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6th

Joined December 2014

6th 2016-01-13T18:02:14+00:00

[6th's Hard]
01:08:987 (1) (3) Make these straight down instead, I think it will look much nicer. Hmm thinking about it
01:32:880 there's a really weird pretty long break here before the break even starts. I thought the map ended! Hmm...new audio version or a long spinner to show its not ending? that would be overmapping :/

Thanks !

Poi Panda

87 posts

Joined July 2014

Poi Panda 2016-01-13T19:46:20+00:00

Hi!

Insane

01:39:844 (1,2,3) - These being spaced looks really weird when the other triple before it wasn't spaced.
02:37:158 (2) - Unsnapped note here

6th's Hard

00:24:758 (4,5,1,2) - I personally find this overlap slightly ugly, I'd move the 4 and 5 to someplace else for better flow and to make it look nicer.
00:31:272 (3) - I feel a slider would fit better here.
00:34:015 (3,4) - The 4 being directly under the 3 makes it hard to time properly, consider moving it.

Weegle's Normal

00:28:872 (7,1) - Position of the 1 really breaks the flow here. Consider moving the 6 and 7 so they flow into the 1, or changing the position of the 1.
00:44:129 (6,1) - The 6 looks very awkwardly placed, consider moving to (144,112)
02:13:444 (1,2,3,4) - The 4 looks very out of place, consider moving to make it look more in place.
02:37:272 (5,6) - I would place a slider here instead of the 2 single notes.

Shmiklak's Easy

No issues as far as I can see

Good mapset overall

. Apologies if I missed anything, hopefully this helps! Good luck

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

6th 2016-01-13T22:18:23+00:00

PoisonPanda wrote:
6th's Hard
00:24:758 (4,5,1,2) - I personally find this overlap slightly ugly, I'd move the 4 and 5 to someplace else for better flow and to make it look nicer. Changed for the 3rd time. I hope it's fine now. ):
00:31:272 (3) - I feel a slider would fit better here.
00:34:015 (3,4) - The 4 being directly under the 3 makes it hard to time properly, consider moving it. Changed

Thank you !

Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Shyotamaze 2016-01-14T00:08:33+00:00

PoisonPanda wrote:
Hi!

Insane
01:39:844 (1,2,3) - These being spaced looks really weird when the other triple before it wasn't spaced. Fixed
02:37:158 (2) - Unsnapped note here Fixed

6th's Hard
00:24:758 (4,5,1,2) - I personally find this overlap slightly ugly, I'd move the 4 and 5 to someplace else for better flow and to make it look nicer.
00:31:272 (3) - I feel a slider would fit better here.
00:34:015 (3,4) - The 4 being directly under the 3 makes it hard to time properly, consider moving it.

Weegle's Normal
00:28:872 (7,1) - Position of the 1 really breaks the flow here. Consider moving the 6 and 7 so they flow into the 1, or changing the position of the 1.
00:44:129 (6,1) - The 6 looks very awkwardly placed, consider moving to (144,112)
02:13:444 (1,2,3,4) - The 4 looks very out of place, consider moving to make it look more in place.
02:37:272 (5,6) - I would place a slider here instead of the 2 single notes.

Shmiklak's Easy
No issues as far as I can see

Good mapset overall . Apologies if I missed anything, hopefully this helps! Good luck

EDIT: whoops forgot to say thanks to you

~~pls stay polite Shyo~~

Video

232 posts

Joined June 2014

Video 2016-01-15T05:03:49+00:00

PoisonPanda wrote:
Hi!

Weegle's Normal
00:28:872 (7,1) - Position of the 1 really breaks the flow here. Consider moving the 6 and 7 so they flow into the 1, or changing the position of the 1. - rearranged the notes for better flow
00:44:129 (6,1) - The 6 looks very awkwardly placed, consider moving to (144,112) - oops, must have been a misclick on my part, fixed the ugliness
02:13:444 (1,2,3,4) - The 4 looks very out of place, consider moving to make it look more in place. - i like how it looks, it zig-zags then makes a square (includes slider)
02:37:272 (5,6) - I would place a slider here instead of the 2 single notes. - suggestion taken, fixed

Good mapset overall . Apologies if I missed anything, hopefully this helps! Good luck

thanks for the mod :3

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I'll also try to keep updating this with the mods you get, but if i dont respond to a mod within a week, just pm me in-game or message me through the website

Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Shyotamaze 2016-01-19T01:53:54+00:00

Yay! Finally hitsounded, thanks to Classwork

Video

232 posts

Joined June 2014

Video 2016-01-21T20:32:33+00:00

Update from website pm

changed the suggested note replacement at 01:17:215

updated shizzle

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Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Shyotamaze 2016-01-30T20:14:10+00:00

Ughh, finding modders is hard af

@GDers sorry to make you wait, trying my best to get mods right now, ily

Jonarwhal

1,222 posts

Joined November 2013

Jonarwhal 2016-01-31T00:22:25+00:00

Shyotamaze wrote:
Ughh, finding modders is hard af

@GDers sorry to make you wait, trying my best to get mods right now, ily

I didn't forget about you~! NM request from my queue~

General

Normal has a lower slider velocity than Easy. Consider changing that.
There's too much of a difficulty gap between Normal and Hard. Consider making a difficulty between Normal and Hard.

Easy

00:20:987 (1,1) - Allow more time for the player to recover after the spinner.
00:27:844 (1) - Consider using the slider's red tick to emphasize 00:28:015 - here or 00:28:187 - here.
00:30:244 (4,1) - Unstack these. Example.
00:30:929 (2) - This looks messy. Make the points look like this "ϟ" or like this.
00:40:872 (6,1) - Fix the polarity. If you don't know what polarity is, check this.
01:03:501 (1,2) - These look too squished together. Spread it farther out.
01:08:301 (4,1) - ^
01:36:415 (1,2) - ^ I'll stop with that now.
01:40:187 (3,4,5) - This is too hard for Easy players to read. Consider changing the placement whenever you stack after one object in Easy.
01:41:901 (1,1) - Allow more time for the player to recover after the spinner.
01:49:787 (4,5) - Make this a slider so it's easier to play.
02:03:844 (1,2,3,4) - Fix blankets.
02:12:758 (2,3) - ^

Normal

Some parts seem too Hard for Normal, like putting two circles after a slider. In cases like this, it should just be a slider.
Other parts seem too Easy for Normal, like the Slider Velocity of x0.85.
Keep that in mind.
00:24:244 (3) - Don't break DS in Normal. DS is required for the most part in Normal.
00:25:101 (6) - Making this a curved slider would make the circular flow better.
00:27:158 (3) - ^
00:29:558 (2) - Move the bottom part left to help the flow to the next object.
00:48:415 (3) - Don't use double-repeating sliders. Some mappers think they look messy.
00:50:472 (3) - Move the left part up for better flow.
01:50:129 (1) - Make this more curvy for a better blanket.
01:57:329 (5,1,2) - This overlap can be avoided by moving 01:58:701 (2,3) - these downward.

Hard

I'm not sure whether you should make this easier and make it more like a Hard, or make it harder and make it an Insane.
If you're going to keep it as a Hard, 00:24:072 (2,3) - Don't make sliders that require going backwards after completing them, this is actually bad flow in any difficulty. I understand that you're trying to make a hard jump, but you can do that without hurting flow. Also, 00:24:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Don't use this many consecutive circles. I'm not going to point out every time I see these things.
Besides that:

01:05:730 (7,1) - Fix blanket.
01:06:930 (3,4) - ^
01:52:187 (7,8) - These shouldn't be touching.

And besides that, I actually really like this diff! ^^

Insane

So many streams and they all look so good ^^

00:29:558 (1,2,3) - Fix Triangle.
02:39:587 (1) - End the spinner on the white tick.

That's all~! I hope this helps. Good Luck~!

Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Shyotamaze 2016-01-31T03:21:37+00:00

jonawaga wrote:
Shyotamaze wrote:
Ughh, finding modders is hard af

@GDers sorry to make you wait, trying my best to get mods right now, ily
I didn't forget about you~! NM request from my queue~ Yay!

General
Normal has a lower slider velocity than Easy. Consider changing that.
There's too much of a difficulty gap between Normal and Hard. Consider making a difficulty between Normal and Hard.
Insane
So many streams and they all look so good ^^
00:29:558 (1,2,3) - Fix Triangle. It is intended to not be a "real" triangle, it's more like a little "jump" but I'll see
02:39:587 (1) - End the spinner on the white tick. Fixed
That's all~! I hope this helps. Good Luck~!

Thank you!

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

6th 2016-01-31T20:07:05+00:00

SPOILER

I'm not sure whether you should make this easier and make it more like a Hard, or make it harder and make it an Insane.
If you're going to keep it as a Hard, 00:24:072 (2,3) - Don't make sliders that require going backwards after completing them, this is actually bad flow in any difficulty. I understand that you're trying to make a hard jump, but you can do that without hurting flow. Also, 00:24:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Don't use this many consecutive circles. I'm not going to point out every time I see these things.
Besides that:
01:05:730 (7,1) - Fix blanket.
01:06:930 (3,4) - ^
01:52:187 (7,8) - These shouldn't be touching.
And besides that, I actually really like this diff! ^^

just fixed all ! thanks

Video

232 posts

Joined June 2014

Video 2016-01-31T22:00:35+00:00

jonawaga wrote:
[General]
Normal has a lower slider velocity than Easy. Consider changing that. - up to 1.00 that is good for NM diffs
[Normal]
Some parts seem too Hard for Normal, like putting two circles after a slider. In cases like this, it should just be a slider. - fixed what i thought was too complex for NM diff
Other parts seem too Easy for Normal, like the Slider Velocity of x0.85. - fixed to 1.00
00:24:244 (3) - Don't break DS in Normal. DS is required for the most part in Normal. - patched up some messy DS sections
00:25:101 (6) - Making this a curved slider would make the circular flow better. - okay fix
00:27:158 (3) - ^ - ^
00:29:558 (2) - Move the bottom part left to help the flow to the next object. - good idea
00:48:415 (3) - Don't use double-repeating sliders. Some mappers think they look messy. - i agree for the most part but i think the beat makes a good exception for the use of a repeating slider
i also did go through the map and remove any unneeded repeating sliders
00:50:472 (3) - Move the left part up for better flow. - okay
01:50:129 (1) - Make this more curvy for a better blanket. - okay
01:57:329 (5,1,2) - This overlap can be avoided by moving 01:58:701 (2,3) - these downward. - I played around with the notes a bit and got it to my liking, thanks for suggestion
That's all~! I hope this helps. Good Luck~!

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GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.200006

[Metadata]
Title:Orpheus
TitleUnicode:Orpheus
Artist:Clonepa
ArtistUnicode:Clonepa
Creator:Shyotamaze
Version:Weegle's Normal
Source:
Tags:courroux breakcore orchestral symphonic nokore records shmiklak 6th weegle
BeatmapID:877572
BeatmapSetID:371634

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.999999904632569
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"maxresdefault (1).jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,57871,62301
2,79987,92472
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,106 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2016-02-01T11:28:41+00:00

From my queue

1pc test play

[Insane]
00:26:987 (1) - NC off
01:53:558 (1) - ^
00:30:929 (1) - ^
00:32:987 (4) - ^
00:34:015 (3) - ^
01:56:301 (1) - ^
01:57:672 (1) - ^
02:11:387 (1) - ^
02:20:644 (1) - ^
02:28:187 (1) - ^
00:33:329 (1) - NC
01:55:958 (2) - ^
01:58:358 (6) - ^
02:04:187 (2) - ^
02:20:815 (2) - ^
00:36:758 (9,1) - make DS bigger, player will confused here
00:43:187 (6) - delete and add note at 00:43:187 - and 00:43:272 -
00:57:672 (2) - change to a straight line
01:35:815 (10) - should start at 01:35:901 - , like 01:41:301 (10,11) - here
02:04:187 (2) - overlap with 02:03:844 (1) -
02:03:844 (1) - triplet here, delete 02:07:015 (2) -
02:36:887 (1) - move to 02:36:929 -
02:37:158 (2) - to 02:37:158 (2) -
02:36:887 - no use green line
02:37:272 - ^

GL~

Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Shyotamaze 2016-02-01T18:39:05+00:00

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
From my queue

1pc test play

[Insane]
00:26:987 (1) - NC off Fixed
01:53:558 (1) - ^ ^
00:30:929 (1) - ^ ^
00:32:987 (4) - ^ ^
00:34:015 (3) - ^ ^
01:56:301 (1) - ^ ^
01:57:672 (1) - ^ ^
02:11:387 (1) - ^ ^
02:20:644 (1) - ^ ^
02:28:187 (1) - ^ ^
00:33:329 (1) - NC ^
01:55:958 (2) - ^ ^
01:58:358 (6) - ^ ^
02:04:187 (2) - ^ ^
02:20:815 (2) - ^ Fine imo
00:36:758 (9,1) - make DS bigger, player will confused here Fixed
00:43:187 (6) - delete and add note at 00:43:187 - and 00:43:272 - Fixed
00:57:672 (2) - change to a straight line Changed a bit
01:35:815 (10) - should start at 01:35:901 - , like 01:41:301 (10,11) - here Fixed
02:04:187 (2) - overlap with 02:03:844 (1) - Did the opposite
02:03:844 (1) - triplet here, delete 02:07:015 (2) - Fine imo
02:36:887 (1) - move to 02:36:929 - Fixed
02:37:158 (2) - to 02:37:158 (2) - Huh? it's the same time, well, changed to 02:37:187
02:36:887 - no use green line Not sure about this, I'll see
02:37:272 - ^ ^

GL~

Thanks!

Puhehuhe

34 posts

Joined March 2015

Puhehuhe 2016-02-04T16:22:25+00:00

M4M the second half :3.

Shmik's Easy

01:14:987 (2) - Maybe no curve and horizontally flat
02:27:158 (3,4,1) - Flip the slider and mirror rest to the other side, better flow imo

Weegle's Normal

00:47:729 (2) - Curves up

6th's Hard

00:39:844 (4,1) - Curve (1) and move (4) so they won't collide
00:49:272 (6) - Lower this a little
01:28:358 (1) - Smoother spiral, little pointy curve at the start
02:21:672 (1) - Looks weird, why not end the slider on to 02:22:701 (3) - with less curve

Insane

00:32:301 (2) - Mirror to the right and with sharp curve maybe
01:57:672 (5) - End more higher
02:13:101 (5) - This feels out of place, prefer 02:10:701 (1) - style
02:28:529 (1) - NC
02:31:444 (2) - NC off

Cosmetic oriented mod, there were no really any big problems imo.
Good luck

Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Shyotamaze 2016-02-04T17:37:32+00:00

Puhehuhe wrote:
M4M the second half :3.

Insane
00:32:301 (2) - Mirror to the right and with sharp curve maybe Fine imo
01:57:672 (5) - End more higher Fixed
02:13:101 (5) - This feels out of place, prefer 02:10:701 (1) - style Fixed
02:28:529 (1) - NC Fixed
02:31:444 (2) - NC off Fixed
Cosmetic oriented mod, there were no really any big problems imo.
Good luck

Thank you!

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

6th 2016-02-05T21:30:52+00:00

SPOILER

6th's Hard
00:39:844 (4,1) - Curve (1) and move (4) so they won't collide It was intended :/
00:49:272 (6) - Lower this a little
01:28:358 (1) - Smoother spiral, little pointy curve at the start
02:21:672 (1) - Looks weird, why not end the slider on to 02:22:701 (3) - with less curve Changed

Thank you !

Video

232 posts

Joined June 2014

Video 2016-02-05T21:44:12+00:00

thanks for the pm!

no updates to my map from that mod though >v<

SuperMIC

420 posts

Joined July 2011

SuperMIC 2016-02-06T21:36:26+00:00

queue

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[Shmik's Easy]

01:40:529 (4) - new combo

completely clean otherwise

[Weegle's Normal]

This difficulty seems to be lacking in hitsounds. :S

00:38:815 (1,2,3) - Bad flow for a Normal. Should curve out at least a bit.

SPOILER

00:52:529 (1,2) - These can blanket better. (2) should curve less.

SPOILER

01:19:787 (5) - Just make this in line with (4). Try x:320 y:272
01:36:415 (5,6,7) - Spacing between (6) and (7) is inconsistent.
01:39:844 (2,6) - (2) should be stacked under the end of (6)
01:41:901 (1) - Should be facing the other direction:

SPOILER

01:57:329 (5,1) - (1) should be further from (5).
01:59:387 (3,4) - and (4) needs to be much closer to (3)
02:01:787 (3,4) - ^
02:19:958 (7,1) - (1) should be further from (7)
02:25:787 (3,4) - make parallel?

[6th's Hard]

I think the streams and 1/4 in the difficulty should be compressed, especially because the BPM is higher than average. I think the spacing at 00:36:758 (3,4,5) is perfect.

As in Normal, I think this difficulty needs more hitsounding, particularly during the first sections.

00:42:072 (2,3) - Make parallel?
01:07:272 (3) - Stack normally under (2).
01:22:872 (1,1) - These shapes can definitely be improved to look better.
01:28:358 (1) - This one is pretty good, but you should delete the anchor (red) point at make it curvy all the way around.
02:18:758 (4,5,1) - This should really form one straight line.
02:24:329 - Missed a beat here, add a circle?
02:24:844 - ^
02:26:815 (4,5,1) - Make this one straight line.
02:31:272 (1) - Try to make this perfectly symmetrical.

[Insane]

00:36:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - A lot of this stream does not exist in the music.

The 1/4 in this section is spaced interestingly, but I'd prefer if it was all spaced consistently unless there's some change in the music.

01:13:957 (7,1,2) - Should be spaced way further apart.
01:20:129 (1) - Slider shape can be improved, and I think it would play much more intuitively if this slider was extended so it starts on the long white tick
01:22:872 (1) - Can be improved. Blanket this carefully.
01:28:358 (1) - Doesn't look good.

The kiai section should space 1/2 further apart than it is; the music is fast but the map plays quite slowly.

01:59:129 - Missing note?
02:00:501 - ^

Regarding this section which I started outlining above, I understand you're mapping to the harpsichord but you really should fit in the drum line as well.

02:06:929 - Missing note

Again, this section feels like it should play much faster as an Insane. Needs higher spacing.

02:28:529 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Section needs to be cleaned up in terms of aesthetics. Slider shapes can be improved and slider overlap should really be avoided.

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GL

-SMIC

agusch

152 posts

Joined January 2014

agusch 2016-02-07T01:21:57+00:00

Hello

Shmik's Easy

00:23:044 - Not really important but here u could made a blanket with the spinner >> for example http://puu.sh/mYpEj/00e844e648.jpg
00:26:987 - I would change that overlap
00:52:529 (1) - This have flow but in my opinion it could be better with ctrl+h
01:15:844 (3) - nice slider, I think that it could be better if u put corners in this ticks 01:16:187 - 01:16:529 -
01:54:244 (3) - same here

Weegle's Normal

01:41:558 (6) - I would made an overlap with that note and the end of this slider 01:39:844 (2) -
01:59:387 (3,4) - I don't know if this jump is okay in a normal diff

Insane

00:46:444 (5) - 02:13:701 (6) - 02:16:958 (5) - I would place this sliders in withe or red tick instead of blue tick, cause I start streaming with the index finger and need to change to middle finger.

That's all, I'm new to modding, I hope this help you.

Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Shyotamaze 2016-02-07T19:18:06+00:00

SuperMICrophone wrote:
queue

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[Insane]

00:36:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - A lot of this stream does not exist in the music. It may feel weird but it does exist, listen in 25%

The 1/4 in this section is spaced interestingly, but I'd prefer if it was all spaced consistently unless there's some change in the music. Fixed

01:13:957 (7,1,2) - Should be spaced way further apart. Fixed
01:20:129 (1) - Slider shape can be improved, and I think it would play much more intuitively if this slider was extended so it starts on the long white tick Fixed
01:22:872 (1) - Can be improved. Blanket this carefully. Fixed
01:28:358 (1) - Doesn't look good. Fixed

The kiai section should space 1/2 further apart than it is; the music is fast but the map plays quite slowly.

01:59:129 - Missing note? Not the same instrument as 3 and 4 but I'll see
02:00:501 - ^ Fixed

Regarding this section which I started outlining above, I understand you're mapping to the harpsichord but you really should fit in the drum line as well.

02:06:929 - Missing note Nope, listen in 25%

Again, this section feels like it should play much faster as an Insane. Needs higher spacing. I'll see about this one

02:28:529 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Section needs to be cleaned up in terms of aesthetics. Slider shapes can be improved and slider overlap should really be avoided. I will try to improve it later

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GL

-SMIC

Thanks!

agusch wrote:
Hello

Insane

00:46:444 (5) - 02:13:701 (6) - 02:16:958 (5) - I would place this sliders in withe or red tick instead of blue tick, cause I start streaming with the index finger and need to change to middle finger. Fixed

That's all, I'm new to modding, I hope this help you.

Thank you!

Video

232 posts

Joined June 2014

Video 2016-02-07T20:14:00+00:00

SuperMICrophone wrote:
[Weegle's Normal]

This difficulty seems to be lacking in hitsounds. :S - I'll fix that, i had an old version of all the difficulties so they had no hitsounds

00:38:815 (1,2,3) - Bad flow for a Normal. Should curve out at least a bit. - fixed

SPOILER

00:52:529 (1,2) - These can blanket better. (2) should curve less. - fixed

SPOILER

01:19:787 (5) - Just make this in line with (4). Try x:320 y:272 - fixed
01:36:415 (5,6,7) - Spacing between (6) and (7) is inconsistent. fixed
01:39:844 (2,6) - (2) should be stacked under the end of (6) - fixed
01:41:901 (1) - Should be facing the other direction: - fixed

SPOILER

01:57:329 (5,1) - (1) should be further from (5). - fixed
01:59:387 (3,4) - and (4) needs to be much closer to (3) - wow im bad, oops, fixed
02:01:787 (3,4) - ^ - ^^^^^
02:19:958 (7,1) - (1) should be further from (7) - fixed
02:25:787 (3,4) - make parallel? - fixed

agusch wrote:
Weegle's Normal

01:41:558 (6) - I would made an overlap with that note and the end of this slider 01:39:844 (2) - fixed
01:59:387 (3,4) - I don't know if this jump is okay in a normal diff - fixed

UPDATED WITH HITSOUNDS

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256,192,159672,12,0,164987,0:0:0:0:

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

6th 2016-02-07T21:10:28+00:00

SPOILER

[6th's Hard]

I think the streams and 1/4 in the difficulty should be compressed, especially because the BPM is higher than average. I think the spacing at 00:36:758 (3,4,5) is perfect.
00:42:072 (2,3) - Make parallel?
01:07:272 (3) - Stack normally under (2).
01:22:872 (1,1) - These shapes can definitely be improved to look better. will work on it
01:28:358 (1) - This one is pretty good, but you should delete the anchor (red) point at make it curvy all the way around.
02:18:758 (4,5,1) - This should really form one straight line.
02:24:329 - Missed a beat here, add a circle?
02:24:844 - ^
02:26:815 (4,5,1) - Make this one straight line.
02:31:272 (1) - Try to make this perfectly symmetrical.

I just applied all. It will be updated soon

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Shmiklak 2016-02-08T14:43:48+00:00

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

dqs01733

296 posts

Joined October 2013

dqs01733 2016-02-13T23:51:04+00:00

from free mods queue

[6th's Hard]

00:48:929 (5) - could u move this down a bit? so the head is more in line with the direction from 00:48:415 (4) - . you can probably move all this 00:48:929 (5,6,7) -
01:05:729 (4,1) - maybe you can make some overlap.. like this
01:11:215 (4,1) - you could make them blanket
02:27:072 (5,1) - you never stacked triplet during this sections.. you should make them like the previous so its moer consistent.

[Insane]

00:27:758 (10,1) - this is a lot smaller distance snap like other triplets.. you should make same as other for consistency
00:37:615 (3) - i think you should make same distance with this between 00:37:272 (2) - and 00:37:272 (2) - , it looks cleaner
01:37:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - can you make it even curve? i dont think it looks very good when it gradually curves more like that.. and it doesnt fit music either
02:34:101 (1) - its not snapped to right beat.. each repeat should land on the blue ticks.
02:36:929 (1,2,3) - same with this

hope its helpful, not good with modding below hard sorry ~
good luck

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

6th 2016-02-14T18:35:20+00:00

SPOILER

[6th's Hard]
00:48:929 (5) - could u move this down a bit? so the head is more in line with the direction from 00:48:415 (4) - . you can probably move all this 00:48:929 (5,6,7) -
01:05:729 (4,1) - maybe you can make some overlap.. like this sry it looks fine imo
01:11:215 (4,1) - you could make them blanket mhm I don't really see what you meant there
02:27:072 (5,1) - you never stacked triplet during this sections.. you should make them like the previous so its moer consistent. I changed the other triplets

Thanks !

Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Shyotamaze 2016-02-14T18:54:31+00:00

dqs01733 wrote:
from free mods queue

[Insane]
00:27:758 (10,1) - this is a lot smaller distance snap like other triplets.. you should make same as other for consistency Fixed
00:37:615 (3) - i think you should make same distance with this between 00:37:272 (2) - and 00:37:272 (2) - , it looks cleaner Fixed
01:37:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - can you make it even curve? i dont think it looks very good when it gradually curves more like that.. and it doesnt fit music either Fine imo and yes it fits the music ;_;
02:34:101 (1) - its not snapped to right beat.. each repeat should land on the blue ticks. Deleted this part since it's a lot of problems lol
02:36:929 (1,2,3) - same with this This one is fine imo
hope its helpful, not good with modding below hard sorry ~
good luck

Thanks!

Cryptic

551 posts

Joined December 2013

Cryptic 2016-02-15T21:13:05+00:00

From #modreqs

[Insane]

00:21:115 (1) - Move the spinner onto the blue tick as thats where the sounds start, they just are at a lower volume. Take the hitsound off of the spinner end as well.
00:31:958 (1) - Why did you stop mapping the drums here? I don't get that choice.
00:36:072 (1) - Why are your hitsounds 5%? Thats absolutely horrible for players.
00:48:929 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - These both sound like 1/16th or 1/8th streams to me
00:57:158 (2,1,2) - You stop following the drums at really weird times, it doesn't really play right to me.
Huge tip for your sliders: Take a circle and put it in the middle of where you want the slider to curve around. Then, use that circles approach-circle to mold your slider. Boom! Perfect circular sliders!
01:55:958 (1) - I don't like that you don't follow the drums again. I don't really like the drum > string/synth alternation you do throughout the song. For this melody you should make a decision on whether or not you'll put in the bass throughout the entire song or just leave out the bass for this part. Obviously this is just my opinion, a BN would have better advice regarding this.
02:23:558 (1,2) - Theres some fast 1/16ths or something again here that you're leaving out
02:31:444 (2) - Move this on to the blue tick? Its following the trumpet right? Also, this one needs some TLC its a bit ugly.
02:39:587 (1) - In general, and this spinner is fine btw, I don't know if I agree with the slider art ending. I think the song should have ended on the head of this slider 02:28:529 (1) - rather than drawing it out so much farther. Because the end is just boring.

[]
Good luck!

Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Shyotamaze 2016-02-15T23:10:59+00:00

CrypticMech wrote:
From #modreqs

[Insane]
00:21:115 (1) - Move the spinner onto the blue tick as thats where the sounds start, they just are at a lower volume. Take the hitsound off of the spinner end as well. Fixed
00:31:958 (1) - Why did you stop mapping the drums here? I don't get that choice. It's good to not map always the same instrument I think or it'll be boring quickly
00:36:072 (1) - Why are your hitsounds 5%? Thats absolutely horrible for players. Oh damn, totally forgot to put another timing thing lol thanks!
00:48:929 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - These both sound like 1/16th or 1/8th streams to me Fixed
00:57:158 (2,1,2) - You stop following the drums at really weird times, it doesn't really play right to me. Fixed
Huge tip for your sliders: Take a circle and put it in the middle of where you want the slider to curve around. Then, use that circles approach-circle to mold your slider. Boom! Perfect circular sliders!
01:55:958 (1) - I don't like that you don't follow the drums again. I don't really like the drum > string/synth alternation you do throughout the song. For this melody you should make a decision on whether or not you'll put in the bass throughout the entire song or just leave out the bass for this part. Obviously this is just my opinion, a BN would have better advice regarding this. I like the way it is now, I'll see later with a BN or something
02:23:558 (1,2) - Theres some fast 1/16ths or something again here that you're leaving out Seems fine to me, I don't want the map to be full of kicksliders ;_;
02:31:444 (2) - Move this on to the blue tick? Its following the trumpet right? Also, this one needs some TLC its a bit ugly. Yea this one is kinda ugly, I'll try to fix it later
02:39:587 (1) - In general, and this spinner is fine btw, I don't know if I agree with the slider art ending. I think the song should have ended on the head of this slider 02:28:529 (1) - rather than drawing it out so much farther. Because the end is just boring. The end may be boring but it needs to be mapped, look at every map with "boring" slider art
[]
Good luck!

Thanks!

Warpyc

406 posts

Joined August 2013

Warpyc 2016-02-17T20:43:58+00:00

Hi!

Insane

00:01:786 - You didnt map intro :c you could have done some cool sliders but no big deal
00:26:472 (1,2,3) - Copy this and paste here 00:26:987 (5,6,7) -
01:37:101 (1,2,3) - Curve triipple to flow better into (4)
01:54:929 - No note? There is a strong breat here I would defenitely map this
01:55:272 - ^
01:55:444 - ^
02:18:587 (1) - Slider is too curved why dont you blanket with 02:19:101 (4) -
02:19:101 (4) - I dont like how this slider is overlapped by 02:18:587 (1) - Looks pretty bad unlike the rest of the map, I'd recommend to move it elsewhere
02:31:358 (2) - This is not an atractive slider at all...
02:34:015 (3) - why dont you map the sounds inside the slider like you did here 02:36:929 (1,2,3,4) - ?

Weegle's Normal
This diff is completely unrankable due to not using ds which is a requirement for normal difficulties, try remapping using anywhere from 0.7-1 in distance snap!

Shmik's Easy
Looks clean but remove all unused inherited timing points (the green ones)

Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Shyotamaze 2016-02-17T21:39:02+00:00

Warpyc wrote:
Hi!

[notice]

Insane
00:01:786 - You didnt map intro :c you could have done some cool sliders but no big deal Yea I think it already has enough long slider parts, I don't want to make a too "boring" map lol
00:26:472 (1,2,3) - Copy this and paste here 00:26:987 (5,6,7) - Fixed
01:37:101 (1,2,3) - Curve triipple to flow better into (4) Fixed
01:54:929 - No note? There is a strong breat here I would defenitely map this Fixed
01:55:272 - ^ ^
01:55:444 - ^ ^
02:18:587 (1) - Slider is too curved why dont you blanket with 02:19:101 (4) - Fixed
02:19:101 (4) - I dont like how this slider is overlapped by 02:18:587 (1) - Looks pretty bad unlike the rest of the map, I'd recommend to move it elsewhere Fixed
02:31:358 (2) - This is not an atractive slider at all... Yeah ikr, I'll try to fix it because right now it looks really meh lmao
02:34:015 (3) - why dont you map the sounds inside the slider like you did here 02:36:929 (1,2,3,4) - ? I already did it before but it was really awkward to play so I made some direction changes in one long slider instead

Thank you!

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Shmiklak 2016-02-18T12:41:22+00:00

VERY LITTLE UPDATE

wajinshu

1,579 posts

Joined April 2015

wajinshu 2016-02-19T08:10:07+00:00

mod
Ой фсе я тебе помогу нази модом хД
Shmiklak - убери нафиг вайдскрин
00:20:987 (1) - ой лол ну все, должно быть 4 белых тика, че ты, я не узнаю тебя
00:26:472 (1,1) - Его можно стакануть но ты даже не пытался
00:43:958 (4,1) - Пофиксь стак (порнография)
01:06:244 (1,2) - ДАВАЙ БЛАНКЕТ!!!!!!!!!!!!
02:12:758 (2,3) - ПОПРАВЬ БЛАНКЕТ
все

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Shmiklak 2016-02-20T10:01:01+00:00

wajinshu wrote:
mod
Ой фсе я тебе помогу нази модом хД
Shmiklak - убери нафиг вайдскрин ладно
00:20:987 (1) - ой лол ну все, должно быть 4 белых тика, че ты, я не узнаю тебя говорю же давно уже это было
00:26:472 (1,1) - Его можно стакануть но ты даже не пытался дс не позволяет. Да и не нужно это
00:43:958 (4,1) - Пофиксь стак (порнография) он и так ровный .-.
01:06:244 (1,2) - ДАВАЙ БЛАНКЕТ!!!!!!!!!!!! ну ок
02:12:758 (2,3) - ПОПРАВЬ БЛАНКЕТ фиксед
все

Моя сестренка мод сделала :3

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

xDarxen

313 posts

Joined July 2014

xDarxen 2016-02-21T09:31:31+00:00

hey hey

[General]

The fact that both Normal and Easy diffs have OD 5 and HP 5 is wierd, since Easy is supposed to be easier. I suggest you decrease them on Easy. Also the CS goes from 2 to 4, which is a big gap for noobies.

[Easy]

00:26:472 (1,2) - This is way too hard for new players to read, because you combine two advanced things: an overlap and a reverse slider.
The sound is the same with 00:23:729 (1,2) - but it is mapped differently, so why not use the same pattern again?
00:30:929 (2) - This will flow better if you make it vertical like this:

Reference
01:14:472 (1,2) - Same as above. Here you can use this rhythm:

Reference
01:37:787 (3) - This feels wierd because the sound ends on the red tick but this is extended till the downbeat.
The outro is mapped in all the other diffs. Consider adding atleast a spinner.

[Normal]

Check the distance snap. Apparently, there are some spacing issues.
00:24:072 (2) - Rotate a little to the right for better flow.
01:11:558 (7) - This ends on the downbeat and messes up everything. You can try this rhythm:

Reference
01:35:730 (4,7) - You can avoid this overlap, because it makes it ugly.

[Hard]

Every other diff has a spinner in the beginning, so maybe add one?
00:38:815 (1) - This is nearly touching the stream and looks unattractive. Try stacking the tail of the slider to 00:37:787 (2)

Reference

If you do that, then you have to adjast the spacing after. You don't have to follow the DS so precisely on Hard diffs afterall. You can always add some jumps.
01:11:729 (1) - You can move this to the middle of 01:11:215 (4) to create a blanket.
01:12:929 (4) - This ends on the downbeat and messes up everything. You can try this rhythm:

Reference
02:28:358 - Add a break.

[Insane]

00:21:072 (1) - Why does it start on the blue tick? Both in Easy and Normal it starts on the downbeat.
00:25:701 - The gap between reverses feels wierd. Extend 00:25:444 (7) for one tick.
00:37:787 (4,1) - The slider starts on the blue tick an it feels unnatural. Move 00:37:872 (1) on the red tick and add a circle on its place to play like a triple. Nice.
00:43:529 (10) - Same^ Those kind of sliders should NEVER start on blue ticks. Move it on the downbeat and add a circle on its place. (Readjust the spacing if you do)
02:11:215 (2,3,4,5,6) - Move this a little to the left for better flow and to avoid touching 02:10:529 (5)
02:21:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stack to 02:20:644 (4)?

Oki dat's it. Good luck

Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Shyotamaze 2016-02-21T17:02:29+00:00

xDarxen wrote:
hey hey

[Insane]
00:21:072 (1) - Why does it start on the blue tick? Both in Easy and Normal it starts on the downbeat. Fixed, lol this spinner gets a lot of complains
00:25:701 - The gap between reverses feels wierd. Extend 00:25:444 (7) for one tick. Sorry but there is no sound where you want me to extend the tick, I don't want to overmap ;_;
00:37:787 (4,1) - The slider starts on the blue tick an it feels unnatural. Move 00:37:872 (1) on the red tick and add a circle on its place to play like a triple. Nice. Fixed
00:43:529 (10) - Same^ Those kind of sliders should NEVER start on blue ticks. Move it on the downbeat and add a circle on its place. (Readjust the spacing if you do) Fixed
02:11:215 (2,3,4,5,6) - Move this a little to the left for better flow and to avoid touching 02:10:529 (5) Fixed
02:21:329 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stack to 02:20:644 (4)? Fixed
Oki dat's it. Good luck

Thanks!

Video

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Joined June 2014

Video 2016-02-21T20:50:11+00:00

xDarxen wrote:
hey hey

[Normal]
Check the distance snap. Apparently, there are some spacing issues.
00:24:072 (2) - Rotate a little to the right for better flow. - fixed
01:11:558 (7) - This ends on the downbeat and messes up everything. You can try this rhythm: - fixed

Reference
01:35:730 (4,7) - You can avoid this overlap, because it makes it ugly. - yeah okay ugly removed

mY new thing

osu file format v14

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Shmiklak

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Shmiklak 2016-02-22T16:15:29+00:00

UPDATE

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

6th 2016-02-22T23:12:39+00:00

SPOILER

Every other diff has a spinner in the beginning, so maybe add one? I'm sorry but I find it useless here
00:38:815 (1) - This is nearly touching the stream and looks unattractive. Try stacking the tail of the slider to 00:37:787 (2) changed, nice one btw
01:11:729 (1) - You can move this to the middle of 01:11:215 (4) to create a blanket. I didn't want to do that but due to all the modders that advised to move it, I did
01:12:929 (4) - This ends on the downbeat and messes up everything nice
02:28:358 - Add a break.

Thank you, very useful

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

FCL 2016-02-23T13:38:41+00:00

Sorry for late mod

I thinks you add Hardcore to tags, i am no expert but i can listening some hardcore sounds in song xd

[Insane]

00:25:787 (8,9) - pls never make things like this since intuitively player will move cursor forward, and your stack made stop and causes discomfort to play. Also it's hard for reading and generally stacks with ends like this are unrankable lmao
00:28:615 (5,6) - same as before, it's hard for reading and probably unrankable
01:10:872 (3) - do u not think that it's too closer with 01:10:358 (1) - ? Move it a bit down
01:11:901 (2) - I heard some 1/8 (or 1/16 lol) sound here, i think it's will be more correct if you will map 1/8 repeat here
01:14:472 (3) - not sure, but this slider will confusing too, u could rotate it to 45 degrees and move to 154 264, looks pretty better http://puu.sh/nirYZ/98dc1ba96f.png
01:19:958 (1) - oval shape is pretty weird in my option lol, some circle form would be better imo
01:22:701 (1) - okay, here it's looks better
01:19:958 (1,1,1) - sliderends haven't some sound, so i recomment reduce volume to sliderend (10%-20% idk)
02:14:044 (1,2,3) - not too necessary, but doubles instead would be more fun to play
02:18:758 - should be 1/8 repeat here , right?
02:28:529 (1,2,3) - same with sliderends as before

[Hard]

00:27:329 (4,5,6) - this overlap killing my eyes -_-. You should move it so to be inside the slider http://puu.sh/nisJ8/b6c61d3388.jpg , or make something else
00:46:615 (4,5) - stack under sliders can be confusing for hard diffs players, so i recommend add some spacing between
00:52:872 (1) - again bad overlap, u can stack slider with end of 00:52:015 (7) - to avoid him
01:07:272 (3) - same as before, 1/2 probably confusing too and... stack haven't some sense
01:49:958 (8,2) - aaa, i want kill a little cats when i see stuff like this, pls fix
02:27:072 (5,1) - stack, omg fix pls

[Normal]

pls delete unnecessary green lines
idk. rhythm and flow is fine for, so i can't say something about it

[spaklak]

00:30:929 (2) - ужасно и некрасиво. Слайдервейвы лучше не использовать на короткие слайдеры
00:31:958 (1) - локоть слайдеры кстати тоже
00:43:958 (4,1) - не очень я одобряю 1/1 стаки, их надо использовать только в крайних случаях и по сильно нужде, тут я такой нужды не вижу
00:47:044 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ну слишком долгий спам 1/1 слайдерами, прояви фантазию плс
01:14:472 (1) - ужасно
01:17:215 (1,2) - ужасно
01:49:787 (4) - мне вообще не нравится идея, что ты используешь 1/2 слайдеры в изике, но это уже край. меняй на круг
01:55:615 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - че там по фантазии? разнообразь ритм плс
02:03:844 (1,2,3) - у меня такое чувство, что нубасы будут путаться при виде этого стака, попробуй на 295 76 поставить хз
02:11:387 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ужасно
02:25:444 (4) - если стак с тройкой еще может и прочитается, то с четверкой это вообще полный пиздец. Из-за стандартного скина ее просто не будет видно и новичку будут путаться, выбирай другую позицию
02:39:501 - че за бред, я должен сидеть и ждать 10 секунд, чтобы покрутить спиннер? добавь только каких-нибудь лолг слайдеров туда, как в других диффах

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