3:04 * 6 diffs = 18:24
1:26 * 5 diffs = 7:10
m4m
Make sure you fix all similar parts as this song has many repeating parts and you all mapped them consistently.
[General]
* Turn off W.S.
* 00:03:524 -
I'm pretty sure these sounds are 1/3 beats, which doesn't fit with the 1/2s. It should end on 00:03:575 - to represent the sound properly. Same for 00:05:999 - 00:07:514 - 00:07:817 - . This applies too all diffs.
[Easy]
* 00:37:009 (1,2) - 01:35:191 (1,2) - Swap NC here, as you were focusing on the first vocal for the NC term rather than the downbeat. 00:34:585 (4,1) - 00:22:766 (1) - 00:24:888 (3,1) - 00:27:312 (3,1) - like these.
* 00:52:766 (2,2,3) - and all similar ones: To be honest I think those rhythms are quite same, while they're different than 00:51:554 (1,1) - . Having all 3/4 rhythms for 00:51:554 (1,2,1) - but not on the last one seems a bit inconsistent for me. I'd rather change 00:52:766 (2) - this and similar ones into 1/1s as well, as too much 3/4 reverse sliders is kinda boring(Players click only once per measure), especially for the kiai.
* 01:09:433 - 02:07:615 - 03:05:797 - I think this beat needs click action. It has both a large instrument sound and vocal. You even have 2 beat rest after that.
* 02:35:797 (1,2,1,2,1) - Especially for this one, that 5 consecutive 3/4 reverses feels way too boring for me D:
* 03:07:919 (2,3) - Do you care about perfectness? Then fix those vertical sliders xD
[Normal]
* Consider AR 5.5 here. 198 bpm is really fast so the note density is pretty high you know.
* 00:53:221 (4) - Why not make this into a 1/1 slider and a circle? It would be much fun and fit the kiai's intensity.
* 00:59:585 (2,3) - I'd rather use this rhythm, as ignoring 00:59:888 - this sound feels too empty for me, while 00:59:736 - seems very minor for me.
http://puu.sh/pboRc/0d88e504f1.jpg* 01:10:039 (4,5) - 02:08:221 (1,2,3) - NC is inconsistent.
[Hard]
* AR7 feels way too slow for this diff. At least 7.5 is needed in my eyes. You even have some tricky patterns like 00:29:736 (1,1,1,1,1,1) -
* 02:45:494 (1,2,3,1) - Unlike the previous parts, this part's music is still going without stopping. So having too much 1/1 rests feels a bit empty. Like you have a good drum sound on 02:46:251 - here, so why not fill that out?
* Well it's painful to mod when I have nothing to point out.
[Insane]
* AR9 already fits here. This is a 200bpm song, so seriously. The star rating is low only because you didn't put any 5+ consecutive jumps.
* 01:08:524 - and similar parts: The SV slowdown makes sense. But I think still strong emphasis on each beat is needed. 01:08:827 - 01:09:130 - 01:10:342 - 01:10:645 - These beats are too strong to put just next to the previous note even without strong flow change. This applies to all harder diffs as well.
* 02:18:827 (1,2,3,4) - I know it's for the sake of the pattern, but I'm a bit sad that you made no difference on 02:19:433 - this one stronger at all. Same for 02:20:645 - . If you are trying to strictly vocus on the vocal, I think 02:18:979 - needs extra click action, as that's where the vocal starts. The current rhythm you used is following the drum beats primarily, as you can hear 02:18:827 - 02:19:130 - 02:19:433 - 02:19:736 - all of them are just strong drums.
* 02:27:009 (4,5) - The vocal has ended on 4, which is weird you didn't make it clickable. And you have a jump to 5, where isn't even a strong sound. You were following the vocals until 02:24:736 (1,2,3,4) - , so I think you need to do the same here.
[Expert]
* For the same reason, AR 9.2
* 02:37:767 (3) - Move to (60, 245) to make 02:37:160 (2,3,5) - have balanced distance.
* 02:39:888 (3,1) - This is the only part you used two circles for this beat. Why not use a slider here too? It's better to emphasize the vocals.
[Extra]
* Use custom diff name? "Expert - Extra" doesn't make me feel that Extra is actually harder than Expert.
* Expert OD8 to Extra OD9.3? It's really big gap. You know, OD8 to 9 is actually much bigger gap than OD7 to 8, so 9.3 is a even more huge difference. If you want to keep this OD on this diff, you would need to use at least OD 8.5 for Expert and change all lower diffs as well.
* 00:49:433 (4) - Unlike 00:49:812 - 00:50:115 - 00:50:266 - , this sliderend doesn't really have a clear drum sound. So I think just using a circle makes more sense here.
* 01:43:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - If you're not aiming for a pp map, I think not all of these beats requires jumps lol. Just use a slider for 01:44:130 (4,5) - like you did on 00:45:948 (4) -
* 02:43:524 (6,7,8) - Hmm this stream looks a bit odd, so why not rotate it a bit so that it natually connects to the slider way?
http://puu.sh/pbs5H/ef49b638b7.jpg