06:16 PulseOfSk8: You want a IRC mod?
06:16 *PulseOfSk8 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/966427 Panda Eyes - KIKO]
06:16 Stingy: Yes please.
06:17 Stingy: I'll take anything atm because people ignore me 24/7 bc my rank
06:17 PulseOfSk8: Know that feel bro, also maybe it's because your map has a lot of problems. I will not point it all, but i will show what you can't do and what you can improve
06:18 Stingy: I would really appreciate it.
06:18 PulseOfSk8: so let's get it started
06:18 *PulseOfSk8 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/966427 Panda Eyes - KIKO [Insane]]
06:18 Stingy: When I get money I will get you a month or two of supporter
06:18 Stingy: Which will be soon. My birthday is in a week exactly
06:18 PulseOfSk8: 00:09:190 (1) - you can get something more creative than just pair of spinners
06:19 PulseOfSk8: You can use maybe low sv sliders
06:19 PulseOfSk8: and make them neat
06:19 PulseOfSk8: wait, i'll do one in example
06:21 PulseOfSk8: [http://puu.sh/pkTh6/db73e1679c.jpg Maybe something like that, just make it blanket]
06:21 PulseOfSk8: Lower SV to 0,75
06:22 PulseOfSk8: And have some fun with sliders
06:22 PulseOfSk8: because those spinners doesn't fit there imo
06:22 PulseOfSk8: it's just an example how you can do it, next
06:22 PulseOfSk8: 00:17:917 (1,1) - Those thingies getting out of screen
06:22 PulseOfSk8: surely you have to do something with them
06:23 PulseOfSk8: it's unrankable
06:23 PulseOfSk8: 00:22:280 (1) - Make it neater, i'll show u
06:24 PulseOfSk8: [http://puu.sh/pkTqy/8bad25f3f2.jpg See? i used only 4 sliderpoints]
06:24 PulseOfSk8: 00:24:462 (1) - same, you can just copy/paste
06:25 PulseOfSk8: 00:26:644 (1) - That's interesting
06:25 PulseOfSk8: but again, you can make it better
06:25 PulseOfSk8: all the thing in doing umm...circle (?) sliders is to make a perfect tear inside them
06:26 PulseOfSk8: [http://puu.sh/pkTwY/496d232bfe.jpg It's better now, still not perfect but better]
06:27 PulseOfSk8: 00:30:462 (4,1) - This is what you call unnecessary overlap
06:28 PulseOfSk8: try to not getting things get on them...i hope you know what i'm talking, my english is bad sry XD
06:28 Stingy: I didn't even realise you were Polish
06:29 PulseOfSk8: Good to hea...to see xd
06:29 PulseOfSk8: ok
06:29 PulseOfSk8: 00:30:462 (4,1) - surely you need to change it
06:29 PulseOfSk8: this slider is just ugly :v
06:30 PulseOfSk8: 00:44:644 (2,3,4) - make those longer by one kick
06:31 PulseOfSk8: [http://puu.sh/pkTMi/b55a1cb83f.jpg just like that]
06:31 PulseOfSk8: 00:48:462 (1) - It's ok, but it can get better when you'll put a slider there
06:31 PulseOfSk8: imo
06:32 PulseOfSk8: 00:50:644 (13) - same here
06:32 PulseOfSk8: 00:50:644 (13) - ctrl+g here
06:32 PulseOfSk8: woops
06:32 PulseOfSk8: fail
06:32 PulseOfSk8: 00:51:462 (2) - ctrl + g here*
06:32 PulseOfSk8: 00:51:735 (3) - same
06:32 PulseOfSk8: to improve the pattern
06:34 PulseOfSk8: 01:07:008 (4) - ^
06:34 PulseOfSk8: 01:07:553 (6) - ^
06:34 PulseOfSk8: 01:07:826 (7) - ^
06:37 PulseOfSk8: 01:07:826 (7) - unnecessary ds change
06:37 PulseOfSk8: leave it consistent
06:38 PulseOfSk8: 01:13:008 (2) - it feels more jumpy imo
06:38 PulseOfSk8: so that slider not fits here
06:39 PulseOfSk8: 01:16:826 (6) - no way, ugly
06:39 PulseOfSk8: protip
06:40 PulseOfSk8: [http://puu.sh/pkUcp/4c2492f65a.jpg You can make a neat circle slider using just 3 slider points
06:40 PulseOfSk8: one sec brb
06:41 PulseOfSk8: 01:16:826 (6) - also new combo right here
06:42 PulseOfSk8: 01:24:462 (6) - new combo
06:42 PulseOfSk8: 01:25:553 (14) - delete nc
06:42 PulseOfSk8: 01:25:553 (14) - nc
06:43 PulseOfSk8: 01:43:008 (1) - don't use sliders like that
06:43 PulseOfSk8: doesn't matter how you will make it
06:43 PulseOfSk8: it's always ugly
06:43 PulseOfSk8: 01:44:099 (1) - another one
06:43 PulseOfSk8: 01:45:190 (1) - i'm pretty sure something like that is unrankable
06:44 PulseOfSk8: 01:47:371 (1) - this one to and the next one..
06:44 PulseOfSk8: 01:50:099 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - that part is pretty confusing
06:44 PulseOfSk8: it's desrtoying all the flow you have there
06:44 PulseOfSk8: and basically it's done wrong
06:45 PulseOfSk8: 00:44:644 (2,3,4) - make it like you de here
06:46 PulseOfSk8: 01:59:371 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - very unreadable
06:46 PulseOfSk8: spread it
06:46 PulseOfSk8: 02:05:371 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - yes!
06:46 PulseOfSk8: Ofc. this pattern needs to improve but you did well right here
06:47 PulseOfSk8: 01:56:644 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - you know, things like that getting player bored af
06:47 PulseOfSk8: so like you've done it there, make some jumps
06:47 PulseOfSk8: spread those circles on map
06:47 PulseOfSk8: also i will show you how you can make thing more readable
06:48 PulseOfSk8: 02:05:644 (4) - nc here
06:48 PulseOfSk8: 02:05:917 (3) - nc here
06:48 PulseOfSk8: 02:06:190 (3) - nc here
06:48 PulseOfSk8: 02:06:462 (3) - and nc here
06:49 PulseOfSk8: see, it's easier to read when you have different colours
06:49 PulseOfSk8: 02:18:462 (1) - now i see, you've done it here
06:49 PulseOfSk8: so why you haven't done it there? XDD
06:50 PulseOfSk8: ok, here comes the end
06:50 Stingy: ;-;
06:50 PulseOfSk8: That only the biggest problems i see here
06:50 PulseOfSk8: also you ofc. need to improve your skill as a mapper
06:50 Stingy: Mhm
06:50 Stingy: that's what I aim to do
06:50 Stingy: I have a lot of maps waiting to be submitted because I can't get any of my current ones ranked...
06:50 PulseOfSk8: use more patterns, try to avoid using too much the same patterns
06:51 PulseOfSk8: avoid ugly sliders
06:51 PulseOfSk8: and try to keep the flow in your map
06:52 PulseOfSk8: In flow i mean that you don't need to jerk off your cursor when you're playing
06:52 Stingy: Yeah I know xp
06:52 PulseOfSk8: good
06:52 Stingy: wait
06:52 Stingy: ok
06:52 PulseOfSk8: so i will leave a post on forum
06:52 Stingy: so now I'm actually changing my map
06:52 PulseOfSk8: yes