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Clonepa - Orpheus

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Troponoop
480 posts
Joined July 2014
Troponoop
ayy just a random mod

[Insane]

00:21:158 - sounds like the spinner should start here, instead of on the white tick before it

00:25:100 (1) - you have a NC for the sound here, but no NC 00:25:271 (3) - it just sounds like something could be done for it

00:26:472 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - not sure if you wanted symmetrical triplets, but the spacing is slightly different for each triplet, so it bugged me :D

00:26:987 (2) - it also sounds like the NC should start here so it would emphasize the beat (instead of on 00:26:815 (1) - )

00:29:215 (3) - i feel as though you could spice this slider up because atm its boring for such a dominant song. Maybe change the spacing up, or play with the SV

00:48:929 (1,3) - these really sound like triplets or reverse sliders

01:07:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - could be one single combo, it feels slightly forced with the multiple NC's so close after the last

01:11:901 (2) - sounds like a triplet or a reverse slider

01:13:786 (1) - why NC here?

01:17:215 (4) - NC here

01:37:444 (4,1) - the overlap here looks kinda ugly

01:49:444 - 01:49:787 - 01:49:958 - try placing notes here, it feels awkward to wait while listening to these heavy beats

01:59:558 (2) - sounds a bit off, maybe break it up into a triplet + slider instead of the reverse

02:02:815 (1) - why NC?

02:11:387 (1) - ^

02:23:558 (1,2) - doesn't really sound like a simple slider

02:34:187 (1,1) - these both have strong sounds in them and it feels weird to ignore them, try cutting them up

Solid song! I hope i helped a tiny bit, good luck!
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

Troponoop wrote:

ayy just a random mod

[Insane]

00:21:158 - sounds like the spinner should start here, instead of on the white tick before it Sure

00:25:100 (1) - you have a NC for the sound here, but no NC 00:25:271 (3) - it just sounds like something could be done for it Not really sure to understand ;_;

00:26:472 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - not sure if you wanted symmetrical triplets, but the spacing is slightly different for each triplet, so it bugged me :D Fixed

00:26:987 (2) - it also sounds like the NC should start here so it would emphasize the beat (instead of on 00:26:815 (1) - ) Fixed

00:29:215 (3) - i feel as though you could spice this slider up because atm its boring for such a dominant song. Maybe change the spacing up, or play with the SV Sure

00:48:929 (1,3) - these really sound like triplets or reverse sliders Fixed

01:07:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - could be one single combo, it feels slightly forced with the multiple NC's so close after the last Fixed

01:11:901 (2) - sounds like a triplet or a reverse slider nah it's fine imo

01:13:786 (1) - why NC here? Fixed

01:17:215 (4) - NC here Fixed

01:37:444 (4,1) - the overlap here looks kinda ugly Fixed

01:49:444 - 01:49:787 - 01:49:958 - try placing notes here, it feels awkward to wait while listening to these heavy beats Sure

01:59:558 (2) - sounds a bit off, maybe break it up into a triplet + slider instead of the reverse Fixed

02:02:815 (1) - why NC? Fixed

02:11:387 (1) - ^ ^

02:23:558 (1,2) - doesn't really sound like a simple slider I don't want to put too much 1/8 sliders to avoid sliderbreaks so I'll see

02:34:187 (1,1) - these both have strong sounds in them and it feels weird to ignore them, try cutting them up Sure

Solid song! I hope i helped a tiny bit, good luck!
Thank you ! ;)
6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
6th

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~

[General]
Tags conflice in Hard.
There's a squeaky sound from a slider lol even you have a soft-sliderslide. [song setup --> Audio --> Enable custom overrides] I don't really get what you mean

[Hard]
I can still hear that squeaky sound from sliderslide.
02:06:587 (1,2) - Visually they looks a bit too close imo. Same applies to 02:09:845 (2,3).
02:20:645 (3,4) - Kinda a bit weird imo, I would tweak 02:20:645 (3) 's tail up a bit. nice idea, I didn't even notice it

Hope my mod helped somehow. Good luck~
Thanks ! (:
i hate pp
77 posts
Joined March 2014
i hate pp
Hello

Reminds me of high school band *shrudder*


01:20:129 (1) - Move onto the white tick here 01:19:958 -
01:40:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Space this stream out a bit more since you did it with the previous combo
01:44:644 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Follow your previous pattern
02:34:101 (1) - This doesnt follow anything
02:36:929 (1,2) - ^
02:37:872 (3) - End this on a red tick
02:39:672 (1) - Start this on a blue tick after fixing ^

Why OD8?

Good luck with your map :)
semanresu
11 posts
Joined January 2015
semanresu
00:42:758 (1) -> stream starts too early
01:44:644 (1) -> triple doesn't really go well with the background rhythm
01:50:087 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -> the sudden speed increase between the end of the first triple and the beginning of the second triple feels kinda akward to play, I would place them closer like you did with 01:48:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6)

Good luck and I hope this was usefull.
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

i hate pp wrote:

Hello

Reminds me of high school band *shrudder*


01:20:129 (1) - Move onto the white tick here 01:19:958 - Hm idk I'll see
01:40:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Space this stream out a bit more since you did it with the previous combo Fixed
01:44:644 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Follow your previous pattern idk I don't want the same pattern everywhere
02:34:101 (1) - This doesnt follow anything It does, the previous mod told me to cut the big slider into more sliders to follow the sounds so idk I'll see too lol
02:36:929 (1,2) - ^ ^
02:37:872 (3) - End this on a red tick Fixed
02:39:672 (1) - Start this on a blue tick after fixing ^ Fixed

Why OD8? Fixed

Good luck with your map :)
Thanks!
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

semanresu wrote:

00:42:758 (1) -> stream starts too early nah
01:44:644 (1) -> triple doesn't really go well with the background rhythm idk
01:50:087 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -> the sudden speed increase between the end of the first triple and the beginning of the second triple feels kinda akward to play, I would place them closer like you did with 01:48:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Fixed

Good luck and I hope this was usefull.
Thank you ;)
Video
232 posts
Joined June 2014
Video
gd is completo

WALL OF TEXT

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 23730
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8
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[Metadata]
Title:Orpheus
TitleUnicode:Orpheus
Artist:Clonepa
ArtistUnicode:Clonepa
Creator:Shyotamaze
Version:Weegle's Normal
Source:
Tags:courroux breakcore orchestral symphonic nokore records shmiklak 6th
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.849999904632569
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Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

Weegle wrote:

gd is completo

WALL OF TEXT

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Yay thanks! :)
Finally moved the map to Pending
Intone
66 posts
Joined August 2014
Intone
helloooo!!


General
- I think you need more diffs than the guest, in order for this map to be ranked. Possibly 1 more map that is yours? I'm not sure, talked to you about this in game, you said you would ask a BN.

[Insane]

00:24:415 (1) remove NC
00:37;272 (1,2,3,4) Instead of 2,3,4 I recommend just making this a repeat slider like (9). It will play much better, I think.
01:07:101 (1) collides a little with (4). Try moving it a little further down, along with whatever follows it.
02:12:403 (3) collides. Move a little to the right.
02:36:929 (1) this part is really weird. Consider changing to just circles.

All in all, cool map, but I think you should map some of the breaks. Specifically, the first one. Just do really long sliders to imitate the trumpet--It wouldn't really tire the player, instead it would give your map more flavor since there's sooo many streams and cut streams

[6th's Hard]
01:08:987 (1) (3) Make these straight down instead, I think it will look much nicer.
01:32:880 there's a really weird pretty long break here before the break even starts. I thought the map ended! Hmm...new audio version or a long spinner to show its not ending?

[Weegle's Normal]
01:44:644 (1) put this below the (2) to form a 1-2-3 ladder. Ofc this would mean moving the 2+3 higher. Also I recommend straight sliders (horizontal) for these three.
Your version seems to end earlier than the other versions...I think there is something in the ranked rules that says you have to end together at the same time.

[Shmiklak's Easy]
Double check your distance snapping. Near the end it seems to change a little. (Beginning overlaps a little more than the end does).


Cool map, I like the insane mode. Consider removing a few of the streams in favor of repeat sliders to lessen confusion/"overmapped feeling". Also I would map the middle break in all of the difficulties. It's still a break, just make it really easy--just some sliders.
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

Intone wrote:

helloooo!!


General
- I think you need more diffs than the guest, in order for this map to be ranked. Possibly 1 more map that is yours? I'm not sure, talked to you about this in game, you said you would ask a BN. Asked a BN (Natsu) and he told me that the actual diff spread is okay, it's just that one GDer can't have more difficulties than the owner of the map

[Insane]

00:24:415 (1) remove NC Fixed
00:37;272 (1,2,3,4) Instead of 2,3,4 I recommend just making this a repeat slider like (9). It will play much better, I think. Fixed
01:07:101 (1) collides a little with (4). Try moving it a little further down, along with whatever follows it. Fixed
02:12:403 (3) collides. Move a little to the right. Fixed
02:36:929 (1) this part is really weird. Consider changing to just circles. Fixed

All in all, cool map, but I think you should map some of the breaks. Specifically, the first one. Just do really long sliders to imitate the trumpet--It wouldn't really tire the player, instead it would give your map more flavor since there's sooo many streams and cut streams Hmm idk about this since there are already a lot of mapped breaks so I'll see

Cool map, I like the insane mode. Consider removing a few of the streams in favor of repeat sliders to lessen confusion/"overmapped feeling". Also I would map the middle break in all of the difficulties. It's still a break, just make it really easy--just some sliders.
Thank you! :D
Last edited by Shyotamaze , edited 1 time in total.
Video
232 posts
Joined June 2014
Video

Intone wrote:

helloooo!!


[Weegle's Normal]
01:44:644 (1) put this below the (2) to form a 1-2-3 ladder. Ofc this would mean moving the 2+3 higher. Also I recommend straight sliders (horizontal) for these three.
Your version seems to end earlier than the other versions...I think there is something in the ranked rules that says you have to end together at the same time. - oops, i extended it to match the other difficulties XD

Cool map, I like the insane mode. Consider removing a few of the streams in favor of repeat sliders to lessen confusion/"overmapped feeling". Also I would map the middle break in all of the difficulties. It's still a break, just make it really easy--just some sliders.
Thanks for the mod, I'll map the break if all the other difficulties agree on doing the same


UPDATED GD
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6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
6th
SPOILER
[6th's Hard]
01:08:987 (1) (3) Make these straight down instead, I think it will look much nicer. Hmm thinking about it
01:32:880 there's a really weird pretty long break here before the break even starts. I thought the map ended! Hmm...new audio version or a long spinner to show its not ending? that would be overmapping :/

Thanks !
Poi Panda
87 posts
Joined July 2014
Poi Panda
Hi! :D

Insane
  1. 01:39:844 (1,2,3) - These being spaced looks really weird when the other triple before it wasn't spaced.
  2. 02:37:158 (2) - Unsnapped note here

6th's Hard
  1. 00:24:758 (4,5,1,2) - I personally find this overlap slightly ugly, I'd move the 4 and 5 to someplace else for better flow and to make it look nicer.
  2. 00:31:272 (3) - I feel a slider would fit better here.
  3. 00:34:015 (3,4) - The 4 being directly under the 3 makes it hard to time properly, consider moving it.

Weegle's Normal
  1. 00:28:872 (7,1) - Position of the 1 really breaks the flow here. Consider moving the 6 and 7 so they flow into the 1, or changing the position of the 1.
  2. 00:44:129 (6,1) - The 6 looks very awkwardly placed, consider moving to (144,112)
  3. 02:13:444 (1,2,3,4) - The 4 looks very out of place, consider moving to make it look more in place.
  4. 02:37:272 (5,6) - I would place a slider here instead of the 2 single notes.

Shmiklak's Easy
  1. No issues as far as I can see


Good mapset overall :D. Apologies if I missed anything, hopefully this helps! Good luck :D
6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
6th

PoisonPanda wrote:

6th's Hard
  1. 00:24:758 (4,5,1,2) - I personally find this overlap slightly ugly, I'd move the 4 and 5 to someplace else for better flow and to make it look nicer. Changed for the 3rd time. I hope it's fine now. ):
  2. 00:31:272 (3) - I feel a slider would fit better here.
  3. 00:34:015 (3,4) - The 4 being directly under the 3 makes it hard to time properly, consider moving it. Changed
Thank you !
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

PoisonPanda wrote:

Hi! :D

Insane
  1. 01:39:844 (1,2,3) - These being spaced looks really weird when the other triple before it wasn't spaced. Fixed
  2. 02:37:158 (2) - Unsnapped note here Fixed

6th's Hard
  1. 00:24:758 (4,5,1,2) - I personally find this overlap slightly ugly, I'd move the 4 and 5 to someplace else for better flow and to make it look nicer.
  2. 00:31:272 (3) - I feel a slider would fit better here.
  3. 00:34:015 (3,4) - The 4 being directly under the 3 makes it hard to time properly, consider moving it.

Weegle's Normal
  1. 00:28:872 (7,1) - Position of the 1 really breaks the flow here. Consider moving the 6 and 7 so they flow into the 1, or changing the position of the 1.
  2. 00:44:129 (6,1) - The 6 looks very awkwardly placed, consider moving to (144,112)
  3. 02:13:444 (1,2,3,4) - The 4 looks very out of place, consider moving to make it look more in place.
  4. 02:37:272 (5,6) - I would place a slider here instead of the 2 single notes.

Shmiklak's Easy
  1. No issues as far as I can see


Good mapset overall :D. Apologies if I missed anything, hopefully this helps! Good luck :D
EDIT: whoops forgot to say thanks to you :? pls stay polite Shyo
Video
232 posts
Joined June 2014
Video

PoisonPanda wrote:

Hi! :D

Weegle's Normal
  1. 00:28:872 (7,1) - Position of the 1 really breaks the flow here. Consider moving the 6 and 7 so they flow into the 1, or changing the position of the 1. - rearranged the notes for better flow
  2. 00:44:129 (6,1) - The 6 looks very awkwardly placed, consider moving to (144,112) - oops, must have been a misclick on my part, fixed the ugliness
  3. 02:13:444 (1,2,3,4) - The 4 looks very out of place, consider moving to make it look more in place. - i like how it looks, it zig-zags then makes a square (includes slider)
  4. 02:37:272 (5,6) - I would place a slider here instead of the 2 single notes. - suggestion taken, fixed

Good mapset overall :D. Apologies if I missed anything, hopefully this helps! Good luck :D
thanks for the mod :3

UPDATED MAP WALL OF TEXT
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I'll also try to keep updating this with the mods you get, but if i dont respond to a mod within a week, just pm me in-game or message me through the website
Shyotamaze
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Shyotamaze
Yay! Finally hitsounded, thanks to Classwork :)
Video
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Video
Update from website pm

changed the suggested note replacement at 01:17:215

updated shizzle
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Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze
Ughh, finding modders is hard af :(

@GDers sorry to make you wait, trying my best to get mods right now, ily
Jonarwhal
1,222 posts
Joined November 2013
Jonarwhal

Shyotamaze wrote:

Ughh, finding modders is hard af :(

@GDers sorry to make you wait, trying my best to get mods right now, ily
I didn't forget about you~! NM request from my queue~

General
  1. Normal has a lower slider velocity than Easy. Consider changing that.
  2. There's too much of a difficulty gap between Normal and Hard. Consider making a difficulty between Normal and Hard.
Easy
  1. 00:20:987 (1,1) - Allow more time for the player to recover after the spinner.
  2. 00:27:844 (1) - Consider using the slider's red tick to emphasize 00:28:015 - here or 00:28:187 - here.
  3. 00:30:244 (4,1) - Unstack these. Example.
  4. 00:30:929 (2) - This looks messy. Make the points look like this "ϟ" or like this.
  5. 00:40:872 (6,1) - Fix the polarity. If you don't know what polarity is, check this.
  6. 01:03:501 (1,2) - These look too squished together. Spread it farther out.
  7. 01:08:301 (4,1) - ^
  8. 01:36:415 (1,2) - ^ I'll stop with that now.
  9. 01:40:187 (3,4,5) - This is too hard for Easy players to read. Consider changing the placement whenever you stack after one object in Easy.
  10. 01:41:901 (1,1) - Allow more time for the player to recover after the spinner.
  11. 01:49:787 (4,5) - Make this a slider so it's easier to play.
  12. 02:03:844 (1,2,3,4) - Fix blankets.
  13. 02:12:758 (2,3) - ^
Normal
  1. Some parts seem too Hard for Normal, like putting two circles after a slider. In cases like this, it should just be a slider.
  2. Other parts seem too Easy for Normal, like the Slider Velocity of x0.85.
    Keep that in mind.
  3. 00:24:244 (3) - Don't break DS in Normal. DS is required for the most part in Normal.
  4. 00:25:101 (6) - Making this a curved slider would make the circular flow better.
  5. 00:27:158 (3) - ^
  6. 00:29:558 (2) - Move the bottom part left to help the flow to the next object.
  7. 00:48:415 (3) - Don't use double-repeating sliders. Some mappers think they look messy.
  8. 00:50:472 (3) - Move the left part up for better flow.
  9. 01:50:129 (1) - Make this more curvy for a better blanket.
  10. 01:57:329 (5,1,2) - This overlap can be avoided by moving 01:58:701 (2,3) - these downward.
Hard
I'm not sure whether you should make this easier and make it more like a Hard, or make it harder and make it an Insane.
If you're going to keep it as a Hard, 00:24:072 (2,3) - Don't make sliders that require going backwards after completing them, this is actually bad flow in any difficulty. I understand that you're trying to make a hard jump, but you can do that without hurting flow. Also, 00:24:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Don't use this many consecutive circles. I'm not going to point out every time I see these things.
Besides that:
  1. 01:05:730 (7,1) - Fix blanket.
  2. 01:06:930 (3,4) - ^
  3. 01:52:187 (7,8) - These shouldn't be touching.
And besides that, I actually really like this diff! ^^
Insane
So many streams and they all look so good ^^
  1. 00:29:558 (1,2,3) - Fix Triangle.
  2. 02:39:587 (1) - End the spinner on the white tick.
That's all~! I hope this helps. Good Luck~! :D
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

jonawaga wrote:

Shyotamaze wrote:

Ughh, finding modders is hard af :(

@GDers sorry to make you wait, trying my best to get mods right now, ily
I didn't forget about you~! NM request from my queue~ Yay!

General
  1. Normal has a lower slider velocity than Easy. Consider changing that.
  2. There's too much of a difficulty gap between Normal and Hard. Consider making a difficulty between Normal and Hard.
Insane
So many streams and they all look so good ^^
  1. 00:29:558 (1,2,3) - Fix Triangle. It is intended to not be a "real" triangle, it's more like a little "jump" but I'll see
  2. 02:39:587 (1) - End the spinner on the white tick. Fixed
That's all~! I hope this helps. Good Luck~! :D
Thank you! :)
6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
6th
SPOILER
I'm not sure whether you should make this easier and make it more like a Hard, or make it harder and make it an Insane.
If you're going to keep it as a Hard, 00:24:072 (2,3) - Don't make sliders that require going backwards after completing them, this is actually bad flow in any difficulty. I understand that you're trying to make a hard jump, but you can do that without hurting flow. Also, 00:24:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Don't use this many consecutive circles. I'm not going to point out every time I see these things.
Besides that:
01:05:730 (7,1) - Fix blanket.
01:06:930 (3,4) - ^
01:52:187 (7,8) - These shouldn't be touching.
And besides that, I actually really like this diff! ^^

just fixed all ! thanks
Video
232 posts
Joined June 2014
Video

jonawaga wrote:

[General]
  1. Normal has a lower slider velocity than Easy. Consider changing that. - up to 1.00 that is good for NM diffs
[Normal]
  1. Some parts seem too Hard for Normal, like putting two circles after a slider. In cases like this, it should just be a slider. - fixed what i thought was too complex for NM diff
  2. Other parts seem too Easy for Normal, like the Slider Velocity of x0.85. - fixed to 1.00
  3. 00:24:244 (3) - Don't break DS in Normal. DS is required for the most part in Normal. - patched up some messy DS sections
  4. 00:25:101 (6) - Making this a curved slider would make the circular flow better. - okay fix
  5. 00:27:158 (3) - ^ - ^
  6. 00:29:558 (2) - Move the bottom part left to help the flow to the next object. - good idea
  7. 00:48:415 (3) - Don't use double-repeating sliders. Some mappers think they look messy. - i agree for the most part but i think the beat makes a good exception for the use of a repeating slider
    i also did go through the map and remove any unneeded repeating sliders
  8. 00:50:472 (3) - Move the left part up for better flow. - okay
  9. 01:50:129 (1) - Make this more curvy for a better blanket. - okay
  10. 01:57:329 (5,1,2) - This overlap can be avoided by moving 01:58:701 (2,3) - these downward. - I played around with the notes a bit and got it to my liking, thanks for suggestion
That's all~! I hope this helps. Good Luck~! :D


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SnowNiNo_
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
2,106 posts
Joined April 2013
SnowNiNo_
From my queue

1pc test play

[Insane]
00:26:987 (1) - NC off
01:53:558 (1) - ^
00:30:929 (1) - ^
00:32:987 (4) - ^
00:34:015 (3) - ^
01:56:301 (1) - ^
01:57:672 (1) - ^
02:11:387 (1) - ^
02:20:644 (1) - ^
02:28:187 (1) - ^
00:33:329 (1) - NC
01:55:958 (2) - ^
01:58:358 (6) - ^
02:04:187 (2) - ^
02:20:815 (2) - ^
00:36:758 (9,1) - make DS bigger, player will confused here
00:43:187 (6) - delete and add note at 00:43:187 - and 00:43:272 -
00:57:672 (2) - change to a straight line
01:35:815 (10) - should start at 01:35:901 - , like 01:41:301 (10,11) - here
02:04:187 (2) - overlap with 02:03:844 (1) -
02:03:844 (1) - triplet here, delete 02:07:015 (2) -
02:36:887 (1) - move to 02:36:929 -
02:37:158 (2) - to 02:37:158 (2) -
02:36:887 - no use green line
02:37:272 - ^

GL~
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

From my queue

1pc test play

[Insane]
00:26:987 (1) - NC off Fixed
01:53:558 (1) - ^ ^
00:30:929 (1) - ^ ^
00:32:987 (4) - ^ ^
00:34:015 (3) - ^ ^
01:56:301 (1) - ^ ^
01:57:672 (1) - ^ ^
02:11:387 (1) - ^ ^
02:20:644 (1) - ^ ^
02:28:187 (1) - ^ ^
00:33:329 (1) - NC ^
01:55:958 (2) - ^ ^
01:58:358 (6) - ^ ^
02:04:187 (2) - ^ ^
02:20:815 (2) - ^ Fine imo
00:36:758 (9,1) - make DS bigger, player will confused here Fixed
00:43:187 (6) - delete and add note at 00:43:187 - and 00:43:272 - Fixed
00:57:672 (2) - change to a straight line Changed a bit
01:35:815 (10) - should start at 01:35:901 - , like 01:41:301 (10,11) - here Fixed
02:04:187 (2) - overlap with 02:03:844 (1) - Did the opposite
02:03:844 (1) - triplet here, delete 02:07:015 (2) - Fine imo
02:36:887 (1) - move to 02:36:929 - Fixed
02:37:158 (2) - to 02:37:158 (2) - Huh? it's the same time, well, changed to 02:37:187
02:36:887 - no use green line Not sure about this, I'll see
02:37:272 - ^ ^

GL~
Thanks! :D
Puhehuhe
34 posts
Joined March 2015
Puhehuhe
M4M the second half :3.

Shmik's Easy
  1. 01:14:987 (2) - Maybe no curve and horizontally flat
  2. 02:27:158 (3,4,1) - Flip the slider and mirror rest to the other side, better flow imo
Weegle's Normal
  1. 00:47:729 (2) - Curves up
6th's Hard
  1. 00:39:844 (4,1) - Curve (1) and move (4) so they won't collide
  2. 00:49:272 (6) - Lower this a little
  3. 01:28:358 (1) - Smoother spiral, little pointy curve at the start
  4. 02:21:672 (1) - Looks weird, why not end the slider on to 02:22:701 (3) - with less curve
Insane
  1. 00:32:301 (2) - Mirror to the right and with sharp curve maybe
  2. 01:57:672 (5) - End more higher
  3. 02:13:101 (5) - This feels out of place, prefer 02:10:701 (1) - style
  4. 02:28:529 (1) - NC
  5. 02:31:444 (2) - NC off
Cosmetic oriented mod, there were no really any big problems imo.
Good luck 8-)
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

Puhehuhe wrote:

M4M the second half :3.

Insane
  1. 00:32:301 (2) - Mirror to the right and with sharp curve maybe Fine imo
  2. 01:57:672 (5) - End more higher Fixed
  3. 02:13:101 (5) - This feels out of place, prefer 02:10:701 (1) - style Fixed
  4. 02:28:529 (1) - NC Fixed
  5. 02:31:444 (2) - NC off Fixed
Cosmetic oriented mod, there were no really any big problems imo.
Good luck 8-)
Thank you! :D
6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
6th
SPOILER
6th's Hard
00:39:844 (4,1) - Curve (1) and move (4) so they won't collide It was intended :/
00:49:272 (6) - Lower this a little
01:28:358 (1) - Smoother spiral, little pointy curve at the start
02:21:672 (1) - Looks weird, why not end the slider on to 02:22:701 (3) - with less curve Changed

Thank you !
Video
232 posts
Joined June 2014
Video
thanks for the pm! :)

no updates to my map from that mod though >v<
SuperMIC
420 posts
Joined July 2011
SuperMIC
queue

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[Shmik's Easy]

01:40:529 (4) - new combo

completely clean otherwise

[Weegle's Normal]

This difficulty seems to be lacking in hitsounds. :S

00:38:815 (1,2,3) - Bad flow for a Normal. Should curve out at least a bit.

SPOILER

00:52:529 (1,2) - These can blanket better. (2) should curve less.

SPOILER

01:19:787 (5) - Just make this in line with (4). Try x:320 y:272
01:36:415 (5,6,7) - Spacing between (6) and (7) is inconsistent.
01:39:844 (2,6) - (2) should be stacked under the end of (6)
01:41:901 (1) - Should be facing the other direction:

SPOILER

01:57:329 (5,1) - (1) should be further from (5).
01:59:387 (3,4) - and (4) needs to be much closer to (3)
02:01:787 (3,4) - ^
02:19:958 (7,1) - (1) should be further from (7)
02:25:787 (3,4) - make parallel?

[6th's Hard]

I think the streams and 1/4 in the difficulty should be compressed, especially because the BPM is higher than average. I think the spacing at 00:36:758 (3,4,5) is perfect.

As in Normal, I think this difficulty needs more hitsounding, particularly during the first sections.

00:42:072 (2,3) - Make parallel?
01:07:272 (3) - Stack normally under (2).
01:22:872 (1,1) - These shapes can definitely be improved to look better.
01:28:358 (1) - This one is pretty good, but you should delete the anchor (red) point at make it curvy all the way around.
02:18:758 (4,5,1) - This should really form one straight line.
02:24:329 - Missed a beat here, add a circle?
02:24:844 - ^
02:26:815 (4,5,1) - Make this one straight line.
02:31:272 (1) - Try to make this perfectly symmetrical.

[Insane]

00:36:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - A lot of this stream does not exist in the music.

The 1/4 in this section is spaced interestingly, but I'd prefer if it was all spaced consistently unless there's some change in the music.

01:13:957 (7,1,2) - Should be spaced way further apart.
01:20:129 (1) - Slider shape can be improved, and I think it would play much more intuitively if this slider was extended so it starts on the long white tick
01:22:872 (1) - Can be improved. Blanket this carefully.
01:28:358 (1) - Doesn't look good.

The kiai section should space 1/2 further apart than it is; the music is fast but the map plays quite slowly.

01:59:129 - Missing note?
02:00:501 - ^

Regarding this section which I started outlining above, I understand you're mapping to the harpsichord but you really should fit in the drum line as well.

02:06:929 - Missing note

Again, this section feels like it should play much faster as an Insane. Needs higher spacing.

02:28:529 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Section needs to be cleaned up in terms of aesthetics. Slider shapes can be improved and slider overlap should really be avoided.

---

GL

-SMIC
agusch
152 posts
Joined January 2014
agusch
Hello :)

Shmik's Easy

00:23:044 - Not really important but here u could made a blanket with the spinner >> for example http://puu.sh/mYpEj/00e844e648.jpg
00:26:987 - I would change that overlap
00:52:529 (1) - This have flow but in my opinion it could be better with ctrl+h
01:15:844 (3) - nice slider, I think that it could be better if u put corners in this ticks 01:16:187 - 01:16:529 -
01:54:244 (3) - same here

Weegle's Normal

01:41:558 (6) - I would made an overlap with that note and the end of this slider 01:39:844 (2) -
01:59:387 (3,4) - I don't know if this jump is okay in a normal diff

Insane

00:46:444 (5) - 02:13:701 (6) - 02:16:958 (5) - I would place this sliders in withe or red tick instead of blue tick, cause I start streaming with the index finger and need to change to middle finger.

That's all, I'm new to modding, I hope this help you.
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

SuperMICrophone wrote:

queue

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[Insane]

00:36:072 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - A lot of this stream does not exist in the music. It may feel weird but it does exist, listen in 25%

The 1/4 in this section is spaced interestingly, but I'd prefer if it was all spaced consistently unless there's some change in the music. Fixed

01:13:957 (7,1,2) - Should be spaced way further apart. Fixed
01:20:129 (1) - Slider shape can be improved, and I think it would play much more intuitively if this slider was extended so it starts on the long white tick Fixed
01:22:872 (1) - Can be improved. Blanket this carefully. Fixed
01:28:358 (1) - Doesn't look good. Fixed

The kiai section should space 1/2 further apart than it is; the music is fast but the map plays quite slowly.

01:59:129 - Missing note? Not the same instrument as 3 and 4 but I'll see
02:00:501 - ^ Fixed

Regarding this section which I started outlining above, I understand you're mapping to the harpsichord but you really should fit in the drum line as well.

02:06:929 - Missing note Nope, listen in 25%

Again, this section feels like it should play much faster as an Insane. Needs higher spacing. I'll see about this one

02:28:529 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Section needs to be cleaned up in terms of aesthetics. Slider shapes can be improved and slider overlap should really be avoided. I will try to improve it later

---

GL

-SMIC
Thanks! :)

agusch wrote:

Hello :)

Insane

00:46:444 (5) - 02:13:701 (6) - 02:16:958 (5) - I would place this sliders in withe or red tick instead of blue tick, cause I start streaming with the index finger and need to change to middle finger. Fixed

That's all, I'm new to modding, I hope this help you.
Thank you! :)
Video
232 posts
Joined June 2014
Video

SuperMICrophone wrote:

[Weegle's Normal]

This difficulty seems to be lacking in hitsounds. :S - I'll fix that, i had an old version of all the difficulties so they had no hitsounds

00:38:815 (1,2,3) - Bad flow for a Normal. Should curve out at least a bit. - fixed

SPOILER

00:52:529 (1,2) - These can blanket better. (2) should curve less. - fixed

SPOILER

01:19:787 (5) - Just make this in line with (4). Try x:320 y:272 - fixed
01:36:415 (5,6,7) - Spacing between (6) and (7) is inconsistent. fixed
01:39:844 (2,6) - (2) should be stacked under the end of (6) - fixed
01:41:901 (1) - Should be facing the other direction: - fixed

SPOILER

01:57:329 (5,1) - (1) should be further from (5). - fixed
01:59:387 (3,4) - and (4) needs to be much closer to (3) - wow im bad, oops, fixed
02:01:787 (3,4) - ^ - ^^^^^
02:19:958 (7,1) - (1) should be further from (7) - fixed
02:25:787 (3,4) - make parallel? - fixed

agusch wrote:

Weegle's Normal

01:41:558 (6) - I would made an overlap with that note and the end of this slider 01:39:844 (2) - fixed
01:59:387 (3,4) - I don't know if this jump is okay in a normal diff - fixed




UPDATED WITH HITSOUNDS :D
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ArtistUnicode:Clonepa
Creator:Shyotamaze
Version:Weegle's Normal
Source:
Tags:courroux breakcore orchestral symphonic nokore records shmiklak 6th weegle
BeatmapID:877572
BeatmapSetID:371634

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.999999904632569
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
6th
SPOILER
[6th's Hard]

I think the streams and 1/4 in the difficulty should be compressed, especially because the BPM is higher than average. I think the spacing at 00:36:758 (3,4,5) is perfect.
00:42:072 (2,3) - Make parallel?
01:07:272 (3) - Stack normally under (2).
01:22:872 (1,1) - These shapes can definitely be improved to look better. will work on it
01:28:358 (1) - This one is pretty good, but you should delete the anchor (red) point at make it curvy all the way around.
02:18:758 (4,5,1) - This should really form one straight line.
02:24:329 - Missed a beat here, add a circle?
02:24:844 - ^
02:26:815 (4,5,1) - Make this one straight line.
02:31:272 (1) - Try to make this perfectly symmetrical.

I just applied all. It will be updated soon
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
3,218 posts
Joined January 2015
Shmiklak
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
dqs01733
296 posts
Joined October 2013
dqs01733
from free mods queue

[6th's Hard]
  1. 00:48:929 (5) - could u move this down a bit? so the head is more in line with the direction from 00:48:415 (4) - . you can probably move all this 00:48:929 (5,6,7) -
  2. 01:05:729 (4,1) - maybe you can make some overlap.. like this
  3. 01:11:215 (4,1) - you could make them blanket
  4. 02:27:072 (5,1) - you never stacked triplet during this sections.. you should make them like the previous so its moer consistent.
[Insane]
  1. 00:27:758 (10,1) - this is a lot smaller distance snap like other triplets.. you should make same as other for consistency
  2. 00:37:615 (3) - i think you should make same distance with this between 00:37:272 (2) - and 00:37:272 (2) - , it looks cleaner
  3. 01:37:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - can you make it even curve? i dont think it looks very good when it gradually curves more like that.. and it doesnt fit music either
  4. 02:34:101 (1) - its not snapped to right beat.. each repeat should land on the blue ticks.
  5. 02:36:929 (1,2,3) - same with this
hope its helpful, not good with modding below hard sorry ~
good luck
6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
6th
SPOILER
[6th's Hard]
00:48:929 (5) - could u move this down a bit? so the head is more in line with the direction from 00:48:415 (4) - . you can probably move all this 00:48:929 (5,6,7) -
01:05:729 (4,1) - maybe you can make some overlap.. like this sry it looks fine imo
01:11:215 (4,1) - you could make them blanket mhm I don't really see what you meant there
02:27:072 (5,1) - you never stacked triplet during this sections.. you should make them like the previous so its moer consistent. I changed the other triplets

Thanks !
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Shyotamaze

dqs01733 wrote:

from free mods queue

[Insane]
  1. 00:27:758 (10,1) - this is a lot smaller distance snap like other triplets.. you should make same as other for consistency Fixed
  2. 00:37:615 (3) - i think you should make same distance with this between 00:37:272 (2) - and 00:37:272 (2) - , it looks cleaner Fixed
  3. 01:37:787 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - can you make it even curve? i dont think it looks very good when it gradually curves more like that.. and it doesnt fit music either Fine imo and yes it fits the music ;_;
  4. 02:34:101 (1) - its not snapped to right beat.. each repeat should land on the blue ticks. Deleted this part since it's a lot of problems lol
  5. 02:36:929 (1,2,3) - same with this This one is fine imo
hope its helpful, not good with modding below hard sorry ~
good luck
Thanks! :)
Cryptic
551 posts
Joined December 2013
Cryptic
From #modreqs

[Insane]
  1. 00:21:115 (1) - Move the spinner onto the blue tick as thats where the sounds start, they just are at a lower volume. Take the hitsound off of the spinner end as well.
  2. 00:31:958 (1) - Why did you stop mapping the drums here? I don't get that choice.
  3. 00:36:072 (1) - Why are your hitsounds 5%? Thats absolutely horrible for players.
  4. 00:48:929 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - These both sound like 1/16th or 1/8th streams to me
  5. 00:57:158 (2,1,2) - You stop following the drums at really weird times, it doesn't really play right to me.
  6. Huge tip for your sliders: Take a circle and put it in the middle of where you want the slider to curve around. Then, use that circles approach-circle to mold your slider. Boom! Perfect circular sliders!
  7. 01:55:958 (1) - I don't like that you don't follow the drums again. I don't really like the drum > string/synth alternation you do throughout the song. For this melody you should make a decision on whether or not you'll put in the bass throughout the entire song or just leave out the bass for this part. Obviously this is just my opinion, a BN would have better advice regarding this.
  8. 02:23:558 (1,2) - Theres some fast 1/16ths or something again here that you're leaving out
  9. 02:31:444 (2) - Move this on to the blue tick? Its following the trumpet right? Also, this one needs some TLC its a bit ugly.
  10. 02:39:587 (1) - In general, and this spinner is fine btw, I don't know if I agree with the slider art ending. I think the song should have ended on the head of this slider 02:28:529 (1) - rather than drawing it out so much farther. Because the end is just boring.
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