M2U - Myosotis [CatchTheBeat] · forum

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

Deif 2016-05-25T20:40:16+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 8 de febrero de 2017 at 19:26:14

Artist: M2U
Title: Myosotis
Source: Deemo
Tags: NICODE Guriri Lucy rayark Mobile collection Vol. 2 Magnolia forget-me-not dubstep Ascendance
BPM: 160
Filesize: 4162kb
Play Time: 02:10
Difficulties Available:

Ascendance's Platter (3 stars, 355 notes)
Cup (1,4 stars, 164 notes)
Overdose (5,54 stars, 460 notes)
Rain (4,04 stars, 385 notes)
Salad (2,18 stars, 242 notes)

Download: M2U - Myosotis
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Original mapset: s/322948

Cup

Salad

Platter -> Ascendance

Rain

Overdose

Last edited by Deif 2022-08-14T14:53:10+00:00, edited 18 times in total.

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-05-26T03:05:58+00:00

gimme platter

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

Deif 2016-06-05T09:55:17+00:00

Added some more diffs!

SYAHME

1,072 posts

Joined January 2014

SYAHME 2016-06-05T19:05:36+00:00

What happen with other maps?

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-06-11T18:16:06+00:00

Hey deif. My GD is done <:

If the Kiai falls outside of your threshold of quality, please let me know so I can change it, I had trouble deciding on something I could do for it, so I tried to find a mix between your salad and rain.

bitch chan's platter

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 43517
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 1
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Myosotis
TitleUnicode:Myosotis
Artist:M2U & NICODE feat. Guriri & Lucy
ArtistUnicode:M2U & NICODE feat. Guriri & Lucy
Creator:Deif
Version:Ascendance's Platter
Source:Deemo
Tags:rayark Mobile collection Vol. 2
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.2
OverallDifficulty:7.8
ApproachRate:7.8
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Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

Deif 2016-06-11T18:52:24+00:00

Ready for mods!

Len

2,812 posts

Joined June 2012

Len 2016-06-12T03:39:18+00:00

Nice map!

Kyuare

228 posts

Joined May 2013

Kyuare 2016-06-12T16:26:33+00:00

mod req

Overdose

00:07:517 (1) - The spacing is a bit hard and the flow can be much better, try Ctrl+G, It would fit better with 00:08:267 (2) -
00:11:642 (3,4) - Wow this jump is so hard, you move 00:11:642 (3) - to x:384
00:26:642 (5,6,7,8) - You can add more spacing here, it wil be funnier, try x:480 like for 00:26:267 (3) -
00:28:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - mmh the shape can be prettier imo, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5373775
00:42:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Curve it more to improve the flow, I made an example for you: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5373824
00:52:892 (3,4) - Add more spacing here to empathize the voice, you can move 00:53:079 (4) - to x:32 to fix it,
00:53:267 (5,6) - Its flows pretty bad here because there is a pretty strong voice at 00:53:642 (6) - but you didn't add a jump, I made an example for you to fix it: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5373861
01:40:517 (4,1) - This jump is so hard, move 01:40:704 (1) - to x:96 and it would play much better, don't forget to fix 01:41:173 (2) - if you're agree
01:53:517 (4,5) - Just a suggestion, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5373910 It would be much funnier, the actual pattern don't really fit the music imo
01:54:204 (2,1) - Add a HDash here please, timing jumps after this wub wub part... troll ;w; you can move 01:54:392 (1) - to x:384

Rain

00:05:642 (2) - move it to x:256 to make it consistent with 00:04:517 (1,3) -
00:27:017 (1,2) - Add more spacing here to improve the flow please
00:40:517 (1,2) - uuugh this jump is so hard, nerf it please
01:24:767 (3) - This triplet is too hard for the difficulty, bend it please
01:31:423 (7,8,9) - Its flows so bad here, add progressive spacing would fit much better, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5373983
01:37:423 (4,5,6) - ^
01:45:767 (3) - move it to x:256 to improve the flow

Platter

00:38:079 (4,5,6) - Add more spacing here please, it will be funnier, here is an example for you: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5374037
00:49:329 (5,1) - The shape can be much prettier, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5374047 it would be consistent with 00:38:079 (4,5,6) - too
01:09:392 (2,3) - maybe add a HDash ? strong beat here
01:24:298 (2) - This is so hard for a platter, bend it like you've done for 01:25:329 (1) -
01:24:579 (3) - Move it to x:144 for the consistency with 01:24:017 (1,5) -
01:39:767 (1,2) - Add a jump here please, there is a really strong sound. 01:39:954 (2,1) - deserves less spcaing than 01:39:767 (1,2) -
01:40:142 (1,2,3,4) - Curve it more please, this is a strong wub wub part, it must be more catchy
01:40:517 (1,2) - This jump is too hard, nerf it please
01:52:517 (1,2,3,1) - Add more distance here please, this part is stronger than 01:49:517 (1,2,3,1) - , we must see the difference
02:01:517 (1,1,1,1) - Too repetitive imo, try something different like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5374134 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5374138
02:04:517 (1,2) - Add more spacing please, to empathize the strong beat
02:07:329 (3) - move it to x:24 please, it will be funnier, you can also reduce the spacing by moving 02:07:329 (3,1) - to x:280 to make it less shitmissable

I am too lazy mod Salad and Cup now, sorry :<
The Platter can still be improved, ask more modders. Overdose is nice, good luck !

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

Deif 2016-06-14T09:41:32+00:00

Kyuare

mod req

Overdose

00:07:517 (1) - The spacing is a bit hard and the flow can be much better, try Ctrl+G, It would fit better with 00:08:267 (2) - (It'd create an even bigger spacing (1,2) so I'd rather let it as it is)
00:11:642 (3,4) - Wow this jump is so hard, you move 00:11:642 (3) - to x:384 (Reduced the distance, but not that much)
00:26:642 (5,6,7,8) - You can add more spacing here, it wil be funnier, try x:480 like for 00:26:267 (3) - (Distanced just a bit more)
00:28:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - mmh the shape can be prettier imo, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5373775 (I don't like that one either...)
00:42:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Curve it more to improve the flow, I made an example for you: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5373824 (Done)
00:52:892 (3,4) - Add more spacing here to empathize the voice, you can move 00:53:079 (4) - to x:32 to fix it, (Okay)
00:53:267 (5,6) - Its flows pretty bad here because there is a pretty strong voice at 00:53:642 (6) - but you didn't add a jump, I made an example for you to fix it: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5373861 (Added a dash there)
01:40:517 (4,1) - This jump is so hard, move 01:40:704 (1) - to x:96 and it would play much better, don't forget to fix 01:41:173 (2) - if you're agree (Done)
01:53:517 (4,5) - Just a suggestion, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5373910 It would be much funnier, the actual pattern don't really fit the music imo (Changed the shape there)
01:54:204 (2,1) - Add a HDash here please, timing jumps after this wub wub part... troll ;w; you can move 01:54:392 (1) - to x:384 (Dashes won't hurt. It's nowhere near to an edge dash anyway)

Rain

00:05:642 (2) - move it to x:256 to make it consistent with 00:04:517 (1,3) - (Done)
00:27:017 (1,2) - Add more spacing here to improve the flow please (Changed the shape of the previous slider to make it possible)
00:40:517 (1,2) - uuugh this jump is so hard, nerf it please (No, it's not)
01:24:767 (3) - This triplet is too hard for the difficulty, bend it please (Reduced the BPM there)
01:31:423 (7,8,9) - Its flows so bad here, add progressive spacing would fit much better, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5373983 (Done)
01:37:423 (4,5,6) - ^ (Done)
01:45:767 (3) - move it to x:256 to improve the flow (Done)

Thanks for the mod! Reorganised some NCs in both difficulties as well.

DeletedUser_6709840

DeletedUser_6709840 2016-06-14T21:18:07+00:00

Random mod from a newer modder since I'm bored and my queue is dead, I'll try to be helpful.

General

I guess the combo colors are okay but I'm not a fan of them because they clash so much with the BG.
Otherwise, everything else seems okay.

Cup

01:25:517 (1,2) – I felt it was a little hard to catch personally and should be reduced to 1.20x spacing.
01:29:642 (4,1) - ^
01:42:392 (1,2,3) – I had to dash to catch each of these, reduce to 1.40x spacing.
Nice map, had good flow.

Salad

01:59:267 (1,2) – I don't think a vertical slider works well here because it doesn't flow well into the next note.
02:01:142 (6,1) – I might recommend reducing spacing a little since the next patterns are anti-flow and hard to catch. Nothing wrong with the anti flow but the music is also transitioning so the jump is a little awkward too.

Ascendance's Platter

00:33:392 (2) – I think this needs a little more emphasis in my opinion and should be rotated a bit to the left to get the emphasis on the “pray” of the lyrics since it looks a little boring right now.
00:36:767 (3) – Rotate a bit to the right for the same reasons above.
00:39:767 (2) – Rotate the slider a bit to the right because it's a bit jarring to catch from the previous note.
00:40:517 (1) – Is a bit hard to catch from the previous h-dash because it appears vertical while playing. Try rotating the slider a bit to the left so it adds emphasis on the lyrics too.
00:48:767 (4) - ^
01:18:017 (1) – Rotate a bit so there's more movement
01:20:267 (3,4) – Reduce spacing a bit since the before patterns were pretty hellish already.
01:32:267 (3,4) - ^ pretty much reduce spacing a little.
01:40:517 (1,2) – Normally I wouldn't be too against antiflow but it doesn't feel like it fits here.

Rain

I normally don't mod rains because the AR is too hard for me to play them, but this one was playable for me since it's under AR 9.
00:40:517 (1,2) – Reduce to 2.00x spacing for better flow and better catching.
01:19:704 (4,1) – Reduce to 3.50x spacing for same reasons above.

Nice map. Good luck, Deif!

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

Deif 2016-06-14T22:41:46+00:00

RoseusJaeger

Random mod from a newer modder since I'm bored and my queue is dead, I'll try to be helpful.

General

I guess the combo colors are okay but I'm not a fan of them because they clash so much with the BG.
Otherwise, everything else seems okay.

Cup

01:25:517 (1,2) – I felt it was a little hard to catch personally and should be reduced to 1.20x spacing. (The current distance is ~1.30x so it wouldn't make much difference. Same for the next pattern)
01:29:642 (4,1) - ^
01:42:392 (1,2,3) – I had to dash to catch each of these, reduce to 1.40x spacing. (It's possible to play this pattern without dashing and not with a big effort imo)
Nice map, had good flow.

Salad

01:59:267 (1,2) – I don't think a vertical slider works well here because it doesn't flow well into the next note. (It's the same slider as 01:06:767 (3) - Try to give out useful suggestions with your mods so the mapper can understand your point of view and how would you fix a pattern you think that would be problematic)
02:01:142 (6,1) – I might recommend reducing spacing a little since the next patterns are anti-flow and hard to catch. Nothing wrong with the anti flow but the music is also transitioning so the jump is a little awkward too. (The jumps are appropriated for this kind of difficulty. They're even catchable without pressing the dash key at all)

Rain

I normally don't mod rains because the AR is too hard for me to play them, but this one was playable for me since it's under AR 9.
00:40:517 (1,2) – Reduce to 2.00x spacing for better flow and better catching. (Explained it already with the previous mod)
01:19:704 (4,1) – Reduce to 3.50x spacing for same reasons above. (There are tons of 1.20x in this kiai, like the one in this pattern 3,4. The flow is good enough for this one and tbh there wouldn't be much difference if the note is moved 1 grip to the right as you suggest)

Nice map. Good luck, Deif!

No changes from my side, but thanks anyway for giving a look to the map!

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-06-15T02:49:48+00:00

Kyuare wrote:
mod req
Platter
00:38:079 (4,5,6) - Add more spacing here please, it will be funnier, here is an example for you: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5374037 I'd prefer not to overcomplicate things, so keeping the spacing small is fine here.
00:49:329 (5,1) - The shape can be much prettier, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5374047 it would be consistent with 00:38:079 (4,5,6) - too adjusted a bit differently
01:09:392 (2,3) - maybe add a HDash ? strong beat here
01:24:298 (2) - This is so hard for a platter, bend it like you've done for 01:25:329 (1) -
01:24:579 (3) - Move it to x:144 for the consistency with 01:24:017 (1,5) -
01:39:767 (1,2) - Add a jump here please, there is a really strong sound. 01:39:954 (2,1) - deserves less spcaing than 01:39:767 (1,2) -
01:40:142 (1,2,3,4) - Curve it more please, this is a strong wub wub part, it must be more catchy
01:40:517 (1,2) - This jump is too hard, nerf it please
01:52:517 (1,2,3,1) - Add more distance here please, this part is stronger than 01:49:517 (1,2,3,1) - , we must see the difference The objective here is to not overly space them, so it's best to keep these things simple
02:01:517 (1,1,1,1) - Too repetitive imo, try something different like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5374134 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5374138 The goal here is to keep the consistency, since they're all the same sound.
02:04:517 (1,2) - Add more spacing please, to empathize the strong beat
02:07:329 (3) - move it to x:24 please, it will be funnier, you can also reduce the spacing by moving 02:07:329 (3,1) - to x:280 to make it less shitmissable
I am too lazy mod Salad and Cup now, sorry :<
The Platter can still be improved, ask more modders. Overdose is nice, good luck ! same lo

RoseusJaeger wrote:
Random mod from a newer modder since I'm bored and my queue is dead, I'll try to be helpful.

Ascendance's Platter

00:33:392 (2) – I think this needs a little more emphasis in my opinion and should be rotated a bit to the left to get the emphasis on the “pray” of the lyrics since it looks a little boring right now.
00:36:767 (3) – Rotate a bit to the right for the same reasons above. heh? plays fine as it is, its meant to play non-complex out of the hdash
00:39:767 (2) – Rotate the slider a bit to the right because it's a bit jarring to catch from the previous note.
00:40:517 (1) – Is a bit hard to catch from the previous h-dash because it appears vertical while playing. Try rotating the slider a bit to the left so it adds emphasis on the lyrics too.
00:48:767 (4) - ^ curved this one instead
01:18:017 (1) – Rotate a bit so there's more movement adjusted curve instead
01:20:267 (3,4) – Reduce spacing a bit since the before patterns were pretty hellish already.
01:32:267 (3,4) - ^ pretty much reduce spacing a little.
01:40:517 (1,2) – Normally I wouldn't be too against antiflow but it doesn't feel like it fits here. adjusted in the above mod

Nice map. Good luck, Deif! good luck ascendance

it is wednesday my dudes

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DeletedUser_6709840

DeletedUser_6709840 2016-06-15T20:31:21+00:00

Oh yeah, good luck to Ascendance too.

Electoz

1,887 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-06-24T17:35:33+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue~

[Cup]

00:34:517 (1) - Use 2 circles instead? Because vocal is kinda paused here unlike other sliders in this part which support vocal throughout the slider.
00:43:517 (1) - Move this to the right a bit for a larger spacing? The rhythm is building up a bit at this point so I think this deserves more spacing because this beat is stronger than 00:42:767 yet their spacings are pretty much same.
01:30:017 (1) - Just my personal preference but I would like to see this slider placed horizontally or at least rotated a bit towards horizontal side, 01:30:017 (1) would be emphasized more properly with more movements involved in gameplay.
01:39:579 (2,3) - How about this rhythm? There's another wub sound on 01:39:954 and personally I think 01:40:329 is more prominent than 01:40:142 as well.
01:48:017 (1,2,3) - 01:49:517 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure about using the same pattern on these though, to me the rhythms are a bit different, I would suggest this rhythm so you won't miss a sound on 01:48:392 .

[Salad]

01:34:892 (2) - Move this to the right a bit? So it'll be the same pattern you did on 01:22:704 (1,2,3,4) .
01:39:767 (3,4) - Same as Cup, not only a rhythm I suggested earlier but Ctrl+G'ing 01:39:767 (3,4) also fit as well.

[Ascendance's Platter]

00:09:017 (3,4,5,6) - I don't know what you're going for with these circles but I think this makes the rhythm kinda dense which is unfit in this calm section. I recommend using a less dense rhythm than this.
00:37:329 (4) - I think this isn't really needed because you followed the piano or whatever sound since 00:33:017 but that sound doesn't exist here.
00:41:267 (2) - Just my preference but since you did emphasize 00:40:517 (1) so I wanted to see a similar emphasis on 00:41:267 (2) as well since the vocal on this is kinda similar to 00:40:517 (1) .
00:51:767 (3) - How about 2 1/2 sliders? This would fit vocal better and 00:51:767 (3) didn't seem to support vocal as good as 00:50:267 (3) . Or if you want a rhythm on this part to be variable then you could have used the same rhythm from 00:45:767 (1,2) .
01:09:767 (3,4) - Just curious, since the rhythm on these places 01:09:017 (1,2) - 01:09:767 (3,4) are pretty much same then maybe copy-pasting the pattern from 01:09:017 (1,2) would fit nicely here?
01:48:017 (1,2) - Not sure about this though, seems like you intentionally skipped some beats 01:48:579 - 01:48:954 - 01:49:329 which they shouldn't be skipped because if you haven't skip those beats then you can easily create a pattern or dashes for strong beats like 01:48:767 - 01:49:142 - 01:49:517 .

Hope this helps and good luck~

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-07-02T11:02:47+00:00

Electoz wrote:
Hi, from my modding queue~

[Ascendance's Platter]

00:09:017 (3,4,5,6) - I don't know what you're going for with these circles but I think this makes the rhythm kinda dense which is unfit in this calm section. I recommend using a less dense rhythm than this. I don't know what I was doing either
00:37:329 (4) - I think this isn't really needed because you followed the piano or whatever sound since 00:33:017 but that sound doesn't exist here. Yeah but I'm following the vocals, it just happens that the piano and vocals match up there
00:41:267 (2) - Just my preference but since you did emphasize 00:40:517 (1) so I wanted to see a similar emphasis on 00:41:267 (2) as well since the vocal on this is kinda similar to 00:40:517 (1) .
00:51:767 (3) - How about 2 1/2 sliders? This would fit vocal better and 00:51:767 (3) didn't seem to support vocal as good as 00:50:267 (3) . Or if you want a rhythm on this part to be variable then you could have used the same rhythm from 00:45:767 (1,2) . I did it for consistency with the other sections and to reduce density (It actually used to be like this), but 1/2 slider spam ended up creating a really dense non-kiai section.
01:09:767 (3,4) - Just curious, since the rhythm on these places 01:09:017 (1,2) - 01:09:767 (3,4) are pretty much same then maybe copy-pasting the pattern from 01:09:017 (1,2) would fit nicely here?
01:48:017 (1,2) - Not sure about this though, seems like you intentionally skipped some beats 01:48:579 - 01:48:954 - 01:49:329 which they shouldn't be skipped because if you haven't skip those beats then you can easily create a pattern or dashes for strong beats like 01:48:767 - 01:49:142 - 01:49:517 .I fixed some, but most are skipped for a reason of reducing the density of the slow stuff ar ar 7.8
Hope this helps and good luck~ thanks for the mod! no reply = fixed

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240,80,90392,1,4,3:0:0:0:
368,48,90579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,32,90767,5,10,1:0:0:0:
64,96,90860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,160,90954,1,2,1:0:0:0:
192,240,91142,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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352,112,92079,1,8,1:0:0:0:
456,176,92267,1,10,1:0:0:0:
328,112,92454,1,8,1:0:0:0:
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176,48,96579,1,2,1:0:0:0:
288,96,96767,1,8,1:0:0:0:
320,153,96860,1,2,1:0:0:0:
302,216,96954,1,2,1:0:0:0:
160,272,97142,5,0,1:0:0:0:
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352,88,100235,1,0,1:0:0:0:
352,136,100329,1,8,1:0:0:0:
304,173,100423,1,8,3:0:0:0:
216,216,100517,5,2,1:0:0:0:
488,120,100704,2,0,P|504:208|424:304,1,202.499996995926,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,312,101079,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,192,101267,12,4,102017,1:2:0:0:
360,192,102392,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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448,72,103142,1,6,1:2:0:0:
144,72,103517,5,4,1:2:0:0:
320,112,103892,2,0,P|352:168|272:280,1,202.499996995926,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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264,80,105767,2,0,L|400:80,1,134.999997997284,4|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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144,152,107829,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,136,108017,6,0,P|464:120|504:48,2,134.999997997284,4|8|4,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
288,136,109142,1,8,1:2:0:0:
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312,248,110079,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,240,110173,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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24,48,111017,5,6,1:3:0:0:
128,120,111204,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,160,111392,1,8,1:0:0:0:
128,240,111579,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,240,111767,5,2,0:1:0:0:
496,160,111954,1,4,3:0:0:0:
392,120,112142,1,10,1:0:0:0:
496,48,112329,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,40,112517,6,0,P|144:112|200:192,1,168.749997496605,6|0,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,200,113079,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,216,113173,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,232,113267,6,0,P|320:304|264:336,1,134.999997997284,2|8,0:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
192,336,113829,1,2,1:0:0:0:
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208,192,114392,2,0,L|200:104,1,67.499998998642,8|2,1:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
328,88,114767,2,0,L|416:72,1,67.499998998642,2|4,0:1|3:0,0:0:0:0:
328,88,115142,5,10,1:0:0:0:
307,114,115235,1,8,3:0:0:0:
304,147,115329,1,2,1:0:0:0:
318,177,115423,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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416,216,115892,1,10,1:0:0:0:
384,224,115985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,232,116079,1,2,1:0:0:0:
320,240,116173,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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232,176,116829,1,0,1:0:0:0:
56,48,117017,2,0,L|40:272,1,202.499996995926,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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368,112,120392,2,0,L|320:48,1,67.499998998642,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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488,264,121517,6,0,L|416:272,3,67.499998998642,6|2|2|0,1:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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96,248,123767,6,0,L|24:256,3,67.499998998642,6|2|2|2,1:3|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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24,256,126767,2,0,L|184:240,1,134.999997997284,8|4,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,240,127329,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,127517,5,4,1:0:0:0:
256,192,127892,12,4,130517,0:0:0:0:

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

Deif 2016-10-03T07:01:08+00:00

Electoz

Hi, from my modding queue~

[Cup]

00:34:517 (1) - Use 2 circles instead? Because vocal is kinda paused here unlike other sliders in this part which support vocal throughout the slider. (Made it a bit different, but left that space blank as suggested)
00:43:517 (1) - Move this to the right a bit for a larger spacing? The rhythm is building up a bit at this point so I think this deserves more spacing because this beat is stronger than 00:42:767 yet their spacings are pretty much same. (Done)
01:30:017 (1) - Just my personal preference but I would like to see this slider placed horizontally or at least rotated a bit towards horizontal side, 01:30:017 (1) would be emphasized more properly with more movements involved in gameplay. (I'd like to keep it rather vertical to represent the low beat, plus having a little rest on this kiai would be a relieve for beginners)
01:39:579 (2,3) - How about this rhythm? There's another wub sound on 01:39:954 and personally I think 01:40:329 is more prominent than 01:40:142 as well. (I like that idea, changed)
01:48:017 (1,2,3) - 01:49:517 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure about using the same pattern on these though, to me the rhythms are a bit different, I would suggest this rhythm so you won't miss a sound on 01:48:392 . (I'd like to keep that slider by now to make it simpler for this difficulty. The beat it's missing sounds not relevant enough imo)

[Salad]

01:34:892 (2) - Move this to the right a bit? So it'll be the same pattern you did on 01:22:704 (1,2,3,4) . (Done)
01:39:767 (3,4) - Same as Cup, not only a rhythm I suggested earlier but Ctrl+G'ing 01:39:767 (3,4) also fit as well. (Ctrl-G worked better than expected)

Hope this helps and good luck~

Sorry for the long delay and thanks for your mod!

Lacrima

377 posts

Joined September 2014

Lacrima 2016-10-03T19:44:06+00:00

m4m
[Cup]

01:46:517 (1,2) - these droplets doesn't look good in cup, maybe you can make something that will fit the flow?

[Salad]

01:22:329 (5,1) - Why you used 1/4 here? maybe you'll try to keep the sound idea of this salad? this is strange to see such a lonely used pattern
02:03:017 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - maybe you can re make this so this won't repeat the same pattern you used here 01:10:517 (1,2,3,4,5,1) ?

[Ascendance's Platter]

00:20:642 (5,1) - well, there's no really loud sound for making antiflow HD, so I really think you need to re make 1 slider into something curved for easier dashing, or removing this HD at all
00:27:767 (1,2) - aw, these jumps are pretty hard, since after HDashing you need to turn into the opposite direction. Remember, platter players are quite newbie in HDashing, so that's fine to give them something more easier
01:18:017 (1,1) - wth are you serious? I think you wanted to make a HD here, so go ahead ;-;
01:19:610 (4,1) - wowie, I think this spacing need to be decreased
01:22:329 (2,3) - I really think that's not ok to use such a dense SV, make this easier a little bit... no, just make it easier.
01:24:298 (2,3) - are you serious about these jumps? Kiai part is pretty dense itself due high SV, but placing these hard jumps are quite annoying, I think you should decrease the distance.
01:32:454 (4,1,2) - ??? sorry, but this is not an overdose diff..
Ok, I'll end with a kiai parts now. I REALLY think you should rethink the way you mapped this section. This is sooo dense and hard for a platter diff. I might be wrong about some patterns I suggested, but I'm sure I'm right what these kiai sections are overspaced and overdensed or something! well that's it
02:01:517 (1,1,1,1) - this is pretty boring and might be really confusing for newier players just dashing right - left and moving right - left

[Rain]

00:54:579 (2,3) - I think decreasing the distance here might be a good idea
01:14:829 (4,1) - what about to have a HD here?
01:21:954 (2,3) - decrease a distance a little bit
01:24:298 (2,3) - aw, make this with more flow, like curving 2 slider
01:27:579 (3) - this flow braking slider is ok for overdose, not for rain
01:36:298 (2,3,4) - hey hey, I think that's really hard, even for a rain diff! please, make it more easier and get rid of this flow breaking slider like above

[Overdose]

01:30:017 (1,2) - aw, combo breaking pattern. after dense movements it's strange to give such a easy pattern
01:53:642 (6,7,1,2,3) - decrease the distance between 7 and 1, 2 and 3

Well, that was a hard map for modding... such a unique style, though. I tried my best not ruining this style, but improving it, since there's a lot of hard and rhythm - following patterns. All diffs, except Rain and Platter is pretty fine imo. Both of these diffs are quite hard for their diff tier, well I think you got it from my points on these diffs. Oh, also there's my map for m4m: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/509399
Good luck on ranking this mapset!

MMBan

135 posts

Joined January 2015

MMBan 2016-10-04T13:15:05+00:00

Requested.
This is for now hardest to mod mapset than.. one that i had from.. russian mappers.
Cup
One thing i found there
01:30:017 - Unfriendly distance. I'm sure new players will not be fast enough to catch this. x432
Salad
As i have problems with modding those diffs. I testplay them with Flashlight for flow check..
00:58:517 (1,2,1,2,1,2) Ctrl - H please.
01:43:142 (3,1) - Ctrl - G (3) is a bit out flow
Rain
01:31:142 (4,5,6,7) - Move them closer. Its difficult to catch (4) after catching (3) (x286)
Overdose
00:27:298 (2,3,4,5,6) - Easy to lose combo if unaware (Reason of AR) here and surprises (There will be a lot retry from 1k,1.5k ranks players). Suggesting to redo this stream a bit
Later parts are out of my experience... yet

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

Deif 2016-10-04T19:36:03+00:00

Myle

m4m
[Cup]

01:46:517 (1,2) - these droplets doesn't look good in cup, maybe you can make something that will fit the flow? (I'm going to keep those by now. Droplets don't offer any problem unless the sliders are too curved)

[Salad]

01:22:329 (5,1) - Why you used 1/4 here? maybe you'll try to keep the sound idea of this salad? this is strange to see such a lonely used pattern (Used a single note instead)
02:03:017 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - maybe you can re make this so this won't repeat the same pattern you used here 01:10:517 (1,2,3,4,5,1) ? (I'm a lazy mapper who often copy-pastes most of the used patters)

[Rain]

00:54:579 (2,3) - I think decreasing the distance here might be a good idea (Done)
01:14:829 (4,1) - what about to have a HD here? (Done)
01:21:954 (2,3) - decrease a distance a little bit (Nice catch!)
01:24:298 (2,3) - aw, make this with more flow, like curving 2 slider (The horizontal slider is intentional to fully use the 1.5x BPM section)
01:27:579 (3) - this flow braking slider is ok for overdose, not for rain (Dawwwww... Fair enough)
01:36:298 (2,3,4) - hey hey, I think that's really hard, even for a rain diff! please, make it more easier and get rid of this flow breaking slider like above (I hope it plays better now)

[Overdose]

01:30:017 (1,2) - aw, combo breaking pattern. after dense movements it's strange to give such a easy pattern (I find it rather easy compared with other patterns in this kiai. I'll keep it by now)
01:53:642 (6,7,1,2,3) - decrease the distance between 7 and 1, 2 and 3 (Done)

Well, that was a hard map for modding... such a unique style, though. I tried my best not ruining this style, but improving it, since there's a lot of hard and rhythm - following patterns. All diffs, except Rain and Platter is pretty fine imo. Both of these diffs are quite hard for their diff tier, well I think you got it from my points on these diffs. Oh, also there's my map for m4m: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/509399
Good luck on ranking this mapset!

Thanks for the mod! I'll check your map whenever I can

MMBan

Requested.
This is for now hardest to mod mapset than.. one that i had from.. russian mappers.
Cup
One thing i found there
01:30:017 - Unfriendly distance. I'm sure new players will not be fast enough to catch this. x432 (Done)
Salad
As i have problems with modding those diffs. I testplay them with Flashlight for flow check..
00:58:517 (1,2,1,2,1,2) Ctrl - H please. (On what exactly? On everything? I think the pattern looks okay as it is)
01:43:142 (3,1) - Ctrl - G (3) is a bit out flow (I don't think so. It's just a little zigzag pattern)
Rain
01:31:142 (4,5,6,7) - Move them closer. Its difficult to catch (4) after catching (3) (x286) (Should be easier now)
Overdose
00:27:298 (2,3,4,5,6) - Easy to lose combo if unaware (Reason of AR) here and surprises (There will be a lot retry from 1k,1.5k ranks players). Suggesting to redo this stream a bit (This part already got reduced twice. It'll be a pity to get rid of it as I wanted to introduce a little wiggle)
Later parts are out of my experience... yet

Thank you!

Absolute Zero

595 posts

Joined August 2014

Absolute Zero 2016-10-05T01:10:34+00:00

[Cup]
00:20:642 (2) - I personally would suggest x=320 for a more comfortable reach.
00:44:829 (2,1) - Perhaps you might want to switch the direction of (1) and place it on the right side of (2) (x=432 and flip the slider, as well as nudging (2) to x=176 or something). This requires the cup player to do less movements at once, thus simplifying the part.
01:42:767 (2,3) - Personally, I'm not sure about the length of this movement--feels a bit far, but maybe that's just me. I understand it's walkable, but some cup players may panic and think it's a dash, which they're clearly not ready for.

[Salad]
00:21:579 (2,3) - It's not clear this is necessarily walkable, or whether you need dash or not. I would increase the distancing on this and its mirrored distances later in the song to clarify if it is a dash or a walk.
01:22:704 (1,2) - Careful with the spacing here! The pattern is already a little more complicated due to the pattern it comes from (with the back-forth). I would suggest more smaller spacing to bigger spacing rather than the other way around to give the player a little bit of a break.
01:34:704 (1,2) - Again, have mercy on the player! This is a requirement to move right then left after a long-distance movement to the left.
01:48:767 (4,5) - Tilt these sliders slightly to the right. But ever so slightly.

[Ascendance's Platter]
This map is really hard and I think you can nerf a lot of sections here. Some sections are nice, but still...needs work. I pointed out a few things, but it would be best because I know you can use logic to fix some of the other hard hyper movements within the map.

00:26:829 (5,1) - I get that this is a strong sound, but are you sure you really want such a strong hyper here?
01:03:017 (1,2,1) - I honestly don't think you should have this pattern here--in the sense that platters are introductions to hypers. This pattern consists of 2 closely-knit hypers that force the player to quickly dash the opposite direction.
01:13:517 (1) - Is this jump rankable? It's quite far.
01:18:017 (1,1,2) - This movement is really hard because the player has to dash tap then hold dash at the right movement to get to (2). Move 01:18:767 (1) to x=440.
01:19:329 (3,4,1) - This pattern is really advanced for a platter. Nerf it, please.
01:32:642 (1) - AAAAAA SV is way too high! There's also a hyper leading to this slider, which is another thing...
01:36:298 (1,2) - Pattern requires the player to switch direction and HDash. Too complicated. Ctrl+G (1), perhaps.
01:52:329 (4,1) - This is kinda a rain-level jump here because the player already has to go back and forth and it's uncomfortable. Simplify the pattern.
01:57:017 (3,4,1) - Not sure if this is personal preference but I disagree with the usage of these screen hypers. Not yet.
02:07:329 (3,1) - Bleah, this hyper requires the player to dash a whole screen length after jamming them against the corner. Lower the distance.

[Rain]
It's nice to play and I like the smooth movements; the active kiai might be preferably a little nerfed.
00:40:329 (5,1,2) - Nerf (1,2), perhaps. This is because the jump from (1,2) is still not a hyper although (5,1) is, and catching it could be a little annoying for rain players.
01:24:298 (2,3) - While this jump may be fine, it might be kind of difficult for some players to catch the snap because it requires immediately moving to the left after a slider going to the right. Weaken the snap.
01:28:704 (2,3,4) - Don't you think the concentration of hypers here is a bit overdone compared to the areas around it? Make (3,4) not a hyper to accent (4,1).
01:36:767 (4) - You might want to make the movement from (3) either a HDash or an easier dash because it's hard to control.
01:55:985 - Was expecting a note here after the pattern you started by following the melody before. Add a hitcircle here.

[Overdose]
00:18:017 - Are you sure you just want to leave this huge break here for the overdose? I'm sure you could add something here or extend the spinner.
00:48:017 (1,2) - It is quite easy to miss either (1) or (2) from the movement before. I would consider lowering the distance between the combo before and the stream.
00:55:329 (7,1) - Be a little more merciful on this jump, perhaps? Lower the distancing. (There's a bunch of hypers before and I'm thinking that it would be best to let this one slide).
01:40:517 (4,1) - Maybe I'm just mad cuz bad, but this jump is awfully uncomfortable after the extreme back-forths in the section preceding it.

Last edited by Absolute Zero 2016-10-05T20:26:12+00:00, edited 13 times in total.

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

rew0825 2016-10-05T04:15:30+00:00

Hello from My Modding Queue <3

[

Cup]

00:08:642 (2) - it's can move to x:320

[

Salad]

00:08:267 (1,2) - How about (1) x:448 , (2) x:320
01:19:517 (1,2) - How about change to this
01:25:517 (1,2,3) - How about change to this

[

Rain]

01:19:704 (4) - How about move to x:256
01:40:704 (2) - Reduce slider

[

Overdose]

00:27:298 (2,3,4,5,6) - How about change to this?
01:18:767 (1) - change this slider in a bit >this<

Lovely Overdose :3 Good luck <3

it's so ugly about this but can you help me to mod this? ;w;

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

Deif 2016-10-05T12:47:19+00:00

Absolute Zero

[Cup]
00:20:642 (2) - I personally would suggest x=320 for a more comfortable reach. (Done)
00:44:829 (2,1) - Perhaps you might want to switch the direction of (1) and place it on the right side of (2) (x=432 and flip the slider, as well as nudging (2) to x=176 or something). This requires the cup player to do less movements at once, thus simplifying the part. (Sure, I like this idea)
01:42:767 (2,3) - Personally, I'm not sure about the length of this movement--feels a bit far, but maybe that's just me. I understand it's walkable, but some cup players may panic and think it's a dash, which they're clearly not ready for. (It's the only pattern with rather high distances of that kind. I'd like to keep it by now due to the fact that it's walkable)

[Salad]
00:21:579 (2,3) - It's not clear this is necessarily walkable, or whether you need dash or not. I would increase the distancing on this and its mirrored distances later in the song to clarify if it is a dash or a walk. (Done, moved (2,3) a bit more away)
01:22:704 (1,2) - Careful with the spacing here! The pattern is already a little more complicated due to the pattern it comes from (with the back-forth). I would suggest more smaller spacing to bigger spacing rather than the other way around to give the player a little bit of a break. (I'd like to keep the bigger to smaller spacing on that one, but tweaked the pattern a bit to make the transition with the previous one softer)
01:34:704 (1,2) - Again, have mercy on the player! This is a requirement to move right then left after a long-distance movement to the left. (Slightly nerfed. Players don't deserve mercy

)
01:48:767 (4,5) - Tilt these sliders slightly to the right. But ever so slightly. (Oh c'mon D:)

[Rain]
It's nice to play and I like the smooth movements; the active kiai might be preferably a little nerfed.
00:40:329 (5,1,2) - Nerf (1,2), perhaps. This is because the jump from (1,2) is still not a hyper although (5,1) is, and catching it could be a little annoying for rain players. (You're killing the fun parts)
01:24:298 (2,3) - While this jump may be fine, it might be kind of difficult for some players to catch the snap because it requires immediately moving to the left after a slider going to the right. Weaken the snap. (Inclined the slider and moved the note a bit to the left to reduce the "speed" of the slider. I hope the result would be more comfortable to play)
01:28:704 (2,3,4) - Don't you think the concentration of hypers here is a bit overdone compared to the areas around it? Make (3,4) not a hyper to accent (4,1). (It's quite okay like that, just 2 chained 1/2 sliders with hypers don't seem quite problematic for a Rain and the music is intense enough for them)
01:36:767 (4) - You might want to make the movement from (3) either a HDash or an easier dash because it's hard to control. (Slightly reduced)
01:55:985 - Was expecting a note here after the pattern you started by following the melody before. Add a hitcircle here. (Done)

[Overdose]
00:18:017 - Are you sure you just want to leave this huge break here for the overdose? I'm sure you could add something here or extend the spinner. (I'm okay with it. I have the impression that including anything else in that piano solo would break that moment)
00:48:017 (1,2) - It is quite easy to miss either (1) or (2) from the movement before. I would consider lowering the distance between the combo before and the stream. (Reduced the distance of the dash)
00:55:329 (7,1) - Be a little more merciful on this jump, perhaps? Lower the distancing. (There's a bunch of hypers before and I'm thinking that it would be best to let this one slide). (I won't negociate with that section!)
01:40:517 (4,1) - Maybe I'm just mad cuz bad, but this jump is awfully uncomfortable after the extreme back-forths in the section preceding it. (Fair enough, reduced the strenght of the hypers)

You had a lot of fun nerfing the map, hadn't you? Thanks for your help!

rew0825

Hello from My Modding Queue <3

[

Cup]

00:08:642 (2) - it's can move to x:320 (I'd like to keep direction changes with a rather low distance for this difficulty, specially at this calm part)

[

Salad]

00:08:267 (1,2) - How about (1) x:448 , (2) x:320 (Done)
01:19:517 (1,2) - How about change to this (The resulting distance (2,3) would be quite small)
01:25:517 (1,2,3) - How about change to this (Same reason as before)

[

Rain]

01:19:704 (4) - How about move to x:256 (That'd cancel the hyperdash with the next note, but I know why you suggested it. Changed the pattern to improve the flow)
01:40:704 (2) - Reduce slider(The slider looks okay that way. Distance with the previous note is also adequate)

[

Overdose]

00:27:298 (2,3,4,5,6) - How about change to this? (Explained already in a previous mod)
01:18:767 (1) - change this slider in a bit >this< (The current distance is 1.0x with a 1.5x BPM. There's not a real need to avoid including a little dash here)

Lovely Overdose :3 Good luck <3

it's so ugly about this but can you help me to mod this? ;w; (I'll see what I can do. I have some other requests to do at the moment)

Thanks for your mod!

Tyrell

425 posts

Joined July 2014

Tyrell 2016-10-07T01:17:04+00:00

A mod to help push this map forward sooner than the usual slow pace. c:

Cup

00:54:579 (2) - i would move this closer to previous slider
01:28:704 (2) - I wouldve had this follow to the right side of 01:28:517 (1) -

I dont see much wrong with this cup, it is solid imo.

Salad

00:22:142 (4) - i feel this should have more horizontal movement to flow smoother
00:28:142 (4) - ^
01:40:517 (1) - this should be moved closer to previous slider so it's easier to walk

Only problem i have with the salad is some parts arent clear with whether it's a dash or not

Platter

00:34:517 (1) - there should be a dash to this for vocal emphasis
00:38:267 (6) - should be a dash to this as well, vocal emphasis
01:07:517 (1,2,3,4) - the patterns like this in this section should have more horizontal movement, makes it kinda stgnant when things are actively going on in the song
01:14:267 (2) - screen hyper? I think a dash to this suits and plays way better
01:18:767 (1,2,3,4) - humps here are way too tight for a platter, reduce them by quite a bit
01:19:048 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - also these patterns play with you needing to hold dash for a while which isnt good for a platter either, reduce distance and make this play simpler
02:07:329 (3) - bring this closer to the previous slider so it plays smoother into the hyper

Honeestly the dubstep section is way overdone, too hardly spaced for a platter. reduce the spacing and make things more easily walkable and not require constant dashing or holding dash.

Rain

01:15:017 (1) - maybe increase the hyper to this a bit

I feel like the first and last slideer of the intense dubstep section is too easy and should opt for something more curved and wild but that's opinion, simple sliders work fine
02:07:517 (1) - why not a hyper to the last note?? It's similar to the part earlier before the crazy section

This is a good set, get this ranked ASAP. c:

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-10-07T02:39:34+00:00

~~Will reply to this when I'm home from school, sorry for the delay, Deif~~

Not gonna reply to mods since I fixed the majority of non-kiai things and then remapped a majority of the kiai. While I still believe that the kiai should be the hardest part here, I agreed that idiot me made it too hard some time ago. TL;DR, there's a lot less movement, I removed a lot of the SV changes, and I removed hyperdashes that were making the difficulty far too dense.

@Deif, you'll need to re-copy the hitsounds to my diff, since I replaced a lot of notes and didn't reapply the hitsounds. If you think I should nerf it even more, please let me know.

Platter

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Cowboy

472 posts

Joined November 2011

Cowboy 2016-10-08T01:26:39+00:00

Sorry for the delay, here we go!

[

General]

Everything is fine.

[

Cup]

00:05:267 (2,3) - Siento que si quieres aumentar un poco la distancia, para diferenciar un sonido de otro intentaría aumentar más la distancia, ¿Qué te parece x: 246?
00:08:267 (1,2,3) - Las distancias aquí se me hacen muy "juntas" teniendo en cuenta que en (3) hay un sonido que podría ser diferenciado con una distancia más grande que las demás, para ello te recomiendo hacer lo siguiente: 00:08:267 (1) - x: 463, 00:08:642 (2) - x: 319, con eso ayudaría para que la distancia de (2) a (3) sea un poco mejor.
00:38:267 (2,1) - Deberías considerar agregar un poco de distancia entre éstas notas, se sentirá mucho mejor debido a que éstas mismas tienen un sonido fuerte que destacar, 00:39:017 (1) - te recomendaría moverlo a x: 72, con eso bastará.
00:42:767 (2,1) - Tomando en cuenta el final de la estrofa, podríamos incrementar la distancia, siento que le dará un mejor aspecto, 00:43:517 (1) - x: 298, siento que podríamos crear una enfatización si lo haces.
Bueno, nada más que decir por aquí, la verdad estoy sorprendido como de costumbre, sigue así.

[

Salad]

00:03:767 (2,1) - Bien, tal vez es un poco temprano para agregar un dash, pero siento que éste encaja perfectamente, te recomendaría hacer (2) todo horizontal con dirección a la derecha, y eso creara un salto bastante interesante hacia (1), te dejaré una imagen.
00:08:642 (2,3) - En caso de que hayas seguido mi sugerencia ^, te recomendaría agregar otro dash, para mantener una gran consistencia, pero a decir verdad el patrón que está actualmente trae unas complicaciones para agregar otro salto, sin embargo, tendríamos que mover 00:08:267 (1,2) - éstas notas un poco a la izquierda, pero si hacemos eso, 00:06:017 (3,1) - éstas notas estarán algo juntas, así que, lo dejo a tu criterio.
01:52:142 (4,1) - Bien, me gustaría que agregases un salto aquí, seria muy bueno para mantener la consistencia con 01:55:142 (4,1) - éstos sliders.
Nada más que decir, me gustó mucho.

[

Ascendance's Platter]

00:01:517 (1,2) - I feel a little strange these sliders, I recommend reducing the distance, and it cost me work to get to the next note would be (2).
00:34:329 (5,1) - I would like to increase the distance in these notes, because there is an audible sound in (1) might be interesting to give more movement, a jump could help, I recommend you do ctrl + g and move ax: 184, that could help, but avoid create an h-dash with (2).
00:46:329 (2,1) - Currently there is a sound that could be emphasized with a jump, but it could be better if you increase only a little distance between these notes, try 00:46:517 (1) - this slider in x: 416, that will give a better look.
01:18:017 (1,1) - You could reduce some distance without losing the dash, it becomes very difficult, 01:18:767 (1) - try x: 146.
Nothing more to say, it is a great diff.

[

Rain]

00:04:142 (4,1) - Sé que recién empieza la canción, pero hay un sonido que podría ser enfatizado por lo menos con un dash, por lo que te recomiendo hacer Ctrl+G en 00:04:517 (1) - éste slider y muévalo un poco hacia la izquierda.
00:41:829 (5,1) - Un HDash podría resultar interesante, te recomiendo 00:42:017 (1) - Ctrl+H y lo mueves a x: 32, le dará un mejor aspecto.
00:49:517 (1) - Es mejor si haces Ctrl+H y lo posicionas en x: 480, siento que será más interesante el HDash que tiene con (1).
00:50:267 (3) - Básicamente es lo mismo, Ctrl+H y lo posicionas en x: 32, bajo las mismas causas, siento que será más natural y cómodo para el jugador llegar a esas notas con facilidad sin perder la enfatización de sonidos.
01:01:423 (6,1) - Hay un caso similar a éste, podrías hacer lo mismo, o, dejarlo para tener un poco de variedad, es tu decisión.
02:07:329 (4,1) - Sería mejor si lo conviertes a HDash dado que ese salto es complicado y como es el final de la canción, el patrón sería más interesante.
Nada más que decir, excelentes patrones.

[

Overdose]
Antes de empezar, quiero destacar que no tengo gran experiencia moddeando este tipo de dificultades.

00:27:298 (2,3,4,5,6) - Como jugador, pienso que ésto sería algo incómodo al momento de jugar, tomando en cuenta de que sigues los sonidos acorde a su énfasis, quiero destacar, si es mejor hacer un stream normal (escaso de ideas).
00:34:142 (3,1) - Pienso que es mejor si lo conviertes a HDash.
01:10:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Éstos sliders pueden ser más interesantes, aquí imagen1 e imagen2. (Borré unas notas para que la imagen se pudiera apreciar mejor).
En cuestión eso sería todo, espero haber ayudado.

Buena suerte/Good luck!

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

Deif 2016-10-09T10:28:07+00:00

Tyrell

A mod to help push this map forward sooner than the usual slow pace. c:

[Cup]00:54:579 (2) - i would move this closer to previous slider (Done)
01:28:704 (2) - I wouldve had this follow to the right side of 01:28:517 (1) - (It's okay to have a little zigzag there)

I dont see much wrong with this cup, it is solid imo.

[Salad]00:22:142 (4) - i feel this should have more horizontal movement to flow smoother (I'd like to keep the current dashes. This is the only piece of section where there are strong sounds)
00:28:142 (4) - ^
01:40:517 (1) - this should be moved closer to previous slider so it's easier to walk (Intentional to have that dash here, it can be walkable but that's too risky for beginner players)

Only problem i have with the salad is some parts arent clear with whether it's a dash or not[/]

[Rain]01:15:017 (1) - maybe increase the hyper to this a bit (I don't want to condition further movements just before that spinner. The rather weak hyper should be enough)

I feel like the first and last slideer of the intense dubstep section is too easy and should opt for something more curved and wild but that's opinion, simple sliders work fine
02:07:517 (1) - why not a hyper to the last note?? It's similar to the part earlier before the crazy section (Added)

This is a good set, get this ranked ASAP. c:

Thanks for your help!

Jusenkyo

Sorry for the delay, here we go!

[

General]

Everything is fine.

[

Cup]

00:05:267 (2,3) - Siento que si quieres aumentar un poco la distancia, para diferenciar un sonido de otro intentaría aumentar más la distancia, ¿Qué te parece x: 246? (Hecho)
00:08:267 (1,2,3) - Las distancias aquí se me hacen muy "juntas" teniendo en cuenta que en (3) hay un sonido que podría ser diferenciado con una distancia más grande que las demás, para ello te recomiendo hacer lo siguiente: 00:08:267 (1) - x: 463, 00:08:642 (2) - x: 319, con eso ayudaría para que la distancia de (2) a (3) sea un poco mejor. (Voy a dejar la distancia de (1,2) como está, pero he aumentado la de (2,3) para diferenciar mejor el sonido fuerte)
00:38:267 (2,1) - Deberías considerar agregar un poco de distancia entre éstas notas, se sentirá mucho mejor debido a que éstas mismas tienen un sonido fuerte que destacar, 00:39:017 (1) - te recomendaría moverlo a x: 72, con eso bastará. (La diferencia es tan mínima que no se nota casi nada. Lo dejaré como está por ahora)
00:42:767 (2,1) - Tomando en cuenta el final de la estrofa, podríamos incrementar la distancia, siento que le dará un mejor aspecto, 00:43:517 (1) - x: 298, siento que podríamos crear una enfatización si lo haces. (Moví el slider de antes, pero el efecto es el mismo)
Bueno, nada más que decir por aquí, la verdad estoy sorprendido como de costumbre, sigue así.

[

Salad]

00:03:767 (2,1) - Bien, tal vez es un poco temprano para agregar un dash, pero siento que éste encaja perfectamente, te recomendaría hacer (2) todo horizontal con dirección a la derecha, y eso creara un salto bastante interesante hacia (1), te dejaré una imagen. (He aumentado algo la distancia, pero no voy a agregar un dash en esta parte)
00:08:642 (2,3) - En caso de que hayas seguido mi sugerencia ^, te recomendaría agregar otro dash, para mantener una gran consistencia, pero a decir verdad el patrón que está actualmente trae unas complicaciones para agregar otro salto, sin embargo, tendríamos que mover 00:08:267 (1,2) - éstas notas un poco a la izquierda, pero si hacemos eso, 00:06:017 (3,1) - éstas notas estarán algo juntas, así que, lo dejo a tu criterio. (He hecho algo parecido a lo de la parte anterior, pero espero que sea suficiente para remarcar el sonido)
01:52:142 (4,1) - Bien, me gustaría que agregases un salto aquí, seria muy bueno para mantener la consistencia con 01:55:142 (4,1) - éstos sliders. (Aumenté algo la distancia)
Nada más que decir, me gustó mucho.

[

Rain]

00:04:142 (4,1) - Sé que recién empieza la canción, pero hay un sonido que podría ser enfatizado por lo menos con un dash, por lo que te recomiendo hacer Ctrl+G en 00:04:517 (1) - éste slider y muévalo un poco hacia la izquierda. (La forma que obtendría el nuevo slider no tendría mucho flow comparado con otras estructuras de esta parte)
00:41:829 (5,1) - Un HDash podría resultar interesante, te recomiendo 00:42:017 (1) - Ctrl+H y lo mueves a x: 32, le dará un mejor aspecto. (Opté por mover las notas justo antes un poco a la derecha para hacer el hyper)
00:49:517 (1) - Es mejor si haces Ctrl+H y lo posicionas en x: 480, siento que será más interesante el HDash que tiene con (1). (Improvisé y cambié toda la estructura)
00:50:267 (3) - Básicamente es lo mismo, Ctrl+H y lo posicionas en x: 32, bajo las mismas causas, siento que será más natural y cómodo para el jugador llegar a esas notas con facilidad sin perder la enfatización de sonidos. (Esto también está todo cambiado)
01:01:423 (6,1) - Hay un caso similar a éste, podrías hacer lo mismo, o, dejarlo para tener un poco de variedad, es tu decisión. (Y ésto también)
02:07:329 (4,1) - Sería mejor si lo conviertes a HDash dado que ese salto es complicado y como es el final de la canción, el patrón sería más interesante. (Arreglado con el mod anterior)
Nada más que decir, excelentes patrones.

[

Overdose]
Antes de empezar, quiero destacar que no tengo gran experiencia moddeando este tipo de dificultades.

00:27:298 (2,3,4,5,6) - Como jugador, pienso que ésto sería algo incómodo al momento de jugar, tomando en cuenta de que sigues los sonidos acorde a su énfasis, quiero destacar, si es mejor hacer un stream normal (escaso de ideas). (Los streams normales son aburridos. Me gusta improvisar con las dificultades más altas de mis mapas e incluir secciones que no son tan comunes para que los jugadores se diviertan)
00:34:142 (3,1) - Pienso que es mejor si lo conviertes a HDash. (No creo que encaje con esta parte incluir un hyper)
01:10:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Éstos sliders pueden ser más interesantes, aquí imagen1 e imagen2. (Borré unas notas para que la imagen se pudiera apreciar mejor). (Cambiada la dirección de algunos sliders y queda bastante bien!)
En cuestión eso sería todo, espero haber ayudado.

Buena suerte/Good luck!

Has sido de gran ayuda. Muchas gracias!

Daisycutter

19 posts

Joined February 2016

Daisycutter 2016-10-19T10:04:09+00:00

Cup:
In general, I think there are too many spinners. This is probably just a personal preference, but I'd get rid of them.

Salad:
Seems fine to me.

Ascendance's Platter:
01:06:017 (1,2,3,4) - I would make this curve a little bit more. Something like 1(x=408), 2(x=464), 3(x=448), 4(x=408).
01:24:204 (2) - The distance between the two fruits seems a bit much. I'd shorten the distance a bit, or put them in the same spot.

Rain:
00:49:423 (6,1) - This full silent measure is weird and really bothers me. Map something there.
01:24:673 (4) - These feel a little too far apart to me, and same goes for the same patterns further into the Kiai area. Make the distance just a liiiiittle bit less.

All difficulties:
00:13:517 (1) - The point between the end of this spinner and the next note feels empty. Cup, Salad, and Ascendance's Platter, I'd extend the length of it by half a measure. Rain and Overdose, I would map over that point to the piano bit. Some back and forth streams would be nice.

I love this song, and would love to see this map get ranked. Somewhat of a small mod, but I hope it's of at least a little bit of help!

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-10-19T20:36:44+00:00

Jusenkyo wrote:
Sorry for the delay, here we go!

[ General]

Everything is fine.
[ Ascendance's Platter]

00:01:517 (1,2) - I feel a little strange these sliders, I recommend reducing the distance, and it cost me work to get to the next note would be (2). sure
00:34:329 (5,1) - I would like to increase the distance in these notes, because there is an audible sound in (1) might be interesting to give more movement, a jump could help, I recommend you do ctrl + g and move ax: 184, that could help, but avoid create an h-dash with (2). I think the low movement here is fine for such a calm part. I want the entire difficulty to be a build up to the wub wub kiai moment, so this works well for me.
00:46:329 (2,1) - Currently there is a sound that could be emphasized with a jump, but it could be better if you increase only a little distance between these notes, try 00:46:517 (1) - this slider in x: 416, that will give a better look. sure
01:18:017 (1,1) - You could reduce some distance without losing the dash, it becomes very difficult, 01:18:767 (1) - try x: 146. okoratu
Nothing more to say, it is a great diff. Thanks <3
BcTrack wrote:
Ascendance's Platter:
01:06:017 (1,2,3,4) - I would make this curve a little bit more. Something like 1(x=408), 2(x=464), 3(x=448), 4(x=408). a bit differently
01:24:204 (2) - The distance between the two fruits seems a bit much. I'd shorten the distance a bit, or put them in the same spot. altered the angle

All difficulties:
00:13:517 (1) - The point between the end of this spinner and the next note feels empty. Cup, Salad, and Ascendance's Platter, I'd extend the length of it by half a measure. Rain and Overdose, I would map over that point to the piano bit. Some back and forth streams would be nice. That would make it unrankable in my diff ;w; sorry!

I love this song, and would love to see this map get ranked. Somewhat of a small mod, but I hope it's of at least a little bit of help!

Buena suerte/Good luck!

Thanks both!

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Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

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Deif 2016-10-23T16:35:34+00:00

BcTrack

Cup:
In general, I think there are too many spinners. This is probably just a personal preference, but I'd get rid of them.

Salad:
Seems fine to me.

Rain:
00:49:423 (6,1) - This full silent measure is weird and really bothers me. Map something there. (That shouldn't have happened LOL)
01:24:673 (4) - These feel a little too far apart to me, and same goes for the same patterns further into the Kiai area. Make the distance just a liiiiittle bit less. (Making those ones closer after an intense HDash would cause a stop&go case, which is trying to be avoided)

All difficulties:
00:13:517 (1) - The point between the end of this spinner and the next note feels empty. Cup, Salad, and Ascendance's Platter, I'd extend the length of it by half a measure. Rain and Overdose, I would map over that point to the piano bit. Some back and forth streams would be nice. (No need for that. 00:18:017 - is the point where the voice fades out and the little pause introduces the main chords of the melody)

I love this song, and would love to see this map get ranked. Somewhat of a small mod, but I hope it's of at least a little bit of help!

Thanks for giving a check!

MBomb

MBomb 2016-11-02T20:57:56+00:00

M4M I promised a while back.

[Cup]

01:42:767 (2) - Maybe the 1.60x distance snap here is a bit too strong for 2 notes in a row, I'd recommend reducing it slightly.

That's it, I think.

[Salad]

00:23:267 (3) - Not really strong enough for this much of a movement, perhaps weaken slightly to x:304, to make it more comfortable for a salad player?
00:24:017 (1) - x:224 on this one for same reason.
00:40:892 (2) - A bit difficult for a salad player right now considering the movement in the opposite direction followed by direction change with strong movement, a slight reduction such as x:304 would be nice.
00:46:517 (1) - x:448 on this would be nice to make it an easier movement.
00:58:517 (1) - Same as above, x:64 on this.
01:00:767 (2) - x:352 on this would be nice because it's pretty weak compared to surrounding notes, but the distance is very strong.
01:08:267 (3) - Because of the backforths here, I'd suggest a weaker distance, try x:336 on this.
01:22:892 (2) - This would be nicer on x:304, this current distance makes the backforth very difficult as it is almost a dash.
01:27:954 (4) - Make it more obvious as a dash by moving it to x:288 and then curving it a bit more to the left.
02:00:392 (2,4) - Moving both of these to x:336 would be nice, to reduce the intensity of this backforth and make it easier for salad players.

Generally, this difficulty's main issues are that there are a lot of movements that are borderline dashes, and in most cases a strong movement doesn't fit that well, so a reduction is recommended (however in a few cases a dash would fit), so I'd try to go through and get rid of these movements as they can be very confusing for salad players.

[Platter]

00:41:829 (4) - The direction change followed by a very strong dash can be difficult for a platter player right now. Try reducing the distances slightly by moving this to x:184.
02:07:329 (3) - x:64 would be nicer to move to on this for similar reasons to the above point, and would also make the HDash feel more neat.

[Rain]

01:10:329 (8,1) - Because of the strength of this HDash, the stream afterwards is very easily to overdash at the beginning. I would either reduce the HDash, or increase the curve of the stream after 1.
01:22:892 (2) - Slight reduction considering the HDash beforehand would be nice, try x:400 maybe?

[Overdose]

00:46:142 (4) - Slight distance reduction here would be nice for flow, x:336 is nice.
00:50:829 (5) - x:208, to make the movement play slightly more smoothly considering the movements around were a lot smaller for these notes, so this high distance can end up feeling pretty awkward.
00:58:142 (4) - Here x:176 would also be nice for flow in the same way my first point was.
01:09:204 (2) - Considering the HDash just before, this movement would probably feel better reduced slightly to avoid the jump being so difficult here, try x:304.
01:09:954 (6) - x:208 for same reason as above.
01:49:142 (6) - x:272 would be nicer to avoid this triple feeling as awkward to play right now.

Really nice map overall, however I feel as though the salad could use a bit more polishing before ranking. Call me back at some other point though!

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