SonKungSWK wrote:

Hi from #modreq
I'm modding this because I like the song, and Naruto, and wanna practice my modding skills... lucky ticket
sry if it's a shitmod no mod is a shitmod, opinions are opinions and sometimes people will agree and others people will disagree

Suggestion: at the last kiai time, just make it till the end? to emphasize the guitar? That's something to think about, but I do think I'll keep it as it currently is.

Hard

00:00:612 (1,1) - i kinda want to stack them ;w; I've changed this back and forth so many times lol.. This will be the last one as I do like it more >.>
00:47:497 (6) - use a slider and remove 00:47:825 (7) (it will feel kinda like this 00:49:464 (3,4,5) ) Hmmm, I like current better
01:06:185 (5) - turn up the volume, i think it should be http://puu.sh/onApM/039829c548.jpg I know but I'm keeping it simple. Want to give the song more depth as you go through the difficulties
01:07:825 (5) - snare missing? What do you mean darling D: fixed
01:26:841 - should be clickable to follow the guitar I do think that the drum is "more important" than the guitar here

Light Insane

00:00:612 (1,1) - stack them maybe? stacked
00:09:301 (5,8) - not sure if correctly blanketed ;w; sry my eyes arent my best these blankets are hard to see tbh lol, moved a bit, hope its better now
00:19:629 (5) - this should be a slider not a slider but added a circle to the red tick
00:44:218 (6) - nc NC'd the stream
00:50:120 (3) - at the big white tick, i think it should be clickable ;w; change a bit, but this white tick in particular is not necessaraly (is this even spelled properly lol) a clickable. The change was to make this diff more consistent with the insane and extra
01:03:562 (2,3) - use distanced blanket improved
01:26:841 - should be clickable (add a circle) same as before

Insane

I think hitsounds in this diff dont fit the song, makes me feel awkward while playing =w= but the criteria I used was the same for all dificulties D:
00:01:759 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - weird flow (http://puu.sh/onAHy/ea569ba9f5.png) lmao, ur PS skills are better than mine, I'm impressed hope you like the new shape, it's cleaner.. way more
00:05:858 (5) - why a 1/4 slider? ;w; dunno lol changed
00:14:710 (3,5) - move 00:14:710 (3) a bit closer to 00:15:038 (5) and blanket it? (well, for me, it feels weird from 1.08x to a sudden 2.00x) improved
00:21:267 (1) - move it down a bit, i kinda like the flow that dont make a straight movement while going for a new combo (example of a VERY good pattern 00:22:087 (2,3,4,5) ) moved a bit down
00:45:038 (6) - i'm questioning its existence... why is it here!? T_T (remove?) idk dude he likes to have his life moved it to something a bit more decent, but he keeps his life
00:50:448 (5) - for an insane diff, this should be changed to clickable circles or sliders, my finger feels like mashing the keyboard in a kiai time and this reverse slider killed my finger's dream ;w; (suggestion: make 00:50:120 (3) - a slider too) IDK this slider is OK and I'm very inclined to keep it, BUT i do think the shape kinda kills the mood here, so I changed it and I hope it improves a bit your finger's dreams
00:53:726 (2) - delete and copy 00:53:399 (1) instead? Nah, keeping
00:54:546 (6,1) - comparing to the distancce of 00:54:710 (1,2) they are too close, feels weird for me ;w; ;w; sry keeping
00:58:644 (1,2,3,4,5) - these are some good patterns!!!! (i like them) oh thank god
00:59:956 (6) - combo oopsie
01:00:612 (9,11) - make these sliders instead to fit the vocals? Nah I think current pattern is cool
01:02:579 (6) - nc and remove nc here 01:02:907 (1) Feel like current follows the vocals better (I dont even know dude I suck at NC wtf)
01:05:858 (6) - delete and copy 01:05:530 (5) - instead? nah
01:11:759 (7) - new combo... also make it a bit jumpy pls and remove nc here 01:12:415 (1) aight
01:19:956 (6,7) - stack? nah the stacks are for the same "type" of vocals (lol) so not stacking
01:26:841 - should be clickable same as before

Ill check extra section after... I'm extremely tired >.< papa bless, thank you

Seventh Hokage

00:06:185 (1) - why is it so weird QwQ!! thats sexy
00:10:120 (1,2) - i think its not correctly blanketed wasn't aiming for a blanket at first but yeah looks better
00:17:497 (5,6) - make it a bit jumpier k
00:23:562 (2) - x169 y199 maybe? (prev 1.63x and next 1.63x and it makes straight movement ;w;) nah
00:28:644 (6,1) - instead of stack, use blanket? nah I think it has a better emphasis while stacked
00:29:300 (2,3) - WTF THIS JUMP
00:42:907 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - fcing this is very satisfying (i like them) noice
00:45:038 (6) - why is it here
00:49:956 (3,4,5,6) - same as insane i think nah
00:53:235 (5) - just change to a triple if you want Feel like the kickslider is better
00:57:989 (5) - make this a slider instead (vocals) ctrl+g'd with the next circle
00:58:644 (9) - nc here and remove nc 00:58:972 (1) here nah
01:00:939 (4,5) - why are they here? I like 'em D:
01:07:825 (6) - nc here instead I think the current NC is better because of the vocals
01:10:776 (2) - make it a slider instead (vocals) ctrl+g'd
01:12:579 (4,5) - instead of stack, use blanket
01:13:890 (3,4) - ^ I like current better, in both cases
01:19:956 (3) - is the finish hitsound intentional? ops
01:21:595 (1) - should be a normal slider, and a reverse nah
01:21:923 - this beat should be clickable hm dont think so, but removed the reverse for something cooler
01:22:251 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - overmapped (too hard a jump all of a sudden)
01:25:202 (2) - shouldnt be a reverse slider I think it should D:
01:26:841 - should be clickable like before, drums are more important here, IMO

Inb4 you ignore everything ;w; it's a noob mod T_T helped a lot yo
Edit: oh if you have time can you mod my map too? link https://osu.ppy.sh/s/435150 I'm extremely busy IRL and have some pending mods to do... Don't think I'll have time to do so, sorry (If I do happen to have some free time, I'll try to look at it :3)

CyberX wrote:

Here we go my mod
note that everythings here is just my opinons
Love this song <3

Insane

actually this diff doesnt have a real problematic thing,because even i can get this

00:02:579 (5,6,7,8,9) - way too close from the first 4 stream, try to reposition the entire stream here fixed in previous mod
00:14:710 (3,4,5) - better the blanket fixed in previous mod
00:16:349 (9) - looks ugly, try repattern no sliders look ugly... they're... special
00:28:317 - there is sound here keeping current
00:29:464 (4,6) - better the blanket this ain't a blanket yo
00:35:366 - 0,5 is way too slow at this point, prefer 0,8 nah 0,5 is cool :<
00:45:202 (7) - RNC NC because SV changed
00:48:808 (3,4) - better the blanket improved
00:50:448 (5) - i prefer to map the 'ho ho' sound, then just put a long reverse slider here
01:05:202 (4,5) - better blanket not a blanket
01:05:858 (6) - looks ugly lay down your pitchforks they are beautiful (✿ ◕‿◕) ᓄ✂╰U╯

Nandaime Hokage

same thing with Insane, notning problematic here

00:06:185 (1) - looks ugly
00:15:366 (6) - ^
00:28:153 (5) - should end at red tick, and reverse it nah, like current better
00:38:972 (5) - how bout reposition this to x:196 y:193 looks way too off lol
00:39:628 (6) - if you apply the 4th mod, then please reposition this to
00:44:628 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - i like this section man cool! me too, thanks
00:47:661 (6) - too close to pervious note think that makes a cool effect
00:50:448 (6) - same thing with insane (prefer to map the 'ho ho' sound, then just put a long reverse slider here) nah, keeping the current reverse on both diffs
00:59:628 (3) - too close think is ok
01:00:448 (3,4) - make this 2 too a straight line, and place 01:00:939 (4) - a little downwards fixed
01:27:333 (3) - well, i believe this slider doesnt end at blue tick (✿ ◕‿◕) ᓄ✂╰U╯

Thanks in advance for choosing my ModQ
Come again next time
Good Luck with your map thanks, papa bless you

and here a star you're the star yo

• 
  
  General

1. 00:00:612 - Timing should start here, or else don't use a circle here at all 00:00:612 (1) -
   
   
   Nanadaime Hokage
2. 00:01:595 (3) - This is a little too far
3. 00:01:759 (4) - Move down a little
4. 00:06:185 (1) - Slider art needs some work
5. 00:05:366 (2,3) - Bad spacing between those two, move all these three 00:05:694 (3,4,5) - to somewhere like x:340|y:357
6. 00:12:251 (3) - spacing is off needs to be at like x:290|y:64 or similar
7. 00:12:415 (4) - unnecessary slider art just make it straight or use same as 00:11:923 (2) -
8. 00:12:743 (1) - try sliderart like this http://puu.sh/oqu05/54d6b03067.jpg
9. 00:15:038 (5) - remove red slider point and use normal curve / gray point
10. 00:15:366 (6) - CTRL + H this and move it to the same spot
11. 00:16:349 (4) - weird spacing, move it down a little
12. 00:16:677 (1) - Try normal non-weird slider here
13. 00:00:940 - use 60% volume starting this green tick
14. 00:02:251 - New greentick here with ~65% volume
15. 00:00:612 - 80% volume on only this note
16. 00:03:562 - 70-75% volume from here and onward
17. 00:14:054 - 60% volume again here
18. 00:24:546 - 65% volume
19. 00:31:431 - 70% volume
20. 00:35:366 - 65% volume
21. 00:40:284 - 70% volume
22. 00:42:907 - 75% volume
23. 00:45:038 - 60% volume
24. 00:45:530 - 80% volume
25. 00:53:235 (5) - Remove this an pillow two circles on top of 00:53:399 (6) - 's stilderstart
26. 01:05:530 - 65% volume
27. 01:05:858 - 70% volume
28. 01:06:185 - 75% volume
29. 01:12:579 (4,5) - Bad pillowing, 01:12:579 (4) - should be part of 01:12:251 (2,3,4) - 's jumps and so should 01:12:743 (5) -
30. 01:13:890 (3,4) - ^
31. 01:17:333 - 70% volume
32. 01:22:251 - 85% volume
33. 01:24:874 - 75% volume
    
    
    
    good luck
    

hyouri wrote:

Hello from hyouri's Modding Queue~ hi~

NM

• 
  
  General

1. 00:00:612 - Timing should start here, or else don't use a circle here at all 00:00:612 (1) - it's fine, both of the current ranked versions use this timing (and a note before the first red tick is ok, at least in this case)
   
   
   Nanadaime Hokage
   
   SPOILER
2. 00:01:595 (3) - This is a little too far
3. 00:01:759 (4) - Move down a little
4. 00:06:185 (1) - Slider art needs some work
5. 00:05:366 (2,3) - Bad spacing between those two, move all these three 00:05:694 (3,4,5) - to somewhere like x:340|y:357
6. 00:12:251 (3) - spacing is off needs to be at like x:290|y:64 or similar
7. 00:12:415 (4) - unnecessary slider art just make it straight or use same as 00:11:923 (2) -
8. 00:12:743 (1) - try sliderart like this http://puu.sh/oqu05/54d6b03067.jpg
9. 00:15:038 (5) - remove red slider point and use normal curve / gray point
10. 00:15:366 (6) - CTRL + H this and move it to the same spot
11. 00:16:349 (4) - weird spacing, move it down a little
12. 00:16:677 (1) - Try normal non-weird slider here
13. 00:00:940 - use 60% volume starting this green tick
14. 00:02:251 - New greentick here with ~65% volume
15. 00:00:612 - 80% volume on only this note
16. 00:03:562 - 70-75% volume from here and onward
17. 00:14:054 - 60% volume again here
18. 00:24:546 - 65% volume
19. 00:31:431 - 70% volume
20. 00:35:366 - 65% volume
21. 00:40:284 - 70% volume
22. 00:42:907 - 75% volume
23. 00:45:038 - 60% volume
24. 00:45:530 - 80% volume
25. 00:53:235 (5) - Remove this an pillow two circles on top of 00:53:399 (6) - 's stilderstart
26. 01:05:530 - 65% volume
27. 01:05:858 - 70% volume
28. 01:06:185 - 75% volume
29. 01:12:579 (4,5) - Bad pillowing, 01:12:579 (4) - should be part of 01:12:251 (2,3,4) - 's jumps and so should 01:12:743 (5) -
30. 01:13:890 (3,4) - ^
31. 01:17:333 - 70% volume
32. 01:22:251 - 85% volume
33. 01:24:874 - 75% volume
    
    
    good luck

hyouri wrote:

Hello from hyouri's Modding Queue~ hi~

NM


General
00:00:612 - Timing should start here, or else don't use a circle here at all 00:00:612 (1) - t's fine, both of the current ranked versions use this timing (and a note before the first red tick is ok, at least in this case)


Nanadaime Hokage

SPOILER

00:01:595 (3) - This is a little too far It's fine as it is
00:01:759 (4) - Move down a little is stacking with the first slider
00:06:185 (1) - Slider art needs some work why does everyone call me out for this slider ;w;
00:05:366 (2,3) - Bad spacing between those two, move all these three 00:05:694 (3,4,5) - to somewhere like x:340|y:357 moved hitcircle 3 alone
00:12:251 (3) - spacing is off needs to be at like x:290|y:64 or similar dont think aiming for an even DS would make this better
00:12:415 (4) - unnecessary slider art just make it straight or use same as 00:11:923 (2) - Think it's fine
00:12:743 (1) - try sliderart like this http://puu.sh/oqu05/54d6b03067.jpg kool
00:15:038 (5) - remove red slider point and use normal curve / gray point I'll consider
00:15:366 (6) - CTRL + H this and move it to the same spot current one flows better than this
00:16:349 (4) - weird spacing, move it down a little moved a bit
00:16:677 (1) - Try normal non-weird slider here ok call me everything you want but this very weird slider fits well the vocal
00:00:940 - use 60% volume starting this green tick no
00:02:251 - New greentick here with ~65% volume no
00:00:612 - 80% volume on only this note hell no, green tick before a red tick glitches everything D:
00:03:562 - 70-75% volume from here and onward this one is nice, made it 70%
00:14:054 - 60% volume again here alright
00:24:546 - 65% volume kk
00:31:431 - 70% volume no
00:35:366 - 65% volume no
00:40:284 - 70% volume it's already 70% m9
00:42:907 - 75% volume k
00:45:038 - 60% volume k
00:45:530 - 80% volume already is at 80%
00:53:235 (5) - Remove this an pillow two circles on top of 00:53:399 (6) - 's stilderstart changed but no triple, to add consistency with the previous combo
01:05:530 - 65% volume 75% (added a previous with 70%
01:05:858 - 70% volume 80%
01:06:185 - 75% volume 85%
01:12:579 (4,5) - Bad pillowing, 01:12:579 (4) - should be part of 01:12:251 (2,3,4) - 's jumps and so should 01:12:743 (5) -
01:13:890 (3,4) - ^ change both, hope it plays better now
01:17:333 - 70% volume keeping at 60%
01:22:251 - 85% volume 90%
01:24:874 - 75% volume 85%

good luck thanks

2251,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
2333,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
2415,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
2497,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
2579,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
2661,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
2743,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
2825,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
2907,-100,4,2,1,90,0,0
3562,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0

Nephroid wrote:

Hi! From #modreqs here.

[Nanadaime Hogake]
Replay: http://puu.sh/ostQx/d4ad8a5ec9.osr
General Comments: Check the symmetry of all "3" shaped sliders. Like 00:07:497 (1) - 00:15:366 (6) - etc. fixed some, some of them are intentional

Also, I thought a lot of the hitsounds were boring, and some of them didn't really match the music. Use a wider range of volumes! Like from 10% to 100% instead of 60% to 90%. It'll make your map sound a lot more interesting. (This is just my opinion, but I'm sure I'm not the only one with this opinion.) I'll try to make the hitsound volume wider, but will avoid the hm lets say less than 40% range because I do not like hitsounds that cant be heard properly

A lot of my comments below are on hit sounds, which aren't difficulty-specific, so they're really for all difficulties. watch me fix for half difficulties and forget for the other half lol

00:02:251 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Gradually increase the volume on these. For example (add these to the "TimingPoints" section of the osu file):

2251,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
2333,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
2415,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
2497,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
2579,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
2661,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
2743,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
2825,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
2907,-100,4,2,1,90,0,0
3562,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0

about the stream: I liked the idea but didn't like how low you started the hitsounding... I'll increase the hitsound volume only slightly because I don't think the stream starts so (what's the word aaaaaaaaaaa) quiet as for 20% hitsound, but slightly increases so I'll do that (from 80 to 96%)

00:03:562 (1) - I think the hit finish would sound better on 00:02:907 (9). added a finish here and kept the one in the slider

00:04:054 (2) - Feels like there are too many claps here. oops.. this will take a while to check all diffs -_-

00:06:185 (1) - This shape and placement of this slider is a bit strange. I don't think this shape works very well on its own. guys pls he's beautiful

00:14:054 to 00:35:038 - Hitsound volume is a bit too loud. reduced, slightly, but reduced

00:35:038 (1) - 00:36:349 (4) - 00:37:661 (1) - 00:38:972 (5) - Gradually increase volume of hitfinish on these. sure

00:40:284 to 00:44:874 - At the beginning, suddenly drop the volume down (to maybe around 30%-ish), then gradually increase to 100% at the end. yo dog thats quite edgy from 30 to 100 but did increase the hitsound volume ceilling, but kept the 70% base

00:44:874 (5) - Add hitfinish. added

00:45:038 (6) - This detracts from the silence in the music. IMO it's even weirder w/o

00:48:153 (1) - Maybe add hitfinish. lets try some uh
00:50:448 (6) - ^ no
00:52:087 (5) - ^ yes
00:53:399 (6) - ^ yes
00:56:021 (1) - ^, and etc. for the rest of the kiai. hm lets see some

01:00:939 (4,5) - The hitsounds on these sound like a stream, which doesn't match the music. weirdly enough sounds worse w/o ;w;

01:27:333 (3) - A circle would probably make more sense than a slider. Nah, I like it D:


[Insane]
Replay: http://puu.sh/osv0p/3c886c0e2a.osr
General Comments: Same as above. Check "3" shaped slider symmetry and make hitsounds more fun to listen to. Among the difficulties I played, I think that this one is the best of them. The plot thickens

00:02:251 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as above. Same as above.

00:13:890 (8,9,1) - When you have a triple like this, it doesn't make sense to drop the volume on the last note. as weird as it is, I think it is as it is

00:22:579 (5) - Slider doesn't really feel like it belongs. (Visually, that is. It's fine rhythmically.) think it's good

00:24:546 - Use a wider volume range. The whole point of changing the volume is so that players notice the change, right? So what's the point of changing the volume from 60% to 65%? I don't think anybody can actually tell that the volume changed there, especially when they're playing the map.

00:44:874 (5) - Add hitfinish. SURE

00:45:038 (6) - Same as previous difficulty. sry, keeping it

00:45:530 to 01:17:005 - I'm assuming that you haven't gotten to adding hitfinishes to the Kiai section yet, but it'll sound a lot better with them. I'll add some as you suggested, to all diffs. Let's see how it rolls

01:26:349 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The gap at 01:26:841 sounds weird. It might just be the hitsounds on 01:26:349 (1,2,3) though. Yeah that could be it, because many people can swear there's a sound there but I can't hear it... Following the drums here

[Light Insane]
Replay: http://puu.sh/osvzn/a6eea6a29e.osr
General Comments: Same as above.

00:02:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above. Same as above.

00:30:448 (1,2) - The mapping of the "nani mo" in this section is inconsistent with the mapping in the previous section - 00:19:957 (1,2,3). fixed

00:35:530 (2) - You might want to remove slider tick noises. don't think it will change much

01:26:349 (5,6,7) - Missed a NC somewhere maybe? Insane has a NC here. fixed

01:26:349 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - This rhythm is really confusing, and the spacing on 01:26:349 (5,6,7) makes it harder to read than insane. yeah this has been pointed out before but dunno why I havent changed yet, fixed

[]
Good luck with your map!

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Nanimo Nanimo >w<

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Yaa! You have my support. The video of the description is the best.

MkGuh wrote:

osu! needs more BR maps (?

Monstrata wrote:

[Nanadaime Hokage]

00:04:546 (3,4) - 1/2 slider. I can't see 4 being a circle because theres no note there. Same applies for 00:05:858 (4,5) - changed
00:08:317 (3,4) - Ctrl+G this rhythm. You might have to mvoe stuff around. think it's better as it is
00:08:808 (1,2,3,4,5) - Poor rhythm choice here too...changed a bit differently

Try this

00:17:661 (1) - Try and map the downbeat. Maybe reduce this slider to 1/2 and add a circle. okey
00:21:103 (1) - Unnecessary NC oops
00:28:808 (1,2,3) - This flows really poorly. hope its better now
00:40:612 (2,3,4) - Ctrl+G the rhythm. Having the circles later fits better with the drums/ think current one is better because of the vocal
00:48:808 (3,4) - Ctrl+G rhythm alright
01:00:284 (2,3) - Uh I don't get this rhythm at all... there are a lot of better rhythms here. i'm not sure what how much it improved but changed
01:01:103 (5) - Barely audible. Doesn't deserve a kickslider imo. ^
01:09:628 (2,3) - Ctrl+G rhyth,.
01:14:874 (1,2) - Ctrl+G rhyth, changed both
01:22:251 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - These don't fit at all... There aren't even audible beats on any of the red ticks... aaaaaaaaaaaa
01:24:874 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Why don't you do the jump spam here? Where there are actually audible beats? I'll see what I can do ;w; will wait for this change because i'm really confused ;w; changed a bit but I'm still not sure if the jumps should be all removed ;w;

[Insane]

00:04:546 (1) - Map that downbeat please xP. alrighty

Rhythm like this would work nicely

00:20:939 (3,4) - 1/2 slider instead. 4 is barely audible. ok
00:34:054 (4,5) - Ctrl+G so you can begin the jump sequence on 00:34:382 - instead. prefer current one
01:21:267 (10) - This is really undermapped. try and map more of the drums here. changed

Hmm, the rhythms you used on the Insane are a lot better. thanks, I guess...? mean... gracias señor monstrata

[Light Insane]

00:06:186 (3,4,5) - Rhythm is off here too... I think you know what to do now, given the previous mods. fixed
00:34:382 (1) - I think 2 circles is better here... kay
00:47:989 (7,8) - This just sounds overmapped to me
00:55:939 (8) - ^ fixed both
01:18:644 (3) - Weird rhythm choice... changed

Try this instead

01:26:677 (3,1) - This is just going to bait people into clicking too early cuz of the pattern. Do something else, moves them apart

[Hard]

00:12:087 (3,4) - Ctrl+G rhythm fixed
00:38:153 (4) - End it on the white tick 00:38:644 - instead. fixed
01:09:628 (2,3,4) - Ctrl+G rhythm

You need to rework your NC rhythm for basically every diff. NC on downbeats please. A lot of your NC's are over the place and inconsistent sorry ;w; NCs are weird for me because it feels sometimes that I'm using NC on the same sentence, idk.. ;w; I'll make all on downbeats

Good luck! gracias señor monstrata

TheLeviathan wrote:

From my mod Q


To be honest... I don't know what to say, mapset by me feels pretty damn good, and i don't want to discover mistakes or stuff on it from nothing. So ill just shoot 2 stars on it

Ataraxia wrote:

After I listened to music with these hitsounds, I never stopped to imagine music without them, and as I listen to normal music, I feel it "incomplete"

Of course, Hitsounds need a little rework

But in the jump pattens i think just need a "aceitable" patten in the moment.

00:42:907 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Mix with some sliders or Doubles to facilitate , and so a Unique NC

01:22:251 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Some like this


Não desista !

Boa sorte e sem kudo :3

Doyak wrote:

Hi~ M4M from my queue

[General]
* BG Size should be 16:9 or 4:3. So if the width is 1366, the height should be 768, but yours' height is 738. fuck, I'll fix this ASAP

[Xayler's Easy]

SPOILER

* 00:07:497 (4,1,2,3) - This rhythm can be confusing, as the 3/2 gaps are already hard, but it's changed to 2 beat again suddenly on 00:09:300 (2,3) - . Also I wouldn't recommend the spinner 00:11:431 (1) - too, as 1300ms is too short for beginners to react and spin properly. I'll recommend this: http://puu.sh/oI1rm/3ad6179411.jpg I used a slider for the gap change instead, which makes it easier to get 300 on it.
* 00:24:546 (1,2,3,4,5) - The rhythm you used here is VERY inconsistent with the previous one 00:14:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - . Compare these two.

They're musically almost identical. Which means, you need to put notes similarly as well. Where you put notes, where you make clickable, note density, difficulty and things should be mostly the same. That's what makes a map more structured. This is applied to the whole map. You can see that the kiai also used very inconsistent rhythm while the song is very similar from a part to another part. Check this yourself.
* 00:40:284 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Having only 2/1 beats on this getting-intense part is very boring and unbalanced with the previous part. I mean, you need to make calm parts easy as possible, while putting more notes on intense parts. Don't do this reversed.
* 00:48:153 (4,5,6) - Try to make a better blanket. One way to do this easily is by using the approach circle of the blanketed object. Like this: http://puu.sh/oI2E0/faa4fd8aa7.jpg
* 00:19:300 (7) - 00:29:792 (5) - 00:50:776 (8) - 01:01:267 (5) - 01:11:759 (6) - NC here instead of the next one, as they're downbeats so why not? You didn't strictly bind only those vocals into one comboset so just keeping the downbeat makes more sense. Also NC 01:22:251 (2) - here instead of 01:21:595 (1) -
* 01:09:136 (1) - Remove NC here, as it's the only spot you NCed with 2 stanzas.

This diff needs some work. Try to use consistent rhythm for similar parts. Also try to make the map more visually structured. Some examples are: symmetry, parallel, blanket, keeping same distance between objects (ex: 00:00:612 (1,2,3) - can be like this, see the triangle?), triangles/rectangles and whatever shapes and so on. I see you tried some of these, but I believe you can make it even better.

I'll see if Xayler can update this by this weekend since he has been extremely busy IRL, otherwise I'll do something myself about this difficulty since he allowed me to

[Normal]

SPOILER

* Don't use sv changes on Normal. Maybe you can use a slight change on kiai (like 1.0x to 1.1x) but using multiple changes is absolutely discouraged. In fact, this kind of regular changes are not recommended even on Hard. Please remap those parts you changed the SV. If you're not sure about this, here is a guide to BNs (more than a half year old but anyway): http://puu.sh/oI4Qu/4400b67cbe.png You would know that sv change also changes the ds, so it's even more harsh than just ds changes.
* Use NC's on every 2 downbeats. 1 is too short and is a big gap between Easy's 4.
* 00:03:562 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This rhythm isn't nice. First, it's too repetitive and doesn't follow the song's changes. Second, it's too easy considering which rhythm that Easy used. So let me say in detail. 2/1 slider + circle is already a very easy rhythm for a Normal. But you repeated this, 8 times in a row? Even if this was an Easy diff, it's still too easy. You should definitely fill out more 1/1s, and even use some 1/2 beats. Here, you have good electric guitar sounds on red ticks 00:04:054 - 00:05:366 - 00:06:677 - . You can kinda ignore this if you think they're not worth emphasized. But see what Easy did later. 00:07:989 - 00:09:300 - These are so strong so even Easy had to represent it even though it's gonna bad a hard rhythm. You should definitely use these rhythms to make the spread better. 00:11:923 - 00:13:235 - too. The most common rhythm for this part would be this: http://puu.sh/oI40j/b9b74c5bf2.jpg
* 00:16:677 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Here again. Now the number of repeats has reduced to 6, yeah? But still, it feels extremely boring for me, at least for a Normal diff. This doesn't represent the songs change at all too. What I mean is, that 00:16:677 (1,2,1,2) - and 00:19:300 (1,2,1,2) - are a different 'part' of the song. But there's no difference on rhythm use. So yeah, 00:19:300 (1,2,1,2) - this can be good considering how the vocals are, but 00:16:677 (1,2,1,2) - this is a NO for me. That part should be like this: http://puu.sh/oI4ov/a550bae01e.jpg Furthermore, 00:21:923 (1,2,1,2) - this part is ALSO different. This is a build-up for transisting to the next part, which can be a bit more intense, like this: http://puu.sh/oI4xY/d491a57560.jpg
* 00:26:185 (1,2,3) - I don't get this too. That part is only where the vocals are gone, so it's less intense than other parts. But filling all 1/1s out with all circles? Use some sliders, or THIS can be a good place to use that 2/1 sliders you used all the way.
* 00:27:169 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Same.
* 01:24:874 (1,1) - This is also a NO. You shouldn't use same spacing for 1/1s and 1/2s. It's very hard to read and very confusing.

It's sad that you used too simple rhythms on this diff. There are good 1/2s you can use. Filling 1/1s out only is too boring and doesn't represent the song well. The patterns are good, but please make the rhythm assist the music well. Especially those 2/1 slider - circle repetition was so monotonous. You need to make more difference with Easy.

Thanks for the deep analysis but I want to give the song this "simpler" (is this even a word in english) style, heavily inspired by this normal https://osu.ppy.sh/b/181213 . Does that means its bad? no, definitelly no, just a different approach of the "current meta", a style that has inspired me a lot and still impress me to this day.

I understand your points, I just want to keep it as it is. Regarding the SV changes I will check with a BN if I can keep the 0,75 sections but there 0,9x sections are totally going to get out, as soon as I have patience to move stuff around properly lol

Thanks for the mod, but I hope you understand my stand on this matter <3

I'll change the NCs as you pointed and the last 2 sliders will me moved to properly

Ayyri wrote:

Hello~

NM. From Bow Queue

Keep in mind, these are my suggestions, don't change something I mentioned unless it seems good to you!

Normal

01:17:497 (1) - Move this further away from 01:17:005 (6) - this might be hard for newer players to read. think it's ok but will change if I see newbies actually struggling here

Nanadaime Hokage

00:47:825 (7) - Move this note a bit closer to 00:48:153 (1) - since they're mapped right after each other.
00:58:644 (9,1) - ^ Like how they are currently
01:05:858 (3,4,5,6,7) - This overlap does not look nice. Also kind of annoying to play. as much as it overlaps, it does not produce any "harm" to the reading of the pattern and about being annoying thats kinda personal... I honestly like that alot

Monstrata wrote:

You need to rework your NC rhythm for basically every diff. NC on downbeats please. A lot of your NC's are over the place and inconsistent

PlasticMemor wrote:

sorry but i can't mod anything but in Nanadaime Hokage

01:06:185 (4,5,6,7) - i don't think anyone can be able to see that? yes they can?
01:26:841 - this could be clickable I think it's better as it is but many people said that so I might consider.. very unlikely but who knows

Ataraxia wrote:

Agora é so tirar o Xayler e colocar Ataraxia nas diffs !

BN NOTICE US

Marianna wrote:

Hellow~

1. Por que essas duas mudanças de volume estão no mesmo lugar?
   

Kalindraz wrote:

me cobre um mod depois que eu faço, bye.

1. You can't map any objects (except spinners iirc) before the first timing point. Add another red line at 00:00:612 - to fix that in all diffs.
2. conisder adding silent sliderslide, it's quite loud most times and doesn't match that well with the song, imo~
   (00:45:202 (1) - in Hard as an example.. pretty loud :c)

1. 00:00:940 - and 00:45:038 - useless green lines, please delete them. (Just looks cleaner.. xD)
2. try to keep your NC pattern consistent, you put them usually on each second downbeat, so why don't you do the same in the beginning?
   00:06:185 (3) - and 00:08:808 (2) - should have NC, but 00:07:497 (1) - shouldn't, I think
   add NC on 00:32:743 (5) - and remove it here 00:33:726 (1) -
   add on 00:37:661 (3) - and remove 00:38:972 (1) -
3. 00:06:185 (3,4,1) - movement is really uncomfortable. Move (4) to the left of (3), like 12|216, so beginner players don't struggle as much to get this right
4. 00:12:743 (2,3) - shouldn't this be another 3/2 reverse slider? There's a pretty strong sound at 00:13:235 - which should be emphasized, imo, and also this rhythm is different from 00:10:120 (3,4) - so it would be nice if it's mapped the same.
5. 00:15:366 (3,1) - I don't care much about blankets, but this could really need some refining. And please move them a little further apart, so (1) isn't closer to (3) than (4), that looks confusing for beginner players
6. 00:23:235 (1,2,1) - looks a bit untidy, try to shape the last slider more like http://puu.sh/oPapQ.jpg or http://puu.sh/oPamM.jpg ?
   same for following sliders 00:25:858 (2,1,2) -
   also for 01:17:005 (1,2) -
7. and try to avoid the overlap of 00:28:480 (2) - and 00:30:448 (2) -
8. 00:50:776 (1) - thhre's a break in the vocals, so http://puu.sh/oPavp.jpg or http://puu.sh/oPaw8.jpg woudl work better, imo
9. 01:13:071 (3,4,1) - all objects are visible at the same time which is pretty confusing to beginners because of the stack. Consider re-arranging this to make it better readable.
10. 01:19:628 (1,2) - Consider making the straight parts parallel, looks better, imo

1. 00:00:940 - if you don't change SV, why add a green line? You can just use the correct hitsound volume from the beginning..
2. 00:01:923 (2,3) - rhythm sound off because there are some pretty strong sounds on the red ticks, try http://puu.sh/oPb9A.jpg instead
3. 00:07:333 - I'm missing a circle here, consider adding one? :c
   And 00:07:497 (2) - would work better if split into slider + cirlce, because the sound on the slidertail here 00:08:153 - is the same as (3) and would be nice if both were clickable; same for the following rhytm.
4. 00:11:431 (1) - the anchor point doesn't have any other use except of making the reverse arrow look misleading, please fix that. Or turn it into something like http://puu.sh/oPbyM.jpg
5. 00:13:235 - should be emphasized somehow, sicne it's pretty strong and you've mapped it before. Try http://puu.sh/oPbE8.jpg ?
6. 00:15:694 (2,3) - ctrl+g this rhythm to better match it to the vocals
7. 00:17:989 (3,4) - simialr here, because of the strong sound at 00:18:317 - that should be clickable
8. 00:19:300 (1) - two circles would represent the break in the vocals better, I think
   same for 00:29:792 (1) -
9. 00:21:923 (5) - missing NC
10. 00:25:530 (2) - new ryhthm is starting on the downbeat, please make it clickable. You could just re-arrange this to http://puu.sh/oPc21.jpg or (imo slightly better because you don't have 5 clickables in a row then) http://puu.sh/oPc4F.jpg
11. 00:35:038 (5,1) - feels very weird that you have this gap here, because there's a beat and vocals, too, at 00:35:366 - and at 00:36:677 - and 00:37:989 - , too. I'd prefer if you add circles there, the rhythm is completely okay in a Normal.
    And if you pay close attention, the distance for 3/2 is the same as the previous 1/1, because of the slowdown, you should increase spacing to ~1.3 for slow-down parts to make them differentiable from the standard ones. (You can take the Normal here https://osu.ppy.sh/s/391823 as referance, it's totally okay to change DS with SV changes if it helps understanding time/distance relation)
    That way you'd also avoid confusing stuff like 00:38:153 (3,4,5,1) -
12. 00:38:153 (3) - missing NC
13. 00:44:218 (3,1) - don't stack other objects below slidertails if in easier diffs if both objects are visible at the same time, please. It's to confusing. Also there's not enough time between the objects to break DS here, please fix that too!
14. 01:17:005 (6,1) - kinda similar here, 3/2 stacks feel very unnatural to play :c
    also same as 00:35:038 (5,1) - because vocals and beats at 01:17:333 - 01:18:644 - ; also about DS
    and 01:19:956 (3) - missing NC
15. 01:24:874 (1,2) - unreadable at this skill level due to the DS change to 1.5, that's way too much of a variation for Normal

1. 00:00:940 - same as in prev. (and all higher diffs as well)
2. 00:00:940 (1,2,3) - rhythm feels very off because you ignore the strong sounds at 00:01:595 - and 00:01:923 - , consider re-arranging this rhythm; example
3. 00:02:251 (1,1) - stack makes this unnecessarily hard to read, consider unstacking them for clarity
4. 00:09:300 (2) - reverse on the stronger sound feels off, consider using circle + slider instead
5. 00:12:743 (1) - reverse doesn't work well, because of the beat here 00:13:235 - . Consider removing the reverse and mapping that
6. 00:13:972 - missing a circle? o:
7. 00:16:021 (2) - how about two 1/2 sliders here instead? There's a strong vocal starting on the current slidertail, would be nice if it was clickable.
8. 00:27:005 - similar here, consider adding another circle or turning 00:26:841 (2) - into a slider
9. 00:36:677 - and 00:37:989 - should have circles, too because you mapped 00:35:366 (1) -
   Also, they're missing NCs. (since you put them on each downbeat here)
10. 01:15:038 (2,3,1) - (2,1) almost touch, move them a little further apart?
11. 01:18:644 (4) - should be same as 01:17:333 (1,2) - , no? Same for 01:19:956 (1,2) -
12. 01:26:021 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - hmh, it's somewhat okay, but you can't completely cover the actual melody of the song (which sounds more like http://puu.sh/oPefo.jpg ), and it's noticeable. It feels weird to click 01:26:513 (2) - because ther's no strong sound at all, and it feels off to not follow something between 01:26:677 (3,1) - because (3) is an on-going sound. s: Consider re-arranging this. (Applies to higher diffs, too)

jonathanlfj wrote:

[General]
the right channel for soft-hitnormal was very quiet compared to the left, i boosted the volume a bit for you http://puu.sh/oTn1e.wav

[Ataraxia's Easy]
00:45:530 (1,2,3) - arrangement can be cleaner here I make like this because to Emphasis the voice moment, Thats is why in do this, like 00:56:021 (1,2,3) -
00:57:333 (1) - remove NCFixed !
01:24:546 - i would add a circle here to fill in the vocals wow !
this diff needs hitsounding lol, you can just copy it over from the highest diff This set need hitsound fix, in wait for the Mercusheigan for help him with hitsounds

overall a solid set, just need to fix some things on the lower diffs before calling me back

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