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Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri] - Sendan Life

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Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
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Narcissu

-[Apple]- wrote:

From QQ!
Great song.
here's my mod
[General]
Title: OK!
Artist: OK!
Hitsound: OK!
Disabled countdown: OK!
Widescreen support: OK!

[NM]
00:33:159 (33159|3) - Single note? …… no , 2note downbeat
Overall,NM diff should be doesn't have big problem.But you need pay attention on jack and balance.
#Buticanthelpyouonbalanceandjackyouknowhahaha
[HD]
00:19:811 (19811|1) - Diffierent sound change to 2? …… ok
00:21:000 (21000|0,21066|1,21133|2) - Are you following the piano?If yes just rearrange to 1/8.if not here is still okay.……don't mind 233
00:23:908 (23908|3) - Double note? Because here is same sound on 00:24:436. …… e , skip some beat …… all 2 note a bit hard
00:26:551 (26551|0) - ^
00:28:005 (28005|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4538242 That better than use chain of jacks.…… ok
00:40:296 (40296|0,40560|0,41353|0,41749|0) - Balance dude.……no , for the voice
00:58:798 (58798|3,58798|2,59062|2,59062|3,59326|2,59326|3) - Actually i don't know what are you following for.…… changed

That's all
Good luck!

moonlightleaf wrote:

[Normal]

来个别样mod …… 不要短折返啦
SPOILER
[Extra]

00:19:943 (3,4) - ctrl+g …… 和正常的不一樣會有感覺一點

00:23:776 (2,3) - ^……↑↑↑

00:27:212 (2) - ^……↑↑↑

00:28:798 (1) - ^……↑↑↑

00:35:009 (4) - ^……↑↑↑

00:31:044 (1,2) - 试试1ctrl+g 然后2叠在00:31:970 (1) -

00:36:066 (3,1) - try …
SPOILER

我是想這樣的重複平行↓↓↓
SPOILER

00:57:212 (5) - 下移? (386,304)?……好

00:59:326 (6) - ctrl+g? 后面的1好接一些……滑條沒難度的

01:18:093 (3,4,5,6) - 这2对换一下位置……好

切歌不好!…… 我做不了full 啊Orz
use chinese mod little's diff plz
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little

moonlightleaf wrote:

[Hard]

00:09:370 (3,4) - 叠 ,stack

00:11:484 (2,3) - ^

00:32:630 (3,4,5) - 这仨换个折返? change to a reverse

00:34:613 (3,4,5) - 试试删3 , 4放2上 再移下5调DS delete 3 , 4put on 2 then move 5 to make the same DS

00:41:749 (2) - 有点那啥, change to a reverse from 00:41:617 to 00:41:881 Changed this.

00:43:071 有音,后面 补note? end , then 00:43:203 add note ? Changed.

00:44:128 ^ Changed.

00:49:282 (2,3) - 也换滑条吧 slider too ?
The other ones are also valid points, but I want to keep the current because those changes will make the diff too easy, relative to Insane diff. Will be large difficulty gap between Hard and Insane if I change those.
Thanks.
http://puu.sh/n9yFe/f733fa8afc.zip
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

IamKwaN wrote:

Subject: KwaN's Metadata Checking Queue ヽ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ

Narcissu wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/411894

thx xd
你好!

Unicode Artist 應該是 リモ Prototype[CV：花守ゆみり], 那 Romanised Artist 就是 Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri]. 其他沒問題! Good luck~

根據:
http://puu.sh/na5V5/37c7621577.jpg from http://garakowa.jp/ticket/
@little : sorry . update plz ::>_<::
Dellvangel
1,269 posts
Joined November 2014
Dellvangel
Oh, Osu!mania diff? really? lemme mod it for you >w<

1|2|3|4
[EZ]
00:12:807 - change to LN? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550443
00:20:207 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550454 better flow imo.
00:22:851 - i know your intention here, but it just not balance imo, may be https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550460 for balance and better flow too imo.
00:24:701 (24701|2) - move to col 4 for balance.
00:25:758 (25758|2) - ^ emphasis the piano sound too.
00:26:815 (26815|2) -
00:26:419 (26419|0,26551|1,27080|0,27212|1) - it's better to avoid same pattern because somehow it feels boring to play, may be https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550477 .
00:37:520 (37520|2) - move to 2, for balance, also the sound is different with 00:37:256 (37256|2) - .
00:46:771 (46771|1) - move to 1 for balance.
00:51:397 (51397|2) - ^
00:53:247 (53247|2,53511|2,53776|2,54040|2) - something like 3|2|3|2 is better imo.
01:07:124 (67124|2) - move to 1? for balance.
01:07:784 (67784|1) - move to 4? the sound is different with 01:07:520 (67520|1) - .
01:19:414 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550491 better flow and more balance.

[NM]
00:13:203 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550503 more balance and better flow.
00:14:657 (14657|3,14789|3) - move to col 1, then 00:14:921 (14921|1,15053|1) - to col 4.
00:27:080 (27080|2,27212|3) - ctrl+h is better imo.
00:44:525 (44525|1) - move to col 3, for balance, because the col 3 is too empty at this part.
00:48:357 (48357|2) - move to col 4, easier for play.
00:50:472 (50472|0) - ^
00:54:436 (54436|2,54569|0) - move to right side 1x easier for play and better flow.
01:03:820 (63820|3) - move to col 2, better flow and more comfortable for play.
01:09:899 (69899|0,70031|1) - move to right side 1x.

[HD]
00:24:701 (24701|1) - move to col 4, emphasis the piano sound and more comfortable for play.
00:41:353 (41353|0,41749|0) - ... etc, i know the kick sound still same, but it's better if you variate the col (mostly osumania chart always like that).
00:48:225 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550534 .
00:48:886 (48886|3,49282|3) - it's better to avoid a pattern like this may be try like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550537 .
00:50:472 (50472|1) - move to col 1, ^

overall, the pitch relevancy is good, all you need is learn about balance, and the pattern that comfortable for play if you want to map a o!m mapset.

actually i already map this song just fur fun, may be around 3 weeks ago, i can give you mine for the MX diff if you want https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550552 .

good luck! >w<b
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Dellvangel wrote:

Oh, Osu!mania diff? really? lemme mod it for you >w<

1|2|3|4
[EZ]
00:12:807 - change to LN? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550443
00:20:207 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550454 better flow imo.
00:22:851 - i know your intention here, but it just not balance imo, may be https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550460 for balance and better flow too imo.
00:24:701 (24701|2) - move to col 4 for balance.
00:25:758 (25758|2) - ^ emphasis the piano sound too. …… the part slow than other part , so i give up 2 note ;w;
00:26:815 (26815|2) -
00:26:419 (26419|0,26551|1,27080|0,27212|1) - it's better to avoid same pattern because somehow it feels boring to play, may be https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550477 .
00:37:520 (37520|2) - move to 2, for balance, also the sound is different with 00:37:256 (37256|2) - .
00:46:771 (46771|1) - move to 1 for balance.
00:51:397 (51397|2) - ^
00:53:247 (53247|2,53511|2,53776|2,54040|2) - something like 3|2|3|2 is better imo. ……for i add 3 extra clap , i think 333 fine
01:07:124 (67124|2) - move to 1? for balance.
01:07:784 (67784|1) - move to 4? the sound is different with 01:07:520 (67520|1) - .
01:19:414 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550491 better flow and more balance.

[NM]
00:13:203 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550503 more balance and better flow.
00:14:657 (14657|3,14789|3) - move to col 1, then 00:14:921 (14921|1,15053|1) - to col 4.
00:27:080 (27080|2,27212|3) - ctrl+h is better imo.
00:44:525 (44525|1) - move to col 3, for balance, because the col 3 is too empty at this part.
00:48:357 (48357|2) - move to col 4, easier for play. …… ln - note easy play for me Orz , maybe other not same as me ?
00:50:472 (50472|0) - ^
00:54:436 (54436|2,54569|0) - move to right side 1x easier for play and better flow.……↑↑↑
01:03:820 (63820|3) - move to col 2, better flow and more comfortable for play. …… same as 01:03:555 (63555|2,63555|3) - look like more feeling
01:09:899 (69899|0,70031|1) - move to right side 1x.

[HD]
00:24:701 (24701|1) - move to col 4, emphasis the piano sound and more comfortable for play.
00:41:353 (41353|0,41749|0) - ... etc, i know the kick sound still same, but it's better if you variate the col (mostly osumania chart always like that). …… i still want to all 1 Orz , my map is std chart and rating #1 xd
00:48:225 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550534 . …… same as NM
00:48:886 (48886|3,49282|3) - it's better to avoid a pattern like this may be try like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550537 . …… ↑↑↑
00:50:472 (50472|1) - move to col 1, ^

overall, the pitch relevancy is good, all you need is learn about balance, and the pattern that comfortable for play if you want to map a o!m mapset. …… ye i don't know everything about mania now , but i still want believe myself according my std experience , make different and have fun ! i will try find some mod and BN for mania , if its not enough to rank , i will delete it ……

actually i already map this song just fur fun, may be around 3 weeks ago, i can give you mine for the MX diff if you want https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550552 .

i think the song need a diff about 4 star , but i can't play mania > 3star , could you give me your diff ? if you don't mind maybe i will delete mania set XD

good luck! >w<b
no reply = fix :)
Dellvangel
1,269 posts
Joined November 2014
Dellvangel

Narcissu wrote:

ye i don't know everything about mania now , but i still want believe myself according my std experience , make different and have fun ! i will try find some mod and BN for mania , if its not enough to rank , i will delete it ……
It's really hard to find mania BNs that want to check a map, really ..

Narcissu wrote:

i think the song need a diff about 4 star , but i can't play mania > 3star , could you give me your diff ? if you don't mind maybe i will delete mania set XD
No problem, since actually i also make mine for fun only too xD

http://puu.sh/nbi5l/3cb506c5e9.rar here is mine, hope you like it :)
Taeyang
Elite Mapper
1,209 posts
Joined June 2013
Taeyang
M4M~

  • General
  1. All diff check out 'widescreen support'
  2. Add 'dell' in tag


  • Easy
  1. 00:08:842 - ~00:13:071 - i think need mapping, because another diff mapped here
  2. 00:42:674 (1,2,3) - i feel there rhythms a little hard ,just like this?
    SPOILER


  • Normal
  1. 00:28:666 - add clap sound
  2. 00:37:652 (2) - ^
  3. 00:52:718 (2) - add whistle sound?


  • Little's Hard
  1. 00:08:842 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - try this NC
    SPOILER
  2. 00:32:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think here rhythm a little weird
    SPOILER
  3. 00:45:846 (3,4,1) - use same DS


  • Little's Insane
  1. 00:30:912 (5) - just stack on 4circle fell better
  2. 00:32:895 (5,6) - ^
  3. 00:38:445 (1) - downbeat is here 00:38:181 (6) - remove NC and 00:38:445 (1) - NC here
  4. 00:38:247 - 00:38:379 - add circle? 00:21:000 (4,5,6) - you catched background sound
  5. 01:00:648 - ~01:03:027 - why need slider velocity?


  • Extra
  1. 00:12:807 (6,1) - suggest; how do you think trill? like this
    SPOILER
  2. 00:14:128 (1,4,6) - move x:67 y:100 flow better
  3. 01:16:110 (4,5) - ctrl+g; i'm not sure antijumps

cool~!
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Taeyang wrote:

M4M~

  • General
  1. All diff check out 'widescreen support'
  2. Add 'dell' in tag


  • Easy
  1. 00:08:842 - ~00:13:071 - i think need mapping, because another diff mapped here …… ok
  2. 00:42:674 (1,2,3) - i feel there rhythms a little hard ,just like this? …… ok
    SPOILER


  • Normal
  1. 00:28:666 - add clap sound …… fix
  2. 00:37:652 (2) - ^ …… no clap here 233
  3. 00:52:718 (2) - add whistle sound? …… ok

  • Extra
  1. 00:12:807 (6,1) - suggest; how do you think trill? like this …… no , i dislike reverse slider …… even if it's follow sound better , i follow music
    SPOILER
  2. 00:14:128 (1,4,6) - move x:67 y:100 flow better …… good job , ok ;w;
  3. 01:16:110 (4,5) - ctrl+g; i'm not sure antijumps …… i want to map more easy and different xd , random antijump amzing

i play it about 10~2 miss Orz ↓↓

cool~!
thx xd
Last edited by Narcissu , edited 1 time in total.
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little

Taeyang wrote:

  • Little's Hard
  1. 00:08:842 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - try this NC That's too much.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:32:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think here rhythm a little weird Changed it back to 1/1 singles.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:45:846 (3,4,1) - use same DS No.


  • Little's Insane
  1. 00:30:912 (5) - just stack on 4circle fell better No, I prefer to keep moving.
  2. 00:32:895 (5,6) - ^
  3. 00:38:445 (1) - downbeat is here 00:38:181 (6) - remove NC and 00:38:445 (1) - NC here NC for readability.
  4. 00:38:247 - 00:38:379 - add circle? 00:21:000 (4,5,6) - you catched background sound Slowdown for leading into the halftime section.
  5. 01:00:648 - ~01:03:027 - why need slider velocity? I think it goes better with the vocals that way.
Thanks.
http://puu.sh/nd9IZ/f5db03dbd4.zip
hokin1995
495 posts
Joined August 2008
hokin1995
路過 :D
看到有新的mania 麻婆支持一下
加油
Kagetsu
796 posts
Joined March 2015
Kagetsu
hey! from queue

[Extra]
  1. spacing on this 00:08:842 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - pattern is way different with 00:10:956 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ... this is weird because music is exactly the same, there isn't a change here, so maybe you could try to make them both consistent?
  2. 00:12:807 (6,7,8) - i feel like this triplet doesn't fit really well in this part... maybe try something like a slow slider?
  3. 00:15:185 (1) - nazi.... move this slightly down same distance with the previous objects
  4. 00:17:036 (5,6) - these stacks felt weird to me , i can understand 00:16:771 (3,4) - those two because they're the same note in music, but 00:17:036 (5,6) - doesn't really have an explanation to me... maybe space them normally?
  5. 00:20:075 (4,5) - decreasing spacing here didn't feel nice... i think there's no reason to do that, you could even make a triangle with those
  6. 00:23:644 (1,2,3,4) - i can understand the reason of decreasing spacing here... but i think you should make clear about those, current pattern looks messy... maybe try something like you did 00:28:137 (2,3,4,5) - here? this might work
    SPOILER
  7. 00:24:172 (5) - uhmm... i didn't really like this slider, because i think this beat 00:24:436 - should be clickable
  8. 00:24:635 (7) - i think this note is needless, there isn't really a sound to map
  9. 00:32:366 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this kinda breaks the patterns you were using before (i mean decreasing spacing in those parts)... isn't bad tho
  10. 00:37:917 (2,3,4,5) - those 1/4 don't really fit the piano, you could try a 1/6 kickslider fits better imo
    SPOILER
  11. 01:15:978 (3,4,5,6) - spacing in this pattern looks out of place in comparison with the previous
  12. 01:18:357 (5,6) - same as first stack, you could move 6 to have better flow with 01:18:622 (1) -
    SPOILER
nice map (: good luck!
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

hokin1995 wrote:

路過 :D
看到有新的mania 麻婆支持一下
加油
thx xd

Kagetsu wrote:

hey! from queue

[Extra]
  1. spacing on this 00:08:842 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - pattern is way different with 00:10:956 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ... this is weird because music is exactly the same, there isn't a change here, so maybe you could try to make them both consistent? …… random have fun , same spacing a bit boring for Extra diff
  2. 00:12:807 (6,7,8) - i feel like this triplet doesn't fit really well in this part... maybe try something like a slow slider? …… no …… i think note follow paino better ……
  3. 00:15:185 (1) - nazi.... move this slightly down same distance with the previous objects …… don't mind it xd , all same spacing not my wish
  4. 00:17:036 (5,6) - these stacks felt weird to me , i can understand 00:16:771 (3,4) - those two because they're the same note in music, but 00:17:036 (5,6) - doesn't really have an explanation to me... maybe space them normally? ……
  5. 00:20:075 (4,5) - decreasing spacing here didn't feel nice... i think there's no reason to do that, you could even make a triangle with those
  6. 00:23:644 (1,2,3,4) - i can understand the reason of decreasing spacing here... but i think you should make clear about those, current pattern looks messy... maybe try something like you did 00:28:137 (2,3,4,5) - here? this might work …… all same not my wish ……
    SPOILER
  7. 00:24:172 (5) - uhmm... i didn't really like this slider, because i think this beat 00:24:436 - should be clickable …… i follow voice …… so 00:24:172 (5) - is a group of …… and overmap for downbeat i think ok ↓↓↓ all 1/2 a bit boring , the song sound like bohemian ??
  8. 00:24:635 (7) - i think this note is needless, there isn't really a sound to map ……
  9. 00:32:366 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this kinda breaks the patterns you were using before (i mean decreasing spacing in those parts)... isn't bad tho …… as above , like 00:49:282 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:47:168 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - but not same ……
  10. 00:37:917 (2,3,4,5) - those 1/4 don't really fit the piano, you could try a 1/6 kickslider fits better imo …… even if paino is 1/6 …… i think 1/4 note better than 1/6 slider for play
    SPOILER
  11. 01:15:978 (3,4,5,6) - spacing in this pattern looks out of place in comparison with the previous ……
  12. 01:18:357 (5,6) - same as first stack, you could move 6 to have better flow with 01:18:622 (1) -
    SPOILER
nice map (: good luck!
MEGAtive
1,656 posts
Joined August 2013
MEGAtive

Remo Prototype [CV: Hanamori Yumiri] - Sendan Life



Column
|1|2|3|4|

Some mania terminology used here
Single, Double, Triple, Quad: The number of notes in one line.
LN (Long Note): Slider

[General]
Hitsounds: Hitsounded
Metadata: Looks good
Graphic: 1366x768
Timing: No problem here
Audio: 192kbps

[HD]
Mods
  1. 00:10:956 - Should be a double here. Slider's end doesn't counted as a note.
  2. 00:12:674 - Should be a double like 00:12:410
  3. 00:12:873 (12873|2,12939|3) - I don't really recommend this. The glissando is playing in 1/12 snap. But either 1/12 or 1/6 aren't fit here. So make one of the notes at 00:12:807 as an LN. I prefer note in column |1| changed into LN.
  4. 00:13:071 - I prefer you to change the pattern here into something like http://puu.sh/nevoA/bcb4c60438.png so it doesn't break the flow of the patterns here.
  5. 00:15:450 (15450|3,15582|1) - Switch these notes columns. It flows better than before.
  6. 00:16:243 - You can change the pattern here into something like http://puu.sh/nevE4/4bbaaf25ae.png so it's nicer to play.
  7. 00:21:000 - Rather than following the Glissando here, I prefer you to follow the Guitar and the Drum with pattern like http://puu.sh/nexj5/12912335e3.png
  8. 00:21:529 until 00:37:256 - I think it's better for you to follow the guitars and additional notes from drum rather than following vocals. It's somewhat awkward in osu!mania to follow vocals.
  9. 00:46:771 - Quads are pretty awkward pattern in HD diffs, and MX are using Triple here. So delete one of the note.
  10. 00:57:080 (57080|1,57080|0) - Move two times to the right. It's better that way.
  11. 00:59:194 (59194|3,59194|2) - Move two times to the left. Same reason as before.

    Consistencies are mainly the issue here. Consistently following Drums, Guitars, or both are better.

Only one diff. Other diffs later. Good Luck
SnowNiNo_
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
2,106 posts
Joined April 2013
SnowNiNo_
From my queue

1pc test play
[Extra]
00:21:000 (3,4,5,6,7) - 何不擺整齊?
00:22:983 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 這裡擺得有點醜... 打HD的話這邊會變得很難讀
00:28:269 (3,4,5) - 00:28:269 (3,5) - CTRL +G 之後 00:28:401 (4,5) - CTRL +G 試試看, 00:28:137 (2,3,4,5) - 這邊DS突然變小顯得有點難打
00:39:238 (3) - 何不這樣擺, 也可跟 00:38:842 (2) - 尾做blanket, 原本的還會overlap.....
00:49:943 (7) - 移到368 104 避免overlap, 或可跟 00:49:282 (2) - 重疊
00:56:947 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - 副歌ds擺這麼小實在有點怪, 這邊不是歌曲的高潮部分媽? 試試看擺這樣
00:58:798 (2,3,4,5) - 我也覺得這邊ds可以大點, 畢竟這邊是歌聲從低到高
01:01:441 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 3連打不適合這邊, 也沒跟到音樂或vocal..., 看要不要試試看這樣
01:15:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同 00:22:983 (2,3,1,2,3,4) -
01:19:282 (4) - 貼著 01:19:547 (1) - ?
01:20:207 (3,4,5,6,7) - 同 00:21:000 (3,4,5,6,7) -

1pc test play
[Little's Insane]
00:19:943 (3,4,5) - why using straight jumps here? straight jumps is not easy to play
00:52:851 (3,4,5) - try this instead of straight jumps
01:02:630 (1) - stick with 01:01:970 (2) - ?
01:05:009 (2,3) - blanket
im wondering if you care about the overlap of your map, cause these overlaps are annoying me when im modding =w=, although the overlap problem doesnt really effect the player when they are playing
00:16:243 (1,3) - 00:19:414 (1,3) - 00:25:229 (3,1) - 00:26:287 (3,1) - 00:30:780 (4,3) - 00:31:970 (1,4) - 00:33:027 (6,3) - 00:35:273 (1,3) - 00:51:000 (1,3) - 00:58:401 (1,4) - 01:00:119 (3,3) - 01:06:859 (1,3) - 01:08:049 (1,3) - 01:14:392 (1,3) - 01:15:450 (1,3) - 01:17:564 (1,4) -

GL~ nice mapping tho XD
shoot a star ;)
Little
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Joined November 2012
Little

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

[Little's Insane]
00:19:943 (3,4,5) - why using straight jumps here? straight jumps is not easy to play It's not supposed to be easy. Straight jumps fit with the instrument melody there.
00:52:851 (3,4,5) - try this instead of straight jumps No, that's really awkward to play going from (4,) to (1). Antijump is nicer.
01:02:630 (1) - stick with 01:01:970 (2) - ? This is manual stack for readability.
01:05:009 (2,3) - blanket Sure.
im wondering if you care about the overlap of your map, cause these overlaps are annoying me when im modding =w=, although the overlap problem doesnt really effect the player when they are playing Overlaps are fine. I don't see why you should find them annoying.
00:16:243 (1,3) - 00:19:414 (1,3) - 00:25:229 (3,1) - 00:26:287 (3,1) - 00:30:780 (4,3) - 00:31:970 (1,4) - 00:33:027 (6,3) - 00:35:273 (1,3) - 00:51:000 (1,3) - 00:58:401 (1,4) - 01:00:119 (3,3) - 01:06:859 (1,3) - 01:08:049 (1,3) - 01:14:392 (1,3) - 01:15:450 (1,3) - 01:17:564 (1,4) -
Thanks.
http://puu.sh/nf9fO/739d96f88e.zip
Narcissu
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Topic Starter
Narcissu

MEGAtive wrote:

Remo Prototype [CV: Hanamori Yumiri] - Sendan Life



Column
|1|2|3|4|

Some mania terminology used here
Single, Double, Triple, Quad: The number of notes in one line.
LN (Long Note): Slider

[General]
Hitsounds: Hitsounded
Metadata: Looks good
Graphic: 1366x768
Timing: No problem here
Audio: 192kbps

[HD]
Mods
  1. 00:10:956 - Should be a double here. Slider's end doesn't counted as a note. …… ok
  2. 00:12:674 - Should be a double like 00:12:410…… ok
  3. 00:12:873 (12873|2,12939|3) - I don't really recommend this. The glissando is playing in 1/12 snap. But either 1/12 or 1/6 aren't fit here. So make one of the notes at 00:12:807 as an LN. I prefer note in column |1| changed into LN.……… ok
  4. 00:13:071 - I prefer you to change the pattern here into something like http://puu.sh/nevoA/bcb4c60438.png so it doesn't break the flow of the patterns here. …… i just add random note ,random have fun…… many part like this …… wait i find other opinion
  5. 00:15:450 (15450|3,15582|1) - Switch these notes columns. It flows better than before.
  6. 00:16:243 - You can change the pattern here into something like http://puu.sh/nevE4/4bbaaf25ae.png so it's nicer to play.
  7. 00:21:000 - Rather than following the Glissando here, I prefer you to follow the Guitar and the Drum with pattern like …… ok http://puu.sh/nexj5/12912335e3.png
  8. 00:21:529 until 00:37:256 - I think it's better for you to follow the guitars and additional notes from drum rather than following vocals. It's somewhat awkward in osu!mania to follow vocals. …… e , vocal obvious than drum so i follow it …… i think its ok
  9. 00:46:771 - Quads are pretty awkward pattern in HD diffs, and MX are using Triple here. So delete one of the note.…… ok
  10. 00:57:080 (57080|1,57080|0) - Move two times to the right. It's better that way.…… e …… i think it's follow voice better 【
  11. 00:59:194 (59194|3,59194|2) - Move two times to the left. Same reason as before.

    Consistencies are mainly the issue here. Consistently following Drums, Guitars, or both are better. …… STD is same lol , many people only follow drum / guitar / paino, but i want to follow music not any sound , if vocal obvious than drum , i prefer emphasize voice not drum …… i need more opinion about mania xd

Only one diff. Other diffs later. Good Luck

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

From my queue

1pc test play
[Extra]
00:21:000 (3,4,5,6,7) - 何不擺整齊? ……整齊顯得呆板……我想弄的隨性一點
00:22:983 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 這裡擺得有點醜... 打HD的話這邊會變得很難讀……大丈夫
00:28:269 (3,4,5) - 00:28:269 (3,5) - CTRL +G 之後 00:28:401 (4,5) - CTRL +G 試試看, 00:28:137 (2,3,4,5) - 這邊DS突然變小顯得有點難打……因為歌詞是“一呆一呆” …… 這樣和其他地方不同會明顯一點
00:39:238 (3) - 何不這樣擺, 也可跟 00:38:842 (2) - 尾做blanket, 原本的還會overlap.....這種overlap 就是我想要的……我想要避免到處都一樣的樣式
00:49:943 (7) - 移到368 104 避免overlap, 或可跟 00:49:282 (2) - 重疊
00:56:947 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - 副歌ds擺這麼小實在有點怪, 這邊不是歌曲的高潮部分媽? …… 試試看擺這樣……好
00:58:798 (2,3,4,5) - 我也覺得這邊ds可以大點, 畢竟這邊是歌聲從低到高……好
01:01:441 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 3連打不適合這邊, 也沒跟到音樂或vocal..., 看要不要試試看這樣 …… 這兩個三連是overmap ，後面的人聲按下去就會很明顯
01:15:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同 00:22:983 (2,3,1,2,3,4) -
01:19:282 (4) - 貼著 01:19:547 (1) - ?
01:20:207 (3,4,5,6,7) - 同 00:21:000 (3,4,5,6,7) -

GL~ nice mapping tho XD
shoot a star ;)
add Crystal's EXTRA , will add tag late if my mania diff is ok …… :|
richardfeder
1,056 posts
Joined March 2013
richardfeder
看一看mania~
只有一点小建议啦 我觉得挺好的呀 快去找摸
EZ
00:46:771 - 加一个note?
00:48:886 (48886|3) - ^
00:50:075 - 这里也是 00:50:207 (50207|3) - 这个没有鼓点的就可以去掉了
00:51:000 (51000|3) - ^
00:52:586 (52586|1) - 挪到00:52:718 (52718|3) -
00:56:287 (56287|0) - 好像没东西
01:03:688 (63688|1) - ^
01:06:595 (66595|2) - 漏了一个鼓点
01:07:652 - ^
01:09:899 (69899|0) - 去掉 01:10:031 (70031|3) - 从01:09:899 - 开始, 然后最好一直写人声条子写到01:11:221 - .最后01:11:221 - 到01:12:278 - 这一个小节可以作难一点 不过其他的地方还是一个人声条子带过好一些

NM好像抓音有点奇怪 要不要叫维多看一下呢

HD
一些比较有特色的人声可以适当写成条子 比如00:35:670 (35670|2) - ,00:37:256 (37256|2,37520|2) - 当然只是个人感觉 实际上条子还是点都是可以的
00:38:445 (38445|3,40560|3,42674|3,43732|3,44789|3) - 感觉这几个条子有点迷
00:55:229 (55229|3,55229|0) - 可以放心大胆的加两个note把这个鼓点写上 毕竟是HD
然后就是有点overmap的问题 好像00:56:287 (56287|3,56551|0) - 比如这些没有音的地方都写了东西 还有00:59:459 (59459|0,59525|1) - 这种三连mania没有音是不可以放的233
01:16:507 - 这里开始漏了一些比较重的鼓点呀 要不要考虑加上？01:16:771 (76771|1,77300|1) - 比如这些白线上的鼓点还有最后这一串很强的01:18:622 (78622|2,78622|0,78754|1,78886|3,79018|0,79150|2,79150|3,79282|1,79414|0,79547|1) -
HD其实可以再做难一点的呀233 不过这样也挺好

MX
00:12:740 (12740|0) - nothing out there. You may wanna remove it
00:20:340 (20340|3,20340|1) - should be triple notes. This chord is as strong as the previous one. Also a LN would be preferred.
00:20:934 - you miss a drum here
00:52:718 (52718|1,52718|2) - move right and
00:52:983 (52983|1) - add a note?
00:53:247 (53247|2,53247|3,53247|0,53511|3,53511|0,53776|3,53776|1,54040|2,54040|1) - those chord are basically the same and you definitely want to represent them with the same amount of notes. I would do something like this:

The notes which I selected are bass.
For the kiai section, there are many notable voice you can follow with LNs in order to make your layering more dynamic(since now is mostly drums mixing with a little vocal LNs). Besides that I think this diff is pretty good. keep up!
:3/
do you want to make this a little bit harder? It is overall a MX diff, not HD lol
Good luck :3/
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Dailycare
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined May 2012
Dailycare
[General]
I know that Widescreen Support is for some storyboards. Please consider unchecking Widescreen Support if mania diffs shouldn't need it.
01:08:049 - 01:10:163 - Why did you use only whistle sounds? I felt empty here. Please consider adding some clap sounds though you can't hear any sounds at this part.

[Crystal's Garakowa]
01:03:159 (2,2,2) - How about ctrl+G?
01:12:146 (2) - How about moving it to (192, 96)? These two are just suggestion.

[Little's Insane]
00:54:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It may be hard for some players. Because the song's BPM is 227. But it might be acceptable if these mapsets had more easier insane diff..
01:10:956 (4,5) - How about ctrl+G?

[Little's Hard]
00:56:287 (3) - How about changing it to 1/2 slider? I think it will be better to be same as 00:58:401 (3) - , 01:04:745 (3) -
01:19:018 (2,3) - This rhythm is better imo

[Normal]
01:02:498 (2) - If you was following vocal, 3/4 is not a good choice.
01:20:736 (1) - DS


it's awesome
Critical_Star
Beatmap Nominator
1,210 posts
Joined December 2013
Critical_Star
hi~
看看了一会儿～

column 1 2 3 4

EZ
00:12:542 (12542|1) - change into LN end 00:12:807 - could be nice
00:27:476 (27476|1,27608|0) - move to the right by 2 for balance then 00:27:873 (27873|2) - move to 1
00:28:930 (28930|0,29194|1,29459|2,29723|3) - http://puu.sh/ngOnX/dc4dbb384a.png nice for Pitch
00:37:520 (37520|1,37784|2) - i think here is a bit odd, maybe http://puu.sh/ngOIC/177df7ab34.png? a ln is suitable here
00:44:525 (44525|3) - move to 3?
00:46:375 (46375|2,46639|2) - move to 1? is more easier to hit for beginner
00:48:886 (48886|0,49150|2,49282|3) - http://puu.sh/ngP1l/96d9859f3c.png how about this?
00:53:511 (53511|2,53776|2,54040|2) - move to 2 for balance then 00:54:436 (54436|1,54569|0) - CTRL+G
00:58:666 (58666|2,58798|1,59062|2,59194|1) - consider making them different? they have different sound here
01:10:560 (70560|1,70824|2,71088|1) - remove? i think is nice if u can follow those loud drum sound only for here, friendly for beginner
01:20:340 - add a note? there is drum sound which u are following
EZ是很不错，不过要注意balance :3
NM
00:22:454 (22454|3,22586|1) - CTRL+G? for balance
00:36:066 (36066|1,36199|1,36463|0,36595|0,36859|2,36992|2) - i think there is no need to jack them unless they have the same sound~
00:37:520 (37520|3,37784|3,37917|2,38049|1,38181|0,38313|0) - http://puu.sh/ngRwA/df91c7dfba.png ?
00:48:357 (48357|2) - move to 4?
00:50:604 - add a note for kick?
00:57:212 - should be double note like 00:55:626 (55626|3,55626|1) - same sound
00:59:591 (59591|1,59591|0,60119|0,60119|1) - single note is enough here since it doesnt have the same loud as 00:59:855 (59855|2,59855|3,60384|3,60384|2) -
01:03:820 (63820|2,63820|3) - move to 23? make the crash sound different column with 01:03:027 (63027|2,63027|3,63291|3,63291|2,63555|2,63555|3) -
NM说话来有点奇怪，有些地方有抓有些没qwq 不过还是很不错～
HD
00:13:599 (13599|1,13599|0,14128|1,14128|2,14657|3,14657|1) - hmm, why double for this sound? owo u should double the louder sound like 00:13:335 (13335|2,13864|3,14392|2,14921|0) - and so on
00:22:322 (22322|1) - should be double here like 00:23:379 (23379|2,23379|1) - and so on, u missed lot of it here qwq
00:56:947 (56947|0,56947|1,57080|1,57080|0,57212|1,57212|0) - random double note? 00:56:947 (56947|0,56947|1,57080|0,57080|1) - this all single note should be enough
00:59:062 (59062|3,59062|2,59194|3,59194|2) - same like above ^ make it single note
01:00:119 (60119|2,60119|0,60119|3) - double note here
01:02:895 (62895|3,62895|0) - should be single note here since there is no loud drum sound here
01:05:406 (65406|0,65406|1,65538|0,65538|1) - like before make it single, it just a little sudden here with double note while the rest u mapped single note kick
01:08:049 (68049|2,68049|3,68445|1,68445|0,68842|3,68842|2,69370|1,69370|0) - hmm, consider to reduce them into a single LN and add some note for other instrumental here, i feel like there is missing much instrumental sound here
其实还能再多加note,不过也许还行吧～

MX
- will check later qwq


我怎么会用英文mod啊哈哈不好意思 :) 好运～
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

richardfeder wrote:

看一看mania~
只有一点小建议啦 我觉得挺好的呀 快去找摸 …… 嗯嗯
EZ
01:09:899 (69899|0) - 去掉 01:10:031 (70031|3) - 从01:09:899 - 开始, 然后最好一直写人声条子写到01:11:221 - .最后01:11:221 - 到01:12:278 - 这一个小节可以作难一点 不过其他的地方还是一个人声条子带过好一些…… 這裡我覺得應該做難一點……

NM好像抓音有点奇怪 要不要叫维多看一下呢……我一直覺得什麼明顯跟社麼是最好的，混搭Orz

HD
一些比较有特色的人声可以适当写成条子 比如00:35:670 (35670|2) - ,00:37:256 (37256|2,37520|2) - 当然只是个人感觉 实际上条子还是点都是可以的……這個有點多……我覺得全是圈按起來比較舒服
00:55:229 (55229|3,55229|0) - 可以放心大胆的加两个note把这个鼓点写上 毕竟是HD……移了一個上來，多了我自己打不了了Orz
然后就是有点overmap的问题 好像00:56:287 (56287|3,56551|0) - 比如这些没有音的地方都写了东西 还有00:59:459 (59459|0,59525|1) - 这种三连mania没有音是不可以放的233……有人聲，三連都去掉了
01:16:507 - 这里开始漏了一些比较重的鼓点呀 要不要考虑加上？01:16:771 (76771|1,77300|1) - 比如这些白线上的鼓点还有最后这一串很强的01:18:622 (78622|2,78622|0,78754|1,78886|3,79018|0,79150|2,79150|3,79282|1,79414|0,79547|1) - ……這邊也是二note我自己就完全按不動了……如果要整體弄難一點我再加 ;w;
HD其实可以再做难一点的呀233 不过这样也挺好

Good luck :3/
no reply = fix :)

Dailycare wrote:

[General]
I know that Widescreen Support is for some storyboards. Please consider unchecking Widescreen Support if mania diffs shouldn't need it. …… don't mind it xd , it's not problem imo , i will fix it late beacuse i want gder update too many
01:08:049 - 01:10:163 - Why did you use only whistle sounds? I felt empty here. Please consider adding some clap sounds though you can't hear any sounds at this part. …… can't add 24clap …… so only add whistle / normal hit for voice

[Normal]
01:02:498 (2) - If you was following vocal, 3/4 is not a good choice. …… maybe xd
01:20:736 (1) - DS …… fix ;w;


it's awesome

Critical_Star wrote:

hi~
看看了一会儿～

column 1 2 3 4

EZ
00:37:520 (37520|1,37784|2) - i think here is a bit odd, maybe http://puu.sh/ngOIC/177df7ab34.png? a ln is suitable here 我還是想跟人聲……
01:10:560 (70560|1,70824|2,71088|1) - remove? i think is nice if u can follow those loud drum sound only for here, friendly for beginner …… 我覺得kiai結尾應該弄難一點……
EZ是很不错，不过要注意balance :3 …… Orz
NM
00:48:357 (48357|2) - move to 4? …… 這種滑條接圈我自己比較適應 = =
00:59:591 (59591|1,59591|0,60119|0,60119|1) - single note is enough here since it doesnt have the same loud as 00:59:855 (59855|2,59855|3,60384|3,60384|2) - …… 這裡想強調人聲高音……HD也是三個圈
01:03:820 (63820|2,63820|3) - move to 23? make the crash sound different column with 01:03:027 (63027|2,63027|3,63291|3,63291|2,63555|2,63555|3) - ……這樣疊起來有種停頓的感覺【
NM说话来有点奇怪，有些地方有抓有些没qwq 不过还是很不错～ …… orz
HD
00:13:599 (13599|1,13599|0,14128|1,14128|2,14657|3,14657|1) - hmm, why double for this sound? owo u should double the louder sound like 00:13:335 (13335|2,13864|3,14392|2,14921|0) - and so on …… 這邊我覺得應該按強弱次強弱放雙note……
00:22:322 (22322|1) - should be double here like 00:23:379 (23379|2,23379|1) - and so on, u missed lot of it here qwq 這邊聽上去安靜一點所以圈也少一點 ;w;
00:56:947 (56947|0,56947|1,57080|1,57080|0,57212|1,57212|0) - random double note? 00:56:947 (56947|0,56947|1,57080|0,57080|1) - this all single note should be enough …… 也是和NM一樣，下面那些也全是強調人聲 Orz
00:59:062 (59062|3,59062|2,59194|3,59194|2) - same like above ^ make it single note
01:00:119 (60119|2,60119|0,60119|3) - double note here
01:02:895 (62895|3,62895|0) - should be single note here since there is no loud drum sound here
01:05:406 (65406|0,65406|1,65538|0,65538|1) - like before make it single, it just a little sudden here with double note while the rest u mapped single note kick
01:08:049 (68049|2,68049|3,68445|1,68445|0,68842|3,68842|2,69370|1,69370|0) - hmm, consider to reduce them into a single LN and add some note for other instrumental here, i feel like there is missing much instrumental sound here
其实还能再多加note,不过也许还行吧～



我怎么会用英文mod啊哈哈不好意思 :) 好运～ …… my english lv 2 :?
no reply = fix

change too many Orz , wait me fix other part :o

my bp 1 ↓↓↓ lol

Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little

Dailycare wrote:

[Little's Insane]
00:54:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It may be hard for some players. Because the song's BPM is 227. But it might be acceptable if these mapsets had more easier insane diff.. I think it's fine.
01:10:956 (4,5) - How about ctrl+G? No, I like the current direction.

[Little's Hard]
00:56:287 (3) - How about changing it to 1/2 slider? I think it will be better to be same as 00:58:401 (3) - , 01:04:745 (3) - Change to 1/2 slider.
01:19:018 (2,3) - This rhythm is better imo Changed rhythm.
Thanks.
http://puu.sh/ngXdL/b515cf8fd8.zip
Dellvangel
1,269 posts
Joined November 2014
Dellvangel

richardfeder wrote:

MX
00:12:740 (12740|0) - nothing out there. You may wanna remove it oh my bad, removed.
00:20:340 (20340|3,20340|1) - should be triple notes. This chord is as strong as the previous one. Also a LN would be preferred. i think the sound still same with 00:19:414 (19414|3,19414|0) - but i re-arranged this part to add the LNs.
00:20:934 - you miss a drum here yeah, but i also re-pattern this part for the LNs, so i'll leave this one.
00:52:718 (52718|1,52718|2) - move right and nice.
00:52:983 (52983|1) - add a note? i afraid the pattern will become too hard for play (oh the bpm is really something), so 2 notes is enough i think.
00:53:247 (53247|2,53247|3,53247|0,53511|3,53511|0,53776|3,53776|1,54040|2,54040|1) - those chord are basically the same and you definitely want to represent them with the same amount of notes. I would do something like this:

The notes which I selected are bass. ok, re-patternned here, but i changed little from your suggestion.
For the kiai section, there are many notable voice you can follow with LNs in order to make your layering more dynamic(since now is mostly drums mixing with a little vocal LNs). Besides that I think this diff is pretty good. keep up! yeah, i need more LNs at this diff, may be you can help me to show me which part that suited for the LNs.
:3/
do you want to make this a little bit harder? It is overall a MX diff, not HD lolyes, till 3,75+ for I icon! :)
Good luck :3/
Thanks for modding, richardfeder >w<
btw, i really like your 7k maps, you're one of my favourite mappers actually lol xD

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Title:Sendan Life
TitleUnicode:センダンライフ
Artist:Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri]
ArtistUnicode:リモ Prototype[CV：花守ゆみり]
Creator:Narcissu
Version:Dell's MX
Source:ガラスの花と壊す世界
Tags:Little CloudSplash16 vocaloid Chukka やしきん yashikin Glass no Hana to Kowasu Sekai GARAKOWA Restore the World Vitreous Flower Destroy the World
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Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu
Crystal fix all , and add tag :?

tag ok now ;w;

@Dellvangel : look like find mania bn hard than std bn , maybe i will remove mania set ……
Dellvangel
1,269 posts
Joined November 2014
Dellvangel

Narcissu wrote:

@Dellvangel : look like find mania bn hard than std bn , maybe i will remove mania set ……
lol, i already told you before, so yeah, it's up to you, just put my diff in creator's word is fine :)
lenpai
Beatmap Nominator
1,773 posts
Joined December 2014
lenpai
autotune stronk

quick mod since im bad at animu

MX
00:12:873 (12873|1) - better at col 4. Also kills the index trill.

HD
00:10:560 (10560|2,10692|1) - swap col. More expressive
00:12:542 - shouldnt hurt to add 4
00:54:833 - easier to press and incorporates the piano https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4601833
01:19:943 - climactic end. Consider increasing the density here. Probably adding a note for every white line.
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Lenfried- wrote:

autotune stronk

quick mod since im bad at animu
HD
00:10:560 (10560|2,10692|1) - swap col. More expressive
00:12:542 - shouldnt hurt to add 4
00:54:833 - easier to press and incorporates the piano https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4601833
01:19:943 - climactic end. Consider increasing the density here. Probably adding a note for every white line. …… add 2 note
no reply = fix xd
Dellvangel
1,269 posts
Joined November 2014
Dellvangel

Lenfried- wrote:

autotune stronk

quick mod since im bad at animu

MX
00:12:873 (12873|1) - better at col 4. Also kills the index trill. hmm, ctrl+h 00:12:807 (12807|0,12873|1) - this is fine i guess.
Thanks for modding :)

Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: life.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54634
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.499999

[Metadata]
Title:Sendan Life
TitleUnicode:センダンライフ
Artist:Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri]
ArtistUnicode:リモ Prototype[CV：花守ゆみり]
Creator:Narcissu
Version:Dell's MX
Source:ガラスの花と壊す世界
Tags:Little CloudSplash16 Crystal Dellvangel vocaloid Chukka やしきん yashikin Glass no Hana to Kowasu Sekai GARAKOWA Restore the World Vitreous Flower Destroy the World
BeatmapID:906534
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CircleSize:4
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64,192,55031,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,55097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,55097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,55163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,55229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,55229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,55296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,55362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,55362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,55626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,55626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,55626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,55890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,55890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,56022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,56022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,56155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,56155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,56155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,56419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,56419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,56683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,56683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,56683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,56947,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,56947,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,57080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,57080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,57212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,57212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,57212,128,0,57344:0:0:0:0:
320,192,57476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,57476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,57740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,57740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,57740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,58005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,58005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,58137,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,58137,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,58269,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,58269,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,58269,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,58401,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,58401,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,58666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,58666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,58798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,58798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,58798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,59062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,59062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,59194,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,59194,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,59326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,59326,128,0,59591:0:0:0:0:
192,192,59326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,59591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,59591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,59855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,59855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,59855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,60119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,60119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60251,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,60251,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,60384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,60384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,60384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,60648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,60648,128,0,61044:0:0:0:0:
320,192,60912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,60912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,60912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61044,128,0,61441:0:0:0:0:
320,192,61177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,61309,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,61441,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,61441,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,61441,128,0,61705:0:0:0:0:
320,192,61705,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61705,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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64,192,61970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,61970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,62234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,62234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,62366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,62366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,62498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,62498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,62630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,62630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,62630,128,0,62895:0:0:0:0:
192,192,62895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,63159,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,63159,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,63291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,63291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,63291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,63423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,63555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,63555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,63555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,63688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,63688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,63820,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,63820,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,63820,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,64084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,64481,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,65538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,65670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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448,192,66199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,66199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,66463,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,66463,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,66727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,66727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,68313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,68577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,68710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,68710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,68842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,68842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,70428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,70956,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,71353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,71485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,71617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,71749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,71881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,72014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,72146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,72278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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448,192,72278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,72410,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,72542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,72807,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,72939,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,73071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,73203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,73599,128,0,73732:0:0:0:0:
320,192,73732,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,73864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,73864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,73996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,74128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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448,192,74128,128,0,74260:0:0:0:0:
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192,192,74525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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64,192,74657,128,0,74789:0:0:0:0:
192,192,74789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,74921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,75053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,75053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,75185,128,0,75318:0:0:0:0:
192,192,75318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,77432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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MokouSmoke
495 posts
Joined May 2013
MokouSmoke
from my queue~
[Extra]
  1. 00:32:366 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - unstack to help with readablility? http://puu.sh/nlQ0F/25c7511f4d.jpg
  2. 01:15:185 (6,7) - anti-jump is strange. move 01:15:318 (7) - to [~334,~134]?
Nothing to say about insane.
[Little's Hard]
  1. 00:36:463 - prefer if this vocal was mapped
  2. 00:38:445 (1) - remove drum sound on slidertick?
  3. 01:08:049 (1) - break into 1/1 slider + note?
[Normal]
  1. 00:22:322 (2) - add clap?
  2. 00:22:586 (3) - I think drum and soft-whistle on sliderhead and remove drum on slidertail
  3. 00:28:666 (3) - drum on slidertail?
  4. 00:32:102 (1) - drum and soft-whistle on sliderhead?
  5. 00:37:917 (3) - clap on sliderhead?
  6. 00:52:190 (1) - move NC to 00:53:247 (3) - ?
  7. 01:04:877 (3) - drum on sliderhead?
[Easy]
  1. 00:08:842 (1,2,3,4) - normal hitsound on all? also, 00:10:956 (3) - drum slidertick sounds strange here
  2. 00:19:414 (3,4) - avoid overlap, use 1.04x spacing. same at 00:50:075 (4,1) -
  3. 00:21:529 (1) - 01:03:820 (1) - drum on slidertail?
  4. 00:28:930 (4) - 00:32:102 (3) - 00:42:674 (1) - 00:56:947 (2) - drum on sliderhead?
  5. 01:09:370 (2) - 01:09:899 (3) - normal hitsound?
Good luck!
vick
260 posts
Joined August 2014
vick
Go Narcissu, go ! :D ♥
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

MokouSmoke wrote:

from my queue~
[Extra]
  1. 00:32:366 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - unstack to help with readablility? http://puu.sh/nlQ0F/25c7511f4d.jpg …… i like mix stack and overlap【【
  2. 01:15:185 (6,7) - anti-jump is strange. move 01:15:318 (7) - to [~334,~134]? …… e …… no
Nothing to say about insane.
[Normal]
  1. 00:22:322 (2) - add clap?
  2. 00:22:586 (3) - I think drum and soft-whistle on sliderhead and remove drum on slidertail
  3. 00:28:666 (3) - drum on slidertail?
  4. 00:32:102 (1) - drum and soft-whistle on sliderhead?
  5. 00:37:917 (3) - clap on sliderhead?
  6. 00:52:190 (1) - move NC to 00:53:247 (3) - ?
  7. 01:04:877 (3) - drum on sliderhead?
[Easy]
  1. 00:08:842 (1,2,3,4) - normal hitsound on all? also, 00:10:956 (3) - drum slidertick sounds strange here
  2. 00:19:414 (3,4) - avoid overlap, use 1.04x spacing. same at 00:50:075 (4,1) - …… ok , i change SV 1.0 → 1.05
  3. 00:21:529 (1) - 01:03:820 (1) - drum on slidertail?
  4. 00:28:930 (4) - 00:32:102 (3) - 00:42:674 (1) - 00:56:947 (2) - drum on sliderhead?
  5. 01:09:370 (2) - 01:09:899 (3) - normal hitsound?
Good luck!
no reply = fix !!! very thx , it's useful :)

vick wrote:

Go Narcissu, go ! :D ♥
wait next bns XD
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little

MokouSmoke wrote:

[Little's Hard]
  1. 00:36:463 - prefer if this vocal was mapped I don't.
  2. 00:38:445 (1) - remove drum sound on slidertick? Fixed.
  3. 01:08:049 (1) - break into 1/1 slider + note? Prefer long slider to show the long vocal notes.
http://puu.sh/nnvTz/8cfa5943ca.zip
Wing My Way
186 posts
Joined September 2013
Wing My Way
水摸来啦~

Crystal's Garakowa


  • 00:37:124 (5,1) - 试试着么摆
    123
    00:45:846 (1) - 漏了个nm-clap
    01:09:767 - 这里还是加个note吧，因为01:09:370 (5) - 和这个是对称的，然而节奏却不对称而且还有空拍
    01:10:428 (1,1,1) - 这几个clap听着有点吵，可能是因为和01:10:560 (2,2,2) - 音量差太大，我建议additions改成normal。
    01:13:071 (2,3) - 有点近了，可以保持01:12:278 (1,2) - 这个之间的DS
    01:13:864 (3,4,5,6) - 打起来太难受了，还是小跳一下如何
    01:17:564 (1,2,1,2) - ^

Extra


  • 00:49:282 (2,6) - 漏clap
    都挺好~

Little's Insane


  • 00:38:313 (2) - how about the stack here? 00:37:784 (3) -
    00:49:282 (2) - add clap
    00:52:983 (4) - 使他更加舒展一些可以吗？

Little's Hard


  • 00:28:401 (3) - add whistle and clap
    00:28:798 (4) - sampleset change to drum，additions change to soft
    00:29:326 (4) - ^
    01:08:313 - wtf...
    cool map~ :)

EZ和NM没啥了 水KD美丽;w;
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu
fix !
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little

Wing My Way wrote:

Little's Insane


  • 00:38:313 (2) - how about the stack here? 00:37:784 (3) - No, I prefer current placement.
    00:49:282 (2) - add clap Fixed.
    00:52:983 (4) - 使他更加舒展一些可以吗？ I want to keep small spacing so the next jump to the slider has more emphasis.

Little's Hard


  • 00:28:401 (3) - add whistle and clap Fixed.
    00:28:798 (4) - sampleset change to drum，additions change to soft Why?
    00:29:326 (4) - ^
    01:08:313 - wtf... Fixed.
    cool map~ :)
Thanks.
http://puu.sh/ntZIL/fc3fc463bd.zip
Asahina Momoko
1,008 posts
Joined November 2013
Asahina Momoko
hi!!
nice ava tbh xdd

Easy

  1. 00:09:767 (2) - should be end at 00:10:296 -
  2. 00:10:956 (3,4) - try this
    SPOILER
  3. 00:52:190 (2,3) - wrong spacing
  4. 01:11:221 (4) - stop this at 01:11:749 - and you can follow the vocal perfectly

Normal

  1. 00:24:701 (3,4) - how about change here to follow vocal better?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:28:666 (3) - i think let players tap 00:28:666 - and 00:28:798 - might be well to play here, so how about rhythm below?
    SPOILER
  3. 00:35:802 (4) - you can start this at 00:35:141 -

Little's Hard

  1. 00:18:754 - add not as you did at 00:14:525 (2) - 00:16:639 (2) -
  2. 01:20:472 (4) - nc for emphasizing bigger jump would be fine i think

    very goood

Little's Insane

  1. 00:21:000 (4) - nc for this 00:21:000 (4,5,6) - "speed up section" ?
  2. 00:28:798 (4,1) - if you're following vocal, maybe this works better
    SPOILER
  3. 00:56:551 (2,3) - a bit close each other, around 320/352 should be fine i think

Extra

  1. 00:09:767 (2,3,4,5) - you can make their spacing bigger as you did at same sounds part 00:11:617 (1,2,3,4) - ,
  2. 00:25:494 (3,4) - more spacing? how about put 00:25:494 (3) - around 263/48
  3. 00:27:212 (2) - ctrl+g might plays well too
  4. 01:03:291 (3) - NC?
  5. 01:20:604 (8,1) - i think put jump here should fit at "finale" rather than antijump, means like below example
    SPOILER

Crystal's Garakowa

  1. 00:21:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - put them like this is more natural?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:54:833 (1) - how about change it to 1/8 slider?
  3. 01:03:159 (2,2,2) - ctrl+g them can express more intensity for leading in main kiai part again

good luck!!
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu
wait my computer revived :?

Asahina Momoko wrote:

hi!!
nice ava tbh xdd …… xdd

Easy

  1. 00:09:767 (2) - should be end at 00:10:296 - ……
  2. 00:10:956 (3,4) - try this
    SPOILER
  3. 00:52:190 (2,3) - wrong spacing
  4. 01:11:221 (4) - stop this at 01:11:749 - and you can follow the vocal perfectly

Normal

  1. 00:24:701 (3,4) - how about change here to follow vocal better? …… many 1/2 too hard for normal diff imo …… if follow voice …… will be add N*1/2 Orz
    SPOILER
  2. 00:28:666 (3) - i think let players tap 00:28:666 - and 00:28:798 - might be well to play here, so how about rhythm below? …… ↑↑↑
    SPOILER
  3. 00:35:802 (4) - you can start this at 00:35:141 -…… ↑↑↑

Extra

  1. 00:09:767 (2,3,4,5) - you can make their spacing bigger as you did at same sounds part 00:11:617 (1,2,3,4) - ,
  2. 00:25:494 (3,4) - more spacing? how about put 00:25:494 (3) - around 263/48
  3. 00:27:212 (2) - ctrl+g might plays well too
  4. 01:03:291 (3) - NC? …… i add bule when kiai star/4bar lol , maybe it's obsessive compulsive disorder ……
  5. 01:20:604 (8,1) - i think put jump here should fit at "finale" rather than antijump, means like below example …… e, no 。。
    SPOILER

good luck!!
no reply = fix , thx mod ;w;
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little

Asahina Momoko wrote:

Little's Hard

  1. 00:18:754 - add not as you did at 00:14:525 (2) - 00:16:639 (2) - Hard to do it without changing the pattern because of spacing. I think current rhythm is ok too.
  2. 01:20:472 (4) - nc for emphasizing bigger jump would be fine i think

    very goood

Little's Insane

  1. 00:21:000 (4) - nc for this 00:21:000 (4,5,6) - "speed up section" ?
  2. 00:28:798 (4,1) - if you're following vocal, maybe this works better Not following vocal.
  3. 00:56:551 (2,3) - a bit close each other, around 320/352 should be fine i think
No comment = fixed.
Thanks.
http://f.ttle.li/YrcF.zip
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Easy
  1. 00:35:802 (2) - whistle?
  2. 00:46:771 (1,2) - nazi, 貌似没包好
  3. 01:11:221 (4) - 把4的头拿出来点，别挡住数字了；另外是不是end at 01:11:749 - 好一点？毕竟你easy是跟vocal的
Normal
  1. 00:35:802 (4) - 头上whistle
Little's Hard
  1. 00:10:692 (5) - a bit weird for me... separate it into 2 circles?
  2. 01:09:899 (4,2) - nazi, stack better?
Little's Insane
  1. 00:10:692 (5) - ^, or change into a 1/2 slider and 1 circle.
  2. 00:28:930 (1) - whistle on head?
  3. 00:33:820 (4,1) - nazi stack
  4. 00:34:481 (2) - ctrl+g?
  5. 00:44:789 (1) - whistle on head with soft additions?
  6. 00:54:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ye it's 227bpm stream and it seems there are no tripets in hard diff, i recommend to shorten this steam to 4 notes like http://puu.sh/nVuWr/d5c541d74b.jpg
  7. 01:01:705 (1) - whistle on head?
  8. 01:02:630 (1) - finish on head?
Extra
  1. 01:02:630 - 01:10:163 - 不太赞同为了跟vocal忽视这两个downbeat的做法，我觉得这两个地方梗可以改改
    01:02:630 - http://puu.sh/nVvZ9/ab55241b30.jpg
    01:10:163 - 可以参考小星星的难度
  2. 01:09:238 (4) - 这vocal没跟对吧还ignore了个clap
  3. 01:08:049 (1) - 尾巴clap
Crystal's Garakowa
  1. 00:21:265 (5,6,1) - 6和1的距离反而比5和6短，而且高bpm下1/4反向滑条比较容易断尾，我觉得不如把5和6都ctrl+g。
  2. 00:24:436 (1) - remove nc
  3. 00:30:251 (1) - ^
  4. 00:45:846 (2) - ^
  5. 00:49:811 (1) - ^
  6. 01:02:366 (2,3,4,5) - 讲道理不建议跟vocal而忽视01:02:630 - 这一个downbeat，可以根据这个节奏改下梗：http://puu.sh/nVvZ9/ab55241b30.jpg
  7. 01:09:767 - 索性在01:09:899 (1) - 上面加个note？
  8. 01:09:899 (1) - 尾巴finish
Crystal
Former osu!catch Champion: 2018
1,123 posts
Joined June 2012
Crystal
@wmw: 改了前面3条 后面的我认为没问题
@momoko: fixed the 1st one. 1/8 slider seems too intense as i just want an object that leads in kiai. and i think 01:03:159 (2,2,2) jumps here is enough, that leads to a too difficult jump if those objects are ctrl+g'd
@yuki: all fixed, thanks!
thanks for modding!!

SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: life.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54634
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.599998

[Metadata]
Title:Sendan Life
TitleUnicode:センダンライフ
Artist:Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri]
ArtistUnicode:リモ Prototype[CV：花守ゆみり]
Creator:Narcissu
Version:Crystal's Garakowa
Source:ガラスの花と壊す世界
Tags:Little CloudSplash16 Crystal vocaloid Chukka やしきん yashikin Glass no Hana to Kowasu Sekai GARAKOWA Restore the World Vitreous Flower Destroy the World
BeatmapID:909032
BeatmapSetID:411894

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.5
ApproachRate:9.5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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Narcissu
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Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Minakami Yuki wrote:

  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Easy
  1. 00:35:802 (2) - whistle?
  2. 00:46:771 (1,2) - nazi, 貌似没包好
  3. 01:11:221 (4) - 把4的头拿出来点，别挡住数字了；另外是不是end at 01:11:749 - 好一点？毕竟你easy是跟vocal的
Normal
  1. 00:35:802 (4) - 头上whistle
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  1. 01:02:630 - 01:10:163 - 不太赞同为了跟vocal忽视这两个downbeat的做法，我觉得这两个地方梗可以改改 …… 我覺得跟人聲有感覺一點……鼓點我覺得很無聊Orz
    01:02:630 - http://puu.sh/nVvZ9/ab55241b30.jpg
    01:10:163 - 可以参考小星星的难度
  2. 01:09:238 (4) - 这vocal没跟对吧还ignore了个clap …… 是錯開的……一開始打算拉出那個翅膀的形狀但是CS太低而且滑條沒有粗細就變成這樣了……後來改來改去我也很糾結……還是感覺這樣舒服點【【
  3. 01:08:049 (1) - 尾巴clap
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very very thx Crystal lol, why i can't find bn check 233
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