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Haywyre - Everchanging

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Beige
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016년 8월 24일 수요일 at 오전 11:07:53

Artist: Haywyre
Title: Everchanging
Tags: w_h_i_t_e soundcloud monstercat electronic dubstep
BPM: 170
Filesize: 8597kb
Play Time: 05:05
Difficulties Available:
  1. Nature (5.28 stars, 888 notes)
Download: Haywyre - Everchanging
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For Approval

Mint
i love you
this is awesome !!
Sonnyc
00:45:602 (1,1) - 이전 슬라들은 빠른 속도에, 스택을 통해서 완급 조절이 어느정도 이루어졌는데 여기서 1/4 점프가 등장한게 약간 무리수스러웠어요.
04:54:426 (1) - 삼각형 문양이 핵심인 슬라아트이긴 한데.. 꼬리가 몸이랑 겹친 느낌이 좀 어색해보이네요.
Artavia
쫀득쫀득허네
Len
닌자는 밴이야
Tenseki
ㅋㅋ
Affirmation
일단은 모딩..

[자연]
00:30:448 (5,7) - 서로 스택해놓는건ㄴ 어떤가요
00:42:977 (1,2) - 얘도 조금 벌러주셨으면 합니다. 00:43:330 (1,2) - 얘가 넘 띄워져잇어서 말이죠...
00:49:154 (1,2,3) - 앞에랑 똑같이 애네도 삼각형으로 맞춰주세요~
01:11:389 (2,3) - 스택
01:23:213 (1,2,4) - 이렇게 셋은 삼각형 맞춰주시면 예쁠것 같습니다.
01:30:624 (3) - 뉴콤보?

뒤는 잡을거 없네요
굿럭
Topic Starter
Beige

Neoskylove wrote:

일단은 모딩..

[자연]
00:30:448 (5,7) - 서로 스택해놓는건ㄴ 어떤가요 약간 밋밋한 느낌이 들 것 같습니다.
00:42:977 (1,2) - 얘도 조금 벌러주셨으면 합니다. 00:43:330 (1,2) - 얘가 넘 띄워져잇어서 말이죠... 수정했습니다.
00:49:154 (1,2,3) - 앞에랑 똑같이 애네도 삼각형으로 맞춰주세요~ 너무 삼각형으로 통일하기는 좀 그렇습니다.
01:11:389 (2,3) - 스택 이것도 밋밋한 느낌이 듭니다.
01:23:213 (1,2,4) - 이렇게 셋은 삼각형 맞춰주시면 예쁠것 같습니다. 삼각형으로 맞추기에는 공간 조절이 안될것 같아서요...
01:30:624 (3) - 뉴콤보? 뒷부분 때문에 석연치 않은데 수정했습니다.

뒤는 잡을거 없네요
굿럭
모딩 감사합니다!
polka
Mod 4 Mod As requested via #modreq!

My map: t/460981

mod
00:04:507 (5,1,2,3) - This pattern doesn't really flow so well. Maybe point (3) the other way?

00:06:272 (1,3) - May come off confusing for certain players, especially on HD.

00:14:213 (5) - I would prefer a circle stacked on a 1/2 slider for this.

19:683 ~ 20:742 I feel these SV changes don't do anything for the rhythm.

00:39:448 (1,2) - Why a jump?

00:45:272 (1) - This SV is confusing. It may not be good for the play and flow factor of the map.

01:14:036 (1,2) - If you angled (2) to play off of (1) better, it would add to some nice flow.

01:25:860 (2) - I've noticed you've been placing sliders over a good snare for the chorus. Maybe consider mapping these?

01:37:683 (1) - I feel the stack takes away from the flow of the chorus.

01:45:095 (1,2,3) - Triplet is not called for here by the music.

01:54:624 (2,1) - These look like they lead into each other.

02:13:860 (2) - I dont like the fact that you mapped over that snare.

02:44:389 (1,2) - If you angled (2) to play off of (1) better, it would add to some nice flow.

02:46:860 (2,3,4,5) - Stream is not called for by music

02:54:624 (2,3) - The little slider isn't snapped, making this pattern feel odd to play.

02:54:977 (4) - Blanketing could be improved.

03:04:154 (1,2,3) - Triplet is not called for.

03:15:448 (1,2,3) - ^

03:22:507 (1,3) - The spacing between these two is a bit odd. I understand there's a note in the middle, but my gut is telling me to point out that this might play off as confusing.

03:26:389 (9,1) - These overlap, and it looks a bit unsightly when playing.

03:39:801 (8,9) - Blanketing could be improved.

03:43:507 (8,9,1) - Triplet is not called for by music.

03:44:389 (3,4,5) - ^

03:53:919 (3) - It would be better to let the snare be clickable.

03:59:566 (3) - ^

04:03:977 (2,1) - Not stacking these feels odd. As though they're next to each other in the timeline.

04:26:036 (1,1) - Having a space in these loops, especially the smaller one, would help add some aesthetic to it all.

04:42:977 (1) - If this bent at 4:44:036, it would match the music better.

04:54:448 (1) - EXTREMELY boring to play this slider. It lasts forever. Maybe a spinner would work here instead?
Topic Starter
Beige

PolkaMocha wrote:

Mod 4 Mod As requested via #modreq!

My map: t/460981

mod
00:04:507 (5,1,2,3) - This pattern doesn't really flow so well. Maybe point (3) the other way? No, I can't change it.

00:06:272 (1,3) - May come off confusing for certain players, especially on HD. Ok

00:14:213 (5) - I would prefer a circle stacked on a 1/2 slider for this. No, It is not weird.

19:683 ~ 20:742 I feel these SV changes don't do anything for the rhythm. That's ok, it is not problem.

00:39:448 (1,2) - Why a jump? Humm... ok

00:45:272 (1) - This SV is confusing. It may not be good for the play and flow factor of the map. Not confusing this...

01:14:036 (1,2) - If you angled (2) to play off of (1) better, it would add to some nice flow. Not sure.

01:25:860 (2) - I've noticed you've been placing sliders over a good snare for the chorus. Maybe consider mapping these? No...

01:37:683 (1) - I feel the stack takes away from the flow of the chorus. Ok

01:45:095 (1,2,3) - Triplet is not called for here by the music. I think so, but I want to same with the other patterns.

01:54:624 (2,1) - These look like they lead into each other. This beatmap will not have been played Newbies.

02:13:860 (2) - I dont like the fact that you mapped over that snare. No...

02:44:389 (1,2) - If you angled (2) to play off of (1) better, it would add to some nice flow. Not sure.

02:46:860 (2,3,4,5) - Stream is not called for by music I think so, but I want to same with the other patterns.

02:54:624 (2,3) - The little slider isn't snapped, making this pattern feel odd to play. it is 1/6 rhythm, It is snapped

02:54:977 (4) - Blanketing could be improved. I don't like that mod, but ok.

03:04:154 (1,2,3) - Triplet is not called for.

03:15:448 (1,2,3) - ^

03:22:507 (1,3) - The spacing between these two is a bit odd. I understand there's a note in the middle, but my gut is telling me to point out that this might play off as confusing.

03:26:389 (9,1) - These overlap, and it looks a bit unsightly when playing.

03:39:801 (8,9) - Blanketing could be improved.

03:43:507 (8,9,1) - Triplet is not called for by music.

03:44:389 (3,4,5) - ^

03:53:919 (3) - It would be better to let the snare be clickable.

03:59:566 (3) - ^

04:03:977 (2,1) - Not stacking these feels odd. As though they're next to each other in the timeline.

04:26:036 (1,1) - Having a space in these loops, especially the smaller one, would help add some aesthetic to it all.

04:42:977 (1) - If this bent at 4:44:036, it would match the music better.

04:54:448 (1) - EXTREMELY boring to play this slider. It lasts forever. Maybe a spinner would work here instead?
Ok, Thank you!
ReFaller
Always rearranging-ging-ging-ging-ging-ging-ging..........XD

I found this wong song few days ago in #modresa #modreqs

00:13:683 (2,3,4,5) - would you take care for fix spacing to more equal?
00:22:154 (1) - this notice is for wonder some my mind. Is it your favourite slider shape? XD
00:58:860 (3,4) - the flow between them is maybe basically broken, but is good-played. i'd like to suggest smooth this flow by doing something with slider 4, however not much need to fix.
01:09:448 (3) - ?definetely? your favourite slider shape, especially put horizontally XD. looks great!!!
01:30:272 (1,2,1) - what do you plan to say, if i suggest set it vertically like previous "1,2" combos? (i know the 01:29:919 (1,2,1) - is a triangle)
01:38:742 (5) - slider!!! <3
02:25:683 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ALWAYS REARRANGING!!!
02:30:272 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - tu dudu tududu!!!
02:35:213 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - oh fuck...based on hexagon...I'm envying your skill... :(

Pink and bold are just my kawaii srrałłaaiii comments ;).
Topic Starter
Beige

ReFaller wrote:

Always rearranging-ging-ging-ging-ging-ging-ging..........XD

I found this wong song few days ago in #modresa #modreqs

00:13:683 (2,3,4,5) - would you take care for fix spacing to more equal? Awesome!!
00:22:154 (1) - this notice is for wonder some my mind. Is it your favourite slider shape? XD Ok
00:58:860 (3,4) - the flow between them is maybe basically broken, but is good-played. i'd like to suggest smooth this flow by doing something with slider 4, however not much need to fix. I don't think so it's not bad
01:09:448 (3) - ?definetely? your favourite slider shape, especially put horizontally XD. looks great!!! xD
01:30:272 (1,2,1) - what do you plan to say, if i suggest set it vertically like previous "1,2" combos? (i know the 01:29:919 (1,2,1) - is a triangle) the end of the rhythm, it doesn't need to same with the patterns.
01:38:742 (5) - slider!!! <3 xD
02:25:683 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ALWAYS REARRANGING!!!
02:30:272 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - tu dudu tududu!!!
02:35:213 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - oh fuck...based on hexagon...I'm envying your skill... :(

Pink and bold are just my kawaii srrałłaaiii comments ;).
Thank you! :D/
squirrelpascals
get ranked
Imakuri
M4M Cause, why not :
- I sent you a PM in game bla bla bla...

[ Nature]

  1. I didn't find so many things to mod ;__;
  2. 00:25:683 : A VERY VERY VERY small blanket, you can fix it.
  3. 00:32:742 : Maybe you can do a reverse slider, but it's up to you.
  4. 00:33:272 : And here, put a circle ? (Maybe, why not, it's up to you)
  5. 01:02:389 : Maybe you can put a circle like 01:02:742 ?
  6. 01:13:507 : A small blanket
  7. 01:37:772 : Maybe you can do a triple like 01:33:801 ?
  8. 01:43:860 : Blanket
  9. 03:10:860 : Maybe a triple can be a good idea ?
  10. I think that's it, rest is correct. (Sorry ;w;)
I'd love to see that ranked <3 Song is awesome !
Good Luck for rank !
~ Imakuri
Topic Starter
Beige

Imakuri wrote:

M4M Cause, why not :
- I sent you a PM in game bla bla bla...

[ Nature]

  1. I didn't find so many things to mod ;__;
  2. 00:25:683 : A VERY VERY VERY small blanket, you can fix it.
  3. 00:32:742 : Maybe you can do a reverse slider, but it's up to you.
  4. 00:33:272 : And here, put a circle ? (Maybe, why not, it's up to you)
  5. 01:02:389 : Maybe you can put a circle like 01:02:742 ?
  6. 01:13:507 : A small blanket
  7. 01:37:772 : Maybe you can do a triple like 01:33:801 ?
  8. 01:43:860 : Blanket
  9. 03:10:860 : Maybe a triple can be a good idea ?
  10. I think that's it, rest is correct. (Sorry ;w;)
I'd love to see that ranked <3 Song is awesome !
Good Luck for rank !
~ Imakuri
Fixed some patterns and blanket...
VINXIS
shieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet
-kevincela-
nice :)
TenkaiPalm
Hi, here are some of my opinions :D

Nature
I won't mention anything about blankets LOL
00:28:154 (1,2,3,4) - Not saying you have to, but like better consistency with distance snap is nice. Just in general. I won't mention it again :)
00:43:330 (1) - I don't think this really needs a new combo per-say, but that's your judgement.
01:02:389 (1,2) - I wanna say fix these to be long enough to reach the blue tic.
01:51:801 (1) - Keep this a part of the old combo?
01:51:801 (1) - My fingers LOL. I'm not saying you need to change anything, but this feels like it contrasts in difficulty compared to the rest of your map.
02:32:742 (1,2) - Same note as above, I think these would be better if they just were a bit longer on the blue tics. It happens other times, but I won't mention it again.
03:33:448 (5) - Maybe make this slightly off positioned compared to 03:33:095 (3) . It helps see the note better, and it also fits what you've already done with the rest of the song. An example being 03:35:213 (1,3)
04:01:683 (1,1,1) - I think this is okay since you made a new combo for each and it's not hard to differentiate :D
04:09:095 (1) - Cool shapes :)
04:54:492 (1) - This spinner, dang it's super long. Although I think you're gonna keep it like that no matter what I say.

Generally, pretty cool map! I kinda think the distancing is here and there, but the variation is what makes it good too :D I also think the shaping of your sliders was well done as well~ Keep in mind when you're doing new combos as well!
Good luck on getting ranked~ :D
Et0iliS
hi


  • [Nature]
  1. 00:42:801 (8,1,2) - hard to jump
  2. 01:02:742 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ctrl+J?
  3. 03:47:919 (1,2,3) - maybe change to Click me ?
  4. 04:02:742 (1,2,1) - too close

it is almost perfect! can't give more suggestions xD
GOOD LUCK!
Topic Starter
Beige
Nothing to change it, I'm sorry
Down
쁘롬 까까오톸
솔직히 너무 잘만드셔서 잡을게 없는데요?????

[Nature]
■ 00:20:742 (1) - 볼륨 낮춰주시고 휘슬 넣어주셔도 괜찮지 않을까요? 00:20:389 - 요기보다 볼륨 낮게
■ 01:37:154 (4) - 휘슬 빠졌는지 확인해주세요. 앞에 비슷한박자에서 01:34:330 - 여기에는 들어있기 때문에 빠져있다고 느꼈습니다.
■ 02:11:036 (2) - 여기도 확인 부탁드려요.
■ 02:27:448 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 직선플로우가 상당히 어렵게 느껴졌는데 노래도 좀 잔잔한거 같으니까 디스턴스를 조금씩 줄여주는건 어떤가요?
■ 03:26:742 (1) - 머리에 뭔가 빠진 것 같은데요? 약간 허전하다고 느꼈습니다.
■ 03:49:860 (2) - 여기도 확인 부탁드립니다. 배경음 드럼소리가 상당히 크게 들리는 반면에 아무힛사도 없으니까 어색했습니다.

흠.. 괜히 의도하신 힛사에 태클을 거는 느낌이지만 도움이 되었으면 좋겠네요..
굿럭 ㅠㅠ
Sonnyc
Nominated.
Sylphi
Moved to pending \ ( > w<)/

근데 화이트님 Down님 모딩은 체크하신거 맞죠? 손닉님이 그냥 노미네이트 하시긴 했는데...
Sonnyc
답변은 안다셨는데 확인하신걸로 알아요
Akiyama Mizuki
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
Topic Starter
Beige

Sylphi wrote:

Moved to pending \ ( > w<)/

근데 화이트님 Down님 모딩은 체크하신거 맞죠? 손닉님이 그냥 노미네이트 하시긴 했는데...
quote 안한사람은 다 고쳤습니다. ㄹㅇ
그리고 손닉님 감사합니다 ^^
RyoKazuka


why the changes in combo colors?

:C

ac8129464363
nice map, osu needs more haywyre
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