I have heard rumors that you are trying to rank this, so I have decided to leave a simple mod to discuss some of the things that are wrong with it and make it unrankable. Even ignoring the distinct lack of readability, distance spacing, and general playability throughout the entire song, this map still has many issues, some of which I will point out in this mod.
[Aspire]
To make this map rankable, you need to make a full set for this song, which includes a map that is at least less than 2*, and a steady spread throughout reaching this diffulcty (easy, normal, hard, insane, then this behemoth)
00:00:659 (1) - This slider should end at 00:00:831 -. You see, when sliders for no reason bend back on themselves, that is confusing and is hard to read. This should be fixed to make the map more readable.
00:09:279 (3) - ^
00:17:900 (1) - ^
00:18:589 (1,2,1) - ^
00:19:969 (1,2) - ^
01:48:933 (1) - ^
00:01:865 (1,2) - I see here that you put the circle on top of the slider at the end. This is not allowed, and the fact that the circle is on the slider makes it difficult to read, and it should be changed immediately. The examples below could either be examples of notes ontop of notes or sliders on top of sliders
00:04:624 (1,2) - ^
00:07:382 (1,2) - ^
00:10:141 (1,2) - ^
00:12:900 (4,5) - ^
00:15:658 (1,2) - ^
00:44:796 (1,2,1,2) - ^
01:40:313 (1,1) - ^
00:12:037 (4) - Not only is this slider bad because of how suddenly fast it is, but it also changes speed as it goes along its path. Your sliders should not change speed during its movement, and this is highly difficult to read. The examples below could even show random speed changing of sliders, extremely slow, or extremely fast sliders.
00:23:072 (1) - ^
00:34:105 (1) - ^ I dont even know what the hell this is
00:44:796 (1,2,1,2) - ^ But it is overly slow instead of fast
00:45:486 (1) - ^
01:08:934 (1) - ^
01:36:348 (1) - ^ A spinner would be about 200x more appropriate. Even a circle would be many times better.
01:40:313 (1) - ^
00:42:813 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Not only are these sliders very difficult to read (you have no idea what direction they would go!), but they are painfully fast and unplayable!!! Not even AUTO can do these! These need to be taken out immediately. You have to be a freaking moron to think this was playable at all!
01:11:002 (1,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - ^ I hope these are jokes. You know this is absolute crap that needs to be remapped, right?
00:56:520 (1) - Nice symmetry! Make this symmetrical!
02:02:726 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These notes are not fully on the screen. You see, when notes are not on the screen, they are very difficult to read and nearly impossible to hit. These are just plain unrankable.
And I didnt even go over anything nit-picky. ALL of these things have to be changes for the map to even have a slither of chance of being ranked.
I would like Kudosu for being the most helpful mod here...