kanpakyin wrote:

Hi, mod4mod here.

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:17:227 (29) - How about changing this to kat to make some variation? Kat could fit the music well. I rather prefer consistency as variation.
2. 00:25:997 (56,57,58) - This triplet doesn't fit the music well as nothing to support it. I highly recommend changing it to simple 1/2 Ok, then i changed to k d because it fits more the music.
3. 00:33:381 (84,85,86) - ^ ^
4. 00:36:612 - add a kat here? Break time, so no add on these sections
5. 00:40:766 (109,110,111) - same as 00:25:997- (...etc I guess you can find all the unfitted triplets) ofc
6. 01:10:074 (227,228) - you might want to change this to triplet. Nope, the noticabvle sounds are on doublets, the middle is for battery, so it fits well.
7. 01:40:074 (308) - Change this to kat to fit the pitch? Mine sounds good, also the kats are on 3/4 and dons on 1/2 this way also makes the lecture easier.
8. 01:47:458 (329) - ^ ^
9. 02:41:227 (509,510,511) - kkk sounds better here imo. Yep
10. 02:52:766 (559) - don here? Nope high synthetizer sound here.
11. 03:08:920 (622) - don here to make some variation? Prefer my version, sounds better with the music.
12. 03:23:227 (675,676,677,678,679) - hum...I have no idea that what do these notes follow. They don't follow the beats nor the music that well. Probably you can try using 1/1 here. Yep, This is a safer solution, i reworked a bit this section

kanpakyin wrote:

Hi, mod4mod here.

[FutsuuZoda]

1. 00:36:612 - Probably add a kat here as to emphasize the background music. This won't affect the overall difficulty. I want to keep the 3/1 break at that point.
2. Actually personally, I would avoid using complex 1/2 pattern like kkddk ddkkd kdkkd etc in Futsuu. Also, the part in kiai is much harder than overall difficulty. You may need to tune it down. Tuning it down means having a very insane difficulty gap with Muzukashii. 2/1 breaks make up for the difficulty, and as it's the most intense part of the song.
3. 01:20:920 (142) - Remove this note as there are no music to support it. Done
4. d k ddk d kd this pattern is quite repetitive. I know that you are trying to follow the drum, but why don't you try something new like d k d kd dkd That repetition is fine enough to me, these are the "stronger points" I want to emphasize, that kind of pattern is way too risky.
5. 02:44:689 - Add a note here? 02:44:920 (278) - you had one job
6. 03:34:304 (373) - Big don would fit the strong beat there, I think. It's a soft beat.

kanpakyin wrote:

Hi, mod4mod here.

[Pacha's Taiko Oni]

1. 00:18:151 (73,74,75) - dkd would be better than dkk as the pitch of 00:18:381 - is lower than 00:18:266 - Nah, in this sequence, we're in a dk logic, we would break the emphasis by doing this
2. 00:18:612 - ~ 00:22:074 - I can't barely hear the drum sound even that I am using the headphone. Please don't lower the volumn to a extent that nothing can be heard. Already had remarks on this, i added +10% volume on this part.
3. 00:39:958 (195,196) - dk here?No, it would lose a lot a smoothness with the K after this.
4. 00:42:151 (205,206,207,208,209) - how about kdddk? Mh, yeah, why not
5. 00:47:343 (235,236) - dk? ^
6. 00:48:612 (240,241,242,243,244,245,246) - This stream doesn't fit the music well. Probably you can change it to xx xx x like how you can in previous sections. True, changed
7. 01:39:843 (510,511,512) - kdk? Yeah, done.
8. 01:42:497 (523) - don here? So that it can be consistent with the pitch and the pattern you use.Nah, it would be too monotonous.
9. 01:54:612 (578,579,580) - How about removing this triplet and then change it to 1/2 with the first one becoming a big kat? The effect would be better than kkd imo. Yeah, I tried and it's cool.
10. 02:09:612 (662) - kat? Nah, it's cool here
11. 02:12:612 (678,679,680) - These big notes don't fit the music well. Remove them? Nah, they're great great I think ! It gives so much emphasis
12. 02:23:689 (738) - ^ ^
13. 02:31:074 (779) - ^ ^

1. HP6?
2. In every part of the song with volume lowered, don't let it go lower than 40%. Very often I can't even tell if I'm being accurate during the middle of a stream or some other because of how the song is still making sound louder than the hits.
3. In addition, the section with 100% is really, really loud.
4. 00:21:843 (97) - There are 2 green lines here, one is unsnapped obviously.
5. 00:51:151 (254) - Unsnapped green line on this note.
   
6. 00:03:151 (10,11) - Why aren't these following the rhythm of what 00:02:689 (8,9) - maps? I think it's a better idea.
7. 00:05:458 - Add 'd' because ^?
8. 01:35:689 (493) - Remove finish? Not much to emphasize at all. (liked the freestyling before this :3)
9. 02:00:151 (605) - Since you're mapping all these kicks as big notes, why not this one?
10. 02:20:227 (718) - I don't think it's worth mapping this sound.
    
11. Not going to nit-pick a lot, but I will say that the first kiai has no breaks and long patterns, but second kiai does not. Normally this should be reversed (though even in that case, put some breaks ofc).
    
    Otherwise, gj mapping such a repetitive song somewhat interesting xD

1. 00:04:766 (15) - Why not move to 00:04:651 ?
2. 00:35:574 (92) - Move to 00:36:151 ? Triplet isn't as fitting as the other one and you don't need a break that long.
3. 01:40:074 (304,305) - k as well? Exact same sound. It was fine in the intro though.
4. 01:40:651 - Add k?
5. 01:47:227 (325,326,327,328) - Same two things as the two above (the d selected is just to give a gap).
6. 01:54:612 (346,347,348,349) - ^ You could also just vary these like in the intro.
7. 02:18:958 (426) - Move to 02:19:535 like mentioned before?
8. 00:42:612 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122) - This particular part is pretty hard, and the section at 02:05:689 which is a repeat has nothing like that. Fix that up as you please?
9. 03:10:766 (621,622,623,624) - Just k d k? ddd sounds bad, since it's not following the rhythm well.
   
   Also didn't nitpick that much. Reminded me of your other map.

1. 01:07:304 (110,111,112) - Shouldn't this be at 01:03:612 like how the kkddk is at the beginning? Actually, how about 00:59:920 (93,94,95) - goes 01:10:997 (so just delete there and add d here) so it's two 5 note things, only doubles, two five note things, then only doubles (and quads I guess) again?
   
2. This diff also suffers from "second kiai is a lot less complex". Especially in this song where the chorus is much more "hype" the second time, having more percussion sounds in it.
   
   Spread from futsuu to Muzu might suck a bit, but it's dumb because mapping the weird rhythms would be lame... maybe some kxxkxxk wouldn't hurt though.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

hi im late for m4m kinda

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:04:766 (15) - Why not move to 00:04:651 ? I think it's safer and worth to keep this 1/1 break, it will also keep the pattern symetrical which is nice and less complex than this solo 3/4.
2. 00:35:574 (92) - Move to 00:36:151 ? Triplet isn't as fitting as the other one and you don't need a break that long. Maybe i don't need a long break, but because nwolf criticised the lack of big breaks earlier, i prefer keeping safe by this kind of break, plus i think that 00:36:035 is more accurate for a decent note. And the triplet is fine for me tho.
3. 01:40:074 (304,305) - k as well? Exact same sound. It was fine in the intro though. Symetrical pattern, plus there's a kind of background sound which can justify this kdd. (But kkk could work too, but i prefer my version).
4. 01:40:651 - Add k? Well this will make a long combo which swing between 1/2 and 3/4, i think this will be too technical for a muzu.
5. 01:47:227 (325,326,327,328) - Same two things as the two above (the d selected is just to give a gap).
6. 01:54:612 (346,347,348,349) - ^ You could also just vary these like in the intro. Well ¦:^)
7. 02:18:958 (426) - Move to 02:19:535 like mentioned before? ¦:^)
8. 00:42:612 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122) - This particular part is pretty hard, and the section at 02:05:689 which is a repeat has nothing like that. Fix that up as you please? Oups changed this section a bit. Thanks! ¦:^)
9. 03:10:766 (621,622,623,624) - Just k d k? ddd sounds bad, since it's not following the rhythm well. Yes i changed this section but not like you mentioned so at 03:10:304 : it will be kkk d k then the triple d. It sounds better and more accurate with the current patterns.
   
   Also didn't nitpick that much. Reminded me of your other map.

Crappy mod, but I'll probably be back here later on

OzzyOzrock wrote:

hi im late for m4m kinda

[Pacha's Taiko Oni]

1. HP6? Keep 5 for all diff, seems legit tho.
2. In every part of the song with volume lowered, don't let it go lower than 40%. Very often I can't even tell if I'm being accurate during the middle of a stream or some other because of how the song is still making sound louder than the hits. Let it gooooow, let it goooow....
3. In addition, the section with 100% is really, really loud. Down to 80%
4. 00:21:843 (97) - There are 2 green lines here, one is unsnapped obviously. This is not a green line but the preview point, fixed.
5. 00:51:151 (254) - Unsnapped green line on this note. Fixed.
   
6. 00:03:151 (10,11) - Why aren't these following the rhythm of what 00:02:689 (8,9) - maps? I think it's a better idea. It sounds Ugly Oo. The 3/4 break then the doublets doesn't sounds good. And you have nothing at 00:03:266
7. 00:05:458 - Add 'd' because ^? Ok
8. 01:35:689 (493) - Remove finish? Not much to emphasize at all. (liked the freestyling before this :3) I don't think it's comfortable to play K k D too
9. 02:00:151 (605) - Since you're mapping all these kicks as big notes, why not this one? Let's try
10. 02:20:227 (718) - I don't think it's worth mapping this sound. I think it is, i've nothing bad about it personnally, but keep noticing.
    
11. Not going to nit-pick a lot, but I will say that the first kiai has no breaks and long patterns, but second kiai does not. Normally this should be reversed (though even in that case, put some breaks ofc).
    
    Otherwise, gj mapping such a repetitive song somewhat interesting xD

Crappy mod, but I'll probably be back here later on

shionelove wrote:

from queue

[Muzu]
03:21:381 (658,659,660) - delete this 1/4 pattern because only this is 1/4 Changed into kdd. This is more appropriate
03:32:458 (1,1) - that spinner is too long you should change this normal note or make short spinner(BN told me this when i got BNmod)
you need atleast 1/1 space between end of spinner and note Well... ok xd

winner is...
no they are 2nd in ESL cologne 2015 gg
rip :'(

1. 00:22:333 - what the hell
2. 00:43:535 (56) - move to 00:43:074 - and turn to a k? lol skipping the snare hit feels odd
3. volume? make it consistent with Oni or at least make it a bit lower on calmer parts lol
4. rename to Gezo's Muzukashii? tbh i don't want you guys to get slapped by Ono

1. ok
2. ok..........
3. monocolour triplets oni. kill?

1. 00:22:189 - 00:22:420 - pointless green lines as they don't affect any note. Move them to the respective notes. Bleh anyway the note at 00:22:304 (101) - overlaps everything but as long as it's readable enough xd
2. 01:21:381 - 01:36:151 - uhmmmmmmm what EXACTLY are you following here xddddd
3. 02:05:574 - 02:05:804 - green lines,.,...
4. aaaa

Raiden wrote:

why am i even doing this

if you give kudosu to this sht i'll kill you
k

[cerveza]

1. 00:22:333 - what the hell old mapping style i guess.
2. 00:43:535 (56) - move to 00:43:074 - and turn to a k? lol skipping the snare hit feels odd 'k
   
3. volume? make it consistent with Oni or at least make it a bit lower on calmer parts lol Applied what i did on Oni
4. rename to Gezo's Muzukashii? tbh i don't want you guys to get slapped by Ono Thought of it too. Kinda old map right now :<

[oni dessert]

1. ok
2. ok..........
3. monocolour triplets oni. kill? That was originally a muzukashii meeehhh D:, consider this a light oni and the muzukashii as a light muzukashii.
   

[pacha dessert]

1. 00:22:189 - 00:22:420 - pointless green lines as they don't affect any note. Move them to the respective notes. Bleh anyway the note at 00:22:304 (101) - overlaps everything but as long as it's readable enough xd Corrected the green lines, and i delted the first 2 notes after the D, the overlapp as itself might not be a problem however, i prefer keeping a safe distance with this kind of SV style.
2. 01:21:381 - 01:36:151 - uhmmmmmmm what EXACTLY are you following here xddddd That doesn't shock me. It's kinda same style as the beggining.
3. 02:05:574 - 02:05:804 - green lines,.,... fixed.
4. aaaa aaaaaaaa

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Please die in hell.

1. 00:13:535 (4,1) - The flow here is quite broken, due to the movement created here
2. 00:17:227 (5) - You use 1/1 and 1/2 throughout the map, and then suddenly a long 3/2 slider. Why? It feels really out of place
3. 00:23:227 (1) - Too fast after the spinner. Altough it's a normal, it's the easiest diff of the set, and thus should be treated as one
4. 00:52:766 (1) - ^^ (Happens more times in the map)
5. 01:38:920 - Wrong sample? (Happens more)

1. 00:14:458 (8,9) - The change of distance feels out of place, Ctrl G
2. 00:22:304 (1) - Too quick after spinner, needs to be at least 1 beat in hard
3. 00:26:689 (2,3,7) - Not really a fan of the overlap between (2,3) and (7). It can stay if you want though
4. 00:46:074 (5,1) - Blanket
5. 00:51:843 (1) - Spinner issue
6. 01:09:381 (5,2) - (2) is slightly covered by '(5's) reverse, making it unreadable, though (5) already fades out so it might be fine.
7. 01:57:843 (8,9) - Still 3/4?
8. 02:05:689 (1) - Spinner issue
9. 02:23:689 (5,2) - Quite a bad overlap, why not try to blanket them? (Will be hard as there is also distance to worry about >__>

1. 00:08:343 (3) - Low spacing is really confusing, as parts as 00:08:689 (4,5,6,7,8) - are 1/2 but with higher spacing (I know it's later then the prev, but you understand it, right? :3)
2. 00:19:997 (4,5,6) - Consider silencing the ends, like 00:31:997 (3,4,5), or give them drum samples at the tails
3. 00:20:689 (1) - Add a circle here, and start the spinner 1/4 later for more emphasis
4. 00:25:535 (7) - Please make it a bit wiggly so it follows the ieeehhh in the song better (just personal pref)
5. 00:32:920 (6) - ^^ Also, the low spacing with the previous object (the overlap) feels a bit out of place, please space those two more
   The above slider"issue" happens more often, consider changing those as well
6. 01:47:920 (4,5,6) - Low spacing after a slider (1/4 slider) feels awkward, better space these out a lot. Consider making (4,5,6) a blanket wwith (3)
7. 02:04:074 (1) - Add a circle here, and start the spinner 1/4 later for more emphasis
8. 02:23:689 (6) - No 3/4?
9. 02:30:151 (3,4,5) - Consider silencing the ends, like 00:31:997 (3,4,5),
10. 02:38:689 (8,9) - Uhm, this is quite a big jump, just stick to regular spacing here, or have 2 sliders and then a circle
11. 02:48:612 (2,3) - Overlap, please fix

Raiden wrote:

oh you're not gona delete the stds like std dumbasses people do with taikos?

such a shame

lolz

Baraatje123 wrote:

Popping the bubble ovr several huge issues in Normal (Spacing)
Changing Distance is not allowed, except for kiai (where it is 1.1 instead of 1.0)

[General]
It's not that big of a deal, but there is an unsnapped green timing point (at 02:06:251) Consider snapping it

[Normal]
What's wrong with the Distanc in the begin (and some others throughout the map)?
00:04:304 (1,2,3) - This for example, 1.13 and 1.0
00:06:151 (4,1,2) - 1.0 and 1.2
01:48:612 (3,4) - 1 and 0.77
02:23:227 (5,1) - 1.0 and 1.34
For aesthetical reasons, it's better to stick with 1.2 (so the 1/2 doesn't hit each other)
All DS has been fixed. But SR is 2.00 DDD: General flow and patterns have been changed too because i cannot reproduce what i've done with 1.20, in terms of rythm, that's hasn't changed

I'll point out some general flaws in the rest of the mod for this diff, as you know what do to with the distance

1. 00:13:535 (4,1) - The flow here is quite broken, due to the movement created here Fixed.
2. 00:17:227 (5) - You use 1/1 and 1/2 throughout the map, and then suddenly a long 3/2 slider. Why? It feels really out of place
   Imo it's ok, maybe it's visible because before this slider there's 1/2 sliders, so it's a quit diffenrece. Even tho, i've used 3/2 slider and 3/4 sliders at the same pattern moment on this section. So it's stil consistent with what i've done before.
   
3. 00:23:227 (1) - Too fast after the spinner. Altough it's a normal, it's the easiest diff of the set, and thus should be treated as one
4. 00:52:766 (1) - ^^ (Happens more times in the map) Corrected all.
5. 01:38:920 - Wrong sample? (Happens more) Hmmm seemed to be fixed. I found no other one D:

Diff isn't bad, but it's just quite old, and therefore feels a bit bad. Idk how to express this properly, but I don't like it, well, I don't like alsmot every older map so that's not that big of a deal Yep D:

[Hard]

1. 00:14:458 (8,9) - The change of distance feels out of place, Ctrl G Ok but (1) has to ctrl-g too, the flow is better and i don't think that this jump is a big deal. Do not hesitate to confirm it.
   
2. 00:22:304 (1) - Too quick after spinner, needs to be at least 1 beat in hard Prefer reducing spinner. 5000 but autobot is ok
3. 00:26:689 (2,3,7) - Not really a fan of the overlap between (2,3) and (7). It can stay if you want though I'm ok for stacking with 3, that will reduce the jump a bit.
4. 00:46:074 (5,1) - Blanket That should be ok now.
5. 00:51:843 (1) - Spinner issue
6. 01:09:381 (5,2) - (2) is slightly covered by '(5's) reverse, making it unreadable, though (5) already fades out so it might be fine. The recovery is way too short, so i've decided to rebuild the whole combo, maybe take a look.
7. 01:57:843 (8,9) - Still 3/4? There's little sound on these 1/2, imo both of them are legit.
8. 02:05:689 (1) - Spinner issue
9. 02:23:689 (5,2) - Quite a bad overlap, why not try to blanket them? (Will be hard as there is also distance to worry about >__> Fixed.
   

I really like this diff. Even though it's old, it's quite good! \o\

[Insane]

1. 00:08:343 (3) - Low spacing is really confusing, as parts as 00:08:689 (4,5,6,7,8) - are 1/2 but with higher spacing (I know it's later then the prev, but you understand it, right? :3) I really, really don't know what can i do here. I moved it a bit and made a blanked with (1), that increase a bit the DS but not that much, if i increase more or stack with (6) that doesn't make sense for me too D:
2. 00:19:997 (4,5,6) - Consider silencing the ends, like 00:31:997 (3,4,5), or give them drum samples at the tails Drum
3. 00:20:689 (1) - Add a circle here, and start the spinner 1/4 later for more emphasis Let's try this.
   
4. 00:25:535 (7) - Please make it a bit wiggly so it follows the ieeehhh in the song better (just personal pref) I would like to do that but i did kind of in the past, and ppl told me that this was unrankable maybe it is it still. D:
5. 00:32:920 (6) - ^^ Also, the low spacing with the previous object (the overlap) feels a bit out of place, please space those two more
   The above slider"issue" happens more often, consider changing those as well Hmmm ok.
6. 01:47:920 (4,5,6) - Low spacing after a slider (1/4 slider) feels awkward, better space these out a lot. Consider making (4,5,6) a blanket wwith (3) Change the position of the previous sliders and going for a 0.9 DS, even if it's low, it's way better.
7. 02:04:074 (1) - Add a circle here, and start the spinner 1/4 later for more emphasis added.
8. 02:23:689 (6) - No 3/4? Yes afterall.
9. 02:30:151 (3,4,5) - Consider silencing the ends, like 00:31:997 (3,4,5), Better drum sampleset?
10. 02:38:689 (8,9) - Uhm, this is quite a big jump, just stick to regular spacing here, or have 2 sliders and then a circle Changed into 2 sliders 1 circle rythm and recude end space.
    
11. 02:48:612 (2,3) - Overlap, please fix Fixed.

I like this diff, just a few things
Low spacing after a 1/4 slider feels quite awkward, Also some spacings feel quite weird and outdated, but the map is old so it's fine

Normal needs more adjustments. Hard/Insane are both fine
Call me once you fix the DS, and get 3-4 mods mostly (if not only) on Normal and it'll be fine for rebub :3

Endaris wrote:

Hi,

regarding the Normal-Diff you asked me to mod:

I looked over it and one issue in terms of spread I see is that this diff doesn't follow the guidelines for an Easy-Difficulty. Because it's a Normal-Difficulty, of course it doesn't follow the guidelines of a Easy dfficulty

Sure 130bpm is not fast but not very slow either and 1.4 SV and 1.2 DS is quite a lot. Because without you have overlapping.

On top of it you're not holding back with red ticks at all which makes the map even faster. What?

Assuming an untrained hand this is kind of difficult to aim. I have a lot of trouble doing the map lefthanded with a righthanded mouse in a mouse-only playstyle and I don't have problems starters typically have(Reading, being accurate with rhythm, waiting for the note etc.). Of course you have problem with mouse-only because you're not a mouse-only player, it's like me playing on taiko no tatsujin and saying "Oh i have trouble while playing muzukashii (hard) diff with 2 chopsticks and a drumb but i have a good lecture of the pattern because i play taiko on osu." The issue is typically the same and i wont blame TnT)


This is mostly a design-choice though. For what the map currently is, the parameters are chosen well. If one tried to force an easier difficulty by lowering SV(that's a major problem I see for this to become easy) the 1/2 sliders would become really ugly and it wouldn't harmonize with the other settings. Yep you got the point, but i looked on some recent map (Artic justice from Pereira006 his normal has 1.30 SV and 1.20 DS so that's fine

The thing is that I don't think it makes any sense if I try to push the difficulty down with a mod because as mentioned, this won't be following the criteria for Easy by Design. But but, why we should focus on easy criteria for a Normal diff, that doesn't make sense. Why just don't see look at the criteria of a normal diff and see if it fits or not. As the ranking criteria says Mapsets must have at least two difficulties of the same game mode, one of which must be an Easy/Normal level.


Whether it will be rankable is up to the BNs/QATs discretion of course but I would rather mod this with the incentive that this is a difficult normal diff on the edge to hard that is used to optimize the spread instead of completing it - because this is what the map looks like after all. You know that some normal that are more difficult than mine? Yet i'm pretty sure that the calculation sur-evaluate the normal because of 3/4 sliders. Yet before some modification it was up to 1.80, but because of DS change it goes to 2.0.


Personally I would recommend you to map an additional Easy-Diff. If you do I would mod the Easy+Normal-Diff. Give me feedback on what you will do via pm please
I'll make some discussion with some BN and make a choice because mapping 3.40 min diff for an easy (and i don't like mapping easy diff) is taking some time, and i'm quite buzy.

No kudosu of course.

The difficulty spread should be linear and reasonable. Linear difficulty spread means your difficulties have a comparable gap in star rating between each other. A reasonable spread means the usage of difficulty appropriate gameplay elements. If your mapset does not have an Easy difficulty your Normal difficulty should follow the general guidelines for Easy difficulties.

Your Paladin-Normal has lower DS and also a big amount of 1/1 sections which makes it a reasonable compromise with the guideline.

Raiden wrote:

I am truly amazed at how you keep struggling with the standard difficulties, but still want them in the set. While you had zero hesitation on deleting the Taiko difficulties when I said I wouldn't check them.

I'm sorry but I, personally, won't take part in the ranking process on this map, as I'm very disappointed with your selective attitude.

edit: I almost forgot it. Don't ask me for a mod again.

Good luck.

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Natsu wrote:

bit more disappointed with your attitude always against ¨standard¨, man keep your mind free of prejudices! be happy, since you sound: ¨remove standard diffs cause I want to revenge from standard mappers¨ really kid behaviour, try to grow up, you supposed to help the community not to impose your thinking.

Okoratu wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/4377095

Since you know nothing about me nor the Taiko community you should stand aside from these topics.
In first place, you completely misunderstood me. I have nothing against standard mappers. I do have something against people who don't even think twice before deleting Taiko difficulties because they want to rank stuff (which are 100% of the cases, standard mappers who want their precious speedranks). And now that the standard difficulties are being the troublesome ones, he isn't deleting them. That's quite cynical if you ask me.

The only kid behaviour here was yours for trying to intervene in something you have no idea about; and the mapper's for showing quite the double standard when it comes to which difficulties to remove (heh, get the pun?)

Exa wrote:

Normal:

- Nothing notable really.

Hard:

00:14:920 (1,2,3) - This forces gradually increasing linear flow which is very awkward to play to, then again I don't really find anything else wrong with it. Well i could ctrl-g the slider, but here the flow sucks a bit imo. I'll keep noticing if it makes trouble, but i find it good as itself D:

00:33:843 (3,7) - I bet people playing are not gonna notice, but that looks bad. Haha, correct, fixed.

01:11:689 (5) - Could be placed somewhere around 368,147 to avoid the overlap, or even better make it symmetrical by copy-pasting the upcoming (1,2). Move at your position then copy/pasted (it was already a copy / paste).

01:14:458 (2,3,4,5,6) - Since you did not do that anywhere before, it seems really sudden, out of place and most importantly - too inconsistent. Yep you're right i've change the whole combo in order to make it more consistent. Nice catch.

01:58:074 (9) - Would place it somewhere around 72,38 since it does not really ask for a jump and it would be a nice (but maybe a but hardcore) way to emphasize the upcoming beat. Let's try this, but i also ctrl-g (8 & 9) because i disline the new flow.

02:17:689 (3,6) - I get you want to make a symmetrical pattern, but this overlap just does not fit D:
I've changed the circle positions and made a square

02:35:689 (2,3,4,5,6) - There is goes again, on a totally different place compared to the last one. Let's check with your next lines because you're talking about it after.

02:39:381 (2) - Why not use 1/4 sliders again, rather than this huge slider? Maybe because i was worried about the spamming of the 1/4 in the past, but i think than now how the hard maps are nowadays, i can changed, i also know that you're not the only one to point this on the time.

02:43:304 (3,5) - Touchy touchy. oh you

02:46:766 (2,3,4,5,6) - Ok, you want to add these streams, just make sure you do it on the exact same place on the first half of the song for the sake of consistency. Hmmm i think i'll do a consistency for the last kiai but not the first one, let's try this as a "final boss".

03:21:843 (3,4) - It does not make sense to stop the cursor's movement when you've kept the cursor going for every other instance. Yes, let's change it.
03:30:151 (6,7) - Same.
03:31:997 (4,5) - Same These two ones, i prefer keeping them, it's kinda my special patterns from paladin (YES PALADIIINNN) as an ending signature, don't touch it D:< .

Insane:

00:11:689 (3,6) - Try to avoid that overlap. Well keep noticing but with the AR and blablabla, that not really noticable while playing imo.

00:14:689 (5,1) - For transiting into a new section + Huge beat on the white tick, reducing the DS so much only makes it weird to play. Let's ctrl-g (1,2) :O

00:15:843 (5,6) - Forced flow from slider + Reduction of the cursor movement after huge jump due to low SV. Another weird thing. Ok let's change to 1.50 SV but moving the circles, this should be not too much right now.


00:17:227 (2) - I don't get why you lower spacing on prominent white ticks. The previous notes are for patterns, this slider is on another pattern, that may not make sense but i don't know how to change in good D:

00:18:612 (1,2,3) - Compare the spacing of (1,2) with (2,3). Don't you think (2,3) should be of lower spacing (or (1,2) of higher) since it does not support a prominent enough beat? Hmm i decided to get a constant spacing so moved 1 and 2 and get something more interesting, let's try that.

00:28:997 (5) - You started that on a red tick AND added a reverse, leaving the upcoming white tick (which contains a new sound) unplayable Yes, in fact that was for a mirror pattern, but let's change to something more rythmic like.

00:36:843 (5,1) - While this is ok, it's inconsistent. You have not represented such tense beats with no cursor movement what-so-ever before. Hmmm what is the point? The stacking? :O

00:43:997 (6) - This should be spaced more from the previous and less from the next... I've explained how you should deal with such prominent beats before.
Changed into a regular jump until new combo

00:54:727 - But you've left that sound unmapped before and after, why map it now? I don't know why. I don't think that's shocking at all. But changed.
01:02:112 - Same and so forth. Fixing.
01:02:458 (6,7,8,9,1) - Why do you space out the stream even more compared to the ones before, even if it does not contain strong enough sounds in comparison to the other ones? Yep, that was a mstake from me, i'm gonna correct all.

01:10:766 (1) - OUTA NOWHERE!!1 You've represented that sound pattern with streams so far, this slider in the middle of the whole thing is just random and extremely inconsistent. It's you the outa nowhere, fixed.

01:16:304 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same goes for this full stream. You have note made the player respond to the last 2 1/4 ticks in no way so far but you do so now :
Fixed

01:18:151 (3) - Another outa nowhere example. awawawa
01:19:997 (1) - Aaaand you could use a stream here as well. aaaaaaa
- Anyhow, this difficulty is clearly defined by rhythmical and kinetic inconsistency in an attempt to make it interesting. However in the long run, there are things that could be improved changed for the better readability of this map as a whole. I provided several examples of things that you can improve in the first half of the song and there are errors of the same nature on the second half, so look into those as well by following my instructions at your own accord.

aaaaaa i'll talke your examples and do my best aaaaaaaa

Pacha's Inner Oni:

02:06:251 - Green line is unsnapped! It is not even usefull xD

General:

- You need at least 1 difficulty being under 2 starts in order to get the set into a rankable state!

I've decided to ignore that poke from you, but since you're also blaming Natsu about our position on my map i'm gonna react too.

1 time taking fun on my situation is ok.
2 times is not funny anymore.

You got a conversation with Ono with your attitude but you're still continuing, is than an adult attitude?

The next who gonna react about it, i'll call a GM.

The end.

Exa wrote:

Natu's Easyl:

02:05:689 - Turn off kiai since it does not affect gameplay (++points). Unless it is for the looks. Up to the main mapper, I did copy his kiais

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60,56,133997,2,0,P|112:41|165:53,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,104,134920,6,0,P|305:116|357:101,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,56,135843,2,0,L|447:165,1,110,0|10,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
448,264,136766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,212,137227,2,0,P|256:172|168:216,1,220,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,296,138612,5,0,0:0:0:0:
64,212,139074,2,0,B|80:144|56:76|56:76|96:84|136:64,1,220,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,28,140458,2,0,L|348:28,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,87,141381,2,0,P|406:140|419:193,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,288,142304,6,0,B|368:288|368:288|308:328|240:292,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,216,143689,1,10,0:0:0:0:
116,136,144151,2,0,B|184:100|244:140|244:140|328:140,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,140,145535,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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428,140,147381,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,60,147843,2,0,L|262:60,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,148,149227,2,0,L|208:148,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,192,150151,6,0,P|104:240|124:300,2,110,8|0|10,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,148,151535,2,0,P|232:96|212:36,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,92,152458,2,0,L|22:92,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,153381,12,4,155227,0:0:0:0:
256,192,157074,6,0,L|256:316,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,92,158458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,36,158920,2,0,P|389:24|442:36,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,92,160304,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,164,160766,6,0,B|96:216|16:160|16:160|16:320,1,330,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,372,162612,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,328,163074,2,0,P|281:292|380:332,1,220,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,368,164458,6,0,L|472:136,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,48,165843,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,100,166304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,160,166766,2,0,P|256:176|200:156,2,110,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,168151,6,0,P|204:59|152:75,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,148,169074,2,0,L|84:268,1,110,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,356,169997,1,4,0:0:0:0:
168,304,170458,2,0,P|264:272|376:308,1,220,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,268,171843,6,0,L|463:151,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,368,173227,1,8,0:0:0:0:
373,306,173689,2,0,P|271:271|168:304,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,368,175074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,268,175535,6,0,B|84:176|84:176|148:196|205:154,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,68,176920,1,8,0:0:0:0:
306,154,177381,2,0,B|364:196|428:176|428:176|428:268,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,368,178766,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,308,179227,5,0,0:0:0:0:
255,352,179689,2,0,P|151:372|68:305,1,220,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,208,181074,2,0,L|40:96,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,240,182458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,172,182920,5,0,0:0:0:0:
280,248,183381,2,0,L|292:360,2,110,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,172,184766,2,0,P|164:156|111:170,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,252,185689,2,0,P|107:267|160:253,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,172,186612,6,0,L|236:64,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,64,187535,2,0,L|356:172,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,268,188458,2,0,B|312:252|268:284|268:284|216:168,1,220,0|0,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
148,116,189843,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,208,190304,6,0,P|56:224|0:200,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,136,191689,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,88,192151,2,0,P|316:72|372:96,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,304,194458,5,8,0:0:0:0:
335,246,194920,2,0,P|388:231|441:246,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,332,195843,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,360,196304,2,0,B|200:360|200:360|144:328|168:248,1,220,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,164,197689,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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468,188,199074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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300,368,200458,2,0,L|184:368,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,368,201381,6,0,P|80:314|94:262,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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112,40,203227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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180,112,210151,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,212458,12,4,214304,0:0:0:0:

1. 00:00:151 - I guess the SV is fine, but just wanted to mention that from a personal standpoint, I would probably rather go for less notes instead of changing the SV.
2. 00:07:535 (29) - Mh, think the finisher is really necessary? I mean, there is no real sound for it and it rather stands alone. Reference is probably to the first upcoming and previous finisher, but there, the sound was more reasonable for their use.
3. 00:18:612 (77) - Would have prefered a D instead, since that bass is really deep.
4. 00:20:458 - Could be done, but from a personal standpoint I think a slider would be better here. I assume you use that SV change due to the high pitched streched sound in the background, but I do not believe that SV change fits that well here, especially since it isn't a sound you make it pretend to be. Kinda subjective, huh? Well, I prefer the safer side as well. But it would at least to what I mentioned at 02:01:997 - .
5. 00:11:227 (44) - I'm very sure that it would be better to have this as don as you have a supporting sound for this and a don at 00:07:535 (29) - as well.
6. 00:29:112 (137) - Maybe delete this note. It felt unnatural due to an artificially extended don beat for the sound at 00:29:227 - . (Is it even understandable what I mean? lol)
7. 00:36:612 - Recommending not using a SV change for a single note like that one. It still belongs to the stanza of 00:35:227 - , hence, should use the same SV as well as it belongs to that pattern pack. But beside that...
8. 00:37:074 - ... I'm not really found of that idea with the SV, especially after looking at this 00:49:766 . I see the idea behind it. You want to emphasize it more due to the higher impact in the song. But you could have instead use the standard SV and have less patterns starting from 00:22:766 -. It would have the same (if not higher) effect and would avoid having that questionable SV change at 00:49:766 . If you would do that, your first kiai would be also much more emphasized, as it would be the only part with a higher SV! Give it a try. I think it really is worth it.
9. 01:21:381 - I'm in the strong believe, having less notes in this section would give the section at 01:36:151 an higher impact! Refer to point 00:37:074 -
10. 01:36:151 - I'm in the strong believe, having less notes in this section would give the section at 01:50:920 an higher impact! Refer to point 00:37:074 -
11. 01:47:227 (541) - don might be a better choose due to the sound in the background, even though you have at 01:39:843 (509) - a kat.
12. 02:01:997 - Ah, I find it quite sad that you didn't continued with that finisher pattern. Maybe you wanna reconsider your choice here, as for example only finishers would draw a lot of attention to them already, which would lead to a great emphasize. Additional to this, you could have (as I mentioned before) a big slider at 02:03:843 for that stretched high sound. Would fit as well; avoid possible questionable Sv change; fit to previous finisher usage.
    
    - I will skip the rest as it would be rather the same -
    
13. 03:04:766 - Recommending, having a normal SV here because if we are honest, the pace of the song between 03:04:766 and 03:19:535 doesn't change at all and hence, gives a distorted feeling when playing it.

1. 00:25:535 (55) - Consider having a K here. Calls for it if you ask me.
2. 00:32:920 - ^ (and for all other similar sounds)
3. 00:36:151 - To be honest, I'm a bit unsure about some of the breaks. At the beginning I think it's fine, but maybe consider here having a note at places like 00:36:035 - because, it feels like a note is missing here due to the still ongoing beat.
4. 01:55:420 - Ah, you should really have another note here. It stops too abrupt.
5. 02:08:920 (386) - What I said previously (same for upcoming one).
6. 02:37:535 (483,484,485,486) - I noticed it before already, but I'm sure you should find a better solution for this. The pattern would be normaly kkkk, but you splited it up to a more lineal way, which sounds kinda weird due to the natural odd way the song goes at such parts.
7. 02:43:074 (507,508,509,510) - Though, these things work.

1. 00:25:535 (21) - Same like in Oni: Consider having a K here. Calls for it if you ask me. (same for all other patterns)
2. 00:25:535 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - Here it becomes very monotonically out of the sudden. Having some changed wouldn't hurt.
3. 03:34:304 (376) - D?

Aldwych wrote:

Guys i will die
Because i know what is the next post
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

OnosakiHito wrote:

Ah, a little fuzz here. I talked with both parties and we settled it somehow. Sorry for the inconvenience guys, but should be fine by now. And I think after all the talk, it's time to look for the Taiko itself, right?

[ Pacha's Inner Oni]

Actually the Oni is quite nice. Many patterns reflect their own beat which do fit well. But it might be not bad to think one more time about the calm parts, since they seem to be a little too dense. And additionaly to this, I think the SVs must be refined as they do not reflect the pace of the song really well. Yeah of course, I might be wrong. But comparing patterns like 02:03:843 or 03:04:766 with the song, I think it is easy to distiguise that those SV acceleration and deccelartion do not really fit well here, since the pace of the song works in a different way. I will come to it later.

1. 00:00:151 - I guess the SV is fine, but just wanted to mention that from a personal standpoint, I would probably rather go for less notes instead of changing the SV. Ok but not too much, i'm afraid of creating conflicts with Oni. I stop deleting until 00:14:920 because the "hype" starts here and the patterns are fine enough.
   
2. 00:07:535 (29) - Mh, think the finisher is really necessary? I mean, there is no real sound for it and it rather stands alone. Reference is probably to the first upcoming and previous finisher, but there, the sound was more reasonable for their use. Fixed, no real reason as you said, it's not so intense.
   
3. 00:18:612 (77) - Would have prefered a D instead, since that bass is really deep. Ok, but i have to change into D k k instead in order to make a contrast with D.
   
4. 00:20:458 - Could be done, but from a personal standpoint I think a slider would be better here. I assume you use that SV change due to the high pitched streched sound in the background, but I do not believe that SV change fits that well here, especially since it isn't a sound you make it pretend to be. Kinda subjective, huh? Well, I prefer the safer side as well. But it would at least to what I mentioned at 02:01:997 - . I'm ok for a slider the stream part is not clear in terms of music.
   
   
5. 00:11:227 (44) - I'm very sure that it would be better to have this as don as you have a supporting sound for this and a don at 00:07:535 (29) - as well. Totally agree. Why you go backward xD
   
6. 00:29:112 (137) - Maybe delete this note. It felt unnatural due to an artificially extended don beat for the sound at 00:29:227 - . (Is it even understandable what I mean? lol) Yep, deleted. The triple is more noticable by this way.
   
7. 00:36:612 - Recommending not using a SV change for a single note like that one. It still belongs to the stanza of 00:35:227 - , hence, should use the same SV as well as it belongs to that pattern pack. But beside that... Deleted SV change, the next acceleration part is ok for me and interesting to see.
   
8. 00:37:074 - ... I'm not really found of that idea with the SV, especially after looking at this 00:49:766 . I see the idea behind it. You want to emphasize it more due to the higher impact in the song. But you could have instead use the standard SV and have less patterns starting from 00:22:766 -. It would have the same (if not higher) effect and would avoid having that questionable SV change at 00:49:766 . If you would do that, your first kiai would be also much more emphasized, as it would be the only part with a higher SV! Give it a try. I think it really is worth it. Well ewww... ok, deleted SV change and cleaned the first part of large pattern. T_T Also readjuste next SV change and make it smoother
   
   
9. 01:21:381 - I'm in the strong believe, having less notes in this section would give the section at 01:36:151 an higher impact! Refer to point 00:37:074 -
   Ok cleaned that part
   
10. 01:36:151 - I'm in the strong believe, having less notes in this section would give the section at 01:50:920 an higher impact! Refer to point 00:37:074 -
    
    You're giving me cancer D:
    Deleted only the triplles since it's enough cleaned compared to teh next section
    
    
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11. 01:50:36:151 : I'm still in the strong believe, have less notes in the section would give a moda faka hype at 01:58:304 Owell nope ¦:^( /run ) GTFO M8
    
12. 01:47:227 (541) - don might be a better choose due to the sound in the background, even though you have at 01:39:843 (509) - a kat. Fixed
    
    
13. 02:01:997 - Ah, I find it quite sad that you didn't continued with that finisher pattern. Maybe you wanna reconsider your choice here, as for example only finishers would draw a lot of attention to them already, which would lead to a great emphasize. Fixed for the 2 finishers, they are now here.
    
    Additional to this, you could have (as I mentioned before) a big slider at 02:03:843 for that stretched high sound. Would fit as well; avoid possible questionable Sv change; fit to previous finisher usage. I'll keep the stream since the music is more intense as the first part, so it's legit. About the SV i prefer make some gaps previously to show intensity of the music rather than on the stream (WE'RE NOT AT BONEFIR GUYS PWAPWAPWAPWOPWAPWAPWO)
    
    - I will skip the rest as it would be rather the same - Ok i'll try to do the changes further aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
    
    
14. 03:04:766 - Recommending, having a normal SV here because if we are honest, the pace of the song between 03:04:766 and 03:19:535 doesn't change at all and hence, gives a distorted feeling when playing it.
    Fixed

Well, as I said: Nice difficulty. But after checking it in a more deep way, I came to the conclusion that you should reconsider the density in some parts. I'm pretty sure if certain parts would have less notes, you would be able to emphasize upcoming parts even without changing the SV and having at the end probably a higher impact as well. I think once that has been considered (and hopefully changed, but not forced to do) there shouldn't be any problem. Good job so far.


[ Yametekudasai Oni-chan]

1. 00:25:535 (55) - Consider having a K here. Calls for it if you ask me. That feel so... weird D:, keep noticing but... no aaaa D:
   
2. 00:32:920 - ^ (and for all other similar sounds)
   
3. 00:36:151 - To be honest, I'm a bit unsure about some of the breaks. At the beginning I think it's fine, but maybe consider here having a note at places like 00:36:035 - because, it feels like a note is missing here due to the still ongoing beat. Remmapped this section, because it was a muzukashii, we needed some breaks, but i had to do a big hole sice a little break won't make sense at all.
   
4. 01:55:420 - Ah, you should really have another note here. It stops too abrupt. Fixed (only for this one, the others are fine since it has less intensity)
   
   
5. 02:08:920 (386) - What I said previously (same for upcoming one). Same thing
6. 02:37:535 (483,484,485,486) - I noticed it before already, but I'm sure you should find a better solution for this. The pattern would be normaly kkkk, but you splited it up to a more lineal way, which sounds kinda weird due to the natural odd way the song goes at such parts. Yes because at first sight it was a muzuuz, so it was the best way to do, now since it's an Oni we can go for this. But i've done this only for this kind of pattern, the others should not go on the same way. Let's try this.
   
7. 02:43:074 (507,508,509,510) - Though, these things work.

Some refining here and there and it should be fine. Reminds me a bit of a Muzukashii to be honest. lol Well D:
The patterns 03:08:458 (610,611,612) - really got me. Nice constellation. Wew i got you, oGod

[ Muzukashii]

Well, Muzu could have 1/4 in kiai if you ask me, so the difference is more noticeable. lol aaaaaaaa

1. 00:25:535 (21) - Same like in Oni: Consider having a K here. Calls for it if you ask me. (same for all other patterns) imo same as Oni
2. 00:25:535 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29) - Here it becomes very monotonically out of the sudden. Having some changed wouldn't hurt. Added some notes
3. 03:34:304 (376) - D?

Done


That's actually all. About Inner I would just suggest to lean towards what Oni mapper did, since in the Oni the density becomes higher at a higher pace, which is nice. Good luck for now. I'll try to give more notes on muzukashii's kiai, imo the density is enough good for the rest

Aldwych wrote:

Guys i will die
Because i know what is the next post
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Spoiling all the fun lol

Thug life

Aldwych wrote:

Updated Normal

Endaris wrote:

Here we go then, Tuesday-Queue~

Normal

I also took a quick glance at the hard to ensure that I'm not suggesting stuff that doesn't make sense in relation to the other two difficulties around this one~

1. 00:05:227 (2) - I would cut this slider in two singles and remove 00:05:920 (3) - . Background is that the song starts out with low intensity and builds up step by step which is probably why you already skipped a repeat at 00:05:458 - as intensity is still low here. With the 1/2 break in the middle this feels less dense and less intensive.

I should have done this no matter what the argues, sliders end on big white tick is not a good idea too aaaaaaaa, plus it's consistent with one of teh next pattern too

1. Also consider giving 00:06:151 (4) - one more repeat

This one, i disagree, it could be legit but have 3/4 void should be avoided (pun intended) on normal diff, better having 3/2 instead.

1. 00:08:920 (3) - I would redesign this, again with growing intensity in my mind as
   
   The first consecutive pattern(1+2+3) is already more dense than anything you got before while the 2 1/2 singles are a novelty for this diff, transferring the feeling of growing intensity as well.
   Fixed, but in a way that it is consistent with the previous combos (meaning that 2 little sliders instead).

Looking at the overall progress, if you apply the suggestions above your maximum pattern length in 1/2 for your first 5 combos would be 1,2,3,4,5 gameplayelements which looks pretty awesome to me.

1. 00:20:458 (4) - Whistle seems a bit weak here, I'd rather go with a finish, I think it's also safe to move the spinner on the blue tick as you designed 4+spinner as one gameplayelement as far as I can see.
   Prefer keeping finishers for beats (added hs by the way). Whistle is ok imo.

Regarding the following part until the Kiai I think you are quite inconsistent. The song itself is very repetitive and while I appreciate your urge to variate the patterns you use to represent the repeating patterns of the song I think it is better to stick to one pattern at a time.
Idk, I'll just count the patterns of the melody for you, they repeat every four measures and the first two measure of each complete pattern are identical.
I will use the following encryption: numbers from 1 to 4 for the beats of the respective measure the measure starts with a downbeat(big white tick) and ends with the next downbeat, + for red ticks used by the melody and b for blue ticks used by the melody(I will make a space if any of + or b is unused)
The first pattern starts at 00:22:304 - and there's always a note on the beats(1234).

1 + 2  b3 + 4 + 1 + 2  b3 + 4   1 + 2  b3 + 4 + 1 + 2  b3 + 4 + 

As you can see that's basically just

1 + 2  b3 + 4 +

with the only variation being the fourth red tick being left out in the second measure (for example 00:25:766 - ) and the melody going up on the fourth beat of every third measure.
And this whole pattern is repeated a whopping FOUR times, with the singular patterns starting at 00:22:304 - 00:29:689 - 00:37:074 - 00:44:458 - with the only difference being that some more instrumentalisation is added from the third repitition onwards.
tl;dr this part of the song is totally repetitive by design and your mapdesign should follow this. It doesn't right now.

I would recommend you to think of four different map-patterns that represent the rhythmic figure described above. Use one of the patterns consistently within one repitition. On the following one use a different mapping interpretation of the pattern and be consistent with that. Try to arrange the map-patterns you thought of in a sensible sequence - as the later two are more intense compared to the earlier ones due to instrumentalisation use the map-patterns that are more dense on these(or have more active clicks via circles over sliders).

^Something like that. That way every repitition makes sense in itself but as you use a new map pattern to represent the sound on every repitition it still doesn't get boring. Instead the playability is increased through consistency within a pattern and better readability as a result. It also makes for really nice symmetric arrangements.

You can use the same concept in the Kiai-Time and literally every other part of the song due to how heavily repititionbased it is(just with a different rhythm of course).
The majority of what is mapped in this difficulty sounds good in the moment itself but due to the song design I think you really have to look at the greater context everything stands in to make this a normal-diff of high quality. Right now everything looks a bit random and it doesn't play as smooth as it could.
Ok i'll try that, but it will take me some times.

Went a bit over my time limit to finish up on my explanation.
If you want to discuss something or get some further explanation from my side, please please message me.