Hi, M4M from my modding Q
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[Easy]
[Normal]
I'll end it here maybe
Just a thing, I think Advanced should be easier because it's wayy closer to Hard now than it is to Normal.
Furthermore, in my previous map, I had some problem ranking it because my Hard have too much jumps even though it's just 3.2* and I think you have similar case.... I hope it won't happen to you tho :/ But because of that, I think you better keep your diffs name as Easy, Normal, Hard, and Insane to avoid my case...
Good luck tho~^^
Please remember you owe me a mod
Red : unrankable (or might be unrankable) issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others
[Easy]
- 00:05:696 I think somehow a note is needed here to spice up and differs things a little from these notes 00:02:414 (1,3) - because you used the same 1/1 reverse slider yet 00:04:290 (2) - is supporting different sound
- 00:37:103 (4) - Move this downward a bit to make a slightly better flow http://puu.sh/ps89G/f75906d5cd.jpg
- 00:40:853 (4,5) - Somehow a zig zag flow like this http://puu.sh/ps8g7/edd34f63c0.jpg would do better imo
- 00:56:791 (1) - I think it's better to keep the circular flow from previous note like http://puu.sh/ps8w9/6a038f2e1a.jpg or even better, you could make a perfect pentagon shape -w- http://puu.sh/ps8C3/c13f274aa4.jpg but yeah, I don't know about next notes tho ><
- 01:06:166 (3,4) - Don't really flow well .-. I think this makes more sense... http://puu.sh/ps8HN/d9c7abf95d.jpg or if you don't want to re-DS, you can do a more advanced pattern like http://puu.sh/ps8LM/6fbf1a0c91.jpg it'll flow nicer and looks neater too :3
- 01:08:041 (1,2) - They don't stick together really well.... better keep 01:08:979 (2) - parallel to (1), or things like this http://puu.sh/ps8UM/b59450ed13.jpg works better too I guess...
- 01:30:542 (1) - I'm pretty sure it says 4 beats spinner gap for Easy... this one is only 3 beats btw so it might be unrankable... furthermore, the sound here 01:32:417 is way bigger than here 01:32:886 so it makes more sense to end it at 01:32:417
- 01:35:230 (2) - the flow is a nope.... Why not like this http://puu.sh/ps95F/15802cfbef.jpg maybe like this for next step to make it less complicated http://puu.sh/ps97H/37677b72a4.jpg or like this http://puu.sh/ps99T/c1499529d0.jpg or like this for even better flow http://puu.sh/ps9eX/f5d70fb550.jpg but super troublesome re-DSing xD
- 01:42:730 (2,3,4) - Flow like this could be better too http://puu.sh/ps9ja/56a6d827eb.jpg
- 02:00:543 (1) - Same, spinner gap ^^^
- 02:19:293 (1) - Are you sure about stacking exactly the same like this? .-. it might be pretty surprising for Easy player tho, so I suggest more to be like this http://puu.sh/ps9vV/34637a0104.jpg kinda ruin the flow and symmetry with (3) tho, but would read better. If you decided to apply, I don't know about symmetry, but maybe you can fix the flow like this http://puu.sh/ps9AO/801a5235be.jpg but wait.... http://puu.sh/ps9DI/f27f3d785d.jpg symmetry
- 02:45:075 (5,1) - Y not blanket? ;-;
- 02:56:794 (1) - I prefer things like this http://puu.sh/ps9J2/d880c1854b.jpg
- Simple map because of the relatively simple song, but still overall good, I just sometimes disliked the linear flow ;-; but it's alright, it's my taste -w-
[Normal]
- 00:28:665 (2) - move it down a bit so it would make a better flow and a less crumpled-looking pattern, before http://puu.sh/ps9V8/0662c45272.jpg after http://puu.sh/ps9Z9/0038268a57.jpg unless you want a perfect triangle then.... okay
- 00:36:165 (2,3,4) - I think adjust these a little so 00:37:103 (4) - head would land on 00:35:228 (5) - tail, and it wont look like this http://puu.sh/psa4I/c29b0934a3.jpg simply select the three and rotate them with ctrl+shift+R option would do good. 00:36:165 (2,3) - why are they so close btw? And I think 00:37:103 (4) - should just blanket 00:35:931 (1) - well, with that little change, I do this http://puu.sh/psagC/9734239e63.jpg
- 01:15:307 (6,7) - Nazi mod : imperfect blanket~~~
- 01:18:354 (4,2) - Whyyy Q-Q maybe just do it like this puu.sh/psarm/f43e96d0b5.jpg to avoid overlap
- 01:22:104 (3,4,5) - this back-and-forth flow don't really feel good :/ I prefer something like this http://puu.sh/psawG/df36f15c7b.jpg it would be less confusing too I think
- 01:28:433 (1) - I think just map this part usually without using spinner because there's no really music that indicate to use spinner, if you want to use spinner, start it here 01:30:542 just like on Easy. And remember, the spinner gap for Normal is 2 beats so if you start it there, you have to end it here 01:33:355 furthermore, if you don't want to change, end the current spinner here 01:31:479 because of spinner gap.
- 01:34:292 (1,3) - I don't like the fact that they are touching... maybe move 01:34:761 (2,3) - a bit downward. http://puu.sh/psaFw/b54a6594ad.jpg it would make a better flow from (1) to (2) and from (3) to (4) too :3
- 02:22:106 (4) - http://puu.sh/psaK7/275db5fd2b.jpg because why not~
I'll end it here maybe
Just a thing, I think Advanced should be easier because it's wayy closer to Hard now than it is to Normal.
Furthermore, in my previous map, I had some problem ranking it because my Hard have too much jumps even though it's just 3.2* and I think you have similar case.... I hope it won't happen to you tho :/ But because of that, I think you better keep your diffs name as Easy, Normal, Hard, and Insane to avoid my case...
Good luck tho~^^