Thank you mod ! :d[Te][Amo] wrote:
Hello Pereira!
GeneralEasy
- I i think the offset its too early, please check it whit someone expert (im having 10ms late while playing http://puu.sh/nuVAR/48506fd80a.jpg).
- 00:03:698 (2) - Move the finish of the slider 1 grid up (x:324 y:68), flows better whit the next slider. fix my own
- 00:14:794 (3) - You can add a whistle at the begin of the slider, sounds good whit the instrumental. ya
- 00:18:082 (3) - Move the slider 1 grid up to make a perfect stack whit this slider begin 00:22:191 (3), also you can really improve the blanket of these two sliders 00:18:082 (3,1), moving the end of (1) to x:236 y:120 and (2) to x:60 y:168.fx
- 00:35:342 (3) - Press ctrl+shift and move it a bit to the right to align it perfect whit the previous slider. fx
- 00:47:671 (2) - You've missed a clap at the end of the slider, please add it.fx
- 00:54:246 (3) - In my opinion the slider sound better without the whistle at the begin, follows better the instrumental. no, stay, there instrumental strong i do like keep that
Consider about removing some notes to let the new players take a little break, since the BPM its 146 and you don't have any break since the song is short, it may exaust newbie players. Also lovely difficult. remove some notes and reduce sliders
Normal
- 00:04:315 (3,4,5) - In my opinion doesn't fits very well whit the song, try deleting these notes 00:04:931 (4,5), adding a reverse arrow here 00:04:315 (3) and adding a note here 00:05:547 (4) http://puu.sh/nuWTs/b09daf03a8.jpg, flows really better IMO, but its really up to you. nice, fixe
- 00:21:164 (4) - I really think you need to remove this note, it sound better whit the instrumental and also quits some difficult since you have alot of notes before 00:18:082 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3). fx
- 00:27:739 (4) - Same as above. fx
- 00:28:561 (5) - I think this note would be better if its changed by a slider that end here 00:28:972 (x) and then you add a note here 00:29:178 (7), it really really flows better whit the instrumental http://puu.sh/nuXsz/b362c0071d.jpg. No, because this melody is different, you can listen 2 melody there, there 1 melody hit and other melody long, i do like keep that
- 00:34:315 (4) - Same as 00:27:739 (4) and 00:21:164 (4). fx
- 00:40:890 (4) - Same as above ^. fx
- 00:41:712 (6,7) - Same thing as 00:28:561 (5), consider changing the rhythm http://puu.sh/nuXJY/b48900c185.jpg. no, same before
- 01:00:616 (4) - Same as 00:40:890 (4). no
- 00:41:712 (6,7) - Same thing as 00:28:561 (5), consider changing the rhythm http://puu.sh/nuXJY/b48900c185.jpg. no
- 00:54:246 (3) - In my opinion the slider sound better without the whistle at the begin, follows better the instrumental. whistle stay
Nice difficult!
Hard
- I have to say OD+1 since the jumps and streams.
- 00:15:205 (2) - Maybe add a clap at the begin, to keep the consistency whit hitsounds.fix
- 00:20:958 (3) - For me flow better if you ctrl+g this slider, it also reduces the high jump to the next slider. as Hard level jump max 2.50x or little more or less, is fine, will keep that
- 00:25:273 (2) - Same as above ^. no
- 00:26:917 (2) - Press ctrl+shift and move it a little bit up to align it whit the previous slider. fix
- 00:27:534 (3) - Same as 00:20:958 (3). no
- 00:34:520 (1) - Move this slider to x:212 y:224 to make a perfect stack whit 00:32:876 (1). fix
- 00:45:410 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - I think that a stream followed by another stream its hard even for hard players XD, just my opinion. hmmm. still fine imo
- 00:51:986 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^. no
- 00:54:246 (1) - In my opinion the slider sound better without the whistle at the begin, follows better the instrumental. no
- 01:09:041 (10) - Maybe add a finish, sounds well. add
Really nice mapping style! Good difficult.
Insane
- DR+1 maybe?.
- 00:15:205 (2) - Maybe add a clap at the begin, to keep the consistency whit hitsounds. fix
- 00:17:054 (2) - I guess the whistle at the end doesn't fit very well, maybe remove it. no
- 00:23:630 (2) - Same here ^. no
- 00:30:205 (2) - Same here ^. no
- 00:47:671 (1,2,3,4,5) - I have to say that while i was playing i failed in this part, i think its not intituive for players, what about adding 2 sliders of 1/1 here 00:47:979 (2) and here 00:48:801 (4), try it http://puu.sh/nuZgS/6104706583.jpg. ho I believe some players hate this, but I really like that, there happen my maps ranks, I follow only melody and instrumental than beats. I think this part is insteresting.
- 00:48:493 (4) - If you don't do the previous suggestion, add a whistle at the begin of this slider. done
- 00:53:219 (2) - Move this slider to x:334 y:269 to stack the end whit 00:52:397 (8). done
- 01:02:363 (x) - Consider about adding a note there just to follow the instrumentals. no
- 01:09:041 (10) - Maybe add a finish, sounds well. done
Enjoyed playing the diff.
Good map, hope my mod was helpful and i really hope to see this map ranked. Good luck!
Thank you mod !"!!ThoomyyxD wrote:
hello, I was on internet and I suddenly saw this, if it doesn't annoy you, i'll mod:3
[General][Easy]
- I think that the circle of the notes has a lot of pixels, may you can improve the skin of the map:3
[Normal]
- 00:16:438 (1,3) - these sliders don't look good when you play the map, I mean, you could try doing something between them, and what I say this, because all the map is beautiful and I think that if you don't do anythyng with both sliders, this part will lost some beauti-beauti.
- 00:23:013 (1) - use this slider as a blanket for 00:22:191 (3) - is a really good idea, trust me
- You could place this note 00:24:246 (2) - between both heads of these sliders 00:24:657 (3,1) - it's more beautiful
- I think that you need to make a pattern with 00:27:945 (2,3,1) - why you ask yourself.. because I see that you're placing notes randomly until you get at 00:31:232 (3,1) - because that's a cool pattern and I like it, so you may make a pattern with the 00:27:945 (2,3,1) - and in general just 00:27:945 (2) - has to be in another position.
- I think that's all, but, as a comment (I don't want to be rude but it's what I think), I think that you did not finish every pattern, I mean, you made a beautiful patterns, pretty beautiful pattern but you didn't finish all of them, maybe I am blind, maybe I am not, who knows
fix some, but some not necessary blanket, i make blanket if I feel need.[Hard]
- 00:14:589 (4,5,6) - why don't you use the same pattern than 00:13:150 (1,2,3) - being that you made always the same pattern before and the music doesn't change so much. the rhythm are different
- 00:19:520 (6) - the sound is not high, I think that you should delete this note, isn't doing anything important there, delete and listen to it, also it gives a break fix break some
- 00:21:164 (4) - ^ ^
- 00:25:890 (5) - ^ ^
- 00:27:739 (4) - ^ ^
- 00:32:671 (6) - ^ ^
- 00:40:890 (4) - ^ ^
- 00:42:739 (1,2,3) - I think that the (2) shouldn't be there, maybe more centre. no
- 00:46:027 (1,2) - you may use the same pattern than 00:44:383 (4,5,6) - to make it easier the rhythm are different
- 01:05:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think that this pattern is bored, you may try making a.. I don't know, something different, I mean, making circles frequenly isn't the best idea, imo I don't see s boring my self imo
[Insane]
- 00:17:671 (3,4) - gosh, unneed jump. I didn't see that you made this in all the map, what it's cool. jump is cool also is follow song because there strong rhythm
- 00:23:013 (1,2) - these curves must be improved the curve is symenttric
- 00:53:835 (4,5) - no jump? is jump
- 01:00:410 (3,4) - ^ is jump
- 01:00:821 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl + g one by one jejeje http://puu.sh/nv5Z1/8dc955d7ff.jpg i did that, but the spacing was huge. so i keep use 1.50x better jump as level hard
that's all, don't think that I think that it's bad or anything, Your map is really cool, also, take a star for it, but I really don't like some things that I've said, loves and bye♥
- Perfect xD
fix all and kudosu, well worth mod lol cuz i fix allMoodyRPG wrote:
Hi dude
GeneralEasy
- ok
Normal
- 00:48:904 (2) - Needs a clap here
Hard
- Cool stuff
Insane
- 01:08:835 (8) - Add a whistle perhaps? Sounds empty here
Perfect map, no kds and good luck bro
- 01:08:835 (8) - Same
Thank you mod ! :pLexis wrote:
(I'm really a bad modder, sorry :c)
[Easy]
00:16:438 (1,2,3) - Why not make a pattern like this ? no, sorry
00:19:315 - Add circle with clap sound no
00:28:767 (3,1) - Fix blanket (the problem is in the small slider) fix
01:09:041 (1) - Omg my eyes ._. lol
[Normal]
00:28:767 (7) - 1/2 beat slider with reverse (Clap at the reverse & the end) can sound better no
Sorry, I don't really find something, but that's because your diff is so perfect =p
[Hard]
00:05:547 (2,3) - The slider is flat.... why not try to make a blanket ? fix
00:27:534 (3) - x = 236 y = 296 for blanket fix
00:40:684 (3) - 32; 240 this time ^ fix
00:45:410 (4,5,6) - Slider ? I like keep that
00:47:671 (1,2) - Change pattern please is fine, is pretty well follow song
Better than the other diffs : I found more things :3
That's all for my mod !
I hope my mod is helpful for you c:
Thanks for the request
thank you guys