13: Thats not really a problem since I copy the metadata from this map
01:10 Itasha_S13: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/467761
01:10 Itasha_S13: and Its not with CAPS
01:10 Itasha_S13: I copied the metadata for artist from that song because its the same artist
01:10 Itasha_S13: the same singer
01:10 Itasha_S13: the same producer
01:10 Mark101: many maps have wrong metadata, let me check on internet if this is exact
01:11 Itasha_S13: a ranked map can't have wrong metadata
01:11 Itasha_S13: and this map is recent
01:12 Itasha_S13: Its ranked like 2 or 3 weeks ago
01:12 Itasha_S13: And you can find the metada and source of everything clicking the banner of my map
01:13 Mark101: looks right. that's weird because i've never seen a map with a CV in undercase. my bad
01:13 Mark101: Do i post the log in the topic?
01:13 Itasha_S13: Ofc

According to this, I end up reducing the spacing in the jumps like 00:59 Mark101: 06:09:646 (2) - absolutely short the distance here, thats again a 175 x 2 bpm jump
01:00 Mark101: 06:24:046 (2) - short the distance a bit also here
01:00 Mark101: 06:26:103 (2) - must short here because of the fast jump
01:00 Mark101: 06:31:589 (2) - ^
01:01 Mark101: 06:56:275 (2) - ^
01:01 Mark101: 06:56:961 (2) - ^
01:01 Mark101: 06:59:018 (2) - ^
all of them- except the ones in the last kiai part

gl

Winter

Try to avoid making slider like this one 00:24:817 (4) - it looks better and it fits better when it's rotated like this 00:23:789 (1) -
00:38:018 (2,3,4,5) - Fix DS
00:40:761 (2,3) - ^
00:52:418 (4,5,6) - Feels weird with reverse slider
00:58:589 (4,6) - Stack
00:59:960 (2,4) - ^
01:31:332 (1) - Maybe you should make faster sliders? Looks bad with small sliders. 1.25 - 1.5 SV?'
01:57:647 (8,1,2) - Fix stream
02:45:218 (2) - End this slider here 02:45:560 (2) -
02:48:132 (5) - Looks better like this

Slider

02:51:561 (3,4) - Make better slider shapes and make them faster
02:52:246 (1,2,3) - Fix DS
02:57:732 (1,2,3) - ^
03:01:504 (4,5,6,7) - Fix ugly small sliders
03:03:389 (2,3) - Fix DS aaaa
03:14:189 (1) - Move to 44 100
03:22:075 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Bad stream shape
05:11:275 (2) - Do it like what i told you to do here 02:48:132 (5) - just upside down
05:18:475 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - too many 2009 sliders, make shapes.

Planecakes wrote:

M4M

Winter

Try to avoid making slider like this one 00:24:817 (4) - it looks better and it fits better when it's rotated like this 00:23:789 (1) - Oke, fixed :p
00:38:018 (2,3,4,5) - Fix DS
00:40:761 (2,3) - ^ Im using more spacing in these to make more emphasis on the sound.. as you can see I use more distance in every circle-slider that have that sound, and not only in the beginning, they're in the whole map.. but well, I just make a equal spacing in all of them making a faster movement for the emphasis
00:52:418 (4,5,6) - Feels weird with reverse slider hmm I don't think this is a problem since I use more reverses then.. I will change if someone else tell me to
00:58:589 (4,6) - Stack
00:59:960 (2,4) - ^ -done both
01:31:332 (1) - Maybe you should make faster sliders? Looks bad with small sliders. 1.25 - 1.5 SV?' hmm o.o I think they're all okay, and Im using 1.3 and 1.5 at kiai, 1.25 or 1.5 for this part will be too much
01:57:647 (8,1,2) - Fix stream Done!
02:45:218 (2) - End this slider here 02:45:560 (2) - hmm I'd say no since there is a sound there 02:45:389 - and I want this clickable 02:45:732 (3) - for that sound
02:48:132 (5) - Looks better like this wonderful!

Slider

02:51:561 (3,4) - Make better slider shapes and make them faster
02:52:246 (1,2,3) - Fix DS
02:57:732 (1,2,3) - ^
03:01:504 (4,5,6,7) - Fix ugly small sliders I guess Im gonna raise the velociy of all this part for them.. kkk
03:03:389 (2,3) - Fix DS aaaa some people told me that I should add more spacing in all of them for the emphasis on the sound.. and other people say that no.. I prefer more spacing for the emphais of the sound..
03:14:189 (1) - Move to 44 100 Sure
03:22:075 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Bad stream shape re-maked a bit, I guess it looks better now
05:11:275 (2) - Do it like what i told you to do here 02:48:132 (5) - just upside down
05:18:475 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - too many 2009 sliders, make shapes. Sure

Nice map and gl with ranking thanks