Flower wrote:

玻璃的我 破碎之世 …… 玻璃之花和崩壞的世界


[Extra]
不错哦，这个屌
00:46:507 - 有一个音，加上有更好的连贯感……這樣後面有感覺一點
00:48:555 - vocal有一个音，加上1/4的note或者把00:48:357 (2) - 改成3/4比较合曲……好 …… 改不動
00:54:569 (2,3,4,5) - 是我的话会给它加上normal sample，当然随你喜欢……加了whistle
00:56:815 - 我认为这里有一个circle比较合曲，即把00:56:683 (2) - 拆开比较舒服……現在的好打一點，做七星的話加上
01:03:423 (4,5,6) - 个人觉得改成normal sample比较不错……好

没了
最近摸力越来越烂了，对不起

祝早日rank~

[Extra]

00:19:943 (3,4,5) - 3放到5的位置 5放到4位置 4放到3的位置

00:23:644 (1,2,3,4) - 这个地方 其实很难读 打的时候实际测试出来的 大概太弱

00:24:635 (7) - 这地方没有音

00:32:498 (3,4,5) - 这个地方可以换成一个1/4的滑条比较好

01:15:978 (3,4,5,6) - 这个地方比起前面来说却好读得多

卧槽辅导员的EX做得好流畅

[Little's Insane]

very beautiful.....but what's this? 01:18:622 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) -


这图好难摸啊 感觉已经找不到什么摸的地方了 要不这个就当NM得了 或者我先欠着个M4M 可以随时找我再摸一张图 我晚上基本都有空

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[General]
you need add little's used ID CloudSplash16 in tags.
and del excess timing points in little's insane ＆hard.

SPOILER

fix

[Extra]
00:09:767 (2,3,4,5) - 我觉得完全可以摆的随机一点
00:13:335 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ↑
00:19:679 (2) - CTRL+G如何
00:38:445 - 这里开始的减速段我觉得可以再慢点 1.0以下都可以的样子 让slider不至于过长搞得比较难排列 整体速度都挺快的……lfj 的圖基本是1.8*0.75~1.1，我已經遠低於偶像【【
00:58:005 (3) - 目测并不在00:57:740 (2) 和00:57:476 (1) 的正中间 …… 稍微修了一下……四級網格差不多極限了
感觉没什么可说的……

other diffs all fine.
加油低阶了他们
good luck~

Kibbleru wrote:

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01:21:000 - imo you could just cut the vocals out here. …… i tried , but will impact 01:20:736 - finish Orz

extra
00:09:370 (3,1) - stacking,, works but imo it's kinda anticlimatic for me. what i would suggest is maybe something like this …… no jump more easy …… if i do EXEX

SPOILER

00:11:485 (3,1) - ^
00:32:630 (4) - for overlapping jump patterns i would recommend putting nc here. …… don't mind xd
00:46:507 - add circle and stack it on 00:46:639 (2) - here? would improve readability……ok
00:53:247 (1,2) - u can try turning these into 3/4 sliders imo.……hate 3/4
idk what i did lmao. just thought it might be cool

SPOILER

roberto …… 納尼 ???
00:24:436 (6) - uhm

SPOILER

00:53:776 (3) - u can increase the spacing here

uh couldn't really find anything for easy and normal :<

09kami wrote:

[Extra]

00:19:943 (3,4,5) - 3放到5的位置 5放到4位置 4放到3的位置 ……no , jump here 00:20:340 (1) -

00:23:644 (1,2,3,4) - 这个地方 其实很难读 打的时候实际测试出来的 大概太弱

00:24:635 (7) - 这地方没有音 …… overmap have fun 【【

00:32:498 (3,4,5) - 这个地方可以换成一个1/4的滑条比较好…… 1/4 滑條人玩？

01:15:978 (3,4,5,6) - 这个地方比起前面来说却好读得多

这图好难摸啊 感觉已经找不到什么摸的地方了 要不这个就当NM得了 或者我先欠着个M4M 可以随时找我再摸一张图 我晚上基本都有空 …… don't mind 233

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

[Extra]
00:22:586 (1) - ctrl g？ …… 差不多，後面還是想跳跳
00:36:992 (5) - 和00:36:595 (3) - 这个折返形状弄成对称的？一样的调子，弄成向下弯（笑脸形状）的会不会比较好 …… 好
00:46:507 (2) - 这个去掉？从这里00:46:639 (3) - 开始加速比较好……一開始就是沒有的，不過花花和kibb都讓我加個圈，我再看看別人怎麼說
01:09:965 (7) - 算overmap？你看要去掉不……大丈夫萌大奶

GL

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

[Insane]
00:18:754 (2,3) - try this I like my placement better.
01:01:970 (2,1) - safe? idc if it's safe. It's fun this way.
01:12:212 (6) - delete Why?

[Hard]
00:28:798 (4) - change into a slider+note. No... I prefer my rhythm.
00:34:613 (3) - delete Why?
01:11:749 (5,6) - why 1/4 reverse sliders? 4 notes or 2 sliders are enough imo I think 1/4 repeat slider fits here.

1. 01:00:384 (4,5) - Fix blanketing
2. 00:56:419 (3) - Should be this like 00:58:401 (3) ?
3. 01:04:877 (3) - ^
4. 01:20:604 - Add circle here? This fits the instrument.

1. 01:29:194 - There are timing points outside of the song
2. 00:34:613 (3) - Remove? To be consistent with 00:25:758 (1,2)

1. 01:29:194 - Same as Hard
2. Nothing's wrong with the diff. Nice!

Neil Leo wrote:

Hi, modding here!
[Easy]
Looks good and the diff plays well to the music.
[Normal]

1. 01:00:384 (4,5) - Fix blanketing …… fix
2. 00:56:419 (3) - Should be this like 00:58:401 (3) ? …… too many 1/2 Orz , and drum when 1/1 , i want skip some 1/2
3. 01:04:877 (3) - ^
4. 01:20:604 - Add circle here? This fits the instrument. …… 1/2 * 3 a bit hard

That's all I can mod. Good luck

Neil Leo wrote:

[Little's Hard]

1. 01:29:194 - There are timing points outside of the song Already removed those...
2. 00:34:613 (3) - Remove? To be consistent with 00:25:758 (1,2) No, I think it's ok

[Little's Insane]

1. 01:29:194 - Same as Hard
2. Nothing's wrong with the diff. Nice!

That's all I can mod. Good luck

liaoxingyao wrote:

only 骂娘(
[EZ]
00:20:934，00:21:133 你在抓鼓把 add一下 …… 好
00:27:873 这一段怎么突然就1/1了..? …… 弄錯了……
00:32:102 (32102|0) - ^
00:37:784 (37784|2) - 这里突然放个这么长的面条不太好吧 …… 縮了一點
01:10:296 (70296|2) - 抓鼓的话还是1/1 …… 好
[NM]
00:13:996 (13996|0) - 这个note删了吧 后面有相同的地方也删掉 …… 不要，我作圖的原則就是塞爆
00:59:591 这里突然抓人声会不会不太好 …… 這樣有感覺點
01:08:049 ^
我觉得这个完全就是HD
[HD]
00:12:542 (12542|1) - 这个面条可以不放 换成2note 然后00:12:674加个note这样 …… 好
00:42:674 (42674|3) - 这里为什么要放面条啊.. …… 餓……不知道……換了
00:59:591 这一段突然这人声是不是不太好…… 這樣有感覺點
01:03:754 (63754|0) - 这个要不要delete……刪了
01:08:049 突然抓人声不太好吧
01:20:207 试试这样

……好
大概就水这么多了 GL~

Lavender wrote:

先随便写一点

Ex和其他几个diff的Widescreen Support不一样 …… fix
In Extra:
00:09:767 (2,3,4,5) - 这里间距比起同样音程的前后是不是少了…… 音程不是高八度什麼的麼……
In Hard:
01:20:472 (4,5,6) - Because of 01:19:547 (1) - overlap,distance change at these three circles is hard to recognize, try to nerf a bit.
In Easy:
因为是bpm减半做的，导致漏了大部分clap，要不要用tick补上呢 …… 根本填不上的，空太多了

还弄hybrid，这样更难找bn了orz …… 再過幾天就有很多BN 了Orz

-[Apple]- wrote:

From QQ!
Great song.

here's my mod

[General]
Title: OK!
Artist: OK!
Hitsound: OK!
Disabled countdown: OK!
Widescreen support: OK!

[NM]
00:33:159 (33159|3) - Single note? …… no , 2note downbeat
Overall,NM diff should be doesn't have big problem.But you need pay attention on jack and balance.
#Buticanthelpyouonbalanceandjackyouknowhahaha
[HD]
00:19:811 (19811|1) - Diffierent sound change to 2? …… ok
00:21:000 (21000|0,21066|1,21133|2) - Are you following the piano?If yes just rearrange to 1/8.if not here is still okay.……don't mind 233
00:23:908 (23908|3) - Double note? Because here is same sound on 00:24:436. …… e , skip some beat …… all 2 note a bit hard
00:26:551 (26551|0) - ^
00:28:005 (28005|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4538242 That better than use chain of jacks.…… ok
00:40:296 (40296|0,40560|0,41353|0,41749|0) - Balance dude.……no , for the voice
00:58:798 (58798|3,58798|2,59062|2,59062|3,59326|2,59326|3) - Actually i don't know what are you following for.…… changed

That's all
Good luck!

moonlightleaf wrote:

[Normal]

来个别样mod …… 不要短折返啦

SPOILER

[Extra]

00:19:943 (3,4) - ctrl+g …… 和正常的不一樣會有感覺一點

00:23:776 (2,3) - ^……↑↑↑

00:27:212 (2) - ^……↑↑↑

00:28:798 (1) - ^……↑↑↑

00:35:009 (4) - ^……↑↑↑

00:31:044 (1,2) - 试试1ctrl+g 然后2叠在00:31:970 (1) -

00:36:066 (3,1) - try …

SPOILER

我是想這樣的重複平行↓↓↓

SPOILER

00:57:212 (5) - 下移? (386,304)?……好

00:59:326 (6) - ctrl+g? 后面的1好接一些……滑條沒難度的

01:18:093 (3,4,5,6) - 这2对换一下位置……好

切歌不好!…… 我做不了full 啊Orz

moonlightleaf wrote:

[Hard]

00:09:370 (3,4) - 叠 ,stack

00:11:484 (2,3) - ^

00:32:630 (3,4,5) - 这仨换个折返? change to a reverse

00:34:613 (3,4,5) - 试试删3 , 4放2上 再移下5调DS delete 3 , 4put on 2 then move 5 to make the same DS

00:41:749 (2) - 有点那啥, change to a reverse from 00:41:617 to 00:41:881 Changed this.

00:43:071 有音,后面 补note? end , then 00:43:203 add note ? Changed.

00:44:128 ^ Changed.

00:49:282 (2,3) - 也换滑条吧 slider too ?

IamKwaN wrote:

Subject: KwaN's Metadata Checking Queue ヽ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ

Narcissu wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/411894

thx xd

你好!

Unicode Artist 應該是 リモ Prototype[CV：花守ゆみり], 那 Romanised Artist 就是 Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri]. 其他沒問題! Good luck~

根據:
http://puu.sh/na5V5/37c7621577.jpg from http://garakowa.jp/ticket/

Dellvangel wrote:

Oh, Osu!mania diff? really? lemme mod it for you >w<

1|2|3|4
[EZ]
00:12:807 - change to LN? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550443
00:20:207 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550454 better flow imo.
00:22:851 - i know your intention here, but it just not balance imo, may be https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550460 for balance and better flow too imo.
00:24:701 (24701|2) - move to col 4 for balance.
00:25:758 (25758|2) - ^ emphasis the piano sound too. …… the part slow than other part , so i give up 2 note ;w;
00:26:815 (26815|2) -
00:26:419 (26419|0,26551|1,27080|0,27212|1) - it's better to avoid same pattern because somehow it feels boring to play, may be https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550477 .
00:37:520 (37520|2) - move to 2, for balance, also the sound is different with 00:37:256 (37256|2) - .
00:46:771 (46771|1) - move to 1 for balance.
00:51:397 (51397|2) - ^
00:53:247 (53247|2,53511|2,53776|2,54040|2) - something like 3|2|3|2 is better imo. ……for i add 3 extra clap , i think 333 fine
01:07:124 (67124|2) - move to 1? for balance.
01:07:784 (67784|1) - move to 4? the sound is different with 01:07:520 (67520|1) - .
01:19:414 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550491 better flow and more balance.

[NM]
00:13:203 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550503 more balance and better flow.
00:14:657 (14657|3,14789|3) - move to col 1, then 00:14:921 (14921|1,15053|1) - to col 4.
00:27:080 (27080|2,27212|3) - ctrl+h is better imo.
00:44:525 (44525|1) - move to col 3, for balance, because the col 3 is too empty at this part.
00:48:357 (48357|2) - move to col 4, easier for play. …… ln - note easy play for me Orz , maybe other not same as me ?
00:50:472 (50472|0) - ^
00:54:436 (54436|2,54569|0) - move to right side 1x easier for play and better flow.……↑↑↑
01:03:820 (63820|3) - move to col 2, better flow and more comfortable for play. …… same as 01:03:555 (63555|2,63555|3) - look like more feeling
01:09:899 (69899|0,70031|1) - move to right side 1x.

[HD]
00:24:701 (24701|1) - move to col 4, emphasis the piano sound and more comfortable for play.
00:41:353 (41353|0,41749|0) - ... etc, i know the kick sound still same, but it's better if you variate the col (mostly osumania chart always like that). …… i still want to all 1 Orz , my map is std chart and rating #1 xd
00:48:225 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550534 . …… same as NM
00:48:886 (48886|3,49282|3) - it's better to avoid a pattern like this may be try like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550537 . …… ↑↑↑
00:50:472 (50472|1) - move to col 1, ^

overall, the pitch relevancy is good, all you need is learn about balance, and the pattern that comfortable for play if you want to map a o!m mapset. …… ye i don't know everything about mania now , but i still want believe myself according my std experience , make different and have fun ! i will try find some mod and BN for mania , if its not enough to rank , i will delete it ……

actually i already map this song just fur fun, may be around 3 weeks ago, i can give you mine for the MX diff if you want https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550552 .

i think the song need a diff about 4 star , but i can't play mania > 3star , could you give me your diff ? if you don't mind maybe i will delete mania set XD

good luck! >w<b

Narcissu wrote:

ye i don't know everything about mania now , but i still want believe myself according my std experience , make different and have fun ! i will try find some mod and BN for mania , if its not enough to rank , i will delete it ……

Narcissu wrote:

i think the song need a diff about 4 star , but i can't play mania > 3star , could you give me your diff ? if you don't mind maybe i will delete mania set XD

Taeyang wrote:

M4M~

• General

1. All diff check out 'widescreen support'
2. Add 'dell' in tag

• Easy

1. 00:08:842 - ~00:13:071 - i think need mapping, because another diff mapped here …… ok
2. 00:42:674 (1,2,3) - i feel there rhythms a little hard ,just like this? …… ok
   
   SPOILER

   

• Normal

1. 00:28:666 - add clap sound …… fix
2. 00:37:652 (2) - ^ …… no clap here 233
3. 00:52:718 (2) - add whistle sound? …… ok

• Extra

1. 00:12:807 (6,1) - suggest; how do you think trill? like this …… no , i dislike reverse slider …… even if it's follow sound better , i follow music
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:14:128 (1,4,6) - move x:67 y:100 flow better …… good job , ok ;w;
3. 01:16:110 (4,5) - ctrl+g; i'm not sure antijumps …… i want to map more easy and different xd , random antijump amzing

i play it about 10~2 miss Orz ↓↓

cool~!

Taeyang wrote:

• Little's Hard

1. 00:08:842 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - try this NC That's too much.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:32:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think here rhythm a little weird Changed it back to 1/1 singles.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:45:846 (3,4,1) - use same DS No.

• Little's Insane

1. 00:30:912 (5) - just stack on 4circle fell better No, I prefer to keep moving.
2. 00:32:895 (5,6) - ^
3. 00:38:445 (1) - downbeat is here 00:38:181 (6) - remove NC and 00:38:445 (1) - NC here NC for readability.
4. 00:38:247 - 00:38:379 - add circle? 00:21:000 (4,5,6) - you catched background sound Slowdown for leading into the halftime section.
5. 01:00:648 - ~01:03:027 - why need slider velocity? I think it goes better with the vocals that way.

1. spacing on this 00:08:842 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - pattern is way different with 00:10:956 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ... this is weird because music is exactly the same, there isn't a change here, so maybe you could try to make them both consistent?
2. 00:12:807 (6,7,8) - i feel like this triplet doesn't fit really well in this part... maybe try something like a slow slider?
3. 00:15:185 (1) - nazi.... move this slightly down same distance with the previous objects
4. 00:17:036 (5,6) - these stacks felt weird to me , i can understand 00:16:771 (3,4) - those two because they're the same note in music, but 00:17:036 (5,6) - doesn't really have an explanation to me... maybe space them normally?
5. 00:20:075 (4,5) - decreasing spacing here didn't feel nice... i think there's no reason to do that, you could even make a triangle with those
6. 00:23:644 (1,2,3,4) - i can understand the reason of decreasing spacing here... but i think you should make clear about those, current pattern looks messy... maybe try something like you did 00:28:137 (2,3,4,5) - here? this might work
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:24:172 (5) - uhmm... i didn't really like this slider, because i think this beat 00:24:436 - should be clickable
8. 00:24:635 (7) - i think this note is needless, there isn't really a sound to map
9. 00:32:366 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this kinda breaks the patterns you were using before (i mean decreasing spacing in those parts)... isn't bad tho
10. 00:37:917 (2,3,4,5) - those 1/4 don't really fit the piano, you could try a 1/6 kickslider fits better imo
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:15:978 (3,4,5,6) - spacing in this pattern looks out of place in comparison with the previous
12. 01:18:357 (5,6) - same as first stack, you could move 6 to have better flow with 01:18:622 (1) -
    SPOILER

    

hokin1995 wrote:

路過
看到有新的mania 麻婆支持一下
加油

Kagetsu wrote:

hey! from queue

[Extra]

1. spacing on this 00:08:842 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - pattern is way different with 00:10:956 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ... this is weird because music is exactly the same, there isn't a change here, so maybe you could try to make them both consistent? …… random have fun , same spacing a bit boring for Extra diff
2. 00:12:807 (6,7,8) - i feel like this triplet doesn't fit really well in this part... maybe try something like a slow slider? …… no …… i think note follow paino better ……
3. 00:15:185 (1) - nazi.... move this slightly down same distance with the previous objects …… don't mind it xd , all same spacing not my wish
4. 00:17:036 (5,6) - these stacks felt weird to me , i can understand 00:16:771 (3,4) - those two because they're the same note in music, but 00:17:036 (5,6) - doesn't really have an explanation to me... maybe space them normally? ……
5. 00:20:075 (4,5) - decreasing spacing here didn't feel nice... i think there's no reason to do that, you could even make a triangle with those
6. 00:23:644 (1,2,3,4) - i can understand the reason of decreasing spacing here... but i think you should make clear about those, current pattern looks messy... maybe try something like you did 00:28:137 (2,3,4,5) - here? this might work …… all same not my wish ……
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:24:172 (5) - uhmm... i didn't really like this slider, because i think this beat 00:24:436 - should be clickable …… i follow voice …… so 00:24:172 (5) - is a group of …… and overmap for downbeat i think ok ↓↓↓ all 1/2 a bit boring , the song sound like bohemian ??
8. 00:24:635 (7) - i think this note is needless, there isn't really a sound to map ……
9. 00:32:366 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this kinda breaks the patterns you were using before (i mean decreasing spacing in those parts)... isn't bad tho …… as above , like 00:49:282 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:47:168 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - but not same ……
10. 00:37:917 (2,3,4,5) - those 1/4 don't really fit the piano, you could try a 1/6 kickslider fits better imo …… even if paino is 1/6 …… i think 1/4 note better than 1/6 slider for play
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:15:978 (3,4,5,6) - spacing in this pattern looks out of place in comparison with the previous ……
12. 01:18:357 (5,6) - same as first stack, you could move 6 to have better flow with 01:18:622 (1) -
    SPOILER

    

nice map (: good luck!

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

[Little's Insane]
00:19:943 (3,4,5) - why using straight jumps here? straight jumps is not easy to play It's not supposed to be easy. Straight jumps fit with the instrument melody there.
00:52:851 (3,4,5) - try this instead of straight jumps No, that's really awkward to play going from (4,) to (1). Antijump is nicer.
01:02:630 (1) - stick with 01:01:970 (2) - ? This is manual stack for readability.
01:05:009 (2,3) - blanket Sure.
im wondering if you care about the overlap of your map, cause these overlaps are annoying me when im modding =w=, although the overlap problem doesnt really effect the player when they are playing Overlaps are fine. I don't see why you should find them annoying.
00:16:243 (1,3) - 00:19:414 (1,3) - 00:25:229 (3,1) - 00:26:287 (3,1) - 00:30:780 (4,3) - 00:31:970 (1,4) - 00:33:027 (6,3) - 00:35:273 (1,3) - 00:51:000 (1,3) - 00:58:401 (1,4) - 01:00:119 (3,3) - 01:06:859 (1,3) - 01:08:049 (1,3) - 01:14:392 (1,3) - 01:15:450 (1,3) - 01:17:564 (1,4) -

MEGAtive wrote:

Remo Prototype [CV: Hanamori Yumiri] - Sendan Life

Column
|1|2|3|4|

Some mania terminology used here

Single, Double, Triple, Quad: The number of notes in one line.
LN (Long Note): Slider

[General]
Hitsounds: Hitsounded
Metadata: Looks good
Graphic: 1366x768
Timing: No problem here
Audio: 192kbps

[HD]

Mods

1. 00:10:956 - Should be a double here. Slider's end doesn't counted as a note. …… ok
2. 00:12:674 - Should be a double like 00:12:410…… ok
3. 00:12:873 (12873|2,12939|3) - I don't really recommend this. The glissando is playing in 1/12 snap. But either 1/12 or 1/6 aren't fit here. So make one of the notes at 00:12:807 as an LN. I prefer note in column |1| changed into LN.……… ok
4. 00:13:071 - I prefer you to change the pattern here into something like http://puu.sh/nevoA/bcb4c60438.png so it doesn't break the flow of the patterns here. …… i just add random note ,random have fun…… many part like this …… wait i find other opinion
5. 00:15:450 (15450|3,15582|1) - Switch these notes columns. It flows better than before.
6. 00:16:243 - You can change the pattern here into something like http://puu.sh/nevE4/4bbaaf25ae.png so it's nicer to play.
7. 00:21:000 - Rather than following the Glissando here, I prefer you to follow the Guitar and the Drum with pattern like …… ok http://puu.sh/nexj5/12912335e3.png
8. 00:21:529 until 00:37:256 - I think it's better for you to follow the guitars and additional notes from drum rather than following vocals. It's somewhat awkward in osu!mania to follow vocals. …… e , vocal obvious than drum so i follow it …… i think its ok
9. 00:46:771 - Quads are pretty awkward pattern in HD diffs, and MX are using Triple here. So delete one of the note.…… ok
10. 00:57:080 (57080|1,57080|0) - Move two times to the right. It's better that way.…… e …… i think it's follow voice better 【
11. 00:59:194 (59194|3,59194|2) - Move two times to the left. Same reason as before.
    
    Consistencies are mainly the issue here. Consistently following Drums, Guitars, or both are better. …… STD is same lol , many people only follow drum / guitar / paino, but i want to follow music not any sound , if vocal obvious than drum , i prefer emphasize voice not drum …… i need more opinion about mania xd

Only one diff. Other diffs later. Good Luck

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

From my queue

1pc test play
[Extra]
00:21:000 (3,4,5,6,7) - 何不擺整齊? ……整齊顯得呆板……我想弄的隨性一點
00:22:983 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 這裡擺得有點醜... 打HD的話這邊會變得很難讀……大丈夫
00:28:269 (3,4,5) - 00:28:269 (3,5) - CTRL +G 之後 00:28:401 (4,5) - CTRL +G 試試看, 00:28:137 (2,3,4,5) - 這邊DS突然變小顯得有點難打……因為歌詞是“一呆一呆” …… 這樣和其他地方不同會明顯一點
00:39:238 (3) - 何不這樣擺, 也可跟 00:38:842 (2) - 尾做blanket, 原本的還會overlap.....這種overlap 就是我想要的……我想要避免到處都一樣的樣式
00:49:943 (7) - 移到368 104 避免overlap, 或可跟 00:49:282 (2) - 重疊
00:56:947 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - 副歌ds擺這麼小實在有點怪, 這邊不是歌曲的高潮部分媽? …… 試試看擺這樣……好
00:58:798 (2,3,4,5) - 我也覺得這邊ds可以大點, 畢竟這邊是歌聲從低到高……好
01:01:441 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 3連打不適合這邊, 也沒跟到音樂或vocal..., 看要不要試試看這樣 …… 這兩個三連是overmap ，後面的人聲按下去就會很明顯
01:15:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同 00:22:983 (2,3,1,2,3,4) -
01:19:282 (4) - 貼著 01:19:547 (1) - ?
01:20:207 (3,4,5,6,7) - 同 00:21:000 (3,4,5,6,7) -

GL~ nice mapping tho XD
shoot a star

richardfeder wrote:

看一看mania~
只有一点小建议啦 我觉得挺好的呀 快去找摸 …… 嗯嗯

EZ

01:09:899 (69899|0) - 去掉 01:10:031 (70031|3) - 从01:09:899 - 开始, 然后最好一直写人声条子写到01:11:221 - .最后01:11:221 - 到01:12:278 - 这一个小节可以作难一点 不过其他的地方还是一个人声条子带过好一些…… 這裡我覺得應該做難一點……

NM好像抓音有点奇怪 要不要叫维多看一下呢……我一直覺得什麼明顯跟社麼是最好的，混搭Orz

HD

一些比较有特色的人声可以适当写成条子 比如00:35:670 (35670|2) - ,00:37:256 (37256|2,37520|2) - 当然只是个人感觉 实际上条子还是点都是可以的……這個有點多……我覺得全是圈按起來比較舒服
00:55:229 (55229|3,55229|0) - 可以放心大胆的加两个note把这个鼓点写上 毕竟是HD……移了一個上來，多了我自己打不了了Orz
然后就是有点overmap的问题 好像00:56:287 (56287|3,56551|0) - 比如这些没有音的地方都写了东西 还有00:59:459 (59459|0,59525|1) - 这种三连mania没有音是不可以放的233……有人聲，三連都去掉了
01:16:507 - 这里开始漏了一些比较重的鼓点呀 要不要考虑加上？01:16:771 (76771|1,77300|1) - 比如这些白线上的鼓点还有最后这一串很强的01:18:622 (78622|2,78622|0,78754|1,78886|3,79018|0,79150|2,79150|3,79282|1,79414|0,79547|1) - ……這邊也是二note我自己就完全按不動了……如果要整體弄難一點我再加 ;w;
HD其实可以再做难一点的呀233 不过这样也挺好

Good luck :3/

Dailycare wrote:

[General]
I know that Widescreen Support is for some storyboards. Please consider unchecking Widescreen Support if mania diffs shouldn't need it. …… don't mind it xd , it's not problem imo , i will fix it late beacuse i want gder update too many
01:08:049 - 01:10:163 - Why did you use only whistle sounds? I felt empty here. Please consider adding some clap sounds though you can't hear any sounds at this part. …… can't add 24clap …… so only add whistle / normal hit for voice

[Normal]
01:02:498 (2) - If you was following vocal, 3/4 is not a good choice. …… maybe xd
01:20:736 (1) - DS …… fix ;w;


it's awesome

Critical_Star wrote:

hi~
看看了一会儿～

column 1 2 3 4

EZ
00:37:520 (37520|1,37784|2) - i think here is a bit odd, maybe http://puu.sh/ngOIC/177df7ab34.png? a ln is suitable here 我還是想跟人聲……
01:10:560 (70560|1,70824|2,71088|1) - remove? i think is nice if u can follow those loud drum sound only for here, friendly for beginner …… 我覺得kiai結尾應該弄難一點……
EZ是很不错，不过要注意balance :3 …… Orz
NM
00:48:357 (48357|2) - move to 4? …… 這種滑條接圈我自己比較適應 = =
00:59:591 (59591|1,59591|0,60119|0,60119|1) - single note is enough here since it doesnt have the same loud as 00:59:855 (59855|2,59855|3,60384|3,60384|2) - …… 這裡想強調人聲高音……HD也是三個圈
01:03:820 (63820|2,63820|3) - move to 23? make the crash sound different column with 01:03:027 (63027|2,63027|3,63291|3,63291|2,63555|2,63555|3) - ……這樣疊起來有種停頓的感覺【
NM说话来有点奇怪，有些地方有抓有些没qwq 不过还是很不错～ …… orz
HD
00:13:599 (13599|1,13599|0,14128|1,14128|2,14657|3,14657|1) - hmm, why double for this sound? owo u should double the louder sound like 00:13:335 (13335|2,13864|3,14392|2,14921|0) - and so on …… 這邊我覺得應該按強弱次強弱放雙note……
00:22:322 (22322|1) - should be double here like 00:23:379 (23379|2,23379|1) - and so on, u missed lot of it here qwq 這邊聽上去安靜一點所以圈也少一點 ;w;
00:56:947 (56947|0,56947|1,57080|1,57080|0,57212|1,57212|0) - random double note? 00:56:947 (56947|0,56947|1,57080|0,57080|1) - this all single note should be enough …… 也是和NM一樣，下面那些也全是強調人聲 Orz
00:59:062 (59062|3,59062|2,59194|3,59194|2) - same like above ^ make it single note
01:00:119 (60119|2,60119|0,60119|3) - double note here
01:02:895 (62895|3,62895|0) - should be single note here since there is no loud drum sound here
01:05:406 (65406|0,65406|1,65538|0,65538|1) - like before make it single, it just a little sudden here with double note while the rest u mapped single note kick
01:08:049 (68049|2,68049|3,68445|1,68445|0,68842|3,68842|2,69370|1,69370|0) - hmm, consider to reduce them into a single LN and add some note for other instrumental here, i feel like there is missing much instrumental sound here
其实还能再多加note,不过也许还行吧～



我怎么会用英文mod啊哈哈不好意思 好运～ …… my english lv 2