hello, I was on internet and I suddenly saw this, if it doesn't annoy you, i'll mod:3
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that's all, don't think that I think that it's bad or anything, Your map is really cool, also, take a star for it, but I really don't like some things that I've said, loves and bye♥
[General]
- I think that the circle of the notes has a lot of pixels, may you can improve the skin of the map:3
- 00:16:438 (1,3) - these sliders don't look good when you play the map, I mean, you could try doing something between them, and what I say this, because all the map is beautiful and I think that if you don't do anythyng with both sliders, this part will lost some beauti-beauti.
- 00:23:013 (1) - use this slider as a blanket for 00:22:191 (3) - is a really good idea, trust me
- You could place this note 00:24:246 (2) - between both heads of these sliders 00:24:657 (3,1) - it's more beautiful
- I think that you need to make a pattern with 00:27:945 (2,3,1) - why you ask yourself.. because I see that you're placing notes randomly until you get at 00:31:232 (3,1) - because that's a cool pattern and I like it, so you may make a pattern with the 00:27:945 (2,3,1) - and in general just 00:27:945 (2) - has to be in another position.
- I think that's all, but, as a comment (I don't want to be rude but it's what I think), I think that you did not finish every pattern, I mean, you made a beautiful patterns, pretty beautiful pattern but you didn't finish all of them, maybe I am blind, maybe I am not, who knows
- 00:14:589 (4,5,6) - why don't you use the same pattern than 00:13:150 (1,2,3) - being that you made always the same pattern before and the music doesn't change so much.
- 00:19:520 (6) - the sound is not high, I think that you should delete this note, isn't doing anything important there, delete and listen to it, also it gives a break
- 00:21:164 (4) - ^
- 00:25:890 (5) - ^
- 00:27:739 (4) - ^
- 00:32:671 (6) - ^
- 00:40:890 (4) - ^
- 00:42:739 (1,2,3) - I think that the (2) shouldn't be there, maybe more centre.
- 00:46:027 (1,2) - you may use the same pattern than 00:44:383 (4,5,6) - to make it easier
- 01:05:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think that this pattern is bored, you may try making a.. I don't know, something different, I mean, making circles frequenly isn't the best idea, imo
- 00:17:671 (3,4) - gosh, unneed jump. I didn't see that you made this in all the map, what it's cool.
- 00:23:013 (1,2) - these curves must be improved
- 00:53:835 (4,5) - no jump?
- 01:00:410 (3,4) - ^
- 01:00:821 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl + g one by one jejeje http://puu.sh/nv5Z1/8dc955d7ff.jpg
- Perfect xD