Hello Pereira!
General
Normal
Hard
Insane
Good map, hope my mod was helpful and i really hope to see this map ranked. Good luck!
General
- I i think the offset its too early, please check it whit someone expert (im having 10ms late while playing http://puu.sh/nuVAR/48506fd80a.jpg).
- 00:03:698 (2) - Move the finish of the slider 1 grid up (x:324 y:68), flows better whit the next slider.
- 00:14:794 (3) - You can add a whistle at the begin of the slider, sounds good whit the instrumental.
- 00:18:082 (3) - Move the slider 1 grid up to make a perfect stack whit this slider begin 00:22:191 (3), also you can really improve the blanket of these two sliders 00:18:082 (3,1), moving the end of (1) to x:236 y:120 and (2) to x:60 y:168.
- 00:35:342 (3) - Press ctrl+shift and move it a bit to the right to align it perfect whit the previous slider.
- 00:47:671 (2) - You've missed a clap at the end of the slider, please add it.
- 00:54:246 (3) - In my opinion the slider sound better without the whistle at the begin, follows better the instrumental.
Consider about removing some notes to let the new players take a little break, since the BPM its 146 and you don't have any break since the song is short, it may exaust newbie players. Also lovely difficult.
Normal
- 00:04:315 (3,4,5) - In my opinion doesn't fits very well whit the song, try deleting these notes 00:04:931 (4,5), adding a reverse arrow here 00:04:315 (3) and adding a note here 00:05:547 (4) http://puu.sh/nuWTs/b09daf03a8.jpg, flows really better IMO, but its really up to you.
- 00:21:164 (4) - I really think you need to remove this note, it sound better whit the instrumental and also quits some difficult since you have alot of notes before 00:18:082 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3).
- 00:27:739 (4) - Same as above.
- 00:28:561 (5) - I think this note would be better if its changed by a slider that end here 00:28:972 (x) and then you add a note here 00:29:178 (7), it really really flows better whit the instrumental http://puu.sh/nuXsz/b362c0071d.jpg.
- 00:34:315 (4) - Same as 00:27:739 (4) and 00:21:164 (4).
- 00:40:890 (4) - Same as above ^.
- 00:41:712 (6,7) - Same thing as 00:28:561 (5), consider changing the rhythm http://puu.sh/nuXJY/b48900c185.jpg.
- 01:00:616 (4) - Same as 00:40:890 (4).
- 00:41:712 (6,7) - Same thing as 00:28:561 (5), consider changing the rhythm http://puu.sh/nuXJY/b48900c185.jpg.
- 00:54:246 (3) - In my opinion the slider sound better without the whistle at the begin, follows better the instrumental.
Nice difficult!
Hard
- I have to say OD+1 since the jumps and streams.
- 00:15:205 (2) - Maybe add a clap at the begin, to keep the consistency whit hitsounds.
- 00:20:958 (3) - For me flow better if you ctrl+g this slider, it also reduces the high jump to the next slider.
- 00:25:273 (2) - Same as above ^.
- 00:26:917 (2) - Press ctrl+shift and move it a little bit up to align it whit the previous slider.
- 00:27:534 (3) - Same as 00:20:958 (3).
- 00:34:520 (1) - Move this slider to x:212 y:224 to make a perfect stack whit 00:32:876 (1).
- 00:45:410 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - I think that a stream followed by another stream its hard even for hard players XD, just my opinion.
- 00:51:986 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^.
- 00:54:246 (1) - In my opinion the slider sound better without the whistle at the begin, follows better the instrumental.
- 01:09:041 (10) - Maybe add a finish, sounds well.
Really nice mapping style! Good difficult.
Insane
- DR+1 maybe?.
- 00:15:205 (2) - Maybe add a clap at the begin, to keep the consistency whit hitsounds.
- 00:17:054 (2) - I guess the whistle at the end doesn't fit very well, maybe remove it.
- 00:23:630 (2) - Same here ^.
- 00:30:205 (2) - Same here ^.
- 00:47:671 (1,2,3,4,5) - I have to say that while i was playing i failed in this part, i think its not intituive for players, what about adding 2 sliders of 1/1 here 00:47:979 (2) and here 00:48:801 (4), try it http://puu.sh/nuZgS/6104706583.jpg.
- 00:48:493 (4) - If you don't do the previous suggestion, add a whistle at the begin of this slider.
- 00:53:219 (2) - Move this slider to x:334 y:269 to stack the end whit 00:52:397 (8).
- 01:02:363 (x) - Consider about adding a note there just to follow the instrumentals.
- 01:09:041 (10) - Maybe add a finish, sounds well.
Enjoyed playing the diff.
Good map, hope my mod was helpful and i really hope to see this map ranked. Good luck!