Hey there
[Das Jahre Zweitausenddreihundertundsechzehn]
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[Das Jahre Zweitausenddreihundertundsechzehn]
- 00:21:217 (3) - I'd rather make that a triple
- 00:32:827 (2) - Nc there?
- 00:44:847 (2) - maybe curve this to lead in to the next triple
- 01:17:416 (1) - this is my personal opinion, but i'd make the first section (the non wubby) of this slider curved, not bezier; i feel like the vocals would be emphasized better that way
- 01:17:416 (1) - Blanket-Nazi
- 01:24:813 (6) - consider replacing this 1/2 slider with 2 1/4 sliders; the main sound being on the sliderend feels a bit weird
- 01:24:813 (6) - personal again, i'd make that a bit wider, i think bezier at a low angle doesnt look too well
- 01:32:827 (3,4) - thats a 1/6
- 02:25:635 (1,2,3,4) - this looks pretty weird imo, rather make it curved
- 03:38:991 (2,3) - the upwards flow here feels rather forced, maybe adjust 03:38:683 (8,1) - to be able to make it a bit flatter
- 04:16:594 (1) - this should be parallel
- 05:22:142 (2,1) - this flows pretty bad, considering theyre space streams as well, consider making that a bit more curved and flowy
- 05:28:820 (6,1,2,3,4) - maybe flatten the stream a bit more to get better flow in there; its not as bad as the previous one tho
- 05:38:786 (1.1) - the wubs should be higher spaced, not almost without momentum, as i see it
- 05:39:608 (5) - maybe make that a 1/4 slider; i do realize you want to emphasize the strong red tick, but you do skip the following blue tick for that
- 05:53:580 (1,2,3) - stack with 05:52:964 (7) - maybe ?
- 05:53:991 (4) - maybe NC this, that "pause" messed me up quite a bit while playing
- 06:17:416 (3,4,5,6) - consider making this more curvy
- 06:27:484 (1,1,1) - more spacing here maybe, i dont think thats emphasized enough
- 06:34:676 (1) - make that a proper loop for em, will ya :3
- Well, what to say about those sliders except "i love them"? You might want to go over all of them really quick, there are a few parts that were not "perfectly" blanketed - Thats just my OCD tho, feel free to ignore
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